This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 10, 2011 at 3:43:12 PM

Artist: Yellow Zebra
Title: Summer Love Song
Source: Touhou
Tags: Wriggle Nightbug Imperishable Night fujimiya yuki Eiyashou Koi no Natsu Uta c78
BPM: 113
Filesize: 6012kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.7 stars, 259 notes)
2. Normal (3.8 stars, 168 notes)
3. Pereira's Easy (1.46 stars, 161 notes)

Download: Yellow Zebra - Summer Love Song
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From Imperishable Night
Stage 1 - Wriggle Nightbug
Theme : Stirring for Autumn Moon

note : I'm lazy to do the SB now :3 so I'll complete it later

Wriggle is female!

Thanks to...
Pereira006 for Guest Diff I'll add you in tag later

First of all, you'll need an Easy that is 3 stars or below. You'll also need to crop the mp3; you have a minute of song that you don't map, so you'll need to cut it out to be efficient.

Hard:

Up until the first chorus, the map follows no distinct rhythm present in the music, which feels weird. Let me explain:

00:26:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - The (3) in this combo does not go to anything in the music. This combo also does not go with the main rhythm present in the music. However, if you delete (3) and move (5) back by 1/4, you suddenly match up with the music and have a fun, unique rhythm.

00:38:990 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is another instance of nonsense. However, in this case, moving the second (3) back by 1/4 will fix it.

The map after the first chorus is fine; it's just until then that needs work.

Normal:

Make the circles bigger. They're too small for a modern Normal, sorry. :/

The rhythm's fine, but the spacing and hitsounds are a bit wonky at times... for both maps, in fact. Give me a forum PM after you've changed some things, and I'll go through this map with a fine comb.

Hi! Here's my mod

General;
- Use grid level 4, more precise
- Try these colours ?

Combo1 : 143,91,44
Combo2 : 121,213,125
Combo3 : 252,172,65
Combo4 : 251,224,70

- Map the whole thing
- Offset:1026

Normal;
- Circle size +1 bigger
- AR - 1 OD -1 and HP -2
- The spacing is inconsistent on the whole map ): that shouldn't happen on the easiest diff or in any case on a Normal diff
- 00:35:008 >> Finish at start
- 00:37:663 (2,3,4) >> No, streams are no good on a Normal diff, delete (3)
- 00:46:158 >> Remove a repeat and extend by a tick
- 00:50:937 >> Fill this space
- 00:58:105 (2,3) >> Unstack
- 00:59:964 >> Add a note
- 01:00:495 >> Start the new combo here instead
- 01:22:264 >> Fill this space with something and start the new combo here
- 01:31:822 >> Add a note
- 01:36:601 >> Add finish
- 01:58:769 >> Delete
- 02:02:087 >> Extend the spinner until here and add a finish
- 02;02:618 >> A speed change of 0.50x seems too much, 0.75x is good enough
- 02:10:052 >> Fill this blank
- 02:16:955 >> Again, 0.75x is good enough
- 02:19:079 >> New combo
- 02:27:574 >> Start the new combo here instead and add a finish at the start
- 02:33:946 >> Fill this blank

Hard;
- HP -1 AR -1 OD -1
- Spacing errors all over the map, I'm not talking about the jumps ._.
- 00:29:433 >> This stream might be too much for a Hard
- 01:07:663 >> From this part on I don't think a slowdown works
- 01:25:981 >> Fill the blank
- 02:02:087 >> Extend the spinner until here and add finish
- 02:10:318 (1,2,3) >> Unstack
- 02:19:079 >> Finish
- 02:27:574 >> Start the new combo here and add finish
- 02:29:565 >> Delete
- 02:33:946 >> Fill this

* I can't give you a star yet, if you want a recheck just PM again ~

repair a bunch inconsistent spacing .
I don't know there's a much of them >.<

Recheck ~ No need to give me kudosu

General;
- Try a simple pattern with claps on 2nd and 4th beat

Normal;
- Avoid jumps on Normal diffs
- 00:35:804 (2,3) spacing
- 00:39:787 (3,4) >> Arrange like this ?

