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MaridiuS

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2017-10-24T18:32:06+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
your explanation for Truth diff is really hard to me for understanding it xd ~
Thanks for your mod! your mod is great! (very subjective but on the point! maybe one day you could be a bn ~)

Uh oh... hi. Well this is something.

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-10-24T21:43:04+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
-NanoRIPE- wrote:
your explanation for Truth diff is really hard to me for understanding it xd ~
Thanks for your mod! your mod is great! (very subjective but on the point! maybe one day you could be a bn ~)
Uh oh... hi. Well this is something.

Owh grats!!!! XD

updated : - Remap the intro on Truth diff
- Fixed hitsound on all of my diff
- Changed some rhythm on Normal

Uta

964 posts

Joined December 2016

Uta 2017-10-25T10:31:47+00:00

Hello kakak. NM dari Queue saya ya.

Normal

- Kenapa ini suara keras ini malah di biarin 00:20:862 - ?. Saranku 1/2 reverse 00:20:135 - 2/1 reverse 00:20:862 - .
- 00:26:680 - ^

Advanced

- 00:12:317 (2,3,1) - ctrl+down key 1x. 00:13:226 (3,2) - overlap nya ga baik
- 00:51:589 (2) - ctrl + right key 1x.

Hard

- 01:01:044 (4) - Hello there weird blanket <3

Yahh mod nya pendek

GOOT MAP!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-10-25T12:06:13+00:00

Uta wrote:
Hello kakak. NM dari Queue saya ya.

Normal
- Kenapa ini suara keras ini malah di biarin 00:20:862 - ?. Saranku 1/2 reverse 00:20:135 - 2/1 reverse 00:20:862 - . - saya nggk mau ritmenya terlalu rumit utk Easy xd (1/1 udh cukup)
- 00:26:680 - ^ - same

Advanced
- 00:12:317 (2,3,1) - ctrl+down key 1x. 00:13:226 (3,2) - overlap nya ga baik - incosistent dsnya kalau begitu,lagipula nggk overlap kok,itu cuman terlalu dekat aja
- 00:51:589 (2) - ctrl + right key 1x. - ^

Hard
- 01:01:044 (4) - Hello there weird blanket <3 - jeli banget mata ente kamu .-.

Yahh mod nya pendek - nggk apa2 ~
GOOT MAP!

Thanks ya udah ngemod map saya!

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-10-26T22:55:16+00:00

Hello! From my Queue.

~General~

The offset is actually wrong, I feel it placed too early. I have made some testplays and I got 333, check it carefully!
No reason to make last combo colour on Hazu's Light Insane inconsistent since the rest is the same of other diffs. I would set:
```
Combo4 : 183,255,183
```
For consistency, instead.

~Easy~

00:07:589 (3) - This slider looks kinda unflowing with those waypoints. To have a good waving slider, set them in this way instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403153
00:22:498 (4) - For this and for the all next sliders with the same shape just apply the same concept I mentioned for 00:07:589 (3) - to make the sliders with a smoother shape;
00:55:589 (3,4,5) - This sudden change of rhythm look so random honestly lol. I would just add the same sliders of 00:52:680 (1,2) - with the same rhythm and maybe setting the NC on the first element of the pattern;

~Normal~

AR +0.5? It looks too low actually even for a Normal diff. The AR 4 makes the map harder to read imo;
00:01:771 (1) - Well, you know already about this kind of sliders shapes xP Apply this for all sliders on all diffs;
00:14:862 (1,2,3,4) - I am seeing you are actually mapping by following the vocal melody so the correct rhythm should be this one to fill all the vocal pitches correctly:

~Advanced~

00:00:498 (2,3,4) - If you want to make it symmetric, do it properly by centering the (3) correctly by moving it 1 grid on the right;
00:02:317 (2) - I am not a lover of this slider's shape on easiest diffs. Just try to make something more smoother pls? I think this kind of slider should be used only on fast sliders because it gives a different impact while playing them;
00:16:862 (1,1,2) - I would edit this pattern in this way to make it more enjoyable to play and watch: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403372 so that the 00:18:135 (2) 's head is stacked with 00:19:407 (5) 's one;
00:23:044 (1,2,3) - This is a bit hard to play for this kind of diff honestly. What about changing the (2) and (3) with an 1/2 slider instead?
00:38:680 (2,3) - The white ticks should be clickable because of the highest pitches.. The rhythm you used on kiai time is a bit questionable honestly :s
00:56:317 (3) - Align it properly with 00:55:589 (1) - direction;

