*namirin - Hitokoto no Kyori · forum

Kroytz

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Kroytz 2017-05-06T22:06:39+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 29, 2017 at 6:57:13 PM

Artist: *namirin
Title: Hitokoto no Kyori
Tags: M3-39 5colors utaite kalibe sharkie gaia haruto haruto_aizawa sotarks doormat
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6113kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:

A Single Word Apart (5.88 stars, 415 notes)
Doormat's Extra (5.44 stars, 358 notes)
Gaia's Insane (4.37 stars, 305 notes)
Haruto's Insane (4.78 stars, 326 notes)
Kalibe's Normal (1.97 stars, 163 notes)
Sharkie's Hard (3.11 stars, 262 notes)
Sotarks' Expert (5.27 stars, 353 notes)

Download: *namirin - Hitokoto no Kyori
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Kroytz 2020-10-29T08:56:40+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

Kuruby

39 posts

Joined June 2015

Kuruby 2017-05-07T22:13:44+00:00

Here comes the pp

jeanbernard8865

600 posts

Joined December 2014

jeanbernard8865 2017-05-08T10:06:13+00:00

Where is xi- FREEDOM DiVE DansGame

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-05-16T20:48:26+00:00

[Nemesis]

[Nemesis] 2017-05-25T06:17:39+00:00

M4M.

Anime vocals ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh god why

Kalibe's Normal

00:02:133 (2,1) - blanket is off
00:18:799 (5,1) - maybe not off but looks pretty weird
00:50:299 (4,5) - blanketszz

not much to say here

Haruto's Insane

00:03:633 (2,3) - not sure about readability but imo it's really weird to play
00:45:799 (6) - meh, I don't think that was a good choice, the slider breaks the expectations a lot. I'd just leave it as two circles or a slider that's a little faster.

really good diff, not much to change here.

Gaia's Insane

rip combo colors
rip kiai also
00:14:466 (2) - would personally bend it the other way but oh well, it's just my opinion I guess
00:35:049 - missing sound, make them all a single stream
00:45:799 (1) - coming back to the previous insane: this is how it should be done.

gj on this one Gaia

Sotarks' Expert

00:16:966 (2,4) - just stack them the way you did before
01:23:632 (2,4) - same thing applies
00:40:799 (1,2,3,4) - just copypaste the first two, this second circle is clearly off

Cool sliders, cool patterns. Some lack of consistency but overall a nice diff.

A Single Word Apart

00:08:799 (1,1) - I'd stack them personally
00:11:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - comparing to the star, the spacing is wayy WAYYYY bigger, why such a sudden increase?
00:44:799 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this looks cool, but plays ewww imo
00:45:799 (3) - again, slow, expectation breaking slider
00:50:133 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - fuck pp system, this is gonna be worth wayy too much pp

Okay diff, but as I said the song, nor the mapping style is not for me so I couldn't really point out anything else, sowwie.

good luck.

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2017-05-25T06:44:45+00:00

From Mah Q

Kroytz

703 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Kroytz 2017-05-25T09:54:58+00:00

bless kocari

Pira

275 posts

Joined April 2016

Pira 2017-05-25T14:08:50+00:00

Hi from Kocari's M4M Q!

[General]

If you're going to use the default osu! fanart at least use the ecchi one you fkin normies

[Kalibe's Easy]

00:24:466 (5,1) - Consider making this the same distance as 00:23:299 (3,4) for maximum Nazi structure
00:35:466 (1) - Slidertick hitsounds are tasteful
00:41:133 (2) - Blanket's very slightly off kds pls (assuming this one's meant to be a blanket)
01:02:133 (1) - I'd maybe suggest making this vertical (vertical flip and flipping by 90 degrees or some other similar manner) since there seem to be too many horizontal sliders in a row from 01:00:133 (2), so it would help with flow and aesthetic variance.
Great low difficulty!

[Gaia's Insane]

00:03:466 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest making the relative DS here consistent with the first two patterns of short -> slightly longer -> same as the first one; these spacings seem rather irregular
00:07:966 (2) - Maybe make this higher up so that it flows into 00:08:133 (1) better, but the slightly awkward flow here better emphasizes the snare, so up to you
00:16:466 (4) - Consider making this two circles like the last measure for consistency since they're the exact same line
00:17:799 (5) - The snare feels a bit underemphasized; maybe make it a bit larger than 00:17:466 (3,4)
00:18:799 (3,4,5) - Maybe just make this into a perfect triangle; I'd even suggest making all 4 circles the same spacing since they're on similar electronic notes
00:34:466 (2,5,6,7,8,1) - The snares could be emphasized way more here; I'd suggest lowering 3's spacing if you're not using too high spacing since 3's on a really weak sound compared to the snares in the music
00:37:633 (3,4,5) - A reverse arrow could be better here and circles for the reverse before since there are vocals on there then as opposed to none being here. Then again, it might be too passive with 00:38:133 (1) right after, but I'd still suggest making jumps on the vocals of 00:36:299 (3) like you do at 00:38:966 (2,3,4)
01:01:299 (2) - Maybe blanket the sliderhead of 01:00:466 (3) for structure ayy lmao
01:06:299 (2) - Maybe omit this for a slider since vocals aren't here, but I can agree with the emphasis; if you're keeping it as a circle, I'd suggest making 01:06:466 (3) a significantly larger spacing since it's on the vocal
01:06:633 (4) - I don't know why but I'm sexually attracted to this slider
01:10:133 (1,2) - This is pretty weird to read as a 1/1 gap considering you used similar aesthetic, spacing, and flow for the 1/2 gap right before at 01:09:299 (2,3); I'd suggest stacking since the vocal doesn't change pitch after the gap, or something different to contrast the gap if you're keeping this rhythm.
01:19:133 (5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe nerf spacing on this just a bit since it's quite a bit higher than the previous two bursts on the map; I appreciate the escalating spacing for the intensity, though; a good solution could be to just make the spacing the same as 01:18:799 (3,5)
01:28:299 (4) - Consider making this just a flip of 01:27:966 (3) since they already look similar and are similar sounds
It's a nice diff, just some emphasis/aesthetic issues here and there Px

