ONE OK ROCK - 20/20

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-NanoRIPE-
@nya : 00:19:589 (3) -
:43:953 (1) -
00:41:044 (1) -
01:00:680 (4) -
00:23:044 (3) -
00:46:862 (1) -

the timing that i pointed out above that i fixed ~

@QiiXshinez : ehh im really sorry.i know you are newbie and tried to give your opinion about this map but its too much (it looks like you want changing these whole diff) so all rejected *im really sorry about this ;w;

thanks both of you!
William K

nyu - wrote:

ya
insane
not really a mod here since it looks pretty fine
00:57:044 (1) - this shape here looks meh.. messy. hard had a nice shape, make it similar like that one
00:59:589 (5) - idk but.. isnt this a bit too overdone? it looks good and all.. but i think that is too intense for an insane at this sr
01:02:498 (5) - same here.. but this is really toooooooo intense
00:16:226 (6) - same ds as 00:11:862 (4) - please, its too much ;;;; and u didnt even do that before so.. that should really be fixed You're right, fixed.

Thanks for modding :D

QiiXshinez wrote:

00:00:498 (2,4,2) - End on white tick and repeat, it sounds better. Nope, there're guitars active on the red ticks.
That's why I ended it there.

00:03:953 (4) - Move this under the slider overlapping it. No, that's to mark that the guitars are repeating themselves.
00:04:498 (6,7,1) - Could be a small stream. No, I want this to be a stacked triplet, not a stream.
00:05:589 (1) - Move this. It looks weird stacked this way. Why? It doesn't feel weird.
00:06:135 (1) - Circle after this please for tiny stream that looks better. Can't understand this point.
00:06:862 (4) - Blanket this with 00:06:498 (3) - . No, I don't want a blanket there.
00:08:317 (4) - End this at red tick before repeat then make a new smaller slider that carries on to where the old one did that's on where the repeat was. Then pretty much do the same thing but no smaller slider. At first, I thought that way. But at second thought it's like "This's just an Intro so this should be relaxing. And moreover a jump is there.
00:09:953 (4) - Repeat halfway in. Why? There's no sound halfway of it.
00:13:044 (2) - Unstack this. No, emphasis there. And I don't want to put some space there.
00:14:862 (1,2,3) - If you're gonna make a triangle, make it right atleast. It's not actually a triangle but it's a trapezium. A pattern with 00:14:862 (1,2,3,4) -
00:36:498 (1) - End halfway in and repeat. Doesn't change sync, but it makes more aesthetics No, the aesthetics are fine imo. And also I'm aiming for an emphasis to the vocals. And there isn't any sound halfway of it. Making a repeat slider would be questionable.
00:37:771 (1,2,3,4,1) - Continue this stream to 00:38:317 (2) - .No. There's no sound at the blue tick. It's just overmapping.
00:39:589 (1) - Halfway in. I'm not saying the rest of what I mean. No, I'm taking vocals as the priority.
00:41:044 (1) - more aesthetics please(repeat it halfway in) As I said, I'm following the vocals. And aesthetics are fine.
00:43:953 (1,2) - Circle in between these sliders. Can't understand what you mean.
00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - Circles in 1/4 gaps as streams. aesthetics :DNo. This should be consecutive 1/2s.

No offense, but for a one minute map this is a lot of modding (took like 40 minutes) so I don't feel like modding every difficulty. This means I only modded the top difficulty. Although that may be because I'm a new modder trying the thing out.

Thanks for modding. Just please understand mapper's intention before pointing out things. And always provide some suggestions, (and with some pictures, maybe) to make mappers understand easier. Good Luck :D
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Einja
From my queue

[general]
disable widescreen support unless you're gonna use a sb


[insane]
put at od 8 so i can free pp :^)

it seems that someone else also made this diff with you, please put it in the description or in the diff name.


00:14:135 (5) - perfect opportunity for blanket with slider 6

00:08:317 (4,3) - blanket

00:31:771 (1,2,3,4) - place the jumps more neatly please. I have an example http://prntscr.com/f7i002

00:59:498 (4,5) - ??? why the jumpstream?
01:02:407 (4,5) - ^^

01:00:680 (1,2,3,4,1) - unevenly spaced stream
William K

Einja wrote:

From my queue
[insane]
put at od 8 so i can free pp :^)

it seems that someone else also made this diff with you, please put it in the description or in the diff name.


