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Aya Uchida - afraid... [CatchTheBeat]

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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 8 августа 2018 г. at 11:26:53

Artist: Aya Uchida
Title: afraid...
Tags: Bitter Kiss Xetopia -Hex- Sinnoh alienflybot Celektus
BPM: 180
Filesize: 21156kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. AFB's Platter (2,85 stars, 247 notes)
  2. Hex's Cup (1,45 stars, 125 notes)
  3. Salad (2,05 stars, 186 notes)
  4. Sinnoh's Overdose (4,49 stars, 310 notes)
  5. Xetopia's Rain (3,89 stars, 275 notes)
Download: Aya Uchida - afraid...
Download: Aya Uchida - afraid... (no video)
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Read please
Hello all, I return to work on this map, and I again try rank it (haaaaaa), so, I reworked my salad (full) and deleted platter & overdose (sorry gaaraati and onelove) cup and rain would be reworked. I will delete it after rank

Cup - By -Hex- [100%]
Salad - By Shirokane Rinko [100%]
Platter - By alienflybot [100%]
Rain - By Xetopia [100%]
Overdose - By Sinnoh [100%]


Hitsounds : By Celektus
Beatmap Banner : By Luisina


Negri_sk
Hello

[afraid...]
00:15:132 (1) - Move this to x432 to make it a hyper and therefore make this jumping section more fun.
00:19:131 (5) - Move this to x512 since moving to the right after a kickslider to the left feels a lot more natural.
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL+G if you CTRL+G it feels more natural and fun to play. Also move it to x128
00:36:965 (2) - Same problems as ^ but basicaly CTRL+G and move it to x384
00:39:131 (1) - CTRL+G to remove the antiflow then you move 00:38:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all these 2-3 ticks to the right with the current grid level 3.
00:45:298 (7,9) - Move these 2 to x104 to trigger the hyper effect on this strong beat!
00:47:131 (2,4) - I would strongly recommend moving these 2 to x408 this does remove the "back and forwards" pattern but honestly it really does not fit there, you should really only do it in a longer stream section and probably with less distance!
00:53:131 (2) - Move this to x88 since this antiflow triple pattern in the middle of the stream just feels awkward af to play.
01:08:131 (7) - Going into a slider with a hyper feels better to me here so I suggest moving this to x464
01:10:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would strongly suggest to just redo this whole pattern, however if you don't feel like it just move 01:10:298 (2) - to x168 and 01:10:631 (4) - to x400 to remove the awkward random hypers here.
01:15:131 (7) - Move this to x16 seriously, this feels a lot better than without a hyper if you try it out.
01:15:131 (7) - Exact same reason as this ^ only this time around you're suppose to move it to x496
01:22:631 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can probably make this stream pattern into something more interesting! Look at the other streams in the map.
01:28:298 (13,14) - CTRL+G, no questions asked, just do it.
01:27:631 (6) - x408 to make this fruit become a hyper into the stream that begins right after.

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.
Kurokami
Hi.

Rather than going into details I decided to give some general feedback instead because your map need that above anything else at this point.

[General]

The mp3 file has ~15sec empty part before the song starts, please remove this and set your preview point to a more suitable place.

Add the guest mapper's name to the tags please. Furthermore there is no need for "uchida, aya, afraid, short, japan" there. The source is not Aya Uchida either, leave it empty. We only use that if the song comes from a video game.

I took a look at all difficulty and noticed the same thing everywhere, which are the inconsistent timeline (rhythm usage) and their inconsistent distances. What am I want to say with this you might ask. My point here is that, if you take a look at the part between 00:29:797 and 00:40:464 and listen it a few times you should notice the pattern which repeats itself in the music. This pattern is a line from the lyrics then 4 drum hit repeated four times. This means, you should follow this and have a repetitive timeline as well. Like this:

When the timeline is done you can go and decide how the distances will be used. For example, (we are still at the same section by the way) on my screenshot whenever the vocal steps in I used a long 1/1 slider and that slider could be placed a bit away from the previous note because it is the introduction of a new verse. This could be 2.00x up to a HyperJump, it is your decision BUT because it repeats itself you need to stick with this distance at the similar parts of this section (or later as well if the rhythm comes back again). Drums can have jumps or Hyperjumps as well.

I hope this amount of explanation was enough to understand my point, if not feel free to contact me and I will try to explain it better. Moreover, this small paragraph applies to all difficulties in this set, not just the easiest or hardest. All of you guys made the same mistakes all over. Please try to fix it.

Few more thing:
[afraid]

00:19:131 to 00:29:797 - Why this part has a break? It is a strong instrumental one with guitar and drums. You should not leave it empty on the highest difficulty at all.
00:43:131 (6) - I am personally not a big fan of these kind of slider usage. It covers and ignores important instruments from the song.
00:47:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - You used this kind of jump pattern a LOT of times which not just makes your map kinda boring but can completely be out of place as well, like here by the way. Also 00:47:214 (3,5) - are mapped to nothing.
[]

tr;dr With fixing that timeline and distance you guys saves a lot of time to others and might get this map ranked sooner. And while many modder and player probably won't care too much about them, the members of the BNG will notice it and point it out. Having a small inconsistently is fine as long as you can explain it though.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Kurokami wrote:

Hi.

Rather than going into details I decided to give some general feedback instead because your map need that above anything else at this point.

[General]

The mp3 file has ~15sec empty part before the song starts, please remove this and set your preview point to a more suitable place.

Add the guest mapper's name to the tags please. Furthermore there is no need for "uchida, aya, afraid, short, japan" there. The source is not Aya Uchida either, leave it empty. We only use that if the song comes from a video game.

I took a look at all difficulty and noticed the same thing everywhere, which are the inconsistent timeline (rhythm usage) and their inconsistent distances. What am I want to say with this you might ask. My point here is that, if you take a look at the part between 00:29:797 and 00:40:464 and listen it a few times you should notice the pattern which repeats itself in the music. This pattern is a line from the lyrics then 4 drum hit repeated four times. This means, you should follow this and have a repetitive timeline as well. Like this:

When the timeline is done you can go and decide how the distances will be used. For example, (we are still at the same section by the way) on my screenshot whenever the vocal steps in I used a long 1/1 slider and that slider could be placed a bit away from the previous note because it is the introduction of a new verse. This could be 2.00x up to a HyperJump, it is your decision BUT because it repeats itself you need to stick with this distance at the similar parts of this section (or later as well if the rhythm comes back again). Drums can have jumps or Hyperjumps as well.

I hope this amount of explanation was enough to understand my point, if not feel free to contact me and I will try to explain it better. Moreover, this small paragraph applies to all difficulties in this set, not just the easiest or hardest. All of you guys made the same mistakes all over. Please try to fix it.

