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NM from my queue, hopefully my suggestions weren't sniped.


General

Why is there 13 seconds of no sound at the beginning of the audio track? I highly suggest you have that clipped from the audio track (and video clipped because you shouldnt have just no sound for a long period of time) in Audacity, adjust timing offset and them re-adjust the diffs to fit the new audio track. (Unless I have an older version of map, this needs to be fixed)

All the diffs should have a consistent ending spot and it seems this is a problem for all diffs. End the last spinner at all diffs at 01:32:464 – to be consistent and to end at a reasonable time.

No video on highest diff, be sure to apply.

Perhaps change your BG to a JPEG format to reduce filesize.

Unsnapped timing lines in the Platter at the follow points:

00:19:094
00:29:760
00:45:760
00:55:760
00:56:427
01:05:761


Gordon's Cup

00:13:798 (1,2) – Move the reverse so it points towards (2). It will make this distance play a little cleaner.

00:16:464 (3) – This movement is very awkward to play, just use the slider you did at 00:13:798 (1) – but have it's reverse flow left.

00:20:465 (2,3,4) – If you're using 0.7x as your walking distance, please use it as your walking distance throughout the whole map. The 0.5x between (3,4) breaks consistency.

00:24:465 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^Same here, fix your distances and throughout the map

00:29:797 (1,2) – This anti flow is very awkward to play because a new player isn't expecting the distance change. Move (2) to X=192

00:39:797 (3,4) – Avoid using ½ patterns on a Cup, they're a bit intimidating to new players.

00:45:297 (4) - ^ Same

I didn't mod whole diff because you repeat the same issues over and over. To save my sanity, I think you can fix the rest yourself.


Salad

In General, avoid ¼ patterns. They don't play well in Salads and don't contribute well. Also, only put dashes on downbeats (large white ticks) unless a sound is very strong. I don't have the patience to point them all out in a NM so I'll point one instance of the issue and you fix the rest.

Also, you;re going to have to fix all your distances because the flow is chaotic to say the least. For plate-walking, you should use 1.00x or Distance Snap tool. Your dashes at 1/1 rhythm are readable at 1.8. Your ½ dashes are readable at 2.40x snap.

00:13:798 (1,2) – Use 1.00x or 0.80x spacing for the walking distance. This doesn't flow well because the player has to stop to catch (2).

00:16:131 (7,1,2) – You should use 0.70x distance between (6,7) to make the curve of the previous pattern flow nice and then flip the next patterns to flow to the right instead.

00:18:131 (5,1,2,3,4,5) – Avoid antiflow patterns like this in Salads, it's awkward to play for a new player, flip this pattern to flow to the right.

00:18:964 (4,5,6) – The dash should be to (5), to emphasize the drum.

00:24:798 (2,3,4,5) – Do not do dashes into antiflow, that is unrankable because it's hard for another player to change distances quick.

01:11:797 (3,4,5,6) – Do not use consecuative dashes in Salads, too hard for a newer player to land.

The salad needs a lot of work and I don't wanna write an essay, so good luck.


The Last's Platter

This feels extremely undermapped. For example, everything after 00:19:131 – should be consistent ½ rhythm until the end of the song. The 1/1 patterns make this map feel like a glorified Salad.

Spacing is also an issue with this diff as well. When mapping, have a walking distance, a dashing distance and a hyper dash distance. Just as I said for the other diffs.

I won't even look at the rest of this diff until spacing and rhythm is fixed since that very base of this diff needs fixed.


I'm gonna stop here because I can tell there's problems down to the base of the map and I'm too stressed at this point in time to give you a proper mod. Sorry and good luck
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

RoseusJaeger wrote:

NM from my queue, hopefully my suggestions weren't sniped.


General

Why is there 13 seconds of no sound at the beginning of the audio track? I highly suggest you have that clipped from the audio track (and video clipped because you shouldnt have just no sound for a long period of time) in Audacity, adjust timing offset and them re-adjust the diffs to fit the new audio track. (Unless I have an older version of map, this needs to be fixed) - fix........

All the diffs should have a consistent ending spot and it seems this is a problem for all diffs. End the last spinner at all diffs at 01:32:464 – to be consistent and to end at a reasonable time. - Hm, I talk about this with my friends

No video on highest diff, be sure to apply. - fix

Perhaps change your BG to a JPEG format to reduce filesize. - I guess about it
Salad

In General, avoid ¼ patterns. They don't play well in Salads and don't contribute well. Also, only put dashes on downbeats (large white ticks) unless a sound is very strong. I don't have the patience to point them all out in a NM so I'll point one instance of the issue and you fix the rest.

Also, you;re going to have to fix all your distances because the flow is chaotic to say the least. For plate-walking, you should use 1.00x or Distance Snap tool. Your dashes at 1/1 rhythm are readable at 1.8. Your ½ dashes are readable at 2.40x snap.

00:13:798 (1,2) – Use 1.00x or 0.80x spacing for the walking distance. This doesn't flow well because the player has to stop to catch (2). - Use 0.80x

00:16:131 (7,1,2) – You should use 0.70x distance between (6,7) to make the curve of the previous pattern flow nice and then flip the next patterns to flow to the right instead. - Okay

00:18:131 (5,1,2,3,4,5) – Avoid antiflow patterns like this in Salads, it's awkward to play for a new player, flip this pattern to flow to the right. - Okay

00:18:964 (4,5,6) – The dash should be to (5), to emphasize the drum. - Okay

00:24:798 (2,3,4,5) – Do not do dashes into antiflow, that is unrankable because it's hard for another player to change distances quick. - Okay

01:11:797 (3,4,5,6) – Do not use consecuative dashes in Salads, too hard for a newer player to land. - Okay

The salad needs a lot of work and I don't wanna write an essay, so good luck. - Thanks a lot for mod
Gordon123

RoseusJaeger wrote:

Gordon's Cup

00:13:798 (1,2) – Move the reverse so it points towards (2). It will make this distance play a little cleaner. k

