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Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise [Osu|Taiko]
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Topic Starter
thx~~bakabakaHi~~!! 
*把多餘沒用的綠線刪掉.......@@
*[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] [Stream] 忘了打Tags?
[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]
00:20:895 (1) - Finish
00:28:200 - ^
01:04:721 (1) - ^
01:07:852 (6) & 01:08:895 (1) - 疊到了~
01:29:253 - Remove Finish
01:29:775 (1) - Finish
01:30:808 (2) - 同上面~~ 把之前在第4拍的Finish改到第一拍,改的話後面順便~
01:36:026 (4) - Finish
01:56:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167965
[Stream]
音效部分....^ 第4拍----->第1拍 我是這樣覺得啦...
00:31:721 (5,6) - 也許用漂亮點@@ 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167974
00:55:340 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不是很好看...這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167976
01:28:210 (4,5,6,7) - 排正點
[Expert]
00:09:427 (2,3) - 一點點沒疊到..
00:13:340 (3) - 拉好看點
00:19:862 (2) - 沒疊到
00:37:079 (9) - Finish
01:25:601 (3) - ^
01:28:992 (7) - ^
01:31:340 - Remove Finish...奇怪的地方><
01:50:123 (7) - Finish
01:50:123 (7) - Remove Finish
*Finish的位置怪怪的@@ 最好改改....
不錯的圖~
繼續加油~
*把多餘沒用的綠線刪掉.......@@
*[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] [Stream] 忘了打Tags?
[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]
00:20:895 (1) - Finish
00:28:200 - ^
01:04:721 (1) - ^
01:07:852 (6) & 01:08:895 (1) - 疊到了~
01:29:253 - Remove Finish
01:29:775 (1) - Finish
01:30:808 (2) - 同上面~~ 把之前在第4拍的Finish改到第一拍,改的話後面順便~
01:36:026 (4) - Finish
01:56:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167965
[Stream]
音效部分....^ 第4拍----->第1拍 我是這樣覺得啦...
00:31:721 (5,6) - 也許用漂亮點@@ 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167974
00:55:340 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不是很好看...這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167976
01:28:210 (4,5,6,7) - 排正點
[Expert]
00:09:427 (2,3) - 一點點沒疊到..
00:13:340 (3) - 拉好看點
00:19:862 (2) - 沒疊到
00:37:079 (9) - Finish
01:25:601 (3) - ^
01:28:992 (7) - ^
01:31:340 - Remove Finish...奇怪的地方><
01:50:123 (7) - Finish
01:50:123 (7) - Remove Finish
*Finish的位置怪怪的@@ 最好改改....
不錯的圖~
繼續加油~
You should provide a log or summarize what was changed :v (Like added NC/some finish hitsound/blah blah)Strawberry wrote:
bakabaka wrote:
mod in irc
Topic Starter
12BARRY21 wrote:
Hi~~!!
*把多餘沒用的綠線刪掉.......@@
*[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] [Stream] 忘了打Tags?
[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]
00:20:895 (1) - Finish
00:28:200 - ^
01:04:721 (1) - ^
01:07:852 (6) & 01:08:895 (1) - 疊到了~
01:29:253 - Remove Finish
01:29:775 (1) - Finish
01:30:808 (2) - 同上面~~ 把之前在第4拍的Finish改到第一拍,改的話後面順便~
01:36:026 (4) - Finish
01:56:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167965
[Stream]
音效部分....^ 第4拍----->第1拍 我是這樣覺得啦...
00:31:721 (5,6) - 也許用漂亮點@@ 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167974
00:55:340 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不是很好看...這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167976
01:28:210 (4,5,6,7) - 排正點
[Expert]
00:09:427 (2,3) - 一點點沒疊到..
00:13:340 (3) - 拉好看點
00:19:862 (2) - 沒疊到
00:37:079 (9) - Finish
01:25:601 (3) - ^
01:28:992 (7) - ^
01:31:340 - Remove Finish...奇怪的地方><
01:50:123 (7) - Finish
01:50:123 (7) - Remove Finish
*Finish的位置怪怪的@@ 最好改改....
不錯的圖~
繼續加油~
all fixed~~~thx very much!
