Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/2 overlaps due to distance snapping are an exception.

Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner.

Error- wrote:

NM.

[Spread]
4.68* > 5.79* :thinking:

[Normal]
hmm.. https://puu.sh/vZYCL/abd730e0eb.png

00:07:149 (3) - 00:10:899 (3) - 00:10:899 (3) - 00:14:649 (3) - karena ini diff normal, buat mereka lebih konsisten.
Untuk diff Dibawah 3*, harap hindari overlap, contoh, 00:10:899 (3,5) -

Avoid overlapping circles, slider heads, and slider tails. These can be confusing for new players. 1/2 overlaps due to distance snapping are an exception.

Gunakan DS, untuk menghindari missreading, sebagai contoh, 00:12:305 (4) - ini akan terbaca sebagai note 1/2 dibading 1/1 dikarenakan spacing yang pendek, sama halnya dengan 00:13:711 (1) - ini akan terbaca seperti note 1/4, karena pada sebelumnya, 00:05:274 (2,1) - berjauhan.
00:39:493 (1) - buat ini lebih jauh, takut terbaca 1/2, karena ada lirik dan juga spacingnya.
00:38:086 (3,2,3,4) - sama seperti sebelumnya, overlap, hati hati, bisa membuat player kebingungan.
00:48:868 (1) - spacing ini terlalu jauh, padahal pitchnya sama dengan 00:46:993 (6,7,8,9) - , jika ingin menaikan spacing, taro spacing lebih tinggi di 00:49:336 (2) - sini karena pitchnya lebih tinggi.
00:51:211 (6) - karena pitchnya sama dengan not lainnya, alangkah baiknya samakan spacing.
00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - disini spacingnya cukup tinggi, dibandingkan dengan not not 1/1 yang spacingnya hampir setara dengan ini, terutama pada 01:00:352 (6,7) - , spacingnya jauh sekali, bisa terbaca sebagai not 1/1.

01:11:602 (1,1) -

Spinner recovery time should be at least 2 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner.

01:17:227 (6,1) - they seems a bit, off imo
01:20:977 (1,2,3) - sama halnya seperti diatas.
01:25:899 (2) - sama, jangan overlap.
01:51:211 (5,6) - dan lagi, spacing.

[Moei's Hard]
AR 7.5?

00:25:898 (4) - make it smoother imo
01:31:523 (4) - A bit right so it doesnt overlap 01:31:054 (2) - ?
01:37:617 (4) - A bit up, so it doesnt overlap 01:36:679 (2) -

[Insane]
Stack Leniency 5?

00:05:039 (4,5,6) - wtf jauh amat also fix 00:05:274 (6) - this slider, rather ugly imo
00:07:852 (4,5,6,7) - buat jadi persegi yang lebih baik.
00:11:836 (5) - ga usah dicurve, yang lain juga nggak toh, but its up to you anyway
00:14:649 (6,7,8,9) - buat perseginya lebih bagus
00:15:586 - 00:23:086 - overmap imo, lagunya pelan tapi jump semua :<
00:24:961 (2,3) - kalo bentuk bentuk yang kayak gini coba deh cek mapnya Gero, bsa jadi sumber inspirasi.
00:32:461 (6,2) - stack?
00:36:211 (5) - fix slider shape
00:40:430 (6) - ^
00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,6) - fix star shape
01:49:336 (1,2,3,4) - sama seperti diatas.
01:54:024 (2) - kok beda sendiri dari 01:57:657 (9,10) - dan yang lainnya?

[Extra]
00:03:399 (3,4,5) - wow
00:21:211 (2,3) - bad overlap
00:51:680 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix shape
ok cant mod this due to grid jump :<

gl~

Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. That is, each section must have the same BPM and offset in each difficulty.

Mini Gaunt wrote:

[General]

Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. That is, each section must have the same BPM and offset in each difficulty.

Moei's Hard has a different offset
Asuka_-'s Easy has a different offset Fixed

[Moei's Hard]
02:00:715 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:02:929

[Extra]
00:36:211 (12) - Careful with this slider it starts on a weak sound and ends on a much stronger sound. It doesnt have to be changed as per the ranking criteria, but it still is a loose guideline. Otherwise you could end the slider at 00:36:916 and map more circles. Keep
00:40:430 (8) - This slider shape seems out of place and I dont see how it fits the music. Keep
00:49:805 (3,4) - Feels overmapped compared to what is coming and the jumps previously. There are other places where this distance spacing is appropriate but not here in the song. Fixed
01:06:211 (4,5,6) - speaking of which this is more intense with the music and the singer is at a high pitch, this is a better place for the larger distance spacing. keep
01:22:383 (13) - New combo here, the sound is more unique to the kiai time and there is a gap after this, it would help with hp too so players dont feel it's unfair. Fixed