00:14:135 (5) - perfect opportunity for blanket with slider 6 No I'm not aiming for a blanket with slider 6. 00:14:317 (6,2) - I blanket these instead.

00:08:317 (4,3) - blanket Not aiming for a blanket there.
Thanks for the mod~
elena2705
Hi~
You asked to mod this^^

Easy

00:16:498 - I think spinner here ok, but for beginners at the end of this it's disoriented and they are wondering where their cursor is. So it should be corrected, because this spinner disoriented me... and what to say for begginers? I think if you delete spinner here it will be ok, and add 00:17:953 - circle here. In the other way you can 00:16:680 - add circle here, 00:17:044 - begins of slider, 00:17:771 - end of slider. But it's up to you^^
00:15:589 (2,3) - overlap it's bad in easy diff, very bad, and not beauty
00:22:498 - this part confuse me, so maybe if you 00:22:498 - add circle, 00:22:862 - begin of slider, 00:23:589 - end of slider, it will be more understandably for beginners. I want that you do such slider because more strong quick sounds, that beginners can't click, because of it's quickness, will be involve into this slider. And rhythm is understandably)
00:27:953 - delete circle and begin here slider, 00:28:680 - end of slider. Also it will more understandably)
00:31:589 - here end of slider and 00:31:953 - here circle, 00:32:135 - delete circle. It fits the structure of the song
00:32:135 (1) - begin of spinner
00:58:498 (1,2) - overlap,00:35:226 (1,2) - also
01:04:317 - end of spinner, if you listen the song in 25% of speed, you will notice that end here

Normal

00:03:953 (3,4) - i don't think that overlap is best idea...
00:01:044 (3,4) - ctrl g will better, as 00:06:135 - here
00:03:953 - i think here will be better if you add circle, 00:04:135 - begin of slider, 00:04:498 - end of slider. And do stack these circle and slider. And here 00:09:771 - also circle stack slider. And i don't think that 00:09:771 - this slider so good, and blanket is bad, so just do usual slider 1/1 as i told
00:11:953 (2) - NC, 00:12:317 (1) - delete NC
00:15:953 - bigin of slider, 00:16:680 - begin of second slider
Check all overlaps, it's bad, and check all blankets, because i see that it's not perfect^^

You do such amazing chorus, I like it especially in Normal.
So i think everythink is good, but if it's begining of the song it's not understandably. You always jump from vocal to drums, and it's confusing
So good luck :)
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Einja wrote:

From my queue

[general]
disable widescreen support unless you're gonna use a sb


[insane]
put at od 8 so i can free pp :^) - nope ;)

it seems that someone else also made this diff with you, please put it in the description or in the diff name. -im aiready put it in description


00:31:771 (1,2,3,4) - place the jumps more neatly please. I have an example http://prntscr.com/f7i002 - nope,i like the current jump

00:59:498 (4,5) - ??? why the jumpstream? - i have a reason *keep for now
01:02:407 (4,5) - ^ - ^

01:00:680 (1,2,3,4,1) - unevenly spaced stream - ^

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~
You asked to mod this^^

Easy

00:16:498 - I think spinner here ok, but for beginners at the end of this it's disoriented and they are wondering where their cursor is. So it should be corrected, because this spinner disoriented me... and what to say for begginers? I think if you delete spinner here it will be ok, and add 00:17:953 - circle here. In the other way you can 00:16:680 - add circle here, 00:17:044 - begins of slider, 00:17:771 - end of slider. But it's up to you^^ - keep the current for playability (i knew it but i make the rhythm more simply so beginner can catch up the rhtyhm)
00:15:589 (2,3) - overlap it's bad in easy diff, very bad, and not beauty - ??
00:22:498 - this part confuse me, so maybe if you 00:22:498 - add circle, 00:22:862 - begin of slider, 00:23:589 - end of slider, it will be more understandably for beginners. I want that you do such slider because more strong quick sounds, that beginners can't click, because of it's quickness, will be involve into this slider. And rhythm is understandably) - same as before
00:27:953 - delete circle and begin here slider, 00:28:680 - end of slider. Also it will more understandably) - ^
00:31:589 - here end of slider and 00:31:953 - here circle, 00:32:135 - delete circle. It fits the structure of the song - keep for emphatize the drum at 00:31:771 -
00:32:135 (1) - begin of spinner - i think the drum sound should be clickable..
00:58:498 (1,2) - overlap,00:35:226 (1,2) - also - it doesnt matter (theres a lot of map that used this kind of overlap so i think its fine)
01:04:317 - end of spinner, if you listen the song in 25% of speed, you will notice that end here - considering

