1. Easy (2,28 stars, 130 notes)
2. Insane (4,93 stars, 313 notes)
3. Normal (4,2 stars, 174 notes)
4. TR (4,68 stars, 260 notes)

heintsi wrote:

I love you and this map ~♥ ♥ ♥

iPown3G wrote:

Well.
I like the storyboard and the diffs, such as the song.
I think the only diff you should make changes is "Hard", even if they're small ones.

Hard
00:14:077 add a note here
00:31:411 ^
00:52:744 ^
00:59:588 ^ (not really necessary, but it'd fit anyways)
01:56:588 (6) Extend by one
02:00:299 add a note
02:00:633 (4) Make this one just like 01:59:966 (2)

And That's it

I like the map and its ready to be ranked, i think
Good job!

1. The offset seems a bit late imo. I think that having it at 7290 works better.
2. Maybe you could set another image as the background (for the preview on the download). A Grey image with a giant white stripe doesn't look so attractive xD
3. The Combo Colour 1 (white) kinda confused me at some parts. The only thing I can think of - and normally, I wouldn't say this, but this is a rare case - is to make it even more white, so that the darkened background (the background turns a little more dark while playing) helps making it more distinguishable.
   Or I don't know, maybe it's just me xD

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi Lanttu!

Actually, I was going to mod this now so I could be of more help than when you had a lot of mods, but honestly, this is pretty good already.

What I'll say is this:

1. The offset seems a bit late imo. I think that having it at 7290 works better. Hmm, yeah, changed!
2. Maybe you could set another image as the background (for the preview on the download). A Grey image with a giant white stripe doesn't look so attractive xD ehhehe, I know, but somehow I'd like to keep the actual background image hidden before the chorus part. XD But I'll see what I can do. ;u;
3. The Combo Colour 1 (white) kinda confused me at some parts. The only thing I can think of - and normally, I wouldn't say this, but this is a rare case - is to make it even more white, so that the darkened background (the background turns a little more dark while playing) helps making it more distinguishable. made it just a bit more white, then! :3
   Or I don't know, maybe it's just me xD

And that's all! Have your star, Lanttu!

Oh and, no need for kudosu!

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Can't believe, baka-Lanttu, mp3 is 256kbps! Oh damn~!
Yay, SB is pure love. <3

Hard
01:04:178 (7) - add whistle? Sure, why not~
01:32:512 - add note? Can't get one to fit here. ;u;

Normal
If i were you, i made AR +1 ok~
00:35:289 (3) - add whistle to the end OK~
00:39:289 (4) - add whistle ok~
00:41:067 (2) - whistles to the start and end OK~
00:42:178 (3) - add whistle to the end ok~
00:46:401 (4) - add whistle OK~
00:49:956 (1) - black combo color and black bg work bad together: I missed here once because almost black approach is almost invisible
I guess this suggestion for all diffs, but i played good this moment in Hard Arf, I'll do something about it when I get home from school. ;u;
01:44:623 (4) - move this note to the left side a bit? Why? >:

Easy
If i were you, i made AR +1 and HP +1 OK~
00:35:734 (1,5) - add 2 whistles ok~
00:40:623 (1) - add whistle to the end OK~
00:41:956 (2) - add whistle to the start and to the end ok~
00:46:401 (4) - add whistle OK~
01:21:956 (1) - you could make it much pretty :< I think it's pretty enough ;_;
01:50:845 (4) - imo, replace nc here OK~

You deserve a star

val0108 wrote:

o/

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1 W-why? ;_; Ok..
00:46:623 - break delete? awww, why?
00:47:956 - delete green line OK~
01:16:178 (1) - renew combo e-eh, what?
00:54:401 (2,3) - little overlap >_> I like this overlap, though.
01:25:512 (1) - how about this? http://puu.sh/4Gpz I prefer it the way it is. ;u;

[Normal]
Slider tick rate 1 Ok.. >':
00:46:623 - break delete? Nooo~
00:47:956 - delete green line OK~
01:10:845 (3) - The screen outside D: It's not. ;_;
02:07:512 (5) - move to the middle? it makes a jump then.. I don't know, I'll try to get some opinions about that.

[Hard]
02:05:956 (5,6,7,8,9) - how about this? suggestion http://puu.sh/4Gqm I like it when they're all in same combo.. ;u;

Lanttu wrote:

Aleks719 wrote:

01:44:623 (4) - move this note to the left side a bit? Why? >: because

01:21:956 (1) - you could make it much pretty :< I think it's pretty enough ;_; okay :<

FireballFlame wrote:

Awesome storyboard is awesome.

nooodl wrote:

Easy
01:11:734 (1,2) - "shiro kuro" - should somehow be put into white/black combos respectively Oooh, sure thing. Done with other diffs as well~
...alright, I'll admit, I couldn't think of anything serious to put here. Solid mapping.

