Hi! From my mod queue...
First of all, sorry for having late response, I've been busy this past few days so I wasn't active here... Anyways, you're map is already on good shape, I haven't even found anything at all except for one... Anyways, I'll also include my suggestions...
Kaori (Osu Standard Diff)
03:58:161 (3) - Move it to the white tick.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10292576 That compliments the vocals more
This is just my suggestions, feel free to ignore it, but I hope it'll help...
01:09:715 (2,3) - Either you move the slider or the circle away with each other or you can do this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10315501, because when I played it, I was a bit confused if it will be a 1/4 or 1/2 tick gap, you can move it to prevent confusion with stacks you placed in the map
02:36:915 (4,5,6,1) - Move the slider a bit, some players may overclick it and end up missing the slider.
02:57:915 (3,4,5) - I suggest you just make the stack align with the slider, it's quite weird you suddenly unaligned this one.
03:36:915 (2,3) - Just make it similar with here 03:36:115 (4,1) or vice versa.
I hope it'll help, have a Great Day!!!