~Hard~

00:16:862 (4) - I would set NC here for consistency with other diffs and because of the particular shape with the slow down;
00:25:953 (4,5,6) - There should be a clap at the white tick on 00:26:135 for consistency, so I would just use the same rhythm you did for the previous 00:19:771 (2,3,4,5,6) - since it has the same melody;

~NaWi's Insane~

00:14:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mh.. I think a pattern like this would me smoother to play imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403506

~Truth~

00:16:862 (1) - Since this is one of the hardest diff why don't you try to make some cool sliders instead than this simply one? It would be nice.
00:25:407 (2) - and 00:25:407 (2) - 's tail you forgot to add claps
00:33:044 (3) - Instead to make this why dont you start this slider on bottom side so its tail creates a triangle with previous two ones? I mean in this way that makes the pattern much more smoother to play (do not forget to change next 2 circle placement too if you apply this): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403549
00:35:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this is an ugly pattern to start the kiai with, tbh xD What about making something else? Making it smoother would be a really nice idea. This is the only pattern in the whole kiai that didn't satisfy me TwT
01:00:317 (4) - This circle would be good if moved 1/2 later because I can hear a sound on that red tick;

~Akitoshi's Extra~

00:06:498 (3,4,5) - I do not see any reason to make this spacing inconsistent, honestly. This applies to the next patterns as well on the first and second bookmarked part because there aren't higher pitches in the music that makes you force the spacing. As slower part, I would use a constant spacing between elements;
01:01:771 (2) - Stack it properly?

Good luck!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-10-27T05:15:59+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hello! From my Queue.

~General~
The offset is actually wrong, I feel it placed too early. I have made some testplays and I got 333, check it carefully!
No reason to make last combo colour on Hazu's Light Insane inconsistent since the rest is the same of other diffs. I would set:
Combo4 : 183,255,183
For consistency, instead.
~Easy~

00:07:589 (3) - This slider looks kinda unflowing with those waypoints. To have a good waving slider, set them in this way instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403153
00:22:498 (4) - For this and for the all next sliders with the same shape just apply the same concept I mentioned for 00:07:589 (3) - to make the sliders with a smoother shape;
00:55:589 (3,4,5) - This sudden change of rhythm look so random honestly lol. I would just add the same sliders of 00:52:680 (1,2) - with the same rhythm and maybe setting the NC on the first element of the pattern; - but according the music added 2 circle seems pretty accurate here so its fine ~
~Normal~

AR +0.5? It looks too low actually even for a Normal diff. The AR 4 makes the map harder to read imo;
00:01:771 (1) - Well, you know already about this kind of sliders shapes xP Apply this for all sliders on all diffs;
00:14:862 (1,2,3,4) - I am seeing you are actually mapping by following the vocal melody so the correct rhythm should be this one to fill all the vocal pitches correctly: - nope,im used this kind of rhythm at 00:03:242 (1,2,3,4) - for emphasized the vocal so it will make an incosistency if i change the rhythm
~Advanced~

00:00:498 (2,3,4) - If you want to make it symmetric, do it properly by centering the (3) correctly by moving it 1 grid on the right;
00:02:317 (2) - I am not a lover of this slider's shape on easiest diffs. Just try to make something more smoother pls? I think this kind of slider should be used only on fast sliders because it gives a different impact while playing them;
00:16:862 (1,1,2) - I would edit this pattern in this way to make it more enjoyable to play and watch: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403372 so that the 00:18:135 (2) 's head is stacked with 00:19:407 (5) 's one;
00:23:044 (1,2,3) - This is a bit hard to play for this kind of diff honestly. What about changing the (2) and (3) with an 1/2 slider instead?
00:38:680 (2,3) - The white ticks should be clickable because of the highest pitches.. The rhythm you used on kiai time is a bit questionable honestly :s - i prefer follow the vocal on the red tick one ~ for make it more readable!
00:56:317 (3) - Align it properly with 00:55:589 (1) - direction;
~Hard~

00:16:862 (4) - I would set NC here for consistency with other diffs and because of the particular shape with the slow down;
00:25:953 (4,5,6) - There should be a clap at the white tick on 00:26:135 for consistency, so I would just use the same rhythm you did for the previous 00:19:771 (2,3,4,5,6) - since it has the same melody; - reconsidering!

