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Kawayi Rika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2020년 3월 27일 금요일 at 오전 7:29:10

Artist: TrySail
Title: adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
Source: エロマンガ先生
Tags: alacat Momochikun 和泉 紗霧 izumi sagiri eromanga ending moe loli 麻倉もも 雨宮天 夏川椎菜 Asakura Momo Amamiya Sora Natsukawa Shiina
BPM: 134
Filesize: 9631kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Easy (1.57 stars, 112 notes)
  2. alacat's Hard (3.35 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Insane (4.42 stars, 341 notes)
  4. Mochi's Insane (4.56 stars, 319 notes)
  5. Normal (2.4 stars, 163 notes)
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spboxer3
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Kin
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Aurele
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milr_
nice :)
alacat
Timing and Metadata check~
Offset : -857

Title : adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
https://trysail.jp/contents/89676
http://eromanga-sensei.com/music/ending/

Tags : 麻倉もも 雨宮天 夏川椎菜 Asakura Momo Amamiya Sora Natsukawa Shiina
https://trysail.jp/profiles
Kyouren
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Zero__wind
Rika in 2017
18:26 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1284146 TrySail - adrenaline!!! -TV Ver- [Insane]]
18:36 Kawayi Rika: 额 吃饭回来了
18:40 Zero__wind: 我看下能不能混点kd
18:41 Kawayi Rika: 233 谢谢
18:42 Zero__wind: 00:10:336 (2,3,4) - 这里感觉间距不太平衡吧 3到4感觉跳太大了一开始打的时候有点不适应
18:42 Zero__wind: 可以把4往左一些视觉上让234等间距也行
18:43 Kawayi Rika: 比如?
18:44 Zero__wind: https://puu.sh/vOAsz/fe09777f9b.jpg
18:44 Zero__wind: 大概这种感觉吧然后你再把4反过来
18:46 Kawayi Rika: 这个怎么截图来着;
18:46 Zero__wind: shift f12
18:47 Kawayi Rika: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8074642
18:48 Kawayi Rika: 这样?
18:48 Zero__wind: 嗯
18:48 Kawayi Rika: 改了
18:49 Zero__wind: 00:16:157 (4,5) - 这里节奏我比较倾向于换一下顺序 把5挪到4的那个时间开始
18:49 Zero__wind: 然后circle补在00:16:493 -
18:50 Zero__wind: 感觉这样34和前面00:15:710 (1,2) - 的二连对应起来比较好理解
18:50 Zero__wind: 00:16:493 - 这里和00:16:605 (6) - 的键盘音听起来也比较像的 都可以打
18:50 Zero__wind: 不会让00:16:605 - 在滑条尾巴上
18:52 Kawayi Rika: 就是换一下位置吗
18:54 Kawayi Rika: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8074689
18:54 Zero__wind: 嗯
18:55 Kawayi Rika: 好 改了
18:55 Zero__wind: 00:23:322 (4,5,6) - 这个地方我建议把5删了然后00:22:874 (3,4,6) - 三个滑条做个跳
