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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 14 de abril de 2018 at 20:53:01

Artist: Tomita Miyu, Onishi Saori, Ohzora Naomi, Hanazawa Kana
Title: Gabriel Drop Kick
Source: ガヴリールドロップアウト
Tags: dropout gabdro dropkick ガヴドロ opening tv size tenma gabriel white 天真・ガヴリール・ホワイト tsukinose vignette april 月乃瀬・ヴィネット・エイプリル vigne ヴィーネ kurumizawa satanichia mcdowell 胡桃沢・サタニキア・マクドウェル satania サターニャ shiraha raphiel ainsworth 白羽・ラフィエル・エインズワース
BPM: 168
Filesize: 5349kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,11 stars, 171 notes)
  2. Inner Tenshi (4,66 stars, 455 notes)
  3. Kantan (1,29 stars, 108 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3,07 stars, 284 notes)
  5. Oni (3,5 stars, 364 notes)


Download: Tomita Miyu, Onishi Saori, Ohzora Naomi, Hanazawa Kana - Gabriel Drop Kick
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  3. Applied davidminh0111's mod - 21/05/17
  4. Applied Skylish's mod - 07/06/17
  5. Revived beatmap - 02/09/17
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  14. Applied Alwaysyukaz's mod - 28/12/17
  15. Applied Volta's check - 28/01/18
  16. Applied Skylish's check - 02/03/18
  17. Skylish's bubble - 12/04/18
  18. Volta's qualify - 14/05/18
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hi ( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
frist >:3


[ Kantan ]

00:37:018 (13) - move to 00:37:197. to follow vocal.

00:40:947 (19,20) - futsuu is dd, maybe change?

00:48:804 (6,7) - finish to emphasize.

00:55:947 (14) - finish. there's symbol crash sound.

01:23:089 (17,18,19) - little awkward to me. how about focusing strong sound like 01:24:161?



[ Futsuu ]

00:08:447 (7) - delete. no circle in muzukashii diff.

00:13:089 (8,15) - finish. you use finish all diff without this diff.

00:55:947 (23) - finish. there's symbol crash sound.

01:10:947 - add circle or move 01:10:768 (12) to here. 01:10:947 is the place that change code.

01:16:661 - ^

01:23:089 (26,27,28) - little awkward to me. how about focusing strong sound like 01:24:161?



[ Muzukashii ]

00:20:232 (43,44,45) - DDK or DKK? going higher.

00:36:125 (30) - k? there's no reason to use finish imo.

00:55:947 (50) - finish. there's symbol crash sound.

01:10:054 (19,20,21) - ddk. 01:10:232 (21) high both vocal and synth sound.

01:15:947 (21) - ^

01:23:804 (52) - little awkward to me. i think empty 01:24:161 is little better to use circle.



[ Oni ]

from 00:03:090 (1) to 00:08:804 (15) - same with tenshi diff

00:20:231 (61,62,63) - DDK or DKK? going higher.

00:36:125 (33) - k? there's no reason to use finish imo.

00:55:946 (79) - finish. there's symbol crash sound.

from 00:58:803 (89) to 01:03:089 (115) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8080764? no empty place, and easier than tenshi diff.



[ Tenshi...? ]

idk this diff name is rankable, but nice naming sense xD

00:07:018 (13,14) - ctrl g? the vocal melody of 00:07:018 (13) is lower 1 octave with 00:06:661 (12) so maybe d imo.

00:08:804 (17) - k. no strong sound isn't here, only high pitch sound here. and same melody with 00:08:447 (16).

00:20:232 (77,78,79) - DDK or DKK? going higher.

00:36:125 (44) - k? there's no reason to use finish imo.

00:44:518 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about following vocal melody? this is my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8080666. empty for 00:44:607 so more easy to catch beat.