Topic Starter
thanks to remind~Raging Bull wrote:
You should provide a log or summarize what was changed :v (Like added NC/some finish hitsound/blah blah)
有点dream的味道 
D:
roflNatteke wrote:
D:
Topic Starter
Natteke wrote:
D:
The song's authorGeneral
歌结束了，要放跟绿线，KIMI TIME不能一直到MP3的底
Easy
00:35:514(2) 在往下偏一点，不要让 00:38:123(2) 挡住他，因为EASY的AR低，所以后面的NOTE出来的快，挡着不美观
01:07:340(5) 也下来一点好了，不麻烦的
01:20:905(6) 这个是EASY，距离一下子变短，肯定不行
01:41:253(3) 和(1)对齐
Stream
00:56:123 (6)(7) 和(3)对齐
01:36:036 (4)~(10) 放成一个等5边形.(4)(6),(7)(8)对齐,(5)放成和所有的距离=距,(9)(10)反正是覆盖的，没问题，前面调整好就OK
Expert
Stacking -1~2根据我下面有个地方提示你的问题
00:02:123(1)红线前面别放东西最好，而且这个转盘很不合适，BGM声音都没
00:40:210(2)这个条子最好结束的地方在下去点，不美观。我自己非常不喜欢弯条子，你MOD过我歌就知道了（全直的），很容易不美观
00:55:862(3) 和(2)倾斜度一样
01:02:514(7) GRID 下来一格
01:05:383(2)(3) 就是开头提到的改STACKING改到(2)(3)出来是和(1)的结尾重叠为止
01:48:557(1)和后面(5)这个排法不好，不是体现出难，是怪
01:58:992(1)也是，要么你前面4个分了开点，要么这个点拿到外面去，随便的
总体不错，细节问题多注意点。
歌结束了，要放跟绿线，KIMI TIME不能一直到MP3的底
Easy
00:35:514(2) 在往下偏一点，不要让 00:38:123(2) 挡住他，因为EASY的AR低，所以后面的NOTE出来的快，挡着不美观
01:07:340(5) 也下来一点好了，不麻烦的
01:20:905(6) 这个是EASY，距离一下子变短，肯定不行
01:41:253(3) 和(1)对齐
Stream
00:56:123 (6)(7) 和(3)对齐
01:36:036 (4)~(10) 放成一个等5边形.(4)(6),(7)(8)对齐,(5)放成和所有的距离=距,(9)(10)反正是覆盖的，没问题，前面调整好就OK
Expert
Stacking -1~2根据我下面有个地方提示你的问题
00:02:123(1)红线前面别放东西最好，而且这个转盘很不合适，BGM声音都没
00:40:210(2)这个条子最好结束的地方在下去点，不美观。我自己非常不喜欢弯条子，你MOD过我歌就知道了（全直的），很容易不美观
00:55:862(3) 和(2)倾斜度一样
01:02:514(7) GRID 下来一格
01:05:383(2)(3) 就是开头提到的改STACKING改到(2)(3)出来是和(1)的结尾重叠为止
01:48:557(1)和后面(5)这个排法不好，不是体现出难，是怪
01:58:992(1)也是，要么你前面4个分了开点，要么这个点拿到外面去，随便的
总体不错，细节问题多注意点。
介不介意来个guestdiff 
(大概介于H和I吧)
(大概介于H和I吧)
Topic Starter
Yumeko Yuki wrote:
介不介意来个guestdiff
欢迎~
Topic Starter
改好咯 thxkissfly wrote:
General
歌结束了，要放跟绿线，KIMI TIME不能一直到MP3的底
Easy
00:35:514(2) 在往下偏一点，不要让 00:38:123(2) 挡住他，因为EASY的AR低，所以后面的NOTE出来的快，挡着不美观
01:07:340(5) 也下来一点好了，不麻烦的
01:20:905(6) 这个是EASY，距离一下子变短，肯定不行
01:41:253(3) 和(1)对齐
Stream
00:56:123 (6)(7) 和(3)对齐
01:36:036 (4)~(10) 放成一个等5边形.(4)(6),(7)(8)对齐,(5)放成和所有的距离=距,(9)(10)反正是覆盖的，没问题，前面调整好就OK
Expert
Stacking -1~2根据我下面有个地方提示你的问题
00:02:123(1)红线前面别放东西最好，而且这个转盘很不合适，BGM声音都没
00:40:210(2)这个条子最好结束的地方在下去点，不美观。我自己非常不喜欢弯条子，你MOD过我歌就知道了（全直的），很容易不美观
00:55:862(3) 和(2)倾斜度一样
01:02:514(7) GRID 下来一格
01:05:383(2)(3) 就是开头提到的改STACKING改到(2)(3)出来是和(1)的结尾重叠为止
01:48:557(1)和后面(5)这个排法不好，不是体现出难，是怪
01:58:992(1)也是，要么你前面4个分了开点，要么这个点拿到外面去，随便的
总体不错，细节问题多注意点。
完成了...顺便补了点音效...一个clap和两个sliderstide
希望能满意
Download: wave.rar
Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [Yuki YukI].osu
希望能满意
Download: wave.rar
Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [Yuki YukI].osu
Topic Starter
Yumeko Yuki wrote:
完成了...顺便补了点音效...一个clap和两个sliderstide
希望能满意
多谢！~oh hi
Topic Starter
hitieff wrote:
oh hi
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~
OH I love this song :3
[General]
-> The source should be osu!stream instead of OSU!Stream
-> Offset 4236?
[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]
-> HP Drain -1?
-> OD-1 ?
Good luck Strawberry (:
OH I love this song :3
[General]
-> The source should be osu!stream instead of OSU!Stream
-> Offset 4236?
[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]
-> HP Drain -1?
- 00:14:644 (3) - Remove whistle from start
00:20:905 (1) - Note appear too early after a spinner for an Easy diff
00:26:383 (1) - Add whistle on the first repeat
00:43:862 (3,4) - Try to arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172934 ? It follows the previous pattern better imo
00:48:036 (3,4) - idk... Too tricky for an Easy imo
01:06:818 (4) - New combo
01:24:818 (x) - Remove break, and add a 1/2 slider here
01:45:427 (6) - Add whistle on slider start?
01:48:557 (4) - Why huge jump on Easy diff? Also add a repeat would sound better
- 00:32:383 (6) - Change this slider into a circle followed by 1/2 slider after?
00:37:601 (1) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172938, so it wouldn't touch the below slider?
00:42:818 (3,4) - ...you could just copy-paste (1,2), press CTRL+H, and press CTRL+R you know ><
00:44:775 (6) - This 1/4 sounds out of place imo, it doesn't follow anything on the song as I can hear
01:06:818 (5) - New combo here (because of the anti-jump)
01:26:644 (2) - Remove whistle on slider's start
01:36:036 (4) - New combo here (to help players predict this is a jump)
01:57:949 (3,4,5 - 6,7,8) - Triples feels weird for this diff imo. Repeating slider would be better
- 00:04:210 (1) - Add whistle
00:22:079 (4) - Add whistle on slider start
00:31:340 (8) - The repeat arrow is concealed by the comboburst... (not fully concealed though)
00:40:731 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
00:44:644 (3) - Add clap or whistle on slider end
01:11:514 (6) - 3/4 slider sounds forced imo. 1/2 slider is better here I guess
01:32:775 (8) - Add whistle on slider start
01:33:688 (12) - Add whistle
01:43:601 (x) - Add note?