Few more thing:
[afraid]

00:19:131 to 00:29:797 - Why this part has a break? It is a strong instrumental one with guitar and drums. You should not leave it empty on the highest difficulty at all.
00:43:131 (6) - I am personally not a big fan of these kind of slider usage. It covers and ignores important instruments from the song.
00:47:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - You used this kind of jump pattern a LOT of times which not just makes your map kinda boring but can completely be out of place as well, like here by the way. Also 00:47:214 (3,5) - are mapped to nothing.
[]

tr;dr With fixing that timeline and distance you guys saves a lot of time to others and might get this map ranked sooner. And while many modder and player probably won't care too much about them, the members of the BNG will notice it and point it out. Having a small inconsistently is fine as long as you can explain it though.

Good luck!
Dear Kurokami.
Thanks for mod, I tells about him to my friend. You say remove 15 second part before song, but it`s need, because map sounds was taken from video, and in video have 15 second part, so i think that it`s need dor map. Soon my friend write you about mod,waht he fix and what no.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Negri_sk wrote:

Hello

[afraid...]
00:15:132 (1) - Move this to x432 to make it a hyper and therefore make this jumping section more fun.
00:19:131 (5) - Move this to x512 since moving to the right after a kickslider to the left feels a lot more natural.
00:36:465 (1) - CTRL+G if you CTRL+G it feels more natural and fun to play. Also move it to x128
00:36:965 (2) - Same problems as ^ but basicaly CTRL+G and move it to x384
00:39:131 (1) - CTRL+G to remove the antiflow then you move 00:38:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - all these 2-3 ticks to the right with the current grid level 3.
00:45:298 (7,9) - Move these 2 to x104 to trigger the hyper effect on this strong beat!
00:47:131 (2,4) - I would strongly recommend moving these 2 to x408 this does remove the "back and forwards" pattern but honestly it really does not fit there, you should really only do it in a longer stream section and probably with less distance!
00:53:131 (2) - Move this to x88 since this antiflow triple pattern in the middle of the stream just feels awkward af to play.
01:08:131 (7) - Going into a slider with a hyper feels better to me here so I suggest moving this to x464
01:10:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would strongly suggest to just redo this whole pattern, however if you don't feel like it just move 01:10:298 (2) - to x168 and 01:10:631 (4) - to x400 to remove the awkward random hypers here.
01:15:131 (7) - Move this to x16 seriously, this feels a lot better than without a hyper if you try it out.
01:15:131 (7) - Exact same reason as this ^ only this time around you're suppose to move it to x496
01:22:631 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can probably make this stream pattern into something more interesting! Look at the other streams in the map.
01:28:298 (13,14) - CTRL+G, no questions asked, just do it.
01:27:631 (6) - x408 to make this fruit become a hyper into the stream that begins right after.

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.
Dear Negri_sk
Thanks for mod, I tell my friends about him and soon they write what they fix, and what no
Xetopia

Negri_sk wrote:

Hello

[Shano's Rain]
00:18:799 (3,4,5,6) - You could curve this stream a bit more since it's on a strong beat.
00:20:798 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:798 (4,5,6,7) - Especially on this part since there is a much more curved stream right after it.
Everything was fixed!, thanks

and update:
uwu
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Countdown: 0
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Title:afraid... (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:afraid... (Short Ver.)
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:Shano's Rain
Source:Uchida Aya
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Memoriola
 
Memoriola
 
Emiru
afraid....
17:10 Emiru: oh so it's way easier we can do IRC mod right now if you want
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: :thinking:
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: okay
17:12 OneLoveOneLife: Don't forget to save our chat
17:12 Emiru: sure
17:13 Emiru: Okay first AR is kinda low maybe ? like 9.4 is better i think
17:13 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: I really don't know, because every AR less than 10 is slow for me
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: But okay
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: Done
17:14 Emiru: 00:16:965 (3) -
17:14 Emiru: you should nerf this jump or make a HDash
17:15 OneLoveOneLife: nerfed
17:16 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) -
17:16 Emiru: mayeb curved is slider is way better for the aesthetic of the map
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087472 like this?]
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: Or what do you mean
17:19 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) - x:416 and stream 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4) - first note x:80
17:19 Emiru: it look way better
17:19 Emiru: yeah i guess it's ok maybe just normal curved slider like
17:20 Emiru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087492
17:20 Emiru: 00:20:964 - note here ?
17:21 Emiru: to make a good looking triplet like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087509
17:22 OneLoveOneLife: Here's no sounds
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: I want to put here something, but other modders will be angre
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: agrhh >:З
17:24 Emiru: so just put little slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087527
17:24 Emiru: 00:23:714 (2,3) - same here
17:26 OneLoveOneLife: Maybe Im little stupid, but whats the difference between slider and 2 notes?
17:27 Emiru: aesthetic again
17:27 Emiru: your patern look kinda ugly :d and it play better i think
17:28 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm, okay, let it be
17:29 Emiru: 00:29:047 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087582
17:29 Emiru: same here with the little slider
17:30 Emiru: 00:32:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - make more movement on this it's 2 easy for overdose
17:31 Emiru: 00:40:298 (5) - HDash here
17:32 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087598 like this?]
17:32 Emiru: yeah maybe a little more
17:33 Emiru: 00:43:131 (6) - this slider make no sense aha
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: Everyone said it's weird
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: What have I put here
17:35 Emiru: how about velocity 1,20 for this slider and form like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087632
17:35 Emiru: i think you can keep it just make him with a good form like curved
17:36 Emiru: 00:46:965 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - make them two triplet reverse arrows like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087646
17:36 OneLoveOneLife: Gimeme 1 min
17:36 Emiru: 00:50:465 (1) - antiflow reverse him
17:37 Emiru: and put number 2 way more to the left
17:38 OneLoveOneLife: Idk how to change velocity only for this slider(
17:38 Emiru: F6
17:38 Emiru: + green and 1.20
17:38 Emiru: when it's finish just at the end put 1.o or the number you want
17:41 Emiru: kiai is pretty decent
17:41 Emiru: 01:28:464 (15) - same curve more with more velocity
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: Im too stipud for this
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: I'll call creator of own mapset to help. It's his work :D
17:42 Emiru: ok
17:42 Emiru: i have to eat now ;w;
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: well, is this all?
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: I mean, end of the mod
17:44 Emiru: yep
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Emiru wrote:

afraid....
17:10 Emiru: oh so it's way easier we can do IRC mod right now if you want
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: :thinking:
17:11 OneLoveOneLife: okay
17:12 OneLoveOneLife: Don't forget to save our chat
17:12 Emiru: sure
17:13 Emiru: Okay first AR is kinda low maybe ? like 9.4 is better i think
17:13 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: I really don't know, because every AR less than 10 is slow for me
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: But okay
17:14 OneLoveOneLife: Done
17:14 Emiru: 00:16:965 (3) -
17:14 Emiru: you should nerf this jump or make a HDash
17:15 OneLoveOneLife: nerfed
17:16 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) -
17:16 Emiru: mayeb curved is slider is way better for the aesthetic of the map
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087472 like this?]
17:17 OneLoveOneLife: Or what do you mean
17:19 Emiru: 00:17:798 (3) - x:416 and stream 00:18:465 (1,2,3,4) - first note x:80
17:19 Emiru: it look way better
17:19 Emiru: yeah i guess it's ok maybe just normal curved slider like
17:20 Emiru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087492
17:20 Emiru: 00:20:964 - note here ?
17:21 Emiru: to make a good looking triplet like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087509
17:22 OneLoveOneLife: Here's no sounds
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: I want to put here something, but other modders will be angre
17:23 OneLoveOneLife: agrhh >:З
17:24 Emiru: so just put little slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087527
17:24 Emiru: 00:23:714 (2,3) - same here
17:26 OneLoveOneLife: Maybe Im little stupid, but whats the difference between slider and 2 notes?
17:27 Emiru: aesthetic again
17:27 Emiru: your patern look kinda ugly :d and it play better i think
17:28 OneLoveOneLife: Hmm, okay, let it be
17:29 Emiru: 00:29:047 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087582
17:29 Emiru: same here with the little slider
17:30 Emiru: 00:32:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - make more movement on this it's 2 easy for overdose
17:31 Emiru: 00:40:298 (5) - HDash here
17:32 OneLoveOneLife: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087598 like this?]
17:32 Emiru: yeah maybe a little more
17:33 Emiru: 00:43:131 (6) - this slider make no sense aha
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: Everyone said it's weird
17:34 OneLoveOneLife: What have I put here
17:35 Emiru: how about velocity 1,20 for this slider and form like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087632
17:35 Emiru: i think you can keep it just make him with a good form like curved
17:36 Emiru: 00:46:965 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - make them two triplet reverse arrows like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8087646
17:36 OneLoveOneLife: Gimeme 1 min
17:36 Emiru: 00:50:465 (1) - antiflow reverse him
17:37 Emiru: and put number 2 way more to the left
17:38 OneLoveOneLife: Idk how to change velocity only for this slider(
17:38 Emiru: F6
17:38 Emiru: + green and 1.20
17:38 Emiru: when it's finish just at the end put 1.o or the number you want
17:41 Emiru: kiai is pretty decent
17:41 Emiru: 01:28:464 (15) - same curve more with more velocity
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: Im too stipud for this
17:42 OneLoveOneLife: I'll call creator of own mapset to help. It's his work :D
17:42 Emiru: ok
17:42 Emiru: i have to eat now ;w;
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: well, is this all?
17:43 OneLoveOneLife: I mean, end of the mod
17:44 Emiru: yep
Thanks you very much for mod.
I reworked two sliders about which you wrote.
The Last
Cup

Для начала хотел бы сказать, что меня смущают несколько слайдеров:
00:45:797 (1) - и 01:15:131 (1) - мне кажется, что стоит немного выгнуть их, так как слайдеры такой формы могут помешать поймать все дроплеты.
01:20:464 (1) - дроплеты летят слева от остальной составляющей, соответственно поймать все дроплеты может быть тоже затруднительно (в рамках самой простой сложности).

Salad

00:18:465 (7) - это нужно срочно заменить! В саладе нельзя использовать стримы длиной более чем в один BPM с шагом в 1/4, т.е. не более чем 5 нот в одном стриме. Если заменить его на что-то подобное (пикрелейтед), то нужно сделать слайдер как новое комбо т.к. комбо учитывая все реверсы составит 11, а допустимое 10.
01:27:797 (6) - на всех слайдерах такого типа советую немного уменьшить наклон.
00:32:797 (8) - бью тревогу! Обнаружено наложение объектов друг на друга. Стоит просто убрать круг №8
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

The Last wrote:

Salad

00:18:465 (7) - это нужно срочно заменить! В саладе нельзя использовать стримы длиной более чем в один BPM с шагом в 1/4, т.е. не более чем 5 нот в одном стриме. Если заменить его на что-то подобное (пикрелейтед), то нужно сделать слайдер как новое комбо т.к. комбо учитывая все реверсы составит 11, а допустимое 10. - Исправлено, спасибо.
01:27:797 (6) - на всех слайдерах такого типа советую немного уменьшить наклон. - Исправлено.
00:32:797 (8) - бью тревогу! Обнаружено наложение объектов друг на друга. Стоит просто убрать круг №8 - Забыл его убрать ранее,
спасибо, что напомнили, 8 ноту удалил.
Gordon123
@The Last's mod

