1. Easy! (1.93 stars, 105 notes)
2. Expert! (5.51 stars, 485 notes)
3. Hard! (3.54 stars, 252 notes)
4. Normal! (2.43 stars, 154 notes)
5. Voli's Insane! (4.78 stars, 403 notes)

• Expert!

1. 00:02:855 (2,3,4,5) - Could help by moving this slightly more toward the left just for better flow here (Minor)
2. 00:33:773 (3,4,5) - I felt in this area the triples like this one shouldn't be the same spaced like this 00:24:742 (2,3,4) - because this is a more calmer section so maybe reduce all of them to reflect that?

bite you death wrote:

hey i cant mod and i cant be arsed to format so yea

general

widescreen support is inconsistent
disable countdown?
the mp3 sounds a bit quiet, here's a louder one: https://puu.sh/yL0J9.mp3 (offset 160 aka +60) ill fix this later probably
consider adding a normal-hitclap, default one sucks imo, try this one
ADD NINTENDO TO TAGS????

expert

00:22:064 - add a circle here? the sound at 00:21:987 - repeats it sounds like im kinda confused here but my rhythm choice is based on the fact that the main instrument swithces to this 1/2 focused thing and so i ignored more of the 1/4 here to represent the music
00:23:594 - add circle here too? same sound here as at 00:24:819 - compare it to 00:26:043 - actually.
00:28:875 (1,2,1,2,1) - very weird that you dont map the sounds on 1/4s here, they're very clear and loud, and since the map has a bunch of triplets and streams prior to this why not add a stream or something here? I had a hard time with this, a stream doesnt really work and using some weird double rhythm also is kinda meh. I stuck with just circles cause i might as well just finish up with the piano based square pattern. I might revisit this later,
u wont be the last to talk about it
00:35:610 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap doesnt fit with the rest of the map, nor does it look that nice tbh i dont consider this an overlap, its just stacked sliders
00:38:671 (3) - maybe nc this cause its a finish and also beginning of a new pattern isnt needed imo
00:58:492 - mb add circle prefer 1/2 rhythm here, kinda mixes stuff if i do that
01:08:977 (1) - increase sv for this slider only to create more contrast between it and 01:08:671 (1) - you dont think its enough contrast already? might up it i guess
01:17:242 (1,2,3) - this pattern is odd, maybe move 01:17:701 (3) - to make it look more like other patterns in the map? wot? it follows the same symmetry gimmick as the rest of them

hard

00:15:559 (2,1) - reverse to the next object like this isnt rly good for a hard diff imo, would be better if u placed it below like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9815576 id agree if this wasnt a 1/1 gap
00:16:477 (2,3) - stac g
00:27:038 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - make the stacks equally spaced? the pattern makes it fine to break the spacing by a small amount
00:29:487 (1) - isnt this like the only spacing change in the whole map? its pretty unnecessary imo Fixed
00:50:916 (4) - center the middle node more so it looks like a shorter version of 00:51:222 (5) - sure
00:59:640 (2,3,4) - why the ds increase for this only? if anything 00:58:875 (1) - should have the ds inscrease view with stacking
01:13:569 (1,1) - why not circle on 1/1 slider like everywhere else? the music changes slightly, it doenst have that pause effect
01:18:467 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - make the stacks equally spaced i actually just rotated the sliders here so it should be even

normal

general spacing seems to be too big imo yea i kinda needed to for spread. its still playable as a normal by babies
00:22:600 (2) - wrong ds? it's 1.4 when everything else is 1.3 view with stacking
00:46:630 (1) - this looks ugly imo, curving it a bit like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9815614 looks much better imo changed the shape
01:00:559 (5) - wrong ds view with stacking
01:08:671 (1,1) - 01:11:120 (1,1) - 01:13:569 (1,1) - 01:16:018 (1,1) - stack like you did in hard? but then im using 1/2 and 1/1 stacks right next to each other in normal which is hard to read
01:20:916 (1) - thats evil hope theyre paying attention

easy

00:19:691 (1,1) - ugly overlap its barely visible in game
00:23:977 (4,3) - nazi overlap not visible in game
00:27:038 (1) - maybe remove this note to give the player more time to prepare for spinner? this is an easy diff afterall (same at 01:18:467 (1) -) its long enough that they can see it coming
00:39:589 (2) - make this more even did
00:51:222 (4,2) - 00:54:895 (2,4,2) - idk this might be hard to read cause at one point they're simultaneously on screen theres enough time to read this, theyre onscreen for like a millisecond lol