- 00:45:362 (5~1) >> Spacing
- 00:46:158 (2,3,4,5) >> Spacing
- 00:47:486 (1,2,3,4,5) >> ^
- 00:51:999 (2,3,4,5,6,7) >> ^
- 00:55:185 (1,2) >> ^
- 00:58:371 (3,4) >> ^
- 01:01:556 (3,4) >> ^
- 01:03:680 (5,6,7) >> ^
- 01:17:486 >> Add a note with finish
- 01:23:592 (2,3,4,5) >> Spacing
- 01:23:857 >> Remove whistle, add finish
- 01:27:574 >> Remove new combo and start it at the next note/slider
- 01:28:105 >> Finish at start
- 01:31:291 (3,4) >> Spacing
- 01:34:742 (2,3) >> Don't stack
- 01:42:441 (4~1) >> Spacing
- 01:42:972 >> Finish at start
- 01:47:220 >> A spinner from where (3) is until this point would be good
- 01:53:592 >> Add a note with finish
- 02:04:477 >> Delete and add a note on 02:04:742
- 02:05:539 >> Snap the reverse arrow and end
- 02:05:539 (2,3,4) >> Spacing
- 02:08:990 (1,2) >> ^
- 02:09:787 >> Too short for a Normal, replace with a slider
- 02:12:441 (3~1) >> Spacing
- 02:16:424 (5~1) >> ^
- 02:20:937 (1,2,3) >> ^
- 02:23:326 >> New combo and remove new combo at 02:24:388
- 02:33:946 >> Add a note with finish

Hard;
- 00:27:574 >> Move to 00:27:441
- ... It seems like you didn't fix the spacing here too :/ check the whole map, check the spacing please

* I guess, star now

Add these tags:

Eiyashou Koi no Natsu Uta

Short stuff I noticed, so don't kudosu me.

Was planning to map this but whatever. Good luck.

Offset: 1000! listen to 127,017 there is multiple voice

Normal
140,292 add finish
136,044 - 136309 add slider
142,946 change slider speed to 0.5 (apply to that slider only and dont change the lengh)
203,920 slider add 2 returns, 204,716 end
227,017 add note?
236044 add spinner please please till 238,168

Hard
27,548 note move to 27,415 (fit the rhythm)
29,407 slider end 29,539
31,530 slider end 31,663
33,920 note move to 33,787
37,037 slider grid left bit
43,212 add note?
45,070 add note?
57,814 add note?
106,840 change spinner?
135,778 136,044 add note
142,946 slider velocity change to 0.2, try that
also 236,044 please please add spinner

accepting guest difficulties??if so call me!i like this song
GOOD LUCK!

here you go! finally down to 3 stars damn damn damn

REMEMBER to change the offset to 1000 ya

Download: Yellow Zebra - Summer Love Song (-Moccha_chii-) [Pianiac].osu

Hi. Mod as requested

[General]
add L_P in tag since you get diff from him/her.
It's better for you to make the whole map rather than stop at a point like that.

[Pianiac]
decrease the difficulty. it's too difficult for a new player. It's more like a normal
HP-1, AR-1, OD-1
distance spacing recommended: 0.8~1.0x
00:20:115 (4) - spacing
00:21:442 (2) - ^
00:22:769 (3) - ^
00:59:407 (1) - better not to put short spinner in Easy
01:21:176 (2) - spacing
01:24:628 (2) - ^
02:16:929 (1) - SV change is not recommended in easy
02:21:176 (1) - spacing
02:23:300 (1) - ^
02:37:636 (3) - fin

[Normal]
change offset
00:36:709 (1,2) - move to 00:37:108 and del 2
00:46:931 (4) - 1 grid up and 1 grip right
00:47:196 (5) - 1 grid right
00:55:161 (1) - 1 grid right , 1 grid down
00:57:285 (1) - del NC
00:58:081 (2) - NC
01:23:568 (2) - spacing
01:27:550 (1) - 1 grid down
01:39:763 (3) - 1 grid left
02:02:594 (1) - end this slider at 02:03:135
02:05:249 (1) - spacing
02:07:904 (5) - 1 grid down
02:09:497 (2) - why so loud?
02:13:214 (1) - spacing
02:16:931 (1) - make it symmetrical
02:26:223 (1) - del NC
02:31:533 (5) - del
02:36:046 (1) - move to 02:35:913