18:55 Zero__wind: 应该会和后面的和声配得比较好
18:56 Zero__wind: 啊不好意思 我接个工作电话/.\
18:59 Kawayi Rika: 这个转角度怎么弄来着
18:59 Kawayi Rika: 我试着换个跳
19:03 Zero__wind: 回来了
19:04 Zero__wind: ctrl+shift+r
19:04 Kawayi Rika: 额
19:05 Zero__wind: 00:32:277 (3,4,5) - 这里节奏我觉得做成和00:34:963 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 一样从白线上滑条跟vocal比较好
19:10 Kawayi Rika: 3,4换过来的 节奏?
19:10 Zero__wind: 不是
19:10 Zero__wind: https://puu.sh/vOBgy/c544a729ca.jpg
19:13 Kawayi Rika: 哦 这样啊 懂了
19:14 Zero__wind: 00:40:337 (10,11,12) - 这里考虑也做成五连
19:14 Zero__wind: 和00:38:545 (1,2,3) - 一样的节奏
19:15 Zero__wind: 现在00:40:784 - 这里的重音在滑条尾巴上不太好
19:16 Kawayi Rika: 嗯
19:16 Zero__wind: 00:56:456 (6,7,8,9) - 这个地方试试从00:56:456 (6) - 这里起个1/2滑条
19:17 Zero__wind: https://puu.sh/vOBsU/37ae474c28.jpg
19:17 Zero__wind: 主要是为了能在00:56:904 (9) - 这个地方放个跳
19:17 Zero__wind: 这样就可以yeah了
19:18 Kawayi Rika: 有人说这个268
19:18 Kawayi Rika: BPM
19:18 Kawayi Rika: 是吗
19:20 Zero__wind: 呃
19:20 Zero__wind: 个人比较倾向于134吧 我说不太好
19:21 Kawayi Rika: 有人说134是UNRANK
19:21 Kawayi Rika: 哭了
19:21 Zero__wind: 到时候找几个QAT问一下就好了 不是什么大事情
19:21 Zero__wind: 反正要改的话就BPM翻倍sv减半就完了 跟图没什么关系
19:22 Kawayi Rika: 额 那就好了 多谢大神
19:23 Zero__wind: 不是大问题
19:23 Zero__wind: 01:07:202 (1,2) - 和01:09:889 (2,3,4) - 的地方考虑间距大一些
19:24 Zero__wind: kiai里面这些1/4间距还没前面00:20:859 (3,4,5) - 这种的大感觉不太好
19:24 Zero__wind: 00:53:769 (7,8,9) - 类似这样的间距我觉得都还比较合适
19:27 Kawayi Rika: 这样 间距有大问题吗
19:27 Zero__wind: 也不能说是大问题吧 就是觉得不太合适 跟音乐的强弱不太契合吧
19:29 Kawayi Rika: 01:09:889 (2,3,4) - 这个
19:29 Kawayi Rika: 间距跟前面一样的改了 比较好吧
19:29 Zero__wind: 嗯
19:30 Kawayi Rika: 好
19:30 Zero__wind: 然后就是01:10:784 (6,7) - 这里 换个顺序比较好
19:31 Zero__wind: 6的那个白线上起滑条然后01:11:232 - 这里放circle
19:31 Zero__wind: 和前面00:56:904 (9) - 这里说的一个意思,可以在yeah~的地方放个跳
19:33 Zero__wind: 00:58:247 (5,1) - 这里效果就很好
19:34 Kawayi Rika: 没听懂 哭了
19:34 Zero__wind: ;w;
19:34 Kawayi Rika: 能截图吗
19:35 Zero__wind: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8074995
19:35 Zero__wind: 大概这种感觉?
19:35 Zero__wind: 位置我是随便摆的
19:38 Kawayi Rika: 这个好难改;
19:38 Zero__wind: 01:11:232 - 音乐里这个地方不是有个yeah的人声嘛 我觉得这里放个跳会很好
19:38 Zero__wind: 你现在的话是在滑条尾巴上了
19:39 Kawayi Rika: 换成2个CIRCLE 跳?
19:39 Zero__wind: 也可以吧
19:40 Kawayi Rika: 嗯
19:41 Zero__wind: 大致就这些吧
19:42 Kawayi Rika: 嗯 往上翻着看呢 我改的速度太慢 T_t
19:42 Zero__wind: 没事慢慢来0.0
19:43 Zero__wind: 我去发log了
19:43 Kawayi Rika: 嗯 多谢了啊
19:43 Zero__wind: 嗯
good luck~
Curisu
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Xinely
欢迎回来!
Rizia