[MAI's IYAHOI!!]
01:16:289 (3,4,5) - This spaced triple is way too spaced and there is no reason for this specific triple to be made of two 1/8th sliders and no others.
02:01:055 (1) - Again this spinner should end at 2:03:339 instead

Shishou wrote:

m4m
from my mod q
since i'm not an old style mapper idk what to mod

general
offset should be 586 Fixed
[extra]
00:01:758 (1) - remove nc
00:02:461 (10) - nc
00:11:836 (1) - distance this from the previous note
00:06:211 (8) - nc
00:08:086 (5) - ^
00:12:773 (1) - remove nc
00:13:711 (5) - nc
00:47:461 (7) - nc
00:48:868 (1) - remove nc
00:49:336 (2) - nc
00:51:680 (1) - why the distance here suddenly changed?
00:57:305 (6,7,8,9) - whaat. the distance of the 1/1's is smaller than the distance of 1/2's 00:59:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Fixed them all
that's all
goodluck

Celektus wrote:

From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue

Here is the Code for the top diffs Hitsounds. In case you made some changes or want to add new diffs use this Tool to copy all the Hitsounds to other diffs. In case the Hitsound copier doesn't do it's job correctly and some sections sound not the same pm me so I can send all the diffs fixed by themselves.

Notepad Code For Extra

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Harajuku Iyahoi
TitleUnicode:原宿いやほい
Artist:Kyary Pamyu Pamyu
ArtistUnicode:きゃりーぱみゅぱみゅ
Creator:My Angel Kitten
Version:Extra
Source:きゃりーぱみゅぱみゅ / 原宿いやほい KYARY PAMYU PAMYU / HARAJUKU IYAHOI
Tags:O-Moei Kyary Pamyu Pamy Harajuku Iyahoi Iyahoi!!
BeatmapID:1281663
BeatmapSetID:606732

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
586,468.75,4,2,1,70,1,0
15586,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,0
22383,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
26836,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,0
27774,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
42071,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,0
43477,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
75586,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
105118,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
122929,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