[Haruto's Insane]

00:09:466 (1,2,3,4) - These feel a bit too random in structure; maybe make them more defined/deliberate; for example, making 00:09:966 (4) double the spacing of 00:09:133 (2,3), 00:09:466 (1,3) equal to 00:09:299 (3,3), just making it a star as you did in 00:11:966 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9), etc.
00:24:799 (4) - You forgot to NC instead of 00:24:133 (1) huehue
00:45:799 (6) - 0.20x SV THE ABSOLUTE MADMAN (no one will expect such a large change, though, so I'd suggest NC'ing it at the very least if you really want to keep it)
00:51:466 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This was amazing to look at yum
00:56:466 (1) - Maybe bring the following slider a bit closer and extend this to a 1/4 gap as you did in 00:45:799 (6,1)? It'd emphasize the SV change better as well
01:19:466 (1) - This is a pretty wide 1/4 gap compared to the rest in the map; I'd bring it a bit closer even if it's just for emphasizing the vocals. I'd also even suggest doing a huge SV change as you did before since the vocal drops out on this slider, so it'd really fit here.
Awesome difficulty, hope the SV changes get through the other mods!

[Sotark's Extra]

The jumps in the beginning are actually the hardest points of the map; I know they're literally the same as 01:18:133 (1), but I'd at least suggest nerfing these and buffing the end, since the latter's still more intense in the context of the song.
00:12:799 (1) - Think this should be emphasized the most out of all the jumps since it's the end of the measure and there's a short cymbal crash
00:20:133 (5) - Move it up so that 00:19:133 (6,7,2,5) is a perfect square
00:22:966 (6) - I'd suggest moving this down so the overlap's larger; it'd be a weird edge overlap with HR
00:39:466 (5) - Kind of disagree with the reverse slider here since when you used it on 00:38:133 (1), the vocals were sustained (also on 00:43:466 (1)), but here it stops 1/2 after the sliderhead; maybe just map to the guitar on 00:39:799 or another alternative rhythm
00:57:966 (6) - Move this up 5 pixels so it's the exact same distance as 00:57:133 (2,4) ecks dee
00:58:633 (9) - Might as well blanket 00:58:966 (10) since you did with 00:59:466 (1)
Will look forward to the pp

[Ultra Princess 2.0]

00:09:133 (1) - I'd say un-NC this since you didn't for the rest of the 1/1 gaps before jump sections such as 00:11:799 (2) and 01:18:466 (2).
00:18:466 (3) - Move 1 pixel to the right for perfect stack or nuke whole mapset
00:45:799 (3) - NC for the 0.2x SV? Not too hard to read due to snapping/flow though, I guess
00:50:966 (2) - I'd suggest just making a square pattern with this like 00:51:133 (3) since it seems out of place on the otherwise perfect angled symmetry
00:57:466 (3) - Not perfectly parallel to 00:56:799 (1) huehue
01:01:466 (4) - Make this a triangle with 01:00:466 (4,2)? It doesn't show while playing but 01:00:466 (4)'s a bit too close for comfort
01:21:633 (4,6) - You should probably make this the same spacing as 01:21:466 (3,5)
Also just noticed how oddly satisfying it is that a lot of the times end with the same ms since it's BPM 180

Good luck with the mapset, hope this mod helped.

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-09-14T23:52:13+00:00

small update for my diff https://drmt.s-ul.eu/mVoguMTr

sdafsf

309 posts

Joined October 2013

sdafsf 2017-09-15T00:11:07+00:00

[

disgusting top diff lmao]

00:17:299 (4,5,6,7) - im not really hearing this rise in intensity in the music. 00:18:799 (5,6,7) - here it seems more fitting
00:34:133 (1,2,3) - the contrast between these 3 is kinda low. 2 could be less spaced
00:54:966 (6) - this vocal is very stron but doesnt get emphesis. not a fan of drum emphesis but i guess thats what youre going for
00:59:799 (2,3) - rip vocals
01:08:466 (6) - map vocals for more pp
01:09:799 (6) - ^ aside from these 3 rhythms the rhythms you chose support the vocals (even if you focused on drums)
01:31:133 (7,8) - emphesising 7 and deleting 8 would represent the music better imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9090329

absolutely disgusting.

k_hand:

[

doormat]

00:21:299 (3,1) - adjust 1 so that the body of 3 doesnt overlap with the head of 1
00:41:299 (2,3) - this stack is kinda random when you compare with 00:36:299 (3,4) - 00:38:966 (2,3) - 00:42:966 (3,4) - . even here 00:44:133 (3,4) - its used differently
00:55:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - slightly curving sliders is one thing but doing that to streams.. wew

anime

[

sotarks]

