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bit of a long hitnormal.wav cut out half of the file.should be OK now
Lunatic
00:18:410 (18410|0) - the SVs in this section feel janky and unfun. When I playtested this map I went very quickly from "oh this is cool!" to "oh this is not cool at all" because of these SVs. I don't have a suggestion for what you could change them because tbh I dont think they even need to exist. well since I failed to make them go smoothly I will have to delete them.Really disappointed ;_;
01:08:644 (68644|2) - There are so many ghost notes in this section. Fix them all. There are 1/4 rhythms here but it's not constant Fixed
01:17:628 (77628|0,77706|1,77785|2,77863|3,77941|0,78019|1,78097|2,78175|3) - Rolls dont feel right for this drum sound, maybe a 1-2-4-3 pattern instead? Current pattern is OK I think.Just 4 notes a group and rolls can serve as good transition imo.
01:54:972 (114972|2) - not mapping the synth sounds in the gap after this is a weird choice as you have them all mapped in the previous section that's my design,since I didn't feel it good when I mapped these 4 notes.You can have a try.Here I wanna show a clear ending of the previous part (with 3 finish sounds),and tell players to prepare for the kiai.If I mapped them,players will have only 1/2 gap for rest (the 4 sounds seem more suitable to be included in the former part).And in Lunatic diff,3/1 gap will give more room for SVs.
01:08:644 (68644|2,127264|0,127368|2) - another ghost note section ^
02:45:128 (165128|3) - same comment before about the drums ^
get rid of the SV at the end as well done
solid diff. Feels *very* copy pasted though
hard
00:02:160 (2160|2) - Having these strong chords be doubles would make this section feel a lot more diverse. Since the diff above has constant doubles, I don't think it'll be too much of a difficulty jump to add them. I understand you add them in the next section for the bass keys but it should be present here too. Maybe further the concept for the bass key section Well,added some doubles but just a few.Because it is the beginning of the music.I think it is enough for a 3.4* diff.
00:42:160 (42160|2,42472|2) - definitely double these for the stronger piano, this part feels weird using continuous single patterns for both the drums and piano I use doubles only when there're snare sounds.It is weird to add doubles for piano so no...Changed the pattern of the next section.Please have a look.
00:48:253 (48253|0,48331|1,48410|0) - This trill feels very out of place in this map. Putting the single before the trill in col 2 might help relieve the awkwardness Yeah many people have mentioned this.I tried to keep it but it is also OK to change it.
01:10:519 (70519|2) - Ghost notes in this diff as well ^
02:39:035 (159035|3) - blah blah :ghost: ^
solid diff, also very copy pasted
Normal00:01:222 (1222|2) - PR this whole sectionPR this whole map Made some PR changes.dunno if it is good enough
pretty serious diff spike between this diff and hard https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9544101 I think it is OK.The stream in Hard diff is not so difficult,and the LN pattern in Normal diff is difficult enough for newbies so I don't think it is serious spike
01:49:816 (109816|2) - skipping most of the drums and then including this one is weird not quite understand.All notes are for synth but not drum in this section
meh
easy
fine
Acceptable: Lunatic starts off fantastic and is good enough for me to want to bubble this set but it falls victim to the same problem that every diff has which is that they feel very copy pasted. I didn't check if they actually were but the second half feels close enough to the start that it's noticeable. Lunatic is by far the strongest diff because it has unique concepts executed well. As the diffs get easier they lose that uniqueness and strong execution and slowly become fairly samey. Call me back when you've looked over this and I'll do another check for hitsounds and the like
Changed samey patterns.Some are approximately mirrored since it seems neater...
Another thing to ask:I just have added a new BG but the file will be over 10M.Does it matter?