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192,144,76407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,76522,1,2,1:1:0:0:
432,96,76757,1,2,0:1:0:0:
432,304,76992,1,10,1:1:0:0:
176,304,77227,1,2,0:1:0:0:
176,80,77460,1,2,1:1:0:0:
272,80,77696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,80,77929,1,10,1:1:0:0:
368,144,78164,5,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,78282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,78398,1,2,1:1:0:0:
368,336,78633,1,2,0:1:0:0:
160,336,78868,1,10,1:1:0:0:
160,288,78985,1,2,0:1:0:0:
160,240,79103,1,2,0:1:0:0:
160,80,79336,2,0,L|240:80,2,70,2|0|10,1:1|0:0|1:1,0:0:0:0:
160,192,80039,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,80157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,80272,1,2,1:1:0:0:
320,288,80507,1,2,0:1:0:0:
416,288,80740,1,10,1:1:0:0:
256,48,80977,1,2,3:1:0:0:
112,288,81209,1,2,1:1:0:0:
400,144,81446,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,144,81678,1,10,1:1:0:0:
416,288,81914,1,0,3:0:0:0:
368,288,82032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,82147,1,2,1:1:0:0:
208,48,82383,5,2,0:1:0:0:
64,288,82616,1,10,1:1:0:0:
64,288,83082,5,6,1:1:0:0:
64,32,83321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,32,83551,1,10,1:1:0:0:
400,288,83789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,288,83907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,84020,1,2,1:1:0:0:
304,96,84256,1,2,0:1:0:0:
304,224,84490,1,10,1:1:0:0:
128,224,84725,1,2,0:1:0:0:
128,96,84957,1,2,1:1:0:0:
336,96,85196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,85426,1,10,1:1:0:0:
256,224,85664,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,85782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,85896,1,2,1:1:0:0:
112,224,86131,1,2,0:1:0:0:
112,64,86365,1,10,1:1:0:0:
160,64,86483,1,2,0:1:0:0:
208,64,86600,1,2,0:1:0:0:
336,64,86833,1,2,1:1:0:0:
448,64,87071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87302,5,10,1:1:0:0:
448,320,87539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,87657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,87772,1,2,1:1:0:0:
224,320,88006,1,2,0:1:0:0:
96,320,88241,5,10,1:1:0:0:
192,192,88476,1,2,3:1:0:0:
96,64,88711,1,4,0:2:0:0:
0,192,88946,1,0,3:0:0:0:
96,320,89180,1,8,1:0:0:0:
192,48,89414,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,368,89649,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,192,89883,1,0,3:0:0:0:
400,192,90118,1,12,0:0:0:0:
240,192,90352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,90586,5,6,1:1:0:0:
96,208,90821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,91054,1,10,1:0:0:0:
144,208,91289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,91407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,91515,1,2,1:1:0:0:
400,112,91749,1,2,0:1:0:0:
400,320,91985,1,10,1:1:0:0:
96,320,92220,1,2,0:1:0:0:
248,65,92455,1,2,1:1:0:0:
400,320,92696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,92924,1,10,1:1:0:0:
352,160,93164,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,160,93282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,160,93394,1,2,1:1:0:0:
448,304,93628,1,2,0:1:0:0:
320,304,93864,1,10,1:1:0:0:
272,304,93981,1,2,0:1:0:0:
224,304,94098,1,2,0:1:0:0:
112,304,94332,1,2,1:1:0:0:
112,176,94571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,94801,1,10,1:1:0:0:
208,64,95039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,95157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,95270,1,2,1:1:0:0:
416,64,95504,1,2,0:1:0:0:
416,192,95740,1,10,1:1:0:0:
416,320,95975,1,2,0:1:0:0:
96,320,96210,5,6,1:2:0:0:
416,64,96446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,96679,1,10,1:1:0:0:
368,48,96914,1,2,0:1:0:0:
192,352,97149,1,2,1:1:0:0:
320,32,97383,1,2,0:1:0:0:
240,368,97618,1,10,1:1:0:0:
160,192,97852,1,2,0:1:0:0:
256,192,98086,5,6,1:1:0:0:
336,192,98321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,98554,2,0,L|480:192,1,70,10|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,99023,2,0,L|176:256,1,70,2|2,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
112,128,99492,2,0,L|192:64,1,70,10|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,0,99961,2,0,L|16:64,1,70,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,100430,2,0,L|176:192,1,70,10|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,100899,2,2,L|192:368,1,70,2|2,1:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
352,368,101368,2,0,L|416:304,1,70,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,101836,6,0,L|352:160,1,70,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,102305,2,0,L|144:112,1,70,10|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,102774,2,0,L|416:208,1,70,2|2,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
192,64,103243,2,0,L|128:128,1,70,10|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,103711,2,0,L|432:240,1,70,2|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,104180,1,2,3:1:0:0:
176,288,104414,1,2,0:1:0:0:
336,192,104649,1,4,1:2:0:0:
128,320,104883,1,4,1:2:0:0:
432,128,105118,1,4,1:2:0:0:
96,32,105586,5,6,1:0:0:0:
480,80,105821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,106055,1,14,1:0:0:0:
464,144,106289,2,0,L|512:144,2,35,0|0|6,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,106758,1,2,0:1:0:0:
448,224,106993,1,14,1:0:0:0:
48,240,107227,1,2,0:1:0:0:
320,368,107461,5,6,1:0:0:0:
416,112,107696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,107930,1,14,1:0:0:0:
304,64,108164,2,0,L|320:32,2,35,0|0|6,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,108633,1,2,0:1:0:0:
128,64,108868,1,14,1:1:0:0:
176,64,108985,1,2,0:1:0:0:
224,64,109102,1,2,0:1:0:0:
336,208,109330,5,6,1:1:0:0:
336,96,109571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,109799,1,14,1:1:0:0:
112,96,110039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,110157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,110268,1,6,1:1:0:0:
112,304,110507,5,2,0:1:0:0:
384,192,110738,1,14,1:1:0:0:
144,48,110976,1,2,0:1:0:0:
384,192,111206,1,6,1:1:0:0:
112,304,111446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,111675,5,14,1:1:0:0:
256,112,111914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,112032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,112145,1,6,1:1:0:0:
128,16,112382,1,2,0:1:0:0:
128,176,112615,1,14,1:1:0:0:
128,352,112851,1,2,0:1:0:0:
400,352,113086,1,6,1:1:0:0:
400,176,113321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,16,113555,1,14,1:1:0:0:
256,176,113789,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,16,114025,1,6,1:1:0:0:
96,320,114257,1,2,0:1:0:0:
256,176,114494,1,14,1:1:0:0:
416,320,114727,1,2,0:1:0:0:
416,16,114962,5,6,1:1:0:0:
256,176,115196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,115429,1,14,1:1:0:0:
368,256,115664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,115782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,115898,1,6,1:1:0:0:
464,352,116133,5,2,0:1:0:0:
368,352,116367,1,14,1:1:0:0:
320,352,116485,1,2,0:1:0:0:
272,352,116602,1,2,0:1:0:0:
128,352,116835,5,6,1:1:0:0:
288,160,117071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,117305,1,14,1:1:0:0:
304,224,117539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,117657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,117775,1,6,1:1:0:0:
96,224,118008,5,2,0:1:0:0:
272,32,118245,1,14,1:1:0:0:
144,256,118477,1,2,0:1:0:0:
208,48,118713,1,6,1:1:0:0:
192,288,118946,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,64,119182,1,0,3:1:0:0:
240,320,119414,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,48,119649,6,0,P|272:80|240:96,1,70,0|2,3:0|3:1,3:0:0:0:
160,144,120118,1,12,0:1:0:0:
256,192,120352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,240,120586,1,6,0:1:0:0:
256,192,120703,12,0,122930,2:0:0:0:

DominiGG wrote:

Normal

Its only mine opinion about this map so you dont have to change all the things that i posted

00:48:399 (9,1) - random spacing, when music doesnt change Fixed
00:50:743 (5,6) - ^ Fixed
01:17:227 (6,1) - imo the "slider starts" should be on white ticks Fixed
01:38:086 (1,3) - stack Keep
01:50:039 (3) - white tickFixed

I really wanted to mod last diff as always, but this was is too "original" for me. Funny map

Mini Gaunt wrote:

[General]

Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. That is, each section must have the same BPM and offset in each difficulty.

Moei's Hard has a different offset
Asuka_-'s Easy has a different offset

[Moei's Hard]
02:00:715 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:02:929

[Extra]
00:36:211 (12) - Careful with this slider it starts on a weak sound and ends on a much stronger sound. It doesnt have to be changed as per the ranking criteria, but it still is a loose guideline. Otherwise you could end the slider at 00:36:916 and map more circles.
00:40:430 (8) - This slider shape seems out of place and I dont see how it fits the music.
00:49:805 (3,4) - Feels overmapped compared to what is coming and the jumps previously. There are other places where this distance spacing is appropriate but not here in the song.
01:06:211 (4,5,6) - speaking of which this is more intense with the music and the singer is at a high pitch, this is a better place for the larger distance spacing.
01:22:383 (13) - New combo here, the sound is more unique to the kiai time and there is a gap after this, it would help with hp too so players dont feel it's unfair.

[MAI's IYAHOI!!]
01:16:289 (3,4,5) - This spaced triple is way too spaced and there is no reason for this specific triple to be made of two 1/8th sliders and no others. for the 1/8th sliders : I forgot to remove them, replaced them by circles !Keep the spacing, it seems enough spaced imo !
02:01:055 (1) - Again this spinner should end at 2:03:339 insteadEnded it at 2:03:398 because 2:03:339 is on a 1/8 node, but maybe I mistaked !

1. 00:36:211 (1,3) - Perfectly-overlapping slider bodies are unrankable, unless the first slider has completely faded by the time the second slider appears.
2. 00:51:211 (3) - 00:52:148 (4) - Don't use whistle on slidertail, it sounds horrible.
3. 00:54:023 (2) - tbh, this shape doesn't reflect the music
4. 01:11:367 (6) - I would just change this to a circle on the white tick if I were you. Having the slidertail on an active sound makes for confusing rhythm, especially for intermediate players.
5. 01:11:953 (1) - Doesn't fit the music since there are multiple instruments occurring on these ticks.
   
   
   
   
6. 01:16:406 (3,4) - At least stack with (1) slidertail. Isolated doubles are too hard for Hard.
7. 01:23:906 (3,4) - ^
8. 01:48:281 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:50:156 (3,4) - ^
10. 01:26:367 (5,6,7) - this hitsounding is so inconsistent that i'm sure it's noticeable to you too
11. 01:27:304 (2) - This follows the same melody as your previous 1/2 sliders, so what are you emphasizing by giving it a much different shape from the other sliders?
12. 01:43:711 (1,2,3,4) - you should follow time-distance equality and space your 1/1s out more
13. 02:00:703 (1) - start on the red tick; the "hi" lands on it

Celektus wrote:

Overall

I often Quoted the official osu!Standard Ranking Criteria so here's a Link to it since most of the mappers on this set will need it. (as in you can use it to see I'm not just Quoting nothing)

Also this Background is already used by a ranked map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/204159 and the new standard for resolution of Backgrounds is 1920x1080p yours is 1366x768p. Two good reasons to look for a new more fitting Background, tho be aware that this is just a suggestion and ranking this map with this Background should otherwise be 100% fine. Fixed

I hope all of you can approach my suggestion as unbiased as possible and I hope it isn't too much.

[Asuka_-'s Easy]

1. this whole section has strong sounds on each slider end since the song prioritizes the "HOI!" 01:30:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in case you see a consistency problem with that feel free to ignore this suggestion.
   