Normal

00:03:953 (3,4) - i don't think that overlap is best idea... - but for me yeah
00:01:044 (3,4) - ctrl g will better, as 00:06:135 - here - looks messed up imo
00:03:953 - i think here will be better if you add circle, 00:04:135 - begin of slider, 00:04:498 - end of slider. And do stack these circle and slider. And here 00:09:771 - also circle stack slider. And i don't think that 00:09:771 - this slider so good, and blanket is bad, so just do usual slider 1/1 as i told - ehh idk what are you talking about but the rhtyhm aiready as is it
00:11:953 (2) - NC, 00:12:317 (1) - delete NC
00:15:953 - bigin of slider, 00:16:680 - begin of second slider - vocal
Check all overlaps, it's bad, and check all blankets, because i see that it's not perfect^^ - all blanket/overlap its aiready great imo

You do such amazing chorus, I like it especially in Normal.
So i think everythink is good, but if it's begining of the song it's not understandably. You always jump from vocal to drums, and it's confusing
So good luck :)
thanks for your mods both of you!
no reply = fixed
-Zeraora
q
[General]
  1. Widesceen support is turned on.
[Collab]
  1. 00:04:135 (5) - imo, would be nice if this can be separated from the stack. The sound here seems to be in a way different from the others.
  2. 00:23:771 (4,1) - Switch NC for consistency with 00:17:953 (1,2) -
  3. 00:29:044 (5,1) - I feel like the spacing here should be greater than the previous; as 00:29:226 (1) - seems to have the strongest sound.
  4. 00:31:589 (3,1) - Switch NC. The sound here is connected to the ones after.
  5. 00:32:317 (4) - Put this one nearer to 00:32:135 (3) - to emphasize 00:32:135 (3) - more.
  6. 00:40:317 (1) - Why NC?
  7. 00:48:680 (2,3) - Looks weird without an NC on 00:48:680 (2) - , but that's probably for the better so nvm I guess lol
  8. 00:56:317 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Curve with the stream could be improved.
  9. 00:58:862 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
@William K - I won't be able to mod the marathon map you posted on my queue so I'm just gonna shoot some stars there, sorry ;w;

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:317 (1,2) - is basically parallel to 00:01:044 (3,4) - , music-wise, and kinda with 00:03:226 (1,2) - too, so I think it would be better if the first two were unstacked.
  2. 00:04:498 (5,1) - For consistency, unstack these two. (Reference: 00:01:589 (5,1) - )
  3. 00:09:771 (3,4) - Maybe unstack these two for consistency as well.
  4. 00:13:771 (2,4) - Blanket between the first half of 00:14:317 (4) - and end of 00:13:771 (2) - is off.
  5. 00:14:317 (4,1) - ^
  6. 00:23:953 (1,2) - Blanket here is off.
  7. 00:23:771 (6,1) - Switch NC (Reference: 00:17:953 (1,2) - )
  8. 00:32:135 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:953 (3,4) - Overlap between the two could be avoided.
  2. 00:31:771 (2,3) - imo a reverse slider works best in this part.
  3. 00:35:226 (1) - I find it weird how the sound at 00:35:589 (2) - receives the slider and not the prolonged vocal at 00:35:589 (2) - . Consider doing the same as 00:46:862 (1) - . Consistency might also benefit by doing so.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

-Harpuia- wrote:

q
[General]
  1. Widesceen support is turned on.
[Collab]
  1. 00:23:771 (4,1) - Switch NC for consistency with 00:17:953 (1,2) -
  2. 00:29:044 (5,1) - I feel like the spacing here should be greater than the previous; as 00:29:226 (1) - seems to have the strongest sound.
  3. 00:31:589 (3,1) - Switch NC. The sound here is connected to the ones after.- hmm i dont think so.the drum at 00:31:771 (1) - is strong and the intesnity of myusic is really different.so i think it have to nc-ed
  4. 00:32:317 (4) - Put this one nearer to 00:32:135 (3) - to emphasize 00:32:135 (3) - more. - drum sounds so strong on circle (4)
  5. 00:48:680 (2,3) - Looks weird without an NC on 00:48:680 (2) - , but that's probably for the better so nvm I guess lol
  6. 00:56:317 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Curve with the stream could be improved.
  7. 00:58:862 (2) - Unsnapped slider end
@William K - I won't be able to mod the marathon map you posted on my queue so I'm just gonna shoot some stars there, sorry ;w;