00:51:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this rhythm could be denser considering the music is building up here. its not intense enough imo
00:59:133 (11,12,1) - 1 should have more spacing emphesis that 12
01:08:466 (5,6,7) - similarly 7 and 6
01:27:300 (8,1) - ctrl+ g rhythm imo. melody > drums + youve been mapping the 1/1 slider on red ticks the whole song and this part isnt different. alternatively if you dont want to ignore the downbeat i would make 01:27:799 - clickable anyways. i dont think a 1/1 slider on the downbeat is a good decision

jeanbernard8865

600 posts

Joined December 2014

jeanbernard8865 2017-09-15T14:01:51+00:00

as requested

kalibe

00:08:133 (4) - I’d ctrl+j to emphasise the change of mood through introduction of a new hitsound
00:35:466 (1,2) - doesn’t follow implied slider flow, resulting in awkward emphasis
00:40:799 (1,2) - ew
00:50:299 (4,5) - can you not

sharkie

00:54:633 (2) - could use some emphasis by not following implied slider flow or something cause of the finish and stuff
01:28:633 (1) - this is total cancer to read tbh, if you want to use this as emphasis you should introduce it in the first iteration of this phrase at the beginning of the map

gaia

00:04:799 (1,2,3,4) - make this a perfect square
00:12:633 (6,7,1) - spacing here contradicts the intensity of the song since it’s smaller than the jumps before
01:28:633 (1) - this is underwhelming since it just flows perfectly with the rest, I’d break the flow here to emphasise that beat

haruto

nothing to say, you obviously know what you’re doing so yeah nice map

sotarks

01:31:133 (6,7) - not fond of active rhythm here since there isn’t much going on in the music

doormat

01:08:299 (3,4,5) - angle is really awkward compared to 00:57:633 (3,4,5)

kroytz

01:17:466 (5,6,7) - ok but why a 90° angle, at least put an object to complete the square afterwards because this feels very random

pp

Sharkie

343 posts

Joined May 2014

Sharkie 2017-09-16T18:19:36+00:00

AyanokoRin wrote:
sharkie
00:54:633 (2) - could use some emphasis by not following implied slider flow or something cause of the finish and stuff
Doesn't really matter
01:28:633 (1) - this is total cancer to read tbh, if you want to use this as emphasis you should introduce it in the first iteration of this phrase at the beginning of the map
Not sure how this is cancer to read? Similar spacing has been used before in the chorus, etc. (01:11:466 (1,2,3) - (01:06:299 (2,3) - )The reason its not the same as the beginning of the map is because I think maps (if possible) should get progressively harder, especially after each chorus. It shouldn't need to be the exact same.

Nostalgic_old

597 posts

Joined January 2013

Nostalgic_old 2017-09-22T18:04:17+00:00

m4m here!

Haruto

00:45:799 (6) - nc
00:51:799 (2) - fix stacking?
00:53:799 (5,1) - stack them?

Sharkie

01:05:633 remove clap?
01:17:299 (2,3) - blanket?

Sotark

00:21:133 clickable sound if u ask me
01:24:632 (1) - unsnapped object

Kroytz

00:23:799 (3) - place somewhere like 86,359? a bit underspaced rn
01:25:466 (5,6,7,8) - not rly a fan of this square coming out of nowhere

GL

Last edited by Nostalgic_old 2017-09-23T04:23:56+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Rizen

1,663 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-09-23T03:47:28+00:00

General

BG.jpg is unrankable, exceeds max dimensions of 1920x1200
normal-hitwhistle23.wav is unused
Custom combo colours? Currently it is unranked as the "default colours are not forced (not stated in the .osu)"

Kalibae's Normal

00:53:299 (4,5) - consider ctrl+g the rhythm here so it's circle then slider. would work better with vocals
actually fine

Sharkie's Hard

00:12:799 (1) - I understand the NC here is to keep with the "NC per measure pattern". However, I think it will be safe to not NC this as it is the end of a triplet and an NC here would make it look kinda weird in gameplay
00:41:799 (5,1) - introducing spacing between measures here is kinda out of place as you didn't at other similar times during this section like at 00:37:799 (4,1) - , 00:39:133 (3,1) - , 00:40:466 (4,1) -
00:56:466 (5) - add an NC? spacing to this object is a bit similar to 00:55:633 (2,3) - where the rhythm there is spaced 1/2 but over here is spaced 1/1.
00:59:466 (1) - any way to space this out more? inconsistent with your "increase spacing between measure combos" idea. e.g 01:09:966 (5,1) -
01:06:133 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm or change to a 1/2 repeat slider? I feel as though the white tick should be clickable rather than the red tick as the beat on the white tick is much more prominent than the one on the red tick
01:19:466 (1,2) - swap NCs around? same reasoning as the first point

Gaia's Insane

kiai time where
00:31:133 (4,5,1) - perhaps you can reuse the same stacking idea as 00:29:966 (4,1) -
01:10:133 (1,2) - slightly worried about the spacing here. the only 1/1 rhythm gap during the chorus but the spacing is similar to the one you typically use for 1/2 rhythm. you could try spacing it a lot more to show that this is 1/1 rhythm (i.e. moving to somwhere like x:59 y:359) to address this issue

