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Hello . Can I make Cup Diff ? Good song :D
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

alienflybot wrote:

[ General]

  • Design
  1. Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain - Changed.

    Metadata
  2. I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals. - I Changed name of map

    Combo Colors
  3. Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
    Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.
    - Changed, now color combo is light purple

Good luck!
Thanks for mod
Memoriola
 
-Hex-
Okay, here we go.
Don't forget to put my name on tags (all diff) :3

-Hex-'s Cup no HS
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Alright here is my mod!
salad
Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so.
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot.
Shano's Rain
00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash.
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing.
Hex's Cup
Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!
afraid's platter
Alright this has nice hit circle placement but there are a few things i would like to point out
00:10:172 (1) - a weirdly shaped slider that could look better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576573
01:08:672 (1) - also weirdly shaped slider and this would not be a problem if the beginning of the slider was like the end of it
01:14:838 (1) - right here starts a stream that could be better. If you want to make this stream better all you really need to do is connect it all together or you can connect it and curve it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576615 and then add 1 final hit circle at the end
01:06:838 (3) - this slider does not need to exist it can be something more simple like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576658 (you may have to move a circle over a little bit)
01:09:505 (2) - These 2 streams are a little bit weirdly shaped in game and i think it would look better if you moved them a bit closer and made them more straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576670
there are a few weirdly shaped sliders but you dont really notice them to much in game. Other than that great job on your timings!
Alright i love this song i would love for it to be ranked!!!! Sorry i did not mod the other rain *its to close to a 5 star for me* but i hope this helps out! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Alright here is my mod!
Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right - I like it, done, thanks
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333 - done too
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358 - It`s really better, done
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so. - Done it on some parts with 3 hit circle
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot. - I think wht here not need a spinner
Thanks a lot for mod!
Xetopia

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Shano's Rain
00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash. - the best option would be to remove this note
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415 ok
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing. - kiai fixed. But I don't think adding spinner is a good idea
Thanks for mod! <3 <3

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-Hex-

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Alright here is my mod!
Hex's Cup
Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411 Okay, fair enough
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432 Based on Ranking Criteria :
Adequate time must be left between objects and the start and end of spinners to ensure readability. Depending on the BPM of the song, this time must conform to the following:

BPM < 120 - 1/2 bar
BPM < 240 - 1 bar
BPM ≥ 240 - 2 bars
So, I keep this.
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine Okay.
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511 If I do that, last note will be on 01:15:505 - Which 1/2 gap from the spinner make this diff unrankable, so I keep this.
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!
Thanks for the mod !

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Hythes
mas owo
BPDelirious

xXShockwaveXx wrote:

Alright here is my mod!
salad
Alright so This is pretty well timed but there are some things that i would like to point out
Ok, so there are a lot of hit circles and while that's ok you need to balance the amount of sliders and hit circles ill send some examples with screenshots
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575274 get rid of 5 make 4 a slider and then move the new five to the right
00:07:005 (4,5) - right here you can remove 4-5 and add a slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575333
Its better to use short sliders to get the nice 2 beat hit your looking for so ill point some more out
00:12:172 (4,5,6) - just use a short slider with a reverse arrow the change it that it will add droplets to make it a bit nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575358
and you dont have to do that with all of your 3 hit circles it would just look a little bit better if you did so.
00:51:338 (5) - right after this why dont you add just a short spinner. The spinner may be a little short but it seems to be perfect for that spot.
Shano's Rain
00:00:755 (1,2) - i think you should either make 2 a little bit delayed or move it closer to one because that is a really small gap for a hyper dash.
00:43:172 (4,5,6,7) - this stream is a little awkwardly shaped maybe move it to look more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8575415
00:51:339 (6) - i think you could fit a spinner in this little break(i dont know why that just seems to fit so well to me)
The last thing i would like to point out is maybe you could let the Kiai come in just a little bit earlier. Like right when she starts to sing.
Hex's Cup
Alright here we go!
00:17:505 (3) - Shorten this slider to make it about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576406 and because of the gap with no sound place a hit circle after it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576411
01:15:838 (1) - move this spinner to happen a little bit earlier cause there is a awkward pause so put it right here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576432
01:06:338 (3) - shorten this slider a tad to so it fits and add a hit circle out of it to fix the gap of no sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576440 however if you do not like where that hit circle looks you can move it around its fine
01:13:838 (1) - alright change that to a short slider and make the slider after it one with a reverse arrow and add one final hit circle at the end
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576498 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576511
Thats all i have other than that Great job hex!
afraid's platter
Alright this has nice hit circle placement but there are a few things i would like to point out
00:10:172 (1) - a weirdly shaped slider that could look better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576573
01:08:672 (1) - also weirdly shaped slider and this would not be a problem if the beginning of the slider was like the end of it
01:14:838 (1) - right here starts a stream that could be better. If you want to make this stream better all you really need to do is connect it all together or you can connect it and curve it like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576615 and then add 1 final hit circle at the end
01:06:838 (3) - this slider does not need to exist it can be something more simple like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576658 (you may have to move a circle over a little bit)
01:09:505 (2) - These 2 streams are a little bit weirdly shaped in game and i think it would look better if you moved them a bit closer and made them more straight like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8576670
there are a few weirdly shaped sliders but you dont really notice them to much in game. Other than that great job on your timings!
Alright i love this song i would love for it to be ranked!!!! Sorry i did not mod the other rain *its to close to a 5 star for me* but i hope this helps out! Good luck!
I changed all, thanks for noticing errors. Thanks a lot :)
BPDelirious

alienflybot wrote:



Hello there! I am not feeling well, I will just mod the Overdose and pinpoint some general issues.

