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Halozy - eliminate anthem

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Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, November 18, 2011 at 7:59:46 AM

Artist: Halozy
Title: eliminate anthem
Source: Touhou
Tags: Hotaru Rumia Shiirn MMzz
BPM: 150
Filesize: 7446kb
Play Time: 04:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.93 stars, 582 notes)
  2. Hard (4.59 stars, 402 notes)
  3. MM's Taiko (5 stars, 1383 notes)
  4. Normal (3.13 stars, 274 notes)
Download: Halozy - eliminate anthem
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Re-download as of 9/16/11

I'm Tempted To Look Over My Shoulder Right Now.

Normal by Elly-chan
Hard by Elly-chan
Collab by Elly-chan and Shiirn
MM's Taiko by MMzz
Last edited by Elly-chan , edited 29 times in total.
Esupanitix
393 posts
Joined June 2009
Esupanitix
The maps that you've got right now seem good, and I quite enjoyed the mapping style of Night Sakura. I have my high hopes on this one. Honestly, since there's nothing really done, I can't mod it. But I'm just saying outright now that Elly suggested that I be in the collab. Please correct me if my memory is wrong.

Star.

More tags to add in: Touhou 6 koumakyou darkness youkai
Makar
osu! Alumni
2,258 posts
Joined February 2011
Makar
Star~

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
star
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Is it still too short, huh?
Esupanitix
393 posts
Joined June 2009
Esupanitix
First section's done!

May confuse, has a few jumps.

Download: Halozy - Eliminate Anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
my better first section is done

SPOILER
200,80,26661,2,0,B|147:106|142:169,1,112.5
176,196,27061,2,0,B|212:214|216:257,2,75
296,256,27661,2,0,B|299:215|336:197,1,75
307,137,28061,6,0,B|269:105|256:123|242:105|204:137,1,112.5
164,124,28461,1,0
120,112,28561,1,0
76,120,28661,1,0
48,156,28761,1,0
52,200,28861,2,0,B|67:254|67:254|115:284,1,112.5
152,308,29261,2,0,B|184:332,1,37.5
224,316,29461,2,0,B|264:300,1,37.5
300,324,29661,2,0,B|344:340,1,37.5
376,312,29861,6,0,B|420:252|420:252|420:204,2,112.5
328,236,30661,2,0,B|328:160,1,75
256,280,31061,2,0,B|256:196,1,75
136,312,31461,6,0,B|92:252|92:252|92:204,2,112.5
184,236,32261,2,0,B|184:160,1,75
256,280,32661,2,0,B|256:196,1,75
352,192,33061,6,0,B|304:136|232:100,1,150,4|0
144,84,33661,1,0
144,84,33861,2,0,B|120:120|144:156,1,75
200,272,34261,2,0,B|224:236|200:200,1,75
292,120,34661,6,0,B|256:192|292:264,1,150,4|0
396,272,35261,1,0
396,272,35461,2,0,B|420:236|396:200,1,75
360,80,35861,2,0,B|336:116|360:152,1,75
248,196,36261,6,0,B|308:240|392:236,1,150
328,332,36861,1,0
328,332,37061,2,0,B|268:288|184:292,1,150
108,236,37661,1,0
108,236,37861,6,0,B|108:176,3,37.5
176,192,38261,2,0,B|176:140,3,37.5
244,148,38661,2,0,B|244:96,3,37.5
320,124,39061,2,0,B|320:72,1,37.5
320,124,39261,2,0,B|384:124,1,37.5
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
ignore doublepost


hi

Download: Halozy - Eliminate Anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
note to self:
Fix Collab's black-ish combo color to normal's shade
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Nice Map


Your map wishes Rnked certain.

This map lover ;)
poisonchan
257 posts
Joined January 2010
poisonchan
Elly-desuuuu <3 Modding your map as your request :D Hope it helps!

[!] = You NEED to change
[?] = Suggestion
[.] = If possible, change.

