00:24:942 (10) - kiai doesn't seem to fit here
00:50:942 - kiai here

00:26:760 - Maybe put a slider here?
00:29:670 - ^
00:48:579 - It seems better to start the spinner here
00:16:215 (4) - New Combo
00:16:215 (4) - New Combo
00:24:942 (10) - New Combo
00:27:851 (13) - New Combo
00:30:760 (17) - New Combo
00:56:397 (8) - New Combo

00:19:124 (3) - Make this a normal slider instead of a reverse slider
00:40:942 (6) - New Combo
00:56:215 - Circle here?
01:22:760 - ^

00:29:306 - Circle here?
00:26:397 - ^
00:48:397 - Spinner here?
00:49:670 (12) - New Combo
00:59:851 - I think this could be a good place for sliders rather than a long spinner
01:19:851 - End the slider here

00:13:298 (2,3,4) - make spacing lower
00:23:298 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - we are not in 2008, make patterns more flowy
Kiai is easier than some moments on map
01:17:298 (6) - ;_; 3.87*
01:22:752 (7) - ^
00:10:389 (7,8,9,1) - it's insane not extra, make spacing lower
Good job, and Successful mapping. <3

This diff does need to be fixed here and there but I don't have too much to say about it right now

00:04:570 (3) - this slider can relate to the previous circles better, perhaps place it like one of these two:


00:10:388 (1) - this slider can be rounder, to reflect the music better
00:51:116 (1) - could place a circle here
01:23:116 (4) - this could be split into two sliders

00:27:843 (1) - this object and the three following it could be placed better, as it is difficult to read
00:46:752 (10) - new combo
01:02:752 (11) - new combo (always start a new combo when the slider velocity changes)
01:14:025 (3) - this can overlap with the previous slider better
01:17:297 (2) - this slider shape is inconsistent with the rest of the map

Maybe make the CS on this diff a little lower?
00:33:479 (1) - this new combo is out of place
01:15:297 (4) - new combo

00:13:297 (9) - new combo
00:07:843 (2) - this slider could be half as long, and repeat to reflect the music better. Also the slider velocity could be lower for this starting section
00:09:297 (5) - see above ^
00:13:297 (9) - new combo
00:14:934 (14) - new combo
00:17:116 (9) - the beginning of this slider can overlap with the note at 00:16:388 (4) - putting it at pos x:268 y:180
00:17:843 (11) - the new combo should go here, not the note after
00:19:116 (4) - new combo, just put new combos whenever the singer changes between the girl and guy and you should be good
00:29:116 (8) - and 00:29:479 (9) - aren't very consistent or nice-looking slider shapes, consider changing them?
00:43:843 (8) - this note should overlap with the slider underneath it, so they look consistent

This diff is pretty good, I don't have any major issues with it~

00:13:297 (1,2) - The spacing here is not consistently the same as at the next part 00:16:207 (1,2,3)
00:19:116 (4,5) - The spacing is too wide for the short gap in notes
00:22:025 (6) - (Not sure if url is broken so: http://imgur.com/1tyGY6k&#41;, to make it flow better, shorten the slider to make it the exact same rhythmic length but a a double reverse slider
00:26:752 (4) - Not sync'd with the music, shift the timing of the slider 1 position back (like hit circle 2 and 3, no gap in between like it is currently with note 3 and 4)

00:37:661 (2,3) - Weird timing with the slider to the hit circle (also since the hit circle is stacked, make the stack more obvious [for HD players mainly])
00:38:752 (4,5) - ^^ Same problem as above, but even weirder (I understand the song slows down and emphasises the change in timing, but is not very readable to the player)

Nice work!

00:50:752 (5,1) - Just as Kiai time activates, have this slider have more space in between the previous stream (a little misleading being next to it)
01:25:843 (3,4) - A little more spacing for more emphasis on the final note, looks a little weird with the visual spacing currently present

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TitleUnicode:だいすき だよ だいすき だよ うまれてきて ありがとう
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ArtistUnicode:加隈 亜衣 & 岡本 信彦
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