   
2. I feel like you should only use repeat sliders when something special happens in the song like here 01:43:711 (3) - yet you also used one here 01:47:461 (3) - which is slightly unjustified shouldn't be too hard to fix or maybe you have a good reason for it.

[Normal]

1. it's kinda inconsistent to use a 1/1 repeat slider here 00:03:399 (3) - but a 2/1 slider here as they are mapped to the same rhythm 00:10:899 (3) - Fixed
   
   
2. 00:10:899 (3,5) - 00:38:086 (3,1,2,3,4) - and so on look for those yourself Fixed
   
   

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Avoid 1/2 hitobjects after sliders which appear underneath the previous slider’s path. Players at this level fully follow sliders’ paths, so placing a hitobject directly after the slider is more intuitive. This also includes stacks underneath slider ends.

3. this repeat slider starts and end on equally Strong sounds and equally strong ticks 01:17:461 (7) - tho this one 01:18:164 (1) - has a strong sound on the repeat which is considered both less emphasized since it's not actively clicked and it's inconsistent with the repeat first mentioned and it starts on a less intuitive to play tick without being justified by having a strong sound on that tick. Fixed
   
   If this suggestion make not enough sense the way I phrased it I'll refer both to the Ranking criteria and also a Video by Pishifat
   
   

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Sliders should begin on stronger beats and end on equal or weaker sounds. Stressing important sounds through clicking is more natural to play than stressing unimportant sounds.

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Sliderends of extended sliders should be snapped according to the song's beat structure. If the song is using a straight beat, 1/4 or 1/8 are recommended. If the song is using a swing beat, 1/6 or 1/12 are recommended. If the song has a beat in a different position from what was recommended, snapping to an actual beat always takes priority.

   osu!mapping: basic rhythm
   
   osu!mapping: 1 3 2 4

[Moei's Hard]

1. try and avoid Overlapping sliders as much as possible unless you have a justification for it 00:02:930 (2,3,4) - same goes for slightly overlapping Objects in general 00:06:680 (2,3,4) - in case.
   
   
2. this is the only slider 00:17:461 (4) - in this group 00:15:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - that has strong sounds (Vocals) on both the Head and end, it would be more consistent to have the Vocal be clicked if possible. For example you could split it into a 1/1 slider and a circle by scaling the slider down with ctrl + shift + S
   
   
3. make the Vocal on this sliderend clicked to emphasize it 00:39:023 (3) -
   
   
4. there's a change in both rhythm and intensity here which you didn't map in a clearly recognizable way I feel like 00:43:242 (4,1,2,3) - consider making every strong sound clicked and stand out in a connected pattern. If my explanation wasn't enough ask for more reasoning.
   
   
5. try to not make the sliders Overlaps since that's ugly 00:49:336 (1,2) - and it's not justified through a gimmick or something
   
   
6. people usually make jumps into 1/4 (streams and such) spaced less since these are more straining that average. You don't seem to do that so I thought I'd point it out 01:18:867 (5,6,7) - would be a bit more tedious to fix this in the entire map and it's at least consistent, so either change all the spacing into stacks slightly or just keep it in mind for future maps. (even in case you wanna break that idea on purpose)
   
   
7. You could add slight SV changes to all the "HOI!" sounds. this is like a totally subjective suggestion so thinking about it or ignore it idc.

[Insane]

1. these 2 notes are strong sounds but 2 isn't 00:00:586 (1,3) - so spacing into 2 should be smaller then into 3. This is just one example on how you could emphasize through spacing since the map pretty much never uses any common spacing emphasis. I would suggest finding a more experienced Modder when it comes to uncommon spacing concepts before asking a BN, since they will be able to give you better tips on how to alternatively order your spacing... In case you want that, if not you'd probably need to remap this Fixed
   
   
2. try and remove this Overlap 00:14:883 (7,1) - same here 00:20:977 (1,2) - 00:35:274 (1,3,5) - I'll stop mentioning them so look for them yourself Fixed
   
   
3. it's unnecessary to use this many white anchors for a slider 00:21:211 (2) - also really small sharp curves usually are considered bad looking. Fixed
   
   similar here, but also the more complex stuff you do with smaller sliders the higher your chances are that it will just look overdone or have no affect except it being gross looking 00:29:649 (6) - Fixed
   
   
4. you can do really sharp curves like this 00:34:336 (4) - but they mostly only make sense if they follow a concept in your entire map or are there in a geometric group to emphasize a special moment in the song. Fixed
   
   
5. similar to the slider mentioned above this one is too special and doesn't seem justified 00:42:071 (3) - again something like this is an idea where you'd need to design your map around it or it's idea.
   