[Hard]
you need to increase the difficulty
00:29:407 (4) - end the slider at 00:29:539
00:31:530 (5) - ^
00:38:168 (2) - put it at 00:38:035
00:39:495 (5) - 1 grid left
00:40:026 (2,3) - 2 grids left
00:42:150 (3) - 1 grid up
00:44:805 (x) - add circle
00:45:070 (x) - ^
00:54:362 (5) - spacing
00:57:548 (x) - add circle
00:57:814 (x) - ^
01:01:796 (4) - spacing
01:06:044 (2,3) - 1 grid left
01:23:035 (4) - 2 grid up
01:45:070 (5) - move to 01:44:938
01:56:752 (5) - 1 grid up
02:04:185 (1,2,3,4,5) - make them smoother
02:06:840 (1) - spacing
02:09:515 why so sudden loud
02:20:380 (x) - add circle
02:20:646 (x) - ^
02:36:044 (6) - move to 02:35:911
Increase your difficulty.

Nice song. Star anyway.

[General]
- You have two .osb, delete the empty one.
- the mp3 name is lol
- The offset time in different diff is different, make it unique.
- tag L_P and c78 (if it is, as I see on the mp3 name) in ALL diffs
- cut the mp3 shorter.

[Hard]
duplicated timeline 137991
-try to put soft whistle regularly, e.g. 00:27:017, 00:29:141, 00:31:265, etc, and where you don't clap.
-very messy new combo (NC) arrangement. Try to put one sentences in one combo only.
00:32:858 (1) - try this slider shape

448,48,32858,6,0,B|368:96,1,80

(copy this line into .osb to cover the original line, in hitobjects which is also x,x,32858)
00:48:256 (1) - right 1 grid
00:53:831 (4) - why not stacking on (2)?
00:57:017 (2,3,4) - spacing; try to add a 1/2 slider after (4)?
00:58:079 (1,2,3,4) - it looks better if (1,2,3) is parallel to (4).
01:03:389 (1,2,3,4) - (1) covers (4) and cause confusion so I don't prefer stacking like this, also (1,2,3) has spacing inconsistancy.
01:05:513 (1,2) - refer to last combo, these two sliders are not on the same vertical line!
01:06:575 (1) - new combo to notify 0.5x slider
01:33:123 (2) - left 1 grid to make it symmetrical
02:09:495 (4) - not suitable for a loud clap
02:28:345 (2,3,4) - spacing
02:32:858 (3) - place at (288,192), place (4) elsewhere
02:36:044 (6) - off vocal, try to apply slider on (5)

[Normal]
offset 1000
- Check AI mod for spacing issues, too much that I won't check it now. Try to make spacing almost consistant throughout the whole diff in normal~
- new combo problem :/

[Pianiac]
- I suggest you to start and end as other diffs do.
- spacing problem, inconsistancy shouldn't appear in easy.

The rhythm is ok but please put effort on the arrangements of notes and spacings~ I can see you are improving >_<
when you've fixed feel free to ask for rechecks~

STARRRRRRRRRRRRR!
nice song! i like this -Your message is too short.

hello~~

Thank Guest Diff from my user page

Here my diff Easy

Download: Yellow Zebra - Summer Love Song (-Moccha_chii-) [Pereira's Easy].osu

I hope you like if yes don't forget add Tag "Pereira006" for all diff
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Also you have 2 OSB i suggest you remove 1 osb empety
And Diff "Pianic" This is normal or hard? If normal I can see have lot inconsiente spacing
Normal never make jump, anti-jump and Stream NEVER

ANy Questions ? Call me in-game or pm

Well good luck and STAR !

EDIT ! : Who mod my diff pleasse call me i will fix

here's my late mod.
this is going to be long.
please note that EVERYTHING is my suggestion.


star and good luck.