00:16:464 (3) – This movement is very awkward to play, just use the slider you did at 00:13:798 (1) – but have it's reverse flow left. no

00:20:465 (2,3,4) – If you're using 0.7x as your walking distance, please use it as your walking distance throughout the whole map. The 0.5x between (3,4) breaks consistency. lil fix

00:24:465 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^Same here, fix your distances and throughout the map k^

00:29:797 (1,2) – This anti flow is very awkward to play because a new player isn't expecting the distance change. Move (2) to X=192 It makes no sense

00:39:797 (3,4) – Avoid using ½ patterns on a Cup, they're a bit intimidating to new players. In a small measure you can use such places to maintain the rhythm

00:45:297 (4) - ^ Same no

I didn't mod whole diff because you repeat the same issues over and over. To save my sanity, I think you can fix the rest yourself. -_-
thx for mod ;)
JierYagtama
Welp you kiiinda need to balance the spread between platter and rain
Salad
00:35:505 (3,4,5,6) - feels a bit too clumped up hmm maybe buff up the spacing a bit?
00:54:838 (10,11,12,13,14) - try this rhythm cos i kinda think you're emphasizing vocals so e welp since its a rhythm choice mod up to u if you wanna go this route and copy paste this rhythm orr say no since you think its ok rip

00:08:339 (3,4) - space this put a little bit like this for a little bit of consistency of patterns like you did in the beggining

00:51:505 - why not put a spinner here xd
Only concern is rhythm choice since its kinda not consistent imo
platter
00:00:839 (1,2) - nice blanket btw
00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe change the hitsounds for this as drums?
00:22:172 (6) - kinda space this out till x:260 to emphasize that finish a bit more
01:04:005 - missing note
this one's ok owo)b
welp as I said still a bit new in ctb modding so please bear with me for this short shitmod xd
gl
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

JeirYagtama wrote:

Salad

00:35:505 (3,4,5,6) - feels a bit too clumped up hmm maybe buff up the spacing a bit? - little fix
00:54:838 (10,11,12,13,14) - try this rhythm cos i kinda think you're emphasizing vocals so e welp since its a rhythm choice mod up to u if you wanna go this route and copy paste this rhythm orr say no since you think its ok rip - little fix

00:08:339 (3,4) - space this put a little bit like this for a little bit of consistency of patterns like you did in the beggining

00:51:505 - why not put a spinner here xd - I think there not need spiner
Only concern is rhythm choice since its kinda not consistent imo - >~<
Thanks a lot for mod.
The Last

JeirYagtama wrote:

Welp you kiiinda need to balance the spread between platter and rain
platter
00:00:839 (1,2) - nice blanket btw What do you mean under "Blanket"?
00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe change the hitsounds for this as drums? Ok, I'm going to annoy Goddess Aqua and ask to find drum hitsound :D
00:22:172 (6) - kinda space this out till x:260 to emphasize that finish a bit more It's done
01:04:005 - missing note Do you think so? I think that there is no sound.
this one's ok owo)b
Lacrima
охо, а вот и я:). насколько понимаю, здесь все русские, так что напишу все так)

