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Inori Minase - Yume no Tsubomi

posted 2017-05-03T23:29:25+00:00

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Sonnyc

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2017-05-03T23:29:25+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 4월 29일 일요일 at 오전 4:50:52

Artist: Inori Minase
Title: Yume no Tsubomi
Source: アニメマシテ
Tags: king records scanter anime mashite
BPM: 188
Filesize: 4587kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.46 stars, 99 notes)
Expert (5.26 stars, 417 notes)
Hard (2.93 stars, 253 notes)
Normal (2.18 stars, 186 notes)
scanter's Insane (4.18 stars, 337 notes)

Download: Inori Minase - Yume no Tsubomi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Sonnyc 2018-04-28T19:51:17+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

Enon

2,688 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2017-05-05T14:56:59+00:00

minase inori best moe

C O I N

104 posts

Joined February 2011

C O I N 2017-05-29T14:57:18+00:00

SPOILER

scanter's Insane

00:24:654 (4) -

위의 4에 콤보 컬러 뉴콤 어떨까요 뒷부분엔 하셨던데

마침 점프도 있고 뉴콤 박기 좋은~

00:38:059 (3) -

Ctrl + ↑ 4번 정도 해서 이미지처럼 하는게 어떨까요?

앞의 패턴 배치를 볼때 그것이 플레이상 이뻐보입니다.

00:45:239 (5) -

여기도 뉴콤 어떨까용

디엔도!

여기까지 찍으셨네용

/spoilerbox]

[spoilerbox]Hard

00:44:601 (3) -

요거 약간 오른쪽으로 옮기셔서 블랭킷 맞춰줄 필요가 있으실듯.

겹침 없는데 저러네용.

더는 없는것같네용 ㅠㅠ

제가 부조칸 탓이다.

노말 , 이지는 시시콜콜한거 잡아봤자 의미 없는 것 같아서 안썼습니다....

그럼 즐맵핑!

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-05-30T07:21:26+00:00

다찍

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: mada.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 76436
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23537,43963,64388,76995,97420,120239
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Yume no Tsubomi
TitleUnicode:夢のつぼみ
Artist:Minase Inori
ArtistUnicode:水瀬いのり
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:アニメマシテ
Tags:king records
BeatmapID:1284595
BeatmapSetID:608258

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.4
ApproachRate:8.7
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:2

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Beige

Elite Mapper

2,191 posts

Joined February 2011

Beige 2017-05-30T08:05:51+00:00

반년만의 모딩

[General]

[Easy]

01:04:388 (1) - (2)슬라하고 겹치고 생각보다 리딩하기 힘들거같은 배치 같습니다. 삼각형을 만드시거나 다른 방법으로 배치해보시는건 어떨까요?
01:52:899 (1,2) - 블랭킷 읍읍

요즘 이지 오버랩이 많이 후해졌나요, 꽤나 오버랩이 많네용 흠흠

[Normal]

[Hard]

스타레이팅이 3에 가까운데 AR를 7보다 높혀주는게 어떨까요?
01:19:229 (4,1) - '토오이'라고 3개가 들리는데 1/1박자로 넘어가가지고 리딩이 안됐습니다. 물론 스페이싱을 지키셨지만... 그래도 빨간 틱에다가 노트를 채워 넣는것이 어떨까요? 01:45:239 (1,2) - 여기처럼 꽉찬게 낫다고 생각합니다.

나머지는 굿

[Insane]

You need ~~more~~Hitsounds!
00:40:133 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 그냥 이어주는게 나을 것 같습니다. 그리고 1과 1사이에 노트를 넣어줘서 위화감을 없애보는 것을 추천해봅니다.
01:03:750 (5,6,1) - 개인적인 의견인데 정삼각형을 만들어주는게 어떨까요, ㅋㅋ 의견에 수용해주신다면 6을 옮겨서 만들어주시면 될 것 같습니다.
01:57:686 (4,1) - 그냥 앞에 붙여달라고 하고싶었는데 그전 패턴이 띄어주는 패턴이라서 수정할 필요는 없다고 생각합니다. 그래도 저는 붙여달라고 하고싶네요 ㅋ

[Expert]

01:35:984 (8,1,2,3) - 플레이 해봤을때 이 부분이 잘 리딩이 안됐는데 (8)을 슬라이더로 만들고 1,2,3을 재배치해서 패턴을 바꿔보는건 어떨까요? 아무리 플레이해봐도 읽지를 못하네요 끙...

모딩끗

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-05-30T15:57:04+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
반년만의 모딩

[General]
굿

[Insane]
You need ~~more~~Hitsounds! 조만간 손 보겠습니다
00:40:133 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 그냥 이어주는게 나을 것 같습니다. 그리고 1과 1사이에 노트를 넣어줘서 위화감을 없애보는 것을 추천해봅니다. ㅇㅋ
01:03:750 (5,6,1) - 개인적인 의견인데 정삼각형을 만들어주는게 어떨까요, ㅋㅋ 의견에 수용해주신다면 6을 옮겨서 만들어주시면 될 것 같습니다. 넹
01:57:686 (4,1) - 그냥 앞에 붙여달라고 하고싶었는데 그전 패턴이 띄어주는 패턴이라서 수정할 필요는 없다고 생각합니다. 그래도 저는 붙여달라고 하고싶네요 ㅋ 점프가 어울린다고 봅니다. 못 칠만한 부분도 아니므로 킵
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SolarFox

366 posts

Joined February 2012

SolarFox 2017-05-30T16:05:36+00:00

hello, from modding queue~

hard

00:25:293 (3,1) - weird flow imo.. having (3) to point to (1) like this seems more intuitive to play
00:50:984 (3) - isnt this out of playfield?
01:48:590 (3,1,2,3) - this part looks really cramped.. especially 01:48:590 (3,2) - where the flow from 01:49:388 (2) - to 01:49:547 (3) - would feel really awkward, i suggest you try something else

scanter's insane

00:43:484 (6,1) - distance too large imo.. nerf please
00:50:186 (1) - move to x:216 y:92 for better triangle shape
01:16:037 (1,2) - need more emphasis as 01:15:080 (2,3) - has larger distance

expert

01:02:952 (7) - out of playfield?
01:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap looks ugly imo
01:12:686 (9,17) - would nc
01:39:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - i cant see how this repeating pattern reflects the song
01:44:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^.. would be nice for both to have more movement imo

that's all i can suggest, sorry not much of a help Dx
good luck!

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-05-31T11:10:59+00:00

일단 고인님이 말하신 부분은 다 고친 각

SolarFox wrote:
hello, from modding queue~

scanter's insane
00:43:484 (6,1) - distance too large imo.. nerf please oki
00:50:186 (1) - move to x:216 y:92 for better triangle shape better x:213, y:92
01:16:037 (1,2) - need more emphasis as 01:15:080 (2,3) - has larger distance seems fine now

that's all i can suggest, sorry not much of a help Dx
good luck!

thanks anyway

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2017-05-31T11:23:26+00:00

coin

C O I N wrote:
Hard

00:44:601 (3) -

요거 약간 오른쪽으로 옮기셔서 블랭킷 맞춰줄 필요가 있으실듯. // 읍읍

겹침 없는데 저러네용.

white

W h i t e wrote:
반년만의 모딩

[General]
굿
[Easy]
01:04:388 (1) - (2)슬라하고 겹치고 생각보다 리딩하기 힘들거같은 배치 같습니다. 삼각형을 만드시거나 다른 방법으로 배치해보시는건 어떨까요? // 손 보는걸 까먹었군요 ㄷ
01:52:899 (1,2) - 블랭킷 읍읍 // 읍

요즘 이지 오버랩이 많이 후해졌나요, 꽤나 오버랩이 많네용 흠흠
[Normal]
굿
[Hard]
스타레이팅이 3에 가까운데 AR를 7보다 높혀주는게 어떨까요? // 주된 점프 패턴이 없어서 7로 가고 싶네요
01:19:229 (4,1) - '토오이'라고 3개가 들리는데 1/1박자로 넘어가가지고 리딩이 안됐습니다. 물론 스페이싱을 지키셨지만... 그래도 빨간 틱에다가 노트를 채워 넣는것이 어떨까요? 01:45:239 (1,2) - 여기처럼 꽉찬게 낫다고 생각합니다. // 음 사실 직접적인 1/2 점프가 정해진 두 장소에만 있어서 충분한 여백이 주어진 저 부분을 1/1로 이해하지 못하는 것은 제가 바꾸기는 조금 곤란할거 같네요 ㅇㅅㅇ

