pishifat wrote:

1. clap7 unused Removed
2. 00:45:117 (4) - offscreen moved the other point.
3. 00:45:634 (1,2) - should have same comboing as 00:51:152 (7,1) - since same part of the song zzz Fixed
4. 01:51:324 (3) - same same 2
5. 02:25:462 (3,4) - jump to an insignificant blue tick kind of doesn't fit the song (or how you map this anyhwere else). doing like this or something not making the blue tick stand out Wow, really nice example lol
6. 02:32:358 (2,3) - isn't actually stacked lol. autostack doesn't detect it Fixed
7. 03:01:324 (2,3,4,1) - would be nice if spacing were more like 02:59:945 (2,3,4,1) - where the 1/4 is smaller than the 1/2. right now spacing between 03:01:324 (2,3,4,1) - is visually the same, so it's kinda misleading:( this would be ok Okay bro :3
8. 01:40:634 (5) - 01:42:358 (1) - 01:43:393 (5) - should really stick with 1/2 rhythm during this section. song is making each 1/2 sound distinct, so skipping over them with extended sliders like this really doesnt fit the song. also guidelinegg Yep fixed
9. 03:42:358 (1) - 03:43:738 (1) - 03:44:772 (4) - same Same 2
10. 03:50:634 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:49:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could you use the same spacing concepts for these? the song is the same for both, so shouldn't be varying so much Change to streams spacing.
11. 04:36:755 (3,4,5,6) - inconsistent looking curve. 6 is out of line with 3,4,5 lol number 6 note moved
12. 05:03:738 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - wish the first of these 3 wasnt so small spacing Okay, I changed this patterns spacing.
13. 05:00:979 (1,2) - 05:03:738 (1,2,3) - could you use more spacing to each snare drum here? everywhere else in the section you've got huge spacing for them, and the inconsistency is especially visible with 05:03:738 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this repeated pattern thing Okay

will recheck depending on what is changed, so call me back!!

Voyage wrote:

Here's a better BG resolution if you need it. Make sure to link the source somewhere in the map description.

1. 00:16:152 (5,6) - enlarge the spacing? since you made a pattern for this kind of beat in the music, like 00:12:014 (4,5) - 00:13:393 (4,5) - and 00:14:772 (4,5) -, it keeps consistency.
   
2. 01:34:427 (2,3,4) - i got used too much to the rhythm 01:31:324 (1,2,3) - that the new rhythm 01:34:427 (2,3,4) - sounds weird. you can move maybe change this rhythm to the same as 01:31:324 (1,2,3) .
   
3. 03:50:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is placed similarly yet the same movement to the previous shape 01:49:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -. you may want to change instead of repeating it to bring "diversity".
   
4. 04:19:255 (8) - the current flow is not fluid, well to me. try maybe a straight slider to goes to 04:19:600 (1) - (http://i.imgur.com/QFwB3cl.jpg) or turn the curve to make a direct movement to the next object. (http://i.imgur.com/kjdoZc3.png)
   
5. 04:36:152 - at this point there are small spacings that misfit the beats. for example, 04:38:393 (6,7,8) - the spacing in-between (6) and (7) should be higher than in-between (7) and (8). 04:41:152 (4,5) - it does not fit well when the beat on 04:41:324 (5) - is strong. the intro of the map does it well, you should use it as a model.

sheela wrote:

hihi

[Moonbound]

1. 00:16:152 (5,6) - enlarge the spacing? since you made a pattern for this kind of beat in the music, like 00:12:014 (4,5) - 00:13:393 (4,5) - and 00:14:772 (4,5) -, it keeps consistency. Okay increase spacing
   
2. 01:34:427 (2,3,4) - i got used too much to the rhythm 01:31:324 (1,2,3) - that the new rhythm 01:34:427 (2,3,4) - sounds weird. you can move maybe change this rhythm to the same as 01:31:324 (1,2,3) . I don't want to repeat the same sound this rhythm. If you make the same sound, it will be boring
   
3. 03:50:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is placed similarly yet the same movement to the previous shape 01:49:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -. you may want to change instead of repeating it to bring "diversity". Okay A little change streams shape.
   
4. 04:19:255 (8) - the current flow is not fluid, well to me. try maybe a straight slider to goes to 04:19:600 (1) - (http://i.imgur.com/QFwB3cl.jpg) or turn the curve to make a direct movement to the next object. (http://i.imgur.com/kjdoZc3.png) I don't like this patterns put straight slider, so I turned the curve down.
   
5. 04:36:152 - at this point there are small spacings that misfit the beats. for example, 04:38:393 (6,7,8) - the spacing in-between (6) and (7) should be higher than in-between (7) and (8). 04:41:152 (4,5) - it does not fit well when the beat on 04:41:324 (5) - is strong. the intro of the map does it well, you should use it as a model. Okay, increase spacing the patterns.

that's all. call me back if you've updated

pishifat wrote:

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Lasse wrote:

why did you have to badly upscale the bg and then use high compression

you could've just used the original from pixiv https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php ... d=58371573
It might only be 1600x900, but even when you set osu to 1920x1080 it looks better than what you have right now since the ingame upscaling is alright for that and it's not filled with jpeg artifacts

same part on the original image for reference

pishifat wrote:

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