[Gordon's Cup]
  1. 00:12:839 (3,4,1) - попытаешься объяснить, с чего вдруг здесь такое маленькое расстояние между объектами, если сравнивать с 00:11:506 (1,2,3) -? Выглядит очень плохо, в добавок 00:13:839 (4,1) - здесь должен быть спейсинг больше, ибо довольно сильный звук на (1).
  2. 00:15:505 (2,1) - Опять, для такого сильного звука на (1) + начала вокала расстояние должно быть чуть больше
  3. 00:20:172 (2,3) - Опять тот же вопрос, с чего такое маленькое расстояние?
  4. 00:21:838 (6,1) - ^
  5. 00:23:839 (4,1) - ^
  6. 00:24:838 (1,2,3) - ^, и так далее, и так далее. Я думаю суть ясна, что расстояния между объектами в капе должны быть зафиксированы примерно на одном уровне, как и должны выражать какие либо звуки/вокал. В данном случае, никакого выделения в этой дифе не наблюдается. Советую использовать определенный дистанс снап, а также если ты ставишь объект выше какого либо (00:23:839 (4,1) - как (1) после (4)), то в любом случае сохраняй ту же дистанцию по оси x, ибо так выходит очень странно и неприятно для игры. Дам небольшие примеры: 00:27:506 (1,2,1) -, 00:54:172 (1,2,3) - расстояния между объектами у этих паттернов выглядит довольно солидно, хотя тоже есть небольшие недочеты. В общем, мое пожелание - на начальном этапе маппинга старайся мапать на одной горизонтальной поверхности, то есть на одном уровне по координате y. Таким образом, дистанс снап будет использован всегда правильно, и таких проблем с расстояниями не будет.
  7. 00:32:338 (4) - Что за странный реверс? если подразумевался антифлоу, то в капе он неразрешен, если просто паттерн, требующей остановки,
    то тоже играется довольно плохо на капе, ибо здесь остановки надо делать реще, так как используется 1/2 снап. Советую переделать этот паттерн.
    Небольшая подсказка на то, что можно сделать - 00:32:338 (4,1) - если отразить этот паттерн (CTRL + H), то именно этот паттерн играется неплохо.
    Однако не забывай про то, что после него также идут ноты.
    На этом я пожалуй закончу, так как дифа нуждается в полной переработке. Изменяй и фиксируй все дистанции между объектами, не забывая про выделение сильных звуков и вокала, как и о том, что они должны быть согласованы друг с другом, и должно выйти лучше. Когда изменишь сей недочет - чекну дифу еще раз, дабы указать на другие ошибки. Сейчас этого сделать не могу, так как ошибка лежит на ошибке, в данном случае на неправильном расстоянии.
[Salad]
  1. 00:02:172 (4,5) - ох, опять. Объяснишь, почему здесь нету никакого движения? Вот и я думаю, что нет. Нету совершенно никаких изменений в музыке, что ставить такое, в добавок (5) даже лежит на даунбите, поэтому наоборот нуждается в выделении больше, чем остальные ноты.
  2. 00:03:338 (2,3) - Немного непонятно, что ты здесь подразумевал - проходимую без деша дистанцию, или джамп. В любом случае, это можно поймать, не используя деш. Либо увеличь дистанцию, чтобы было больше понятно, что здесь джамп, либо уменьшай, чтобы можно было без проблем ее пройти без деша.
  3. 00:03:506 (3,4) - Опять не наблюдаю логики за этим паттерном. Можно поймать не двигая платформу вовсе, но в музыке нет ничего такого, что требует остановки.
  4. 00:06:755 (3,4,5,6) - Во - первых, все это можно поймать, не используя деш, так что такое же решение проблемы сюда подойдет и из второго предложения. Однако, если ты решишь сделать здесь джамп, то нужно изменить паттерн, ибо 1/2 деш (00:06:839 (4,5) - ), после которого идет анти флоу паттерн (00:07:005 (5,6) - ) не разрешен в использовании в салате.
  5. 00:15:505 (4,5) - Опять, с чего такое маленькое расстояние? начиная отсюда, больше не буду перечислять это, ибо вроде бы проблема ясна. по сути, все тоже самое, что и в капе - переделывай дистанции так, как я сказал это Гордону.
  6. 00:16:338 (1,2,3) - Опять немного непонятно, подразумевался ли здесь джамп или нет. Ссылайся на 4 предложение
  7. 00:21:838 (3,4) - Как по мне, отличное место для джампа, но его здесь нет. Советую поставить.
  8. 00:32:338 (4,5) - ^
  9. Секция с 00:32:838 (5) - по 00:43:505 (5) - с чего ты так часто стал использовать 1/2 паттерны? Никакого изменения в музыке и в вокале нету,
    лишь более приглушенная музыка, но это не повод начинать ставить 1/2 паттерны. Сделай эту секцию более согласованной и похожей с тем, что было раньше.
  10. 00:55:172 (3,4,5) - Джамп должен был быть 00:55:172 (3,4) - здесь, а не 00:55:338 (4,5) - здесь, так как и вокал, и музыка опираются на 00:55:338 (4) -, а не на 00:55:838 (5) -.
  11. 00:58:505 (2,3,4,5) - Деш между (2) и (3), а затем анти флоу, начинающийся с (3), как я уже говорил ранее, не разрешен в салате.
  12. 01:09:505 (7,8) - ^, также можно поймать, не используя деш.
    В общем, сложность также нуждается в полной переработке, связанной с расстояниями. Они должны быть более согласованными друг с другом,
    а также, они должны выражать что то в музыке/вокале.
[The Last's Platter]
  1. Я не вижу никакой необходимости нарушать диф сприд выставлением AR8,3, как и таковой необходимости в нем. Стоит изменить AR на 8,
    что сохранит диф сприд.
  2. 00:03:172 (1,2) - Я так понимаю, что здесь подразумевался деш. Увеличь расстояние между ними, тогда это будет более согласованно с 00:01:839 (3,4) -.
  3. 00:24:672 (3,4) - Деш тоже нужно поставить, будет более согласованно со всеми остальными дешами.
  4. 00:26:839 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:32:338 (4,5) - ^
  6. 00:40:672 (2,3) - ^, и так далее, и тому подобное.
    И в этой дифе я наблюдаю ту же самую ситуацию, что с остальными. Переделывай дистанции, делай их более согласованными друг с другом, не забывая про то, что они должны выражать что - то в музыке/вокале.
[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:06:088 (6,1) - Этот анти флоу после 1/4 гипер деша очень некомфортен для игры на рейнах. Советую отразить (1) (CTRL + G).
  2. 00:28:088 (5,1) - Я не думаю, что здесь есть что - то такое в музыке, что заслуживает 1/4 гипер дещ. Убери его
  3. 00:42:006 (4,5) - Тааак, постараетесь объяснить мне сей маленькое расстояние? Вы сговорились что ли хддд
    В общем, самая логичная дифа в этом мапсете. Однако, она довольно сложная, чтобы называться рейном, советую пересмотреть всю идею паттернов и использования гипер дешей, ибо по мне, все слишком сложно. Но, я не БН, так что особо судить не буду.
[afraid...]
  1. Тупое название, как по мне, совершенно неуместно. Я вроде не называл рейн на шелтере шелтером? Overdose вполне нормально, если ты мне только не сможешь объяснить, почему именно это название, а не Overdose. в этом я только могу пожелать удачи :>. И еще, вроде это ведь ванлав сделал, так что OneLove's Overdose тоже пойдет. я вот например бы не понял, что дифа сделана им
  2. 00:06:005 (6,7) - Как по мне, норм место для гипер деша. Мое предложение - 00:06:172 (7) - CTRH + H, затем поставить это на ~x192.
  3. 00:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Втф. Объяснишь, почему использовал такие больше расстояния для этих нот, не следуя 00:17:338 (2,3,4,5,6) - и 00:20:005 (2,3,4,5,6) - ? Вот и я думаю, что нет. Ничего в этом моменте в музыке и вокале нет, что заслуживает такого резкого изменения в расстоянии между нотами.
  4. 00:26:172 (1,2) - Аааа, что за странное положене (2)? Я думаю будет лучше, если после ловли (1) ты пойдешь ловить что - то в левой стороне игрового поля, в прочем, именно так я и сделал. Но не тут то было, не понятный антифлоу нота (2) резко появилась в правой стороне. Думаю, суть ясна, что нужно сделать
  5. 00:30:172 (1,2,3,4) - Тебе не кажется, что во - первых, это довольно несогласованный паттерн, а во - вторых, что это довольно легко для овердоза?
  6. 00:32:839 (1,2) - waaaa, не хотю, сделай расстояние не таким убийственным
  7. 00:37:838 (2,3,4) - Деш должен быть не между (2) и (3), а между (3) и (4), ибо музыка делает акцента на (4).
  8. 00:43:505 (1,2) - Очередное стоп движение. Объяснишь, почему здесь нужен паттерн, который останавливает движение игрока? Вот и я думаю,
    что нет. Исправляй. Оу, и деш между 00:43:839 (2,3) - слишком сильный. Можешь поставить 00:43:839 (2) - на x264, решит сразу две проблемы. Но я все равно думаю, что это слишком легко для овердоза, так что советую вообще поменять паттерн
  9. 00:45:339 (2,3) - Хватит абузить едж джампы в паре с гипер дешами. Уменьши расстояние
  10. 01:02:338 (9,1) -; 01:03:005 (2,1) - Опять, останавливающие паттерны совершенно не к месту.
  11. 01:07:172 (6,1) - Уменьши немного расстояние
Хм, и так, что я хочу сказать об этом мапсете. По сути дела, во всех дифах одна и та же проблема - несогласованные друг с другом паттерны, расстояния, неправильное использование дистанс снапа в некоторых из них и так далее. Скажу прямо - я совершенно уверен, что мапсет в том виде, в каком он сейчас никогда не получит ранкед статус. Совершенно все дифы нуждаются в как таковой переработке паттернов и расстояний, а в этом я помочь уже сильно не могу. Все, что смог сделать я - указать определенные ошибки. Не думайте, что ошибки, которые я указал - единственные в ваших дифах. Их куда больше, просто я не вижу смысла указывать одно и тоже несколько раз подряд. Мой вам совет - это продолжать мапать, модить другие карты и не зацикливаться слишком долго на одной из них, как, возможно, вы хотите сделать на этой. :) удачи вам
Xetopia