[General]
- Add 'Shiirn' in the tags ?
- If you are going to add more 'elements' in the SB, change the blur.jpg to 800x600
- Use these as combo colours? (Open .osu and replace the [Colours] code)
  • [Colours]
    Combo1 : 93,1,2
    Combo2 : 122,104,104
    Combo3 : 254,234,223
[Normal]
00:39:461 (6) - New combo?
00:50:461 - Drag the ending of the break here?
00:57:061 (8) - New combo.
00:58:061 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:261 (4) - New combo. Move it a bit to the left?
01:02:261 (7) - New combo.
01:08:661 (6) - New combo.
01:09:861 (9) - New combo.
01:10:861 (1) - Remove new combo. Move it a bit to the right?
01:15:061 (6) - New combo.
01:30:061 (6) - New combo.
01:33:861 (5) - New combo.
01:43:061 (8) - New combo.
01:46:661 (5) - New combo.
01:51:661 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks odd, it's way too 'tight' and the flow is a bit weird, btw, move it a bit to the right, and try to improve it.
02:07:261 - Drag the ending of the break here.
02:13:861 (8) - New combo.
02:14:861 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:061 (6) - New combo.
02:34:061 (6) - New combo.
02:34:661 - Fix the Kiai here.
02:36:461 - Add a beat here?
02:47:361 - Is this a problem with the Kiai?
02:51:061 (6) - New combo.
03:25:261 (7) - New combo.
03:33:861 (4) - New combo.
03:54:661 (5) - New combo.
04:07:461 (8) - New combo.


You asked for normal only right? :3 When the another diff gets ready, tell me to come and recheck :3
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
kiaipart1~

Download: Halozy - Eliminate Anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
Fixed some of Poi-chan's Mod, Other Modders for Normal May Mod Now.

Edit: Shiirn, gogogo your part. Remember to keep the breaks as normal's though XD
Makar
osu! Alumni
2,258 posts
Joined February 2011
Makar
Normal mod requested. I think this diff is really good so only nazi mods :p

[Normal]
00:26:661 (1) - Make this slider blanket the next circle better? http://puu.sh/4eCd
-Code: 76,136,26661,2,0,B|108:56|212:56|244:136,1,220,4|0
00:54:661 (4) - Move the second red point and the end point down 1?
01:05:061 (1) - Blanket (2) better?
01:37:061 (2,3) - Make these sliders symetrical so that the blanket looks better?
02:25:061 (1) - (super nazi) move down a pixel (x=227 y=71)?
04:02:261 (8) - Move the second red point down some?

Like I said, only nazi'd because I think the difficulty is great :D
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Hey Elly-chan, I see this aint complete yet so I will just give it a quick look.

[General]:
  1. The red combo colors blends with the background too well. You should probably make it a brighter shade.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:33:061 (1) - Any reason why you silenced the arrows? If you don't like how it sounds, you shouldn't map a repeating slider here imo.
  2. 00:34:661 (2) - ^
  3. 01:14:261 (6) - This slider is too far right, and the slider path is off the grid. It's still playable, but you can easily fix this by moving 3-4-5-6 a little to the left.
  4. 01:40:661 (4) - You should place a new combo, this combo is kinda long for a normal.
  5. 01:43:061 (1) - And then, you could remove this new combo. I know you try to follow the voice, but I don't think it's necessary.
  6. 02:19:061 (1) - Remove this new combo. (look at 01:02:261 (4) for example, consistency :3)
  7. 02:37:861 (5) - New combo. The combo is too long.
  8. 02:44:661 (7) - ^
  9. 02:47:461 (3) - Hmm, if you removed the combo at 01:43:061, you should make this a new combo and remove the combo 2 notes before this, else you should change that combo at 01:43:061 so it's more similar to this one.
  10. 03:28:661 (5) - You could make this a new combo as well. Combos this long are kinda bad for a normal diff.
  11. 03:41:461 (7) - You forgot a clap here.
  12. 03:41:861 (8) - ^ at the slider end.
  13. 03:43:461 (9) - ^ at the 2nd arrow.
  14. 03:44:661 (1) - ^ start of the slider.
  15. 04:01:061 (7) - New combo.
  16. 04:03:861 (1,2) - Check 1:43:061 and 2:47:461 and make it consistent to those parts.
There you go a short mod. When you finish the whole thing, ask me for a recheck if you wish.
Kert
2,079 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
Mod4mod yay

[Collab]
01:16:661 (3,4,6,7) - This is such a trap ugh. Maybe space 3 and 4 properly?
01:36:061 (1,2,3) - Select them and press J. Then place 1 symmetrically to 01:35:261 (3) - . And add a missing note on 01:36:861 (x) - . You can also remove new combo from that 1
It just sounds really bad for me in the current state
01:46:661 (3) - New combo? But actually it looks like a random jump, even though it follows the vocals. Do something with this

