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Niva wrote:

[walt's Insane]

  1. One particular thing that I noticed here is how the intro was actually being mapped in 50-55% volume instead of other diffs' ~25%. Well, perhaps consider lowering the volume during the intro in order to match the other diffs' volume? (~25% would fit better anyway imo as the song there is very much still on its calm xD) That was an error, it was 25% originally, i think


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  1. 00:16:711 (2) and other consequent notes with clap until the start of next spinner - Personally I think it would be better if you use whistle + clap here (instead of only claps) because (1) it'll consistently follow your previous whistle pattern and (2) the whistle would blend in beautifully to the "brushing" sound from the song in my opinion~ I prefer the alternation between whistle and clap, i think it'd be messy using whistle + clap
  2. 00:19:377 (2) - A small suggestion here, perhaps move this to ~x:365 y:384 so that (1)'s start, (2)'s end, and the red (2) would be more equally spaced (and thus highlighting the pattern more)? ok
  3. 00:28:044 (1) - The overlap between the red (2) and the blue (1) here personally feels off for me orz (although to be honest I can't really find a good place to relocate the (1)) ._. - also That's not even noticeable when playing
  4. 00:28:711 (4) - Personally I'd relocate it somewhere higher (~x:485, y:166 for example) so that (4,5,6) would form a great, equally spaced triangle jump here : I prefer it the way it is
    SPOILER
  5. 00:34:711 (1,2,3,4,5) - Due to the nature of stacking, I think this part would look much more natural if these five are manually stacked instead of being placed directly in the top of each other (like in the example below) Agree, changing that
    SPOILER
  6. 00:40:544 (2,3,4) - I'd push these three downwards a bit (~x: 348 y:295 perhaps) to avoid clustering with your (1) hehe xD Changed a bit
  7. 00:43:378 (4,5) - Consider slightly curving them a bit (like you did on 00:45:878 (3)) for aesthetics? Well, the only reason (3) is curved is because i wanted to sorta blanket it with the previous slider. I usually prefer straight 1/4 sliders
    SPOILER
  8. 00:47:044 (2) - This is more of a personal thought, but I think you can make this slider encircling (1)'s start instead as it'll highlight your next 00:47:544 (1,2,3,4,5) more in my opinion : Wanted to highlight the song's repetition by repeating the slider and the down-up movement
    SPOILER
  9. 01:05:211 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start? It just feels weird somehow having this part being so silent without hitsound as basically everywhere else other parts are magnificently hitsounded (although I can see what you're trying to do with the hitsounding pattern here)... idk it feels out of place to me
  10. 01:14:043 (1,2,3,4) - A small suggestion here, perhaps consider CTRL + G'ing (2) and (4) to get a circular flow if you want to (: it's not bad but i wasn't aiming for circular flow here
  11. 01:15:711 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Another suggestion here, perhaps try to arrange them in a hexagon-like pattern like this to avoid that abrupt change of angle between (3) -> (4) to (4) -> (5) : Here the height of a circle corrsponds to a note's pitch
    SPOILER
  12. 01:19:711 (4) - Add whistle here? I get it that you're trying to put whistle every two circles here however the high-pitched sound here is very much calling for another whistle :3 doesn't sound bad
  13. 01:37:128 (1,2,3,4) - Umm, why not shaping them as a simple upward arc instead of an irregular shape you're currently using? This way it'll capture the ascending piano note much more naturally in my opinion~ agreed, changed
    SPOILER

Marmorexx wrote:

walt's Insane ---

00:09:378 (1) - *
00:10:044 (2) - * Those are called extended sliders. You use them when there's a prolongued sound, even if the end isn't snapped to anything
00:15:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A totally vertical stream is pretty hard to hit. To increase the flow you should turn it around its endpoint by maybe 30° CW The spacing is really low, it can't be that hard since it's basically a stack
00:53:044 (3) - This not is really deep, maybe move (3) and (4) up so its a more zig-zaggy motion don't understand this one, could you explain it further?
00:56:044 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe Scale down the Polygons with Ctrl-Shift-S. That results in a much nicer transition between slow and fast cursor movement I think it's fine as it is
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1,1) - This feels like a really nice part, though i cant hit it without losing combo. maybe make the curve a little bit more linear like this https://puu.sh/y4gHy/d728df356d.png (its easier to hit that way without taking away the awesomeness) uhh, i don't think it's that hard to hit, it's already pretty smooth imo

Luel Roseline wrote:

[Insane]
Play count : 2 (None)

00:23:711 - http://youtu.be/KxNTJWTZRu0 There's no reason to put a slider there
00:34:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like this? I prefer the way it is
00:45:044 (5) - NC here Nothing in the song suggests a nc there
00:47:544 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Flow ???

