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Natsu

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2017-08-25T21:44:17+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
Hello, NM from queue.
Natsu's Hard
Here you have some minor things

00:17:335 (2,1,2,3) - Try rotating this triangle by some degrees and creating blanket with slider, like that. it's a diamond 00:17:335 (2,1,2,3) -
00:19:181 (2,1,2,3,1) - ^ This can be changed as above, as its Ctrl+c Ctrl+v. same
00:22:412 (1,2) - Please stack it properly ok
00:24:028 (4,2) - This overlap is meh, maybe stack slider with this circle it ruins the structure, i can live with it
00:30:951 (1,2,3,1) - 00:32:797 (1,2,3,1) - 00:34:643 (1,2,3,1) - 00:38:104 (1,2,3,4) - 00:39:951 (1,2,3,4) - 00:41:797 (1,2,3) - a bit to close to each other - circles are almost touching and it looks kinda bad imo. Try spacing these a bit more. (not jumps - space between these 00:30:951 (1,3) - 00:31:182 (2,1) - ) almost, they aren't touching each other and imo looks great
01:38:567 (2) - Stack this properly ok
02:06:489 (3) - Try to adjust it more. Placing internal slider-nodes on x:391 y:326 and x:391 y:388 will make it look better (imho). it looks fine
02:08:335 (3) - The same thing if you followed what i said above: 02:06:489 (3) - copy this and rotate same
02:11:105 (4,1,2) - I saw in your previous reply that it plays ok for you, but wide-angled jumps may be no-good for hard diffs players. ok
02:21:028 (3) - This can be adjusted too. it's fine
02:21:952 (1,3) - 02:22:182 (2,4) - These are almost touching - maybe make bigger space between these. they aren't
02:22:874 (5) - ^

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Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2017-08-27T10:04:42+00:00

Firetruck can't check mods due to IRL, so she requested me to check mods for her instead.

Akitoshi wrote:
Firetruck's Easy
02:11:335 (3,4) - two 1/1 slider might emphasize better with those vocals as it's similar with 00:27:951 (3,4) - 01:41:797 (3,4) - etc You're right, fixed.

Bakari wrote:
Firetruck's Easy
00:37:643 - 00:39:489 - I really wish these were clickable to highligjht the powerful part.
00:42:720 (3,4) - sort of the same thing. These would function a lot better as 4 circles. A slight difficulty spike would be totally justified.
Note: 01:41:797 (3,4) - same.

Pretty basic, at times the 1/1 rhythm felt a bit overdone but the song itself justifies that, so I think we are good here.
Added circles in the strong beats that were mentioned.

And about the idea of 1/2 in kiais, I'll just leave those to Firetruck herself since I don't want to change a lot in a diff that's not mine.

Anyways, thank you for the mods!

