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Roromiya Karuta(Hanazawa Kana) - sweets parade

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Garden
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根据给的link来看 romanized artist 该换成 Roromiya Karuta(Hanazawa Kana) 中间那个空格是不要的,因为原artist也没有空格

改好这个之后明天来recheck
Topic Starter
gary00737
改好了 :D
Garden
Normal
00:02:011 (5,6) - etc. 不知道为什么之前mod的时候忘记提了.. 虽然这里stack原则上不是不可以,但先是接前面1/2,然后空半拍原地stack然后再移动感觉对新手读图压力偏大,而且bpm也不低,我个人推荐还是按照ds排列。

别的都ok
Topic Starter
gary00737

Garden wrote:

Normal
00:02:011 (5,6) - etc. 不知道为什么之前mod的时候忘记提了.. 虽然这里stack原则上不是不可以,但先是接前面1/2,然后空半拍原地stack然后再移动感觉对新手读图压力偏大,而且bpm也不低,我个人推荐还是按照ds排列。

别的都ok

修改完畢 還改了點美觀
Garden
bubbled
Topic Starter
gary00737

Garden wrote:

bubbled



感謝Bubbled :) :) :)
Asuka_-
@がーでんしゃま
thanks for fixing meta. :D
Chaoslitz
/來賺點分數

[hitsounds]
  1. 我建議還是把soft-hitnormal17刪了吧, 因為作為hitnormal這個聲量太小了打圖時的回饋不夠, 所以用default的soft-hitnormal會好很多
  2. 00:01:574 - 的clap應該放在00:01:720 (鼓聲), 然後00:01:574 可以補個whistle
  3. 00:20:361 - ^ 同理
  4. 基本上就是某些clap放後了1/2, 鼓聲主要都在白線, 所以把紅線上的clap都改了吧, 這兒就不把全部列出來了, 下面我也不說音效的問題了

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:594 (3,4,5) - 這個角度有點窄打起來不是很順手, 把00:18:176 (5,6) - 放左一點 (例如00:17:594 (3,4,5) - 可以成一個直角)
  2. 00:33:903 (3,4,5) - 個人認為這是對稱的話會更好看w
[Extra]
  1. 00:08:273 (1,5) - 沒疊好

主要是音效還要改改, 圖就沒大問題了
還有下次不要只剪副歌來做啊...=.=這樣真的不好
Topic Starter
gary00737

Chaoslitz wrote:

/來賺點分數

[hitsounds]
  1. 我建議還是把soft-hitnormal17刪了吧, 因為作為hitnormal這個聲量太小了打圖時的回饋不夠, 所以用default的soft-hitnormal會好很多這個我不會改 因為主要讓人感到有一點變化(我的理解)
  2. 00:01:574 - 的clap應該放在00:01:720 (鼓聲), 然後00:01:574 可以補個whistle
  3. 00:20:361 - ^ 同理
  4. 基本上就是某些clap放後了1/2, 鼓聲主要都在白線, 所以把紅線上的clap都改了吧, 這兒就不把全部列出來了, 下面我也不說音效的問題了以上我大概改了點 但不知道改得好不好 就改了比較規律點

[Normal]
  1. 00:17:594 (3,4,5) - 這個角度有點窄打起來不是很順手, 把00:18:176 (5,6) - 放左一點 (例如00:17:594 (3,4,5) - 可以成一個直角) 改了改了 :D 但不是直角
  2. 00:33:903 (3,4,5) - 個人認為這是對稱的話會更好看w我用了點方法 現在應該是對稱了
[Extra]
  1. 00:08:273 (1,5) - 沒疊好現在疊好了疊好了

主要是音效還要改改, 圖就沒大問題了
還有下次不要只剪副歌來做啊...=.=這樣真的不好 好的沒有下次 :D
DreaM117er
我的那個音效刪沒關係,影響到rank的話不用手下留情 :)
Topic Starter
gary00737

DreaM117er wrote:

我的那個音效刪沒關係,影響到rank的話不用手下留情 :)




好的 : > ((以修改 沒有刪 反而變大聲了
Chaoslitz
recheck

[Extra]
  1. 00:13:662 (8) - 之前看漏了這個, 這兒節奏對比 00:04:341 (7,8,9,10) - 00:22:982 (8,9,10) - 00:32:302 (8,9) - 似乎疏了點
Topic Starter
gary00737

Chaoslitz wrote:

recheck

[Extra]
  1. 00:13:662 (8) - 之前看漏了這個, 這兒節奏對比 00:04:341 (7,8,9,10) - 00:22:982 (8,9,10) - 00:32:302 (8,9) - 似乎疏了點

修改了! :D
Chaoslitz
gratz for 1st qualified map!

祝旅途愉快
Topic Starter
gary00737

Chaoslitz wrote:

gratz for 1st qualified map!

祝旅途愉快






十分感謝 !! 耶~~~
lit120
the only cut ver.

wha...?
Jennifer
恭喜 :)
leo16834
恭喜RK~

以後繼續加油~
walaowey
Gratz \o/
Asuka_-
gratz!
Lobelia
gratz~~1st
ice08311
神!
Xinchii
恭喜大大賀喜大大! (跪
Flask
!!! 恭喜
Shiratori
恭喜飞图 :)
Topic Starter
gary00737
thank you all !!!

-jordan-
you did it!

VINXIS
THIS NIAC TAULY THE WORST MAP IVE EVER SEEN WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKK
Topic Starter
gary00737

-Jordan- wrote:

you did it!





haha , I catch this moment :)
Binguo
好玩的
Topic Starter
gary00737

Misaki-Mei wrote:

好玩的

謝謝讚賞 :) :)
Myxo
From Mapping Advise Queue.

With this map, you achieved the goal you mentioned. The song is very short and the mapping is nothing unusual, so it was easier to get it ranked. Also, you hopefully had a lot of fun in the process. It's the perfect song and mapping style for a first ranked map.
However, simply getting your maps ranked will get less exciting when you have some ranked maps already. In order to keep your interest in mapping, you will have to experiment with songs from different genres and different mapping concepts than you're used to.

The problem with songs like this is that they are so short, that every section has the same intensity and rhythms. There is not much room for variety here. If you'll try to map longer songs (which you already did from what I can see in your Pendings) you will have to pay close attention, that the intensity of the map fits the intensity of the section in the song. This alone allows for different ideas within a map and will help you a lot to improve your mapping.
You already used a variety of generic mapping techniques in your map, that make for a very clean and structured experience, such as 00:02:594 (1,2) - copy-pasting and flipping sliders, 00:07:254 (1,2,3,4) - rotational patterns, 00:08:710 (2,3,4,5,6) - simple geometric shapes and 00:22:982 (8,9,10,1) - back-and-forth patterns. In the future, you should try to experiment a bit by using less common mapping techniques. You can get inspired by looking at other maps, or by using your own imagination when listening to a part of the song.
Before you start to map a song, you can try to think what makes this song special to you, or which parts stick out in the song. Then, try to think of special patterns or techniques that fit to this speciality of the song. In that way, you can make your map be more unique, and at the same time follow the song even better.

I think that's enough text for now, especially since you're not a native speaker. I hope everything was understandable, if not, you can ask me in PM! You can also ask me in PM for more feedback in case you'll try out to make a map with my advise. Good luck! :3
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