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[ General]

  • Design
  1. Uncheck 'Widescreen Support' in Shano's Rain.

    Metadata
  2. I am uncertain about the singer's name, is it 'Aya Uchida' or 'Uchida Aya'? Perhaps you can check it up or ask some metadata professionals.

    Combo Colors
  3. Combo Color 2 (Dark purple) might be too dark, I think players may miss easily if they play with a dimmed background.
    Since Combo Color 1 is purple, maybe you can change Combo Color 2 to Grey/White tone.

[ The Last's Platter]

  • Difficulty
  1. AR=OD for all osu!catch difficulty. In this case, the OD of your Platter should be 8.3 instead of 6 to cohere with the value of AR (8.3).

[ afraid...]

  • After my first testplay, I feel that this difficulty still need some improvements before going on. I will leave some general comments below so you can fix them and try to avoid making such mistakes again.


    Some jumps are quite large. This is because the distance between the corresponding notes are too big, but they are not supported by hyperdashes. For instance:
  1. 00:01:505 (5,6) - The distance between them is too large, it is nearly impossible for players to spot the jump in their first play, reducing it will be a good solution.
  2. 00:04:505 (6,7) - ^
  3. 00:32:839 (1,2) - Really easy to miss (2) here because the movement of 00:32:672 (5,1) - may distract players, while the jump at (1,2) here is quite large, almost calling for a hyperdash. Please reduce the distance of (1,2).
  4. 00:43:839 (2,3) - There are some space left between these two notes here, but it may not be enough, it is still so easy to miss, basically because players may not be ready for this kind of edge-screen jumps. If you want to make use of this jump, you can increase the distance of 00:43:505 (1,2) - so players will be more ready for the jumping section. Yet I recommend reducing the distance here to a comfortable one (You can reach this by testing a few times after fixing, trial-and-error).


    Some parts of the map have bizarre rhythms. This may affect player's rhythm sense as they tap dashes or movement keys with a different frequency, also not matching the song itself's rhythm. For example:
  5. 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - You started 1/2 sliders a half beat late, which already caused the dash timing to delay for a bit. Would be better if you start 1/2 sliders from 00:02:172 - , or you add one more circle at 00:02:338 - before using 1/2 slider at 00:02:505 - .
  6. 00:40:672 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Strange note pattern here. I think the stanza begins at 00:40:838 - so it will match the song more if you remove 00:40:672 (2) - , then add a circle at 00:40:672 - ; 00:40:838 - and 00:41:006 (1,2,3) - are some curve circle patterns or 1/2 sliders, and 00:41:505 (4,5,6,7) - is the same with this kind of pattern (maybe you can do symmetry). The current one is bizarre and it doesn't match the song's main beats.
  7. 01:09:672 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Strange stream pattern, better if you cut the stream into parts of 1/4 sliders/2 circles. One of the examples: *Screenshot. Doing these stream patterns can match the song's main beats and rhythm.


    Some patterns are way too hard. What I mean hard is that they may cause fails if the players are unable to follow for a few notes. This is usually brought about by the multiple hyperdash patterns in this map. For instance:
  8. 00:53:838 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Firstly, for 00:53:838 (1,1) - the sudden change in the dashing direction will definitely confuse players, and due to such inward movement, players oftenly miss and may even lose track of the upcoming hyperdash jumping part. Don't do this kind of change, unless the pattern earlier has something similar that allow players to get ready. Secondly, for 00:54:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not a big fan of this kind of jumping, it can be harsh and cause a fail if you missed a hyperdash move. Better if you use other 1/2 slider patterns, or some jumping that consist of normal dashes and hyperdashes.
  9. 00:59:422 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For 00:59:422 (2,1,2) - the hyperdash distances are similar but the timeline distance of 00:59:422 (2,1) - is different from 00:59:505 (1,2) - , which can trick players and miss very easily after this jump. Also, for 00:59:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - has the same issue above.