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150,138,19733,2,0,B|194:132|194:132|253:139,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,137,20656,2,0,P|394:115|440:113,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,186,21579,2,0,P|463:208|417:210,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,136,22502,5,10,0:0:0:0:
352,28,22964,1,2,0:3:0:0:
256,76,23425,2,0,L|160:80,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,100,24349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,208,24810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,316,25272,2,0,B|105:308|105:308|157:314,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,274,26195,6,0,P|299:266|353:273,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,27579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,222,28041,1,10,0:0:0:0:
84,116,28502,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,56,28964,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,160,29425,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,252,29887,6,0,P|311:244|351:252,1,90,4|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,343,30810,2,0,P|227:351|187:343,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,297,31733,2,0,B|108:254|108:254|101:193,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,106,32656,2,0,B|182:113|182:113|243:106,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,71,33579,6,0,P|341:111|328:171,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,262,34502,2,0,P|293:302|306:362,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,354,35425,2,0,L|86:348,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,244,36349,2,0,L|179:250,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,328,37272,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,228,37733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,124,38195,2,0,L|140:112,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,124,39118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,20,39579,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,20,40041,2,0,L|280:32,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,32,40964,6,0,P|390:82|381:130,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,31,42349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,88,42810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,104,43272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,200,43733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,220,44195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,168,44656,6,0,P|243:122|228:70,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,107,45579,2,0,P|119:153|134:205,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,46502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,268,46964,2,0,L|403:261,2,90,8|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,304,48349,6,0,B|107:279|107:326|12:299,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,204,49733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,128,50195,2,0,P|194:120|244:126,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,51118,2,0,P|386:168|436:162,1,90,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,76,52041,6,0,L|474:260,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,364,53425,1,10,0:2:0:0:
367,336,53887,2,0,L|271:327,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,294,54810,2,0,L|78:285,1,90,2|12,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
36,188,55733,6,0,P|15:128|74:26,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,124,57118,1,6,0:3:0:0:
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466,201,58964,1,6,0:3:0:0:
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50,55,61272,2,0,P|77:145|37:225,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,325,62656,1,12,0:3:0:0:
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349,121,64964,2,0,P|305:115|256:117,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,168,65887,2,0,P|119:169|74:163,1,90,2|6,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
30,65,66810,6,0,P|33:140|19:263,1,180,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,351,68195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,323,68656,2,0,L|220:323,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,351,70041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
30,244,70502,6,0,P|12:178|70:81,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,180,71887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,111,72349,2,0,L|303:109,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,143,73272,2,0,L|495:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,175,88964,6,0,L|356:181,1,90,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,229,89887,2,0,L|169:234,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,170,90810,2,0,P|91:125|105:78,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,147,91733,2,0,P|199:192|185:239,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,339,92656,6,0,B|260:333|260:333|319:340,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,246,93579,2,0,B|318:252|318:252|259:245,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,247,94502,2,0,P|118:269|72:271,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,198,95425,2,0,P|49:176|95:174,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,228,96349,1,10,0:0:0:0:
172,336,96810,1,6,0:0:0:0:
272,292,97272,2,0,L|372:288,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,98195,1,10,0:0:0:0:
496,164,98656,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,68,99118,2,0,B|403:76|403:76|351:70,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,112,100041,6,0,P|214:120|160:113,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,67,101425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,152,101887,1,10,0:3:0:0:
420,260,102349,1,10,0:3:0:0:
336,328,102810,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,220,103272,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,132,103733,6,0,P|197:140|157:132,1,90,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,104656,2,0,P|267:28|307:36,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,79,105579,2,0,B|386:122|386:122|393:183,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,274,106502,2,0,B|330:267|330:267|269:274,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,311,107425,6,0,P|172:271|185:211,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,119,108349,2,0,P|218:79|205:19,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,29,109272,2,0,L|424:35,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,138,110195,2,0,L|331:132,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,80,111118,5,10,0:0:0:0:
240,188,111579,1,14,0:0:0:0:
344,216,112041,2,0,L|452:220,1,90,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,300,112964,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,372,113425,1,6,0:0:0:0:
324,328,113887,2,0,L|225:330,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,114810,6,0,P|122:246|131:198,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,332,116195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,300,116656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,296,117118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,196,117579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,184,118041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,216,118502,6,0,P|239:147|288:41,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,16,119887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,54,120349,2,0,L|162:52,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,121272,2,0,L|242:150,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,54,122195,6,0,P|246:138|299:221,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,123579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,276,124041,2,0,L|418:377,2,90,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,125425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,80,125887,6,0,B|282:96|282:96|146:78,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,84,127272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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335,32,138349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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WORSTPOLACKEU

511 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

WORSTPOLACKEU 2017-08-27T13:37:01+00:00

All updated and stuff fixed
Talked to FT, she doesn't want to enforce 1/2

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2017-08-27T18:13:15+00:00

Mkay, let's see what we have here. Don't kudosu, this is a recheck. You know the way it goes.

General

The difficulty names probably can be adjusted to make sense as a set. How about Simple/Advanced/Challenging/<customname>. This would be a bit more accurate and structured than what we have now.
Normal has no combo colours set. Just copy them from any other difficulty.
soft-hitnormal4.wav still appears to be in the .osz, despite the fact that it is not used anywhere. Or so the Modding Assistant says.
You can say just about anything you want, but I still absolutely dislike the cheering sound. Now it feels like some kind of background white noise. Long story short, I am definitely strongly against it.