00:55:947 (96) - finish. there's symbol crash sound.

from 01:20:232 (46) to 01:21:482 (55) - mirror pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8080666 to avoid same color.



good luck~
posted
Sorry for delay :o

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi ( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
frist >:3


[ Kantan ]

00:37:018 (13) - move to 00:37:197. to follow vocal. Ok

00:40:947 (19,20) - futsuu is dd, maybe change? Yeah, changed

00:48:804 (6,7) - finish to emphasize. I think it don't need this for now, I feel that saturates the sound for this note 00:50:232 (8) -

00:55:947 (14) - finish. there's symbol crash sound. Ok

01:23:089 (17,18,19) - little awkward to me. how about focusing strong sound like 01:24:161? I try to follow the vowel here



[ Futsuu ]

00:08:447 (7) - delete. no circle in muzukashii diff. Deleted and added in Muzukashii

00:13:089 (8,15) - finish. you use finish all diff without this diff. I do not want to use many finisher as it being a Futsuu, should have an little 'introduction' to the Muzukashii

00:55:947 (23) - finish. there's symbol crash sound. Ok

01:10:947 - add circle or move 01:10:768 (12) to here. 01:10:947 is the place that change code. Moved

01:16:661 - ^ Ok

01:23:089 (26,27,28) - little awkward to me. how about focusing strong sound like 01:24:161? Same as Kantan



[ Muzukashii ]

00:20:232 (43,44,45) - DDK or DKK? going higher. DDK

00:36:125 (30) - k? there's no reason to use finish imo. Finishet to vocal

00:55:947 (50) - finish. there's symbol crash sound. Ok

01:10:054 (19,20,21) - ddk. 01:10:232 (21) high both vocal and synth sound. I don't use ddk 1/4 or similar in Muzukashii.

01:15:947 (21) - ^ Nope

01:23:804 (52) - little awkward to me. i think empty 01:24:161 is little better to use circle. Added and deleted 01:24:875 -



[ Oni ]

from 00:03:090 (1) to 00:08:804 (15) - same with tenshi diff Nope, I do not see this 00:07:018 - needed in Oni

00:20:231 (61,62,63) - DDK or DKK? going higher. DDK

00:36:125 (33) - k? there's no reason to use finish imo. Same as Muzukashii

00:55:946 (79) - finish. there's symbol crash sound. Ok

from 00:58:803 (89) to 01:03:089 (115) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8080764? no empty place, and easier than tenshi diff. I change this in K d d K ddd K



[ Tenshi...? ]

idk this diff name is rankable, but nice naming sense xD The last diff (Inner Oni) can be another name, because it's a extra diff. Thanks xD

00:07:018 (13,14) - ctrl g? the vocal melody of 00:07:018 (13) is lower 1 octave with 00:06:661 (12) so maybe d imo. You're right, changed

00:08:804 (17) - k. no strong sound isn't here, only high pitch sound here. and same melody with 00:08:447 (16). Of course, to vary with the others diff

00:20:232 (77,78,79) - DDK or DKK? going higher. DDK

00:36:125 (44) - k? there's no reason to use finish imo. Sames as Oni,Muzukashii

00:44:518 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about following vocal melody? this is my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8080666. empty for 00:44:607 so more easy to catch beat. I thought remap this, for now I accept

00:55:947 (96) - finish. there's symbol crash sound. Ok

from 01:20:232 (46) to 01:21:482 (55) - mirror pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8080666 to avoid same color. The sound is consistent for me, does not bother me that is the same. For now I keep



good luck~
Thanks for mod :D
Beatmap updated~
posted
Hi from my queue:
2nd

[Kantan]
00:05:947: Change to k? It would fit the pitch

00:18:089: Change to d? ^^

00:20:232: Remove drum? Nothing strong here.