나머지는 굿
[Expert]
01:35:984 (8,1,2,3) - 플레이 해봤을때 이 부분이 잘 리딩이 안됐는데 (8)을 슬라이더로 만들고 1,2,3을 재배치해서 패턴을 바꿔보는건 어떨까요? 아무리 플레이해봐도 읽지를 못하네요 끙... // 살짝 손 본 ㅇㅅㅇ
모딩끗

SolarFox

SolarFox wrote:
hello, from modding queue~

hard
00:25:293 (3,1) - weird flow imo.. having (3) to point to (1) like this seems more intuitive to play
00:50:984 (3) - isnt this out of playfield? // But I wanted to have this as a gradually rotating concept which was also used consistently at 00:45:080 (1,2,3).
01:48:590 (3,1,2,3) - this part looks really cramped.. especially 01:48:590 (3,2) - where the flow from 01:49:388 (2) - to 01:49:547 (3) - would feel really awkward, i suggest you try something else // You're right, I've made an adjustment here.

expert
01:02:952 (7) - out of playfield? // yeah it is, but we diagnose offscreen by the screen in-game.
01:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overlap looks ugly imo // It is a linear stream that forms a parallel with (7) so an overlap wasn't avoidable. anyways, doesn't really look that ugly for me.
01:12:686 (9,17) - would nc // Considered doing it since the combo was pretty long, but I've just decided to keep the combo off because the stream was one big pattern having 3 circular flows.
01:39:176 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - i cant see how this repeating pattern reflects the song // yea, changed this. Repetition wasn't the best idea.
01:44:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^.. would be nice for both to have more movement imo

that's all i can suggest, sorry not much of a help Dx
good luck!

Thanks!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2017-05-31T14:11:56+00:00

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[General]
romanised artist would be Inori Minase instead, refer to https://inoriminase.com/
nice to have the video where you took the bg from
probably anime mashite in the tags for the source in romaji
would've mapped the beginning of the song
tick rate 2 on lower diffs looks sick but whatever
[Extra]
01:16:521 (1) - think a whistle would fit here, the vocal feels as important as 01:16:840 (3) and yet only having one on (3) is not really enough here.
01:59:925 - here should be better place to end the spinner since you finished the spinner at where the vocal has already faded out, which feels the spinner end follows none in music but the drum. the vocal isn't gone yet where I suggest but in playing this feels a lot better than after the vocal went away.
this might be just me but the way how you put whistles on the streams feels too spammy sometimes, also I'd just put whistles even if it's with drum or clap because if the whistles play consistently it helps to keep the accuracy consistent as well.
[scanter's Insane]
damn you should consider decreasing the volume by 10% overall because you hitsounded the entire diff in a different way in comparison.
00:33:436 (7) - would prefer to set sampleset drum for the sounc in background music, the sliderslide sound will match with it pretty well.
00:59:925 (3) - ignoring the vocal at the red tick isn't the best idea when your hitsounding is based on the vocals. it breaks your patterning here but I still don't agree ignoring any vocals in the song, you still can combine the slider pattern with 00:59:287 (1,1) - somehow cool even if you broke the pattern there once.
01:04:074 (6) - should be addition normal instead of sampleset because it literally sounds same when it has a soft clap.01:15:564 (3) - soft clap sounds better to me since only one drum sound here makes it out of place as I don't really hear the similar sound in music, and soft clap is in consistency here.
01:29:606 (4,5,1) - I'd map somehow jumpy here instead of just an equivalent distance pattern. 01:32:159 (7,8) here you made somewhat jump when it sounds mostly same. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8225957
[Hard]
00:32:319 (1) - remove this? you made blanks after 2/2 sliders (or whatever the long sliders) came up in the rest of this part but here. 00:52:106 (2) 00:59:127 (1) are the places where you did it.
00:44:606 (3) - HOW THIS ISN'T OFF SCREEN
00:50:989 (3) - I have no idea what this follows, it's not the expert difficulty I would fulfill the rhythm with two 1/2s or 1/1 slider.
01:26:894 (3) - in the case you forgot a clap on the slider end.
[Normal]
00:45:244 (4) - could be nice to catch the vocals and the drum by shortening the slider into 1/1 and a circle at 00:45:723, 00:47:798 (3,4) is one of the rhythms you made it perfect.
00:52:585 (2) - opposite slider shape flows nicer imo.
[Easy]
01:05:510 (2) - spacing is fucked lol

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-06-01T07:08:05+00:00

Delis wrote:
p

[scanter's Insane]
damn you should consider decreasing the volume by 10% overall because you hitsounded the entire diff in a different way in comparison. okay
00:33:436 (7) - would prefer to set sampleset drum for the sounc in background music, the sliderslide sound will match with it pretty well. ^
00:59:925 (3) - ignoring the vocal at the red tick isn't the best idea when your hitsounding is based on the vocals. it breaks your patterning here but I still don't agree ignoring any vocals in the song, you still can combine the slider pattern with 00:59:287 (1,1) - somehow cool even if you broke the pattern there once. ^
01:04:074 (6) - should be addition normal instead of sampleset because it literally sounds same when it has a soft clap.01:15:564 (3) - soft clap sounds better to me since only one drum sound here makes it out of place as I don't really hear the similar sound in music, and soft clap is in consistency here. ^
01:29:606 (4,5,1) - I'd map somehow jumpy here instead of just an equivalent distance pattern. 01:32:159 (7,8) here you made somewhat jump when it sounds mostly same. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8225957 ^

thank you!

문장이 너무 길다..

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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2017-06-01T15:20:55+00:00

m4m

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
the drums are kinda unstable at around 00:40:776 - to 00:43:968 - , I think you may need additional timing sections to deal with the offset shifting

Easy
00:31:202 (1,2) - may be only me, but this balnket(?) looks kinda weird with 2 being too curved
01:04:393 (1,2) - should keep 1x spacing
01:08:064 (2,1) - they're too closed to each other and don't look so good for that
01:10:776 (2) - maybe avoid touching hp bar with this
01:37:425 (1,2) - similar to 00:31:202 (1,2) - , try to make 2 less curved?

Normal
will recommend something like CS3.5 to build a better spread between ENH
00:49:553 (2,3,4) - don't really like the flow here, maybe move 3 down to around (120,316) ?
01:12:851 (4,5) - maybe make them a proper blanket cause they really look like that way but really off if so
01:29:127 (5) - I think ending this at 01:29:606 - would make the rhythm better no matter referring to vocal or percussion
01:31:681 (5) - ^

Hard
00:33:915 (2,1) - avoid this overlap? doesn't look so neat
00:45:723 (3) - avoid touching hp bar?
00:56:893 (3,5) - avoid overlap?
00:59:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - they're not technically wrong but it feels a bit weird to use such a tough rhythm at a point which is not even worth emphasizing. 01:54:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels much better in comparison. maybe try merging two circles in 00:59:925 (2,3,4,5) - into one slider to make the difficulty of this pattern more suitable for the song and whole diff
01:53:702 (2,3) - improve blanket?

scanter's Insane
generally I think the hitsound volume is a bit too high in this diff, especially the 100% volume parts, I hope you can turn it down by 10%~20%
00:29:766 (6,1) - exchange NC for consistency?
00:32:159 (3) - try CTRL+G?
00:36:627 (2,1) - stack them properly as you did for other patterns?
00:52:585 (4,1) - I'm not sure why you stopped following vocal here, the current rhythm feels kinda random and inconsistent imo
01:03:436 (3,4) - CTRL+G?
01:40:936 (6,2) - maybe stack them properly? and adjust 01:41:255 (1) - accordingly if you want to keep the blanket
kiai is good