Advanced

00:18:810 (1) - should be moved highre to prevent overlaps with combo count on 4:3 displays.
00:50:195 - both the drums and the vocals have a clear and audible beat here. Are you sure it shouldn't be mapped with something clickable?
01:30:810 (1,3) - minor - these two probably meant to be parallel. It would just make more sense with your style.

The non-kiai still sort of blends with the rest if the difficulty which makes the whole thing a bit too monotonous. Try throwing in more 1/1 gaps?

Warped

00:45:349 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them to give two clickable beats to the vocals? Fairly sure we've already changed something here, so I might be missing out on stuff.
01:55:272 (2) - this could probably be replaced with two circles to match the vocals. I am not entirely sure, though, I'm trying to find some way to follow the vocals as closely as possible without spamming 1/2 circles.

The Advanced difficulty is still sort of bothering me.

WORSTPOLACKEU

511 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

WORSTPOLACKEU 2017-08-27T19:19:30+00:00

Bakari wrote:
Mkay, let's see what we have here. Don't kudosu, this is a recheck. You know the way it goes.

General
The difficulty names probably can be adjusted to make sense as a set. How about Simple/Advanced/Challenging/<customname>. This would be a bit more accurate and structured than what we have now.
Normal has no combo colours set. Just copy them from any other difficulty.
soft-hitnormal4.wav still appears to be in the .osz, despite the fact that it is not used anywhere. Or so the Modding Assistant says.
You can say just about anything you want, but I still absolutely dislike the cheering sound. Now it feels like some kind of background white noise. Long story short, I am definitely strongly against it.
Advanced
00:18:810 (1) - should be moved highre to prevent overlaps with combo count on 4:3 displays.
00:50:195 - both the drums and the vocals have a clear and audible beat here. Are you sure it shouldn't be mapped with something clickable?
01:30:810 (1,3) - minor - these two probably meant to be parallel. It would just make more sense with your style.

The non-kiai still sort of blends with the rest if the difficulty which makes the whole thing a bit too monotonous. Try throwing in more 1/1 gaps?
Warped
00:45:349 (3,4) - Ctrl+G them to give two clickable beats to the vocals? Fairly sure we've already changed something here, so I might be missing out on stuff.
01:55:272 (2) - this could probably be replaced with two circles to match the vocals. I am not entirely sure, though, I'm trying to find some way to follow the vocals as closely as possible without spamming 1/2 circles.
The Advanced difficulty is still sort of bothering me.

Advanced issues fixed, I think it's fine personally because the song is only more intense vocally not rhytmically so the gap doesn't have to be that big between kiai and normal especially when the diff is so low. I can't put many 1/1 gaps because that would destroy the rhythm and make it very inconsistent with beats underneath, I tried some ways but I think this is as much as I could pack without missing lots of beats!

General issues fixed, removed the cheer also as I was getting more bad comments about it!
Removed the softhitnormal aswell and set combo colors on advanced and switches names on the diffs!

CTRL-G on Warped fixed but not the 2nd thing.
I want to keep the slider-slider 1-2-3 rhythm in that part that I have in every kiai that has this part, in my head that part is like bam - bam - bam bam bam so I decided to map it as such!

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-09-19T00:44:34+00:00

Before actually modding this, I have to say the spread between Simple & Advanced is weird:
In Simple, there's completely no 1/2 rhythm usage
In Advanced, the most used rhythm usage is 1/2, sometimes there're 1/4 rhythm break.
Based on the current Guideline of difficulty spread, I don't think such rhythm arrangement is proper to make a smooth spread.
As a result, I recommend Firetruck add some 1/2 rhythm in kiai parts in Simple to make the spread more lenient.
Don't care about the Star Rating, as it doesn't represent the rhythm very accurately.

No kd for this post

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2017-09-19T01:03:35+00:00

tbh I also think that firetruck needs to add some 1/2s

WORSTPOLACKEU

511 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

WORSTPOLACKEU 2017-09-21T13:26:34+00:00

Aight will fix that!