General

• Try offset = 994 and don't forget resnap (Timing -> Resnap All Notes)
  00:35:008 - although your SB is not finished yet, I advise you that don't use the style like this, it's rushing.
  The part of mp3 files after 02:36:575 are not used yet. You should cut them off via software. If you don't know how to do, just PM me and I'll help you~

Pereira's Easy

• 00:02:087 (3) - add soft-whistle
  00:04:211 (3) - add soft-whistle
  00:10:583 (3,4) - add soft-whistle
  00:15:893 (1) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  00:17:486 (3) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  00:18:548 (1,3) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  00:22:795 (2,4) - remove the clap on the second circle and add soft-whistle on the first circle, add soft-clap on the last circle
  00:24:388 (3) - add soft-whistle
  00:27:043 (2) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  00:28:636 (3) - add soft-whistle
  00:29:167 (4) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  00:30:760 (1) - add soft-whistle
  00:31:291 (2) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  00:32:884 (3) - new combo, add soft-whistle
  00:33:415 (4) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  00:35:008 (1) - add soft-finish
  00:39:256 (1) - remove the clap
  00:41:379 (3) - remove the clap
  00:41:910 (4) - add clap
  
  /****remeber that clap is only suit for short white line which next to the long white line in this song, so fix them****/
  Like this, I hope you could understand what I mean.
  
  
  00:51:999 (3) - new combo
  00:53:061 (1) - remove new combo
  00:56:247 - add a circle and new combo
  00:56:778 (1) - remove new combo
  01:06:866 (1) - add soft-finish
  01:28:105 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  01:36:070 (3) - new combo, add soft-whistle on the first circle, add soft-finish on the second circle
  01:40:849 (4) - new combo
  01:42:972 (6) - add soft-finish
  01:53:592 (1) - add soft-finish
  01:54:654 (3) - add soft-whistle
  01:59:433 (2) - remove the clap
  02:06:335 (4) - add soft-whistle
  02:10:583 (1) - add soft-finish
  02:12:176 (4) - remove the clap
  02:14:831 (4) - remove the clap
  02:16:955 (2) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  02:19:079 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  02:25:451 (5) - new combo
  02:25:982 (1) - remove the clap
  02:26:512 (2) - add soft-finish on the last circle
  Nice mapping style

Normal

• resnap all notes
  the normal-hitnormal sounds a little loud
  Some MAT/BAT thinks the start time should be same. So you may map the part of 00:01:000 - 00:34:982
  00:34:982 (1,2) - the distance is wrong (Your Distance Snap is 1.2x)
  00:41:353 (4) - new combo
  00:42:415 (1) - remove new combo
  00:43:477 (2) - new combo
  00:45:336 (5) - new combo
  00:45:867 (1) - remove new combo
  00:46:929 (4,5) - move 1 gird up and 1 gird right
  00:50:911 (1) - add clap on the last circle
  00:51:973 (2) - new combo
  00:54:628 (2) - move 1 gird up
  00:54:628 (2,3) - the distance is wrong
  01:20:115 (4) - new combo
  01:27:548 (1) - remove combo?
  01:29:938 (4) - move 1 gird right
  01:31:796 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:34:451 (1,2,3,4) - too Hard for a Normal diff and confused to read
  01:35:513 (5) - move 1 gird right
  01:40:557 (1) - move 1 gird right
  01:42:415 (4,1) - too close
  01:42:946 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  01:44:805 (1) - add soft-finish
  01:54:097 (2) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  01:54:893 (3) - add soft-whistle on the last circle
  01:55:424 (4) - add soft-whistle on the first circle
  01:56:221 (5,6) - add soft-whistle
  01:56:752 (6) - move 2 gird right
  02:02:592 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  02:04:716 - add a circle
  02:06:840 (4) - new combo
  02:09:495 (2) - too loud
  02:10:292 (4) - add soft-finish on the last circle
  02:12:415 (3,1) - too close
  02:15:336 (5,1) - too close
  02:16:929 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  02:19:053 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  02:19:053 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  02:20:911 (1,2) - the distance is wrong
  02:24:362 (3,4) - these sliders aren't stack well. Try to disable the Grid Snap and change the Distance Snap to 0.0x to restack them
  02:26:221 (1) - remove new combo
  02:32:327 (2) - add clap on the first circle
  02:33:389 (5) - add clap
  02:35:247 (1) - move 1 gird left
  02:35:513 (1) - move 1 gird left