    Odd emphasis can be found. Hyperdashes are always used to emphasis main beats of the song, or the cymbal hitsounds around the whole map. For example:
  10. 00:06:005 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash between them because (7) here is the start of another stanza (You can hear that because it is the start of another instrument). Also you can fix the pattern of 00:05:672 (2,3,4,5) - , kind of antiflow between 00:05:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - which bring about uncomfortable jumping.
  11. 00:34:006 (1,2,3) - Strange to have hyperdash between (1,2) here. Can't see why (2) is a beat that should be emphasized strongly. In fact, I think (3) is the main beat here (mostly main beats are at red tick or white tick). You can change to this if you want: *Screenshot.
  12. Not going to pinpoint more, but the major tip here: Mostly hyperdashes are placed every 4 white ticks; start of Kiai/chorus; notes with Finish hitsound (cymbals).


    New Combo (NC) issues. Try to separate notes into combos by stanzas / every 2 or 4 white ticks. For example:
  13. 00:04:839 (8) - This should be NC'ed because it is the start of another 4 white tick timeline. You can observe this by looking at 00:00:839 - 00:04:672 - , NCs are made every 4 white ticks.
  14. 00:06:172 (7) - NC.
  15. 00:23:006 (1) - Remove NC.
  16. 00:24:839 (5,1) - Add NC at (5) and remove the existing one at (1).
  17. 00:27:505 (6,1) - Add NC at (6) and remove the existing one at (1).
  18. 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - You can group them into a combo, players may be confused if there are too many fruit splashes over the board.
  19. 00:36:838 (1,1,2) - Group this part if you did the same above at 00:34:006 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - .
  20. 00:38:172 (4,1) - Add NC at (4) and remove the one at (1).
  21. There are more but I think you can find them out yourself.

Good luck!
Thanks for noticing, I totally forgot about the OD. That the OD exists :D .
-Aerith-
As your request on my Modding Queue ~

im just Going to Mod the Hardest diff since this is just a hitsound Mod so....here we go ~


OneLove's Overdose
-00:00:839 add finish in here
-00:03:505 same
-00:06:838 (2,3) change your sampleset to Drum and additions to auto and then add finish for circle 2 and 3 ( sounds better that way ~ )
-00:07:505 same , do it like -00:06:838
-00:17:838 add clap
-00:20:505 add clap
-00:24:505 change sampleset to auto and then add clap
-00:30:172 add finish

Okay , i think that's enough already ....nice song btw :D


Good luck ~
Memoriola
 
Dapulezatos
Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) -
[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO
[gaaraati's Platter]
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - Move to x:400
  2. 00:03:338 (1,2,3,4) - This one is better. IMO Click here xd
  3. 00:06:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  4. 00:20:505 (6) - Make your slider like This
  5. 00:20:838 (7,8) - Make a slider. Example --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618856
  6. 00:21:172 (1) - Remove NC and move it to the left edge (x : 32)
  7. 00:21:338 (9) - Add NC
  8. 00:21:338 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
  9. 00:21:672 (3) - Make reversed slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618871
  10. 00:43:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  11. 00:50:838 (4) - Make reversed Slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618889
  12. 00:51:338 (5) - Move to x:32
  13. 00:59:505 (1,2) - Ctrl + G then repositioning it like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618901
  14. 01:00:172 (3) - Ctrl + H this and move to x:400
  15. 01:09:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one. Why not make it like this 00:42:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -


[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
-Hex-

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) - Moved 1 grid closer
Thanks for the mod !

Cup
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:afraid...
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Artist:Aya Uchida
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
Creator:Goddess Aqua
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Tags:Bitter Kiss Shanofanboy OneLoveOneLife -Hex- short gaaraati
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Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This - It`s pretty good. Done
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288 - Done
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example - Done
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement - Done
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example - Okay, done
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO - move to x:200 because i want that was jump
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map - Thanks
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
Thanks a lot for mod!
Xetopia

Skycreeper- wrote:

[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier - Denied. I think your version looks awkward.
    In addition, it is antiflow
    (but maybe not :> )
BPDelirious

Skycreeper- wrote:

Hello :D , came from my NM Queue.

Well, I'm a newbie modder. But I'll do my best to mod this map

[-Hex-'s Cup]
  1. 00:49:505 (2) - Move it a bit closer to 00:48:838 (1) -
[Salad]
  1. 00:18:838 (4, 5) - Make this as a slider like This
  2. 00:19:172 (5) - Move this to x:288
  3. 00:19:505 (1) - Make this a simple curve.Example
  4. 00:27:505 (1) - Move to x:320. This one is better IMO to give a little movement
  5. 00:50:172 (5,6) - Make simple curve. Example
  6. 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move to x:248. Better IMO
[gaaraati's Platter]
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - Move to x:400
  2. 00:03:338 (1,2,3,4) - This one is better. IMO Click here xd
  3. 00:06:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  4. 00:20:505 (6) - Make your slider like This
  5. 00:20:838 (7,8) - Make a slider. Example --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618856
  6. 00:21:172 (1) - Remove NC and move it to the left edge (x : 32)
  7. 00:21:338 (9) - Add NC
  8. 00:21:338 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
  9. 00:21:672 (3) - Make reversed slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618871
  10. 00:43:088 (4) - Delete Circle
  11. 00:50:838 (4) - Make reversed Slider --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618889
  12. 00:51:338 (5) - Move to x:32
  13. 00:59:505 (1,2) - Ctrl + G then repositioning it like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618901
  14. 01:00:172 (3) - Ctrl + H this and move to x:400
  15. 01:09:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This one. Why not make it like this 00:42:838 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -


[Shano's Rain]
  1. 00:42:172 (5,1,2,3) - Re positioning it --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8618921 . Much easier
  • Well I did it at my best to mod your map. Sorry short mod for your cup and rain :o. Good Luck on your map
    Only give kudosu if helpful. Thank you :D
I agree and changed everything except for the last one. I think it's fine like that.
Time Series
M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

-Hex-'s Cup
00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup

Salad
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

Platter's Mods
00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^

Shano's Rain
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them

OneLove's Overdose
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things - I think it`s normal what on difficulties have different kiai and etc

Alright. Here's the real mods:

This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal -
I hear on blue tick sound and i think what reverse good for this place
Thanks for mod! I was work with combo
Memoriola
 
-Hex-

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

-Hex-'s Cup
00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders) // Fair enough, changed to 4 circles.
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead // I'm following drum sounds on that timeline. I keep this
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here // Same as above
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here // Same as above
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1) // Added
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4) // Remapped a bit
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here // Ok
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup // I think that's okay as the length of spinner fits with the music.
Thanks for the Mod !

Updetto.
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Xetopia

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

Shano's Rain
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3 - i don't thinl so
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar - ok
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed - ok
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose - made a little easier imo
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them - end of the slider emphasizes vocal
Thanks for the mod ;3
update
osu file format v14

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Title:afraid...
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Artist:Aya Uchida
ArtistUnicode:内田 彩
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Tags:Bitter Kiss Shanofanboy OneLoveOneLife -Hex- short gaaraati
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BPDelirious

liuzicheng4732 wrote:

M4M from my queue~

General

I see that this mapset is made by all different mappers, so it's natural to see different mapping styles. However, some mapset settings and mapset overall difficulties should be consistent with each other (for example I see at least 3 different kiai settings through the whole map), and such things should be under controll by a same person (which is usually the mapset creator). So please have a look through all maps and check those things

Alright. Here's the real mods:

-Hex-'s Cup
00:20:338 (4) - There is a vocal at 00:20:505, so there should be a fruit. I suggest split this slider into 4 fruits (either circles or sliders)
00:33:172 (2) - Move this fruit 1/2 beat ahead
00:33:505 - Add a fruit here
00:33:672 - You can also add a fruit here
00:36:838 - You should add a fruit here if there is a fruit at 00:34:172 (1)
01:00:838 (2,3) - The pattern here should be the same as 00:55:338 (2,3,4)
01:15:505 - Add a fruit here
01:15:838 (1) - I suggest you decrease the length of the spinner by 4 beats because might be too long for a cup

Salad
This difficulty is pretty well-made and I can't see much things to mod ^_^. A big problem, though, is that some combos has too many fruits. The ranking criteria says "Combos should not exceed 10 objects including slider tails and repeats", so you have to recheck all the maps to make this rule is not violated.
One possible mod: 00:42:005 (1) - The fruit on the blue tick is actually useless, so you may consider cancelling it. However, this is actually not a big deal

gaaraati's Platter

This part is written to all mappers because I want you to have a discussion about it. Compared to other difficulties,

Cup: CS=2.5, AR=6
Salad: CS=3, AR=7
Platter: CS=4, AR=8.5
Rain: CS=4, AR=9
Overdose: CS=4.5, AR=9.4

We can see there is a big gap between Salad and Platter. Therefore, although Platter's settings are still in rankable range, I still really suggest you should decrease the difficulties of Platter, especially its CS

Platter's Mods
00:20:505 (6) - This requires quite a precise movement to catch the fruit and make the hyperdash, so maybe you should ctrl+g to decrease its difficulty
00:29:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The consecutive jumps might be too hard for platter to read. You may consider to change them
00:46:005 (7,8,1) - This is an anti-flow after hyperdash. Please change it
00:57:505 (3,4,5) - ^
All streams after 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4) - All Hyperdashes Are Done Within 1/4 Beats! This violates the ranking criteria, and do you really think a platter player can manage them all?
00:59:838 (2,3) - Anti-flow after hyperdash
01:08:672 (1,2,3) - ^

Shano's Rain
00:22:505 (2,3) - I guess it's not necessary to stress both beats, so I suggest you cancel the hyperdash on 3
00:28:838 (3) - Please put this slider ahead by 1/2 beat to match the guitar
00:47:172 (4) - Please move it closer to 3 because object 5 should be stressed
00:52:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - This is good, but maybe a little bit overdose
00:58:506 (2) - I suggest you split this slider into a 1/2 slider + a circle, and make some gaps between them

OneLove's Overdose
This difficulty is also well-made, so I just give some personal advices
00:27:339 (5,1) - Maybe arrange a hyperdash here?
00:28:672 (6,7,1) - I think 6&7 should be a hyperdash instead of 7&1
01:09:838 (6,7) - There should be a hyperdash here

This song is very cool and it's very interesting to see different mapping styles in this set. Hope these mods could be helpful!