Normal
00:27:956 (5,6) - are these confusing/weirdly placed on purpose? Feels weird. Hmm, are they really that weird? I can't see any problems with those. ;_;

Hard
00:41:067 (2,3,4) - mapping the echo is kind of a stretch. I'd just map the regular notes Heeh, tried something else~
01:00:623 (1) - line the red anchor point up with the red tick I can't go that without destroying the pattern, though.. ;u;
01:18:401 (1) - make this one returning... I like it better this way
01:20:178 (2) - then replace this with a circle somehow ^
01:34:845 (2,3,4) - kinda packed together :< Hauu, but I like it like that.. ;_;

This was really hard to find actual mistakes in, so it's pretty damn good. I could definitely see this getting ranked

animask wrote:

[Easy]

01:01:512 (2) - Move down by 1 on lvl 4 grid. Ok~
01:21:956 (1) - This slider seems ugly to me... fix/change it? Augh, but I like it. ;_;
01:25:512 (1) - Slider end area is kind of messy How come? >: I can't see it..

[Normal]

Alright.

[Hard]

02:07:512 (1) - New Combo? I changed the whole end combo a bit, plus added the new combo~

Your maps are pretty nice already. I don't really want to double-check the SB since I barely know how to lol

Faust wrote:

IRC Modded.

AIIGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Mok wrote:

Heya
Soo long since my last mod D:

Storyboard is so cool

[Easy]
00:34:401 (3,4,5) - Do them more curveous like http://puu.sh/aoOj I prefer the straight line. ;u;

[Normal]
01:14:401 (2) - As your logic, this should be New Combo. OK~

[Hard]
01:14:401 (2) - Same as Normal. OK~

That'all! Very good

1. I'm getting avg 5ms late for all maps but that shouldn't be enough to change the offset.
   
2. MP3 is 256kbps but please don't re-encode it! The difference in de-coding 192kpbs mp3 and 256kbps mp3 is not even worth mentioning. That "rule" is completely stupid and anyone with less-than-average common sense should be able to google this sh**. (If your PC has trouble de-coding even a 320kbps mp3, it shouldn't even be possible to run .net based programs like osu! in the first place )
   
3. Great SB! But I think ppl will delete it because of the combo colours : http://puu.sh/aDGa
   At times the approaching circles are completely lost in the "background noise". Having really high B/W contrasts (http://puu.sh/aDGC) AND movement makes it even worse.

p3n wrote:

[General]

1. I'm getting avg 5ms late for all maps but that shouldn't be enough to change the offset.
   
2. MP3 is 256kbps but please don't re-encode it! The difference in de-coding 192kpbs mp3 and 256kbps mp3 is not even worth mentioning. That "rule" is completely stupid and anyone with less-than-average common sense should be able to google this sh**. (If your PC has trouble de-coding even a 320kbps mp3, it shouldn't even be possible to run .net based programs like osu! in the first place )
   
3. Great SB! But I think ppl will delete it because of the combo colours : http://puu.sh/aDGa
   At times the approaching circles are completely lost in the "background noise". Having really high B/W contrasts (http://puu.sh/aDGC) AND movement makes it even worse.

I'll try and break down the facts as much as possible to help you but you'll have to decide on your own what to do here:
[/spoilerbox] Hauuuu. ;_; Too bad, since I really wouldn't want to add any color to this, but.. I'll try to figure out something.

[Easy]
Why don't you use tickrate 2 as in [Hard]? OK~
00:35:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be kind of cool to change the combo colour to the light blue (3) for these Nice idea, but I want to keep blue only in the chorus. :3
00:43:734 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:956 (2) - Wrong timing. This actually starts 1/4 earlier @00:41:845 (play @25% to check :3 ) I know, but not going to use 1/4-notes on easy.

[Normal]
Why don't you use tickrate 2 as in [Hard]? OK~
nothing wrong here
00:36:623 (1,2,3,4) - just like easy maybe use the light blue combo colour here? ;u;
00:43:734 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
00:24:956 (6) - overmapping for your current focus, either add a note @00:24:734 to set the gocus on the high pitched background or (better) delete this note What, Why would this be overmapping? ;_; There is that one background sound doing a triplet here.
00:35:734 (1) - spacing to previous feels strange. I can see the pattern you want to use here but the order of 00:34:845 (3,4,5,6) is messing up the flow . Maybe move 00:35:734 (1) to 372/192. The spacings in the following part are kind of "random" but it fits and you wont have to change the following notes. Hmm, sure, looks nice.
00:35:734 (1,2,3,4) - maybe the same change to colour (3) like I suggested for easy/normal? ;u;
00:40:401 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:43:734 (1,2) - ^
00:47:956 (1,2,3) - Messed up orientation *nazi* Maybe just copy/paste (1) here and move it to the places of (2,3) and use Ctrl+R on (2) to make it perfect Oops, I wonder why I haven't noticed that before.

The last part seems a bit overmapped but it plays really nice so please keep it as is eeeh, how come? ;u;'

lianna wrote:

I love this song but I can't find it anywhere

1. The mp3 file you are using is over 192 bitrates, and it's unrankable. Re-encoded for you, and you can download it here and then Full Submit~
2. I think the gray color on the slow part looks a bit hidden, but nothing that you need to change.
3. Good SB.
4. Good Spread..