~Truth~

00:16:862 (1) - Since this is one of the hardest diff why don't you try to make some cool sliders instead than this simply one? It would be nice.
00:25:407 (2) - and 00:25:407 (2) - 's tail you forgot to add claps
00:33:044 (3) - Instead to make this why dont you start this slider on bottom side so its tail creates a triangle with previous two ones? I mean in this way that makes the pattern much more smoother to play (do not forget to change next 2 circle placement too if you apply this): https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403549 - fixed in another way
00:35:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this is an ugly pattern to start the kiai with, tbh xD What about making something else? Making it smoother would be a really nice idea. This is the only pattern in the whole kiai that didn't satisfy me TwT - reconsidering!
01:00:317 (4) - This circle would be good if moved 1/2 later because I can hear a sound on that red tick; - aiready added

Good luck!

no reply = fixed
thanks! for your mod!

William K

694 posts

Joined January 2013

William K 2017-10-27T09:20:21+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Hello! From my Queue.

~NaWi's Insane~

00:14:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - Mh.. I think a pattern like this would me smoother to play imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9403506 There isn't much change on gameplay after i tested the pattern a few times, I'll keep this. Sorry, I misunderstood it then, changed into a square.
Good luck!

Thanks~

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Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-10-27T10:22:20+00:00

@William K: It's not about the gameplay but more about the aesthetics of the pattern itself

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-10-28T20:09:22+00:00

i think you still don't get bns for a nomination so i'm gonna placeholder for m4m return from my map
if i'm wrong, just tell me another map via pm
in any case, gonna mod tomorrow

edit 10/05: for real tomorrow, forgot it xd

Last edited by Underforest 2017-11-06T01:57:47+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

schoolboy

571 posts

Joined July 2016

schoolboy 2017-10-29T13:13:16+00:00

ircc

15:23 -NanoRIPE-: hey
15:23 Komore: hi
15:35 -NanoRIPE-: would you mind give an advice for my diff?
15:37 Komore: well im a bit busy rn but only a few suggestions is sure
15:38 *-NanoRIPE- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1401477 ONE OK ROCK - 20/20]
15:38 -NanoRIPE-: just the top diff xd
15:42 Komore: 00:02:878 (4,5,1,2) - actually i think it could be a great idea if you do smth like this https://puu.sh/y9RRV/c73595c811.png - 00:02:333 (3,4) - increase the spacing here so the blanket wont suffer and decrease it here 00:03:242 (1,2) - to make a blanket and do a low-spacing emphasis for that guitar sound like you did 00:03:969 (3,4) - here
15:43 Komore: 00:08:333 (3) - maybe curve it into another direction/make it straight? rn flow seems a bit crushed xd
15:44 Komore: 00:14:333 (4,1,2) - make equal spacings between (4-1) and (4-2)?
15:45 Komore: https://puu.sh/y9RYx/513d1be17b.png like this
15:46 Komore: 00:17:969 (1,2) - flow is somewhat weird here, maybe try (1) at x=473 y=306? will give good emphasis for the new section
15:49 Komore: 00:21:605 (5,1) - stacking (1) with the end of (5) isnt a great idea imo, there is no impact to show that its a new part of vocals
15:49 Komore: 00:25:969 (5) - ctrl+g would be nice for flow and stuff
15:51 Komore: 00:27:060 (4,5,1) - this pattern has kinda bad aestethics since the visual spacings and not equal which makes it compressed/tight
15:52 Komore: https://puu.sh/y9SaI/8220297d4d.png id do something like this
15:53 Komore: 00:31:605 (1,2) - ncing (1) doesnt make any sense since noticeable differences in sounds happen at (2)
15:54 Komore: 00:37:060 (1) - any reason for this nc?
15:54 -NanoRIPE-: for guitar i guess
15:55 Komore: well, but you already have a nc on 00:36:514 (1) - 
15:55 Komore: leaving one object with a different combo is a bit strange
15:55 -NanoRIPE-: ohh okey removed the nc then
15:56 Komore: :3
15:56 Komore: 00:42:878 (2,3,4) - increase the spacing a bit here? or at least here 00:43:060 (3,4) -, rn it looks a bit small in comparsion with the whole section
15:57 Komore: maybe you can ctrl+g (4)
15:57 -NanoRIPE-: ok ctrl g
15:59 Komore: 00:46:878 (1) - 00:48:151 (1) -  kinda strange that you decided to go for abnormal shapes of 1/1 sliders when you usually used semicircles and waves :o
15:59 Komore: 00:48:696 (1) - remove nc as well
16:00 Komore: 00:53:605 (5) - try x=85 y=178? so 00:53:787 (6) - has the same emphasis as 00:53:242 (4) - 
16:01 -NanoRIPE-: lemme keep that shapes xd since the pattern goes well imo
16:01 Komore: yeah sure it okay
16:01 -NanoRIPE-: removed the nc
16:01 Komore: its
16:02 -NanoRIPE-: oke fixed
16:02 Komore: 01:00:333 (4) - consider using a 1/2 sldier here bcs skipping that low pitch guitar sound on 01:00:514 - isnt a good idea especially when you 00:59:060 - mapped it here
16:04 Komore: 01:02:878 (1) - should probably start spinner on 01:03:060 - bcs those strange background sounds appear to start from there
16:04 Komore: i guess thats it xd
16:05 -NanoRIPE-: 01:00:333 - the guitar sound is really not noticeable and i think gives 1/2 gap here seems good imo
16:06 Komore: then do 00:58:878 (2) - a circle as well?
16:08 -NanoRIPE-: ughhh lemme keep this one,im just feel dont right put 1/2 slider 01:00:514 -
16:09 Komore: well i dont agree with it but as you like, im not forcing you to change anything haha~
16:11 -NanoRIPE-: and other stuff im still reconsidering it
16:11 -NanoRIPE-: and thanks for your mod xd ~ its really helpful for me
16:12 Komore: sure
16:12 Komore: np

