Aya Uchida - afraid... [CatchTheBeat]

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alienflybot wrote:



Hello there! I am not feeling well, I will just mod the Overdose and pinpoint some general issues.

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[ General]

  • Design
  1. Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain.

    Metadata
  2. I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals.

    Combo Colors
  3. Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
    Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.
[The Last's Platter]

  • Difficulty
  1. AR=OD for all osu!catch difficulty. In this case, the OD of your Platter should be 8.3 instead of 6 to cohere with the value of AR (8.3).
[afraid...]

  • After my first testplay, I feel that this difficulty still need some improvements before going on. I will leave some general comments below so you can fix them and try to avoid making such mistakes again.


    Some jumps are quite large. This is because the distance between the corresponding notes are too big, but they are not supported by hyperdashes. For instance:
  1. 00:01:505 (5,6) - The distance between them is too large, it is nearly impossible for players to spot the jump in their first play, reducing it will be a good solution.
  2. 00:04:505 (6,7) - ^
  3. 00:32:839 (1,2) - Really easy to miss (2) here because the movement of 00:32:672 (5,1) - may distract players, while the jump at (1,2) here is quite large, almost calling for a hyperdash. Please reduce the distance of (1,2).
  4. 00:43:839 (2,3) - There are some space left between these two notes here, but it may not be enough, it is still so easy to miss, basically because players may not be ready for this kind of edge-screen jumps. If you want to make use of this jump, you can increase the distance of 00:43:505 (1,2) - so players will be more ready for the jumping section. Yet I recommend reducing the distance here to a comfortable one (You can reach this by testing a few times after fixing, trial-and-error).


    Some parts of the map have bizarre rhythms. This may affect player's rhythm sense as they tap dashes or movement keys with a different frequency, also not matching the song itself's rhythm. For example:
  5. 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - You started 1/2 sliders a half beat late, which already caused the dash timing to delay for a bit. Would be better if you start 1/2 sliders from 00:02:172 - , or you add one more circle at 00:02:338 - before using 1/2 slider at 00:02:505 - .
  6. 00:40:672 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange note pattern here. I think the stanza begins at 00:40:838 - so it will match the song more if you remove 00:40:672 (2) - , then add a circle at 00:40:672 - ; 00:40:838 - and 00:41:006 (1,2,3) - are some curve circle patterns or 1/2 sliders, and 00:41:505 (4,5,6,7) - is the same with this kind of pattern (maybe you can do symmetry). The current one is bizarre and it doesn't match the song's main beats.
  7. 01:09:672 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Strange stream pattern, better if you cut the stream into parts of 1/4 sliders/2 circles. One of the examples: *Screenshot. Doing these stream patterns can match the song's main beats and rhythm.


    Some patterns are way too hard. What I mean hard is that they may cause fails if the players are unable to follow for a few notes. This is usually brought about by the multiple hyperdash patterns in this map. For instance:
  8. 00:53:838 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Firstly, for 00:53:838 (1,1) - the sudden change in the dashing direction will definitely confuse players, and due to such inward movement, players oftenly miss and may even lose track of the upcoming hyperdash jumping part. Don't do this kind of change, unless the pattern earlier has something similar that allow players to get ready. Secondly, for 00:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a big fan of this kind of jumping, it can be harsh and cause a fail if you missed a hyperdash move. Better if you use other 1/2 slider patterns, or some jumping that consist of normal dashes and hyperdashes.
  9. 00:59:422 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For 00:59:422 (2,1,2) - the hyperdash distances are similar but the timeline distance of 00:59:422 (2,1) - is different from 00:59:505 (1,2) - , which can trick players and miss very easily after this jump. Also, for 00:59:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has the same issue above.