P.S. I'll mod your other map within days. So please wait for it and you can mod my map first
Okay, I've changed the CS and some of the patterns due to the CS change. Thanks for the help.
Xetopia
Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^
ну и апдейт моей диффы
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376,160,70006,2,0,L|312:160,1,48.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,168,70172,6,0,L|72:56,1,97.5,0|0,0:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,70506,2,0,L|184:-8,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,70839,2,0,L|496:136,2,97.5,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
160,168,71339,2,0,P|96:128|176:64,1,195,10|8,3:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
248,60,71839,1,8,3:2:0:0:
140,60,72006,1,0,3:0:0:0:
384,24,72172,2,0,L|408:144,1,97.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,72506,2,0,L|232:280,1,97.5,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,224,72839,6,0,L|376:224,2,97.5,2|2|8,1:1|3:1|3:2,0:0:0:0:
148,184,73339,1,2,3:1:0:0:
268,160,73506,2,0,L|156:160,1,97.5,2|0,1:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,73839,6,0,L|448:48,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
304,48,74172,2,0,L|176:48,1,97.5,2|2,1:1|3:1,0:0:0:0:
360,40,74506,2,0,L|464:40,1,97.5,10|2,3:2|3:1,0:0:0:0:
160,120,74839,1,8,1:2:0:0:
112,136,74922,1,8,0:2:0:0:
128,184,75006,1,8,0:2:0:0:
184,208,75089,1,8,0:2:0:0:
360,232,75172,2,0,L|424:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
408,232,75339,2,0,L|328:232,1,48.75,8|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
128,248,75506,6,0,P|152:152|248:112,1,175.499994644165,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,76006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,88,76172,2,0,L|112:184,1,87.7499973220826
240,208,76505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,76672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,76839,2,0,P|368:120|264:56,1,175.499994644165,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,77339,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,64,77422,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,77506,2,0,L|296:64,1,87.7499973220826
168,120,77839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,120,78006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,78172,6,0,P|176:112|304:48,1,175.499994644165
400,48,78672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,78839,2,0,L|112:240,1,87.7499973220826
304,240,79172,2,0,L|312:352,1,87.7499973220826
136,304,79506,2,0,L|40:256,1,87.7499973220826
256,192,79838,12,0,80672,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko
[quote="Shanofanboy"]Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
Чего-то особенного я не выискивал и все это лежит на поверхности

  • Salad
    00:03:172 (1,2,3) - думаю так будет лучше: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8899771
    00:05:505 (1,2,3,4,1) - подчеркни большим спейсингом 00:06:172 (1) -
    00:10:838 (3,4,5,1,2) - слишком большое расстояние между 1 и 2
    00:18:838 (4,5) - зачем ты выделяешь 5, если в другом таком же моменте (00:21:505 (1,2,3) - ) эта нота у тебя не подчеркнута? Выбери что-то одно. И да, если вдруг выберешь вариант с подчеркиваем последней ноты, то сделай спейсинг поменьше, а то это реально неудобно играть.
    00:33:505 (5,1,2,3,4) - сложно для newbie players
    00:43:338 (4,5) - нк на 5 и подчеркни ее
    00:54:005 (8,9) - ^
    00:55:338 (4,5) - сделай меньше расстояние между ними
    00:58:838 (3,4) - Я бы вообще это переделал, но ты можешь убрать один реверс и поставить ноту в это место(ну и офк выделить ее спейсингом)
    01:04:172 (2,3) - ^
    01:09:505 (1,2) - ^
Исправил все, последние пункты с ремапом - ремапнул, спасибо.
Xetopia
>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Shanofanboy wrote:

>Быстрый мод, кудосу можешь не давать.
>Earned 2 kudosu.
:оk_hand:
Найс распределение кудосу. :D
BPDelirious
I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
Summerleopard

gaaraati wrote:

I fixed all of the spacing emphasis problems on my map. All spacings now should be correct according to music and platter "learning" difficulty standards.
I still want this one not to be a simple GGEZ dt farm map. So I stick to my mapping style and my variety of patterns
Regardless of the variety,I prefer you reconsidering it tho.
I still think it is lack of stability when in gameplay,try to used simple pattern slightly like simple 1/2 slider / 1/4 slider-kicks. This is just my suggestions.
:(

Other diffs,I might thought the Cup n Salad are safe for me :) at least. Just don't think the Platter feel good and need some polished hope that you understand what is the main point,the rhythming :)