#1 subjective modder bite you death OUT

1. 00:14:793 (1,2) - Why a gap? It doesn't seem to be emphasizing anything in particular and feels a bit out of place. If it's purely for SR, consider changing it, it doesn't add that much density to the section methinks, and having a blank space there feels odd when 00:13:263 (2) - is mapped. Unlike 00:46:630 (1,2) - this gap doesn't add emphasis to anything
   
2. 00:25:814 (3,4) - Consider making these pair with 00:23:365 (3,4) - , they follow much of the same sounds and I think if they looked similar in shape to those straight sliders it would seem more logical than the current pattern. I also dislike the current movement of 00:25:814 (3,4) - from 3 to 4
   
3. 00:39:589 (2) - Looks awkwardly bent, try having red anchor point moved to 216,180 and the next sliderpoint (aka the fourth total) at 267,276. Currently the mountain in the middle of the slider looks tilted to the right for some reason
   
4. 00:41:732 (1,2,3) - Why the rhythm change from long slider like 00:39:589 (2) -? Song is the same here I'm pretty sure. I know there's a lot of drums and stuff that can be missed by using that type of pattern but you did it before, and I think in a lowest diff it is not a bad idea to follow the simplest of the melodies, as that is the most prominent to the untrained ears of newbies. Sort of similar thing at 00:44:181 (1,2) -
   
5. 01:08:671 (1,1) - As much as I appreciate the rainbow explosion, especially with the color of the BG, is it not a bit much to NC this way? YMMV though I suppose.
   
6. 01:13:875 (1) - Inconsistency is not a good thing generally, I know. But the music here is not the same as 01:08:977 (1) - 01:11:426 (1) - 01:16:324 (1) - any of these three other areas. The notes there are held sounds, but here that melody is different. Even if it is the lowest diff, where simplicity is key, to emphasize the melody so well with long sliders like that and then to not differentiate the change in the music, well, I cannot agree with this.

1. 00:43:263 (5,1) - Ehhh, instead of it being above slider 5, it's to the side of it? The expected movement here is upwards both in pattern terms and pitch, recommend changing the location of he next few patterns, even if it's a big hassle (which it is)
   
2. 01:00:100 (4,5,6) - Minor thing maybe, but consider positioning the sliderend of 4 more in the middle of the slider 6, something like this perhaps. Can be done without ruining DS 1.3
   
3. 01:01:936 (2,3) - What's with the movement between these two, you haven't followed a smooth flow for the rest of the section so sure why not, but it's a little odd, the flow from the sliderend of 2 into the sliderbody of 3, isn't it? Don't have a suggestion that can be easily implemented without having to adjust ten different objects though.
   
4. 01:08:365 (6,1) - Dislike angle. Consider moving 1 more to the left and upwards
   
5. 01:08:977 (1,4) - Unlike overlaps such as 00:12:038 (6,1) - , this example here doesn't look very nice, at least to me personally. Simply moving the slider 4 a bit to the right and down prevents it.
   
6. 01:11:732 (2) - Optional, might be a bit smoother movement if 2 was under 1 and 3 instead of being above them. All other instances of this 3 sliders patterning is pretty smooth slider to slider. Overlap with previous 4 slider is irrelevant.
   