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2017-10-31T02:58:33+00:00

Hi, here form my queue. Map looks A+ and ready to go for me. Don't kudosu if nothing was helpful.

00:11:060 (4,6) – Overlap looks pretty odd/out of place, would recommend trying a different pattern that doesn't run into this problem since I know if you tried you can make another good pattern.

00:21:969 (1,2) – blanket looks off currently, move (2) to the right

01:00:151 (3,4) - I liked Mardius's suggestion about turning (3) into a 1/2 slider.

Have a star. Good luck!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-10-31T06:37:55+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hi, here form my queue. Map looks A+ and ready to go for me. Don't kudosu if nothing was helpful.

00:11:060 (4,6) – Overlap looks pretty odd/out of place, would recommend trying a different pattern that doesn't run into this problem since I know if you tried you can make another good pattern. - i run out of idea now to make new pattern so just leave it be ~

00:21:969 (1,2) – blanket looks off currently, move (2) to the right - fixed

01:00:151 (3,4) - I liked Mardius's suggestion about turning (3) into a 1/2 slider. - fixed

Have a star. Good luck!

thanks!

Blizs

898 posts

Joined November 2013

Blizs 2017-10-31T07:52:01+00:00

did an irc with -NanoRIPE- for Truth diff. -NanoRIPE- has the log

-NanoRIPE-

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-10-31T08:00:51+00:00

Blizs wrote:
did an irc with -NanoRIPE- for Truth diff. -NanoRIPE- has the log

irc with Blizs

18:05 -NanoRIPE-: halo kak
18:09 Blizs: halo o/
18:10 -NanoRIPE-: kak boleh minta masukannya nggk?
18:10 Blizs: masukan gimana ?
18:10 -NanoRIPE-: masukkan utk map saya xd
18:10 -NanoRIPE-: quick check
18:11 Blizs: xd
18:11 Blizs: mapnya mana ?
18:11 *-NanoRIPE- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1401477 ONE OK ROCK - 20/20 [Truth]]
18:11 -NanoRIPE-: yg top diff aja
18:15 Blizs: overall sih udah bagus" aja
18:16 Blizs: ga yakin saranku bakal berguna xd
18:16 Blizs: but let's go anyway
18:17 -NanoRIPE-: okay xd
18:18 Blizs: 00:51:060 (1,2) - ini movementnya nggak related satu sama lain jadi flownya kerasa agak rancu
18:18 -NanoRIPE-: hmm baru kali ini kena komplain soal tuh pattern,jadi keep dulu
18:19 -NanoRIPE-: emphasisnya juga udh pas kok imo
18:20 Blizs: yah maksudku related kurang lebih kayak gini https://puu.sh/yaB32/c1191a7105.png
18:20 Blizs: tapi terserah aja sih xd
18:20 -NanoRIPE-: kurang emphasisnya itu mah xd
18:21 Blizs: ok lanjut aja deh :3
18:23 -NanoRIPE-: okay
18:23 Blizs: 01:00:333 (4,5) - Gimana kalo stacking aja ? kayaknya untuk 1 beat gap kayak gini lebih enak dikasih movement stop seperti00:58:514 (1,2) -
18:25 -NanoRIPE-: hmm ya
18:25 -NanoRIPE-: fixed
18:26 Blizs: 01:00:696 (5,6,7,8,1) - Ini stream nya emang intentional kayak gitu ? pertama, nggak lurus kayak 00:59:242 (3,4,5,6,1) - . Kedua, spacingnya sedikit beda