I still think it was undermapped some parts. So,if the owner still want to make this map better. Just summon me when it is needed.
:idea:
No kudosu for this since I just giving some inspirations,when I fully mod only then you may. Thank you...
Xetopia
Аква живи
-Ken
no kudosu
SPOILER
13:21 *Shirokane Rinko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1289137 Aya Uchida - afraid...]
13:21 Shirokane Rinko: salad
13:23 Shirokane Rinko: thanks a lot
13:23 -Ken: well the diff looks pretty fine
13:23 -Ken: I'll try tho
13:24 Shirokane Rinko: thank you
13:24 -Ken: 00:13:505 (5) - I guess x:200 looks a bit better here
13:25 Shirokane Rinko: done
13:26 -Ken: 00:16:672 (8,1) -
13:26 -Ken: what about you increase distance a bit here
13:26 -Ken: it's platewalkable
13:28 Shirokane Rinko: x:250 better?
13:28 Shirokane Rinko: or increase more?
13:29 -Ken: maybe more
13:29 -Ken: like x:258
13:30 -Ken: up to you
13:30 -Ken: I'm bad at modding salad w
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: yep, 258 better
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: no problem
13:30 Shirokane Rinko: anyway you helped me
13:31 -Ken: 00:43:338 (5,1) -
13:31 -Ken: these looks close
13:31 -Ken: and the sound is kinda strong
13:31 Shirokane Rinko: This map old and have only mod v1 system, not all modders will want modding on v1
13:32 -Ken: oh I see
13:32 -Ken: maybe equal distance to this one 00:48:672 (7,1) -
13:33 Shirokane Rinko: 00:43:338 (5,1) - fixed
13:33 -Ken: okay
13:33 -Ken: I guess that's all I have to say
13:33 -Ken: looks fine to me xd
13:34 Shirokane Rinko: 00:48:672 (7,1) - hmmm, I can doing it closer to 7
13:34 -Ken: just a little bit if you want to
13:35 -Ken: 00:54:171 (9) -
13:35 -Ken: NC here
13:35 -Ken: and remove it here 00:54:838 (1) - ?
13:35 Shirokane Rinko: thanks
13:35 Shirokane Rinko: fixed
13:35 -Ken: np
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: 00:48:672 (7,1) - 1 - x:325
13:36 -Ken: yea that's good
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: better?
13:36 -Ken: yes
13:36 Shirokane Rinko: okay, nice
autofanboy
Requested to give some comments on Salad.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:00:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try to include some patterns that don't require much back-and-forth movements, such as vertical sliders and curve paths.
  2. 00:02:505 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance. If this is intended to be a dash, try to increase it and test to see if you will dash at this point intuitively.
  3. 00:04:838 (2,3,4) - This part can be hard to beginners as both (2,3) and (3,4) are ambiguous. Try to move (3) closer to (2) to fix this.
  4. 00:11:172 (1,2) - Add a dash here?
  5. 00:16:672 (8,1) - ^, by increasing the distance slightly.
  6. 00:21:505 (4,1) - ^
  7. 00:26:838 (6,1) - ^, please plan the parts that you want to add dash at, next time when you map.
  8. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ambiguous distances at (4,5,1). Perhaps reduce the distance of (4,5) while increase the one at (5,1), to ensure everyone will tap their dashes at (5,1).
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - Here there is a dash, but 00:36:338 (2,3) - , 00:38:838 (2) - and 00:41:671 (5,6) - do not. This means there is a little flaw in consistency. Maybe remove the potential dash at 00:33:338 (2,3) - for consistency sake.
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Strange to have a dash here, maybe follow a simpler rhythm for 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? You may try something like 4-4 (where hyphen means the dash position and 4s are streams with 4 circles).
  11. 00:54:171 - Consider starting the Kiai here instead of 00:52:838 - .
  12. 00:54:171 - 01:15:504 - Sliders like 00:54:838 (2) - can be slanted slightly, because their inner distances are quite large during gameplay.

    In general, there are notes that should be emphasized by adding dash to them, but they aren't; while some parts are added with dashes but the notes are not strong enough. It may be better if you choose to remake another version of Salad and plan ahead before start mapping the parts. (My usual practice is to treat every stanza as a checkpoint, and do some testplay to locate potential issues)

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

alienflybot wrote:

Requested to give some comments on Salad.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Salad]