-> OD-1 ?
- 00:26:253 (7) - Add whistle
00:40:210 (2,3,4) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172945 ? Would be more flowy imo
00:51:688 (7,8) - Switch their position?
01:09:949 (4) - ...curved too much imo
01:31:340 (10) - ...the finish should be added also on slider start I guess
01:55:862 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to guess it's a diamond pattern because it's not symmetrical ><
Good luck Strawberry (:
Topic Starter
Niva wrote:
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~
OH I love this song :3
[General]
-> The source should be osu!stream instead of OSU!Stream fixed~
-> Offset 4236? i changed it to 4230 :3
[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] fixed~
-> HP Drain -1?[Stream] all fixed~
- 00:14:644 (3) - Remove whistle from start
00:20:905 (1) - Note appear too early after a spinner for an Easy diff
00:26:383 (1) - Add whistle on the first repeat
00:43:862 (3,4) - Try to arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172934 ? It follows the previous pattern better imo
00:48:036 (3,4) - idk... Too tricky for an Easy imo
01:06:818 (4) - New combo
01:24:818 (x) - Remove break, and add a 1/2 slider here
01:45:427 (6) - Add whistle on slider start?
01:48:557 (4) - Why huge jump on Easy diff? Also add a repeat would sound better the slider is should in01:48:838 (4) - it's a bug :3 fixed~[Yuki YukI] fixed~
- 00:32:383 (6) - Change this slider into a circle followed by 1/2 slider after?
00:37:601 (1) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172938, so it wouldn't touch the below slider?
00:42:818 (3,4) - ...you could just copy-paste (1,2), press CTRL+H, and press CTRL+R you know ><
00:44:775 (6) - This 1/4 sounds out of place imo, it doesn't follow anything on the song as I can hear
01:06:818 (5) - New combo here (because of the anti-jump)
01:26:644 (2) - Remove whistle on slider's start
01:36:036 (4) - New combo here (to help players predict this is a jump)
01:57:949 (3,4,5 - 6,7,8) - Triples feels weird for this diff imo. Repeating slider would be better[Expert] all fixed
- 00:04:210 (1) - Add whistle
00:22:079 (4) - Add whistle on slider start
00:31:340 (8) - The repeat arrow is concealed by the comboburst... (not fully concealed though)
00:40:731 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
00:44:644 (3) - Add clap or whistle on slider end
01:11:514 (6) - 3/4 slider sounds forced imo. 1/2 slider is better here I guess
01:32:775 (8) - Add whistle on slider start
01:33:688 (12) - Add whistle
01:43:601 (x) - Add note?
-> OD-1 ?Lovely~
- 00:26:253 (7) - Add whistle
00:40:210 (2,3,4) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172945 ? Would be more flowy imo
00:51:688 (7,8) - Switch their position?
01:09:949 (4) - ...curved too much imo
01:31:340 (10) - ...the finish should be added also on slider start I guess
01:55:862 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to guess it's a diamond pattern because it's not symmetrical ><
Good luck Strawberry (:
thanks for your mod >< it's very useful to this mapYo modding this map because of ur request
SuzumiyaSama's Easy:
00:23:012(3) - x:256 y:64 from there fix the spacing until 00:30:838
00:50:143(1,2) - hidden repeat slider
01:26:664(3) - 1-2 grlds left for the end point
01:42:316(1) - 1 grid up(no distance snap)
Stream:
00:23:012(5) - NC
00:27:186(5) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
01:11:795 - add a circle
01:12:056(8,9) - replace this for a slider
01:40:751(7) - NC
01:44:403(4) - ^
Yuki YukI:
00:25:099(6) - NC
00:31:360(8) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
00:48:056(5) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
01:27:708(6) - NC
01:32:143(7) - ^
01:36:056(5) - ^
01:40:230(6) - ^
01:44:403(5) - ^
01:52:751(6) - ^
Expert:
01:02:925(9) - NC
01:06:838(6) - ^
01:11:273(8) - ^
This is the best i can do. GL
SuzumiyaSama's Easy:
00:23:012(3) - x:256 y:64 from there fix the spacing until 00:30:838
00:50:143(1,2) - hidden repeat slider
01:26:664(3) - 1-2 grlds left for the end point
01:42:316(1) - 1 grid up(no distance snap)
Stream:
00:23:012(5) - NC
00:27:186(5) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
01:11:795 - add a circle
01:12:056(8,9) - replace this for a slider
01:40:751(7) - NC
01:44:403(4) - ^
Yuki YukI:
00:25:099(6) - NC
00:31:360(8) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
00:48:056(5) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
01:27:708(6) - NC
01:32:143(7) - ^
01:36:056(5) - ^
01:40:230(6) - ^
01:44:403(5) - ^
01:52:751(6) - ^
Expert:
01:02:925(9) - NC
01:06:838(6) - ^
01:11:273(8) - ^
This is the best i can do. GL
感谢帮我修改了...最近没什么时间囧...