Hard

• Some MAT/BAT thinks the start time should be same. So you may map the part of 00:01:000 - 00:34:982
  00:27:548 (3) - move to 00:27:415
  00:29:407 (4) - end at 00:29:539
  00:31:530 (5) - end at 00:31:663
  00:36:840 (5) - new combo
  00:37:637 (1) - remove new combo
  00:38:168 (2) - move to 00:38:035
  00:38:964 (3) - new combo
  00:39:761 (1) - remove new combo
  00:40:292 (3) - move to 00:40:159
  00:41:619 (5) - new combo
  00:41:752 (1) - remove new combo
  00:42:681 (1) - remove new combo
  00:43:477 (4) - new combo
  00:44:274 (5) - end at 00:44:407
  00:46:530 (1) - remove new combo
  00:47:725 (4) - new combo
  00:52:769 (2) - end at 00:52:902
  00:52:769 (2,3) - these sliders aren't stack well
  00:53:831 (4) - new combo
  00:54:893 (1) - remove new combo and end at 00:55:026
  00:55:955 (4) - new combo
  00:56:619 (1) - remove new combo
  00:57:283 (4) - move to 00:57:150
  00:59:407 - add a circle
  01:00:469 (2) - new combo
  01:03:389 (1) - end at 01:03:522
  01:04:451 (4) - new combo
  01:23:831 (1) - add soft-finish
  01:25:690 (1) - remove finish
  01:28:079 (2) - new combo and add soft-finish on the first circle
  01:34:451 (3) - new combo
  01:40:823 (4) - new combo
  01:41:353 (1) - remove new combo
  01:55:159 (2,3,4,5) - add soft-whistle
  02:10:292 (1) - remove new combo
  02:11:088 (4) - new combo
  02:16:929 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circle
  02:16:929 (1,2,1) - the distance is wrong
  02:32:327 (2) - move 1 grid up
  02:33:654 (1) - I think a slider that start at 02:33:920 and ends at 02:34:451 would be better

Good song but not good enough, so I won't give star this time. You could ask for recheck after you fix this, just repost in my queues. I will star this when I think it is good enough~
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren

Weiren wrote:

General

Pereira's Easy

• 00:02:087 (3) - add soft-whistleNO
  00:04:211 (3) - add soft-whistleNO
  00:10:583 (3,4) - add soft-whistleNO
  00:15:893 (1) - add soft-whistle on the first circle NO
  00:17:486 (3) - add soft-finish on the first circleNO
  00:18:548 (1,3) - add soft-whistle on the first circleNO
  00:22:795 (2,4) - remove the clap on the second circle and add soft-whistle on the first circle, add soft-clap on the last circleNO
  00:24:388 (3) - add soft-whistleYES
  00:27:043 (2) - add soft-whistle on the first circleNO
  00:28:636 (3) - add soft-whistleYES
  00:29:167 (4) - add soft-whistle on the first circleNO
  00:30:760 (1) - add soft-whistleNO
  00:31:291 (2) - add soft-whistle on the first circleNO
  00:32:884 (3) - new combo, add soft-whistleNO change combo and YES hitsound
  00:33:415 (4) - add soft-whistle on the first circleNO
  00:35:008 (1) - add soft-finishyes with clap
  00:39:256 (1) - remove the clapNO
  00:41:379 (3) - remove the clapYES
  00:41:910 (4) - add clapNO
  
  /****remeber that clap is only suit for short white line which next to the long white line in this song, so fix them****/
  Like this, I hope you could understand what I mean.
  ATTACH[-1.jpg]
  
  I understand but i can see you mod only was hitsound with whistle and clap but i see play taiko is only Blue example clap-whistle-clap-whistle-clap only blue?? so i did talk mat on #modhelp the clap can add long white tick so not fix somewhere sorry my poor english
  