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:317 (1,2) - is basically parallel to 00:01:044 (3,4) - , music-wise, and kinda with 00:03:226 (1,2) - too, so I think it would be better if the first two were unstacked. - at 00:01:044 (3) - theres a clap at 00:01:044 (3) .thats the reason why im make the pattern different
  2. 00:04:498 (5,1) - For consistency, unstack these two. (Reference: 00:01:589 (5,1) - ) - the guitar intensity become lower on slider (1).thats why i stacked it
  3. 00:09:771 (3,4) - Maybe unstack these two for consistency as well. - hmm i want to represent the vocal more here with these stack
  4. 00:13:771 (2,4) - Blanket between the first half of 00:14:317 (4) - and end of 00:13:771 (2) - is off.
  5. 00:14:317 (4,1) - ^
  6. 00:23:953 (1,2) - Blanket here is off.
  7. 00:23:771 (6,1) - Switch NC (Reference: 00:17:953 (1,2) - ) - considering
  8. 00:32:135 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:953 (3,4) - Overlap between the two could be avoided. - meh i like kind of overlap
  2. 00:31:771 (2,3) - imo a reverse slider works best in this part. - i dont think so.the drum at circle (3) is strong so yeah
  3. 00:35:226 (1) - I find it weird how the sound at 00:35:589 (2) - receives the slider and not the prolonged vocal at 00:35:589 (2) - . Consider doing the same as 00:46:862 (1) - . Consistency might also benefit by doing so. - i dont understand
Good luck!
no reply = fixed.
thanks!
Kyousukee
General
Ai Mod is your best friend in mapping . check it out . Your kiai time should end at 00:57:044 (1) - every diff .

  1. 00:17:953 (1) - Nc ?
  2. 00:23:771 (4) - i think this circle can stacked on 00:23:953 (1) - and nc ( new combo ) , it will give player more understand to play it
  3. 00:28:135 (2) - from this to 00:29:044 (5) - It've a drum . I don't see why this 00:28:498 (4) - can be slider instead jump
  4. 00:24:317 (2) - hmm maybe you not notice it . the music drum end on red tick .
  5. 00:47:407 (2) - overmapped . remove this circle .
  6. 00:38:135 (1) - i dont see why nc this . nc should at 00:38:317 (2) -
  7. 00:49:771 (1) - ^
  8. 00:59:771 (1) - i think can make this as reverse slider . it follow the guitar sound .
  9. 00:03:953 (4) - this is tricky circle . this is just insane diff . player doesn't have time to figure it out
  10. 00:04:862 (1) - nc this
  11. 00:40:317 (1,2,3,4) - fix this jump . maybe u can follow this 00:48:680 (1,2,1,2) - if u want . it's up to you
  1. 00:28:317 (2) - make this as 1/2 slider .
  2. 00:46:135 (1,2,3,4) - too much spacing . Player hard to play that
  3. 00:51:953 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:18:135 (1) - nc at here
  5. 00:23:771 (6) - unsuitable . player need to enjoy the music . i suggest this circle nc and stacked it on 00:23:953 (1) -
  6. 00:31:589 (3,4,5,6) - don't space too much . maybe this is easy for you but it's not for new player or use dt on this
  7. 00:39:953 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - hard to read . fix this please
  8. 00:59:226 (3) - make it at white tick . i think player can get confused with that tricky
  9. 01:02:135 (4,5) - u can see at here , it's suitable than ^
  1. 00:16:498 (1,2) - i'm understand that U follow the vocal as well but , this is normal diff . i'm pretty sure new player want to listen that vocal with spinner than slider
  2. 00:28:317 (2) - change this slider to circle
  1. 00:18:135 (1) - yes . i can guess that u follow the vocal but . imagine the new player play it . and DS is to big at 00:19:226 (3) -
  2. 00:58:498 (1,2) - spacing it a little more like this https://prnt.sc/f97g29


Being perfectly honest here, I'm not a great modder like them . I'm just want to help . Goodluck with the set ><
William K

Kyousukee wrote:

General
Ai Mod is your best friend in mapping . check it out . Your kiai time should end at 00:57:044 (1) - every diff .