>при испоьзовании обычного скина у меня не возникло никаких проблем с тем что бы поймать все дроблеты :
Но всё же я внемлю требованиям на счёт первого,так что 00:45:797 (1) - немного исправлен.
~~~~~~~

>Опять же,у меня всё нормально получается,но хорошо,немного подправил! ээх
Thx for mod ;)
Celektus

From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue

Here is the Code for the top diffs Hitsounds and a link to My Skin in case you'd like to add my Hitsounds as Customs. After you've applied the Hitsounds just copy them to other diffs with this tool


afraid..
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13798
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:afraid... (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:afraid... (Short Ver.)
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:afraid..
Source:Uchida Aya
Tags:Bitter Kiss The Last Shanofanboy Gordon123 OneLoveOneLife
BeatmapID:1296239
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OverallDifficulty:9.4
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SliderMultiplier:1.6
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[afraid..]

I have also some small suggestions or questions


  1. between these notes I think are some important sounds that should be mapped 00:57:465 (5,1) - in this first one there's a Vocal on the red tick before and in the slider. the slider head still has the crash on it so I think there might be a better solution. Similar thing here 01:02:797 (4,5,1) - also on both red before and after 5

  2. why didn't you map this stream? 01:17:131 (4,5,6,7) -

  3. wouldn't a spinner in the end fit? just an idea since the song fades out. You could then even fade out the volume of the spinner

  4. now I also have 2 more things I'm confused about as a std mapper. in std It's more common to start new combos on big white ticks and not out of these since they are usually the section changes. is there a reason for that in ctb?

    2. thing there's a thing in std I think called tick relevancy which essentially states that most music has it's strong sounds naturally on odd ticks. I assume you maybe saw a video from Pishifat talking about and if not maybe do that if you're curious 1 3 2 4.

    So starting jump pattern on like red ticks is considered less ideal and gets pointed out... I don't know if this applies to ctb tho so I'm just guessing I should ask and point it out that you do that ;_; 01:13:964 (1,2) -

  5. also... use 3 dots for afraid.. since that's more Anime/LN/VN stereotype-ish... also maybe before the Afraid or maybe use a question mark and yes I'm actually suggesting things about the diffname cause 2 dots trigger me deep inside or something
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Celektus wrote:

From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue
Thanks so much, it`s hitsounds so good
Memoriola
 
Dea ex machina
General


Tags
  1. Good!
Metadata
  1. It's already been mentioned but remove Uchida Aya from the source box. This is not what that is for.
Spread/Other
  1. It'd be better for the Cup to be cs2.5, hp 3, and approach rate AT LEAST ar5 to properly fit the spread. As it stands right now, all three values are questionable
  2. Please lower the Salad hp to 4, and consider raising the Overdose hp to 7. These are the default values for a full spread
Hitsounds

  • General Hitsounding
  1. Good!

Gordon's Cup


General



  1. Why is the cup's sv set at 1.40? That's kind of high for a cup difficulty
  2. Looking through the cup, there's a fair amount of quality issues that I think should be addressed before you push this any more forward. The distances are odd consistently throughout the mapset, and the combos can be halved as they are currently, and the biggest issue of all is that this is way too dense at many parts, such as 00:39:797 (3,4) - , 00:45:297 (4,5,6) - , and 01:23:131 (1,2,3) - . Going back to the distances quickly, we can see that in numerous places notes are FAR too close together and deserve a lot more space, even for a cup difficulty. Here are a few examples; 00:15:798 (2,3) - , 00:18:464 (4,1) - , 00:32:131 (6,1) - , 00:34:797 (6,1) - , 00:51:797 (2,3) - , 00:58:797 (4,1) - , and 01:01:797 (1,2) -, to name a few.
While I want to help you out, there's a lot that needs to be done before you're ready for the modding stage.

Salad


General



  1. This difficulty suffers much of the same problems as the one before it. Odd distances, awkward flow, though the density is fine for the most part (but there are certain places where you go a bit overboard, such as 00:54:297 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...). It'd be almost pointless to mod this at this point, since it'd be mostly remapping sections and doing a lot of the work for you.

The Last's Platter


General



  1. Starting to sense a trend here :( This difficulty has all the same problems that the other two did, with the addition of hyperdash errors and far larger combos.
  2. 00:23:881 - There's no note here, no need to place a circle here
  3. Again, this would be pointless to mod as it is.

Shano's Rain


General



  1. This difficulty has a lot more proper structure and spacing, so I can do a proper mod on it
  2. 00:16:299 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:16:465 (2) - .
  3. 00:20:465 (1,2) - Having a hyper between these two notes is pretty overkill, since you just had a hyper going to (1) and (2) isn't really that strong of a note.
  4. 00:21:132 (6) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:21:798 (3) -
  5. 00:25:132 (3,4) - The distance between these notes should be a bit greater! It deserves a small jump at least
  6. 00:25:798 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:26:298 (1) -
  7. 00:27:131 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:28:131 (3) - , and then place another on 00:28:465 (1) -
  8. 00:28:798 (3) - This curved slider doesn't work so well. The flow going off of it doesn't feel nice to play. Consider making it more horizontal.
  9. 00:31:131 (5) - Place a NC here please.
  10. 00:34:465 (6) - Make this more horizontal please. The slight angle it has is just annoying to play and doesn't do much good.
  11. 00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You have more hypers in this section than you did in the last section, which doesn't make sense since this one is more quiet and soft. Please reduce the hyper count where you see fit.
  12. 00:58:798 (10,1) - Put a hyper here please! This is a really good spot for one.
  13. 01:15:131 (3,4,5) - The hyper is completely different from 01:15:798 (6,7) - , which is the exact same sound in the song. You two circles with a hyper connecting them in the first pattern, and a regular slider in the second. Make them consistent!
  14. 01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Try a more rounded approach for this stream. This current stream is ugly.
  15. 01:33:465 (4,5) - Uh... why is there a hyper here? Quite literally the quietest part of the song.
    Around halfway through the song I stopped noticing the NCs because they were all wrong. Look at a few maps/guides quickly and then fix them, it shouldn't be hard

afraid..


General



  1. And this difficulty has all the problems that the rest of them do. Sorry, but I don't think it's a good idea for me to mod this right now

If you want a 100% mod, shoot me a message once you've addressed my concerns and I'll take a look again.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

-wwwww wrote:

General


Metadata
It's already been mentioned but remove Uchida Aya from the source box. This is not what that is for. - Done

Please lower the Salad hp to 4 - Done


Salad


General



This difficulty suffers much of the same problems as the one before it. Odd distances, awkward flow, though the density is fine for the most part (but there are certain places where you go a bit overboard, such as 00:54:297 (4,5,1,2,3) - ...). It'd be almost pointless to mod this at this point, since it'd be mostly remapping sections and doing a lot of the work for you. - I Reworked distances in many moments, little reworked NC, thanks for mod, and sorry for this miss
Xetopia

-wwwww wrote:

Shano's Rain


General



  1. This difficulty has a lot more proper structure and spacing, so I can do a proper mod on it
  2. 00:16:299 (1) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:16:465 (2) - . - done