另外tag里还少了一个yumeko呢
另外tag里还少了一个yumeko呢
Topic Starter
all fixedByakugan249 wrote:
Yo modding this map because of ur request
SuzumiyaSama's Easy:
00:23:012(3) - x:256 y:64 from there fix the spacing until 00:30:838
00:50:143(1,2) - hidden repeat slider
01:26:664(3) - 1-2 grlds left for the end point
01:42:316(1) - 1 grid up(no distance snap)
Stream:
00:23:012(5) - NC
00:27:186(5) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
01:11:795 - add a circle
01:12:056(8,9) - replace this for a slider
01:40:751(7) - NC
01:44:403(4) - ^
Yuki YukI:
00:25:099(6) - NC
00:31:360(8) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
00:48:056(5) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
01:27:708(6) - NC
01:32:143(7) - ^
01:36:056(5) - ^
01:40:230(6) - ^
01:44:403(5) - ^
01:52:751(6) - ^
Expert:
01:02:925(9) - NC
01:06:838(6) - ^
01:11:273(8) - ^
This is the best i can do. GL
thankyouHi. Strawberry <3
General
- [Diff name]diff名字也要连贯一点,要风格化就全部风格化，不要出现easy什么的。还有我觉得stream会让人误解是很多连打的，虽然和曲子本身可能有相关性。还有expert专家的意思，不太符合...
SuzumiyaSama's Easy
00:13:882 (2) - 难读的stack 而且后面一个节奏还在红线
00:29:795 (1) - ^
00:26:403 (1,2) - 这两个spacing不同?
00:37:621 (1) - jump ? !
01:18:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Stream
- 我觉得这个diff前后难度有点失衡...
00:32:403 (6) - 没必要跳吧~
00:45:969 (1) - spacing 有点太远 x1.12
00:50:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 排的不好看 DS很奇怪.. 不妨参照下后面你的01:09:447 (2,3,4,5,6)
Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ?
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo
- I like this diff~!
Expert
00:20:795 (4,1) - 关grid 叠好~
01:00:056 (8) - 没堆叠好
01:27:969 (x) - 没理由不加个note在这把?
01:41:273 (4) - New combo
rank好运~~
General
- [Diff name]diff名字也要连贯一点,要风格化就全部风格化，不要出现easy什么的。还有我觉得stream会让人误解是很多连打的，虽然和曲子本身可能有相关性。还有expert专家的意思，不太符合...
SuzumiyaSama's Easy
00:13:882 (2) - 难读的stack 而且后面一个节奏还在红线
00:29:795 (1) - ^
00:26:403 (1,2) - 这两个spacing不同?
00:37:621 (1) - jump ? !
01:18:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Stream
- 我觉得这个diff前后难度有点失衡...
00:32:403 (6) - 没必要跳吧~
00:45:969 (1) - spacing 有点太远 x1.12
00:50:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 排的不好看 DS很奇怪.. 不妨参照下后面你的01:09:447 (2,3,4,5,6)
Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ?
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo
- I like this diff~!
Expert
00:20:795 (4,1) - 关grid 叠好~
01:00:056 (8) - 没堆叠好
01:27:969 (x) - 没理由不加个note在这把?
01:41:273 (4) - New combo
rank好运~~(sorry for my lateness. I wasn't able to touch my osu! yesterday orz, only checking messages from school computer)
...Well, I don't think this need a recheck. It's already a good map.
However, I still personally think offset 4236 sounds better than 4230 (:
Don't kudosu this~ (enjoy a star btw :3)
...Well, I don't think this need a recheck. It's already a good map.
However, I still personally think offset 4236 sounds better than 4230 (:
Don't kudosu this~ (enjoy a star btw :3)
Topic Starter
update~ 多谢>w<S h i o n wrote:
Hi. Strawberry <3
General
- [Diff name]diff名字也要连贯一点,要风格化就全部风格化，不要出现easy什么的。还有我觉得stream会让人误解是很多连打的，虽然和曲子本身可能有相关性。还有expert专家的意思，不太符合...
SuzumiyaSama's Easy
00:13:882 (2) - 难读的stack 而且后面一个节奏还在红线
00:29:795 (1) - ^
00:26:403 (1,2) - 这两个spacing不同?
00:37:621 (1) - jump ? !
01:18:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Stream
- 我觉得这个diff前后难度有点失衡...
00:32:403 (6) - 没必要跳吧~
00:45:969 (1) - spacing 有点太远 x1.12
00:50:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 排的不好看 DS很奇怪.. 不妨参照下后面你的01:09:447 (2,3,4,5,6)
Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ?
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo
- I like this diff~!
Expert
00:20:795 (4,1) - 关grid 叠好~
01:00:056 (8) - 没堆叠好
01:27:969 (x) - 没理由不加个note在这把?
01:41:273 (4) - New combo
Topic Starter
Niva wrote:
(sorry for my lateness. I wasn't able to touch my osu! yesterday orz, only checking messages from school computer)
...Well, I don't think this need a recheck. It's already a good map.
However, I still personally think offset 4236 sounds better than 4230 (:
Don't kudosu this~ (enjoy a star btw :3)
thxHi ~ Strawberry ~
My some tips ~ from queue~
[General]
Delete Enable countdown in all diff plz.
[Expert]
Oh,why Stark Leniency 2?
Restore to default plz,the hidden player not good.
00:25:882 (4) - add NC.
00:45:577 (8) - Remove note will be better.
01:39:969 (9) - move to here X:376 Y:112.
01:42:316 (1) - 1 grid left.
[YukI YukI]
00:34:490 - add note.
01:19:360 (7) - add NC.
01:30:838 - add note.
01:46:490 (7) - add NC.
01:58:490 (1) - Remove NC.
[Stream]
01:19:360 (4) - add NC.
01:37:099 (5) - ^
01:40:490 (6) - Remove note will be better.