18:28 -NanoRIPE-: hmm bener2 fixed
18:29 -NanoRIPE-: oh iya btw kak kalau misalnya di diff insane stream dsnya sekitar 1,0x terus di extranya sekitar 0,8x apakah acceptable?
18:29 -NanoRIPE-: maaf kalau random xd
18:29 Blizs: acceptable aja sih
18:30 -NanoRIPE-: ohhh gitu ya oke seep
18:34 Blizs: 01:01:060 (1,1) - Agak susah nangkepnya ini. Pertama aku kira gapnya 1/2 karena spacingnya, eh tapi 1/4 ;w; . Lagipula emphasisnya di 01:01:423 (1) - nggak segitu besar juga kok jadi SV changenya aja udah cukup buat nunjukinnya, nggak perlu pake high jump kayak gini
18:34 Blizs: high jump ini malah jadi kerasa over
18:44 Blizs: udah itu aja sih dari aku untuk high diffnya
18:44 Blizs: off dlu ya mau ke rumah sakit
18:44 Blizs: cya o/
19:37 -NanoRIPE-: oke
19:38 -NanoRIPE-:  /savelog

Okay ready for mod again ~

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2017-11-10T13:54:23+00:00

Hi.
From #modreqs https://puu.sh/yiVy2.jpg
Truth

00:02:333 (3) - I don't think I need to ignore the sound of 00:02:514 - . I will propose the following https://puu.sh/yiVQT.jpg The 00:02:878 (5,6) - also makes a better guitar snap by clicking on 00:02:696 -
00:11:514 - Here is the sound. Add a circle, pls
00:15:605 (4,1) - Rhythm is a little strange,,I don't feel the need for a reverse slider and it can good guitar snap by clicking on 00:16:333 - try this https://puu.sh/yiWp7.jpg
00:45:423 (1,2) - Current situation is no problem. But I recommend ctrl+G. Because, it's more tempting to click drum sound of 00:45:786 -
01:00:514 - Blank is unnatural. It's recommended to add a circle because there is sound.

GL

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-11-11T05:28:03+00:00

kunka wrote:
Hi.
From #modreqs https://puu.sh/yiVy2.jpg
Truth
00:02:333 (3) - I don't think I need to ignore the sound of 00:02:514 - . I will propose the following https://puu.sh/yiVQT.jpg The 00:02:878 (5,6) - also makes a better guitar snap by clicking on 00:02:696 - reconsidering~
00:11:514 - Here is the sound. Add a circle, pls - hmm if i add a circle here i have to make a new pattern so nope i guess
00:15:605 (4,1) - Rhythm is a little strange,,I don't feel the need for a reverse slider and it can good guitar snap by clicking on 00:16:333 - try this https://puu.sh/yiWp7.jpg - fixed
00:45:423 (1,2) - Current situation is no problem. But I recommend ctrl+G. Because, it's more tempting to click drum sound of 00:45:786 - at first im aiming to emphasize the hi-hat drum not the snare
01:00:514 - Blank is unnatural. It's recommended to add a circle because there is sound. - nope,giving 1/2 gap here looks great here (i did at NaWi's Insane too)
GL

thank you very much!~

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-11-14T04:15:53+00:00

hello, delayed m4m return, irl is killin' me

[easy]
00:44:696 (2) - probably replacing this with a paralell of 00:43:969 (1) - would look good

[normal]
00:37:787 (4) - ctrl+h?