   
6. try and make this one appear in the same place as the last one 01:07:618 (8) - or make them both cross each other in some kind of ratio.
   
   
7. through my Hitsounding and the song Overall this section becomes more intense than the last one and for example like in your Extra diff spacing increases too 01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - [Fixed/*:m:1337]

[Extra]

1. these jumps don't really make sense to me 00:01:054 (3,4) - could you try and explain why you made these that way and for what reason For early the song, and the song still in quiet i maybe high spacing no need
   
   and for example why is this one close to twice as big 00:10:428 (4,1) - Fixed
   
   
2. why are these jumps bigger? to me it seems more like this section is less intense and thus should be smaller than usual 01:29:414 (6,7,8,9) - Fixed

[MAI's IYAHOI!!]

1. I think this is a pretty big In crease in spacing and difficulty compare to everything before it 00:06:914 (5,6,7) - thus it should get better introduction,
   for example you could use spacing like this earlier instead of repeat sliders. In case you still wanna use them make every 2nd triplet a repeat or this pattern and switch between them.
   
   
2. mapping this section like this 00:53:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think is inconsistent with the patterns you used before for the same sounds. and also using 1/8 without any musical reasoning or introduction seems very unjustified. I'd suggest re-mapping that section without 1/8 snapped notes at least.
   
   honestly I'm not trying to attack you as a mapper so view this as just criticism on your map please... I think this diff has pretty much no chances of getting ranked as it is, since the spacing is pretty much is nearly just full screen and doesn't really emphasize anything in the song, in terms of intensity. I personally like the idea and some players will clearly enjoy this, yet it's not for ranking. I'll finish this by Quoting the osu!Standard Ranking Criteria
   
   

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Avoid major composition differences in similar sections of a song. The basic spacing and rhythm should be similar, while patterning can vary. This ensures that rhythm and intensity in all similar sections reflect a song similarly.

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Sliderends of extended sliders should be snapped according to the song's beat structure. If the song is using a straight beat, 1/4 or 1/8 are recommended. If the song is using a swing beat, 1/6 or 1/12 are recommended. If the song has a beat in a different position from what was recommended, snapping to an actual beat always takes priority.

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Difficulty should be appropriately expressed to represent the intensities of different sections in the music. More complex/denser rhythms and more complex/quicker movements should be appropriately used to produce feedback through difficulty.

F1r3tar wrote:

You're gonna need a remap on every diff, except Moei's and Asuka's. It's nowhere close to being rankable in its current state. I get that you're trying to incorporate old mapping style, but rhythm suffers terribly as a result; aesthetics are lackluster too.

[Moei]

1. 00:36:211 (1,3) - Perfectly-overlapping slider bodies are unrankable, unless the first slider has completely faded by the time the second slider appears.
2. 00:51:211 (3) - 00:52:148 (4) - Don't use whistle on slidertail, it sounds horrible.
3. 00:54:023 (2) - tbh, this shape doesn't reflect the music
4. 01:11:367 (6) - I would just change this to a circle on the white tick if I were you. Having the slidertail on an active sound makes for confusing rhythm, especially for intermediate players.
5. 01:11:953 (1) - Doesn't fit the music since there are multiple instruments occurring on these ticks.
   
   
   
   
6. 01:16:406 (3,4) - At least stack with (1) slidertail. Isolated doubles are too hard for Hard.
7. 01:23:906 (3,4) - ^
8. 01:48:281 (3,4) - ^
9. 01:50:156 (3,4) - ^
10. 01:26:367 (5,6,7) - this hitsounding is so inconsistent that i'm sure it's noticeable to you too
11. 01:27:304 (2) - This follows the same melody as your previous 1/2 sliders, so what are you emphasizing by giving it a much different shape from the other sliders?
12. 01:43:711 (1,2,3,4) - you should follow time-distance equality and space your 1/1s out more
13. 02:00:703 (1) - start on the red tick; the "hi" lands on it

F1r3tar wrote:

[Moei]

1. 00:51:211 (3) - 00:52:148 (4) - Don't use whistle on slidertail, it sounds horrible. first off this was made with just reflecting the song in mind and mapping all its strong sounds in a clearly consistent way as in the top diffs. Another thing is that having whistles on slider ends is a totally legitimate thing that can happen since your hitsounding should be the same on all diffs to map the correct sounds in the song. There are even instances where you need to do that since a lot of songs just have offbeat elements that should be hitsounded. (this of course being only the case when the mapper decided that the downbeats have still stronger sounds which is the case here I think)
   
   
2. 01:26:367 (5,6,7) - this hitsounding is so inconsistent that i'm sure it's noticeable to you too. yea I assume that you modded this while the hitsounds were still broken after copying them with hitsound copier. I fixed all of the diffs and sent them to the host.