7. 01:20:916 (1) - How mean to do such a thing :c

1. 00:07:140 (5) - Consider pointing the slidertail outwards to the left, so the movement of the slider after the reverse goes towards the sliderhead of "1" instead of towards the sliderend of "4". Something like this perhaps. Similar thing at 01:01:936 (3) -
   
2. 00:17:702 (2,3,4) - Sounds better to me rhythmically if it's circle then triple instead of 1/2 tick red to white slider into double 1/4. Wouldn't make it that much denser imo, and you could always use a 1/4 repeat slider instead of a triple as well
   
3. 00:18:926 (3,4,5) - Similarly here, note that 00:18:773 and 00:18:926 - in the song together form a prominent sound, making the second note of that a held slider doesn't seem like the best choice to make here. In the case of 00:17:242 (1,1) - there's that low pitched baritone string noise in the background that fits to the longer held slider, but here there isn't a long 1/1 slider.
   
4. 00:29:028 (2,3) - Consider mapping the 1/4 between these
   
5. 01:15:713 (6) - Move it more upwards to make a more symmetrical pattern?

1. 00:46:324 (1) - Bit random, difficult to read, and I don't know what the SV change is following to be perfectly honest.
   
   Can't mod this very well due to the stylistic choices used, interesting mix of old and new. Not a fan of 00:58:263 (1,1,1,1) - or 01:08:059 (1,2,3,4) - as the spacing crunch doesn't make much sense to me. Nice difficulty in general however.

1. 01:08:977 (1) - 01:11:426 (1) - 01:13:875 (1) - 01:16:324 (1) - I know why you add these nc, but these
   nc won't help beginners to read, they will just make beginners confused. Cancel these nc (01:08:671 (1) - 01:11:120 (1) - 01:13:569 (1) - 01:16:018 (1) - ) or (01:08:977 (1) - 01:11:426 (1) - 01:13:875 (1) - 01:16:324 (1) - ), both are fine imo

1. 00:23:977 (7) - touch the hp bar
   
2. 00:57:651 (1) - ^
   
3. 01:08:671 (1,1) - ……same as easy diff

1. Fine

1. 00:26:426 (1,2,3,4) - a bit too hard to read in insane diff imo
   
2. 00:27:038 (1,2,3,4) - i do agree about changing sv here, but 0.1-0.4 is too low for this diff
   
3. 01:08:671 (1) - 01:11:120 (1) - 01:16:018 (1) - ^ (0.75 is flow enough)
   
4. 00:46:324 (1) - idk why you changed sv here. And you didn't do it at 00:40:202 (6) - 00:41:426 (6) - ……too
   
5. 00:58:263 (1,1,1,1) - I don't think these pattern can work in insane diff (though it's cool in expert diff)
   
6. 01:08:059 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

1. 01:16:018 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think music here is more similar as 01:11:120 (1,1) - than 01:13:569 (1,2,3,1,2) - , so you can use the same rhythm as 01:11:120 (1,1) -

00:02:855 (2,3,4,5) - Could help by moving this slightly more toward the left just for better flow here (Minor) not sure how this helps the flow
00:33:773 (3,4,5) - I felt in this area the triples like this one shouldn't be the same spaced like this 00:24:742 (2,3,4) - because this is a more calmer section so maybe reduce all of them to reflect that? considering the triplets are part of the intense parts of this slow section, it should be okay

Arf wrote:

Hello, M4M from your queue. Apologies for the delay. My map: this thing

Goomba
Easy difficulties are a pain in the glutes.

1. 00:14:793 (1,2) - Why a gap? It doesn't seem to be emphasizing anything in particular and feels a bit out of place. If it's purely for SR, consider changing it, it doesn't add that much density to the section methinks, and having a blank space there feels odd when 00:13:263 (2) - is mapped. Unlike 00:46:630 (1,2) - this gap doesn't add emphasis to anything This gap is pretty much entirely because I think the player needs a gap here. It's a situation where I'm going to focus on playability.
   