    Odd emphasis can be found. Hyperdashes are always used to emphasis main beats of the song, or the cymbal hitsounds around the whole map. For example:
  10. 00:06:005 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash between them because (7) here is the start of another stanza (You can hear that because it is the start of another instrument). Also you can fix the pattern of 00:05:672 (2,3,4,5) - , kind of antiflow between 00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - which bring about uncomfortable jumping.
  11. 00:34:006 (1,2,3) - Strange to have hyperdash between (1,2) here. Can't see why (2) is a beat that should be emphasized strongly. In fact, I think (3) is the main beat here (mostly main beats are at red tick or white tick). You can change to this if you want: *Screenshot.
  12. Not going to pinpoint more, but the major tip here: Mostly hyperdashes are placed every 4 white ticks; start of Kiai/chorus; notes with Finish hitsound (cymbals).


    New Combo (NC) issues. Try to separate notes into combos by stanzas / every 2 or 4 white ticks. For example:
  13. 00:04:839 (8) - This should be NC'ed because it is the start of another 4 white tick timeline. You can observe this by looking at 00:00:839 - 00:04:672 - , NCs are made every 4 white ticks.
  14. 00:06:172 (7) - NC.
  15. 00:23:006 (1) - Remove NC.
  16. 00:24:839 (5,1) - Add NC at (5) and remove the existing one at (1).
  17. 00:27:505 (6,1) - Add NC at (6) and remove the existing one at (1).
  18. 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can group them into a combo, players may be confused if there are too many fruit splashes over the board.
  19. 00:36:838 (1,1,2) - Group this part if you did the same above at 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .
  20. 00:38:172 (4,1) - Add NC at (4) and remove the one at (1).
  21. There are more but I think you can find them out yourself.

Good luck!
Thanks for noticing, I totally forgot about the OD. That the OD exists :D .
-Aerith-
As your request on my Modding Queue ~

im just Going to Mod the Hardest diff since this is just a hitsound Mod so....here we go ~


-00:00:839 add finish in here
-00:03:505 same
-00:06:838 (2,3) change your sampleset to Drum and additions to auto and then add finish for circle 2 and 3 ( sounds better that way ~ )
-00:07:505 same , do it like -00:06:838
-00:17:838 add clap
-00:20:505 add clap
-00:24:505 change sampleset to auto and then add clap
-00:30:172 add finish

Okay , i think that's enough already ....nice song btw :D


Good luck ~
Memoriola
 
Dapuluous
Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) -


[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO

[gaaraati's Platter]
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - Move to x:400
  2. 00:03:338 (1,2,3,4) - This one is better. IMO Click here xd
  3. 00:06:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  4. 00:20:505 (6) - Make your slider like This
  5. 00:20:838 (7,8) - Make a slider. Example --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618856
  6. 00:21:172 (1) - Remove NC and move it to the left edge (x : 32)
  7. 00:21:338 (9) - Add NC
  8. 00:21:338 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
  9. 00:21:672 (3) - Make reversed slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618871
  10. 00:43:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  11. 00:50:838 (4) - Make reversed Slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618889
  12. 00:51:338 (5) - Move to x:32
  13. 00:59:505 (1,2) - Ctrl + G then repositioning it like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618901
  14. 01:00:172 (3) - Ctrl + H this and move to x:400
  15. 01:09:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one. Why not make it like this 00:42:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -


[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
-Hex-

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) - Moved 1 grid closer
Thanks for the mod !

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51797
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:afraid...
TitleUnicode:afraid...
Artist:Aya Uchida
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
Version:-Hex-'s Cup
Source:
Tags:Bitter Kiss Shanofanboy OneLoveOneLife -Hex- short gaaraati
BeatmapID:1355139
BeatmapSetID:610541

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:6
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SliderTickRate:1

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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This - It`s pretty good. Done
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288 - Done
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example - Done
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement - Done
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example - Okay, done
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO - move to x:200 because i want that was jump
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map - Thanks
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
Thanks a lot for mod!
Imai Lisa

Skycreeper- wrote:

[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier - Denied. I think your version looks awkward.
    In addition, it is antiflow
    (but maybe not :> )
gaaraati