00:23:804: add k? To represent the vocal of the music

00:25:589: Move this note to 00:25:947 and delete this note 00:26:304 to flow better

00:31:304: Move to 00:31:661 . Delete 00:32:018. ^

[Futsuu]
00:14:875: Change to k, fit the pitch

00:23:447: Add k to follow the vocal

00:28:089 and 00:28:804: Swap color

Muzu is good btw

[Oni]
00:03:090: Change to K to fit the pitch

00:05:947: I think kkd is better to fit the pitch

00:14:339: Add d to follow the vocal

00:17:197:^

00:18:625: Add k

00:22:554: ^

Inner is good

That's all for me.
Good luck on ranking
posted

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hi from my queue:
2nd

[Kantan]
00:05:947: Change to k? It would fit the pitch I follow the high tone of the violin like 00:04:518 (1) -

00:18:089: Change to d? ^^ Piano pitch and snare

00:20:232: Remove drum? Nothing strong here. What? I listen stronger sound

00:23:804: add k? To represent the vocal of the music Added

00:25:589: Move this note to 00:25:947 and delete this note 00:26:304 to flow better Here I follow the vocal and think it's fine as it is now

00:31:304: Move to 00:31:661 . Delete 00:32:018. ^ Same as above ^

[Futsuu]
00:14:875: Change to k, fit the pitch Changed

00:23:447: Add k to follow the vocal Added

00:28:089 and 00:28:804: Swap color Applied

Muzu is good btw Thanks!

[Oni]
00:03:090: Change to K to fit the pitch k without finisher, I feel that saturates the sound

00:05:947: I think kkd is better to fit the pitch Changed kdk to follow the vocal

00:14:339: Add d to follow the vocal I want to keep the breaks alike, so I don't add

00:17:197:^ Same as above ^

00:18:625: Add k Same reason as 00:14:339

00:22:554: ^ Following the flow of the violin

Inner is good Thanks

That's all for me.
Good luck on ranking
Thanks for mod! :D
Beatmap updated~
posted
yo
M4M

[Muzukashii]
gap Futsuu ~ Muzukashii = 146
gap Muzukashii ~ Oni = 92
consider to reduce some note in muzukashii

00:44:161 - make triplet ?? oni have 5plet here
00:44:518 - start from here it's to monotoune imo, maybe delete some note like 00:45:411 - | 00:46:839 - | 00:48:268 -

00:55:589 - change don
01:09:875 (18,19,20,21) - d ddd make d k d,
01:15:589 - ^

[Oni]
00:07:018 - maybe add note
01:18:268 - move 01:18:625 - ?? vocal has stop here
01:19:697 - ^


[Tennshi]
00:13:893 - change kat ??
00:25:768 (97,98,99) - invert, following flow
00:29:875 - change kat, to give variety
00:56:482 - maybe add note

01:09:697 - maybe add note
01:15:411 - ^

that's all from me
good luck
posted
Sorry for delay :o

[R] wrote:

yo
M4M

[Muzukashii]
gap Futsuu ~ Muzukashii = 146
gap Muzukashii ~ Oni = 92
consider to reduce some note in muzukashii I'm really bad at distribute the notes to have a consistent spread, I will consider it

00:44:161 - make triplet ?? oni have 5plet here Applied
00:44:518 - start from here it's to monotoune imo, maybe delete some note like 00:45:411 - | 00:46:839 - | 00:48:268 - I deleted 00:46:839 - 00:45:411. I keep it 00:48:089 (17,18,19) - for vary and don't only ooo o o

00:55:589 - change don Changed
01:09:875 (18,19,20,21) - d ddd make d k d, Ok
01:15:589 - ^ ^

[Oni]
00:07:018 - maybe add note I do not add, I do it to keep the difference between Oni and Tenshi
01:18:268 - move 01:18:625 - ?? vocal has stop here I removed this note
01:19:697 - ^ ^


[Tennshi]
00:13:893 - change kat ?? Of course
00:25:768 (97,98,99) - invert, following flow I moved this 00:25:857 (98) - to 00:26:214 -
00:29:875 - change kat, to give variety I change also it 00:24:161 (90) - by high tone
00:56:482 - maybe add note I moved 00:56:304 (95) - in 00:56:482 -

01:09:697 - maybe add note Keep, I try to emphasize the finisher with the vocel
01:15:411 - ^ Same

that's all from me
good luck
Thanks for mod :D
Beatmap updated~
posted
From my modding queue, casual mod here to point out eye-catching issues:

[Kantan]

> OD= 3 for a better OD balance?