[Normal]
01:14:261 (6) - The absence of notes sounds weird after it. So.. maybe change this to something else? Or you can just delete 01:15:061 (1) -
Then it will be the same like between 01:09:861 (1,2) - and IMO sounds better
01:16:261 (2) - I think new combo from here is better
01:37:061 (2) - ^
01:43:061 (1) - Remove new combo
02:18:461 (6) - New combo
02:20:061 (1) - Remove new combo
02:20:261 (2) - New combo
02:47:061 (1) - Remove new combo
03:41:861 (8) - New combo
04:03:861 (1) - Remove new combo

Only some minor suggestions, because everything is mostly fine here
Pretty map actually
Chocopikel
319 posts
Joined June 2010
Chocopikel
Thank you for mod request to me ;)

[Normal]
Will you make AR from 5 to 4?
00:57:061 (1) - Remove a new combo
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Please put it a little more internally
01:09:861 (1) - Remove a new combo
01:10:861 (2) - same comment as 01:00:261 (1,2,3)
01:14:261 (6) - ^
01:16:061 (1) - Remove a new combo
01:43:361 - This green line is unnecessary,I do not think that it is suitable to put kiai time again in this music again
01:48:661 (3) - Please straighten it together with the previous circle
01:56:261 - same comment as 01:43:361
02:12:661 (5,6,7,1) - same comment as 01:00:261 (1,2,3)
02:13:861 (1) - Remove a new combo
02:34:761 - Delete this green line
02:47:361 - ^
02:47:461 - ^

There might be a place that cannot be told well because I am not so good at English
Because the spacing is basically in order, I think it is beautiful and good
I who has it like it as for a good music, too
good luck :D
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
hi

Download: Halozy - eliminate anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
i'll reply to this one cause I feel like it lol

Chocopikel wrote:

Thank you for mod request to me ;)

[Normal]
Will you make AR from 5 to 4? Nope, sorry. I always keep my normals as OD 4, AR 5 and HP 4
00:57:061 (1) - Remove a new combo
01:00:261 (1,2,3) - Please put it a little more internally Nop, sozzy ;o;
01:09:861 (1) - Remove a new combo
01:10:861 (2) - same comment as 01:00:261 (1,2,3) nop, sozzy ;3;
01:14:261 (6) - ^ nop
01:16:061 (1) - Remove a new combo
01:43:361 - This green line is unnecessary,I do not think that it is suitable to put kiai time again in this music again Just there for kiai stream thingie burst.
01:48:661 (3) - Please straighten it together with the previous circle Fixed~
01:56:261 - same comment as 01:43:361 Same as what I said ;3
02:12:661 (5,6,7,1) - same comment as 01:00:261 (1,2,3) they're on the side cause I don't want them near the hp drain bar during play mode soz
02:13:861 (1) - Remove a new combo
02:34:761 - Delete this green line http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132310
02:47:361 - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132310
02:47:461 - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132310
As you see I use them for the kiai burst, so no. Sorry! D:

also no to the 1's they've veeb modded over modded before (that made no sense) but yeah so i'm keeping them like this now ;3

There might be a place that cannot be told well because I am not so good at English
Because the spacing is basically in order, I think it is beautiful and good Thanks so much ;o;
I who has it like it as for a good music, too GO HALOZY!
good luck :D Thanks~ :D
Thanks for mod!
Esupanitix
393 posts
Joined June 2009
Esupanitix
Hello.

Normal
02:13:861 Combo
5 - Move this down to the left just a smidge.
7 - Very slightly misspaced.

That's all I could find. o3o
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan

no kudos for you
i did the first one though
more mods please
net45291
net45291
Elly ~

Mod
General

-No thing-

-::Normal::-

HDR -1 ?

00:33:061 (1,2) - Why no hit sound ; A ;

01:00:261 (1) - Change to C curve ?

01:03:261 (1) - Change to normal note ?

01:22:461 (x) - Add note ?

01:25:661 (x) - ^

01:30:061 (1,2,3) - Change pattern ?