[SuzumiyaSama's Simple]
00:26:403 (1) - like this?
01:17:273 (1) - change 1/1 slider will be better.
01:19:360 (3) - add NC.
01:40:230 (1) - change 1 note.
nice BGM and map ~
good luck ~
My some tips ~ from queue~
[General]
Delete Enable countdown in all diff plz.
[Expert]
Oh,why Stark Leniency 2?
Restore to default plz,the hidden player not good.
00:25:882 (4) - add NC.
00:45:577 (8) - Remove note will be better.
01:39:969 (9) - move to here X:376 Y:112.
01:42:316 (1) - 1 grid left.
[YukI YukI]
00:34:490 - add note.
01:19:360 (7) - add NC.
01:30:838 - add note.
01:46:490 (7) - add NC.
01:58:490 (1) - Remove NC.
[Stream]
01:19:360 (4) - add NC.
01:37:099 (5) - ^
01:40:490 (6) - Remove note will be better.
[SuzumiyaSama's Simple]
00:26:403 (1) - like this?
01:17:273 (1) - change 1/1 slider will be better.
01:19:360 (3) - add NC.
01:40:230 (1) - change 1 note.
nice BGM and map ~
good luck ~
req from 草莓~
General:
我其实不太明白为什么你那两个难度KIAI之前还要设置一次喷星 我感觉是有点没必要……
countdown弄掉吧 多余
SuzumiyaSama's Simple:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:14:664 (3) - spacing 没必要这里1.5吧
Hitsound
01:30:838 (2) - 我觉得whistle放尾巴上比放头上好一些
01:33:447 (6,1,2,3,4) - 这几个FINISH我个人觉得略乱了 尤其finish在slider1是在第二白线上 到slider4却是在头上 我觉得略违和 看了一下整个KIAI 我觉得可以考虑把这两个01:36:056 (4,1) - finish都放在尾巴上 当然只是建议^^;
Stream:
Hitsound
00:18:838 (4,5,6,1) - 音量增加略突然了 可以考虑逐渐10加大？00:18:838 (4) - 00:19:882 (6) - 这里加。
00:19:882 (6) - 这里感觉finish比whistle好点
00:37:621 (1) - 感觉这里应该finish
00:39:708 (5) - 这里不太应该……
00:44:925 (6) - finish略吵 囧
00:45:969 (1) - finish？
01:08:403 (4) - 开头也whistle吧？过渡感好一点
01:09:969 (3) - 这也加个whistle？其实我推荐3456都加上=A= 比较符合钢琴的样子
01:17:273 (1) - 这个finish很多余
01:29:273 (7) - 加个finish？ 配合你2结尾的finish
01:29:795 (1) - 然后感觉这个finish就不用了
01:32:012 (1) - 转盘也finish
01:33:969 (1) - 然后这个finish就没用了
后面不在重复了 大概说一下我的思路吧 如果你不认同那以上基本都可以忽略掉=A=
因为你KIAI部分的每一个小段落（除了结尾） 基本都是最后一个红线空掉 所以这样我觉得很适合用FINISH来强调最后一个白线的NOTE 而不是用FINISH来强调开头
从这里开始01:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你用的节奏变密集了 所以4白线上下FINISH就感觉有点怪了 就可以考虑都下在长白线上来强调重音
01:54:838 (1) - 结尾2个小段落相对比的话 01:50:664这里开始的这些蓝色的note更像一个过渡 所以我推荐一个FINISH都不加 可以考虑都加在后面红色和橙色note的13白线上
以上都是建议^^; 稍微看看就行了
YukI YukI:
Issues
00:11:273 (5,6) - 2个slider结尾都没有snap上 重新拉一下 都短了
Hitsound
00:35:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...其实我觉得这几个finish满多余的 听起来跟外面插进来的声音似的
01:25:621 (1)- 我不是很明白为什么要单独加finish音量 照我个人看来40其实正好的……
very nice
Expert:
饿了= = 排列似乎没问题
stack leniency那么低是为什么…………
FINISH好乱 =A=
…………没劲了 如果以后有需要再看……觅食去
General:
我其实不太明白为什么你那两个难度KIAI之前还要设置一次喷星 我感觉是有点没必要……
countdown弄掉吧 多余
SuzumiyaSama's Simple:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:14:664 (3) - spacing 没必要这里1.5吧
Hitsound
01:30:838 (2) - 我觉得whistle放尾巴上比放头上好一些
01:33:447 (6,1,2,3,4) - 这几个FINISH我个人觉得略乱了 尤其finish在slider1是在第二白线上 到slider4却是在头上 我觉得略违和 看了一下整个KIAI 我觉得可以考虑把这两个01:36:056 (4,1) - finish都放在尾巴上 当然只是建议^^;
Stream:
Hitsound
00:18:838 (4,5,6,1) - 音量增加略突然了 可以考虑逐渐10加大？00:18:838 (4) - 00:19:882 (6) - 这里加。
00:19:882 (6) - 这里感觉finish比whistle好点
00:37:621 (1) - 感觉这里应该finish
00:39:708 (5) - 这里不太应该……
00:44:925 (6) - finish略吵 囧
00:45:969 (1) - finish？
01:08:403 (4) - 开头也whistle吧？过渡感好一点
01:09:969 (3) - 这也加个whistle？其实我推荐3456都加上=A= 比较符合钢琴的样子
01:17:273 (1) - 这个finish很多余
01:29:273 (7) - 加个finish？ 配合你2结尾的finish
01:29:795 (1) - 然后感觉这个finish就不用了
01:32:012 (1) - 转盘也finish
01:33:969 (1) - 然后这个finish就没用了
后面不在重复了 大概说一下我的思路吧 如果你不认同那以上基本都可以忽略掉=A=
因为你KIAI部分的每一个小段落（除了结尾） 基本都是最后一个红线空掉 所以这样我觉得很适合用FINISH来强调最后一个白线的NOTE 而不是用FINISH来强调开头
从这里开始01:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你用的节奏变密集了 所以4白线上下FINISH就感觉有点怪了 就可以考虑都下在长白线上来强调重音
01:54:838 (1) - 结尾2个小段落相对比的话 01:50:664这里开始的这些蓝色的note更像一个过渡 所以我推荐一个FINISH都不加 可以考虑都加在后面红色和橙色note的13白线上
以上都是建议^^; 稍微看看就行了
YukI YukI:
Issues
00:11:273 (5,6) - 2个slider结尾都没有snap上 重新拉一下 都短了
Hitsound
00:35:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...其实我觉得这几个finish满多余的 听起来跟外面插进来的声音似的
01:25:621 (1)- 我不是很明白为什么要单独加finish音量 照我个人看来40其实正好的……
very nice
Expert:
饿了= = 排列似乎没问题
stack leniency那么低是为什么…………
FINISH好乱 =A=
…………没劲了 如果以后有需要再看……觅食去
Topic Starter
fixed ~>w< thanks to Rika&Nymph's mod
S h i o n wrote:
Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ? 嘛 这个I倒不是打错的原因 我原来的diff都这个名字 要是麻烦的话就现在这样吧
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo fixed
- I like this diff~!