Haruto's Insane

00:03:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like how it suddenly gets pretty dense here compared to the previous relatively less dense rhythm choices. I know there are guitar strums to those ticks, but you weren't following the guitar before so suddenly switching to them is kinda hmmm..
00:15:133 (4) - there's a beat(?) on the red tick so having an extended slider here doesn't really fit. also inconsistent with 00:16:466 (7) -
00:24:799 (4) - missing NC perhaps
00:33:299 (2) - there's percussion present on the white tick, I don't think an extended slider fits well here
00:34:133 (4) - missing NC
00:45:799 (6) - perhaps an NC here for the very sudden change in SV

Sotark's Expert

00:20:966 - that whatever-it's-called instrument is present on this tick. perhaps you can change this to a 1/2 slider then circle to map it. same thing at 01:27:466 (1) -
cool

Extra seems like a fine jump fiesta

A Single Word Apart

00:06:133 (1) - two 1/2 sliders? would remove that slightly awkward 1/1 rhythm break. and also for consistency with 00:03:466 (1,2) -
00:28:799 (1,2,3) - can definitely be a lot neater with placements
00:40:466 (5,6) - I feel as though a 1/2 slider would work better here rather than two circles. circle 6 doesn't have the same percussion support as the other three circles, making it more fit for a slider tail instead imo
00:50:966 (2,3) - try ctrl+g these two circles? I think a change in rotational flow at 00:50:633 (4,1) - would be fitting with the vocal transition
00:54:966 (3) - space out more for the vocals perhaps?

glll

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-09-23T08:23:50+00:00

ok

sdafsf wrote:
[ doormat]
00:21:299 (3,1) - adjust 1 so that the body of 3 doesnt overlap with the head of 1 ya
00:41:299 (2,3) - this stack is kinda random when you compare with 00:36:299 (3,4) - 00:38:966 (2,3) - 00:42:966 (3,4) - . even here 00:44:133 (3,4) - its used differently tried something
00:55:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - slightly curving sliders is one thing but doing that to streams.. wew ya wanna fite about it :c

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AyanokoRin wrote:
as requested

[doormat]01:08:299 (3,4,5) - angle is really awkward compared to 00:57:633 (3,4,5) i moved the (5) to the left by a significant amount to try and make it less awkward

thanks ww https://drmt.s-ul.eu/F8peZHKm

Sharkie

343 posts

Joined May 2014

Sharkie 2017-09-23T22:08:42+00:00

Nostalgic wrote:
Sharkie
01:05:633 remove clap?
I didn't hitsound it so I'm not sure about this one but okay
01:17:299 (2,3) - blanket?
I think it looks fine either way.

a q p w wrote:
Sharkie's Hard
00:12:799 (1) - I understand the NC here is to keep with the "NC per measure pattern". However, I think it will be safe to not NC this as it is the end of a triplet and an NC here would make it look kinda weird in gameplay
00:41:799 (5,1) - introducing spacing between measures here is kinda out of place as you didn't at other similar times during this section like at 00:37:799 (4,1) - , 00:39:133 (3,1) - , 00:40:466 (4,1) -
I disagree, on all the other downbeats, the vocalist doesn't accent her voice, I interpreted it and mapped it accordingly.
00:56:466 (5) - add an NC? spacing to this object is a bit similar to 00:55:633 (2,3) - where the rhythm there is spaced 1/2 but over here is spaced 1/1
Sure
00:59:466 (1) - any way to space this out more? inconsistent with your "increase spacing between measure combos" idea. e.g 01:09:966 (5,1) -
Done
01:06:133 (1,2) - ctrl+g rhythm or change to a 1/2 repeat slider? I feel as though the white tick should be clickable rather than the red tick as the beat on the white tick is much more prominent than the one on the red tick
oko
01:19:466 (1,2) - swap NCs around? same reasoning as the first point
Sure thing

w

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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2017-09-24T02:43:53+00:00

@Nemesis :
Haruto's Insane

00:03:633 (2,3) - not sure about readability but imo it's really weird to play it plays pretty fine for me imo. its like, you are clicking the "piano"ish sound(?) in the background.
00:45:799 (6) - meh, I don't think that was a good choice, the slider breaks the expectations a lot. I'd just leave it as two circles or a slider that's a little faster. sorry but i like this slowdown slider here xD but i added a NC to indicate the SV changes there so dw~

really good diff, not much to change here.

thank you!

@Opsi :
Haruto's Insane

00:09:466 (1,2,3,4) - These feel a bit too random in structure; maybe make them more defined/deliberate; for example, making 00:09:966 (4) double the spacing of 00:09:133 (2,3), 0009:466 (1,3) equal to 00:09:299 (3,3), just making it a star as you did in 00:11:966 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9), etc. its actually not so random. didnt you notice the triangle here 00:09:299 (3,1,2) - ? for 00:09:466 (1,2,3,4,1) - this. its just a 36 degree and 72 degree rotation so it doesnt rly random xD
00:24:799 (4) - You forgot to NC instead of 00:24:133 (1) huehue oops, fixed xD
00:45:799 (6) - 0.20x SV THE ABSOLUTE MADMAN (no one will expect such a large change, though, so I'd suggest NC'ing it at the very least if you really want to keep it) yea added nc
00:51:466 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This was amazing to look at yum yum
00:56:466 (1) - Maybe bring the following slider a bit closer and extend this to a 1/4 gap as you did in 00:45:799 (6,1)? It'd emphasize the SV change better as well nahh, i prefer the current one for now
01:19:466 (1) - This is a pretty wide 1/4 gap compared to the rest in the map; I'd bring it a bit closer even if it's just for emphasizing the vocals. I'd also even suggest doing a huge SV change as you did before since the vocal drops out on this slider, so it'd really fit here. eh that was made on purpose for aesthetic xd so i'll keep that for now lul
Awesome difficulty, hope the SV changes get through the other mods! thank you! and about the sv changes. dw about!