> 00:20:232 (11,12,13) - triplet D in 1/1 may be a bit hard for Kantan level players. They may struggle a bit while double tapping the keys at the same time lol. I think D D is okay right here.

> 00:40:947 (22,23) - kk for high-pitch vocal?

> 00:48:804 (6,7) - they should be Finishers. The instrumental part here is pretty similar to that at 00:20:232 (11,12,13) -

> 01:24:518 - this note should hit on the vocal at 01:24:161 - , right?

[Futsuu]

> 00:12:375 (6,7) - this douplet sounds really off, I do not understand what is it for. Removing (7) is good to go.

> 00:15:589 - one more kat right here to finish the instrumental part. The density will be acceptable even you link up 00:15:947 - (You may add it as well in Kantan)

> 00:40:947 (30,31) - same in Kantan

> 01:23:804 (27) - how about this:

01:24:518 - this timing is pretty void for vocal mapping. The actual vocal notes fall on 01:24:161 - / 01:24:875 - . Some difficulties have this issue as well, let's see how you are going to fix them.

> 01:25:947 - d k to show the pitch flow better? It's applicable in other difficulties.

[Muzukashii]

> 00:58:804 - / 01:00:411 - / 01:02:018 - they are meant to be right if you see them individually, but it is too boring in game play and too repetitive. Variations are needed obviously.

[Tenshi]

> 00:58:804 - same case in Muzukashii

> 01:04:518 (1,1,2,3,1) - mixing notes with spinner is weird. Most of the time players will finish the spinner earlier that it meant to be and they have to pay attention to some notes (01:05:589 (1,2,3) - ) which should be masked by the spinner actually. You can imagine that, it is really weird in game play effect.

> 01:06:750 - / 01:07:464 - you can remove them as they are too clumsy to express the melody. Stating out the vocal patterns cleanly is better than increasing the density over the vocal part.

> 01:12:464 - / 01:13:179 - same as above

> 01:18:447 - / 01:19:875 - what if you put those SV changes right on the 'WAA~' ? That'd better imo.

> 01:20:589 - / 01:21:304 - ^

[]

Just a quick screen of the mapset. You need more mods for feedback and advices for sure.
posted
Sorry for delay :o

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue, casual mod here to point out eye-catching issues:

[Kantan]

> OD= 3 for a better OD balance? Changed

> 00:20:232 (11,12,13) - triplet D in 1/1 may be a bit hard for Kantan level players. They may struggle a bit while double tapping the keys at the same time lol. I think D D is okay right here. Deleted note

> 00:40:947 (22,23) - kk for high-pitch vocal? Yeah, changed

> 00:48:804 (6,7) - they should be Finishers. The instrumental part here is pretty similar to that at 00:20:232 (11,12,13) - Added finishers

> 01:24:518 - this note should hit on the vocal at 01:24:161 - , right? Right, but here I am following the piano, I think if I follow the voice is inconsistent with the beginning of the song. I change it to don

[Futsuu]

> 00:12:375 (6,7) - this douplet sounds really off, I do not understand what is it for. Removing (7) is good to go. Removed

> 00:15:589 - one more kat right here to finish the instrumental part. The density will be acceptable even you link up 00:15:947 - (You may add it as well in Kantan) I had not added as I wanted to make it a little easier to play the finisher. Added (in kantan same)

> 00:40:947 (30,31) - same in Kantan Yeah

> 01:23:804 (27) - how about this: I feel that (30) isn't good, because here no sound. I changed the colors

01:24:518 - this timing is pretty void for vocal mapping. The actual vocal notes fall on 01:24:161 - / 01:24:875 - . Some difficulties have this issue as well, let's see how you are going to fix them. I try to follow the high tone of vocal like 01:24:518 - 01:25:232 -

> 01:25:947 - d k to show the pitch flow better? It's applicable in other difficulties. Ok

[Muzukashii]