Kawayi Rika wrote:
[YukI YukI]
00:34:490 - add note. there is no rhythm here
01:19:360 (7) - add NC. fixed
01:30:838 - add note. same as above
01:46:490 (7) - add NC. fixed
01:58:490 (1) - Remove NC. different hitsound so i use the newcombo
感谢strawberry帮我改了许多Nymph wrote:
YukI YukI:
Issues
00:11:273 (5,6) - 2个slider结尾都没有snap上 重新拉一下 都短了 fixed
Hitsound
00:35:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...其实我觉得这几个finish满多余的 听起来跟外面插进来的声音似的 这些finish都是另外插进去的 总是whistle和clap太单调
01:25:621 (1)- 我不是很明白为什么要单独加finish音量 照我个人看来40其实正好的…… 高潮部分finish音量都有加大...
very nice
我自己也看了下做出了一些修改
Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [YukI YukI].osu
HIHI~ 來mod摟~
SuzumiyaSama's Simple:
Stream:
YukI YukI:
Expert:
做的不錯喔~ 但是我覺得音效最好有YukI YukI難度的clap會比較恰當
可以的話把YukI YukI難度以外的diff音效加一加吧 ~
祝好運!
SuzumiyaSama's Simple:
SPOILER
00:43:882 (3) - NC
01:36:056 (4) - 開頭刪除finish 結尾加finish並刪除whistle
01:37:099 (5) - 刪除whistle
01:40:751 (2,3,4) - 這對初學者來說太困難了 試試這個~
P.S. 難度名稱會不會太長啊lol! 改成Suzumi's Simple不? (個人覺得這樣比較好~
01:36:056 (4) - 開頭刪除finish 結尾加finish並刪除whistle
01:37:099 (5) - 刪除whistle
01:40:751 (2,3,4) - 這對初學者來說太困難了 試試這個~
P.S. 難度名稱會不會太長啊lol! 改成Suzumi's Simple不? (個人覺得這樣比較好~
Stream:
SPOILER
01:11:012 (7) - NC
01:19:360 (4) - NC?
01:48:577 (6) - NC
01:59:012 (5) - 先把他跟前面的三連拍slider三重疊後 在用Edit / Flip Horizontally 他就會對稱左右轉向 最後會變這樣
01:19:360 (4) - NC?
01:48:577 (6) - NC
01:59:012 (5) - 先把他跟前面的三連拍slider三重疊後 在用Edit / Flip Horizontally 他就會對稱左右轉向 最後會變這樣
YukI YukI:
SPOILER
00:11:273 (5) - NC
00:14:664 (5) - NC
00:27:186 (6) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - 刪除NC
00:29:273 (4) - NC
00:48:056 (5) - NC
00:49:360 (1) - 刪除NC
00:50:143 (4) - NC
00:52:230 (4) - NC
00:56:403 (7) - NC?
01:06:838 (6) - NC
01:11:012 (4) - NC
01:13:099 (6) - NC
01:13:621 (1) - 刪除NC
01:15:186 (5) - NC
01:55:099 (6) - NC
00:14:664 (5) - NC
00:27:186 (6) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - 刪除NC
00:29:273 (4) - NC
00:48:056 (5) - NC
00:49:360 (1) - 刪除NC
00:50:143 (4) - NC
00:52:230 (4) - NC
00:56:403 (7) - NC?