  3. 00:20:465 (1,2) - Having a hyper between these two notes is pretty overkill, since you just had a hyper going to (1) and (2) isn't really that strong of a note. - fixed
  4. 00:21:132 (6) - Remove the NC here and place it on 00:21:798 (3) - done
  5. 00:25:132 (3,4) - The distance between these notes should be a bit greater! It deserves a small jump at least - fixed
  6. 00:25:798 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:26:298 (1) - done
  7. 00:27:131 (5) - Place a NC here and remove the one on 00:28:131 (3) - , and then place another on 00:28:465 (1) - done
  8. 00:28:798 (3) - This curved slider doesn't work so well. The flow going off of it doesn't feel nice to play. Consider making it more horizontal. - done
  9. 00:31:131 (5) - Place a NC here please. - done
  10. 00:34:465 (6) - Make this more horizontal please. The slight angle it has is just annoying to play and doesn't do much good. - - removed slider and added four notes to create another pattern. I thought that slider looks bad in here
  11. 00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You have more hypers in this section than you did in the last section, which doesn't make sense since this one is more quiet and soft. Please reduce the hyper count where you see fit. - fixed
  12. 00:58:798 (10,1) - Put a hyper here please! This is a really good spot for one. - fixed
  13. 01:15:131 (3,4,5) - The hyper is completely different from 01:15:798 (6,7) - , which is the exact same sound in the song. You two circles with a hyper connecting them in the first pattern, and a regular slider in the second. Make them consistent! - fixed
  14. 01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Try a more rounded approach for this stream. This current stream is ugly. - fixed
  15. 01:33:465 (4,5) - Uh... why is there a hyper here? Quite literally the quietest part of the song. - fixed :D
    Around halfway through the song I stopped noticing the NCs because they were all wrong. Look at a few maps/guides quickly and then fix them, it shouldn't be hard - ok, i'll fix NCs
Thanks for mod <333
and update
^.^
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CLSW
purace horuda
Gordon123

-wwwww wrote:

General


Spread/Other
  1. It'd be better for the Cup to be cs2.5, hp 3, and approach rate AT LEAST ar5 to properly fit the spread. As it stands right now, all three values are questionable awwwwwww my bad,i forget it! fix

Gordon's Cup


General



  1. Why is the cup's sv set at 1.40? That's kind of high for a cup difficulty so now its 1.15
  2. Looking through the cup, there's a fair amount of quality issues that I think should be addressed before you push this any more forward. The distances are odd consistently throughout the mapset, and the combos can be halved as they are currently, and the biggest issue of all is that this is way too dense at many parts, such as 00:39:797 (3,4) - not fix only it,because I do not agree that we need to change this point, because I think that here it is suitable as in any way way+i like it, 00:45:297 (4,5,6) - , and 01:23:131 (1,2,3) - . Going back to the distances quickly, we can see that in numerous places notes are FAR too close together and deserve a lot more space, even for a cup difficulty. Here are a few examples; 00:15:798 (2,3) - , 00:18:464 (4,1) - , 00:32:131 (6,1) - , 00:34:797 (6,1) - , 00:51:797 (2,3) - , 00:58:797 (4,1) - , and 01:01:797 (1,2) -, to name a few.
While I want to help you out, there's a lot that needs to be done before you're ready for the modding stage.
All the rest I applied! thx for mod ;)
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CLSW
Alright, let's go!

[Rain]
00:28:465 (2,3) - Try to add more movements, it has enough potential to get larger distance due to the music flow, try to move 00:28:465 (2) - more left.
00:43:797 (3,4) - Movement here feels pretty awkward, you may try to move 00:44:131 (4) - on right side. But it'll force HDash on its tail so if you don't like to add HDash on there try like this: 01:05:882 (2) - Not a good idea to place this type of streams, basically it's Rain diff not Overdose which is completely freedom, try to move this around x:95 or somewhere.
01:16:131 (7) - At least try to move this to the right side for the better flow. The longer distance is needed for this section.
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Similar reason as above, but if you really wanna make more distance between 01:17:465 (3,4,5) - try to make larger distance.

[afraid..]
00:42:465 (4,5) - Not a good idea to stack them all, at least I wanna see some movements there
00:48:631 (2,3) - Uncomfortable dash pattern, I think (3) needs HDash
00:49:798 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Obvious overmap, there're no beats on every blue ticks. Change them to 1/2s.
00:52:465 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as above
00:54:965 (8) - Similar reason as 00:42:465 (4,5) - , and I think it needs longer distance as common jump pattern due to the previous ones.
01:11:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This should be not 123/123, 12/12/12 or 12/1234. It means the jumps should exist on 01:12:048 (2,3) - and 01:12:215 (1,2) - , not 01:12:130 (3,1) - .

Not really reachable quality for being qualified imo, it needs more improvements.
:idea:
Xetopia

CLSW wrote:

Alright, let's go!

[Rain]
00:28:465 (2,3) - Try to add more movements, it has enough potential to get larger distance due to the music flow, try to move 00:28:465 (2) - more left. - I tried. result: full screen jump Kappa. But i still thinking about this.
00:43:797 (3,4) - Movement here feels pretty awkward, you may try to move 00:44:131 (4) - on right side. But it'll force HDash on its tail so if you don't like to add HDash on there try like this: - done. 01:05:882 (2) - Not a good idea to place this type of streams, basically it's Rain diff not Overdose which is completely freedom, try to move this around x:95 or somewhere. - ok
01:16:131 (7) - At least try to move this to the right side for the better flow. The longer distance is needed for this section. - done
01:17:465 (3,4,5,6) - Similar reason as above, but if you really wanna make more distance between 01:17:465 (3,4,5) - try to make larger distance. - okay
Thanks for mod clsw! <3<3<3

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184,56,39298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,152,40298,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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400,152,40797,1,8,0:2:0:0:
416,88,40881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,32,41464,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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32,144,42297,1,10,0:2:0:0:
48,112,42381,1,8,0:2:0:0:
72,88,42464,1,8,0:2:0:0:
104,80,42547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,80,42630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,42797,2,0,L|304:64,1,87.7499973220826,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
464,64,43131,5,2,0:1:0:0:
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400,184,44131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,44297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,175,44465,2,0,P|32:136|96:72,1,175.499994644165,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,44965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,104,45131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,45298,1,12,0:3:0:0:
304,72,45465,1,12,0:3:0:0:
168,104,45631,1,12,0:3:0:0:
392,168,45798,6,0,L|504:168,2,78,4|0|8,3:2|3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,160,46298,2,0,L|232:80,1,78,8|4,3:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
392,96,46631,2,0,L|400:0,1,78,0|12,3:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,40,46965,2,0,L|200:40,1,39,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,47131,2,0,L|352:40,1,78,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
456,32,47465,6,0,L|352:32,1,78,4|2,3:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
136,48,47798,1,4,0:3:0:0:
64,112,47965,1,4,0:3:0:0:
112,192,48131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
208,200,48298,1,4,0:3:0:0:
56,176,48465,6,0,L|72:88,1,78,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