Expert
00:26:095 (1,2,3) - this flow feels quite unnatural and gives a feelinig which is not so fitting to the smooth vocall, I'm neither fan of such many overlaps, maybe move 3 to the right? or rework the pattern other way
00:46:521 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:127 (5,1) - I don't really like this shape, the head of 1 is too close to 5 thus doesn't look so nice, maybe make the blanket bigger
00:50:191 (1) - ^
01:03:755 (4) - change this to a 1/2 slider and have a circle jump at 01:04:074 - ? I really think you need to make that beat clickable
01:04:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - sorry I don't know what rhythm is this, can't really anything suitable for these streams in the music
01:07:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:12:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1) - and about these, not similar to the above though, as I do agree that there are 1/4 beats in the music which can support the rhythm but still, I don't think this is a good choice as this pattern is simply too hard compared to all the other things in this diff. I don't think it's a good idea to spam such long streams at a point where the music is not really strong and emphasize-worthy, it only makes your kiai feel dumb
01:28:808 (5) - changing this to a 1/2 slider and making the vocal at 01:29:127 - clickable should be much more intuitive and understandable imo
01:31:042 (4) - flip it and make it blanket it with 01:30:883 (3) - ? that would make 01:30:883 (3,4,5) - flow better imo
01:58:010 (3) - it's sad that you didn't have a jump here

that's all I think
good luck~

Last edited by Zero__wind 2017-06-03T05:37:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2017-06-01T18:49:49+00:00

Hello from modding queue

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[Expert]

Great to see people mapping things other than anime because I know every song
Seems like so much of the beginning is quite mappable but I'll leave that as is.
Widescreen support pls
00:29:766 (1) - What's reasoning behind skipping 00:29:845 - You had it this mapped out at 00:28:649 (3) - I do see that you're mapping vocals but I do believe having that hard piano mapped out feels better for this section
00:35:989 (5,1,2,3) - Seems kind of laxed to just go back and forth without much indication in the music, as well as keeping every the same DS which doesn't emphasize stronger piano sounds like at 00:36:308 (2) - Plus it makes transition from 00:36:308 (2,3) - playing feel awkward because of how the sounds are already represented
00:41:095 (4) - Something seems wrong with the timing. The hit object here is really early but compared to the drum beat that's in the music. Either drummers drunk or isn't timed correctly to it. Gets really off at 00:40:776 (1) - yeah it gets really bad should probably look this over imo
00:45:723 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feels overmapped. Completely different change in rhythms compared to previous versus and considering how the map is already badly timed before this point it just makes it feel awkward. Plus to have strange sets of whistles doesn't sound too great as a hitsound profile
00:48:994 (2) - Not much necessarily happening on this note, either I can't hear it or there isn't any indication of a sound here which makes this triplet weak
00:50:989 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as previously, doesn't seem to be striking anything. Seems to me like a random stream is added to bring in flare
00:54:181 (1,2,3,4) - Seems strange to repeat the same pattern again when the last pattern utilized this to create stronger independent sliders for 00:53:861 (7,4) - Definitely no problems with it, just that copy pasting on different things which completely different sound variables seems laxed
00:56:095 (3,4,5,6,7,2) - Same as previously could be said here
00:56:734 (2,3) - Same as previously, just doesn't have a strong impact to create a back and forth pattern here but then keep that same DS to transition from a strong beat to lighter beat. It's inconsistent
00:58:808 (4) - This could be 2 single notes. It's not the same as 00:57:851 (1,2,3) - Since you're mapping vocal the last slider was the only one to have her vocal change. So indicating that with the music wouldn't be too shabby
01:00:085 (4,5,6) - I like this but 00:59:925 (3) - defeats the purpose of having that. Having them all move in a clockwise pattern like that but only 3 of the notes have somewhat of an emphasis on that seems irregular. Wouldn't be as strong of an impact if (3) was placed differently
01:04:872 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same could be said with this stream but the problem I see is the whistle hitsounds. Seems so sporadic played right after 01:04:553 (2,3,4,11) - Really seems like random hitsound profiles
01:06:468 (6,7) - Can emphasize this by spacing more than to keep it the same as the others but that's up to you
01:07:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as previously with whistles
01:09:978 (4) - Could remove the whistle on sliderend, doesn't seem like it's necessary to match with her slightly longer vocals with 01:09:500 (3) -
01:12:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1) - Nice pattern but holyy. If no change just at least make NC changes to a 8x8x8 so it doesn't hit 24 =)
01:15:404 (8) - Should be 2 clickable since sounds are completely different to the last slider, just to emphasize into the kiai
01:40:617 (4,5,6) - Now that back and forth makes sense
No problems by me just the ridiculous offset being bad.

[scanter's Insane]

00:33:915 (2,3) - Not sure why this spacing feels emphasized. It's not strong of a beat compared to (1) but it somehow has a bigger spacing. Sems inconsistent
00:56:335 (5) - Not a very distinguishable beat so this triplet feels weak
00:59:207 (6) - Same could be said here
00:59:766 (2,3,4,1) - Not sure why these are copy pasted rhythms. I do love the design but it doesn't make sense to utilize the vocals at 01:00:404 (4,1) - but then previously at 00:59:766 (2,3) - it's hit the same way but doesn't have that same vocal pattern so it makes it feel weak of a pattern
01:08:782 (4) - Weak triplet compared to 01:09:420 (9) - same like said previously. The weak triplet halts your pattern
01:13:489 (2,3) - Strange playing transition. Usually I'd see the rotation finish but it's just linear when you play it. So the curved sliders feel non impactful here
01:21:627 (4) - Whistle could be added on the repeat and sliderend
01:32:000 (6) - Whistle could be added here to not make this part too bland
01:41:973 (4) - Weak triplet - Whistles would be nice as well
01:47:079 (4) - Same as ^ compared to how this triplet has something on it 01:47:399 (7) -
01:52:186 (4) - Same as ^
Not bad

I have utmost confidence that the other diffs made by you is fine. I believe in your mapping techniques and abilities based on the way you structured your Expert. Good luck man

Fu Xuan

Beatmap Nominator

1,430 posts

Joined September 2015

Fu Xuan 2017-06-02T11:27:34+00:00

Hi! M4M from your queue.

[General]

Turn off Widescreen Support

[Expert]

00:43:329 (3) - Maybe make it a 1/2 slider then a double, to emphasize the white tick.
01:12:691 (9) - 01:13:329 (17) - NC? :d

[scanter's Insane]

00:32:159 (3) - Maybe ctrl g this for flow from (2) and to emphasize 00:32:478 (1) - more
00:36:627 (2,1) - Stack them? :d

[Hard]

00:31:681 (2) - I think this would be better if it would be a 1/1 slider then circle. Because her voice ends on the red tick and I think the white tick should be clickable. This was also confusing rhythm wise when I played it.
00:37:425 (1) - ctrl g for better flow?
00:43:329 (4) - Slidertail is louder than head?
00:49:872 (3) - I think it feels weird to ignore the beat on the white tick there.
00:54:659 (3,1) - Blanket? :d

[Normal]

00:26:095 - Following vocals only plays weird imo
00:34:872 (4,5) - Blanket?
01:04:393 (1,2) - Making them the same slider looks aesthetically better imo

[Easy]

AiMod

That's all, sorry if it's short, felt like it's so hard to mod this lol.

Goodluck!

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scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-06-02T23:34:20+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

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[scanter's Insane]
00:33:915 (2,3) - Not sure why this spacing feels emphasized. It's not strong of a beat compared to (1) but it somehow has a bigger spacing. Sems inconsistent reduced
00:56:335 (5) - Not a very distinguishable beat so this triplet feels weak yup
00:59:207 (6) - Same could be said here ^
00:59:766 (2,3,4,1) - Not sure why these are copy pasted rhythms. I do love the design but it doesn't make sense to utilize the vocals at 01:00:404 (4,1) - but then previously at 00:59:766 (2,3) - it's hit the same way but doesn't have that same vocal pattern so it makes it feel weak of a pattern fixed
01:08:782 (4) - Weak triplet compared to 01:09:420 (9) - same like said previously. The weak triplet halts your pattern ^
01:13:489 (2,3) - Strange playing transition. Usually I'd see the rotation finish but it's just linear when you play it. So the curved sliders feel non impactful here \o\
01:21:627 (4) - Whistle could be added on the repeat and sliderend /o/
01:32:000 (6) - Whistle could be added here to not make this part too bland /o\
01:41:973 (4) - Weak triplet - Whistles would be nice as well \o/
01:47:079 (4) - Same as ^ compared to how this triplet has something on it 01:47:399 (7) - changed drum to soft clap
01:52:186 (4) - Same as ^ okay

Not bad

I have utmost confidence that the other diffs made by you is fine. I believe in your mapping techniques and abilities based on the way you structured your Expert. Good luck man

-Aqua wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue.