[advanced]
cool

[hard]
00:30:878 (1,2) - probably not the best flow but it looks awkward, you can change it to something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9537051
00:33:787 (1) - current spinner limit in hard is 1 beat, but this spinner ends with 0.5 beats remaining instead

[hazu-]
en general la diff está bien. sin embargo, el mayor problema es que tiene bastantes jumps que podrían no ser amigables a la hora de jugar el diff (toma como ejemplo algunos del kiai). una light insane contiene jumps, pero estos jumps deben tener una distancia un poco más reducida.

[nawi]
00:57:060 (1) - why is not ending in red beat? it goes well with the vocals

[akitoshi]
cool

[truth]
00:57:060 (1) - something like i mentioned in nawi diff

map is already well so that's why the short mod. gl!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-11-14T11:29:38+00:00

Underforest wrote:
hello, delayed m4m return, irl is killin' me

[easy]
00:44:696 (2) - probably replacing this with a paralell of 00:43:969 (1) - would look good - nope,the current one seems fine

[normal]
00:37:787 (4) - ctrl+h? - will break the flow between (3,4) -

[advanced]
cool - thanks!

[hard]
00:30:878 (1,2) - probably not the best flow but it looks awkward, you can change it to something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9537051 - its intended for emphasizing the drum
00:33:787 (1) - current spinner limit in hard is 1 beat, but this spinner ends with 0.5 beats remaining instead - yee

[nawi]
00:57:060 (1) - why is not ending in red beat? it goes well with the vocals - reconsidering this!

[truth]
00:57:060 (1) - something like i mentioned in nawi diff - ^

map is already well so that's why the short mod. gl!

thx for your mod!
and now wait for lit's mod and im gonna push this map one more time ~

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-11-16T15:47:40+00:00

Underforest wrote:
hello, delayed m4m return, irl is killin' me

[hazu-]
en general la diff está bien. sin embargo, el mayor problema es que tiene bastantes jumps que podrían no ser amigables a la hora de jugar el diff (toma como ejemplo algunos del kiai). una light insane contiene jumps, pero estos jumps deben tener una distancia un poco más reducida. No es realmente necesario, una light insane puede tener jumps xd

map is already well so that's why the short mod. gl!

Gracias xd

Insinuo

17 posts

Joined August 2015

Insinuo 2018-01-21T03:21:08+00:00

Hello just found this map and wanted to say that I love it, I was also wondering if there is any chance of a 5* diff being added?

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2018-01-30T15:59:53+00:00

anyone alive here?
if you want to push this forward contact me, I'd gladly bubble it

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2018-02-11T04:56:43+00:00

Insinuo wrote:
Hello just found this map and wanted to say that I love it, I was also wondering if there is any chance of a 5* diff being added?

Nah
Just leave it Truth be the top diff.
Thanks!

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2018-02-14T19:33:01+00:00

[Truth]

00:22:514 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing looks kinda weird here since sound here 00:22:878 - isn't really weaker for making spacing lower. And the same for this 00:23:242 (2) - three sounds are equally prominent so making proper triangle would express music in a better way.
00:29:060 (2) - bigger spacing for this as snare is pretty outstanding?
00:33:787 (1) - shotren to 00:34:696 - because this new sound is introduced right there.
00:35:969 (3,4,5) - idk how well works wider angle here. And also song is pretty the same here so consider making a "rhomb".

this

[NaWi's]

Disagree how you placed this 00:40:333 (3,4) - . Right now this looks like intensity falls and thus you're stacking 00:39:969 (1,3) - and making spacing smaller but actually music is the same here. Something like that would fit better. Ye, spacing should be smaller than in my pattern below xd but you got the idea.

that

[Hard]

00:03:060 - why did skip such prominent sound?
00:06:333 (2) - this doesn't catch either vocals or instumentals. Try two 1/2 circles and 1/2 slider, instead.

[Advanced]

Part from 00:06:333 (2) - defenitely has to be mapped as there are vocals and the point of having this part 00:04:696 - unmapped is that it doesn't have vocals. Also, the same applies for Normal

basically, 00:33:787 (1) - suggestion for this spinner is the same for all diff which have it.