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2017-09-21T19:54:42+00:00

alright added some 1/2 in kiais! https://puu.sh/xFtUs/7c8558234d.txt

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-10-21T03:49:03+00:00

I almost forget this set

[General]

Seems like there're unused hitsounds in your set? Please check them manually as I don't 100% believe MA now
soft-sliderslide2.wav
soft-sliderslide3.wav
soft-sliderslide4.wav
Hitsounds with delay:
drum-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-hitfinish2.wav

[Firetruck's Simple]

Now it can be named Normal, I think
01:34:502 (4,1) - maybe stack them?
01:39:118 (6,2) - 01:53:887 (6,2) - 02:15:118 (3,1) - ^ don't know if it's self-preference or something
01:46:502 (6,1) - blanket?
ain't many things here

[Advanced]

kinda agree with bakari that some rhythms in non-kiai part can be simplified, which can also have another effect of emphasizing the music. They will be listed below
00:51:579 (4) - prefer to leave it a single note
00:53:425 (4) - make a note to make the echo on 00:53:425 - more clearly emphasized. You don't have to strictly follow the vocal anyways
00:55:272 (4) - ^
00:58:964 (4) - ^
01:02:656 (4) - ^
01:04:733 (5) - This slider covers the heavy beat on 01:04:964 - wrongly. Besides it should also be NC-ed
01:43:272 (3,1) - Not recommend use 1/4 here. A pause would fit a lot better
01:58:041 (3,1) - ^
02:00:118 (5) - 02:03:810 (5) - 02:07:733 (5) - NC. They're now too long
02:12:810 (3) - Nah you shouldn't arrange rhythm like this. The actual triplet is on 02:13:041 - and 02:13:156 - . In your arrangement the important one is left on the slidertail while another one is left unmapped, while you try to map a sound at 02:12:925 - where there's literally nothing. I think you can just make 02:12:810 (3) - a stack of 2 1/2 circles.

[Natsu's Challenging]

00:32:887 (1,2,3) - any way to avoid nasty overlap on 00:31:733 (1,1) - ?

[Warped]

00:00:349 - The red line and the green line must have the same volume setting when they're stacked.
00:16:733 (6,1) - this is weird. You may try to emphasize something, but the continuous zig-zag on 00:16:272 (4,5,6,1) - with sudden distance change is bothering. 00:16:964 (1) - Ctrl+G and make adaptation on 00:17:425 (2) -
00:18:579 (6,1) - ^ Same thing. 00:18:810 (1) - Ctrl+G

call me back

WORSTPOLACKEU

511 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

WORSTPOLACKEU 2017-10-29T15:15:53+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
I almost forget this set

[General]
Seems like there're unused hitsounds in your set? Please check them manually as I don't 100% believe MA now
soft-sliderslide2.wav
soft-sliderslide3.wav
soft-sliderslide4.wav
Hitsounds with delay:
drum-hitwhistle2.wav
soft-hitfinish2.wav
Removed the unused one, rest are there on timing changes that are quick so I don't hear that noisy SHHH sound, delay I have no idea how to fix.. I'll ask someone soo0n

[Advanced]
kinda agree with bakari that some rhythms in non-kiai part can be simplified, which can also have another effect of emphasizing the music. They will be listed below
00:51:579 (4) - prefer to leave it a single note y
00:53:425 (4) - make a note to make the echo on 00:53:425 - more clearly emphasized. You don't have to strictly follow the vocal anyways y
00:55:272 (4) - ^y
00:58:964 (4) - ^y
01:02:656 (4) - ^y
01:04:733 (5) - This slider covers the heavy beat on 01:04:964 - wrongly. Besides it should also be NC-ed y
01:43:272 (3,1) - Not recommend use 1/4 here. A pause would fit a lot better I want the extended slider for the vocal, pause doesn't fit in my head at all, also it is used in similar situations later so there is no probs X)
01:58:041 (3,1) - ^ ^
02:00:118 (5) - 02:03:810 (5) - 02:07:733 (5) - NC. They're now too long y
02:12:810 (3) - Nah you shouldn't arrange rhythm like this. The actual triplet is on 02:13:041 - and 02:13:156 - . In your arrangement the important one is left on the slidertail while another one is left unmapped, while you try to map a sound at 02:12:925 - where there's literally nothing. I think you can just make 02:12:810 (3) - a stack of 2 1/2 circles. y
[Warped]
00:00:349 - The red line and the green line must have the same volume setting when they're stacked. y
00:16:733 (6,1) - this is weird. You may try to emphasize something, but the continuous zig-zag on 00:16:272 (4,5,6,1) - with sudden distance change is bothering. 00:16:964 (1) - Ctrl+G and make adaptation on 00:17:425 (2) -
00:18:579 (6,1) - ^ Same thing. 00:18:810 (1) - Ctrl+G Did something else, fits the map, also I like the 2nd zigzag where direction changes because the pitch in the music changes harshly so it makes sense to make a circular movement and change direction
call me back