@Nostalgic :
00:51:799 (2) - fix stacking? this wasnt meant to be stacked.

@Rizen :
Haruto's Insane

00:03:466 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like how it suddenly gets pretty dense here compared to the previous relatively less dense rhythm choices. I know there are guitar strums to those ticks, but you weren't following the guitar before so suddenly switching to them is kinda hmmm.. it feels a lot playful here with circles dude :<
00:15:133 (4) - there's a beat(?) on the red tick so having an extended slider here doesn't really fit. also inconsistent with 00:16:466 (7) - o removed the extded slider
00:24:799 (4) - missing NC perhaps ya fixed on previous mod
00:33:299 (2) - there's percussion present on the white tick, I don't think an extended slider fits well here following vocal here
00:34:133 (4) - missing NC fixed

thanks everyone for the mods!!
update : https://haruto.s-ul.eu/Otaw02Ro
00:45:799 (6) - perhaps an NC here for the very sudden change in SV yea fixed

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2017-09-24T04:58:12+00:00

Nemesis

[Nemesis] wrote:
M4M.
Gaia's Insane

rip combo colors
rip kiai also /shrug
00:14:466 (2) - would personally bend it the other way but oh well, it's just my opinion I guess
00:35:049 - missing sound, make them all a single stream nah its fine
00:45:799 (1) - coming back to the previous insane: this is how it should be done.

gj on this one Gaia

good luck.

AyanokoRin

AyanokoRin wrote:
as requested

gaia
00:04:799 (1,2,3,4) - make this a perfect square

00:12:633 (6,7,1) - spacing here contradicts the intensity of the song since it’s smaller than the jumps before

01:28:633 (1) - this is underwhelming since it just flows perfectly with the rest, I’d break the flow here to emphasise that beat just increased the spacing a bit
pp

a q p w

a q p w wrote:
Gaia's Insane
kiai time where n/a
00:31:133 (4,5,1) - perhaps you can reuse the same stacking idea as 00:29:966 (4,1) - errrr i like mine atm even tho it's very consistent xd
01:10:133 (1,2) - slightly worried about the spacing here. the only 1/1 rhythm gap during the chorus but the spacing is similar to the one you typically use for 1/2 rhythm. you could try spacing it a lot more to show that this is 1/1 rhythm (i.e. moving to somwhere like x:59 y:359) to address this issue agree, i remapped the section

glll

thx mods! no reply are fixed.
i just copied doormat's colours so if u want to set it to something else u can change for me
also i dont usually add kiais but if u want to add one feel free to do it

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Kroytz

703 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Kroytz 2017-09-24T05:54:50+00:00

Nemesis

A Single Word Apart

00:08:799 (1,1) - I'd stack them personally Stacking can work, personally I like the antijump for this
00:11:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - comparing to the star, the spacing is wayy WAYYYY bigger, why such a sudden increase? because this is the ending measure, like, the big finish before the isolated vocals and new period.
00:44:799 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this looks cool, but plays ewww imo
00:45:799 (3) - again, slow, expectation breaking slider haven't seen people have trouble with this o,o
00:50:133 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - fuck pp system, this is gonna be worth wayy too much pp :3c:

Opsi

00:09:133 (1) - I'd say un-NC this since you didn't for the rest of the 1/1 gaps before jump sections such as 00:11:799 (2) and 01:18:466 (2). you're right, fixed
00:18:466 (3) - Move 1 pixel to the right for perfect stack or nuke whole mapset lol ok
00:45:799 (3) - NC for the 0.2x SV? Not too hard to read due to snapping/flow though, I guess nobody i see has issue with this but it's already NC'd independently from the other sliders
00:50:966 (2) - I'd suggest just making a square pattern with this like 00:51:133 (3) since it seems out of place on the otherwise perfect angled symmetry okay, i like this better :>
00:57:466 (3) - Not perfectly parallel to 00:56:799 (1) huehue fixed this
01:01:466 (4) - Make this a triangle with 01:00:466 (4,2)? It doesn't show while playing but 01:00:466 (4)'s a bit too close for comfort ah okay i didn't see this
01:21:633 (4,6) - You should probably make this the same spacing as 01:21:466 (3,5) eh, this should be okay, plays as rhombus
Also just noticed how oddly satisfying it is that a lot of the times end with the same ms since it's BPM 180

thanks~!

sdafsf

00:17:299 (4,5,6,7) - im not really hearing this rise in intensity in the music. 00:18:799 (5,6,7) - here it seems more fitting idk I heard a pitch increase so that's why slightly more intense
00:34:133 (1,2,3) - the contrast between these 3 is kinda low. 2 could be less spaced i really wanted that (3) to get emphasized forreal
00:54:966 (6) - this vocal is very stron but doesnt get emphesis. not a fan of drum emphesis but i guess thats what youre going for yeah that's what I was going for :<
00:59:799 (2,3) - rip vocals
01:08:466 (6) - map vocals for more pp
01:09:799 (6) - ^ aside from these 3 rhythms the rhythms you chose support the vocals (even if you focused on drums) yeah lol
01:31:133 (7,8) - emphesising 7 and deleting 8 would represent the music better imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9090329 eh this is okay, i like the walk-out finish I have

ayanokorin

01:17:466 (5,6,7) - ok but why a 90° angle, at least put an object to complete the square afterwards because this feels very random 3/4 squares are love