00:57:127 (1) - Unsnapped slider fixed
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SaltyLucario
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lol i seriously started thinking you're dead
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Xinnoh
please never request a mod from me again
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Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

Sinnoh wrote:

please never request a mod from me again
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Sinnoh wrote:

please never request a mod from me again
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Understandable
nimfa109
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nimfa109
~M4M from your queue

Easy:

00:07:377 (3) - I'm not really fan of this slider
01:08:877 (3) - this slider should be more directed into next slider so I propose to move the last tick to [204,208] or [204,204].
01:24:044 (1) - also should be a little higher
01:26:711 (2) - I think this should be a little higher like [328,108] but I'm not really sure.
01:29:377 (1) - nothing to do but I love this slider xD

Normal:

00:15:377 (4) - feel like this slider should be more curved
00:24:044 (1) - move the second tick of this slider to the middle of slider
00:28:211 (4) - not sure but maybe it would be more cool to move this circle on the slider

Hard:

01:04:044 (1) - move this on slider
01:13:711 (1) - should be curved I think

Insane:

01:09:377 (1) - don't like like this slider looks

I think at the end should be spinner too

Colorful Meadow:

00:05:377 (1,3) - don't like these sliders but maybe that's fetish to curved sliders.
00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this slider could be more pretty, maybe try to curve from 00:15:710 (5) a bit more
00:38:377 (1) - don't like this slider ;_;
00:40:044 (1) - for me it looks better when it is like this:
00:41:711 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g and this looks and sounds much better
00:43:127 (5,6,7,8) - looks a bit weird for me
00:45:794 (2) - move the last tick a bit higher
00:51:711 (5) - I know why this slider is like this and these ticks emphasize the music but generally this looks ugly ;;--;;
00:54:544 (1) - I'm not fan of this slider too
00:57:377 (1) - move this slider a bit in left and upward, something like this
01:37:128 (1,2,3,4) - not sure that you should make square here, also maybe use here a bit smaller spacing
01:40:683 (1) - people usually make the slider quiet gradually, for exaple here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/784164 (02:34:681 (1) - ) or here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948370 (05:01:617 (1,1) - ), but that's not really needed


Hope this will help you at least a bit and your map become ranked soon :D

Gl
CucumberCuc
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CucumberCuc

Nimfagryuf wrote:

~M4M from your queue

Easy:

00:07:377 (3) - I'm not really fan of this slider but i'm leave as is
01:08:877 (3) - this slider should be more directed into next slider so I propose to move the last tick to [204,208] or [204,204]. k
01:24:044 (1) - also should be a little higher k
01:26:711 (2) - I think this should be a little higher like [328,108] but I'm not really sure. k
01:29:377 (1) - nothing to do but I love this slider xD thx ♥

Normal:

00:15:377 (4) - feel like this slider should be more curved k
00:24:044 (1) - move the second tick of this slider to the middle of slider ??? no full understand what you mean
00:28:211 (4) - not sure but maybe it would be more cool to move this circle on the slider then it would be weird to look like that 00:27:211 (2,3) overlap, and at 00:28:211 (4,5) stack

Colorful Meadow:

00:05:377 (1,3) - don't like these sliders but maybe that's fetish to curved sliders. maybe
00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this slider could be more pretty, maybe try to curve from 00:15:710 (5) a bit more again, I will answer that I do not want to change here on more curve
00:38:377 (1) - don't like this slider ;_; slightly changed
00:40:044 (1) - for me it looks better when it is like this:
no, i'm not be change this
00:41:711 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g and this looks and sounds much better k
00:43:127 (5,6,7,8) - looks a bit weird for me but i'm still as is, i don't think there's much need changes
00:45:794 (2) - move the last tick a bit higher k
00:51:711 (5) - I know why this slider is like this and these ticks emphasize the music but generally this looks ugly ;;--;; slightly changed
00:54:544 (1) - I'm not fan of this slider too but here i'm leave
00:57:377 (1) - move this slider a bit in left and upward, something like this
k
01:37:128 (1,2,3,4) - not sure that you should make square here, also maybe use here a bit smaller spacing k
01:40:683 (1) - people usually make the slider quiet gradually, for exaple here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/784164 (02:34:681 (1) - ) or here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948370 (05:01:617 (1,1) - ), but that's not really needed k


Hope this will help you at least a bit and your map become ranked soon :D

Gl thx u ^^
_Crow
126 posts
Joined October 2014
_Crow

Nimfagryuf wrote:

Insane:

01:09:377 (1) - don't like like this slider looks i do

I think at the end should be spinner too i prefer it without a spinner
Yusomi
553 posts
Joined March 2014
Yusomi
hii, m4m from my queue (you can mod just 1 diff of my map :) )

Colorful Meadow
00:19:711 (2) - i don't think this should have the same spacing as 00:18:044 (1,2) - since 00:19:711 (2) - has loud cymbals on it and you previously spaced this sound out much more like 00:18:711 (3) - here or 00:09:044 (2) - here.
00:28:211 (4) - i don't think such a strong sound should be on sliderend. maybe just make it a stack like you did here 00:29:877 (4,5) -
00:31:211 (3,5) - space these out a little more
00:31:877 (2) - such a strong sound on sliderend here
00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - by making these all have such similar spacing you don't emphasise anything. 00:32:211 (1,2,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - these sounds should feel stronger in gameplay than the other notes, but currently they do not
00:52:211 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here could be made much tidier
00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - this spacing doesn't really make sense. 00:53:961 (4) - why is this note spaced when the strong sound is on 00:53:877 (3) - .
01:38:322 (5) - the sounds after this really aren't strong enough to be clickable except that last piano note so maybe just make this a long slider finishing on 01:40:475 (1) - and ignore those weird quiet clicking noise

walt's insane
00:30:877 (2,3) - maybe stack these to be consistent with 00:28:211 (2,3) -
00:39:044 (3) - stack under 00:37:878 (2) - ?
00:49:044 (5,6) - looks out of place compared to the rest of the map, suggest just making spacing even here
01:13:210 (7) - maybe make this a 1/4 to emphasise extended sound

hard diff looks good

alright, good luck !
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Yusomi wrote:

hii, m4m from my queue (you can mod just 1 diff of my map :) )

Colorful Meadow
00:19:711 (2) - i don't think this should have the same spacing as 00:18:044 (1,2) - since 00:19:711 (2) - has loud cymbals on it and you previously spaced this sound out much more like 00:18:711 (3) - here or 00:09:044 (2) - here. but I'm not going to particularly change this, because it will be strange to see here the proximity between objects, and at 00:20:711 (5,6) they will have distance like 00:18:044 (1,2)
00:28:211 (4) - i don't think such a strong sound should be on sliderend. maybe just make it a stack like you did here 00:29:877 (4,5) - no, this moment I specifically made others not to do again stack circles
00:31:211 (3,5) - space these out a little more k
00:31:877 (2) - such a strong sound on sliderend here looks okay to me
00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - by making these all have such similar spacing you don't emphasise anything. 00:32:211 (1,2,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - these sounds should feel stronger in gameplay than the other notes, but currently they do not k
00:52:211 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here could be made much tidier k
00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - this spacing doesn't really make sense. 00:53:961 (4) - why is this note spaced when the strong sound is on 00:53:877 (3) - . k, changed
01:38:322 (5) - the sounds after this really aren't strong enough to be clickable except that last piano note so maybe just make this a long slider finishing on 01:40:475 (1) - and ignore those weird quiet clicking noise again... looks like I will not leave this time... well, then OK, i'm will remove it

hard diff looks good

alright, good luck ! thx ^^
Rakphine
198 posts
Joined June 2016
Rakphine
Hi from my Modding Queue
M4M

I can't do much here, Nice mapset.
I'm suck at modding,

[Easy]
00:25:711 Useless note, sound bad
00:26:044 I guess it should be a hitcircle
00:29:044 for me it's weird watch this circle between those sliders
00:54:544 this slider is near to leave the screen
00:57:044 hit cirlcle here?