  1. 00:38:135 (1) - i dont see why nc this . nc should at 00:38:317 (2) - It's a downbeat while (2) isn't. There's no reason for NC-ing 2. I NC every downbeats.
  2. 00:03:953 (4) - this is tricky circle . this is just insane diff . player doesn't have time to figure it out No, this's allowed in Insanes. And even maybe in Hards. This's not really a high leveled one.
  3. 00:04:862 (1) - nc this No, like I said not a downbeat.
  4. 00:40:317 (1,2,3,4) - fix this jump . maybe u can follow this 00:48:680 (1,2,1,2) - if u want . it's up to you Nope, there's a difference in intensity of music there. It's filled with drums. A higher jump is needed there.


Being perfectly honest here, I'm not a great modder like them . I'm just want to help . Goodluck with the set ><
Thanks for the mod :D
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-
@Kyousukee : fixed some stuff from your mod ~ (my laptop shut down automatically and i lost the reply xd)

thanks!
Underdogs
one ok rock is besto
  1. 00:02:317 (3) - REALLY noticeable clap over here. Please, fix this
  2. 00:27:407 (3,1) - Increase spacing between these two. the spacing is not there to emphasize 00:27:771 (1) - properly
  3. 00:30:862 (1,2) - Not sure about this spacing. I mean, yeah the guitar has 2 snares that justifies the high spacing. But I think it's not that appropriate since the section is literally the same (in terms of intensity)
  4. 00:32:317 (1,1) - I'm not sure ignoring the guitar that you left unmapped is a good idea. Maybe you can add another spinner?
  5. 01:02:862 (1) - End it at 01:04:226 -

  1. 00:02:317 (2) - welp. this one ignores the clap as well
  2. 00:06:862 (4,1) - not sure if the current overlap is ok. Then again I've seen worse. But maybe I'll mention this overlap, just in case
  3. 01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard


make sure to reply to my mods. It's been written on my queue rules.
William K

Winter Story wrote:

one ok rock is besto
  1. 00:02:317 (2) - welp. this one ignores the clap as well Yes it ignores the clap. I'm only following the guitars considering it's calm enough.
  2. 00:06:862 (4,1) - not sure if the current overlap is ok. Then again I've seen worse. But maybe I'll mention this overlap, just in case
    The overlap's pretty much similar to 00:15:407 (4,5) - actually but it's a reversed one.
  3. 01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard


make sure to reply to my mods. It's been written on my queue rules.
Thanks for the Mod :D
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-

Winter Story wrote:

one ok rock is besto
  1. 00:02:317 (3) - REALLY noticeable clap over here. Please, fix this - considering.will fix this when someone mention this again
  2. 00:27:407 (3,1) - Increase spacing between these two. the spacing is not there to emphasize 00:27:771 (1) - properly - ye
  3. 00:30:862 (1,2) - Not sure about this spacing. I mean, yeah the guitar has 2 snares that justifies the high spacing. But I think it's not that appropriate since the section is literally the same (in terms of intensity) - ye
  4. 00:32:317 (1,1) - I'm not sure ignoring the guitar that you left unmapped is a good idea. Maybe you can add another spinner? - for break i guess (and i think its unnecessary too)
  5. 01:02:862 (1) - End it at 01:04:226 - applied to all diff

  1. 01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard - ye


make sure to reply to my mods. It's been written on my queue rules.
thanks winter ~
Lami
E

00:13:407 (1) - remove nc

N

00:49:044 (1,2,1) - awkward flow imo, also Aesthetic example https://puu.sh/vUH4A.png

H

od 5.5?