Myle wrote:

охо, а вот и я:). насколько понимаю, здесь все русские, так что напишу все так)

[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:06:088 (6,1) - Этот анти флоу после 1/4 гипер деша очень некомфортен для игры на рейнах. Советую отразить (1) (CTRL + G).
  2. 00:28:088 (5,1) - Я не думаю, что здесь есть что - то такое в музыке, что заслуживает 1/4 гипер дещ. Убери его
  3. 00:42:006 (4,5) - Тааак, постараетесь объяснить мне сей маленькое расстояние? Вы сговорились что ли хддд
    В общем, самая логичная дифа в этом мапсете. Однако, она довольно сложная, чтобы называться рейном, советую пересмотреть всю идею паттернов и использования гипер дешей, ибо по мне, все слишком сложно. Но, я не БН, так что особо судить не буду.
Все пофиксил, спасибо.

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Memoriola
 
autofanboy


Hello there! I am not feeling well, I will just mod the Overdose and pinpoint some general issues.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

  • Design
  1. Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain.

    Metadata
  2. I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals.

    Combo Colors
  3. Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
    Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.

[ The Last's Platter]

  • Difficulty
  1. AR=OD for all osu!catch difficulty. In this case, the OD of your Platter should be 8.3 instead of 6 to cohere with the value of AR (8.3).

[ afraid...]

  • After my first testplay, I feel that this difficulty still need some improvements before going on. I will leave some general comments below so you can fix them and try to avoid making such mistakes again.


    Some jumps are quite large. This is because the distance between the corresponding notes are too big, but they are not supported by hyperdashes. For instance:
  1. 00:01:505 (5,6) - The distance between them is too large, it is nearly impossible for players to spot the jump in their first play, reducing it will be a good solution.
  2. 00:04:505 (6,7) - ^
  3. 00:32:839 (1,2) - Really easy to miss (2) here because the movement of 00:32:672 (5,1) - may distract players, while the jump at (1,2) here is quite large, almost calling for a hyperdash. Please reduce the distance of (1,2).
  4. 00:43:839 (2,3) - There are some space left between these two notes here, but it may not be enough, it is still so easy to miss, basically because players may not be ready for this kind of edge-screen jumps. If you want to make use of this jump, you can increase the distance of 00:43:505 (1,2) - so players will be more ready for the jumping section. Yet I recommend reducing the distance here to a comfortable one (You can reach this by testing a few times after fixing, trial-and-error).


    Some parts of the map have bizarre rhythms. This may affect player's rhythm sense as they tap dashes or movement keys with a different frequency, also not matching the song itself's rhythm. For example:
  5. 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - You started 1/2 sliders a half beat late, which already caused the dash timing to delay for a bit. Would be better if you start 1/2 sliders from 00:02:172 - , or you add one more circle at 00:02:338 - before using 1/2 slider at 00:02:505 - .
  6. 00:40:672 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange note pattern here. I think the stanza begins at 00:40:838 - so it will match the song more if you remove 00:40:672 (2) - , then add a circle at 00:40:672 - ; 00:40:838 - and 00:41:006 (1,2,3) - are some curve circle patterns or 1/2 sliders, and 00:41:505 (4,5,6,7) - is the same with this kind of pattern (maybe you can do symmetry). The current one is bizarre and it doesn't match the song's main beats.
  7. 01:09:672 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Strange stream pattern, better if you cut the stream into parts of 1/4 sliders/2 circles. One of the examples: *Screenshot. Doing these stream patterns can match the song's main beats and rhythm.


    Some patterns are way too hard. What I mean hard is that they may cause fails if the players are unable to follow for a few notes. This is usually brought about by the multiple hyperdash patterns in this map. For instance:
  8. 00:53:838 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Firstly, for 00:53:838 (1,1) - the sudden change in the dashing direction will definitely confuse players, and due to such inward movement, players oftenly miss and may even lose track of the upcoming hyperdash jumping part. Don't do this kind of change, unless the pattern earlier has something similar that allow players to get ready. Secondly, for 00:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a big fan of this kind of jumping, it can be harsh and cause a fail if you missed a hyperdash move. Better if you use other 1/2 slider patterns, or some jumping that consist of normal dashes and hyperdashes.
  9. 00:59:422 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For 00:59:422 (2,1,2) - the hyperdash distances are similar but the timeline distance of 00:59:422 (2,1) - is different from 00:59:505 (1,2) - , which can trick players and miss very easily after this jump. Also, for 00:59:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has the same issue above.