Nostalgic

00:23:799 (3) - place somewhere like 86,359? a bit underspaced rn supposed to have a triangle structure with the surrounding objects
01:25:466 (5,6,7,8) - not rly a fan of this square coming out of nowhere square shouldn't be so difficult

Rizen

00:06:133 (1) - two 1/2 sliders? would remove that slightly awkward 1/1 rhythm break. and also for consistency with 00:03:466 (1,2) - hm, I think the 1/1 fits better. the one you linked after has two clear guitars for the 1/2 whereas this one only has 1. I guess I could but I don't really like it
00:28:799 (1,2,3) - can definitely be a lot neater with placements sure I guess
00:40:466 (5,6) - I feel as though a 1/2 slider would work better here rather than two circles. circle 6 doesn't have the same percussion support as the other three circles, making it more fit for a slider tail instead imo for this I just heard a much different sounding in pitch, like, her voice goes low and then brings itself higher and yeah that's why I did the circles there
00:50:966 (2,3) - try ctrl+g these two circles? I think a change in rotational flow at 00:50:633 (4,1) - would be fitting with the vocal transition okay, looks good
00:54:966 (3) - space out more for the vocals perhaps? couldn't really come up with anything here but at least the nc'd (1) is drum so yeah :p

thank you everyone applied some things

edit: adjusted timings in all diffs, combo colors in all diffs (rip sotarks colors)

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-09-24T17:46:42+00:00

fixed stuff

osu file format v14

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thx for mods

edit: aimod has issues with tags/timing i didn't update before fix because i didn't know if you did smth, so sry xD

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2017-09-25T13:18:08+00:00

fixed a bunch of stuff thanks!

osu file format v14

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Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-09-29T10:32:21+00:00

made a small self-change

https://drmt.s-ul.eu/vLrakRmy

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,152 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-09-29T11:33:14+00:00

General
Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitwhistle23.wav

Hitsounds
- 00:21:471 - I'm convinced some diffs have a hitsound on here that shouldn't be there but I'm not 100% sure.

A Single Word Apart
- 00:28:804 (1,2,3) - Do https://i.imgur.com/dhaeiIq.png ty
- 00:33:638 (4,5,6,1,2) - 00:34:804 (1,2,3) - Why is spacing increased so much here, the song barely changes? Increasing spacing more past 00:35:471 - makes sense but before it seems a bit excessive.
- 00:37:638 (4,5,6) - This is kiai spacing. :l A lot of this section is so spaced it feels exactly like the kiais so your kiais are bland and irrelevant and leave no impact. I suggest lowering a lot of these jumps' spacing. Examples of stuff you could lower: 00:38:971 (4,5,6) - 00:41:138 (2,3,4,5) - 00:42:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 00:44:804 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
- 00:50:804 (1,2,3,4) - Establishing this spacing for snares then as soon as the next section comes in using this spacing as your base spacing seems excessive, 00:51:471 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - starting this at a lot lower spacing would be a lot nicer I think. Example: https://i.imgur.com/tqKei7V.jpg
- 00:54:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - What is the difference between these? They sound exactly the same but one is a massive jump and one is a small triangle?
- 00:55:804 (3,4,5) - Wide angles in a pp map :weary:
- 01:18:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - With how your spacing is before this diffspike star is the only actually outstanding thing in the kiai parts. The entire kiai feels lower spaced and easier than the verses you mapped with such massive spacing. Also 01:20:804 - feels like it should be spaced lower because right now it's more spaced than your actual kiai right before yet the song seems a lot softer lol.

Mapping with large spacing is okay just make sure it.. follows what the song is doing.

Doormat's Extra
- 00:12:471 (5,6,7,8) - This jump feels like it'd trigger some people. Maybe make the triple not at such a tilting angle? xD
- 00:44:971 (2) - :weary: Looks like 1/4 but is 1/2 hell YES.
- 00:55:804 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Stream looks kinda fucked cuz of stacking, move 1-4 a bit to the left?

Sotark's Extra
- 00:20:804 (1) - Shouldn't this also be an extended slider? There's a snare + melody on the end here usually you would have that clickable. 00:22:304 (2) - 00:23:638 (2) - // 01:27:471 (1) -
- 00:40:804 (1,2) - How do you blanket this properly then don't copy paste so that 00:41:304 (3,4) - also blankets probably you literally are blind sometimes Sotarks SMHHHH
- 01:10:138 - Finish?

Haruto's Insane
- 00:15:138 (4) - Looks kind of out of place since it breaks flow and it doesn't really look connected to any objects. Try something like https://i.imgur.com/hUVfpRs.png since it's similar to what you did for 00:14:138 (1,2) - ?
- 00:25:471 (3) - Same thing ^ looks a bit randomly placed. Stands out a lot for no reason so maybe just make it parallel like the other sliders.
- 00:40:138 (3,4) - I feel like an arrangement like https://i.imgur.com/w5oXxkE.jpg would be a bit nicer. The 4 again looks kind of out of place.
- 00:53:804 - I feel like this would fit more as a 1/2 slider since there's a held vocal here and the song doesn't dip in pacing at all.
- 00:54:638 (2,4,5,1) - Please blanket with stacking on. :l https://i.imgur.com/VApr7Ec.png
- 01:03:471 (1,2,3,4) - You could make this symmetrical if you wanted.
- 01:21:471 (3) - This slider also feels out of place since it's the only 1/1 slider that skips melody.