2. 00:25:814 (3,4) - Consider making these pair with 00:23:365 (3,4) - , they follow much of the same sounds and I think if they looked similar in shape to those straight sliders it would seem more logical than the current pattern. I also dislike the current movement of 00:25:814 (3,4) - from 3 to 4 Implemented
   
3. 00:39:589 (2) - Looks awkwardly bent, try having red anchor point moved to 216,180 and the next sliderpoint (aka the fourth total) at 267,276. Currently the mountain in the middle of the slider looks tilted to the right for some reason
   
4. 00:41:732 (1,2,3) - Why the rhythm change from long slider like 00:39:589 (2) -? Song is the same here I'm pretty sure. I know there's a lot of drums and stuff that can be missed by using that type of pattern but you did it before, and I think in a lowest diff it is not a bad idea to follow the simplest of the melodies, as that is the most prominent to the untrained ears of newbies. Sort of similar thing at 00:44:181 (1,2) - Implemented
   
5. 01:08:671 (1,1) - As much as I appreciate the rainbow explosion, especially with the color of the BG, is it not a bit much to NC this way? YMMV though I suppose. I think this NC thing is a cute gimmick since it shows up in all of my difficulties.
   
6. 01:13:875 (1) - Inconsistency is not a good thing generally, I know. But the music here is not the same as 01:08:977 (1) - 01:11:426 (1) - 01:16:324 (1) - any of these three other areas. The notes there are held sounds, but here that melody is different. Even if it is the lowest diff, where simplicity is key, to emphasize the melody so well with long sliders like that and then to not differentiate the change in the music, well, I cannot agree with this. I'm very hesitant to change this because while i totally understand your point, I dont think theres a great way I can express the difference in an Easy diff due to my limitation on rhythm.

Koopa Troopa
Didn't expect that spacing, my goodness. You're the BN and all, but isn't this a bit too high? The spacing itself is fine. Its also needed for the spread.

1. 00:43:263 (5,1) - Ehhh, instead of it being above slider 5, it's to the side of it? The expected movement here is upwards both in pattern terms and pitch, recommend changing the location of he next few patterns, even if it's a big hassle (which it is) I think you're looking at the movement too literally, as in you exit the slider and the cursor must go in the exit direction within a certain angle. I agree to an extent but this should definitely be fine for the player.
   
2. 01:00:100 (4,5,6) - Minor thing maybe, but consider positioning the sliderend of 4 more in the middle of the slider 6, something like this perhaps. Can be done without ruining DS 1.3
   
3. 01:01:936 (2,3) - What's with the movement between these two, you haven't followed a smooth flow for the rest of the section so sure why not, but it's a little odd, the flow from the sliderend of 2 into the sliderbody of 3, isn't it? Don't have a suggestion that can be easily implemented without having to adjust ten different objects though. Similar response to before. Should be fine.
   
4. 01:08:365 (6,1) - Dislike angle. Consider moving 1 more to the left and upwards this makes almost no notable change in the movement though
   
5. 01:08:977 (1,4) - Unlike overlaps such as 00:12:038 (6,1) - , this example here doesn't look very nice, at least to me personally. Simply moving the slider 4 a bit to the right and down prevents it. may consider this but imo this looks fine
   
6. 01:11:732 (2) - Optional, might be a bit smoother movement if 2 was under 1 and 3 instead of being above them. All other instances of this 3 sliders patterning is pretty smooth slider to slider. Overlap with previous 4 slider is irrelevant. done
   
7. 01:20:916 (1) - How mean to do such a thing :c training them for the future

Thwomp

1. 00:07:140 (5) - Consider pointing the slidertail outwards to the left, so the movement of the slider after the reverse goes towards the sliderhead of "1" instead of towards the sliderend of "4". Something like this perhaps. Similar thing at 01:01:936 (3) - sure
   
2. 00:17:702 (2,3,4) - Sounds better to me rhythmically if it's circle then triple instead of 1/2 tick red to white slider into double 1/4. Wouldn't make it that much denser imo, and you could always use a 1/4 repeat slider instead of a triple as well disagree, i prefer to save triplets for the chorus esp for this bpm where it can be considered a bit of a challenge
   
3. 00:18:926 (3,4,5) - Similarly here, note that 00:18:773 and 00:18:926 - in the song together form a prominent sound, making the second note of that a held slider doesn't seem like the best choice to make here. In the case of 00:17:242 (1,1) - there's that low pitched baritone string noise in the background that fits to the longer held slider, but here there isn't a long 1/1 slider. I think you're looking at as ones a circle ones a slider where I'm looking at it like both are clickables.
   