    Odd emphasis can be found. Hyperdashes are always used to emphasis main beats of the song, or the cymbal hitsounds around the whole map. For example:
  10. 00:06:005 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash between them because (7) here is the start of another stanza (You can hear that because it is the start of another instrument). Also you can fix the pattern of 00:05:672 (2,3,4,5) - , kind of antiflow between 00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - which bring about uncomfortable jumping.
  11. 00:34:006 (1,2,3) - Strange to have hyperdash between (1,2) here. Can't see why (2) is a beat that should be emphasized strongly. In fact, I think (3) is the main beat here (mostly main beats are at red tick or white tick). You can change to this if you want: *Screenshot.
  12. Not going to pinpoint more, but the major tip here: Mostly hyperdashes are placed every 4 white ticks; start of Kiai/chorus; notes with Finish hitsound (cymbals).


    New Combo (NC) issues. Try to separate notes into combos by stanzas / every 2 or 4 white ticks. For example:
  13. 00:04:839 (8) - This should be NC'ed because it is the start of another 4 white tick timeline. You can observe this by looking at 00:00:839 - 00:04:672 - , NCs are made every 4 white ticks.
  14. 00:06:172 (7) - NC.
  15. 00:23:006 (1) - Remove NC.
  16. 00:24:839 (5,1) - Add NC at (5) and remove the existing one at (1).
  17. 00:27:505 (6,1) - Add NC at (6) and remove the existing one at (1).
  18. 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can group them into a combo, players may be confused if there are too many fruit splashes over the board.
  19. 00:36:838 (1,1,2) - Group this part if you did the same above at 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .
  20. 00:38:172 (4,1) - Add NC at (4) and remove the one at (1).
  21. There are more but I think you can find them out yourself.

Good luck!
-Hex-
Hello . Can I make Cup Diff ? Good song :D
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

alienflybot wrote:

[ General]

  • Design
  1. Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain - Changed.

    Metadata
  2. I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals. - I Changed name of map

    Combo Colors
  3. Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
    Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.
    - Changed, now color combo is light purple

Good luck!
Thanks for mod
Memoriola
 
-Hex-
Okay, here we go.
Don't forget to put my name on tags (all diff) :3

-Hex-'s Cup no HS
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Alright here is my mod!
salad
Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so.
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot.
Shano's Rain
00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash.
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing.
Hex's Cup
Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!
afraid's platter
Alright this has nice hit circle placement but there are a few things i would like to point out
00:10:172 (1) - a weirdly shaped slider that could look better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576573
01:08:672 (1) - also weirdly shaped slider and this would not be a problem if the beginning of the slider was like the end of it
01:14:838 (1) - right here starts a stream that could be better. If you want to make this stream better all you really need to do is connect it all together or you can connect it and curve it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576615 and then add 1 final hit circle at the end
01:06:838 (3) - this slider does not need to exist it can be something more simple like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576658 (you may have to move a circle over a little bit)
01:09:505 (2) - These 2 streams are a little bit weirdly shaped in game and i think it would look better if you moved them a bit closer and made them more straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576670
there are a few weirdly shaped sliders but you dont really notice them to much in game. Other than that great job on your timings!
Alright i love this song i would love for it to be ranked!!!! Sorry i did not mod the other rain *its to close to a 5 star for me* but i hope this helps out! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Alright here is my mod!
Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right - I like it, done, thanks
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333 - done too
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358 - It`s really better, done
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so. - Done it on some parts with 3 hit circle
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot. - I think wht here not need a spinner
Thanks a lot for mod!
Xetopia

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Shano's Rain
00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash. - the best option would be to remove this note
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415 ok
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing. - kiai fixed. But I don't think adding spinner is a good idea
Thanks for mod! <3 <3

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-Hex-

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Alright here is my mod!
Hex's Cup
Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411 Okay, fair enough
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432 Based on Ranking Criteria :
Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. Depending on the BPM of the song, this time must conform to the following:

BPM < 120 - 1/2 bar
BPM < 240 - 1 bar
BPM ≥ 240 - 2 bars
So, I keep this.
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine Okay.
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511 If I do that, last note will be on 01:15:505 - Which 1/2 gap from the spinner make this diff unrankable, so I keep this.
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!
Thanks for the mod !