Rest will come with reply soonn hh thankkk

WORSTPOLACKEU

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WORSTPOLACKEU 2017-12-15T06:01:53+00:00

Overlap in Natsu's diff is removed, overlaps in the Normal diff is still there as it is preference of overlap

Rest fixed except hitsound delay because I do not know how but will fix soon.

Edit: Delay fixed

F D Flourite

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F D Flourite 2017-12-18T17:47:49+00:00

sorry but I'm pretty sure that the hs file in folder are not updated. I deleted original set and redl for twice but useless hs files still exist, and delayed hs files are not fixed either. Pls check your folder, then update it again.

WORSTPOLACKEU

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WORSTPOLACKEU 2017-12-19T02:13:39+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
sorry but I'm pretty sure that the hs file in folder are not updated. I deleted original set and redl for twice but useless hs files still exist, and delayed hs files are not fixed either. Pls check your folder, then update it again.

Oh must have happened when I redownloaded the set.
Nevermind, fixed it now!

F D Flourite

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F D Flourite 2017-12-24T17:01:30+00:00

No it didn't got fixed.

I don't understand what's going on. I've downloaded it another twice but the same answer.

Besides, I don't know if it's proper to push it forward when there's 1/4 rhythm in Advanced. It just goes too far from the Normal by any means.

Just gonna leave it here for more opinions as for now.

Natsu

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Natsu 2018-01-06T13:49:28+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
No it didn't got fixed.

I don't understand what's going on. I've downloaded it another twice but the same answer.

Besides, I don't know if it's proper to push it forward when there's 1/4 rhythm in Advanced. It just goes too far from the Normal by any means.

Just gonna leave it here for more opinions as for now.

advanced is a diff between normal and hard, so some 1/4s are fine, also the bpm of this song is low

Cheri

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Cheri 2018-01-30T23:06:01+00:00

ok i'll mod this 1 - first 1 I was gonna check seems to be already nominated

placeholder ~ i'll be looking all difficulties in a sec EDIT: 1111 post

(still not done with mod)

EDIT(2):

Warped

00:28:964 (1) - This is sorta uncomfortable compare to the others times when testplaying - Bring this down a little bit more towards the right to make it a bit more comfortable
From here 02:12:579 (2) - to here 02:12:810 (1,2,3) - the angle is a bit too sharp imo ~ tilting 02:12:579 (2) - (rotate it to about maybe -5 degrees)
and bring it up some would help

Natsu's Challenging

I like this difficulty <3

00:24:118 (4) - 00:24:810 (2) - wouldn't hurt to overlap these completely...

Advanced

The problem with this as far I see isn't as much as an issue to me ~ the song is pretty low bpm and being an advanced - I don't really see the 1/4 rhythm to much of a challenge as 1 may think - also the difficulty itself doesn't really used too much of it
had the bpm be any higher or it was used any differently - then Id agree

01:06:579 (1) - don't much agree with this being in an advanced ~ seems a little difficulty and a bit surprise for new players at this level ~ feel it should be a bit more simple than current way kind of like the normal

Firetruck's Normal

00:37:272 (1,2) - bring this up some more? just think it would help out a bit better for new player in case the may accidently get confused into pressing 00:37:733 (2) -
00:40:964 (1,2) - just a suggestion ~ But if you remove the repeat on (1) and delete (2) and add a slider here instead 00:41:887 -
it would bring much more emphasis to 00:42:810 (3) - ,etc than it does currently - I don't see much trouble adjusted the rhythm with this
this applies to all similar to this

General

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms
drum-hitwhistle2.wav
& soft-hitfinish2.wav