  • Gameplay
  1. 00:00:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try to include some patterns that don't require much back-and-forth movements, such as vertical sliders and curve paths. - a bit reworked
  2. 00:02:505 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance. If this is intended to be a dash, try to increase it and test to see if you will dash at this point intuitively. - changed earlier (^)
  3. 00:04:838 (2,3,4) - This part can be hard to beginners as both (2,3) and (3,4) are ambiguous. Try to move (3) closer to (2) to fix this. - I think here all okey. not high spaceing
  4. 00:11:172 (1,2) - Add a dash here? - added
  5. 00:16:672 (8,1) - ^, by increasing the distance slightly. - increased
  6. 00:21:505 (4,1) - ^ - ^
  7. 00:26:838 (6,1) - ^, please plan the parts that you want to add dash at, next time when you map. - added
  8. 00:32:172 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ambiguous distances at (4,5,1). Perhaps reduce the distance of (4,5) while increase the one at (5,1), to ensure everyone will tap their dashes at (5,1). - okay, changed
  9. 00:33:338 (2,3) - Here there is a dash, but 00:36:338 (2,3) - , 00:38:838 (2) - and 00:41:671 (5,6) - do not. This means there is a little flaw in consistency. Maybe remove the potential dash at 00:33:338 (2,3) - for consistency sake. - removed
  10. 00:52:838 (1,2) - Strange to have a dash here, maybe follow a simpler rhythm for 00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? You may try something like 4-4 (where hyphen means the dash position and 4s are streams with 4 circles). - a bit changed
  11. 00:54:171 - Consider starting the Kiai here instead of 00:52:838 - . - I think it better, changed on other diff too
  12. 00:54:171 - 01:15:504 - Sliders like 00:54:838 (2) - can be slanted slightly, because their inner distances are quite large during gameplay. - I think here all normal

    In general, there are notes that should be emphasized by adding dash to them, but they aren't; while some parts are added with dashes but the notes are not strong enough. It may be better if you choose to remake another version of Salad and plan ahead before start mapping the parts. (My usual practice is to treat every stanza as a checkpoint, and do some testplay to locate potential issues)

Good luck!
Thanks for mod, I will rewatch my diff to find some problems with dash
Rgamer065
I LOVE THIIIIS!!!
You are hight in the ranking, gl
Xetopia
mv1 is gay
JBHyperion
Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

General:
  1. 00:16:838 - 00:27:505 - hitsound volume here should really be quieter than the sections before and after, since the music is much calmer. For example, 00:32:838 - is a similar section but it has half the hitsound volume and sounds much more fitting. I think 25-30% volume in both works fine
Hex's Cup:
  1. 00:42:838 (3) - Incorrectly snapped to 3/4, the drums follow a 1/4 rhythm but the strong beats are all on 1/2. Either make this a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider
  2. 00:50:838 (3) - Makes sense to split this into 1/1 slider and circle to emphasize the strong red tick vocal, like you did with 00:50:172 (1,2) -
  3. 00:56:005 (2,3) - Strange rhythm choice since you skip the strong white tick vocal, I'd put the circle at 00:55:838 - and then move the slider forward to 00:56:172 - to better reflect that
  4. 00:58:672 (3) - Same deal here, the strong white tick vocal is in the sliderbody so doesn't get emphasized at all. Try replacing this with a circle and 1/1 slider. It's a bit more dense but since this is the kiai you can afford to do something a bit harder imo
  5. 01:03:505 - I get what you were trying to do here but skipping this circle throws the player off the previous 1/1 rhythm, and when you combine that with the low spacing it's a very awkward stop and wait. I'd add a circle here for the drum and increase the distance slightly
Salad:
  1. 00:06:004 (7,1) - It'd be nice if your first dash wasn't a sharp 1/2 one into a direction change, this is quite a harsh introduction for the player. Could you try making the slider (1) face right, or remove (7) to make an easier 1/1 dash instead please?
  2. 00:26:838 (6,1) - Should have a dash for consistency with your previous patterns, as well as to emphasize the strong cymbal sound
  3. 00:30:838 (2,3,4,1,2) - Much less movement in this part than anywhere else even though it's quite intense, perhaps you could try introducing a direction change, like this?
  4. 00:43:338 (5,1) - 00:54:003 (8,1) - Should also be a dash for consistency and emphasis on the strong cymbal sound, the latter especially so since it's the start of the kiai
  5. I would have liked to see more dashing in the kiai to set it apart from the rest of the map. Right now it feels very similar to the earlier parts despite being much more intense musically. You could try adding more dashes to strong vocal sounds like 00:56:171 (5,1) - 01:01:504 (5,1,2) - 01:06:837 (5,1) - 01:10:004 (4,1) - 01:12:171 (6,1,2) - and 01:15:337 (5,6) -
AFB's Platter:
  1. 00:01:172 (2) - I find the drum whistle volume here and throughout this section overbearing, it totally drowns out the actual sounds you're mapping. The 30% used in the previous diffs is far more suitable given the calmness of the intro section
  2. 00:09:346 - 00:10:505 - Missing claps on slidertails
  3. 00:10:755 (2,3) - Feels a bit too close together for good flow, I'd try and raise this distance a little
  4. 00:22:172 (1) - 70% finish volume is way too loud here given this isn't that mush stronger than the sounds around it, please reduce it to around 50% to be more in touch with the rest of your hitsounding. Happens throughout the diff in later pre-kiai sections, so please address this there as well
  5. 00:30:172 (1,2) - Awkwardly low spacing forces the player to stop, would be better as a held walk distance for playability
  6. 00:59:338 (5,1) - Very harsh to have strong hyper into a vertical pattern, especially when this strength is not expectable to the player. Either reduce the strength, curve the slider for more leniency, or both.
  7. 01:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - Was really surprised to see such a low-distance pattern here given how strong the vocals are, would definitely have preferred a dash between (2,3) for example, since this also avoids an awkwadly low spacing to 01:03:005 (4,1) -
Xetopia's Rain:
  1. 00:06:087 (4,1) - Quite a strong hyper into standstill, unexpected for the start of the map. I'd reduce this strength and/or curve the slider for better flow
  2. 00:01:838 (1,2) - 00:26:172 (1) - No sound on the blue ticks to justify these slider extensions, but you skipped over clear red tick sounds to do so. These should be snapped to end at 1/2 to better follow the music
  3. 00:26:505 (2,3,4,5) - Feels kinda underwhelming as a walk, and the first strong sound is a slider tail. Might just be personal preference, but some small jumps and/or direction changes here would make this much more interesting to play
  4. 00:51:172 (5,1) - Really bland to have no emphasis on this, it's the climax before a dramatic pause and then the kiai. Move (1) to the left side and give it a hyperdash for more impact
  5. 00:52:921 (2) - Mapped to no sound, please remove this for consistency with the Platter and Overdose
  6. 00:53:338 (6,1) - Uncomfortably strong hyper when compared to the surrounding ones when (a) this sound is no stronger musically, and (b) the stream following has very little movement and is easy to overshoot. Please consider reducing the distance here. If you do so, you may also want to reduce 00:54:005 (6,1) - slightly also for consistency, since that dashes into a strong antiflow movement
  7. 00:53:838 (5,6) - Check your hitsounding here, there's some really strange blue tick emphasis that totally throws the player off when trying to follow the main drum rhythm
Sinnoh's Overdose:
  1. 00:11:172 (4,5,6,7) - I don't hear any 1/4 rhythms here, removing (5,7) and sticking to 1/2 would be a more fitting option
  2. 00:53:338 (4,8) - These two are lower in pitch drum sounds compared to the others which are strong snares, it'd be nice to do something different with them for variety, such as making a horizontal movement, using antiflow, etc. Right now this just feels like a really plain and uninspired way to start the kiai
  3. 01:12:838 (1,2,3,4) - Personal preference but I'd have tried to do something more interesting here by incorporating the vocals to maybe do 1/2 zig-zags
  4. 01:15:505 (10) - NC would help clear the plate in preparation for the final spinner
Hope this helps, good luck! (:
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