Celektus wrote:

[Asuka_-'s Easy]

1. this whole section has strong sounds on each slider end since the song prioritizes the "HOI!" 01:30:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in case you see a consistency problem with that feel free to ignore this suggestion.
   Sure there are voices, but i think it is better that downbeat is clickable in this case.
   Since the melody is the same as 01:15:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , I can not keep consistency with it if this upbeat is clickable.
   
2. I feel like you should only use repeat sliders when something special happens in the song like here 01:43:711 (3) - yet you also used one here 01:47:461 (3) - which is slightly unjustified shouldn't be too hard to fix or maybe you have a good reason for it.
   It is meaningful that upbeat is clickable 01:18:867 - only.
   By doing this, the next (1) is emphasized.
   
   In the case of "1/2 + 1/2 + 1/2 + circle + circle", there is a click before the click of the last upbeat, and the next (1) can not be emphasized.
   I thought that this is the best way.
   But I certainly use 1/2reverse a lot, so I may change it later. .

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Celektus wrote:

Overall

I often Quoted the official osu!Standard Ranking Criteria so here's a Link to it since most of the mappers on this set will need it. (as in you can use it to see I'm not just Quoting nothing)

Also this Background is already used by a ranked map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/204159 and the new standard for resolution of Backgrounds is 1920x1080p yours is 1366x768p. Two good reasons to look for a new more fitting Background, tho be aware that this is just a suggestion and ranking this map with this Background should otherwise be 100% fine.

I hope all of you can approach my suggestion as unbiased as possible and I hope it isn't too much.

[Asuka_-'s Easy]

1. this whole section has strong sounds on each slider end since the song prioritizes the "HOI!" 01:30:586 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in case you see a consistency problem with that feel free to ignore this suggestion.
   
   
2. I feel like you should only use repeat sliders when something special happens in the song like here 01:43:711 (3) - yet you also used one here 01:47:461 (3) - which is slightly unjustified shouldn't be too hard to fix or maybe you have a good reason for it.

[Normal]

1. it's kinda inconsistent to use a 1/1 repeat slider here 00:03:399 (3) - but a 2/1 slider here as they are mapped to the same rhythm 00:10:899 (3) -
   
   
2. 00:10:899 (3,5) - 00:38:086 (3,1,2,3,4) - and so on look for those yourself
   
   

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Avoid 1/2 hitobjects after sliders which appear underneath the previous slider’s path. Players at this level fully follow sliders’ paths, so placing a hitobject directly after the slider is more intuitive. This also includes stacks underneath slider ends.

3. this repeat slider starts and end on equally Strong sounds and equally strong ticks 01:17:461 (7) - tho this one 01:18:164 (1) - has a strong sound on the repeat which is considered both less emphasized since it's not actively clicked and it's inconsistent with the repeat first mentioned and it starts on a less intuitive to play tick without being justified by having a strong sound on that tick.
   
   If this suggestion make not enough sense the way I phrased it I'll refer both to the Ranking criteria and also a Video by Pishifat
   
   

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Sliders should begin on stronger beats and end on equal or weaker sounds. Stressing important sounds through clicking is more natural to play than stressing unimportant sounds.

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Sliderends of extended sliders should be snapped according to the song's beat structure. If the song is using a straight beat, 1/4 or 1/8 are recommended. If the song is using a swing beat, 1/6 or 1/12 are recommended. If the song has a beat in a different position from what was recommended, snapping to an actual beat always takes priority.

   osu!mapping: basic rhythm
   
   osu!mapping: 1 3 2 4

[Moei's Hard]

1. try and avoid Overlapping sliders as much as possible unless you have a justification for it 00:02:930 (2,3,4) - same goes for slightly overlapping Objects in general 00:06:680 (2,3,4) - in case.
   
   
2. this is the only slider 00:17:461 (4) - in this group 00:15:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - that has strong sounds (Vocals) on both the Head and end, it would be more consistent to have the Vocal be clicked if possible. For example you could split it into a 1/1 slider and a circle by scaling the slider down with ctrl + shift + S
   
   
3. make the Vocal on this sliderend clicked to emphasize it 00:39:023 (3) -
   
   
4. there's a change in both rhythm and intensity here which you didn't map in a clearly recognizable way I feel like 00:43:242 (4,1,2,3) - consider making every strong sound clicked and stand out in a connected pattern. If my explanation wasn't enough ask for more reasoning.
   