01:43:461 (1) - Just remove kiai

02:17:861 (5) - New combo

02:34:661 (1) - Just kiai time ;A; , Pls don't stop kiai here
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
Computer is broken. Will be wiped and will have to re-install osu. Sorry for the inconvenience, I will be back to fixing these mods soon.
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Elly-chan

net45291 wrote:

Elly ~

Mod
General

-No thing- Yay

-::Normal::-

HDR -1 ? Ehh doen >o<

00:33:061 (1,2) - Why no hit sound ; A ; Cause I dont want it D:

01:00:261 (1) - Change to C curve ? May consider

01:03:261 (1) - Change to normal note ? There for a reason, cause second is just normal notes.

01:22:461 (x) - Add note ? vvvv

01:25:661 (x) - ^ See no need for 'em here

01:30:061 (1,2,3) - Change pattern ? No

01:43:461 (1) - Just remove kiai Fixed so that the first two kiais are only on the first part of the stuffie thingies. then the third kiai is full.

02:17:861 (5) - New combo Fix'd netsu<3

02:34:661 (1) - Just kiai time ;A; , Pls don't stop kiai here Done
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
hi it's me again

Download: Halozy - eliminate anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
such evil double postan'

Download: Halozy - eliminate anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
Huskatron
416 posts
Joined October 2009
Huskatron
:/ Please don't take any of the following harshly.

00:55:861 (2) - This is too far off-screen move it in a little closer
00:59:461 (5) - Too far down same goes for the next note
01:00:261 (1) - ^^ ;)
01:19:461 (7) - Needs to be moved to the left to fit perfectly with the adjacent notes
01:24:661 (1) - Tut, tut. This reverse arrow goes a little off screen. Maybe you could slow this section down and reverse arrow to also make the song a little harder.
01:26:661 (4) - I'm fed up now XD
01:27:461 (1) - 01:29:861 - THIS CALLS FOR A KILLER STEAM! (Notes and sliders mixed together (no reverses) and also no 1/4 spaces left between each note). e.g. no spaces left blank.
01:29:061 (1) - Remove new combo dependent on if the previous steam is longer than 19 hitcircles
01:30:061 (5) - New combo
01:33:861 (1) - Just gotta say I LOVE the symmetry here ;) . Though the notes could be moved into the center a little.
01:45:661 (6) - Note goes off-screen
01:48:261 (3) - Move this down a little, then you'll have to move (1) up, too. ;)
01:49:861 (3) - I think we all know this one...
01:51:661 (2) - OK, SERIOUSLY!?
02:26:661 (1) - If it's the end of a slider, I think it's OK to leave.
02:41:861 (7) - Same as the above
03:15:061 (1,2,3) - All three need moving upwards
03:17:861 (5) - This one's fine as it's the end of a slider, too.
03:24:261 (1) - Is this new combo necessary?

That's all!


And if you want a mod for the other diff, see my signature.
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Shiirn
hi

don't mod collab until it's done please, it's so confusing

Download: Halozy - eliminate anthem (Elly-chan) [Collab].osu
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Hi here you go~


Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.Your message is too short.

Download: Halozy - eliminate anthem (Elly-chan) [MM's Taiko].osu
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Thank you Elly for not mapping something that has an annoying singer.

Folder:
Cleeeaaann

General:
You or someone else should probably storyboard in the names for the collab.

Normal:
01:16:061 (1,3) - remove new combo at 1 and place it at 3?
01:30:061 (1,2,3,1) - the spacing between 3 and 1 look slightly inconsistent with 1,2,3
01:43:861 (2,3,4) - center note 3 between sliders 2 and 4 please.
02:11:461 (4) - you should center the kink in the slider.
02:28:261 (1) - you should also center the kink in this slider too.
02:55:861 (4) - nazi alertz: grab the 2nd slider point and move it up 1, makes slider more smooth.

Collab:
01:01:461 (5,6,7) - adjust slider 6 and 7 so that they are symmetrical and so that note 5 fits snuggly in perfectly.
01:17:661 (6,7,1) - really noticeable inconsistency of spacing here.
02:13:861 (1) - remove new combo here please.
02:21:261 (1) - this slider is sooooo oddly shapped. I slightly suggest you make a smoother one please.
02:35:461 (7) - how is anyone to know that this slider is sped up?
02:39:861 (1) - grab the 2nd slider point and move to the right 2 to make the slider more symmetrical.

AGH you had me mod something incomplete -_-
I will star later on recheck since its not done.
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