4. 00:29:028 (2,3) - Consider mapping the 1/4 between these i left this unmapped in all the relevant difficulties. I prefer to follow this important piano sound over the background drum things considering how climactic that instrument is here.
   
5. 01:15:713 (6) - Move it more upwards to make a more symmetrical pattern? considering this, but it breaks some visual spacing stuff and i dont think its that much of an improvement. good catch tho

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/692559/

[Easy]

1. 01:08:977 (1) - 01:11:426 (1) - 01:13:875 (1) - 01:16:324 (1) - I know why you add these nc, but these
   nc won't help beginners to read, they will just make beginners confused. Cancel these nc (01:08:671 (1) - 01:11:120 (1) - 01:13:569 (1) - 01:16:018 (1) - ) or (01:08:977 (1) - 01:11:426 (1) - 01:13:875 (1) - 01:16:324 (1) - ), both are fine imo

these arent to help or hurt with reading, but to for my little nc gimmick i have going through all of my diffs. I think it's cute.

[Normal]

1. 00:23:977 (7) - touch the hp bar
   
2. 00:57:651 (1) - ^ i dont consider these issues unless it overlaps a lot of the hp bar.
   
3. 01:08:671 (1,1) - ……same as easy diff same

[Hard]

1. Fine

[Expert]

1. 01:16:018 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think music here is more similar as 01:11:120 (1,1) - than 01:13:569 (1,2,3,1,2) - , so you can use the same rhythm as 01:11:120 (1,1) - Applied

Cool map, not too much to say
GL

sahuang wrote:

Voli
00:46:324 (1) - i dont see any reason of using a slow slider for this it was for contrast with the next part, tho yea i agree its a bit random cuz its nowhere else in the diff
00:58:263 (1,2,3,4) - this is too tricky for game play, i dont think it is ok. It would be better if you do sth like 01:08:059 (1,2,3,4) - no,
i dont agree, its actaully very easy to play (since you can get 300s just holding your cursor in one place) and it fits the pitch escalation really well imo. i don't want to change this to be dull/boring because imo it fits the part well
01:08:671 (1) - slider is too short, same for the other 2. Simply raise SV a bit i asked in the other mod reply too, why is it too short? i think it's good because it makes the contrast stand out the best
Top diff seems ok, tho i feel it is a bit messy

sahuang wrote:

Hi

Please check aimod/modding assistant, there are some conflicts

Easy
00:01:324 (2,3) - 2 1/1 sliders here seem better imo i like having this much less dense lead in as the intro tbh, hard to create contrast in easy so i have to make a drastic change in the rhythm
00:15:712 - no idea why this beat is empty gives the player rest for a beat, its only an easy so i think its helpful.

Normal
00:44:181 (1,2,3) - 00:45:406 (4,5,6) - due to stack leniency, although you use the same DS there will be visual differences first one is okay but the second one i fixed, thanks

Hard
00:57:268 - 00:57:880 - add circles to be consistent with 00:56:426 (1,2,3) - i think 00:56:426 (1,2,3) - is more consistent with 00:55:202 (1,2,3), 00:57:651 (1,2) - doesnt have it since i think the triplet takes away from the piano
01:13:569 (1) - inconsistent with other circles intentional since there is no stopping effect in the music, unlike the other instances which use the circle and stack.

Top diff seems ok, tho i feel it is a bit messy

Naotoshi wrote:

why is audio so quiet =(