00:15:044 (2,3,4) - inconsistent DS

I

00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - can be better design about Aesthetic
00:35:771 (2,3) - this jump is too huge. if compare with 00:41:589 (2,3) - .
00:30:135 (3,4) - increase DS, like https://puu.sh/vW0h7.png

#1) 00:17:953 (1,1) - (1,1) NC-ing looks so meh, tbh. if this (1,1)'s reason is vocal, then 00:19:407 (2) - should be NC too?
or remove NC 00:18:135 (1) - , since 00:19:407 (2,3) - not have any NC.
#2) 00:23:953 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - // 00:18:135 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - inconsistent NC cycle
i doubt why put NC on 00:19:226 (1) - , not 00:19:589 (3) - .
also, i guess that they don't have enough conspicuous partten for different NC cycle.
William K

Lami wrote:

I

00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - can be better design about Aesthetic I think the aesthetics there are fine, a square is pretty nice.
00:35:771 (2,3) - this jump is too huge. if compare with 00:41:589 (2,3) - . Yes you're right. Nerfed.
Thanks for Modding :D
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323,210,7953,1,2,0:1:0:0:
277,115,8135,1,2,0:1:0:0:
125,205,8317,2,0,P|146:188|242:210,2,120,8|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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40,280,9226,2,0,P|35:223|38:195,1,80,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,76,25771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,136,25953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,12,26135,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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126,147,26498,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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464,60,27407,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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220,188,28317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,38,35771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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153,362,36317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
279,241,36498,6,0,P|234:200|126:232,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,353,37044,2,0,L|398:345,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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401,83,38135,5,2,0:0:0:0:
266,135,38317,1,2,0:0:0:0:
473,174,38498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,29,39044,2,0,L|328:38,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,57,39407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,288,39589,6,0,B|184:207|113:214|155:128,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,241,40135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,175,40317,5,8,0:0:0:0:
44,147,40498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
238,282,40680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,134,40862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,374,41044,6,0,B|262:375|262:375|304:353|304:353|365:358,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,286,41589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,176,41771,2,0,L|336:265,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,134,42135,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,122,42317,6,0,L|239:300,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,318,42862,2,0,P|91:309|149:313,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,199,43226,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,376,43407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
51,205,43589,5,8,0:0:0:0:
53,165,43679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,125,43770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,85,43861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
62,45,43953,6,0,P|110:58|154:41,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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433,111,44680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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393,231,45407,6,0,P|345:244|301:227,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,144,46135,5,8,0:0:0:0:
105,207,46317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,236,46498,5,8,0:0:0:0:
34,142,46680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,352,46862,6,0,P|244:328|332:364,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,304,47407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,152,47589,2,0,P|309:113|316:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,12,47953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,220,48135,6,0,B|320:236|320:236|276:228|276:228|212:244,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
64,276,48680,5,8,0:0:0:0:
16,112,48862,1,2,0:1:0:0:
28,284,49044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,100,49226,1,2,0:1:0:0:
176,198,49407,5,8,0:0:0:0:
168,232,49498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,266,49589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,297,49680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
217,317,49771,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,212,49953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,198,50135,2,0,L|88:192,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,50680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,50862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,288,51044,6,0,B|44:280|44:280|-8:308,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,376,51589,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,240,51771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,344,51953,5,8,0:0:0:0:
392,160,52135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,364,52317,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,240,52498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,97,52680,6,0,L|248:104,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,53044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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148,212,53589,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,257,53771,2,0,L|376:288,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,368,54135,6,0,L|280:374,1,80,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,248,54498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-
@Lami : about flow and aethestic on easy and normal i think its fine.the rest is fixed (including the nc stuff)

thanks lami!
Yoshimaro
hi im modder c: bite sized

Easy

  1. 00:16:498 (1) - Unrankable, 00:18:135 (1) - comes in not even a quarter of the way through the spinner lol...
  2. 00:39:589 (3) - Maybe curve this a bit to more explicitly direct the cursor flow from 00:39:226 (2) - into 00:40:317 (4) - ? IMO it would look nicer with a red slider anchor

Collab Insane

  1. 00:47:589 (3,1) - Maybe orient 00:48:135 (1) - so that it fits the approach circle of 00:47:589 (3) - better?
  2. 00:49:407 (1,2,3,4,1) - This would flow much nicer if this were straight rather than curved, the momentum coming from 00:49:226 (4) - makes it more intuitive to rotate clockwise rather than counter clockwise, on top of the fact that the cursor wants to move farther past 00:49:407 (1) - rather than changing momentum. Basically I think the stream could better utilize the momentum here.
Topic Starter
-NanoRIPE-
@- yoshimaru - : all fixed except the last point (will fix those if someone pointing out again)