[General]
Turn off Widescreen Support

[scanter's Insane]
00:32:159 (3) - Maybe ctrl g this for flow from (2) and to emphasize 00:32:478 (1) - more seems fine to play
00:36:627 (2,1) - Stack them? :d :O

That's all, sorry if it's short, felt like it's so hard to mod this lol. Goodluck!

SPOILER
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scanter

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Joined July 2012

scanter 2017-06-04T07:12:22+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
m4m

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
the drums are kinda unstable at around 00:40:776 - to 00:43:968 - , I think you may need additional timing sections to deal with the offset shifting

scanter's Insane
generally I think the hitsound volume is a bit too high in this diff, especially the 100% volume parts, I hope you can turn it down by 10%~20% sure
00:29:766 (6,1) - exchange NC for consistency? oops
00:32:159 (3) - try CTRL+G? seems fine
00:36:627 (2,1) - stack them properly as you did for other patterns? okay
00:52:585 (4,1) - I'm not sure why you stopped following vocal here, the current rhythm feels kinda random and inconsistent imo changed
01:03:436 (3,4) - CTRL+G? okay
01:40:936 (6,2) - maybe stack them properly? and adjust 01:41:255 (1) - accordingly if you want to keep the blanket it's rare to see
kiai is good

that's all I think
good luck~

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Title:Yume no Tsubomi
TitleUnicode:夢のつぼみ
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Beomsan

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Beomsan 2017-06-05T10:22:29+00:00

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정말 오랜만의 모딩입니다. 미숙하더라도 양해 부탁드려요 D;
일말의 필요성도 없어보이는 의견은 모두 배제하고 작성했습니다.

[Easy]

아래는 이 난이도의 전체적인 리듬에 대한 의견들입니다. 종합 결론부터 말씀드리자면 저는 "보컬을 너무 의식해서 리듬의 전개에 자연스러움이 없다" 라는 생각입니다. 몇 가지 예시와 해결법을 첨부할테니 보고 생각해 주세요.
우선 00:27:053 - 이 곳을 비운 것과 00:27:371 (2) - 이 리버스 슬라이더를 보면 아시겠지만 보컬을 의식하지 않고는 나올 수 없는 리듬입니다. 그리고 저는 이런 리듬의 채용이 초보 플레이어들에게 좋다고는 절대로 생각하지 않습니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268512 <- 일단 제가 제안하는 리듬입니다. 설명하자면 (00:23:861 - 00:24:181 (2) - ) / (00:26:415 - 00:26:734 - ) 이 비슷한 한 쌍의 리듬이라고 볼 수 있는 파트들에 일단 일관성을 맞추고 (00:24:659 - 토 00:24:819 - 츠 00:24:978 - ~제은 / 00:27:212 - 데 00:27:372 - 레 00:27:532 - 쿠) 그 다음 보컬의 시작점이 다른 음 (00:25:298 - 빨간틱 00:27:691 - 흰틱)에 구분을 주는 것이 훨씬 자연스럽다고 생각합니다. 지금 리듬을 최대한 유지하면서 수정을 하는 방법은 웬만하면 같이 적고싶은데 잘 모르겠네요. 저는 기본적인 포맷부터 좋다고 생각하기가 어려웠어서...
00:33:755 - 여기서 보컬의 끌림을 따라 롱 슬라이더로 표현하신건 좋았지만 00:34:872 - 그 다음 노트까지 보컬의 끌림을 따라가면서 맵을 좀 루즈하게 만드는 것 같습니다. 여기선 제 생각에 보컬을 고집하기 보다는 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268561 이런 간단하고 상상하기도 쉬운 리듬이 좋지 않나 싶습니다. 00:37:425 (2,3) - 이 부분과 차별화를 하고싶으셨단 생각이 조금 드는데 그에 관해서는 굳이 롱 슬라이더로 많은 음을 생략하지 않아도 할 수 있으니까 더욱 수정을 권합니다.
00:43:968 - 여기서는 배경음의 악기나 템포(?) 같은 것이 더 풍부하고 밝아지는 느낌이 들어서 리듬을 00:23:542 - 여기처럼 많이 비우기 보다는 조금이라도 더 채운 리듬이 어울릴 것 같습니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268604 일단 이런걸 상상하고 제안한것이고 전의 것들과는 다르게 정말 개인적인 의견이기도 하고 뒷부분의 리듬을 채우는 것도 힘든 일이 될 것 같으니 적극적으로 권하지는 않아요.
00:58:490 - 제가 아무리 스탠을 접은 지가 오래 됐어도 이지에서 슬라 100점이 나온건 정말 처음인 것 같네요. 그 만큼 플레이 할 때 좋은 느낌은 아니라는 뜻입니다.
01:39:500 (3) - 스택?
그 밖에 플레이하기 편하지는 않았던 곳이지만 딱히 제안하기도 뭣한 부분들 타임스탬프 : (01:36:308 (2,3,1) - 여긴 이유도 확정하질 못하겠습니다. 굳이 말하라면 흐름이랄까요... / 00:40:776 (3,1) - 리듬을 다르게 해서 조금이라도 더 쉽게 할 순 없었을까 하는 아쉬움인데 제가 대강 해보니 이게 생각보다 어렵지 않은 편이더군요 / 01:48:436 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 다른 부분에 이 정도 밀도의 노트가 있는 파트가 없는 것 같은데 유독 여기가 밀도가 높아 압박감이 느껴지네요. 사실 이 정도 있는게 저로서는 재밌습니다만 확실한건 다른 파트들과의 조화가 있어보이진 않습니다. / 01:56:574 - 여기서 01:56:893 - 이 음이 무시된게 조금 아쉽네요.)

제가 이지를 많이 찍어본 것도 아니고 잘 찍는 것도 아니라서 핀트가 이상했을 수 있는데 잘 걸러서 봐주시면 감사하겠습니다...

[Normal]

01:12:053 - 뉴 콤보 있으면 좋을 것 같네요 01:12:851 - 01:13:649 - 이런거 리딩하기가 쬐금 곤란했어요
01:29:127 (5) - 01:31:681 (5) - 이런 슬라이더들 필요 이상으로 길게 늘리신 이유가 특별히 있나요? 플레이에 심각하게 문제가 있는건 아닌데 그저 좀 이상했네요 이것만큼은... 다른건 다 너무 좋아용

[Hard]

00:48:356 - 일단 음이 있는건 알겠습니다만 자연스러운 등장은 절대 아니라고 생각되네요... 갑작스런 등장이라고 생각하는 이유는 굳이 그 전의 흐름을 깨고 나올 정도로 두드러지는 음이 아니기 때문 (제가 하드 난이도에선 두드러지는 음이 아닌 1/4는 잡지 않는 편이라서 그렇습니다.)
00:50:989 (3) - 위랑 같은 맥락인데 저는 그냥 무시하고 1/2 이나 1/1 사용하셨으면 좋겠어요

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00:28:170 (4) - 다른 부분들은 노트들간의 연관성을 중요시 하려는 모습이 보였기 때문에 이 것에 한해서 배치가 구조적으로 아주 쬐금 아쉽네요, 달리 아 이거다 하는 장소는 없지만요.... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268762 그저 3점이 아닌 이런 흐름이었으면 조금은 더 나을거같은 기분이
01:03:755 (5) - 이거 대충 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268771 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268773이런 자리는 어떤가요 지금으로선 너무 엉성해보이는데
01:25:617 - 이거 정말 3점이 아니면 좋겠네요 흑흑 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268779
01:40:776 (5) - 이건 01:40:298 (2) - 이거랑 맞추기보단 01:40:298 (2,3) - 두개 사이에 끼우는게 더 플로우가 좋아보이네요

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01:57:691 (1,2,3) - 음 간격이.... 좁은거도 나쁘지 않지만 역시 넓은게..?

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scanter 2017-06-06T07:18:46+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
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정말 오랜만의 모딩입니다. 미숙하더라도 양해 부탁드려요 D;
일말의 필요성도 없어보이는 의견은 모두 배제하고 작성했습니다.