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) -


[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO

[gaaraati's Platter]
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - Move to x:400
  2. 00:03:338 (1,2,3,4) - This one is better. IMO Click here xd
  3. 00:06:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  4. 00:20:505 (6) - Make your slider like This
  5. 00:20:838 (7,8) - Make a slider. Example --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618856
  6. 00:21:172 (1) - Remove NC and move it to the left edge (x : 32)
  7. 00:21:338 (9) - Add NC
  8. 00:21:338 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
  9. 00:21:672 (3) - Make reversed slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618871
  10. 00:43:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  11. 00:50:838 (4) - Make reversed Slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618889
  12. 00:51:338 (5) - Move to x:32
  13. 00:59:505 (1,2) - Ctrl + G then repositioning it like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618901
  14. 01:00:172 (3) - Ctrl + H this and move to x:400
  15. 01:09:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one. Why not make it like this 00:42:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -


[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
I agree and changed everything except for the last one. I think it's fine like that.
Time Series
M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things - I think it`s normal what on difficulties have different kiai and etc

Alright. Here's the real mods:

This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal -
I hear on blue tick sound and i think what reverse good for this place
Thanks for mod! I was work with combo
Memoriola
 
-Hex-

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders) // Fair enough, changed to 4 circles.
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead // I'm following drum sounds on that timeline. I keep this
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here // Same as above
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here // Same as above
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1) // Added
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4) // Remapped a bit
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here // Ok
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup // I think that's okay as the length of spinner fits with the music.
Thanks for the Mod !

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Imai Lisa

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3 - i don't thinl so
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar - ok
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed - ok
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose - made a little easier imo
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them - end of the slider emphasizes vocal
Thanks for the mod ;3
osu file format v14

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Tags:Bitter Kiss Shanofanboy OneLoveOneLife -Hex- short gaaraati
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gaaraati

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Okay, I've changed the CS and some of the patterns due to the CS change. Thanks for the help.
Imai Lisa
Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^
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432,160,73839,6,0,L|448:48,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
304,48,74172,2,0,L|176:48,1,97.5,2|2,1:1|3:1,0:0:0:0:
360,40,74506,2,0,L|464:40,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
160,120,74839,1,8,1:2:0:0:
112,136,74922,1,8,0:2:0:0:
128,184,75006,1,8,0:2:0:0:
184,208,75089,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,232,75172,2,0,L|424:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,232,75339,2,0,L|328:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,248,75506,6,0,P|152:152|248:112,1,175.499994644165,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,76006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,76172,2,0,L|112:184,1,87.7499973220826
240,208,76505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,76672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,76839,2,0,P|368:120|264:56,1,175.499994644165,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,77339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,64,77422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,77506,2,0,L|296:64,1,87.7499973220826
168,120,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,78006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,78172,6,0,P|176:112|304:48,1,175.499994644165
400,48,78672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,78839,2,0,L|112:240,1,87.7499973220826
304,240,79172,2,0,L|312:352,1,87.7499973220826
136,304,79506,2,0,L|40:256,1,87.7499973220826
256,192,79838,12,0,80672,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko
[quote="Shanofanboy"]Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^

Исправил все, последние пункты с ремапом - ремапнул, спасибо.
Imai Lisa
>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Shanofanboy wrote:

>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Найс распределение кудосу. :D
gaaraati
I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
SangKrazF1nal3

gaaraati wrote:

I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
Regardless of the variety,I prefer you reconsidering it tho.
I still think it is lack of stability when in gameplay,try to used simple pattern slightly like simple 1/2 slider / 1/4 slider-kicks. This is just my suggestions.
:(

Other diffs,I might thought the Cup n Salad are safe for me :) at least. Just don't think the Platter feel good and need some polished hope that you understand what is the main point,the rhythming :)

I still think it was undermapped some parts. So,if the owner still want to make this map better. Just summon me when it is needed.
:idea:
No kudosu for this since I just giving some inspirations,when I fully mod only then you may. Thank you...
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