Not too sure if I should be worry of the delay on this so check this out (Seems like this is an issue that keeps coming up telling from other replies)
Unused hitsound wave soft-hitwhistle24.wav

ok call me back when ya look over the issues I made

(o and this is m4m since you post in m4m round)

WORSTPOLACKEU

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WORSTPOLACKEU 2018-01-31T11:49:32+00:00

Hailie wrote:
ok i'll mod this 1 - first 1 I was gonna check seems to be already nominated

placeholder ~ i'll be looking all difficulties in a sec EDIT: 1111 post (still not done with mod)

EDIT(2):

Warped
00:28:964 (1) - This is sorta uncomfortable compare to the others times when testplaying - Bring this down a little bit more towards the right to make it a bit more comfortable
From here 02:12:579 (2) - to here 02:12:810 (1,2,3) - the angle is a bit too sharp imo ~ tilting 02:12:579 (2) - (rotate it to about maybe -5 degrees)
and bring it up some would help

Natsu's Challenging

I like this difficulty <3
00:24:118 (4) - 00:24:810 (2) - wouldn't hurt to overlap these completely...

Advanced

The problem with this as far I see isn't as much as an issue to me ~ the song is pretty low bpm and being an advanced - I don't really see the 1/4 rhythm to much of a challenge as 1 may think - also the difficulty itself doesn't really used too much of it
had the bpm be any higher or it was used any differently - then Id agree
01:06:579 (1) - don't much agree with this being in an advanced ~ seems a little difficulty and a bit surprise for new players at this level ~ feel it should be a bit more simple than current way kind of like the normal

Firetruck's Normal
00:37:272 (1,2) - bring this up some more? just think it would help out a bit better for new player in case the may accidently get confused into pressing 00:37:733 (2) -
00:40:964 (1,2) - just a suggestion ~ But if you remove the repeat on (1) and delete (2) and add a slider here instead 00:41:887 -
it would bring much more emphasis to 00:42:810 (3) - ,etc than it does currently - I don't see much trouble adjusted the rhythm with this
this applies to all similar to this

General
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms
drum-hitwhistle2.wav
& soft-hitfinish2.wav

Not too sure if I should be worry of the delay on this so check this out (Seems like this is an issue that keeps coming up telling from other replies)
Unused hitsound wave soft-hitwhistle24.wav

ok call me back when ya look over the issues I made (o and this is m4m since you post in m4m round)

Basically every diff changed with permission from mappers.

Top diff agreed with you so changed slightly to more comfortable angles!

Firetruck, keeps the diff as it is, likes the repeats and actually so do I, fits well in there!
Moved the notes up though because you had a good point!

Advanced keeping the slider, I actually asked some people from lower rank to play this and they actually had no problem playing this at all so I think
it is a cool "advanced" (lol) detail in this map that makes it a bit more shiny haha

Natsu's diff, stacked the overlap!

Hitsounds..... I removed the unused one and I have no idea why those hitsounds still have delay ... I removed the delay and uploading but still seems to have delay I have no idea.. I maybe just did it wrong but seemed to me that I removed all empty sound in the beginning.
https://puu.sh/zdyOs/42e0634c1e.png this is what both sounds look like so it should be alright?

Thanks!

Natsu

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Natsu 2018-01-31T18:12:46+00:00

hype

The HS with delay are fine,you can check them quickly with https://twistedwave.com/online , sometimes the automod thing do false positives

Cheri

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Cheri 2018-01-31T20:54:39+00:00

1st bubbled

Check everything out ~ seem fine now <3

WORSTPOLACKEU

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WORSTPOLACKEU 2018-01-31T20:55:12+00:00

haip haipp

DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2018-02-12T15:53:02+00:00

could add big bang in tags since thats where g dragon is from i think
[general]

02:13:156 - starting the kiai from sounds a lot more reasonable than starting it from 01:58:041 -

[Normal]

01:29:887 (3,4) - DS

[Advanced]

00:47:887 (4) - Could also be a circle like 00:51:579 (4) - etc to give proper emphasis to vocals
00:57:118 (4) - same
00:53:425 (4,1) - DS
00:55:272 (4,1) - 00:58:964 (4,1) - DS too
Either change 00:58:964 (4,1) - to 0.8 or change all others to 1.0 ,be consistent. Keeping 1.0 works better though since the whole diff is 1.0
02:07:272 (4) - Since you have been emphasizing vocals, its gonna make more sense if you make 02:07:502 - clickable because thats where the vocal is
same with 02:09:118 (4) - etc