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00:28:170 (4) - 다른 부분들은 노트들간의 연관성을 중요시 하려는 모습이 보였기 때문에 이 것에 한해서 배치가 구조적으로 아주 쬐금 아쉽네요, 달리 아 이거다 하는 장소는 없지만요.... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268762 그저 3점이 아닌 이런 흐름이었으면 조금은 더 나을거같은 기분이 지금도 딱히 플레이하는데에 문제 있는 패턴이라고는 생각하기 어렵네요 ㅜㅜ
01:03:755 (5) - 이거 대충 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268771 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268773이런 자리는 어떤가요 지금으로선 너무 엉성해보이는데 2,3번을 컨쥐했어여
01:25:617 - 이거 정말 3점이 아니면 좋겠네요 흑흑 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268779 올리신 사진에서 2번을 살짝 스쳐지나가는게 플레이 화면에서나 매핑 화면에서나 좀 그렇네요.
01:40:776 (5) - 이건 01:40:298 (2) - 이거랑 맞추기보단 01:40:298 (2,3) - 두개 사이에 끼우는게 더 플로우가 좋아보이네요 이곳은 생각중

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Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2017-06-11T06:46:04+00:00

m4m

Expert

콤보컬러 2번과 3번이 비슷해서 콤보가 바뀐건지 구별하기 어렵네요. 3번과 4번 색을 바꿔보시던지 조금 더 구별하기 쉬운 색으로 바꾸는건 어떤가요?
00:41:016 (3) - 저도 믿기지 않지만 아무리 들어봐도 드럼소리가 00:40:976 - 여기와 00:41:056 - 여기에 들어있습니다. 연타를 넣을거면 이 소리를 살리는게 좋을 것 같고 그냥 지우는것도 좋을 것 같네요.
00:45:803 (4) - 지우시는게 어떤가요? 저한테는 어떤 소리를 듣고 서클을 넣은건지 전혀 이해가 안되네요. 00:45:723 (3,5,6,7,8) - 이 노트들은 확실한 소리가 있는 데 비해서 4번 노트 부분에서는 전혀 들리는 소리가 없네요
00:48:994 (2) - 마찬가지로 저한테는 어떤 소리도 들리지 않네요. 지우시고 1번 노트를 다른데에 배치하는건 어떤가요?
00:51:468 - 여기는 오히려 노트를 넣어보는 편이 좋을 것 같네요. 물론 앞에 5연타가 있어서 유저들에게 조금 힘든 박자가 될 수도 있지만 확실히 들리는 소리를 이런 이유로 스킵한다는건 최고 난이도에서는 좋지 않은 생각인 것 같네요.
01:04:633 (3) - 어떤 소리를 듣고 넣은건지 모르겠네요. 지우시는건 어떤가요?
01:04:872 (5,6,7,8,9) - 마찬가지로 어떤 소리 때문에 5연타가 들어간건지 모르겠네요. 6번과 8번 부분에는 소리가 전혀 없는 것 같아요.
01:08:941 (6,8) - ^
01:11:335 (3) - ^
01:35:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:36:149 - 오히려 여기랑 01:36:228 - 여기에는 더 잘들리는 소리가 있는데도 노트가 빠져있네요.

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2018-04-06T10:29:12+00:00

m4m as requested, just mod some diffs of this set: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/755512#osu/1590239, thanks

general
offset feels really late, around 550 would be better, it's really noticeable on the snare beats like 00:40:458 -
remove countdown from expert (or add to other diffs, but I think removing is nicer)

expert
00:45:962 (6) - would remove this, right now it doesn't work too well with what is happening in the song, as it takes away too much from 00:46:042 (7) -
or maybe rhythm like 00:48:276 (3,4,5,6,7) - ?
00:50:989 - 00:56:095 - adding soft whistle on this would make stream nicer to play hs wise imo cause feedback is more consistent
similarly, lack of whistles on 01:05:032 (7) - 01:07:585 - etc makes them weird to play

00:58:808 (4) - vocals switch to 1/2 here, so 2 circles would work well
01:01:042 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - second one is much more intense in song and hs wise, so maybe lower spacing on first triple or stack it to have some contrast?
01:12:053 - soft finish

copy paste flip thing in second kiai is pretty lame tbh, same for lower diffs...

scanter
00:33:436 (7) - clap
01:12:053 - feels too undermapped, especially with what top diff is doing, consider adding some 1/4 rhythm

hard
01:55:457 (5) - would nc this as it fits the song well and pattern is similar to 00:59:925 (2,3,4,5,1) -

normal
00:41:255 - add whistle to support your rhythm choice

[]
need to see replies first before deciding what to do here, make sure all the other mods have been properly replied to as well

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2018-04-08T13:50:43+00:00

Delis

Delis wrote:
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[General]
romanised artist would be Inori Minase instead, refer to https://inoriminase.com/ // k
nice to have the video where you took the bg from
probably anime mashite in the tags for the source in romaji // thx
would've mapped the beginning of the song // prefer mapping the vocals
tick rate 2 on lower diffs looks sick but whatever // well as they gets rendered and I prefer tick 2 to catch minor beats, I'd keep
[Extra]
01:16:521 (1) - think a whistle would fit here, the vocal feels as important as 01:16:840 (3) and yet only having one on (3) is not really enough here. // added
01:59:925 - here should be better place to end the spinner since you finished the spinner at where the vocal has already faded out, which feels the spinner end follows none in music but the drum. the vocal isn't gone yet where I suggest but in playing this feels a lot better than after the vocal went away. // fixed
this might be just me but the way how you put whistles on the streams feels too spammy sometimes, also I'd just put whistles even if it's with drum or clap because if the whistles play consistently it helps to keep the accuracy consistent as well. // feel like personal preference
[Hard]
00:32:319 (1) - remove this? you made blanks after 2/2 sliders (or whatever the long sliders) came up in the rest of this part but here. 00:52:106 (2) 00:59:127 (1) are the places where you did it. // there was some piano sound that I wanted to express
00:44:606 (3) - HOW THIS ISN'T OFF SCREEN // cuz it's on screen
00:50:989 (3) - I have no idea what this follows, it's not the expert difficulty I would fulfill the rhythm with two 1/2s or 1/1 slider. // fixed
01:26:894 (3) - in the case you forgot a clap on the slider end. // added
[Normal]
00:45:244 (4) - could be nice to catch the vocals and the drum by shortening the slider into 1/1 and a circle at 00:45:723, 00:47:798 (3,4) is one of the rhythms you made it perfect. // This was something I made consistent with 00:24:819 (4) and I wanted a less denser rhythm for the first part.
00:52:585 (2) - opposite slider shape flows nicer imo. // I prefer the current flow to distribute 3/2 and 1/1 rhythm.
[Easy]
01:05:510 (2) - spacing is fucked lol // yea

Zero__wind

Zero__wind wrote:
m4m

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
the drums are kinda unstable at around 00:40:776 - to 00:43:968 - , I think you may need additional timing sections to deal with the offset shifting

Easy
00:31:202 (1,2) - may be only me, but this balnket(?) looks kinda weird with 2 being too curved // was curved a lot since I think curving less will make the appearance weird with the following object.
01:04:393 (1,2) - should keep 1x spacing // fix
01:08:064 (2,1) - they're too closed to each other and don't look so good for that // not sure owo
01:10:776 (2) - maybe avoid touching hp bar with this // should be fine imo
01:37:425 (1,2) - similar to 00:31:202 (1,2) - , try to make 2 less curved? // fix

Normal
will recommend something like CS3.5 to build a better spread between ENH // idk, 3.5 feels still big even its normal.
00:49:553 (2,3,4) - don't really like the flow here, maybe move 3 down to around (120,316) ? // I think the idea itself is similar with 00:29:127 (2,3,4). will leave this as a persoanl preference.
01:12:851 (4,5) - maybe make them a proper blanket cause they really look like that way but really off if so // will rework blankets
01:29:127 (5) - I think ending this at 01:29:606 - would make the rhythm better no matter referring to vocal or percussion // for these parts, I felt the instrument sound ending at the slider something major which I wanted to express as an extended slider.
01:31:681 (5) - ^