224,152,48798,2,0,L|240:56,1,78,0|4,3:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,49131,2,0,L|456:64,2,78,4|4|8,3:0|3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
136,48,49631,1,4,3:0:0:0:
72,112,49798,1,4,0:3:0:0:
112,192,49964,1,4,0:3:0:0:
200,208,50131,1,4,0:3:0:0:
304,208,50298,1,4,0:3:0:0:
192,256,50465,1,4,0:3:0:0:
312,256,50631,1,4,0:3:0:0:
160,304,50798,2,0,L|48:304,1,78,8|4,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
408,248,51131,6,0,L|512:248,2,78,4|0|10,3:2|3:0|2:3,0:0:0:0:
144,232,51631,2,0,L|136:152,1,78,10|0,3:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,51965,2,0,L|288:48,1,78,0|8,1:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
128,64,52298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
206,64,52465,6,0,L|296:64,1,78,2|2,1:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
168,80,52798,2,0,L|64:80,1,78,2|4,1:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
296,48,53131,2,0,L|216:48,2,78,0|2|8,1:0|0:1|0:2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,53631,1,2,0:1:0:0:
472,144,53798,6,0,L|376:144,1,78,4|0,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,104,54965,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,80,55131,2,0,P|296:72|256:24,2,156,4|0|0,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,64,55881,5,8,0:2:0:0:
136,96,55965,1,8,0:2:0:0:
128,144,56048,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,136,56131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,152,56215,1,8,0:2:0:0:
392,184,56298,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,200,56381,1,8,0:2:0:0:
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384,136,57631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,57798,1,4,1:2:0:0:
248,64,57965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,58131,1,8,0:2:0:0:
264,72,58298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,72,58465,2,0,L|288:72,1,87.7499973220826,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,58798,2,0,L|80:224,1,87.7499973220826,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,200,59131,6,0,L|440:200,1,87.7499973220826,6|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,59465,2,0,L|184:176,1,87.7499973220826,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,168,59798,2,0,L|456:64,1,87.7499973220826,2|2,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
128,112,60131,2,0,L|304:112,1,175.499994644165,8|2,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
400,112,60631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,72,60798,6,0,L|56:72,1,87.7499973220826,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,61131,1,2,0:1:0:0:
328,112,61298,1,2,0:1:0:0:
240,72,61465,1,8,0:2:0:0:
336,72,61631,1,8,0:2:0:0:
56,72,61798,2,0,L|64:200,1,87.7499973220826,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,62131,2,0,L|192:312,1,87.7499973220826,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,62465,6,0,L|328:232,2,87.7499973220826,0|0|8,3:0|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
112,224,62965,2,0,L|96:136,1,87.7499973220826,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,96,63298,2,0,L|224:96,1,87.7499973220826,0|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,63631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
392,152,63798,2,0,L|296:152,2,87.7499973220826,8|0|8,3:2|3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
104,144,64298,1,4,3:1:0:0:
140,220,65798,5,2,0:1:0:0:
95,191,65882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,65965,1,8,2:2:0:0:
168,136,66048,1,8,2:2:0:0:
408,104,66132,6,0,L|465:104,1,43.8749986610413,8|8,3:2|2:2,0:0:0:0:
224,80,66298,2,0,L|176:80,1,43.8749986610413,8|8,3:2|2:2,0:0:0:0:
424,136,66465,5,8,3:2:0:0:
464,112,66547,1,8,2:2:0:0:
464,80,66632,1,8,3:2:0:0:
424,56,66715,1,8,2:2:0:0:
232,48,66798,2,0,L|184:48,1,43.8749986610413,8|8,3:2|2:3,0:0:0:0:
392,32,66965,2,0,L|440:32,1,43.8749986610413,4|4,2:3|2:3,0:0:0:0:
208,128,67131,6,0,P|104:128|32:48,2,195,6|10|2,1:1|3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
320,128,67965,1,0,1:0:0:0:
424,72,68131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
128,80,68298,2,0,P|72:144|144:208,1,195,6|0,3:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,68798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
120,248,68965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,69131,2,0,L|416:112,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,69465,2,0,L|168:96,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,56,69797,6,0,L|360:56,1,97.5,6|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,32,70131,2,0,L|384:32,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,70465,2,0,L|16:128,2,97.5,0|0|8,3:0|3:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
400,96,70965,6,0,L|288:96,2,97.5,2|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,71465,2,0,P|40:176|88:304,1,195,8|0,3:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,200,71965,2,0,L|360:200,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,72131,2,0,L|288:168,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,168,72298,2,0,L|48:168,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
336,152,72465,6,0,P|448:120|488:40,2,195,6|8|2,1:1|3:2|1:1,0:0:0:0:
208,152,73298,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,128,73465,1,8,3:2:0:0:
384,96,73631,2,0,P|448:128|384:208,1,195,2|0,3:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,74131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
392,209,74298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
128,192,74465,2,0,L|104:80,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,74798,2,0,L|280:0,1,146.25,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
96,120,75131,6,0,L|88:16,1,97.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,64,75465,2,0,L|264:64,1,146.25,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,96,75798,2,0,L|160:96,1,97.5,4|0,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76131,2,0,P|368:88|296:80,1,195,8|0,0:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,76631,2,0,L|40:72,2,97.5,0|8|0,3:0|3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,80,77131,6,0,L|392:80,1,48.75,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,48,77298,2,0,L|128:48,1,48.75,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,56,77465,1,8,0:2:0:0:
416,83,77548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,140,77631,1,8,0:2:0:0:
416,187,77715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,176,77798,5,6,3:1:0:0:
312,104,78131,1,8,3:2:0:0:
168,32,78465,1,2,1:1:0:0:
280,32,78631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
384,32,78798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
104,104,78964,2,0,L|80:224,1,97.5,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,79298,1,8,3:2:0:0:
416,240,79465,2,0,L|432:144,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,136,79798,2,0,L|408:136,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,80131,2,0,L|104:8,1,97.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,80465,6,0,P|400:88|336:184,1,195,4|8,3:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
256,184,80965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
368,224,81131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,224,81298,2,0,L|80:112,1,97.5,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
360,168,81631,2,0,L|368:56,1,97.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,81965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,80,82131,2,0,P|384:112|344:200,1,146.25,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,82465,2,0,L|16:200,1,97.5,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
328,160,82798,2,0,L|392:160,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
376,160,82965,2,0,L|312:160,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
88,168,83131,6,0,L|72:56,1,97.5,4|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,83465,2,0,L|184:-8,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,83798,2,0,L|496:136,2,97.5,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
160,168,84298,2,0,P|96:128|176:64,1,195,10|8,3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,84798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
140,60,84965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,24,85131,2,0,L|408:144,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,85465,2,0,L|232:280,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,224,85798,6,0,L|376:224,2,97.5,2|2|8,1:1|3:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