Update
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Title:afraid...
TitleUnicode:afraid...
Artist:Aya Uchida
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:-Hex-'s Cup
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Tags:Bitter Kiss Shanofanboy OneLoveOneLife -Hex- short gaaraati
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208,208,8505,1,8,0:2:0:0:
368,272,8838,6,0,L|288:80,1,179.999994506836,2|2,1:1|1:3,0:0:0:0:
416,160,9838,1,8,0:2:0:0:
272,80,10172,2,0,P|176:144|256:240,1,269.999991760254,2|8,1:1|0:2,0:0:0:0:
400,240,11505,6,0,L|208:240,1,179.999994506836,6|0,1:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,12505,1,8,0:2:0:0:
208,304,12838,2,0,P|256:224|192:160,1,179.999994506836,2|2,1:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
336,144,13838,1,8,0:2:0:0:
464,144,14172,6,0,L|256:144,1,179.999994506836,6|2,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
384,144,15172,1,8,0:2:0:0:
224,144,15505,2,0,P|128:192|224:288,1,269.999991760254,2|4,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
352,192,16838,6,0,L|256:112,1,89.9999972534181,4|8,1:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
208,144,17338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,17505,2,0,L|112:272,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,18172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,18505,1,8,0:2:0:0:
464,160,18838,2,0,L|464:224,2,44.999998626709,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,19505,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,160,19672,2,0,L|288:272,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,20172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,20338,2,0,L|320:128,1,134.999995880127,0|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
176,160,21172,1,8,0:2:0:0:
48,160,21505,2,0,L|48:224,2,44.999998626709,2|0|8,1:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
208,176,22172,6,0,L|256:144,2,44.999998626709,4|0|8,1:2|3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
96,176,22838,2,0,L|32:128,2,44.999998626709,4|0|8,1:2|3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
192,128,23338,1,0,3:0:0:0:
192,128,23505,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,128,23839,5,8,0:2:0:0:
480,128,24172,2,0,L|480:176,2,44.999998626709,0|2|0,1:0|0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,24838,6,0,L|208:128,2,89.9999972534181,6|6|0,1:1|1:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,128,25838,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,128,26172,2,0,L|192:128,1,89.9999972534181,2|12,0:3|0:2,0:0:0:0:
96,128,26838,1,4,0:3:0:0:
64,128,27005,1,4,0:3:0:0:
64,128,27172,1,4,0:3:0:0:
96,128,27338,1,8,0:3:0:0:
176,128,27505,6,0,L|176:240,1,89.9999972534181,6|8,0:3|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,144,28172,1,2,1:1:0:0:
240,144,28505,1,8,0:2:0:0:
112,144,28838,2,0,L|0:144,2,89.9999972534181,0|0|8,1:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
240,144,29838,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,30172,2,0,P|448:256|368:336,1,269.999991760254,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,31505,2,0,L|64:208,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,144,32505,1,12,0:3:0:0:
384,144,32838,5,4,3:2:0:0:
240,144,33172,1,8,0:3:0:0:
240,144,33338,1,8,3:3:0:0:
48,144,33838,1,12,0:2:0:0:
144,240,34172,5,2,2:1:0:0:
272,240,34505,1,4,3:3:0:0:
272,240,34672,1,2,0:1:0:0:
64,240,35172,1,8,0:2:0:0:
240,240,35505,5,4,3:0:0:0:
267,194,35672,1,4,3:0:0:0:
269,142,35838,1,0,3:3:0:0:
244,96,36005,1,4,3:0:0:0:
144,96,36172,2,0,L|144:224,1,120,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,37172,5,4,0:3:0:0:
304,128,37338,1,4,0:3:0:0:
512,128,37838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,38172,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,38338,2,0,L|208:256,1,120,0|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,39172,2,0,L|160:224,1,80,8|2,3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
48,144,39838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,40172,2,0,L|224:144,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,40838,5,0,0:0:0:0:
417,216,41004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,183,41171,1,8,3:3:0:0:
450,145,41337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,105,41504,1,0,3:0:0:0:
432,68,41671,1,8,3:3:0:0:
405,39,41837,1,8,3:3:0:0:
370,20,42004,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,16,42172,5,4,1:2:0:0:
144,16,42505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,42838,2,0,L|432:144,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,208,43505,5,4,3:2:0:0:
176,208,43838,1,8,3:2:0:0:
336,288,44172,2,0,L|144:288,1,179.999994506836,0|4,3:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
272,208,45172,1,8,0:2:0:0:
400,208,45505,2,0,L|512:208,2,89.9999972534181,0|8|6,1:0|3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
256,208,46505,5,2,0:1:0:0:
128,208,46838,1,2,0:3:0:0:
80,192,47005,1,2,0:1:0:0:
32,176,47172,1,8,0:2:0:0:
32,112,47338,1,2,0:1:0:0:
80,112,47505,1,2,0:3:0:0:
240,160,47838,5,8,0:2:0:0:
384,208,48172,1,2,0:1:0:0:
432,192,48339,1,2,0:1:0:0:
480,176,48506,1,8,0:2:0:0:
480,112,48672,1,8,0:2:0:0:
384,112,48838,6,0,L|288:112,1,89.9999972534181,4|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
144,176,49505,1,0,3:0:0:0:
224,176,49672,2,0,L|320:176,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,50338,2,0,L|512:272,2,89.9999972534181,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,51338,1,4,3:1:0:0:
320,192,52838,5,2,0:1:0:0:
275,184,53004,1,2,0:1:0:0:
230,183,53171,1,8,3:2:0:0:
186,189,53337,1,8,3:2:0:0:
240,128,53504,1,8,3:2:0:0:
281,147,53671,1,8,3:2:0:0:
318,172,53837,1,8,3:2:0:0:
256,208,54004,1,8,3:2:0:0:
208,208,54171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,54338,6,0,P|64:112|144:16,1,250,0|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
240,16,55338,2,0,L|400:16,1,150,6|8,3:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
320,96,56005,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,96,56172,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,96,56505,1,8,3:2:0:0:
288,96,56838,6,0,L|320:208,1,100,6|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
480,160,57505,1,0,3:0:0:0:
480,160,57672,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,160,58005,6,0,L|208:160,1,100,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,58505,1,8,3:2:0:0:
96,160,58672,1,0,3:0:0:0:
160,160,58838,2,0,L|272:160,1,100,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
416,256,59505,6,0,P|496:128|400:16,1,300,0|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
288,16,60838,1,0,2:0:0:0:
224,96,61172,2,0,L|96:96,2,100,8|0|8,3:2|1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
304,96,62005,1,0,3:0:0:0:
400,96,62172,5,6,3:2:0:0:
432,96,62338,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,96,62838,1,4,0:2:0:0:
208,96,63005,1,0,0:3:0:0:
80,192,63505,6,0,L|256:192,1,150,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,64172,2,0,L|368:192,2,50,8|8|8,3:2|3:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
144,304,64838,6,0,P|64:192|160:80,1,300,6|8,3:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
224,80,66005,1,2,3:1:0:0:
384,128,66338,2,0,L|384:208,2,50
464,176,66838,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,176,67172,1,8,0:2:0:0:
160,176,67505,6,0,L|80:96,2,100,4|8|0,3:2|3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,68338,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,160,68672,2,0,L|256:160,1,100,2|0,0:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,69172,1,8,3:2:0:0:
144,160,69338,1,0,3:0:0:0:
208,160,69505,2,0,L|336:160,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,70172,6,0,L|32:176,2,100,0|8|0,0:2|3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,71005,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,176,71338,2,0,L|384:304,1,100,10|8,3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
320,272,71838,1,8,3:2:0:0:
240,272,72005,6,0,L|240:96,1,150,0|8,3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
96,128,72838,1,2,1:1:0:0:
128,128,73005,1,2,3:1:0:0:
304,128,73338,1,2,3:1:0:0:
272,128,73505,1,2,1:1:0:0:
112,128,73838,6,0,L|-16:128,2,100
304,128,74838,2,0,L|192:128,1,100
256,192,75838,12,0,79505,0:0:0:0:
Hythes
mas owo
BPDelirious