Lower diffs look fine.

Spacing on topdiff really has to be rebalanced cuz atm the verses and ending kiai are harder than the actual kiai and that seems a bit backwards.

Provided that's taken care of in a satisfactory manner, you may call me back.

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2017-09-29T14:27:13+00:00

Mir wrote:
Doormat's Extra
- 00:12:471 (5,6,7,8) - This jump feels like it'd trigger some people. Maybe make the triple not at such a tilting angle? xD i just stacked it
- 00:44:971 (2) - :weary: Looks like 1/4 but is 1/2 hell YES. :3c
- 00:55:804 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Stream looks kinda fucked cuz of stacking, move 1-4 a bit to the left? i changed the last (1,2) into a slider to avoid weird stream visuals, should be better now i think

thanks mir :3c
https://drmt.s-ul.eu/hLRvEA2m

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-10-01T11:12:43+00:00

Mir wrote:
Sotark's Extra
- 00:20:804 (1) - Shouldn't this also be an extended slider? There's a snare + melody on the end here usually you would have that clickable. 00:22:304 (2) - 00:23:638 (2) - // 01:27:471 (1) - I want variation and not spam same rhythm everytime, like exemple this one you mentionned has less intense volume

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Kroytz

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Kroytz 2017-10-02T16:16:23+00:00

Mirru-kyun~! wrote:
A Single Word Apart
- 00:28:804 (1,2,3) - Do https://i.imgur.com/dhaeiIq.png ty Fixed
- 00:33:638 (4,5,6,1,2) - 00:34:804 (1,2,3) - Why is spacing increased so much here, the song barely changes? Increasing spacing more past 00:35:471 - makes sense but before it seems a bit excessive. We talked a bit in IRC and I'll still hold on to my idea here: The increased spacing is because of the newly introduced drums and the highest spacing for the slider is due to it being the loudest and only clap for this period. I didn't want to increase the spacing of the stream because then I wouldn't be able to get my desired blanket on the (1) after the slider.
- 00:37:638 (4,5,6) - This is kiai spacing. :l A lot of this section is so spaced it feels exactly like the kiais so your kiais are bland and irrelevant and leave no impact. I suggest lowering a lot of these jumps' spacing. Examples of stuff you could lower: 00:38:971 (4,5,6) - 00:41:138 (2,3,4,5) - 00:42:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 00:44:804 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - We talked about this in IRC and spacing is used as a means of progression - to scale the song in a linear fashion by having things go from low to high and back to low as the vocals go low to high as well. As the measures move along, so does the spacing. Not because they want to be treated similar to kiai. What you want is for kiais to really stick out which is one fair ideology but here I favor a more progressive approach. The kiai chorus stands out differently from all these high spacing verses simply due to the way that it plays; where everything else in the map is 1/2's the chorus stands out by being mostly 3/4, spacing isn't the main concern with how I differentiate between kiai and non-kiai.
- 00:50:804 (1,2,3,4) - Establishing this spacing for snares then as soon as the next section comes in using this spacing as your base spacing seems excessive, 00:51:471 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - starting this at a lot lower spacing would be a lot nicer I think. Example: https://i.imgur.com/tqKei7V.jpg I believe both ideas work here. I don't like starting off the phrase with something weaker than what I have already did the last measure.
When you highlight 00:50:138 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it acts as a pattern and nothing else, with the point being that there's a rising intonation on the last few objects which is why I have the larger spacing. ( http://puu.sh/xOhnE/b6df2dca64.jpg ) What you don't like is that this spacing is similar to the next measure (which for the record is a different phrase). The two shouldn't be comparable because the way the music is being handled is different.
- 00:54:138 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - What is the difference between these? They sound exactly the same but one is a massive jump and one is a small triangle? Yeah.. I fixed this, small triangle made no sense here for what the vocals do. Originally it was because there was no clap on this white tick, and so the three objects identify as a softer 'whistle combo' to me, but the higher spacing might be better.
- 00:55:804 (3,4,5) - Wide angles in a pp map :weary: idk if this is sarcasm but i like rhombuses too :V
- 01:18:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - With how your spacing is before this diffspike star is the only actually outstanding thing in the kiai parts. Probably because this is the only outstanding moment in the song that really yells at you.
The entire kiai feels lower spaced and easier than the verses you mapped with such massive spacing. Also 01:20:804 - feels like it should be spaced lower because right now it's more spaced than your actual kiai right before yet the song seems a lot softer lol. It's an outro, doesn't need to have similar spacing just because it's the same melody from before or because the kiai is weaker. The kiai is kiai because it's chorus, not because I want it to be stronger with spacing or emphasis. Let me map this without kiais and see how that changes anything xd cuz it really doesn't. My chorus kiais are to introduce different playstyle because there's a lot more longer and higher pitched vocals, that's just how I interpret it.
We talked some on IRC and our ideas for level-design are too conflicting. Our ideologies on how to structure objects in relation with one another at a point during the music can never agree and even on my other maps you feel indifferent so, I can't do much more on this than I already have.

thank you mirru~
unfortunately we have too varying ideologies. thx for looking tho

Kroytz

703 posts

Joined February 2013

Topic Starter

Kroytz 2017-11-25T23:51:14+00:00

!summon Mir

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,152 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-11-25T23:58:44+00:00