01:06:838 (6) - NC
01:11:012 (4) - NC
01:13:099 (6) - NC
01:13:621 (1) - 刪除NC
01:15:186 (5) - NC
01:55:099 (6) - NC
Expert:
SPOILER
00:11:273 (5) - NC
00:14:664 (5) - NC
00:27:186 (6) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - 刪除NC
00:29:273 (4) - NC
00:48:056 (5) - NC
00:49:360 (1) - 刪除NC
00:50:143 (4) - NC
01:25:621 (3) - NC
01:26:143 (3) - 開頭刪除finish
01:26:925 (5) - 開頭刪除finish並加whistle
01:27:186 (6) - 開頭刪除finish
01:27:708 (1) - 加finish
01:28:229 (3) - 刪除finish並加whistle
01:29:012 (7) - 刪除finish
01:29:273 (8) - 開頭刪除finish並加whistle
01:29:795 (1) - 加finish
01:30:316 (4) - 刪除finish
01:31:360 (10) - 開頭刪除finish
01:31:882 (1) - 加finish
01:36:577 (4) - 刪除finish
01:37:621 (9) - 開頭刪除finish
01:38:143 (1) - 加finish
01:38:664 (3) - 刪除finish
01:41:273 (1,7) - 刪除finish且7加whistle
01:44:925 (4) - 開頭刪除finish
01:45:708 (7) - 刪除finish且開頭加whistle
01:46:490 (1) - 開頭加finish
01:48:056 (6) - 開頭加whistle
01:49:360 (5) - 刪除finish
01:50:143 (7) - 開頭刪除finish
01:54:838 (1) - 加finish
01:56:143 (2,3) - 刪除finish
01:56:925 (1) - 加finish
01:57:186 (3) - 結尾刪除finish並加whistle
01:58:230 (3) - 刪除finish
01:58:751 (3) - 刪除finish
01:59:012 (1) - 刪除finish
00:14:664 (5) - NC
00:27:186 (6) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - 刪除NC
00:29:273 (4) - NC
00:48:056 (5) - NC
00:49:360 (1) - 刪除NC
00:50:143 (4) - NC
01:25:621 (3) - NC
01:26:143 (3) - 開頭刪除finish
01:26:925 (5) - 開頭刪除finish並加whistle
01:27:186 (6) - 開頭刪除finish
01:27:708 (1) - 加finish
01:28:229 (3) - 刪除finish並加whistle
01:29:012 (7) - 刪除finish
01:29:273 (8) - 開頭刪除finish並加whistle
01:29:795 (1) - 加finish
01:30:316 (4) - 刪除finish
01:31:360 (10) - 開頭刪除finish
01:31:882 (1) - 加finish
01:36:577 (4) - 刪除finish
01:37:621 (9) - 開頭刪除finish
01:38:143 (1) - 加finish
01:38:664 (3) - 刪除finish
01:41:273 (1,7) - 刪除finish且7加whistle
01:44:925 (4) - 開頭刪除finish
01:45:708 (7) - 刪除finish且開頭加whistle
01:46:490 (1) - 開頭加finish
01:48:056 (6) - 開頭加whistle
01:49:360 (5) - 刪除finish
01:50:143 (7) - 開頭刪除finish
01:54:838 (1) - 加finish
01:56:143 (2,3) - 刪除finish
01:56:925 (1) - 加finish
01:57:186 (3) - 結尾刪除finish並加whistle
01:58:230 (3) - 刪除finish
01:58:751 (3) - 刪除finish
01:59:012 (1) - 刪除finish
做的不錯喔~ 但是我覺得音效最好有YukI YukI難度的clap會比較恰當
可以的話把YukI YukI難度以外的diff音效加一加吧 ~
祝好運!
最后一个难度还是保持恒定的DS值比较好吧……（我个人认为）
yahoo~~~ TODAY IS SUNDAY RIGHT?!!!RIGHT?!!!
好多铜锣...creator的爱好吗 0 0
SuzumiyaSama's Simple
00:18:838 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:23:012 (3) - 添加whistle
00:27:186 ↑
00:37:621 (1) - 改为whistle
00:41:795 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:50:143 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:54:316 (1) - 改为whistle吗
01:29:795 (1) - ↑
01:33:447 (6) - ↑
01:34:490 ↑
01:36:056 (4) - 删掉finish
01:37:099 (5) - 删掉whistle
01:40:751 (2) - 整个添加whistle
01:41:273 (3) - 后两个↑
01:41:795 (4) - 最后一个↑
01:44:925 删掉finish
01:45:969 改为whistle吗
01:57:447 (2) - 删掉finish吗
01:59:012 (5) - 添加whistle
Stream
好多铜锣 - -、、、finish啥的。。 建议是不要这么多更好。。。其他的倒没什么问题
YukI YukI
这幅很合我胃口...直接射星星了 0 0
Expert
还是铜锣太多了...我本身是不喜欢的 而已...
然后鸡蛋里挑骨头真是难过...
TODAY IS SUNDAY RIGHT?!!!RIGHT?!!!好多铜锣...creator的爱好吗 0 0
SuzumiyaSama's Simple
00:18:838 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:23:012 (3) - 添加whistle
00:27:186 ↑
00:37:621 (1) - 改为whistle
00:41:795 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:50:143 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:54:316 (1) - 改为whistle吗
01:29:795 (1) - ↑
01:33:447 (6) - ↑
01:34:490 ↑
01:36:056 (4) - 删掉finish
01:37:099 (5) - 删掉whistle
01:40:751 (2) - 整个添加whistle
01:41:273 (3) - 后两个↑
01:41:795 (4) - 最后一个↑
01:44:925 删掉finish
01:45:969 改为whistle吗
01:57:447 (2) - 删掉finish吗
01:59:012 (5) - 添加whistle
Stream
好多铜锣 - -、、、finish啥的。。 建议是不要这么多更好。。。其他的倒没什么问题
YukI YukI
这幅很合我胃口...直接射星星了 0 0
Expert
还是铜锣太多了...我本身是不喜欢的 而已...
然后鸡蛋里挑骨头真是难过...
Topic Starter
thx to bossandy&Anshi‘s mod(&star
update~
update~clean map
你有感觉到吗？别人开始随便mod你的图了(ie hitsound / grid 1 grid 2 / new combo / change to slider / change pattern)
这些mod让我想吐
那就是你的图已经很干净了，但是我感觉不到激情啊。。。。
做一些奇怪的pattern跟slider给那些人mod啦
你的图就像莫扎特做的，很乖，follow the rules, if i am a MAT i will just bubble without saying anything.