[pp]

00:07:733 (1) - Are you trying to make a D shape here, if you ,this is executed pretty badly lol. it could easily be much better
02:12:810 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is wrong in every way. Swap circles with slider. the slider should be at 02:12:810 - because the sound on 02:12:925 - Is extremely faint compared to other ones and the circles should be at 02:13:041 - so that 02:13:156 - is clickable because drum at 02:13:156 - is much stronger

call me

WORSTPOLACKEU

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WORSTPOLACKEU 2018-02-12T23:56:23+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
could add big bang in tags since thats where g dragon is from i think
[general]
02:13:156 - starting the kiai from sounds a lot more reasonable than starting it from 01:58:041 - Hmm I decided to make all those parts equally kiai so it would look weird if kiai was 1 2 ? 4 meaning in the "?" part kiai is non existent but the song is the same as "4"
[Normal]
01:29:887 (3,4) - DS Fix
[Advanced]
00:47:887 (4) - Could also be a circle like 00:51:579 (4) - etc to give proper emphasis to vocals Like this idea, changing
00:57:118 (4) - same Like this idea, changing
00:53:425 (4,1) - DS Fix
00:55:272 (4,1) - 00:58:964 (4,1) - DS too Fix
Either change 00:58:964 (4,1) - to 0.8 or change all others to 1.0 ,be consistent. Keeping 1.0 works better though since the whole diff is 1.0 Fix
02:07:272 (4) - Since you have been emphasizing vocals, its gonna make more sense if you make 02:07:502 - clickable because thats where the vocal is
same with 02:09:118 (4) - etc I prefer having the slider there for playability's sake, and it is placed like that in the same moments in the song so it should be okay
[pp]
00:07:733 (1) - Are you trying to make a D shape here, if you ,this is executed pretty badly lol. it could easily be much better Ye ur right lol I remade those to look like GD logo
02:12:810 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is wrong in every way. Swap circles with slider. the slider should be at 02:12:810 - because the sound on 02:12:925 - Is extremely faint compared to other ones and the circles should be at 02:13:041 - so that 02:13:156 - is clickable because drum at 02:13:156 - is much stronger
Yes but at the same time 02:13:272 (1) - this needs to be emphasized with a jump in my head and I sacrficie that drum in order to make it play well and get a jump for the next note, I have no other good idea on how to make this than by placing a triple but making a kickslider to highlight that drum anyway! I know what you mean but I just think it will not play well. I can't skip a jump here and I can't do a clickable before because it will delete the jump, if it's not okay I'd like to come up with something together but I don't know what to do tbh, imo it has momentum, plays well and adds the jump which is needed

call me

Cheri

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Cheri 2018-02-13T00:06:18+00:00

rebubble

DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2018-02-14T12:04:58+00:00

eee
[general]

check if soft-hitwhistle24.wav is used, if not then delete it
Also according to the official youtube channel https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKhsHGfrFmY and ygfamily

the romanized title should be "CROOKED"

Seems like bakari mentioned it in his mod but you still didn't fix
you still didnt add big bang in tags

rest looks fine, Couldn't check hs and meta before because didn't have the time to do so, also didn't have my own pc so ya lol

fix these ,get rebubble and call me for qualify

Cheri

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Cheri 2018-02-14T15:37:01+00:00

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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2018-02-16T08:32:53+00:00

q

_handholding

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_handholding 2018-02-16T17:41:42+00:00

Normal > Advanced > Hard > Warped

Easy - Firetruck
Normal - Me
Hard - Natsu
Warped - Me

nice map description

WORSTPOLACKEU

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WORSTPOLACKEU 2018-02-17T07:26:13+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Normal > Advanced > Hard > Warped
Easy - Firetruck
Normal - Me
Hard - Natsu
Warped - Me
nice map description

This thing changes all the time I have no clue why but I changed it 1492 times and it still uploads with the old one so I just gave up on it Z.Z is this a concern

_handholding

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_handholding 2018-02-17T08:02:45+00:00