Alex7Kom wrote:

Oh, it seems osu! is having trouble handling MP4. Sorry, I didn't know that.
I had changed the format to FLV: http://www.mediafire.com/?c7wgl8dyakdzryi

zerothefallen wrote:

I LOVE this beatmap, it is amazing!

Though @ 26:500 on the [Insane]

The slider's reverse arrow is barely recognizable, not sure if that's on purpose or what.

ItaOxy wrote:

zerothefallen ->
oh!! Thank you for two giving a star!

zerothefallen wrote:

Two more kudosu!

I love this beatmap, must be ranked!

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Insane]

00:01:040 (2) - 問題があるというわけではないのですが、ちょっとEditで見た時美しくないのが気になりました 初めてスライダーを使ったので色々試したのを放置してました、修正しておきました。
00:03:164 (5) - ^ ^
00:04:226 (5) - ^ ^
00:14:843 (6) - 00:14:312 (2,3,4,5) - と被っていてちょっと見にくい感じがしました 1grid下にさげてみました、少し見やすくなったはずです
00:15:905 (5) - 00:15:374 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:16:436 (1,1) - これは初見殺しになり得ます　距離を縮めるorスタックさせたほうがいいかも 距離を縮める方にしました
00:23:205 (4,5,6,7) - DSがここで変わっているのが気になります　4にnewcomboを入れるかDSを統一したほうが見栄え的にいいかも fixed.
00:26:523 (5) - 00:25:992 (1,2,3,4) - と被っていてこれも見にくいです fixed.
00:31:301 (6) - nc(newcombo) fixed.
00:31:831 (10) - DS 修正してみました、恐らく綺麗になったと思います。
00:35:813 (5) - ^ ^
00:37:140 (5) - ^ ^
00:40:325 (5) - ^ ^
00:42:051 (6) - 00:41:387 (3) - と被っているのがちょっと気になりました 左の方にズラしてみました。
00:54:659 (6) - nc fixed.
00:58:906 (5) - nc? ^
00:59:172 (6,8) - それぞれもう少し中央に寄せてもいい気がします ^
01:18:018 (7) - nc ^
01:22:530 (6) - ncを入れるか01:22:530 (6)と距離を開ける ncを入れてみました
01:25:450 (3) - 01:25:317 (2) - までの流れ的に叩くタイミングが分かりにくいです　もっと近付けてしまってください 修正を施してみました。

配置やDSなどについての指摘が主です
譜面の調節がんばってください

zerothefallen wrote:

Two more kudosu!

I love this beatmap, must be ranked!

1. 00:42:980 - Move this note a little away from the previous slider

1. 01:06:339 - Add a Spinner? It's still fine though

1. 01:24:919 - Stretch the spinner until this portion

1. 00:00:921 - Move this slider close to the next note

1. 00:16:834 - The spinner should start on this part

1. 01:06:339 - New Combo

1. 01:06:339 - Move this close to the other note

1. 01:06:339 - ^

1. AR = 7

1. 00:44:307 - Move this note exactly at the end of the slider

1. 00:46:431 - ^

1. 01:01:295 - ^

1. 01:03:419 - ^

1. 00:07:942 - Change this combo. Instead, clone the previous combo and adjust them anywhere you want

1. 00:16:834 - Start your spinner on this part

1. 00:29:177 - New Combo

1. 00:48:820 - End your spinner here

1. 00:56:783 - New Combo

1. 01:01:030 - ^

1. 01:03:153 - ^

1. 01:05:808 - Add a note here

GiNa wrote:

Hi, nice to meet you .

My Mod

[Genernal]
-Take out “Letterbox during breaks” (Song Setup -> Storyboarding) fixed.
-About your kiai (not your guest’s): ^
00:09:001 – as I mentioned, this line should be at 00:09:004 since this is for a kiai change ^
00:19:621 – (suggestion) end kiai here instead of 00:19:090 ^
01:27:574 – (suggestion) probably end kiai here, so just move 01:28:635 to 01:27:574 ^
01:27:839 – (suggestion) maybe add a green line here and lower the volume to 10% ^

[Easy]
00:06:880 (1,2,3) – I thought you use DS 0.6x in this map >< fixed!
-You should set distance snap to 0.6x to keep everything constant.
00:16:436 (3) – this doesn’t look good, maybe move to x:260 y:328 (Grid Level 4) ^
00:16:967 (1) – remove whistle and clap, add finish. I guess you follow vocal here, so it shall end at … maybe 00:19:090? ^
00:42:980 (1) – too close to the previous note ^
00:47:227 (1) – remove whistle and clap, add finish ^
00:33:424 (4,5,6) – same as 00:06:880 (1,2,3) ^
00:49:616 – remove this short break ^
00:51:474 (1) – add whistle? ^
00:53:597 (1,2,3) - same as 00:06:880 (1,2,3) ^
00:57:844 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:18:018 (2) – this kind of slider is quite hard to beginner, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208935 <- use this would be great already Thx Idea!!
01:20:141 (2) – ^ ^
01:25:450 (1) – the finish doesn’t really fit, and this should end at 01:27:839 fixed!
-Your sliders are all quite straight (just like my map xD), maybe try to have some curves.