148,184,86298,1,2,3:1:0:0:
268,160,86465,2,0,L|156:160,1,97.5,2|0,1:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,86798,6,0,L|448:48,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
344,48,87131,2,0,L|216:48,1,97.5,2|2,1:1|3:1,0:0:0:0:
360,40,87465,2,0,L|464:40,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
160,120,87798,1,8,1:2:0:0:
104,120,87881,1,8,0:2:0:0:
128,184,87965,1,8,0:2:0:0:
184,208,88048,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,232,88131,2,0,L|424:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,232,88298,2,0,L|328:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,248,88465,6,0,P|152:152|288:96,1,233.999992858887,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,88,88965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,89131,2,0,L|112:224,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,89465,2,0,L|96:216,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,89798,2,0,P|400:120|264:56,1,233.999992858887,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,90298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,64,90381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,90465,2,0,L|280:64,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,104,90798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,90965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,91131,6,0,P|176:112|352:40,1,233.999992858887,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,91631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,91798,2,0,L|112:264,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,92131,2,0,L|312:376,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,312,92465,2,0,L|56:312,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,248,92798,6,0,L|376:128,1,116.999996429443,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,93131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,120,93298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,88,93465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,93631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Memoriola
 
SYAHME
Random mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]
  1. HP - for overdose, you can change to 7 but HP 6 is okay to me, it is up to you.
  2. CS - for consistency, please change CS for cup to 2.5 & salad to 3.0, don't make the size same as platter.
  3. AR/OD - all diffs are okay but please change AR/OD cup to 6 for consistency and high BPM.
  4. Please unchecked widescreen support in platter, rain & overdose.
  5. It will be nice if you can resize BG to 1920x1080 but the current one is okay too.
[Gordon's Cup]
  1. What did I see in this diff is your mapping style is similar to standard pattern.
  2. 00:29:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I advise you to change this pattern and make a movement by make the sliders more horizontal, 00:31:131 (3,4,5,6) - 00:33:797 (3,4,5,6) - to me these stacks are not suit enough, make some distance between them.
  3. 00:43:131 (1) - you can hear a strong sound here, so stack doesn't emphasize the sound well, you can make some jump here.
  4. 00:44:464 (3,4) - make this slider and reverse slider close to each other.
  5. 00:58:797 (4) - move this to x:208.
  6. 01:09:797 (1,2) - this, 01:09:797 (1) - move 1 to x:240 to make a jump to emphasize the strong sound & 01:10:464 (2) - move this also to x:400.
  7. 01:12:131 (5) - move to x:368 to emphasize the strong sound.
  8. 01:19:131 (3,4) - not good to make a stack here, consider a change to the new pattern.
  9. 01:24:464 (4,5) - ^.
  10. 01:27:131 (3,4) - ^ by move 01:28:131 (4) - to x:212.
[Salad]
  1. I can catch all notes w/o using the dash button, please create suitable jumps at the suitable strong sound.
  2. Some part is kinda repetitive, you might need to check again.
  3. 00:16:298 (1,2) - you might want to make a jump here, it is suitable because of strong sound.
  4. 00:18:465 (1) - plain pattern, make some variety, please.
  5. 00:20:798 (4,5,1) - not too fun stack, 00:21:298 (2) - move to x:152 to make the distance of 00:21:132 (1,2,3) - 3 notes here same.
  6. 00:24:298 (1,2) - make some distance please, the stack will make less movement in ctb.
  7. 00:29:047 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - nyan, stacks again!
  8. 00:39:798 (3) - plain pattern, make some variety, please.
  9. 00:55:798 (3) - ^.
  10. 01:03:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - you must love stack so much, you can change this pattern to "C' or anything that is fun.
  11. 01:05:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is good.
  12. 01:11:798 (1) - lazy pattern.
  13. 01:11:798 (1,2) - stack again, you suppose to make the distance larger according to the timeline.
  14. 01:22:464 (1) - lazy pattern.
  15. 01:27:797 (1) - lazy pattern and it is kinda big to catch by the plate.
Good luck on ranked this.
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

SYAHME wrote:

Random mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]
  1. HP - for overdose, you can change to 7 but HP 6 is okay to me, it is up to you. - Yes, I think it better, done
  2. CS - for consistency, please change CS for cup to 2.5 & salad to 3.0, don't make the size same as platter. - Done
  3. AR/OD - all diffs are okay but please change AR/OD cup to 6 for consistency and high BPM. - Done
  4. Please unchecked widescreen support in platter, rain & overdose. - Done
  5. It will be nice if you can resize BG to 1920x1080 but the current one is okay too.
- Okay, resize
[Salad]
  1. I can catch all notes w/o using the dash button, please create suitable jumps at the suitable strong sound. - Okay
  2. Some part is kinda repetitive, you might need to check again.
  3. 00:16:298 (1,2) - you might want to make a jump here, it is suitable because of strong sound. - Done
  4. 00:18:465 (1) - plain pattern, make some variety, please. - Rework
  5. 00:20:798 (4,5,1) - not too fun stack, 00:21:298 (2) - move to x:152 to make the distance of 00:21:132 (1,2,3) - 3 notes here same. - Done
  6. 00:24:298 (1,2) - make some distance please, the stack will make less movement in ctb. - Done
  7. 00:29:047 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - nyan, stacks again! - Done
  8. 00:39:798 (3) - plain pattern, make some variety, please. - Rework
  9. 00:55:798 (3) - ^. - Done
  10. 01:03:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - you must love stack so much, you can change this pattern to "C' or anything that is fun. - Rework
  11. 01:05:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is good. - Thanks
  12. 01:11:798 (1) - lazy pattern. - Rework
  13. 01:11:798 (1,2) - stack again, you suppose to make the distance larger according to the timeline. - Done
  14. 01:22:464 (1) - lazy pattern. - Rework
  15. 01:27:797 (1) - lazy pattern and it is kinda big to catch by the plate. -Rework
Good luck on ranked this, I stop here because of there a lot of mod for upper diffs.
So much thanks for mod
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

-wwwww wrote:

The Last's Platter


General



  1. Starting to sense a trend here :( This difficulty has all the same problems that the other two did, with the addition of hyperdash errors and far larger combos. - I reworked it at him
  2. 00:23:881 - There's no note here, no need to place a circle here - Delete
  3. Again, this would be pointless to mod as it is. - Sorry him about this
Thanks for mod again
Gordon123

SYAHME wrote:

[Gordon's Cup]
  • About CS/AR/OD so : CS=2 (not changed,because i not think what this diff need in 2.5) AR=6 and OD=6 fix
  1. What did I see in this diff is your mapping style is similar to standard pattern. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
  2. 00:29:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I advise you to change this pattern and make a movement by make the sliders more horizontal fix only circles, 00:31:131 (3,4,5,6) - 00:33:797 (3,4,5,6) - to me these stacks are not suit enough, make some distance between them. yeeaah
  3. 00:43:131 (1) - you can hear a strong sound here, so stack doesn't emphasize the sound well, you can make some jump here. sure
  4. 00:44:464 (3,4) - make this slider and reverse slider close to each other. only (4) and lil fix distanse
  5. 00:58:797 (4) - move this to x:208. ok