  00:51:999 (3) - new comboNO
  00:53:061 (1) - remove new combo NO
  00:56:247 - add a circle and new combo NO( I will add this note if people agree with you mod)
  00:56:778 (1) - remove new combo NO
  01:06:866 (1) - add soft-finish[b]YES[/b]
  01:28:105 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circle NO
  01:36:070 (3) - new combo, add soft-whistle on the first circle, add soft-finish on the second circle NO
  01:40:849 (4) - new combo NO
  01:42:972 (6) - add soft-finish[b]YES[/b]
  01:53:592 (1) - add soft-finishNO
  01:54:654 (3) - add soft-whistleNO
  01:59:433 (2) - remove the clapNO
  02:06:335 (4) - add soft-whistle [b]YES[/b]
  02:10:583 (1) - add soft-finishNO
  02:12:176 (4) - remove the clapNO
  02:14:831 (4) - remove the clapNO
  02:16:955 (2) - add soft-finish on the first circleNO
  02:19:079 (1) - add soft-finish on the first circleNO
  02:25:451 (5) - new comboNO i did use my mod another
  02:25:982 (1) - remove the clap NO
  02:26:512 (2) - add soft-finish on the last circle NO
  Nice mapping style

Sorry not lot remove clap hitsound because i did auto play taiko is very well but if people mod and agree with you i will change...
anyway thank looking my diff

Download: Yellow Zebra - Summer Love Song (-Moccha_chii-) [Pereira's Easy].osu

Fix and Fix offset

general:
1.offset in Prereira's Easy is 1026
Normal is 1000
Hard is 1000

edit: as Prereira says below the offset is 994

2.oh, there are 2 .osb file....delete the one you are not using

3.don't forget to add Prereira006 in the tags (immediately! xD)

im not really good at offsets, but maybe i'll just go with Prereira's offset

Pereira's Easy:
-well..... can't find anything here....

Normal:
well...you haven't snap it (resnap it first..and i'll recheck....and don't forget about the offset)

Hard: edit:(i use different offset when im modding this)
00:32:618 - add note
00:33:946 (3) - move it into blue tick (i recommend to make a slider at 00:33:415 and make it end at 00:33:813)
00:51:973 (1,2) - make them parrarel like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/133669
01:04:185 (3) - spacing?
01:06:044 (2) - move it 1 grid left(level3)....and..... maybe you can decrease this jump a little?
01:31:530 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/133667 ?
02:09:495 - becomes 100% suddenly
02:32:858 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/133671 ?
02:35:911 (6) - move it into blue grid

some nazi:
00:50:115 (3) - 1grid left
00:50:380 (4) - ^
00:50:911 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3grid down, 1grid right
01:45:070 (5) - 1grid up
01:56:752 (5) - 1grid up

Index-San wrote:

general:
1.offset in Prereira's Easy is 1026
Normal is 1000
Hard is 1000

I think Offset correct is 994 i Agree with Weirgen
Pleasse 994 offset for all diff

3.don't forget to add Prereira006 in the tags (immediately! xD) lol done

Pereira's Easy:
-well..... can't find anything here....