Hard
00:33:915 (2,1) - avoid this overlap? doesn't look so neat // since there's enough time, I don't think it should really be noticable
00:45:723 (3) - avoid touching hp bar? // I don't think it matters a lot
00:56:893 (3,5) - avoid overlap? // avoided
00:59:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - they're not technically wrong but it feels a bit weird to use such a tough rhythm at a point which is not even worth emphasizing. 01:54:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels much better in comparison. maybe try merging two circles in 00:59:925 (2,3,4,5) - into one slider to make the difficulty of this pattern more suitable for the song and whole diff // well idk if these were really that hard tbh
01:53:702 (2,3) - improve blanket? // improved

Expert
00:26:095 (1,2,3) - this flow feels quite unnatural and gives a feelinig which is not so fitting to the smooth vocall, I'm neither fan of such many overlaps, maybe move 3 to the right? or rework the pattern other way // idk, I like how this is composed at the current flow
00:46:521 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:127 (5,1) - I don't really like this shape, the head of 1 is too close to 5 thus doesn't look so nice, maybe make the blanket bigger // since (5) will be almost faded out, shouldn't be an issue imo
00:50:191 (1) - ^
01:03:755 (4) - change this to a 1/2 slider and have a circle jump at 01:04:074 - ? I really think you need to make that beat clickable // since 01:03:915 was something weak, I prefer keeping this as full 1/1 slider.
01:04:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - sorry I don't know what rhythm is this, can't really anything suitable for these streams in the music // fixed
01:07:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:12:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1) - and about these, not similar to the above though, as I do agree that there are 1/4 beats in the music which can support the rhythm but still, I don't think this is a good choice as this pattern is simply too hard compared to all the other things in this diff. I don't think it's a good idea to spam such long streams at a point where the music is not really strong and emphasize-worthy, it only makes your kiai feel dumb // for me, this part was the most intensed from the song, even more than the kiai, which lead to this decision.
01:28:808 (5) - changing this to a 1/2 slider and making the vocal at 01:29:127 - clickable should be much more intuitive and understandable imo // used the current rhythm because i think this way would create a better transition towards 01:29:287 (1,2,3,4)
01:31:042 (4) - flip it and make it blanket it with 01:30:883 (3) - ? that would make 01:30:883 (3,4,5) - flow better imo // not sure with the flow better, but I'd prefer keeping the anti-flow
01:58:010 (3) - it's sad that you didn't have a jump here // made a triangle jump

that's all I think
good luck~

Kocari

Kocari wrote:
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[Expert]
Great to see people mapping things other than anime because I know every song
Seems like so much of the beginning is quite mappable but I'll leave that as is.
Widescreen support pls // k
00:29:766 (1) - What's reasoning behind skipping 00:29:845 - You had it this mapped out at 00:28:649 (3) - I do see that you're mapping vocals but I do believe having that hard piano mapped out feels better for this section // I believe this as a personal preference.
00:35:989 (5,1,2,3) - Seems kind of laxed to just go back and forth without much indication in the music, as well as keeping every the same DS which doesn't emphasize stronger piano sounds like at 00:36:308 (2) - Plus it makes transition from 00:36:308 (2,3) - playing feel awkward because of how the sounds are already represented // I patterned this part of the song as a zigzag, consistently to 00:56:401 (7,1,2,3). I think you 're questioning the pattern usage itself, but guess that's some subjective realm.
00:41:095 (4) - Something seems wrong with the timing. The hit object here is really early but compared to the drum beat that's in the music. Either drummers drunk or isn't timed correctly to it. Gets really off at 00:40:776 (1) - yeah it gets really bad should probably look this over imo // applied a new offset.
00:45:723 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Feels overmapped. Completely different change in rhythms compared to previous versus and considering how the map is already badly timed before this point it just makes it feel awkward. Plus to have strange sets of whistles doesn't sound too great as a hitsound profile // removed one note that has got vague beat
00:48:994 (2) - Not much necessarily happening on this note, either I can't hear it or there isn't any indication of a sound here which makes this triplet weak // removed
00:50:989 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as previously, doesn't seem to be striking anything. Seems to me like a random stream is added to bring in flare // nah, I hear something here
00:54:181 (1,2,3,4) - Seems strange to repeat the same pattern again when the last pattern utilized this to create stronger independent sliders for 00:53:861 (7,4) - Definitely no problems with it, just that copy pasting on different things which completely different sound variables seems laxed // this was a similar pattern with 00:32:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4), just that it resulted in something different because 00:53:528 was containing a finish sound unlike 00:33:103. though the shape idea looks similar, I basically felt these to be a little similar each, which I gave difference based on similar shapes
00:56:095 (3,4,5,6,7,2) - Same as previously could be said here // same
00:56:734 (2,3) - Same as previously, just doesn't have a strong impact to create a back and forth pattern here but then keep that same DS to transition from a strong beat to lighter beat. It's inconsistent // same
00:58:808 (4) - This could be 2 single notes. It's not the same as 00:57:851 (1,2,3) - Since you're mapping vocal the last slider was the only one to have her vocal change. So indicating that with the music wouldn't be too shabby // to correlate with 00:38:369 (4), i'd prefer the current rhythm
01:00:085 (4,5,6) - I like this but 00:59:925 (3) - defeats the purpose of having that. Having them all move in a clockwise pattern like that but only 3 of the notes have somewhat of an emphasis on that seems irregular. Wouldn't be as strong of an impact if (3) was placed differently // makes sense, but to me, there wasn't some major difference to do something different there
01:04:872 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same could be said with this stream but the problem I see is the whistle hitsounds. Seems so sporadic played right after 01:04:553 (2,3,4,11) - Really seems like random hitsound profiles // since this stream is gone now, shoudl be fine
01:06:468 (6,7) - Can emphasize this by spacing more than to keep it the same as the others but that's up to you // prefer the current
01:07:106 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as previously with whistles // same
01:09:978 (4) - Could remove the whistle on sliderend, doesn't seem like it's necessary to match with her slightly longer vocals with 01:09:500 (3) - // done
01:12:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,1) - Nice pattern but holyy. If no change just at least make NC changes to a 8x8x8 so it doesn't hit 24 =) // since I'd keep this as a whole, dividing combo wouldn't work nice
01:15:404 (8) - Should be 2 clickable since sounds are completely different to the last slider, just to emphasize into the kiai // did it
01:40:617 (4,5,6) - Now that back and forth makes sense
No problems by me just the ridiculous offset being bad.

I have utmost confidence that the other diffs made by you is fine. I believe in your mapping techniques and abilities based on the way you structured your Expert. Good luck man

-Aqua

-Aqua wrote:
Hi! M4M from your queue.

[General]
Turn off Widescreen Support

[Expert]
00:43:329 (3) - Maybe make it a 1/2 slider then a double, to emphasize the white tick. // since 00:43:489 - was a weak rhythm, I prefer keeping that passive
01:12:691 (9) - 01:13:329 (17) - NC? :d // since I intend that stream as a single pattern as a whole, i prefer the current combo

[Hard]
00:31:681 (2) - I think this would be better if it would be a 1/1 slider then circle. Because her voice ends on the red tick and I think the white tick should be clickable. This was also confusing rhythm wise when I played it. // I think the current rhythm works better with the vocals
00:37:425 (1) - ctrl g for better flow? // I think flow break fits this part better
00:43:329 (4) - Slidertail is louder than head? // as expert
00:49:872 (3) - I think it feels weird to ignore the beat on the white tick there. // vocals
00:54:659 (3,1) - Blanket? :d // made it balanced. blanket won't be possible here due to placement compostition

[Normal]
00:26:095 - Following vocals only plays weird imo // prefer vocals
00:34:872 (4,5) - Blanket? // prefer the current shape
01:04:393 (1,2) - Making them the same slider looks aesthetically better imo // fixed

[Easy]
AiMod

That's all, sorry if it's short, felt like it's so hard to mod this lol. Goodluck!

SPOILER
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/577452

Beomsan

Beomsan wrote:
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정말 오랜만의 모딩입니다. 미숙하더라도 양해 부탁드려요 D;
일말의 필요성도 없어보이는 의견은 모두 배제하고 작성했습니다.