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William K

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William K 2018-02-15T05:15:04+00:00

Namki wrote:
[NaWi's]
Disagree how you placed this 00:40:333 (3,4) - . Right now this looks like intensity falls and thus you're stacking 00:39:969 (1,3) - and making spacing smaller but actually music is the same here. Something like that would fit better. Ye, spacing should be smaller than in my pattern below xd but you got the idea. Yeah, cool back and forth idea. I modified a bit though.

that
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Thanks for the mod

For the metadata,
Artist & Romanized Artist: ONE OK ROCK
Title & Romanized Title: 20/20
References:

20/20

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:20/20
Artist:ONE OK ROCK
ArtistUnicode:ONE OK ROCK
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:NaWi's Insane
Source:
Tags:Fueled by Ramen OOR Ambitions Short Ver A-Sketch William K Akitoshi Hazu- Twenty
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[Difficulty]
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-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2018-02-15T06:19:04+00:00

Namki wrote:
[Truth]
00:22:514 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing looks kinda weird here since sound here 00:22:878 - isn't really weaker for making spacing lower. And the same for this 00:23:242 (2) - three sounds are equally prominent so making proper triangle would express music in a better way. - fixed
00:29:060 (2) - bigger spacing for this as snare is pretty outstanding? - ok,increasing the spacing a little bit
00:33:787 (1) - shotren to 00:34:696 - because this new sound is introduced right there. - hmm you're right but it would gonna cut the length of spinner and players not gonna catch up that spinner imo (im prefer spinner that have long length although its not fit with the music then a spinner that fit with the music but the length is so short)
00:35:969 (3,4,5) - idk how well works wider angle here. And also song is pretty the same here so consider making a "rhomb". - fixed in another way (i wont make an overlap here so i tried to move (5) to beside of slider (1) )

this

[Hard]
00:03:060 - why did skip such prominent sound? - fixed
00:06:333 (2) - this doesn't catch either vocals or instumentals. Try two 1/2 circles and 1/2 slider, instead. - fixed
[Advanced]
Part from 00:06:333 (2) - defenitely has to be mapped as there are vocals and the point of having this part 00:04:696 - unmapped is that it doesn't have vocals. Also, the same applies for Normal - hmm i dont make those unmapped because it doesnt have vocals but its because i dont wanna make the rhythm more dense and i also tried to giving players break on intro part
basically, 00:33:787 (1) - suggestion for this spinner is the same for all diff which have it. - same as before

confirm metadata and call me back!

thanks for the mod!

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2018-02-16T11:43:39+00:00

song is 11/10

Cheri

1,770 posts

Joined November 2014

Cheri 2018-03-08T05:06:00+00:00

you been waiting for this - no format

Truth

00:06:514 (3) - forgot hitsound here I believe (do so in all difficulties)

00:28:696 (5) - could add a whistle since this beat is pretty strong and similar to the other ones around here that you add a whistle on (same for all difficulties)

00:29:787 (2) - maybe give more emphasis towards this note by giving it more spacing (don't have to be too much but at least more than 00:29:969 (3) - )

00:37:787 (1,2,3,4,1) - the current position of this stream is pretty uncomfortable comparison to the stream around here 00:49:423 (1,2,3,4,1) -
would help if you move it more towards the left and sorta down like maybe X: 104 Y: 305 (of course adjustments will needed and don't have to used those exact numbers)

00:52:878 (2) - Hmm I think this would be nicer and more fitting if you have this stack with 00:53:060 (3) - instead since they both are very similar sounds and some more like the go more together (not necessarily asking u to change - just a suggestion but I do hope u take it into consideration)
^ 00:54:333 (2,3) - likewise with this 1

Akitoshi Insane's

00:49:423 (5,6,7,8,1) - looks pretty off - could look straighter - otherwise its clean

Hazu's Light Insane

00:17:969 (2) - felt this just a bit weak for a strong note and I think would give a more impact if you space this out than having it stack under the slider end

00:25:060 (1) - missing hitsound that was on the higher difficulties

Hard

00:26:423 (5,6) - this would be easier if you slightly have it spaced out https://puu.sh/zD0zW/5b629d0e4d.png (of course adjustment to the pattern around it)

Normal
00:18:514 (2) - and 00:24:333 (2,3) - has slightly off ds (minor but don't hurt to adjust)

00:49:060 (3,4) - maybe arrange this differently? think (4) show up a bit too early and could possibly be get click instead of (3) the way it is now and having something simpler to read would be better

Both Hazu's Light Insane and Hard should have lower hp instead of having the same as the other 2 higher difficulty
Hazu's light insane 5.5 hp and Hard 5 hp should be fine

is there a reason for the top diff to have a low od (7.5)? because right now I do not exactly understand why it does and for a difficulty like this having something around od 8.5 or at least 8 so it wouldn't be the same as NaWi's insane

call me back for qualify after you replied to all of this

EDIT: ah crap I just realize there was another version in qualified section - ya can call me back to qualified after that 1 is ranked