Download: Yellow Zebra - Summer Love Song (-Moccha_chii-) [Pereira's Easy].osu

hi from kei&kyon's queue

*-* yellow zebra *shiny eyes*
ok 5th personal mod
here we go >,<

Hard

-most hitsound suggest >,<

00:27:017 (2) - +clap ?
00:28:079 (1) - +clap ?
00:29:141 (3) - +clap ?
00:30:216 (x) - maybe set a storyboard clap hitsound for keep the beat of the previous claps? just maybe >,<
00:31:264 (4) - +clap ?
00:32:858 (1) - +clap ?
00:33:389 (2) - +clap?
00:33:920 (3) - +clap?
00:38:699 (x) - maybe set a storyboard clap hitsound for keep the beat of the previous claps? just maybe of course
00:39:761 (1) - no new combo
00:41:619 (5) - new combo
00:41:752 (1) - no new combo
00:43:477 (4) - closer to (3) - ?
00:45:336 (1) - no new combo?
00:46:398 (9) - new combo?
00:46:530 (1) - no new combo?
00:56:619 (1) - no new combo
01:06:575 (3) - 5,22x spacing O_o!!! reduce it?
01:23:556 (5) - new combo
01:23:831 (1) - no new combo
01:27:017 (1) - maybe start of slider to the centre? maybe?
01:42:150 (4) - +clap ?
01:42:415 (5) - -clap ?
01:53:035 (3) - +clap ?
01:54:097 (1) - -clap, then add whistle to all this "brown" combo?
02:10:026 (5) - use higher volume?
02:14:274 (2) - +clap ?
02:17:327 (1) - move all slider to 02:16:929 - then add a note on 02:18:256 ???
02:20:646 (x) - maybe set a storyboard clap hitsound for keep the beat of the previous claps? just maybe ;w;???
02:21:707 (2) - +clap here?
02:30:203 (3) - +clap here?
02:33:389 (4) - +clap ?
02:34:982 (1) - +clap ?
02:35:513 (5) - +clap ?

Normal

- 164 unsnapped objects, please resnapp all notes at timing menu
- timings of the mod is snapped

00:35:513 (1) - +clap?
00:37:106 (1) - -clap
00:37:637 (2) - +clap?
00:38:168 (4) - -clap
00:50:911 (1) - no new combo?
00:51:973 (2) - new combo and pleas PLEASE space it closer to previous slider, no jumps on normal diffs, or something like that :/
00:58:079 (1) - unstack???
01:27:548 (1) - no new combo
01:28:079 (1) - no new combo
01:31:265 (3) - -clap
01:31:796 (1) - +clap, try this 2 previous claps, maybe you like it
01:34:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - =O hard to read? for a normal diff? maybe? or just me?
01:40:026 (4) - +clap
01:58:876 (3) - -clap?
02:16:929 (1) - no new combo?
02:16:955 (T) - unnecesary timing section
02:20:115 (2) - -clap?
02:25:424 (5) - new combo?
02:26:221 (1) - no new combo?
02:32:327 (2) - +clap ?
02:33:389 (5) - +clap ?
02:35:247 (1) - no new combo
02:35:513 (1) - no new combo
02:36:044 (1) - no new combo

Pereira

-maybe you should use custom sample, but is very nice like this

00:23:326 (2) - whistle instead clap?
00:25:450 (4) - ^
ok Im tired >_< just that suggest and that also go for similar sliders

starred for good luck and because of yellow zebra good luck again

Normal
163 object still havent snapped so please use distance snap u_u
And resnap all notes !

01:03:920- spacing
02:24:893- ^

Hard
00:53:831- 1 grid left ?

Sorry I cant motivation this song

[General]
Your difficulties have different offsets. Please use only one (the best) for all diffs.
If possible start and end the different maps on the same notes. It is not a "must have" but it makes for a much better overall mapset imo.


[Pereira's Easy]
00:51:999 (3) - start nc here? I usually don't care about NCs but it would be a perfect place to NC... (shame on me)
00:56:247 (X) - please don't leave out big white ticks...add a note here
01:00:495 (4) - again nc here instead of next note...

Maybe polish up some of the weird looking sliders and gaps but thats up to you. Good map.

[Normal]
As mentioned before: Resnap all notes!
Please use one (1!) fixed distance for distance snapping the notes in a "normal" diff. The SV you used will go best with fixed 1.1x spacing. If you want to make it look better and have less trouble with ugly gaps, disable grid-snapping and hold [ctrl] to snap notes every 45° if you need to. Otherwise just place the notes without gridsnap and use your EYES and YOUR MOUSE/TABLET to place the objects...

