1. Hard (3.47 stars, 268 notes)
2. Insane (4.75 stars, 451 notes)
3. Normal (2.11 stars, 129 notes)

hclew wrote:

In Regards to the "Insane" difficulty:
00:22:493 (5) - - Placing the slider one tick back makes it fall onto the beats' sound. In mapping, one looks for important sounds rather than the beat, keep that in mind
00:19:725 (1) - Making the slider one tick longer helps the sliders' end land on the beat. Same here, players will listen to the "Good Time" before the drum
00:22:761 (6) - Using a slider end to emphasize the "thud" sound isn't ideal, making 00:23:118 (1) - quite useless.. Changed in next update
00:26:154 (1,2) - You change from putting a note for each beat in the background to not doing so. Fixed
00:28:297 (3) - Push this slider one tick back to hit the beat. Again, not looking for beat. and also introducing the fast 1/4 sliders that get used more latter in the map in the particular sound.
00:36:868 (7) - Extending this slider 1 tick helps it stay on beat. Again no looking for beat, would also clutter the song.
01:33:118 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream seems quite jagged. Pitch goes up suddenly, so does stream.
01:50:082 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Leave out note #12, it doesn't fall onto any beat. Even if in reverb, it does. plus ends the map in a white thick
If you are so kind as to take a gander: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/604102

My Angel Kitten wrote:

General

all diff patterns still look terrible. and you have wrong offset. your map offset should be 00:11:511 - here.
That would leave out the first beats of the song which thanks to the remix, they need to be timed so I can map, also, it doesn't quite affect the map since it's still in a white thick. I cannot deny the patterns look bad.

Normal

- 00:11:690 (2,3) - this spacing should be like here 00:19:368 (1,2) - keep consistency
I don't believe you can hear the same musical pattern and therefore the map shouldn't do that.
- 00:16:154 (2,1) - not stack
I don't see why not. even if it's uncommon
- 00:20:261 (2,3) - spacing. you have to make same spacing all of 1/2 and 1/1 since this is normal diff
Overlooked
- 00:21:690 (1) - oh man this spinner looks awkward here. just remove it.
Thas boring
- 00:22:940 - add circle here
Done
- 00:29:190 (2,3) - imo spacing
???
- 00:34:368 - im not agree break time here
Im not agree too, osu in the the other hand.....
- 00:42:940 (3,4,1,2) - this pattern not good for normal diff
CTRL+J
- 00:44:190 (1) - remove spin
No reason
- 00:45:797 - add circle here
Done
- 00:46:332 (2,3) - spacing
k
- 00:47:225 (4,5,1) - imo ovrlapped
Just.... OKA
- 00:52:939 (4,1) - overlap
SHUUPNot anymore
- 00:56:868 - 01:18:475 - omg this too long for break time. 01:08:654 - playing here again.
nah but yay
- 01:20:797 (3,4,5) - spacing hmm
This one is good tho
- 01:30:082 (1) - and again, why spinner here
Somebody is anti-spiner
- 01:35:082 (3,2) - not stacked
Indeed

Hard

00:14:011 (4) - why not use 1/2 slider? 1/3 looks bad
IDK
- 00:22:225 (3,5) - small overlap
Speed is slower so it overlaps more. It's pretty small and missable
- 00:29:904 (6,3) - bad overlap
It sleeps outside tonight
- 00:45:440 (4,2) - overlap
Overoverlaped
- 00:47:047 (6,3) - hmm,overlap
.
- 01:24:190 (5,2) - blanket
Cozy
- 01:45:440 (4,2) - imo overlapped
.

Insane

Overlaps are simply not changed cause insane player can handle them
- 00:15:082 (4,5) - blanket
I guess
- 00:19:368 (1,1) - idk, its look awkward here
This in every mod, I change.
- 00:28:475 (4,5) - blanket
I guess
- 00:32:940 (1) - and again, why spin -____-
Music builds up
- 00:37:761 (4,5) - not agree with kicksliders, but whatever you want
This is mainly the way I decided to map the beat and other things at the same time
- 00:45:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why stream?? look at 00:22:940 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - same flow
Listen to the song, there is more density in the music.
- 01:22:047 (4,5,6,4,5,6,4,5) - bad kicksliders pattern
Don't see why

thats all for me, sorry for my bad english :3
good luck!!