  6. 01:09:797 (1,2) - this, 01:09:797 (1) - move 1 to x:240 to make a jump to emphasize the strong sound & 01:10:464 (2) - move this also to x:400. sure,why not!
  7. 01:12:131 (5) - move to x:368 to emphasize the strong sound. okay
  8. 01:19:131 (3,4) - not good to make a stack here, consider a change to the new pattern. ah,okay fix
  9. 01:24:464 (4,5) - ^. awww,ok
  10. 01:27:131 (3,4) - ^ by move 01:28:131 (4) - to x:212.
yea
Thx for mod ;)
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Sakary
As you requested.

First of all, these are mostly suggestions. It's up to you if you want to follow everything I have said.
And sorry for the bad english.

General
  1. Remove "(Short Ver.)" on the title of the song. It is unlikely recommended. Maybe put it on tags instead?
  2. The background size is unrankable. Resize it to 1366x768.
  3. I don't know about you, but I think the map's offset is a bit off. 13790 is the correct offset? I'm not sure. Maybe consult a time checker.
  4. About the preview point, 01:04:964 - seems the most appropriate part in placing preview point.
afraid...
  1. Are you sure about AR9.4? I think it's too fast for 180bpm overdose.
  2. 00:13:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Circles here were spammed; also, some dashes doesn't fit with the song either. I suggest you to remap this part and add some sliders.
    As a guide, these are the timings (notes) that have potential hdashes:
    1. 00:14:632 (6) -
    2. 00:14:965 (2) -
    3. 00:16:298 (7) -
    4. 00:17:298 (5) -
    5. 00:17:631 (2) -
  3. 00:18:631 (2,3,4,5) - Confusing.
  4. 00:20:464 (1) - Maybe ctrl+g?
  5. 00:21:048 (2) - Make this vertical.
  6. 00:25:464 (4) - I think you misplaced this.
  7. 00:30:297 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is too hard at this moment. Curve circle pattern has a good place here.
  8. 00:32:964 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same with this one.
  9. 00:36:131 (2) - Move it here: x:304
  10. 00:37:465 (4,5) - This pattern seems awkward. Remove this pattern then copy 00:37:131 (3) - then paste it on 00:37:465 then ctrl+h.
  11. 00:40:798 (1) - x:360
  12. 00:42:465 (4) - Put the tail on the red tick. It sounds better.
  13. 00:42:965 (6) - Too close from 00:42:798 (5) - . Move it farther away from 5 to make it hdash with 00:43:131 (7) - .
  14. 00:43:131 (7) - I don't recommend this super long slider. Map this part instead.
  15. 00:46:965 (1) - Too close from 00:46:798 (6) - . Add more distance.
  16. 00:47:047 (2) - Put this close to 00:46:965 (1) - .
  17. Some parts of the diff have unnecessary jumps which are confusing to play. Though, the map is playable.
  18. Also, slider arts like 01:21:631 (1) - and 00:27:131 (1) - doesn't apply too much on the play mode. If you want to add crazy sliders, make it horizontal. A good example is this 00:43:131 (7) - .
  19. You can do better
Shano's Rain
  1. I like your mapping style, to be honest.
  2. 00:13:632 (1,2) - Make 1 hdash. It is better that way.
  3. 00:32:798 (2) - Too close from 00:32:465 (1) - . Add more distance.
  4. 00:34:964 (9) - Move to x:424 for smoother curve.
  5. 00:38:798 (4) - 1/1 slider makes the rhythm off. Why not make it a repeat slider instead?
  6. 00:40:714 (2,3,4,5,6) - This a bit overmapped. Remove 2 instead?
  7. 00:41:631 - Blank space.
  8. 00:56:215 (5,6) - Move these here: x:408.
  9. 01:00:131 (4) - Same issue with 00:38:798 (4) -: Based on the rhythm here 01:01:131 (2,3,4) -.
  10. 01:06:131 (1) - Reduce its distance a little bit.
  11. 01:06:798 (5) - New combo, based on this pattern 01:06:131 (1,2) - .
  12. 01:15:465 (2,3) - Why not make the pattern like 01:14:798 (8,1) - too?
  13. 01:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern (01:17:465 (3,4,5,6)) - fits to be first rather than 01:17:131 (1,2) - ?
  14. 01:27:131 (2) - Add distance.
  15. 01:28:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, I know your effort here, but I suggest to make this part spinner -- like other of the difficulties?

This is it for now.
I might continue this next time.
A very good luck with the ranking!!!
:D
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Hi_Hello wrote:

General
  1. Remove "(Short Ver.)" on the title of the song. It is unlikely recommended. Maybe put it on tags instead? - Hm, I think it better.
  2. The background size is unrankable. Resize it to 1366x768. - Okay, thanks
  3. I don't know about you, but I think the map's offset is a bit off. 13790 is the correct offset? I'm not sure. Maybe consult a time checker. - It`s true offset
  4. About the preview point, 01:04:964 - seems the most appropriate part in placing preview point. - Rework, thanks
This is it for now.
I might continue this next time.
A very good luck with the ranking!!!
:D
Thanks a lot for mod!
Memoriola
 
SYAHME
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

SYAHME wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5571699
oh, thanks a lot.
Xetopia

Hi_Hello wrote:

Shano's Rain
  1. I like your mapping style, to be honest. thanks <3
  2. 00:13:632 (1,2) - Make 1 hdash. It is better that way. - ok
  3. 00:32:798 (2) - Too close from 00:32:465 (1) - . Add more distance. - ok
  4. 00:34:964 (9) - Move to x:424 for smoother curve. - ok
  5. 00:38:798 (4) - 1/1 slider makes the rhythm off. Why not make it a repeat slider instead? - besides the vocals there's nothing there.
    + curve slider emphasized this vocal
  6. 00:40:714 (2,3,4,5,6) - This a bit overmapped. Remove 2 instead? - ok
  7. 00:41:631 - Blank space.
  8. 00:56:215 (5,6) - Move these here: x:408. - ok
  9. 01:00:131 (4) - Same issue with 00:38:798 (4) -: Based on the rhythm here 01:01:131 (2,3,4) -.- then i agree
  10. 01:06:131 (1) - Reduce its distance a little bit. - ok
  11. 01:06:798 (5) - New combo, based on this pattern 01:06:131 (1,2) - . - ok
  12. 01:15:465 (2,3) - Why not make the pattern like 01:14:798 (8,1) - too? - already did it :D
  13. 01:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern (01:17:465 (3,4,5,6)) - fits to be first rather than 01:17:131 (1,2) - ? - to emphasize vocal beat first are sliders
  14. 01:27:131 (2) - Add distance. - ok
  15. 01:28:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, I know your effort here, but I suggest to make this part spinner -- like other of the difficulties? - I think if put a spinner in there it will be too boring
Thanks for mod <33
update:
nya~
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 13798
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:afraid...
TitleUnicode:afraid...
Artist:Uchida Aya
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:Shano's Rain
Source:
Tags:Bitter Kiss The Last Shanofanboy Gordon123 OneLoveOneLife
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280,32,78631,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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304,136,79798,2,0,L|408:136,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,128,80131,2,0,L|104:8,1,97.5,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,184,80965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
368,224,81131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,224,81298,2,0,L|80:112,1,97.5,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
360,168,81631,2,0,L|368:56,1,97.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,81965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,80,82131,2,0,P|384:112|344:200,1,146.25,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,82465,2,0,L|16:200,1,97.5,0|8,1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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376,160,82965,2,0,L|312:160,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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208,120,83465,2,0,L|184:-8,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,83798,2,0,L|496:136,2,97.5,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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248,60,84798,1,8,3:2:0:0:
140,60,84965,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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Shirokane Rinko
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Kimitakari
This Overdose was a mistake
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Nelly wrote:

This Overdose was a mistake
I not think so.
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