[Normal]
-You should set distance snap to 0.8x(or 0.6x, depends on you) to keep everything constant in this diff. fixed!
00:11:127 (5) – NC ^
00:16:967 (1) – same as Easy ^
00:49:616 – remove this short break
01:06:339 (3,4) – spacing is wrong, and change them to a slider because they should not exist in normal diff, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/208945, add NC to the one at 01:06:339. Thx Idea!! fixed!
01:18:018 (2) – not sure if this is allow or not, you should ask others for more opinions. Changed Slider!
01:25:450 (1) – same as Easy fixed.

[Insane]
-Use DS too? (except those jumps of course)
-Hitsounds in this diff are quite annoying, especially in the second kiai (Easy and Normal are fine tho)
Here’s some little advices:

2 and 4 are where we usually put the clap or other hitsound (including any custom, depends on the mapper).
1 is where we put the finish or other heavy hitsound.
Of course both of them have exceptions, it really depends on you :3. Thx Advice! Fixed some!
00:18:825 – remove this short break ^
01:25:450 (5) – NC ^
01:26:247 (1) – the finish is too loud and shorten this to 01:27:839 ^

Sorry for long mod.
QAQ.

Philippines wrote:

EASY

1. 00:42:980 - Move this note a little away from the previous slider

1. 01:06:339 - Add a Spinner? It's still fine though

1. 01:24:919 - Stretch the spinner until this portion fixed.

NORMAL

1. 00:00:921 - Move this slider close to the next note

1. 00:16:834 - The spinner should start on this part fixed.

1. 01:06:339 - New Combo

1. 01:06:339 - Move this close to the other note

1. 01:06:339 - ^

"Easy" and "Normal" has been changed significantly. On hold.　

INSANE

1. 00:07:942 - Change this combo. Instead, clone the previous combo and adjust them anywhere you want

1. 00:16:834 - Start your spinner on this part fixed!

1. 00:29:177 - New Combo ^

1. 00:48:820 - End your spinner here ^

1. 00:56:783 - New Combo ^

1. 01:01:030 - ^ ^

1. 01:03:153 - ^ ^

1. 01:05:808 - Add a note here ^

• Hi hi~ my random mod XD
  
  General :
  
  
  SPOILER

  1. 00:09:004 ~ 00:19:621 Del this kiai time
  2. 01:08:462 kiai Time star here
  3. plz make all diff end the same time!!
  
  Easy :
  
  
  SPOILER
• plz use spacing 0.6 From start to end! Thx spacing is too orderless~
• 00:50:412 (X) - add a note
• 00:50:943 (X) - ^
• 01:06:339 (1) - add a spinner start here end 01:07:931
  

bossandy wrote:

• Hi hi~ my random mod XD
  
  General :
  
  
  SPOILER

  1. 00:09:004 ~ 00:19:621 Del this kiai time fixed.
  2. 01:08:462 kiai Time star here ^
  3. plz make all diff end the same time!!
  ^
  
  Easy :
  
  
  SPOILER
• plz use spacing 0.6 From start to end! Thx spacing is too orderless~ fixed.
• 00:50:412 (X) - add a note ^
• 00:50:943 (X) - ^ ^
• 01:06:339 (1) - add a spinner start here end 01:07:931 ^
  

Normal :

SPOILER

00:13:781 ~ 00:15:374 make some thing here fixed.00:47:227 (1) - del clap, It's not fits for the music ^00:50:147 (X) - add a note with finish ^01:21:203 (1,3) - del clap ^

Insane :

SPOILER

00:12:189 (1) - del NC fixed.00:12:720 (7) - add NC ^00:13:251 (1) - del NC ^00:19:621 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange! and spacing is wrong change it!~ ^00:20:683 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^00:46:696 (3,4,5) - why spacing change to 1.0 ? ^01:07:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing is too large... ^01:20:407 (4,5) - Spacing!!! ^

Good map but the spacing issue need more modification and mod!
good luck :3

SPOILER

red: unrankable issue. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.