> 00:58:804 - / 01:00:411 - / 01:02:018 - they are meant to be right if you see them individually, but it is too boring in game play and too repetitive. Variations are needed obviously. I think the same, but I also think that adding another color when this is the same as the finisher it feels a bit hard. For now I keep

[Tenshi]

> 00:58:804 - same case in Muzukashii Same

> 01:04:518 (1,1,2,3,1) - mixing notes with spinner is weird. Most of the time players will finish the spinner earlier that it meant to be and they have to pay attention to some notes (01:05:589 (1,2,3) - ) which should be masked by the spinner actually. You can imagine that, it is really weird in game play effect. You're right, I extend the spinner until 01:05:768 -

> 01:06:750 - / 01:07:464 - you can remove them as they are too clumsy to express the melody. Stating out the vocal patterns cleanly is better than increasing the density over the vocal part.

> 01:12:464 - / 01:13:179 - same as above Really, I want to keep them, because they make the voice stand out more than the instrumental (plus it makes difference Oni). If I delete that would be equally that repetitive Oni. I'll try for the better sound

> 01:18:447 - / 01:19:875 - what if you put those SV changes right on the 'WAA~' ? That'd better imo. Nice, applied

> 01:20:589 - / 01:21:304 - ^ Applied

[]

Just a quick screen of the mapset. You need more mods for feedback and advices for sure. Yeah, I still searching mods, thanks!
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
posted
well , i was gonna update my map but BSS sever down.... ;w; so mod this map first.




[ Kantan]

01:05:947 (1) - might it could add finish for kiai time start.

perfect kantan :3

[ Futsuu]

wow, i can't find any errors nor suggestions...

add star x2 here, sorry for mod. xD
posted

Diva Days wrote:

well , i was gonna update my map but BSS sever down.... ;w; so mod this map first.




[ Kantan]

01:05:947 (1) - might it could add finish for kiai time start. No, I feel that saturates the sound. Here I try to follow the tone of vocal

perfect kantan :3 ty~

[ Futsuu]

wow, i can't find any errors nor suggestions...

add star x2 here, sorry for mod. xD
Thanks anyway for the stars!
posted
Hi gaston, from my queue, 2nd mod.
No kudosu to me

Gonna mod Muzukashii and Tenshi because I haven't mod them yet

[Tenshi...?]
00:03:625: You can do kdkkk to fit the pitch

00:24:161: You can delete this note to make consistency in 00:23:447

00:25:322: Here you can move this note to 00:25:500 I feel like this way will be better

00:26:482 (101, 102): Ctrl + G?

00:29:875: Same reason, delete

00:30:768: Delete since it doesn't do anything

00:35:411: Delete this triplet, leave a note at 00:35:232 and delete this either 00:35:589

00:36:750: Move this to 00:36:929

00:41:661: Put a note here for the echo

[Muzukashii]
00:03:625: Same reason as Tenshi...?

00:07:018: Did you miss a note?

00:08:447 (14, 15): Ctrl + G? To fit the pitch

00:30:768 and 00:31:036: Delete to follow vocal

00:37:554: Maybe dkdk?

00:59:697 (59, 60): Ctrl + G? Apply for the next flow

01:17:911: Add note?

01:19:339: ^

01:23:447: ^

01:24:875: ^

GL on ranking

And here, free star
posted

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hi gaston, from my queue, 2nd mod. I forgot you mod this lol
No kudosu to me

Gonna mod Muzukashii and Tenshi because I haven't mod them yet

[Tenshi...?]
00:03:625: You can do kdkkk to fit the pitch I follow the vocal here, the pich is fine imo

00:24:161: You can delete this note to make consistency in 00:23:447 It may be, but if I remove it feels very empty. For now i keep

00:25:322: Here you can move this note to 00:25:500 I feel like this way will be better Fixed

00:26:482 (101, 102): Ctrl + G? The snare don't fall good, keep

00:29:875: Same reason, delete Keep for now

00:30:768: Delete since it doesn't do anything Consistency with 00:25:054 -. I listen a drum there

00:35:411: Delete this triplet, leave a note at 00:35:232 and delete this either 00:35:589 I listen drum there, anyway I delete the triplet