!summon Haruto

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2017-11-26T00:05:19+00:00

*summoned*

Haruto's Insane
- 00:15:138 (4) - Looks kind of out of place since it breaks flow and it doesn't really look connected to any objects. Try something like https://i.imgur.com/hUVfpRs.png since it's similar to what you did for 00:14:138 (1,2) - ? did something else.
- 00:25:471 (3) - Same thing ^ looks a bit randomly placed. Stands out a lot for no reason so maybe just make it parallel like the other sliders. somewhat fixed it by changing the object's rotation.
- 00:40:138 (3,4) - I feel like an arrangement like https://i.imgur.com/w5oXxkE.jpg would be a bit nicer. The 4 again looks kind of out of place. hmm sure.
- 00:53:804 - I feel like this would fit more as a 1/2 slider since there's a held vocal here and the song doesn't dip in pacing at all. did that.
- 00:54:638 (2,4,5,1) - Please blanket with stacking on. :l https://i.imgur.com/VApr7Ec.png i always turn my stacking on :weary:
- 01:03:471 (1,2,3,4) - You could make this symmetrical if you wanted. nahh, doesnt need to.
- 01:21:471 (3) - This slider also feels out of place since it's the only 1/1 slider that skips melody. fixed.

thanks for the mod mirru
thanks myself for not replying to a mod for 2 months. @Kroytz : add haruto_aizawa to the tags please 😤😤.

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Sotarks

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Sotarks 2017-11-26T17:40:53+00:00

summoned and does nothing

Haruto

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Haruto 2017-12-03T05:16:37+00:00

stfu sotarks.

Mir

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Mir 2017-12-03T21:19:59+00:00

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nextplay

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nextplay 2017-12-03T21:50:05+00:00

Mir wrote:
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Lasse

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Lasse 2017-12-04T12:37:44+00:00

why 80% hs volume in intro

overall volume settings seem really high, but at least make them reasonable in relation to the parts before getting this qualified

spacepop

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spacepop 2017-12-04T17:38:39+00:00

bg source? pls

Kroytz

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Kroytz 2017-12-04T18:53:04+00:00

@Lasse: I can fix all the hitsounding volumes with #2 nom

@spacepop: You can find the list of all BG entries used here https://osu.ppy.sh/home/news/2017-04-27 ... st-results

Scub

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Scub 2017-12-06T05:07:28+00:00

Why not a picture of nami u disappoint me kroytz

lord_dabber_76

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lord_dabber_76 2017-12-24T15:32:50+00:00

A Single Word Apart :

00:45:804 (3) - wtf is this shit Kroytz

Gero

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Gero 2017-12-30T04:31:43+00:00

Don't forget to take a look at the previous suggestions provided by Lasse, and ObaSpirit (I think you could improve it, or at the least make it less confusing). Anyway, we've just changed one pattern that felt a little bit forced.

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22:14 Kroytz: oh hey Gero, are you still for checking my namirin set?
22:14 Kroytz: asking only because it's been a while. :P
22:15 Gero: yeah man, recently a close friend of mine has passed and I haven't feel really good these days
22:15 Kroytz: ooh
22:15 Gero: but I had it on my userpage to reminder me to do it
22:15 Kroytz: thats
22:15 Kroytz: tough :<
22:15 Kroytz: um.. well, it's okay if you don't check i mean
22:15 Kroytz: becuase someone else sorta wants to do it
22:16 Kroytz: would also help ease some to-do's for you
22:16 Kroytz: sorry about the loss :c
22:16 Gero: it's okay, I'm just depressed :c
22:17 Kroytz: understandable :/
22:17 Kroytz: i really hope things go well for you
22:17 Gero: hopefully, but I can try to take a look at it tomorrow, or wait, hold on, let me check it
22:24 Kroytz: okay then~
22:24 Gero: I just have one suggestion for the last difficulty
22:25 Kroytz: ok
22:25 Gero: 00:55:971 (4) - Wouldn't be better to stack this one on (2) or either (3) I think it feels better to have them more closer in my opinon
22:26 Kroytz: ooh, okay
22:26 Kroytz: i can probably stack on (2)
22:26 Kroytz: ye
22:26 Gero: and that's all, mapset is clean
22:26 Kroytz: m'kay~ i'll update and then let you know when im ready ok :>
22:26 Gero: perfect
22:27 Kroytz: thank you so much Gero!

Kroytz

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Kroytz 2017-12-30T04:43:21+00:00

@Lasse: Fixed hitsounds across all difficulties

@ObaSpirit: This is just a slow-down slider. It's mostly to play as a hold since the pattern has reached its' climax before the next period.

@Gero: Changed the pattern so it feels less forced. I like the improvement now~

I'll call when I'm ready to go

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Gero 2018-01-08T22:12:08+00:00

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lord_dabber_76

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lord_dabber_76 2018-01-21T11:51:43+00:00

Kroytz wrote:
@ObaSpirit: This is just a slow-down slider. It's mostly to play as a hold since the pattern has reached its' climax before the next period.

Yeah I got that right and I'm not saying it's unrankable because iirc you're aiming for that but it feels really odd to play/read because it's unpredictable that there will be such a slider after the climax and the player doesn't have the time to adjust their cursor movement to that slider since they can only realize it's a slow slider after they hit it and start playing it and ofc most of them will just slider break because of that.

If it was at the beginning of the map it would have been alright but it's right after the hardest part so uhh u know that's an issue I guess.

Btw I can't suggest any way of changing that I'm on my phone lol

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