做一些beethoven会做的事情吧呵呵
get some kick
我不mod(dont rape me)XD
你有感觉到吗？别人开始随便mod你的图了(ie hitsound / grid 1 grid 2 / new combo / change to slider / change pattern)
这些mod让我想吐
那就是你的图已经很干净了，但是我感觉不到激情啊。。。。
做一些奇怪的pattern跟slider给那些人mod啦
你的图就像莫扎特做的，很乖，follow the rules, if i am a MAT i will just bubble without saying anything.
做一些beethoven会做的事情吧呵呵
get some kick
我不mod(dont rape me)XD
Topic Starter
><感谢你的建议.L_P wrote:
clean map
你有感觉到吗？别人开始随便mod你的图了(ie hitsound / grid 1 grid 2 / new combo / change to slider / change pattern)
这些mod让我想吐
那就是你的图已经很干净了，但是我感觉不到激情啊。。。。
做一些奇怪的pattern跟slider给那些人mod啦
你的图就像莫扎特做的，很乖，follow the rules, if i am a MAT i will just bubble without saying anything.
做一些beethoven会做的事情吧呵呵
get some kick
我不mod(dont rape me)XD
开始做这首歌的时候就希望他最终可以rank而不是像以前一样坑掉(因为我太喜欢这首歌
.所以铺面下起来可能就会过于拘谨.
这张图应该不会做出较大的变更了（除非BAT/MAT的要求
不过以后我会努力改进的:3 ☆
Topic Starter
Yumeko Yuki wrote:
S h i o n wrote:
Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ? 嘛 这个I倒不是打错的原因 我原来的diff都这个名字 要是麻烦的话就现在这样吧
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo fixed
- I like this diff~!Kawayi Rika wrote:
[YukI YukI]
00:34:490 - add note. there is no rhythm here
01:19:360 (7) - add NC. fixed
01:30:838 - add note. same as above
01:46:490 (7) - add NC. fixed
01:58:490 (1) - Remove NC. different hitsound so i use the newcombo感谢strawberry帮我改了许多Nymph wrote:
YukI YukI:
Issues
00:11:273 (5,6) - 2个slider结尾都没有snap上 重新拉一下 都短了 fixed
Hitsound
00:35:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...其实我觉得这几个finish满多余的 听起来跟外面插进来的声音似的 这些finish都是另外插进去的 总是whistle和clap太单调
01:25:621 (1)- 我不是很明白为什么要单独加finish音量 照我个人看来40其实正好的…… 高潮部分finish音量都有加大...
very nice
我自己也看了下做出了一些修改
抱歉我擅自改了你的diff名 ><我尽快改回来lolHi~
Wonderful map u have there, can't wait 4 this to get ranked ^^
btw, random mod.
On expert and YukI YukI diff, at [01:21:447] (spinner1) I to change it into a slider, I think it's better.
And maybe at [01:23:534] (spinner1) I suggest to do the same...
And...., at Expert Diff, I suggest to reduce AR to 7
okay, thx....~
Wonderful map u have there, can't wait 4 this to get ranked ^^
btw, random mod.
On expert and YukI YukI diff, at [01:21:447] (spinner1) I to change it into a slider, I think it's better.
And maybe at [01:23:534] (spinner1) I suggest to do the same...
And...., at Expert Diff, I suggest to reduce AR to 7
okay, thx....~
Topic Starter
nanda2009 wrote:
Hi~
Wonderful map u have there, can't wait 4 this to get ranked ^^
btw, random mod.
On expert and YukI YukI diff, at [01:21:447] (spinner1) I to change it into a slider, I think it's better. i think spinner has more interesting><
And maybe at [01:23:534] (spinner1) I suggest to do the same...
And...., at Expert Diff, I suggest to reduce AR to 7 some pro player may think AR7 is too simple?
okay, thx....~
thank youHi!
From my queue
General
Delete the OSB file
Suzumiya's Simple
00:14:664 (3)-add finish in the end of the slider
00:47:012 (2)-new combo and check the spacing
00:49:099 (1)-new combo
01:22:490 (1)-instead of finsish,add clap
01:23:273 (2)-remove finish
Stream
00:31:360 (4)-new combo
00:38:664 (2)-new combo
00:39:708 (4)-new combo
01:15:186 (5)^
Yuki Yuki
00:19:882 (7)-new combo
Why this diff has only Custom hitsounds? it's better to put also in the other diffs and use claps in kiai parts
Expert
00:28:230 (4)-new combo
00:53:012 (6)-new combo
00:53:534 (9)-new combo
01:43:882 (5)-move the tail of the slider 1 grid down
Nice map !
From my queue
General
Delete the OSB file
Suzumiya's Simple
00:14:664 (3)-add finish in the end of the slider
00:47:012 (2)-new combo and check the spacing
00:49:099 (1)-new combo
01:22:490 (1)-instead of finsish,add clap
01:23:273 (2)-remove finish
Stream
00:31:360 (4)-new combo
00:38:664 (2)-new combo
00:39:708 (4)-new combo
01:15:186 (5)^
Yuki Yuki
00:19:882 (7)-new combo
Why this diff has only Custom hitsounds? it's better to put also in the other diffs and use claps in kiai parts
Expert
00:28:230 (4)-new combo
00:53:012 (6)-new combo
00:53:534 (9)-new combo
01:43:882 (5)-move the tail of the slider 1 grid down
Nice map !