1. First, something I think you kind of need to change is the note placed on 02:07:512 (3) - because all the diff follows a constant rhythm and, on the end, it takes a new rhythm, understandable at all, but the last note of the song ruins everything because goes to a place never seen before. When I played it, I hitted 50 on this note, and when my friend played it(he is a newbie) he hitted 50 too. I suggest you to:
   
   1. Remove the note...
   2. Add a 1/1 slider at 02:07:067...
   3. Silence the start of the slider...
   4. Add 50% of sound to the end with finish.
   It will solve the problem with the sudden rhythm, be symmetric, sound good and be very playable.
2. Really good difficulty, not boring, very consistent. I just suggest you to improve your slidering skills.
   
   

   Overall grade: 9.3

Overall grade: 8.7

1. 01:03:289 (3,4,5) - This is stream is hidden by the notes that come after, I suggest you to stack them on the end of (3) to avoid this and still make the pattern be awesome like it already is.
2. 01:24:178 (2,3) - Here I suggest you to make a triplet with the end of the previous slider and then make the first duplet of the song. The way it is now the makes it a bit sudden because the player isn't already used to play douplets. The notes are a bit sudden due to start of kiai time.
   
   This diff is really nice, but I think it's not good flowed. I know it's your mapping style buuut.
   
   

   Overall grade: 9.2

Katsuri wrote:

General~

1. The mp3 file you are using is over 192 bitrates, and it's unrankable. Re-encoded for you, and you can download it here and then Full Submit~
2. I think the gray color on the slow part looks a bit hidden, but nothing that you need to change.
3. Good SB.
4. Good Spread..

Easy~

1. First, something I think you kind of need to change is the note placed on 02:07:512 (3) - because all the diff follows a constant rhythm and, on the end, it takes a new rhythm, understandable at all, but the last note of the song ruins everything because goes to a place never seen before. When I played it, I hitted 50 on this note, and when my friend played it(he is a newbie) he hitted 50 too. I suggest you to:
   
   1. Remove the note...
   2. Add a 1/1 slider at 02:07:067...
   3. Silence the start of the slider...
   4. Add 50% of sound to the end with finish.
   It will solve the problem with the sudden rhythm, be symmetric, sound good and be very playable. I did some other things here, I hope it's better. At least I like it more like this. ;u;
2. Really good difficulty, not boring, very consistent. I just suggest you to improve your slidering skills. I personally love those long sliders<3
   
   

   Overral grid: 9.3

Normal~

Nothing to point, it's pretty solid.
I really don't like all these overlaps, but the normal diff is all overlaped, then the only thing I can do is say it's ok. Hmm, I don't really think this can be called all overlapped, since there's so little of that overlapping. But, whatever.

Overral grid: 8.7

Hard~

1. 01:03:289 (3,4,5) - This is stream is hidden by the notes that come after, I suggest you to stack them on the end of (3) to avoid this and still make the pattern be awesome like it already is. But stacking makes them look so ugly. ;_; I changed the end a bit since you're not the first one to say about this combo, I hope it's ok.
2. 01:24:178 (2,3) - Here I suggest you to make a triplet with the end of the previous slider and then make the first duplet of the song. The way it is now the makes it a bit sudden because the player isn't already used to play douplets. The notes are a bit sudden due to start of kiai time. Eeh, I don't think a triplet fits there. And this map's overall difficulty isn't that hard to begin with, I think the player needs to have even that much of a playing skill that they can recognize an upcoming douplet. OTL
   
   This diff is really nice, but I think it's not good flowed. I know it's your mapping style buuut. Well, I think it flows great, but it's impossible to please everyone. ;u; Thanks anyways.
   
   

   Overral grid: 9.2

TakamuraRin wrote:

[Hard]

Nothing to say, just a little moment.

00:21:512 (1) - Eh, may be linear slider is better? ; w ; No. ;_;
01:03:623 (4) - New combo? (Change spacing. ) New combo looks bad here, and it's a triple stream after it so no-one is going to notice that. >:
01:34:401 (1) - May be linear slider? Or this v No, I like it like this. ;_;
01:28:178 (5) - New combo? (Change spacing. ) It's a jump.
01:46:845 (1) - Linear slider? ; u ; NO! ;___;
02:07:512 (1) - Delete new combo? Timing changes, so I think it's fine. It also looks better when it's black.

[Normal]

00:21:512 (1) - baka slider. It's not, it's pretty.
00:23:289 (3) - May be linear slider is better? ;w ; no. >:
00:57:067 (1) - may be middle mount slider move on 1 cell to the left? It bends too much that way. ;_;
01:02:401 (4) - may be middle mount slider move on 1 cell to the right? I think it's better like this.
01:04:178 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Spacing is changed? I think that it's bad idea. Spacing is the same as always, it's sliderspeed that is changing. And the difference is very tiny anyways, so it doesn't matter.
02:03:734 (2) - Spacing fail. It's 1.15x spacing, no-one is going to notice that while playing.

[Easy]

01:04:623 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - Spacing is changed? I think that it's bad idea too. Spacing is the same, it's the slider speed that changes.
01:49:956 (3) - May be linear slider is better? It has the same curve as 01:46:845 (1) - , so I think it looks nicer this way.