-NanoRIPE-

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Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2018-03-09T11:31:14+00:00

Hailie wrote:
you been waiting for this - no format

Truth

00:06:514 (3) - forgot hitsound here I believe (do so in all difficulties) - nah i think,my main focus of hitsounding is the guitar at 00:06:514 - not the vocal
00:28:696 (5) - could add a whistle since this beat is pretty strong and similar to the other ones around here that you add a whistle on (same for all difficulties) - fixed

00:29:787 (2) - maybe give more emphasis towards this note by giving it more spacing (don't have to be too much but at least more than 00:29:969 (3) - ) - fixed

00:37:787 (1,2,3,4,1) - the current position of this stream is pretty uncomfortable comparison to the stream around here 00:49:423 (1,2,3,4,1) -
would help if you move it more towards the left and sorta down like maybe X: 104 Y: 305 (of course adjustments will needed and don't have to used those exact numbers) - i changed some pattern around 00:49:423 - due the issue that you pointed out,i decided to make the stream at 00:49:423 (1,2,3,4,1) - a straight stream too fix it!
00:52:878 (2) - Hmm I think this would be nicer and more fitting if you have this stack with 00:53:060 (3) - instead since they both are very similar sounds and some more like the go more together (not necessarily asking u to change - just a suggestion but I do hope u take it into consideration) - nah,i wanna give emphasis to the cymbal at 00:53:242 (4) - more with single circle at 00:53:060 (3) -
^ 00:54:333 (2,3) - likewise with this 1 - ^

Hard

00:26:423 (5,6) - this would be easier if you slightly have it spaced out https://puu.sh/zD0zW/5b629d0e4d.png (of course adjustment to the pattern around it) - fixed

Normal
00:18:514 (2) - and 00:24:333 (2,3) - has slightly off ds (minor but don't hurt to adjust) - fixed

00:49:060 (3,4) - maybe arrange this differently? think (4) show up a bit too early and could possibly be get click instead of (3) the way it is now and having something simpler to read would be better - fixed

Both Hazu's Light Insane and Hard should have lower hp instead of having the same as the other 2 higher difficulty
Hazu's light insane 5.5 hp and Hard 5 hp should be fine - fixed

is there a reason for the top diff to have a low od (7.5)? because right now I do not exactly understand why it does and for a difficulty like this having something around od 8.5 or at least 8 so it wouldn't be the same as NaWi's insane - fixed

call me back for qualify after you replied to all of this

EDIT: ah crap I just realize there was another version in qualified section - ya can call me back to qualified after that 1 is ranked

thanks! for the mods!
gonna update this after the gd'ers updated their gd

Last edited by -NanoRIPE- 2018-03-10T13:52:14+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2018-03-09T11:46:59+00:00

wowie wtf i have done before lOL

@Hailie fixed, thanks!

code

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35242
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.800001

[Metadata]
Title:20/20
TitleUnicode:20/20
Artist:ONE OK ROCK
ArtistUnicode:ONE OK ROCK
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Akitoshi's Light Extra
Source:
Tags:Fueled by Ramen OOR Ambitions Short Ver A-Sketch William K Akitoshi Hazu- Twenty
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Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2018-03-10T00:45:37+00:00

Hailie wrote:
you been waiting for this - no format

Hazu's Light Insane

00:17:969 (2) - felt this just a bit weak for a strong note and I think would give a more impact if you space this out than having it stack under the slider end

00:25:060 (1) - missing hitsound that was on the higher difficulties

Both Hazu's Light Insane and Hard should have lower hp instead of having the same as the other 2 higher difficulty
Hazu's light insane 5.5 hp and Hard 5 hp should be fine

call me back for qualify after you replied to all of this

EDIT: ah crap I just realize there was another version in qualified section - ya can call me back to qualified after that 1 is ranked

All fixed, thanks~
I did visual improvements before kiai... I wasn't really convinced.

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35242
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:20/20
TitleUnicode:20/20
Artist:ONE OK ROCK
ArtistUnicode:ONE OK ROCK
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Hazu's Light Insane
Source:
Tags:Fueled by Ramen OOR Ambitions Short Ver A-Sketch William K Akitoshi Hazu- Twenty
BeatmapID:1308512
BeatmapSetID:608415

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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