[Easy]
아래는 이 난이도의 전체적인 리듬에 대한 의견들입니다. 종합 결론부터 말씀드리자면 저는 "보컬을 너무 의식해서 리듬의 전개에 자연스러움이 없다" 라는 생각입니다. 몇 가지 예시와 해결법을 첨부할테니 보고 생각해 주세요.
우선 00:27:053 - 이 곳을 비운 것과 00:27:371 (2) - 이 리버스 슬라이더를 보면 아시겠지만 보컬을 의식하지 않고는 나올 수 없는 리듬입니다. 그리고 저는 이런 리듬의 채용이 초보 플레이어들에게 좋다고는 절대로 생각하지 않습니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268512 <- 일단 제가 제안하는 리듬입니다. 설명하자면 (00:23:861 - 00:24:181 (2) - ) / (00:26:415 - 00:26:734 - ) 이 비슷한 한 쌍의 리듬이라고 볼 수 있는 파트들에 일단 일관성을 맞추고 (00:24:659 - 토 00:24:819 - 츠 00:24:978 - ~제은 / 00:27:212 - 데 00:27:372 - 레 00:27:532 - 쿠) 그 다음 보컬의 시작점이 다른 음 (00:25:298 - 빨간틱 00:27:691 - 흰틱)에 구분을 주는 것이 훨씬 자연스럽다고 생각합니다. 지금 리듬을 최대한 유지하면서 수정을 하는 방법은 웬만하면 같이 적고싶은데 잘 모르겠네요. 저는 기본적인 포맷부터 좋다고 생각하기가 어려웠어서... // 글쎄요 저는 크게 초보자들에게 문제가 되지 않는 사안이라고 봅니다. 초보자들이 박자를 클릭함에 있어서 까다로운 박자가 어려운거지 음악을 듣는게 어렵다고는 생각하지 않는데, 음악의 초점을 보컬에 두는 편이기 때문에 단순한 박자를 토대로 보컬을 잡으려고 한 거라 문제가 된다고 생각하지는 않습니다.
00:33:755 - 여기서 보컬의 끌림을 따라 롱 슬라이더로 표현하신건 좋았지만 00:34:872 - 그 다음 노트까지 보컬의 끌림을 따라가면서 맵을 좀 루즈하게 만드는 것 같습니다. 여기선 제 생각에 보컬을 고집하기 보다는 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268561 이런 간단하고 상상하기도 쉬운 리듬이 좋지 않나 싶습니다. 00:37:425 (2,3) - 이 부분과 차별화를 하고싶으셨단 생각이 조금 드는데 그에 관해서는 굳이 롱 슬라이더로 많은 음을 생략하지 않아도 할 수 있으니까 더욱 수정을 권합니다. // 긴 보컬음이 등장하는 00:54:181 (1,2) - 와 함께 사용한 패턴인데, 수정하면 그 특징이 사라질것 같네요.
00:43:968 - 여기서는 배경음의 악기나 템포(?) 같은 것이 더 풍부하고 밝아지는 느낌이 들어서 리듬을 00:23:542 - 여기처럼 많이 비우기 보다는 조금이라도 더 채운 리듬이 어울릴 것 같습니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8268604 일단 이런걸 상상하고 제안한것이고 전의 것들과는 다르게 정말 개인적인 의견이기도 하고 뒷부분의 리듬을 채우는 것도 힘든 일이 될 것 같으니 적극적으로 권하지는 않아요. // 차이가 있는건 인지했습니다만 이지 특성상 세부적으로 맵에 반영하기가 어려울 것 같아서 큰 특징 위주로 표현했습니다.
00:58:490 - 제가 아무리 스탠을 접은 지가 오래 됐어도 이지에서 슬라 100점이 나온건 정말 처음인 것 같네요. 그 만큼 플레이 할 때 좋은 느낌은 아니라는 뜻입니다. // 아마 고쳐지지 않았을까 싶네요
01:39:500 (3) - 스택? / 고침
그 밖에 플레이하기 편하지는 않았던 곳이지만 딱히 제안하기도 뭣한 부분들 타임스탬프 : (01:36:308 (2,3,1) - 여긴 이유도 확정하질 못하겠습니다. 굳이 말하라면 흐름이랄까요... / 00:40:776 (3,1) - 리듬을 다르게 해서 조금이라도 더 쉽게 할 순 없었을까 하는 아쉬움인데 제가 대강 해보니 이게 생각보다 어렵지 않은 편이더군요 / 01:48:436 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 다른 부분에 이 정도 밀도의 노트가 있는 파트가 없는 것 같은데 유독 여기가 밀도가 높아 압박감이 느껴지네요. 사실 이 정도 있는게 저로서는 재밌습니다만 확실한건 다른 파트들과의 조화가 있어보이진 않습니다. / 01:56:574 - 여기서 01:56:893 - 이 음이 무시된게 조금 아쉽네요.) // 키아이는 리맵함

제가 이지를 많이 찍어본 것도 아니고 잘 찍는 것도 아니라서 핀트가 이상했을 수 있는데 잘 걸러서 봐주시면 감사하겠습니다...
[Normal]
01:12:053 - 뉴 콤보 있으면 좋을 것 같네요 01:12:851 - 01:13:649 - 이런거 리딩하기가 쬐금 곤란했어요 // 고침
01:29:127 (5) - 01:31:681 (5) - 이런 슬라이더들 필요 이상으로 길게 늘리신 이유가 특별히 있나요? 플레이에 심각하게 문제가 있는건 아닌데 그저 좀 이상했네요 이것만큼은... 다른건 다 너무 좋아용 // 다른 난이도들 보면 이 부분에 표현하고 싶었던 악기가 있는데, 노말에서는 이런 박자를 사용해서 표현해봤습니다.
[Hard]
00:48:356 - 일단 음이 있는건 알겠습니다만 자연스러운 등장은 절대 아니라고 생각되네요... 갑작스런 등장이라고 생각하는 이유는 굳이 그 전의 흐름을 깨고 나올 정도로 두드러지는 음이 아니기 때문 (제가 하드 난이도에선 두드러지는 음이 아닌 1/4는 잡지 않는 편이라서 그렇습니다.) // 고침
00:50:989 (3) - 위랑 같은 맥락인데 저는 그냥 무시하고 1/2 이나 1/1 사용하셨으면 좋겠어요
[Expert]
01:57:691 (1,2,3) - 음 간격이.... 좁은거도 나쁘지 않지만 역시 넓은게..? // 점프로 바꿈

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Kawashiro

Kawashiro wrote:
m4m

Expert
콤보컬러 2번과 3번이 비슷해서 콤보가 바뀐건지 구별하기 어렵네요. 3번과 4번 색을 바꿔보시던지 조금 더 구별하기 쉬운 색으로 바꾸는건 어떤가요? // 파랑과 분홍인데, 그 이외의 색들도 현재 충분한 구별이 있다고 생각합니다.
00:41:016 (3) - 저도 믿기지 않지만 아무리 들어봐도 드럼소리가 00:40:976 - 여기와 00:41:056 - 여기에 들어있습니다. 연타를 넣을거면 이 소리를 살리는게 좋을 것 같고 그냥 지우는것도 좋을 것 같네요. // 오프셋을 조정하게 될거 같습니다.
00:45:803 (4) - 지우시는게 어떤가요? 저한테는 어떤 소리를 듣고 서클을 넣은건지 전혀 이해가 안되네요. 00:45:723 (3,5,6,7,8) - 이 노트들은 확실한 소리가 있는 데 비해서 4번 노트 부분에서는 전혀 들리는 소리가 없네요 // 조금 다르게 고쳤습니다.
00:48:994 (2) - 마찬가지로 저한테는 어떤 소리도 들리지 않네요. 지우시고 1번 노트를 다른데에 배치하는건 어떤가요? // 지움
00:51:468 - 여기는 오히려 노트를 넣어보는 편이 좋을 것 같네요. 물론 앞에 5연타가 있어서 유저들에게 조금 힘든 박자가 될 수도 있지만 확실히 들리는 소리를 이런 이유로 스킵한다는건 최고 난이도에서는 좋지 않은 생각인 것 같네요. // 보컬이 끊겨서 박자도 끊었습니다.
01:04:633 (3) - 어떤 소리를 듣고 넣은건지 모르겠네요. 지우시는건 어떤가요? // 여기 바꿨어요
01:04:872 (5,6,7,8,9) - 마찬가지로 어떤 소리 때문에 5연타가 들어간건지 모르겠네요. 6번과 8번 부분에는 소리가 전혀 없는 것 같아요. // ^
01:08:941 (6,8) - ^
01:11:335 (3) - ^
01:35:510 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:36:149 - 오히려 여기랑 01:36:228 - 여기에는 더 잘들리는 소리가 있는데도 노트가 빠져있네요. // 저는 오히려 이 음을 비워야 뒷 드럼 강조가 잘 될거 같기도 했고, 실제로 잘 안들리네요

Lasse

Lasse wrote:
m4m as requested, just mod some diffs of this set: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/755512#osu/1590239, thanks

general
offset feels really late, around 550 would be better, it's really noticeable on the snare beats like 00:40:458 - // will adjust after fixing mods
remove countdown from expert (or add to other diffs, but I think removing is nicer) // add to all

expert
00:45:962 (6) - would remove this, right now it doesn't work too well with what is happening in the song, as it takes away too much from 00:46:042 (7) -
or maybe rhythm like 00:48:276 (3,4,5,6,7) - ? // I think things exist at 00:45:883 (3,4,5,6,7). fixed someway else
00:50:989 - 00:56:095 - adding soft whistle on this would make stream nicer to play hs wise imo cause feedback is more consistent
similarly, lack of whistles on 01:05:032 (7) - 01:07:585 - etc makes them weird to play // Personally, I think this issue to be rather subjective regarding hitsound feedbacks, and I prefered the current hitsound setting as I just liked how they sound as it is.