MyAngelMeinter wrote:

Normal

01:30:082 (1) - beetwen spinner and next object must be break because this is normal
Shnortened
00:12:582 (4) - instead this get there half-beat slider
good idea
00:42:940 (3,4,1,2) - i thnk make X there is better idea than square
Confusing for new players, it's mirrored now tho
00:27:940 (4) - straighten it as it is 5
k
00:32:225 (1) - end this on green line
green line is good
00:56:868 - make there half-beat slider with arrow
Kinda did
00:15:440 (3,1) - this break is a little uselles
It actually helped some players understand that the beat is not the main focus there

Hard

If not be this stacking at the end of the slider every, this diff can be really good
Know!

Insane

00:19:368 (1,1) - you can do something like this there http://imgur.com/vGrlf3I
Hummm.....us
01:03:207 (2,3) - instead this make 1/4 beat slider with arrow (started on white line)
This pattern is used latter with WAY faster movement so introducing it here seems fitting
01:46:154 (1,2,3) - try mak ein this sliders angle of 90 degrees
Doner

[lucky:1337]Good Luck[/lucky:1337]

yShadowXOP_ wrote:

NM

Insane:

1. 00:09:011 (2,3) - Fix stack
   Wha?
2. 00:14:636 - i'm seeing a strong sound here being ignored
   Strong sound you mean sound the map has clearly shown the player not to pay much attention to couse the vocals are more important.
3. 00:22:493 - ^
   While not really strong, it can be added couse the vocals are slowly loseing importance
4. 00:23:118 (1) - here would be better a triple because it has sound in the blue ticks
5. 00:29:547 (4) - this slider should start here 00:29:725 -
   K
6. 00:42:940 - add circle
   Done
7. 00:43:654 (6,1) - arrange blanket
   Circle, not simetrical
8. 01:09:368 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - fix this stream because it's weird
   Discrimination to weird streams
9. 01:15:707 - why didn't you continue the stream?
   Mapping thing I tought would look good
10. 01:15:797 (11) - NC
    This evidence contradicts this statement
11. 01:38:654 (9) - ^
12. 01:40:082 (4) - ^
    Combo number splits the lyrics as the main focus of the patterns
13. 01:50:082 - why did not you the stream here like you did in the beginning?
    I was told to remove it by other mods, I am still making a decision there

Hard:

1. 00:14:547 (1) - this slider should start here 00:14:368 (5) -
   Then the lyrics would be covered by an ugly long slider that is uncomfortable to play
2. 00:15:975 (1) - ^ 00:15:797 (5) -
3. 00:17:404 (1) - ^ 00:17:225 (6) -
4. 00:20:261 (2) - ^ 00:20:082 (1) -
   ^
5. 00:25:261 (4,5) - a slider would be better off in rhythm
   Not really since the 5 is almost always a drum, separating it from the last circle also gives the sence that this sound is stronger.... Which it is.
6. 00:28:207 - ignored sound
   While yes, it's almost unnoticeable with the patters the map has established
7. 00:37:761 (2,3) - fix stack on 00:36:868 (4) -
   ?
8. 00:45:082 (3,1) - ^
   So tiny
9. 00:54:011 (5,2) - ^
   That wasn't even supposed to be stacked
10. 00:55:797 (4) - NC
    Right
11. 00:57:225 - add circle
    Why not!

00:08:654 (1,2,3) - try to move 3 a little bit to the right
00:12:582 (7,1,2,3) - ^ same try to not overlap 7
00:18:297 (6,1,2,3) - ^ same
00:36:868 (7,1,2,3) - ^ same
00:38:654 (8,4) - try to overlap 4
00:42:225 (1,2) - you didn't overlap these "sound" the first time 00:19:368 (1,1,1,2) - so you should do like this one
00:45:082 (1,2) - try to space this one
01:27:940 (1,2) - overlap again, try to space them