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Alright here is my mod!
salad
Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so.
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot.
Shano's Rain
00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash.
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing.
Hex's Cup
Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!
afraid's platter
Alright this has nice hit circle placement but there are a few things i would like to point out
00:10:172 (1) - a weirdly shaped slider that could look better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576573
01:08:672 (1) - also weirdly shaped slider and this would not be a problem if the beginning of the slider was like the end of it
01:14:838 (1) - right here starts a stream that could be better. If you want to make this stream better all you really need to do is connect it all together or you can connect it and curve it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576615 and then add 1 final hit circle at the end
01:06:838 (3) - this slider does not need to exist it can be something more simple like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576658 (you may have to move a circle over a little bit)
01:09:505 (2) - These 2 streams are a little bit weirdly shaped in game and i think it would look better if you moved them a bit closer and made them more straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576670
there are a few weirdly shaped sliders but you dont really notice them to much in game. Other than that great job on your timings!
Alright i love this song i would love for it to be ranked!!!! Sorry i did not mod the other rain *its to close to a 5 star for me* but i hope this helps out! Good luck!
I changed all, thanks for noticing errors. Thanks a lot :)
BPDelirious

alienflybot wrote:



Hello there! I am not feeling well, I will just mod the Overdose and pinpoint some general issues.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

  • Design
  1. Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain.

    Metadata
  2. I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals.

    Combo Colors
  3. Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
    Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.

[ The Last's Platter]

  • Difficulty
  1. AR=OD for all osu!catch difficulty. In this case, the OD of your Platter should be 8.3 instead of 6 to cohere with the value of AR (8.3).

[ afraid...]

  • After my first testplay, I feel that this difficulty still need some improvements before going on. I will leave some general comments below so you can fix them and try to avoid making such mistakes again.


    Some jumps are quite large. This is because the distance between the corresponding notes are too big, but they are not supported by hyperdashes. For instance:
  1. 00:01:505 (5,6) - The distance between them is too large, it is nearly impossible for players to spot the jump in their first play, reducing it will be a good solution.
  2. 00:04:505 (6,7) - ^
  3. 00:32:839 (1,2) - Really easy to miss (2) here because the movement of 00:32:672 (5,1) - may distract players, while the jump at (1,2) here is quite large, almost calling for a hyperdash. Please reduce the distance of (1,2).
  4. 00:43:839 (2,3) - There are some space left between these two notes here, but it may not be enough, it is still so easy to miss, basically because players may not be ready for this kind of edge-screen jumps. If you want to make use of this jump, you can increase the distance of 00:43:505 (1,2) - so players will be more ready for the jumping section. Yet I recommend reducing the distance here to a comfortable one (You can reach this by testing a few times after fixing, trial-and-error).


    Some parts of the map have bizarre rhythms. This may affect player's rhythm sense as they tap dashes or movement keys with a different frequency, also not matching the song itself's rhythm. For example:
  5. 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - You started 1/2 sliders a half beat late, which already caused the dash timing to delay for a bit. Would be better if you start 1/2 sliders from 00:02:172 - , or you add one more circle at 00:02:338 - before using 1/2 slider at 00:02:505 - .
  6. 00:40:672 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange note pattern here. I think the stanza begins at 00:40:838 - so it will match the song more if you remove 00:40:672 (2) - , then add a circle at 00:40:672 - ; 00:40:838 - and 00:41:006 (1,2,3) - are some curve circle patterns or 1/2 sliders, and 00:41:505 (4,5,6,7) - is the same with this kind of pattern (maybe you can do symmetry). The current one is bizarre and it doesn't match the song's main beats.
  7. 01:09:672 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Strange stream pattern, better if you cut the stream into parts of 1/4 sliders/2 circles. One of the examples: *Screenshot. Doing these stream patterns can match the song's main beats and rhythm.


    Some patterns are way too hard. What I mean hard is that they may cause fails if the players are unable to follow for a few notes. This is usually brought about by the multiple hyperdash patterns in this map. For instance:
  8. 00:53:838 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Firstly, for 00:53:838 (1,1) - the sudden change in the dashing direction will definitely confuse players, and due to such inward movement, players oftenly miss and may even lose track of the upcoming hyperdash jumping part. Don't do this kind of change, unless the pattern earlier has something similar that allow players to get ready. Secondly, for 00:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a big fan of this kind of jumping, it can be harsh and cause a fail if you missed a hyperdash move. Better if you use other 1/2 slider patterns, or some jumping that consist of normal dashes and hyperdashes.
  9. 00:59:422 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For 00:59:422 (2,1,2) - the hyperdash distances are similar but the timeline distance of 00:59:422 (2,1) - is different from 00:59:505 (1,2) - , which can trick players and miss very easily after this jump. Also, for 00:59:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has the same issue above.


    Odd emphasis can be found. Hyperdashes are always used to emphasis main beats of the song, or the cymbal hitsounds around the whole map. For example:
  10. 00:06:005 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash between them because (7) here is the start of another stanza (You can hear that because it is the start of another instrument). Also you can fix the pattern of 00:05:672 (2,3,4,5) - , kind of antiflow between 00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - which bring about uncomfortable jumping.
  11. 00:34:006 (1,2,3) - Strange to have hyperdash between (1,2) here. Can't see why (2) is a beat that should be emphasized strongly. In fact, I think (3) is the main beat here (mostly main beats are at red tick or white tick). You can change to this if you want: *Screenshot.
  12. Not going to pinpoint more, but the major tip here: Mostly hyperdashes are placed every 4 white ticks; start of Kiai/chorus; notes with Finish hitsound (cymbals).