JBHyperion wrote:

Oh boy I haven't seen modding v1 in a while...

Gonna post as I go, please don't kudosu til I'm done /o/


Salad:
  1. 00:06:004 (7,1) - It'd be nice if your first dash wasn't a sharp 1/2 one into a direction change, this is quite a harsh introduction for the player. Could you try making the slider (1) face right, or remove (7) to make an easier 1/1 dash instead please? - Fixed a bit
  2. 00:26:838 (6,1) - Should have a dash for consistency with your previous patterns, as well as to emphasize the strong cymbal sound - Okay
  3. 00:30:838 (2,3,4,1,2) - Much less movement in this part than anywhere else even though it's quite intense, perhaps you could try introducing a direction change, like this? - Added some other changes (idk what you mean on this picture)
  4. 00:43:338 (5,1) - 00:54:003 (8,1) - Should also be a dash for consistency and emphasis on the strong cymbal sound, the latter especially so since it's the start of the kiai - fixed
  5. I would have liked to see more dashing in the kiai to set it apart from the rest of the map. Right now it feels very similar to the earlier parts despite being much more intense musically. You could try adding more dashes to strong vocal sounds like 00:56:171 (5,1) - 01:01:504 (5,1,2) - 01:06:837 (5,1) - 01:10:004 (4,1) - 01:12:171 (6,1,2) - and 01:15:337 (5,6) - fixed
Ponchiwi
[Hex's Cup ]
  1. 00:03:505 (1) - move it a little further x=352
  2. 00:04:505 (2,3,4) - I dont like too much these notes, why you dont try this
[Salad ]
  1. 00:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - you should change the position of the dash in this section 'cause alwas you are taking the dash on the right
  2. 00:27:505 (1) - why not add dash here? aaa
  3. 00:43:505 (1) - would be nice if you add a dash
  4. 00:54:172 (1) - add more emphasis for the beginning of the kiai time so move to x=216
[AFB's Platter ]
  1. Looks so nice
[Xetopia's Rain ]
  1. 00:54:172 (1) - you could do it better and change this slider repeat for put sliders to make more intense this section
  2. 00:59:505 (1) - 01:04:838 (1) - same here
Topic Starter
Shirokane Rinko

Ponchiwi wrote:

[Salad ]
  1. 00:06:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - you should change the position of the dash in this section 'cause alwas you are taking the dash on the right - wut? I think here all good
  2. 00:27:505 (1) - why not add dash here? aaa - added on previous mod
  3. 00:43:505 (1) - would be nice if you add a dash - ^
  4. 00:54:172 (1) - add more emphasis for the beginning of the kiai time so move to x=216 - pattern was reworked by previous mod
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