Sorry for mod only 1 diff, it's just i can find any problems with the mapset :( :cry:
if you want, don't give me Kudos
So I shoot a Star
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Lissel wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue
M4M

I can't do much here, Nice mapset. Thx u ^^
I'm suck at modding,

[Easy]
00:25:711 Useless note, sound bad but i'm leave as is
00:26:044 I guess it should be a hitcircle of course it was possible, but I don't particularly like this idea here, it will be almost irrelevant
00:29:044 for me it's weird watch this circle between those sliders then the same can be said about the 00:30:877 (2,3,1), but still OK (although there is a slight overlap of the circle, but still)
00:54:544 this slider is near to leave the screen k
00:57:044 hit cirlcle here? in kiai, I focused only on the loud sounds, but here it is not so loud to put the circle

Sorry for mod only 1 diff, it's just i can find any problems with the mapset :( :cry:
if you want, don't give me Kudos
So I shoot a Star
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
[x]
  1. this diff is way too overdone tbh
  2. 00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - what the...? try to look at those spacings again
  3. 01:03:877 (4) - why's this ending up at white tick as it was supposed to be clickable?
  4. 01:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - this looks like you're moving a cursor in a circular way like a circle shape with the same distance there
  5. calm parts on 00:05:377 - 01:24:044 - don't deserve a jump with such spacing and require an easy to play with to follow its feel from it
i don't think you're ready to map wub songs here on extra tbh

[walt]
  1. 00:47:878 (5,1) - it'd be the best thing to separate these 2 to get its emphasize by spacing from (1)
[saltking]
  1. 00:45:378 (1,2,1) - for a triplets here, i'd suggest providing more space there for readable
  2. 01:40:475 (1) - that reverse didn't have a note there. just a slider without it is enough
[n]
  1. NC should work like every 3 to 5 or sth that emphasize would work everytime
  2. 00:08:044 (5) - NC this
  3. 01:07:711 (1,1) - i wouldn't NC these 2 notes tbh
  4. 01:15:377 - a calm part right here doesn't deserve having too much notes around for a diff like this. reducing it with 1/1 sliders would be friendly there
  5. 01:36:525 (1) - i wouldn't add a note here for following a piano note for outro better
[e]
  1. DS' spacing aren't rly consistent tbh, like 0.9x then 0.95x. i'd just use 1x better
  2. 00:47:544 (3,1) - don't try to stick the slider end to (1)'s body for the sake of visual
  3. 00:56:044 - trying to pause this without mapping sth here wouldn't be a good idea tbh
uh, your own diffs need a lot of work there tbh

gl
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

lit120 wrote:

[x]
  1. this diff is way too overdone tbh
  2. 00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - what the...? try to look at those spacings again hope now be better
  3. 01:03:877 (4) - why's this ending up at white tick as it was supposed to be clickable? changed
  4. 01:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - this looks like you're moving a cursor in a circular way like a circle shape with the same distance there okay, be changed
  5. calm parts on 00:05:377 - 01:24:044 - don't deserve a jump with such spacing and require an easy to play with to follow its feel from it changed certain distance between objects, but most left as is
i don't think you're ready to map wub songs here on extra tbh

[n]
  1. NC should work like every 3 to 5 or sth that emphasize would work everytime slightly change NCs
  2. 00:08:044 (5) - NC this k
  3. 01:07:711 (1,1) - i wouldn't NC these 2 notes tbh
  4. 01:15:377 - a calm part right here doesn't deserve having too much notes around for a diff like this. reducing it with 1/1 sliders would be friendly there this part was slightly change
  5. 01:36:525 (1) - i wouldn't add a note here for following a piano note for outro better but I'll leave this note here so as not to miss a loud crunching sound
[e]
  1. DS' spacing aren't rly consistent tbh, like 0.9x then 0.95x. i'd just use 1x better but I will leave as is
  2. 00:47:544 (3,1) - don't try to stick the slider end to (1)'s body for the sake of visual slightly fixed
  3. 00:56:044 - trying to pause this without mapping sth here wouldn't be a good idea tbh k, changed
uh, your own diffs need a lot of work there tbh

gl thx ^^
J1_
104 posts
Joined February 2015
J1_
Heyo, from my mod queue,

Normal:

01:40:475 (4) - NC

SaltKing's Hard:

01:04:045 (1,2) - This part can be confusing, as people can think that this is a half beat gap instead of a full beat gap. I suggest either increasing the spacing or stack the two.

Colorful Meadow:

00:42:711 (4) - NC

00:54:044 (4,5) - Don't think spacing here needs to be this large, the song doesn't have much of a variation

01:14:044 (3) - Make this 1/4 beat

General:

Cool song~! Idk if you still accept GDs, but I would love to map an extra difficulty for this song (pm me on forums to reply)

Anyways, GL!
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

xJ1 wrote:

Heyo, from my mod queue,

Normal:

01:40:475 (4) - NC oops

Colorful Meadow:

00:42:711 (4) - NC k

00:54:044 (4,5) - Don't think spacing here needs to be this large, the song doesn't have much of a variation but i'm probably leave as is, now not see big problem in this spacing

01:14:044 (3) - Make this 1/4 beat oops

General:

Cool song~! Idk if you still accept GDs, but I would love to map an extra difficulty for this song (pm me on forums to reply) sry, it's full mapset :(

Anyways, GL! thx ^^
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
Hi.

[Colorful Meadow]
00:07:377 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - You used symmetry at the beginning so symmetry is expected here too.
00:10:711 (1) - Its end could look smoother.
00:13:711 (1,2,3) - They are overspaced if you compare them to 00:14:044 (3,1,2) - which feels like a speed decrease for no real reason.
00:24:711 (2,3,1) - This uses 1/1 and 1/2 but spacing is visually the same.
00:35:211 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9658503 This rhythm is a bit more intuitive since it makes white tick clickable.
00:38:711 (2,3,4) - It's strange that they don't flow like the others since they belong to the same combo.
00:40:044 (1,2) - Decreasing SV to use such a high spacing is pointless and confuses the player.
00:56:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is so high here considering how calm the song is, please reduce it.
01:00:377 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What happened to the concept ? Use consistent spacing like before.
01:31:071 - Maybe make their ends silent.
01:38:322 (4) - Why does spacing increase here ?

[Insane]
00:30:877 (2,3,4,5) - Use doublets instead, so it fits your drive to stack claps like you did at the beginning.
00:33:544 (2,3,4,5) - Looks like spacing is inconsistent here for no real reason.
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1) - You may want to avoid this in an Insane difficulty. (at least remove NC spam btw)
01:31:071 (1,2,3) - Considering how you mapped that section, circles would fit the song way better tbh.

[Hard]
00:37:378 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The diff spikes a lot here. This pattern is much harder than the rest for 3,5* players.
00:05:378 (1,2,3) - 00:08:712 (1,2,1) - 00:12:045 (3) - these are not stacked so why would 00:14:045 (2,3) - be stacked ?
01:04:378 (2) - a NC would help reading and would make sense since you NC'ed 01:05:545 (1) -
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

6th wrote:

Hi.

[Colorful Meadow]
00:07:377 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - You used symmetry at the beginning so symmetry is expected here too. slightly changed
00:10:711 (1) - Its end could look smoother. i think it's ok
00:13:711 (1,2,3) - They are overspaced if you compare them to 00:14:044 (3,1,2) - which feels like a speed decrease for no real reason. hope now be better
00:24:711 (2,3,1) - This uses 1/1 and 1/2 but spacing is visually the same. fixed
00:35:211 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9658503 This rhythm is a bit more intuitive since it makes white tick clickable. hm... k
00:38:711 (2,3,4) - It's strange that they don't flow like the others since they belong to the same combo. the first two slider were specially made from a different species, so they were not like the other 4-9
00:40:044 (1,2) - Decreasing SV to use such a high spacing is pointless and confuses the player. changed little SV and I made it clear to the player that the sliders on the sound such moments will reduce your speed than to be as quick
00:56:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is so high here considering how calm the song is, please reduce it. slightly changed
01:00:377 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What happened to the concept ? Use consistent spacing like before. changed
01:31:071 - Maybe make their ends silent. but here 5% sound, dk how can make lower...
01:38:322 (4) - Why does spacing increase here ? I wanted to somehow highlight the end of the last piano key pressed and the poet made a slightly different distance than the last 3 circles
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_Crow
126 posts
Joined October 2014
_Crow