    New Combo (NC) issues. Try to separate notes into combos by stanzas / every 2 or 4 white ticks. For example:
  13. 00:04:839 (8) - This should be NC'ed because it is the start of another 4 white tick timeline. You can observe this by looking at 00:00:839 - 00:04:672 - , NCs are made every 4 white ticks.
  14. 00:06:172 (7) - NC.
  15. 00:23:006 (1) - Remove NC.
  16. 00:24:839 (5,1) - Add NC at (5) and remove the existing one at (1).
  17. 00:27:505 (6,1) - Add NC at (6) and remove the existing one at (1).
  18. 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can group them into a combo, players may be confused if there are too many fruit splashes over the board.
  19. 00:36:838 (1,1,2) - Group this part if you did the same above at 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .
  20. 00:38:172 (4,1) - Add NC at (4) and remove the one at (1).
  21. There are more but I think you can find them out yourself.

Good luck!
Thanks for noticing, I totally forgot about the OD. That the OD exists :D .
-Aerith-
As your request on my Modding Queue ~

im just Going to Mod the Hardest diff since this is just a hitsound Mod so....here we go ~


OneLove's Overdose
-00:00:839 add finish in here
-00:03:505 same
-00:06:838 (2,3) change your sampleset to Drum and additions to auto and then add finish for circle 2 and 3 ( sounds better that way ~ )
-00:07:505 same , do it like -00:06:838
-00:17:838 add clap
-00:20:505 add clap
-00:24:505 change sampleset to auto and then add clap
-00:30:172 add finish

Okay , i think that's enough already ....nice song btw :D


Good luck ~
Memoriola
 
Dapulezatos
Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) -
[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO
[gaaraati's Platter]
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - Move to x:400
  2. 00:03:338 (1,2,3,4) - This one is better. IMO Click here xd
  3. 00:06:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  4. 00:20:505 (6) - Make your slider like This
  5. 00:20:838 (7,8) - Make a slider. Example --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618856
  6. 00:21:172 (1) - Remove NC and move it to the left edge (x : 32)
  7. 00:21:338 (9) - Add NC
  8. 00:21:338 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
  9. 00:21:672 (3) - Make reversed slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618871
  10. 00:43:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  11. 00:50:838 (4) - Make reversed Slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618889
  12. 00:51:338 (5) - Move to x:32
  13. 00:59:505 (1,2) - Ctrl + G then repositioning it like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618901
  14. 01:00:172 (3) - Ctrl + H this and move to x:400
  15. 01:09:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one. Why not make it like this 00:42:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -


[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
-Hex-

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) - Moved 1 grid closer
Thanks for the mod !

Cup
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This - It`s pretty good. Done
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288 - Done
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example - Done
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement - Done
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example - Okay, done
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO - move to x:200 because i want that was jump
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map - Thanks
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
Thanks a lot for mod!
Xetopia

Skycreeper- wrote:

[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier - Denied. I think your version looks awkward.
    In addition, it is antiflow
    (but maybe not :> )
BPDelirious

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) -
[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO
[gaaraati's Platter]
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - Move to x:400
  2. 00:03:338 (1,2,3,4) - This one is better. IMO Click here xd
  3. 00:06:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  4. 00:20:505 (6) - Make your slider like This
  5. 00:20:838 (7,8) - Make a slider. Example --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618856
  6. 00:21:172 (1) - Remove NC and move it to the left edge (x : 32)
  7. 00:21:338 (9) - Add NC
  8. 00:21:338 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
  9. 00:21:672 (3) - Make reversed slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618871
  10. 00:43:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  11. 00:50:838 (4) - Make reversed Slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618889
  12. 00:51:338 (5) - Move to x:32
  13. 00:59:505 (1,2) - Ctrl + G then repositioning it like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618901
  14. 01:00:172 (3) - Ctrl + H this and move to x:400
  15. 01:09:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one. Why not make it like this 00:42:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -


[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
I agree and changed everything except for the last one. I think it's fine like that.
Time Series
M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

-Hex-'s Cup
00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup

Salad
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

Platter's Mods
00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^

Shano's Rain
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them

OneLove's Overdose
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things - I think it`s normal what on difficulties have different kiai and etc

Alright. Here's the real mods:

This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal -
I hear on blue tick sound and i think what reverse good for this place
Thanks for mod! I was work with combo
Memoriola
 
-Hex-

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

-Hex-'s Cup
00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders) // Fair enough, changed to 4 circles.
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead // I'm following drum sounds on that timeline. I keep this
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here // Same as above
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here // Same as above
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1) // Added
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4) // Remapped a bit
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here // Ok
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup // I think that's okay as the length of spinner fits with the music.
Thanks for the Mod !

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Xetopia

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

Shano's Rain
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3 - i don't thinl so
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar - ok
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed - ok
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose - made a little easier imo
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them - end of the slider emphasizes vocal
Thanks for the mod ;3
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BPDelirious

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

-Hex-'s Cup
00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup

Salad
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

Platter's Mods
00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^

Shano's Rain
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them

OneLove's Overdose
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Okay, I've changed the CS and some of the patterns due to the CS change. Thanks for the help.
Xetopia
Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^
ну и апдейт моей диффы
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko
[quote="Shanofanboy"]Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^
Исправил все, последние пункты с ремапом - ремапнул, спасибо.
Xetopia
>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Shanofanboy wrote:

>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Найс распределение кудосу. :D
BPDelirious
I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
Summerleopard

gaaraati wrote:

I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
Regardless of the variety,I prefer you reconsidering it tho.
I still think it is lack of stability when in gameplay,try to used simple pattern slightly like simple 1/2 slider / 1/4 slider-kicks. This is just my suggestions.
:(

Other diffs,I might thought the Cup n Salad are safe for me :) at least. Just don't think the Platter feel good and need some polished hope that you understand what is the main point,the rhythming :)

I still think it was undermapped some parts. So,if the owner still want to make this map better. Just summon me when it is needed.
:idea:
No kudosu for this since I just giving some inspirations,when I fully mod only then you may. Thank you...
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