00:36:750: Move this to 00:36:929 Moved

00:41:661: Put a note here for the echo I do not think it's necessary to emphasize the echo that way, since that's where stoping the instruments

[Muzukashii]
00:03:625: Same reason as Tenshi...? I keep for now

00:07:018: Did you miss a note? Yeah

00:08:447 (14, 15): Ctrl + G? To fit the pitch Ok

00:30:768 and 00:31:036: Delete to follow vocal Concistency with 00:25:054 (58,59,60,61,62,63) -

00:37:554: Maybe dkdk? Yeah

00:59:697 (59, 60): Ctrl + G? Apply for the next flow I changed only 00:59:161 (58,59,60,61,68,69,70,1) - to follow the vocal pitch

01:17:911: Add note?

01:19:339: ^ The rhytm is a bit hard to follow if it's after this 01: 17: 643 (26) -

01:23:447: ^

01:24:875: ^ I would like to keep the breaks for the players to rest after this 01: 21: 661 -

GL on ranking

And here, free star ty :D
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
posted
M4M

Hola, hace mucho no hago un mod para taiko, asi que puede que sea un poco... regular el mod pero bueno
Nota: solo son sugerencias y queda a decision tuya cambiar lo necesario

Kantan

Está perfecto

Futsuu

[*]00:27:911 (38) - Agrega un k
[*]00:47:732 (8) - Cambiala a k

Muzukashii

00:57:197 (51) - Agrega un d
01:23:625 (50) - Agrega un d

Oni

01:23:625 (62) - Lo mismo que Muzukashii


Lo se, es un mod corto... No le vi tanto para cambiar, esta muy bien hecho todo
Espero que la rankeen, me gusta la cancion y el mapa :)
posted
Hi there o/ here is my mod (m4m from ur queue)

[Tenshi..?]


  1. 00:07:911 - i think this has same pitch like (14) and (16) so might be better if this change to don. also for stronger emphasize for kat at 00:08:804 -
  2. 00:10:232 - this hs volume should be louder than slow part. try change to 85% instead?
  3. 00:12:197 - the pitch is going high and suddenly down at 00:12:375 - so this would be better as a kat here
  4. 00:27:018 - try making smoother sv changes by adding x0.88 instead. to avoid overlap
  5. 01:21:661 - same as above. i think decrease x0.02 per notes would be better. to avoid overlap like above


[Oni]

pull down the bg to show her whole face. i suggest:
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Oni.jpg",0,33

  1. 00:07:911 - same as tenshi
  2. 00:15:768 - delete this, to emphasize both (kat before to this and don after to this). it doesn't ruin any structure imo
  3. 00:18:625 - to 00:20:232 - this gap with muzu is quite huge. try to nerf some notes from this part or try make harder on muzu.
  4. 00:27:018 - same as i've mentioned in highest diff
  5. 00:44:697 - to 00:48:804 - try to delete one triplets in each pattern(?) for smaller gap with muzu
  6. 00:50:232 - to 00:55:947 - give some small breaks (at least 1/1 break). this is too long for oni i guess. also for smaller gap with muzu
  7. 01:07:197 - delete this? same issue as above. for smaller gap with muzu and too long.
  8. 01:12:911 - ^


[Muzukashii]

more pull down the bg to show her whole face to
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Muzukashii.jpg",0,80
  1. 00:07:911 - same as tenshi
  2. 00:15:768 - oni doesn't even have a note here. how come lower diff has a note while higher don't? add kat for oni or delete this
  3. 00:19:697 - add a don here? this muzu feels like futsuu with slightly harder version lol
  4. 00:27:018 - same issue, about sv and overlap
  5. 00:50:054 - delete this, would be enough if only 1/2 triplet. because futsuu is completely blank


[Futsuu]

  1. 00:07:018 - add kat here? amount note from 00:05:947 - is same. make this different
  2. 00:19:161 - out of consistency with 00:13:089 -


[Kantan]

more pull down the bg to show their whole head
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Kantan.jpg",0,90

