I changed all, thanks for noticing errors. Thanks a lot
xXShockwaveXx wrote:Alright here is my mod!Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so.
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot.00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash.
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing.Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!Alright i love this song i would love for it to be ranked!!!! Sorry i did not mod the other rain *its to close to a 5 star for me* but i hope this helps out! Good luck!Alright this has nice hit circle placement but there are a few things i would like to point out
00:10:172 (1) - a weirdly shaped slider that could look better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576573
01:08:672 (1) - also weirdly shaped slider and this would not be a problem if the beginning of the slider was like the end of it
01:14:838 (1) - right here starts a stream that could be better. If you want to make this stream better all you really need to do is connect it all together or you can connect it and curve it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576615 and then add 1 final hit circle at the end
01:06:838 (3) - this slider does not need to exist it can be something more simple like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576658 (you may have to move a circle over a little bit)
01:09:505 (2) - These 2 streams are a little bit weirdly shaped in game and i think it would look better if you moved them a bit closer and made them more straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576670
there are a few weirdly shaped sliders but you dont really notice them to much in game. Other than that great job on your timings!