   
5. try to not make the sliders Overlaps since that's ugly 00:49:336 (1,2) - and it's not justified through a gimmick or something
   
   
6. people usually make jumps into 1/4 (streams and such) spaced less since these are more straining that average. You don't seem to do that so I thought I'd point it out 01:18:867 (5,6,7) - would be a bit more tedious to fix this in the entire map and it's at least consistent, so either change all the spacing into stacks slightly or just keep it in mind for future maps. (even in case you wanna break that idea on purpose)
   
   
7. You could add slight SV changes to all the "HOI!" sounds. this is like a totally subjective suggestion so thinking about it or ignore it idc.

[Insane]

1. these 2 notes are strong sounds but 2 isn't 00:00:586 (1,3) - so spacing into 2 should be smaller then into 3. This is just one example on how you could emphasize through spacing since the map pretty much never uses any common spacing emphasis. I would suggest finding a more experienced Modder when it comes to uncommon spacing concepts before asking a BN, since they will be able to give you better tips on how to alternatively order your spacing... In case you want that, if not you'd probably need to remap this
   
   
2. try and remove this Overlap 00:14:883 (7,1) - same here 00:20:977 (1,2) - 00:35:274 (1,3,5) - I'll stop mentioning them so look for them yourself
   
   
3. it's unnecessary to use this many white anchors for a slider 00:21:211 (2) - also really small sharp curves usually are considered bad looking.
   
   similar here, but also the more complex stuff you do with smaller sliders the higher your chances are that it will just look overdone or have no affect except it being gross looking 00:29:649 (6) -
   
   
4. you can do really sharp curves like this 00:34:336 (4) - but they mostly only make sense if they follow a concept in your entire map or are there in a geometric group to emphasize a special moment in the song.
   
   
5. similar to the slider mentioned above this one is too special and doesn't seem justified 00:42:071 (3) - again something like this is an idea where you'd need to design your map around it or it's idea.
   
   
6. try and make this one appear in the same place as the last one 01:07:618 (8) - or make them both cross each other in some kind of ratio.
   
   
7. through my Hitsounding and the song Overall this section becomes more intense than the last one and for example like in your Extra diff spacing increases too 01:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

[Extra]

1. these jumps don't really make sense to me 00:01:054 (3,4) - could you try and explain why you made these that way and for what reason
   
   and for example why is this one close to twice as big 00:10:428 (4,1) -
   
   
2. why are these jumps bigger? to me it seems more like this section is less intense and thus should be smaller than usual 01:29:414 (6,7,8,9) -

[MAI's IYAHOI!!]

1. I think this is a pretty big In crease in spacing and difficulty compare to everything before it 00:06:914 (5,6,7) - thus it should get better introduction,
   for example you could use spacing like this earlier instead of repeat sliders. In case you still wanna use them make every 2nd triplet a repeat or this pattern and switch between them. Reduced the spacing before 1/4 patterns
   
   
2. mapping this section like this 00:53:555 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think is inconsistent with the patterns you used before for the same sounds. and also using 1/8 without any musical reasoning or introduction seems very unjustified. I'd suggest re-mapping that section without 1/8 snapped notes at least. Replaced 1/8 kicksliders by circles
   
   honestly I'm not trying to attack you as a mapper so view this as just criticism on your map please... I think this diff has pretty much no chances of getting ranked as it is, since the spacing is pretty much is nearly just full screen and doesn't really emphasize anything in the song, in terms of intensity. I personally like the idea and some players will clearly enjoy this, yet it's not for ranking. I'll finish this by Quoting the osu!Standard Ranking Criteria
   It was a map for fun initially, I will try anyway, but if it's not rankable, it's okay to remove this from the mapset ! ^^
   
   

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Avoid major composition differences in similar sections of a song. The basic spacing and rhythm should be similar, while patterning can vary. This ensures that rhythm and intensity in all similar sections reflect a song similarly.

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Sliderends of extended sliders should be snapped according to the song's beat structure. If the song is using a straight beat, 1/4 or 1/8 are recommended. If the song is using a swing beat, 1/6 or 1/12 are recommended. If the song has a beat in a different position from what was recommended, snapping to an actual beat always takes priority.

   osu!Standard Ranking Criteria wrote:

   1. Difficulty should be appropriately expressed to represent the intensities of different sections in the music. More complex/denser rhythms and more complex/quicker movements should be appropriately used to produce feedback through difficulty.

Time Capsule wrote:

mungkin bisa direkomendasin buat bg
(trutama kalo nanti ada rencana nambah sb)

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+kalo butuh hs checking poke aja, nanti mampir lagi

My Angel Kitten wrote:

Okay, going to remap!
if you want modding this map, wait until finished remap!