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ye m4m

easy
nothing

normal
00:00:710 (1,2) - the struggle is too much here xd.maybe a circle and then 1/1 slider? for better rhythm imo
00:06:978 (6) - i think its quite hard when before this slider theres a slider that ended on blue tick (player would misclicking) so im suggest you to make a reverse at 00:06:307 (5) - and then a circle on the white tick
00:32:277 (3,4,5) - 3 circles stacked on normal diff? its quite hard imo,just use 1/2 reverse slider here
00:38:545 (1,2) - 1/4 reverse slider? i think its unrankable imo on normal diff,try this rhythm for better i guess : http://prntscr.com/fcpiaw
00:44:814 - maybe clap here for drum?
00:51:083 (5) - it looks good if you adds whistle on both sliderhead and tail imo.samre as you did at 01:01:829 (7) -
01:01:829 (7) - nc here?
01:05:411 (5) - same as before
01:14:143 (7) - the rhythm more sense if you del this circle cause you always make the rhythm on the whole diff based on vocal
01:19:740 (6) - nc?
01:25:113 (5) - same as before

hard
00:13:919 (2,3) - the rhythm feels weird when you really emphatize the drum here.the drum at 00:14:366 - its not really strong imo (the trumpet's sound looks strong here instead) so i prefer you emphatize the trumpet at 00:14:254 - first and then 1/4 reverse slider at 00:14:814 - for the drum
00:16:045 (2,3) - ^ the drum at 00:16:605 - strong but you didnt make it clickable.i suggest you make a reverse on slider (2) and then a circle at 00:16:605 -
00:55:560 (3,4,5,6,1) - too far if you compared with 01:09:888 (3,4,5,6,1) - that has same sound and density


insane
this diff is too random for me i can't mod it(idk if its bad or not cause it just random)
so im pass

mochi
00:00:598 (1,2) - mungkin ini bisa di stack di slider (1) biar beda dari yg lain (di diff lain nggk di stack) biar lebih enak aja gitu
00:27:128 (5,6) - mungkin jump disini? biar enak ke vocal dan trumpet
00:38:098 (7) - jgn di stack biar enak movementnya ketika ke circle (8)
00:39:441 (4,5,6) - jujur nggk nendang atau kurang ngena dgn musiknya kalau pakai nih rhythm,lebih baik pakai rhythm yg di 00:40:337 (1,2) - di copy
00:47:837 (2) - ctrl g? biar kerasa drum dan trumpetnya
00:58:583 (2,3) - stack aja deh biar enggak bingung player ngekliknya,kayak 00:56:904 (2,3) -
01:26:008 (1) - mungkin slider disini? utk ngehabisin suara trumpetnya.

GL!
Invertable
Hi M4M from your queue
Sry cause I'm little bit late had some irl stuff :S
Pls don t black list me cause i edited post i really didn t mean too

Widescreen support is only turned on in Normal diff which I think should be in every diff since you have video in your map

alacat's Easy

  • 01:10:784 (1) - So you put Circle on a strong cymbal sound and i think slider would be much better cause slider head emphasis is much bigger than circle and since you already have 2 circles before this sound it would be amazing to put slider instead of circle plus this is the only place in this part where you put circle on cymbal instead of slider.
    01:25:113 (1) - Also a suggestion on this place how about 3/4 reverse slider with circle on 01:26:008 (1) - Just for the emphasis
Normal

  • 00:00:710 (1) - This one idk might be actually confusing cause you hear that strong beat on blue tick right before slider starts which might make players react differently (just my logic cause they are still newbies...) but will still make a suggestion to make 1/4 slider on the blue tick just so you have that circle on start of this section 00:01:381 (2,3,4) - cause slider end is kinda mehh not great emphasis.
    00:01:829 (3) - Should this one be placed in the middle of 00:01:381 (2,4) ?
    00:06:307 (5) - NC ?
    00:15:262 (5) - ^
    00:24:217 (4) - ^
    00:24:441 (1) - And remove NC here
    01:05:411 (6) - Fix this slider a little bit so its a nice blanket with 01:06:531 (7)
    01:17:277 (4) - I think this one is little bit weird cause it changes the direction drastically since this slider 01:16:157 (3) - is pointing the other direction and next slider which is 2/4 tick away which is quite a challenge for newbie players is placed down which ruins the flow so suggesting you to put it in the direction of the slider end
alacat's Hard

  • 00:34:963 (1,2) - Hmm idk why you put circles here instead of slider but idk I would just suggest if you have circles here to put them instead of this slider too 00:35:859 (4) - cause it feels like something is missing on this slider but also I'm suggesting to put Slider instead of 2 circles on the start cause its the same melody as this part 00:31:381 (1,2,3,4)
Insane

  • 00:15:262 (9) - NC?
    00:48:396 (4) - Should this one be emphasized like a lot. Its such a strong sound yet you put such low DS on it instead of big jump and even NC since you made a triangle before it this one will just ruin the pattern. Suggestion is to put a NC and a big jump
    Yeah not so much problem here but i think the diff is practically all the same what i mean by that is everything is the same you cant even notice the difference between the kiai part and pre-kiai part i would buff kiai part little bit more but that is all or maybe this can be light insane too :D
Mochi's Insane

  • 00:18:620 (6,1) - Why don t you blanket these too
    00:19:292 (2,3) - If you blanket these you will have better looking pattern plus you won t have this 00:19:292 (2,4) - Weird looking overlap cause when you blanket them you will have enought space to stack 00:19:963 (4) - on the slider end of 00:19:292 (2)
    00:21:083 (2,3,4) - These could be placed better cause its only 1/4 tick between then and first 2 are fine but 00:21:419 (3,4) - are so not flowing well xd my english. I think if you Ctrl+G this one 00:21:419 (3) - that everything would be better.
Ok I hope this mod was somewhat helpful and GL with the map :D

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