00:55:690 (X) - OK you use the great barcode for your hitsounds but you don't actually map it... thats strange! Please map this note (and use the fitting custom hitsound here aswell)
00:57:814 (X) - ^
01:04:742 (1,2,3) - sounds weird...but not necessarily wrong. Just not sure if I would keep it that way.
01:18:017 (2,3) - random claps sound bad...stick to the same pattern you used before
01:30:229 (1,2,3) - again wrong claps...stick to the upbeat pattern 0101
01:36:044 (X) - don't leave out the upbeat notes
01:37:397 (4) - random clap sounds bad
02:04:716 (X) - don't leave out this note
02:19:875 (2) - random clap
02:20:646 (X) - don't leave out note
02:22:769 (X) - ^
02:27:017 (X) - ^

[Hard]
Sorry this looks really unfinished to me. For Hard maps I suggest using 1,0x spacing at "fitting but higher than normal" SV. Use one or two higher spacings (1,5x and 2,0x give good results) for jumps only...make sure the jumps actually FIT THE SONG. Avoid random chaos spacing at all cost. Random spacing is not "hard" but stupid and embarrassing because it will look like you can't use the editor properly.

Basic things to consider:
- use a SV that will look good with your circle size @1,0x spacing and will have enough overlapping for 1/4 streams to make them readable (or you can just compress those streams @0,8 or 0,6 if everything else fails)
- don't just stacked notes everywhere...it is lazy and you can do much better
- you used a good and fitting hitsound pattern with your custom hitsound so PLEASE map all the necessary upbeats properly (like I pointed out in normal)
- if you use SV modifiers please make sure they fit and the speed change is not too sharp
- use spinners only where they fit, 01:25:690 (1) does not fit
- try to map what you hear..something like 02:02:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) does sound off; use 50% or even 25% speed and listen carefully, this way you will find matching beatpatterns much easier.



Still some work to do but some of the basics are already looking good. Don't give up and this can be a great mapset in the end!

Thank you for mod request~

[General]

• 
  Your .osz has two .osb files.
  Delete one which isn't used~
  
  

1. You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped. If you only plan to map a portion of your song, then including the full mp3 is a waste of file space. Many mp3 editing tools like this exist which make fading and cutting a song simple. However, if you have a legitimate reason for keeping your full mp3 (e.g. a storyboard after the map ends), then that is fine.You have to cut your mp3 if possible.

[Pereira's Easy]

1. 01:29:698 (3) - Add clap?
2. 01:40:318 (3) - ^
3. 01:44:565 (2) - Too far from (1).
4. 02:20:672 (3) - Add clap?
5. 02:28:105 (3) - ^

[Normal]

• 
  Notes are not snapped.

1. 00:38:990 (1) - It's near from (4).
2. 00:55:185 (3) - Too far from (2).
3. 00:57:043 (4,5,1,2) - Down 1 grid with grid level 4.
4. 01:01:291 (2,3) - Stack them perfeclty with (1).
5. 01:27:043 (1,1) - Don't use jump in Normal diff.
6. 01:35:539 (5) - Right 1 grid with grid level 4.
7. 01:42:972 (1) - Move it further from (3).
8. 02:20:937 (1,2) - Don't jump~
9. 02:24:919 (4) - Stack it perfeclty with (3).
10. 02:25:450 (5) - Add new combo.
11. 02:26:247 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

1. 00:27:548 (3) - Mode it to 00:27:415 to follow the music.
2. 00:32:592 (x) - Add a note.
3. 00:41:752 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:46:530 (1) - ^
5. 00:47:725 (7) - Add new combo.
6. 00:48:256 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:52:769 (2) - Looks like crowded. Move it further from (1).
8. 00:55:955 (4) - Add new combo.
9. 00:56:486 (5) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:06:575 (3) - Start it at 01:06:840, then add a note at 01:06:575.
11. 01:20:115 (3) - Add clap.
12. 01:28:079 (2) - Add finish at the top of slider.
13. 01:40:292 (3) - Add clap.
14. 02:04:451 (3) - Left and down 1 grid.
15. 02:04:584 (4,5) - Move them to follow the (1,2,3).
16. 02:08:964 (4) - Oh...the hitsound is too loud. Turn down it...
17. 02:19:318 (3) - Add clap at the end.
18. 02:21:176 (2) - ^
19. 02:30:203 (3) - ^ at the top.
20. 02:32:858 (3) - Remove clap.
21. 02:33:389 (4) - Add clap.

Cute song<3
I like Fujimiya Yuki
Good luck~!

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