  1. nothing to do here :c


i'm honestly confused with lower diff because those look easier than i normally see :( that's all, hope my mod helps you. good luck for rank :D
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eliancapox9 wrote:

M4M

Hola, hace mucho no hago un mod para taiko, asi que puede que sea un poco... regular el mod pero bueno
Nota: solo son sugerencias y queda a decision tuya cambiar lo necesario

Kantan

Está perfecto

Futsuu

[*]00:27:911 (38) - Agrega un k Evito agregar notas ahí porque el tono de esta parte es muy tranquilo en comparación con 00:24:518 - que es mucho más fuerte
[*]00:47:732 (8) - Cambiala a k Sigo la voz aquí. También si te das cuenta, todo el patrón 00:47:375 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - es lo mismo que 00:44:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , sólo que los colores están invertidos, así que cambiarlos perdería la consistencia.

Muzukashii

00:57:197 (51) - Agrega un d No escucho ningún sonido como para agregar una nota ahí
01:23:625 (50) - Agrega un d Solamente sigo la vocal en esa parte

Oni

01:23:625 (62) - Lo mismo que Muzukashii Ya dije mis razones ^


Lo se, es un mod corto... No le vi tanto para cambiar, esta muy bien hecho todo No importa, se puede mejorar! Podrías dar más detalles del por qué hacer dicho cambio, probando patrones, etc.
Espero que la rankeen, me gusta la cancion y el mapa :)Eso espero, muchas gracias!

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi there o/ here is my mod (m4m from ur queue)Hey thanks!

[Tenshi..?]


  1. 00:07:911 - i think this has same pitch like (14) and (16) so might be better if this change to don. also for stronger emphasize for kat at 00:08:804 - Yeah, so better
  2. 00:10:232 - this hs volume should be louder than slow part. try change to 85% instead? Hmm, I think overall volume is the same, maybe I would change some volume but don't for now
  3. 00:12:197 - the pitch is going high and suddenly down at 00:12:375 - so this would be better as a kat here Yeah, you're right
  4. 00:27:018 - try making smoother sv changes by adding x0.88 instead. to avoid overlap It's readeable imo, this diff is more to players experimented, so I think those players can read it
  5. 01:21:661 - same as above. i think decrease x0.02 per notes would be better. to avoid overlap like above Yeah, after a stream it could be a bit hard


[Oni]

pull down the bg to show her whole face. i suggest:
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Oni.jpg",0,33 Looks better, changed

  1. 00:07:911 - same as tenshi Ok
  2. 00:15:768 - delete this, to emphasize both (kat before to this and don after to this). it doesn't ruin any structure imo I'll keep this but deleted this 00:15:054 - . The snare is very noticeable
  3. 00:18:625 - to 00:20:232 - this gap with muzu is quite huge. try to nerf some notes from this part or try make harder on muzu. I removed some notes and put a break in 00:18:982 -
  4. 00:27:018 - same as i've mentioned in highest diff Well, that is a problem because is for low players... I'll keep for now, I'll see what I make
  5. 00:44:697 - to 00:48:804 - try to delete one triplets in each pattern(?) for smaller gap with muzu Nice idea, applied.
  6. 00:50:232 - to 00:55:947 - give some small breaks (at least 1/1 break). this is too long for oni i guess. also for smaller gap with muzu I realized about it, I nerfer those part and added some notes in muzu
  7. 01:07:197 - delete this? same issue as above. for smaller gap with muzu and too long. Yeah, also I realized it, I deleted some notes and triplets to convert it in double 1/4
  8. 01:12:911 - ^ Fixed


[Muzukashii]

more pull down the bg to show her whole face to
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Muzukashii.jpg",0,80 Better
  1. 00:07:911 - same as tenshi Ok
  2. 00:15:768 - oni doesn't even have a note here. how come lower diff has a note while higher don't? add kat for oni or delete this I added note in Oni
  3. 00:19:697 - add a don here? this muzu feels like futsuu with slightly harder version lol Fixed lol
  4. 00:27:018 - same issue, about sv and overlap I'll consider if delete the sv changes here and in Oni
  5. 00:50:054 - delete this, would be enough if only 1/2 triplet. because futsuu is completely blank Ok, removed