Yusomi wrote:

00:30:877 (2,3) - maybe stack these to be consistent with 00:28:211 (2,3) - I only stacked those with 2 consecutive claps, there are 4 here
00:39:044 (3) - stack under 00:37:878 (2) - ? ok
00:49:044 (5,6) - looks out of place compared to the rest of the map, suggest just making spacing even here That's the point. It emphasizes the slider head since you can kinda feel a stop in the music with 5 and 6
01:13:210 (7) - maybe make this a 1/4 to emphasise extended sound idk if it's a good idea because it's right before the stream, it may loook a bit messy

lit120 wrote:

[walt]
  1. 00:47:878 (5,1) - it'd be the best thing to separate these 2 to get its emphasize by spacing from (1) it's still emphasized if i leave it as it is

6th wrote:

[Insane]
00:30:877 (2,3,4,5) - Use doublets instead, so it fits your drive to stack claps like you did at the beginning. explained above
00:33:544 (2,3,4,5) - Looks like spacing is inconsistent here for no real reason. fixed
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1) - You may want to avoid this in an Insane difficulty. (at least remove NC spam btw) nothing wrong with it
01:31:071 (1,2,3) - Considering how you mapped that section, circles would fit the song way better tbh. it's to avoid unnecessary 100s because of the timing change
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josh1024
232 posts
Joined October 2014
josh1024
m4m plz
Box.
Colorful Meadow
  1. 00:25:211 (1) not predictable? I'd add note 00:25:211 and start slider 00:25:377
  2. 00:26:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing emphasis could be clearer
  3. 00:27:211 (4,5) and 00:28:211 (4) and 00:33:044 (1,2) consistency?
  4. 00:30:377 (1,2,3) smaller to constrast 00:30:877 (1,2,3)
  5. 00:31:711 (1,2) I'd rather copy 1 to replace 2 and have a circle 00:32:044 here. feel safer if there's something to click on.
  6. 00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5) too symmetical for the music?
  7. 00:34:211 (5) oops?
  8. 00:34:794 (2) unreadable?(or, uh, I suck) suggestion(timeline) (cursor at 00:34:877 - )
  9. 00:37:377 (3) nc?
  10. 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) I see that 8 9 are different but yeah I'd appreciate more movement oriented stuff
    suggestion (at 00:38:794 - ) ignore the skin lol and this (at 00:39:544 - ) something like these.
  11. 00:48:377 - 00:48:877 I'd have a crooked slider for this
  12. 00:56:044 could have less intensity here and more 00:57:377 (1,2,3) here
  13. 00:58:711 (4) nc?
  14. 01:03:544 (2,3,4) map differently
  15. 01:05:544 unintuitive spacing?
  16. 01:10:711 (1) slience the end
  17. 01:15:377 a bit random?
  18. 01:32:765 having circles from here on feels unnecessary but it's up to u
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

josh1024 wrote:

m4m plz
Box.
Colorful Meadow
  1. 00:25:211 (1) not predictable? I'd add note 00:25:211 and start slider 00:25:377 i think it's okay
  2. 00:26:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing emphasis could be clearer k
  3. 00:27:211 (4,5) and 00:28:211 (4) and 00:33:044 (1,2) consistency? there was added the difference between similar sounds that all 3 times were not just circles
  4. 00:30:377 (1,2,3) smaller to constrast 00:30:877 (1,2,3) all because the last 1,2,3 are clapping, than in the first, so it made
  5. 00:31:711 (1,2) I'd rather copy 1 to replace 2 and have a circle 00:32:044 here. feel safer if there's something to click on. no, i'm not like this idea
  6. 00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5) too symmetical for the music? hm... a bit change i think it's okay
  7. 00:34:211 (5) oops? why? o.o
  8. 00:34:794 (2) unreadable?(or, uh, I suck) suggestion(timeline) (cursor at 00:34:877 - ) it's okay, srsly
  9. 00:37:377 (3) nc? nope
  10. 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) I see that 8 9 are different but yeah I'd appreciate more movement oriented stuff cause o
    suggestion (at 00:38:794 - ) ignore the skin lol and this (at 00:39:544 - ) something like these. if we imagine a situation that I'm do this, it will be too Chaos for the map, isn't it? looking at the following sliders in kiai I have to do the same spacing for them, but it will be very bad for the card when I don't want to do too much spacing(and i think it's okay)
  11. 00:48:377 - 00:48:877 I'd have a crooked slider for this it's a bad idea
  12. 00:56:044 could have less intensity here and more 00:57:377 (1,2,3) here changed
  13. 00:58:711 (4) nc? no
  14. 01:03:544 (2,3,4) map differently k
  15. 01:05:544 unintuitive spacing? *surprise for players*
  16. 01:10:711 (1) slience the end here nothing haves o.o
  17. 01:15:377 a bit random? probably, but i'm not sure in this
  18. 01:32:765 having circles from here on feels unnecessary but it's up to u The circles were added to the time when there is a piano sound
Ty ^~^
hi-mei
784 posts
Joined June 2014
hi-mei
дружище, хватит мучать карту и моддеров

в одной только ласт дифе почти нет структуры (01:13:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ), нет контроля звука (00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ), местами ритм совсем необоснован (00:25:211 (1,2) - )

забей и делай некст карту, иначе долго будешь прогрессировать (это я по себе знаю)
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

hi-mei wrote:

дружище, хватит мучать карту и моддеров

в одной только ласт дифе почти нет структуры (01:13:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ), нет контроля звука (00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ), местами ритм совсем необоснован (00:25:211 (1,2) - )

забей и делай некст карту, иначе долго будешь прогрессировать (это я по себе знаю)
Сам уже начал это осознавать, что похоже придётся забросить карту ( или забросить моддинг 5*+ сложностей, пока не научусь их делать ( хотя врятли это "обучение" произойдёт... ) )
Но всем людям спасибо за их поддержку и пока есть хоть немного надежды, я пока не прекращу её забывать, а вот когда её уже не станет (имею в виду надежду), то будет обидно конечно за столько времени стараний
Но за мод спасибо, хоть и обидно, что уже бесполезно её как-то ранкать, т.к. БН тупо будут игнорить повтор или эту карту :(

*Возможно это последний kudosu на этой карте...*
Djulus
570 posts
Joined September 2014
Djulus
Привет хотел мнение сказать о мапе, ремапай мапу или бросай ее( ее реально сложно мапать ) скорее всего рекоммендую бросить мапу имхо, мапай другие треки( по крайней мере легкие сонги тв сайзики там), и не стоит всем бнам так просто сказать им "дай мне шанс" и.т.д таким образом себя мемишь, но все равно ты храбрый, старайся лучше мапать, ты классный!
CucumberCuc
1,316 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Djulus wrote:

Привет хотел мнение сказать о мапе, ремапай мапу или бросай ее (ее реально сложно мапать ) скорее всего рекоммендую бросить мапу имхо, мапай другие треки( по крайней мере легкие сонги тв сайзики там), и не стоит всем бнам так просто сказать им "дай мне шанс" и.т.д таким образом себя мемишь, но все равно ты храбрый, старайся лучше мапать, ты классный!
спасибо за слова в конце :)
realy0_
1,731 posts
Joined August 2016
realy0_
Nice song 👌 shooting 7 kudos
CucumberCuc
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Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

realy0_ wrote:

Nice song 👌 shooting 7 kudos
u can don't do this, but ty :)
realy0_
1,731 posts
Joined August 2016
realy0_

CucumberCuc wrote:

realy0_ wrote:

Nice song 👌 shooting 7 kudos
u can don't do this, but ty :)
I like shooting kudos xd
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