00:58:808 (4) - vocals switch to 1/2 here, so 2 circles would work well // considering the pattern concept of 00:37:425 (1,2,3,4), I think keeping it and expressing the difference of 00:59:127 (1) would be something more effective.
01:01:042 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - second one is much more intense in song and hs wise, so maybe lower spacing on first triple or stack it to have some contrast? // made the first one a slider instead
01:12:053 - soft finish // added, thanks

copy paste flip thing in second kiai is pretty lame tbh, same for lower diffs...

hard
01:55:457 (5) - would nc this as it fits the song well and pattern is similar to 00:59:925 (2,3,4,5,1) - // changed the prior combo setting

normal
00:41:255 - add whistle to support your rhythm choice // added

[]
need to see replies first before deciding what to do here, make sure all the other mods have been properly replied to as well

Thanks for mods.

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2018-04-09T08:34:46+00:00

Lasse wrote:
m4m as requested, just mod some diffs of this set: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/755512#osu/1590239, thanks

scanter
00:33:436 (7) - clap okay
01:12:053 - feels too undermapped, especially with what top diff is doing, consider adding some 1/4 rhythm changed differently

need to see replies first before deciding what to do here, make sure all the other mods have been properly replied to as well

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Title:Yume no Tsubomi
TitleUnicode:夢のつぼみ
Artist:Inori Minase
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Source:アニメマシテ
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Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,085 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2018-04-25T21:33:46+00:00

Hi and gratz for rejoining BNG :3
From my modding queue.

Annotation

Words in red means that is an unrankable issue (= violates the "Rules" in Ranking Critiria General / Ranking Critiria in osu!) that you MUST fix.

Words in bold black means that is an issue that I highly recommand you (= either violate the "Guidelines" in Ranking Criteria General / Ranking Criteria in osu!, or I believe this issue will influence a lot of the experience of playing) to fix.

Words in black means that is an personal issue and have no big influence on your map in my eyes.

The mark "^" means "here is the same question with whose at above".

General

Do you have metadata source for this? Haven't found that in this thread...
Maybe you can change another BG because those Japanese characters on the BG feel a little bit meh

Easy

01:47:305 (1,2) - Flow feels a little weird here, cursor movement becomes unnatural while passing this part. I recommend to change them into something like this.

Normal

01:12:837 (2) - This note represents a subtle beat imo... it's combined with the beats on previous slider but feels kinda weaker than which on 01:12:996 - , which should be more valuable to represent. So maybe you can put this note on 01:12:996 - or change this note into a 1/2 slider?

Hard

Looks fine to me.

scanter's Insane

00:32:624 (2) - Stack is a little bit missing (once you fix the stack you may need to also adjust a bit the parallelogram pattern here to make it looks well).
01:22:571 (2) - Subjective but this slider's shape feels a little bit out (compared with other sliders, this curved too much). So I think maybe instead of a "blanket" pattern, you can try something like this for a better look?
01:23:369 (1,2,3) - Not sure if your original purpose is to make a blanket pattern here, but if so I think it can be improved as currently they are visibly out xD.

Expert

Looks fine to me.

Solid and clean work as always, call me back when you think it's ready xD

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2018-04-26T05:05:05+00:00

Ryuusei Aika

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Hi and gratz for rejoining BNG :3
From my modding queue.

General
Do you have metadata source for this? Haven't found that in this thread... // https://youtu.be/vFwnhegkDdE https://www.inoriminase.com/discography/?page_no=2 should be sufficient imo
Maybe you can change another BG because those Japanese characters on the BG feel a little bit meh // yea, looks some people dislike the bg, but I feel more like doing this kind of bgs over anime characters for this song owo

Easy
01:47:305 (1,2) - Flow feels a little weird here, cursor movement becomes unnatural while passing this part. I recommend to change them into something like this. // I've intended the current flow to make the mirrored pattern of 01:48:422 stand out. So instead the flows, I adjusted the combo here so 01:45:230 (1,2,3) will flow as a combo, which is divided with 01:48:422 (1,2,3) -

Normal
01:12:837 (2) - This note represents a subtle beat imo... it's combined with the beats on previous slider but feels kinda weaker than which on 01:12:996 - , which should be more valuable to represent. So maybe you can put this note on 01:12:996 - or change this note into a 1/2 slider? // beat wise, it may seem subtle in drums but I prefered the instruments in the red line for this section so the long vocal line gets represented as itself, not being blended by the drums. This kind of rythming was also intended in hard too.

Solid and clean work as always, call me back when you think it's ready xD

Thanks for the check!

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2018-04-26T11:17:38+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Hi and gratz for rejoining BNG :3
From my modding queue.

scanter's Insane
00:32:624 (2) - Stack is a little bit missing (once you fix the stack you may need to also adjust a bit the parallelogram pattern here to make it looks well). fixed
01:22:571 (2) - Subjective but this slider's shape feels a little bit out (compared with other sliders, this curved too much). So I think maybe instead of a "blanket" pattern, you can try something like this for a better look? yeah I agree
01:23:369 (1,2,3) - Not sure if your original purpose is to make a blanket pattern here, but if so I think it can be improved as currently they are visibly out xD. changed linear shapes

Solid and clean work as always, call me back when you think it's ready xD

thanks!

https://puu.sh/AaJcs/7e6ead8020.zip

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,085 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2018-04-26T20:50:40+00:00

bubble is a globule of one substance in another, usually gas in a liquid. Due to the Marangoni effect, bubbles may remain intact when they reach the surface of the immersive substance.

In case if anyone want to know why アニメマシテ is the source

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pishifat

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pishifat 2018-04-28T06:47:33+00:00

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00:32:624 (2,4,5,6) - mind how stacking messes up pattern. should be something like 00:40:443 (3,2,3,4) -
01:57:198 (3) - would do something to show all bg instruments dropped out. feels like it blends in too much with intense section despite most of the song being different

scanter
00:33:422 (7) - 00:53:847 (5) - should use the same hitsound. same thing musically

normal
01:30:550 (2,3,4,5) - minor spacing inconsistencies

ez/hard
01:50:337 (1) - may be missing a finish. fits without one on expert because of the stream, but here not so much

scanter

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scanter 2018-04-28T08:01:29+00:00

pishifat wrote:
scanter
00:33:422 (7) - 00:53:847 (5) - should use the same hitsound. same thing musically kk

thanks!

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2018-04-28T08:08:07+00:00

pishifat

pishifat wrote:
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00:32:624 (2,4,5,6) - mind how stacking messes up pattern. should be something like 00:40:443 (3,2,3,4) - // forgot to adjust this after changing the stack leniency. Made both a manual stack.
01:57:198 (3) - would do something to show all bg instruments dropped out. feels like it blends in too much with intense section despite most of the song being different // Currently, I was intending to express that difference as a close spacing setting, which wasn't used in the kiai section. Basically something similar with 01:15:709 (1,2,1,2,3), but the vocals existing at 01:16:347.

normal
01:30:550 (2,3,4,5) - minor spacing inconsistencies // adjusted

ez/hard
01:50:337 (1) - may be missing a finish. fits without one on expert because of the stream, but here not so much // fixed

Thanks!

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