[Futsuu]

  1. 00:07:018 - add kat here? amount note from 00:05:947 - is same. make this different Feels a bit overmapped, also I only follow the vocal
  2. 00:19:161 - out of consistency with 00:13:089 - Lol fixed


[Kantan]

more pull down the bg to show their whole head
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG Kantan.jpg",0,90

  1. nothing to do here :c


i'm honestly confused with lower diff because those look easier than i normally see :(Maybe cuz it's low bpm xDthat's all, hope my mod helps you. good luck for rank :DThis help a lot! Thanks so much :D
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
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Raphiel best girl :^)
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Hi ,M4M
01:16:661 change to d
00:38:089 change to k
00:50:232 in pattern can add note. use kkd ddk
01:11:651 in pattern use kd kd this nice
add note d
00:16:394 k d ddd k to be like 00:10:589
01:12:643 change to d
nice
nice

good luck :)
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Greenshell wrote:

Raphiel best girl :^)
and Vigne-san :^)

Cocoaaa wrote:

Hi ,M4M
01:16:661 change to d Changed
00:38:089 change to k I follow the vocal and kick sound
00:50:232 in pattern can add note. use kkd ddk I used the pattern in 00:44:518 - . Is some repetitive if I add notes in that part
01:11:651 in pattern use kd kd this nice I changed only 01:11:661 (1,2) - to kd
add note d where?
00:16:394 k d ddd k to be like 00:10:589 I don't hear some similar as to add triplet
01:12:643 change to d I want consistency with futsuu
nice
nice

good luck :)
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
posted
mod on 7th day orz sorry

Try to decrease the spread between futsuu and muzu or increase in oni since the * difference between diffs are quite big.

  1. Mm, consider inverting the colours on 00:06:304 (11,12) - since 00:06:304 is a stronger vocal and 00:06:661 (12,13) - are similar sounds (syllables ending in "i"). Do the same on other diffs that's similar to this part if you agree.
  2. 00:29:518 (4) - change to kat since it's a similar pitch to the previous note? Do the same on other diffs that's similar to this part if you agree.
  3. 00:35:232 (38) - same as above. Here you can also make a triplet with the previous note, fits well with the vocals. Do the same on other diffs that's similar to this part if you agree.
  4. 00:36:304 - the "Shhh" sound here fits well for a triplet with the following note.
  5. 00:56:304 - don here fits well with the rhythm you set on this section and the song supports it with a strong beat that you mapped in the previous note. Do the same on other diffs that's similar to this part if you agree.
  6. Longer patterns are cool here :p
  1. This one looks good for me. Maybe just change some stuff mentioned in tenshi.
  1. 00:03:090 (1) - change to kat since it's high pitch and to keep it consistent with the harder diffs.
  2. solid diff too, nice one.
  1. 00:03:090 (1) - change to kat for the same reason of muzu.
  2. 00:20:589 - a note here fits really well with the song beat.
  3. I'd recommend changing the kiai (making it a bit harder compared to the rest of the map). That'd also increase the * here which would help the spread.
  1. 00:03:090 (1) - kat for the same reason of futsuu and muzu.
  2. 00:04:518 (1) - don for lower pitch and for consistency with futsuu diff.
  3. 00:05:947 (2,3,4) - The colours are inverted compared to futsuu, I think that it's better for you to change that.
  4. 00:08:804 (5) - kat since it's a higher pitch and you used kat in all other diffs.
  5. 00:58:804 (15) - the rhythm here is 3/2 but you chose to omit most of the notes (probably because kantan) and the following notes 01:00:411 (16,17) - landed on weird places. 16 for example lands on a redline right next to a big white one. That's hard to read for kantan imo.
  6. 01:25:947 - note for voice.


That's it from me.
Try to change the lower diffs to make it more consistent, I also have that problem with them orz. Good luck o/
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