Thanks!
Winnie
Hello from modding queue



[Collab Insane]
00:22:680 (3,1) - Spacing seems relatively close. Especially if this is a new sound component to help increase the jump pattern here. Very inconsistent when matched with 00:22:498 (2,3) - since it isn't as intense as the 3 single note pattern you have.
00:24:317 (3) - I don't think this 3/4 is necessary. I think having it as a regular 1/2 slider matches more with what you've already done. Since if this was how you mapped it according to vocals then this should be the same case but it isn't 00:27:044 (2) - It's not consistent with one another
00:31:589 (3,1) - This part doesn't need to have a spacing change yet. Since all 3 of the singles aren't the main focus to increase in intensity just yet. It's whatever either way just imo it's better to have the first 3 notes same spacing or somewhat like that
00:39:407 (6) - Whistle?
00:43:226 (3) - Stacking this on the sliderend of 00:42:317 (1) - will be pretty nice. Coincides with what you have in the next following patterns and makes the jump from 00:43:407 (4,1) - have more of an impact compared to this whole section just being a snap back and forth
00:44:680 (3) - Whistle for that drum beat? Will make this part stand out more
00:47:953 (4) - This should be a whistle over a clap. It's not identical to what the clap sound that hitsounded with over in the music. Plus it makes transition sound better
00:50:862 (5) - Tbh doesn't need to be stacked. It's just ruining your momentum as the song progresses. Since it's a strong clap it should be spaced or something to add at least some sort of impact to transition with. I mean there is no harm right? Ex: http://puu.sh/vYOLJ/cddb6be317.jpg
01:00:498 - Skips quite an interesting sound here. Having this as a slider would make this part sound better. The pause seems unnecessary especially when you can hear the sound quite well and during that pause you're paying attention to the stream. It may confuse players when they listen to it. I can see that sort of pause working here 01:01:771 (2) - Not the other way around. Even though your way for those guitar sounds to represent the music is great.

[Hard]
00:16:317 (1,2,3) - Very intriguing that you didn't map the sound sound of this but covered it with a spinner when the screech sound clearly starts at 00:17:044 -
00:27:771 (1,2) - Why is spacing so far here compared to the rest? The time signature looks the same but the way you mapped it presents itself otherwise http://puu.sh/vYP0s/153b6b5b72.jpg I can see you increase spacing for the intensity buildup but it still only at that part doesn't make much sense to have such a wide spacing on something to normal. Makes these jumps seem inferior to that 00:28:680 (3,4,5) -
00:29:226 (1,2) - Do it like here thanks
00:31:771 (1) - Stacking like this may confuse beginners just to bring it up. Since hidden makes people sad
00:44:862 (1) - Spacing here is bigger than at 00:45:589 (1) - Seems like a forced blanket to make this place feel good even though both of them are identical to match with the music
00:52:498 (4,1) - Why is spacing so small here? Strong sounds strong finish to compensate for higher spacing but instead you let that part die down right after a jump pattern that is inferior in sound compared to it 00:51:953 (1,2,3,4) - It's counter intuitive imo
01:00:317 (2,3) - This part works more than the insane since it's more subtle as in nothing more approaches from this. Insane has that stream which is spaced small and the pause just takes up a lot of the sounds

[Normal]
00:09:044 (1) - Spacing is incorrect here. Should've been ~1.5 but instead it's 1.9 away from what was previously done.
00:09:771 (3,1) - Doesn't make sense to do something like this because the music at 00:09:044 (1,2) - is identical to what the slider is over. So doing them the same rhythm will suit this 100% better plus it wouldn't make your NC strange
00:16:498 (1) - Spacing is off
00:17:226 (2) - Ending on a red tick would be surprisingly effective. Since it'll match up with your last slider and adds more emphasis to the fact that the screech is ending, having no sound on that would make the repeat slider have a stronger impact in sound since it's not rushed right after the extended slider.
00:21:771 (2) - Spacing could be a little better
00:29:226 (1,2) - Same as ^

[Easy]
00:28:317 (4,1) - Can polish spacing out here a tad bit

Pretty much about it seems rather clean just the above I wanna reread and see your thoughts but other than that it's not bad


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