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ARForest - Colors


Colorful Meadow

  1. 00:09:377 (1,2) - make these 2 end on the blue tick, having it so close to each other making it almost impossible to 300 unless you already know its mapped like that
  2. 00:13:711 (1) - feels overspaced compared to how slow the sliders and the song are.
  3. 00:27:211 (4,5) - consider making these stacks sliders so its not a jump spam section and i think it fits the drums better.
  4. 00:28:211 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:29:377 (1) - this is a really big impacting sound so maybe emphazise more with a slider compared to just more circles?
  6. 00:34:794 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to spaced out to hit correctly without sliderbreaking, movement is faster then the rhythm here and i think that it should be more closer together so players can time it better
  7. 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think making the sliders close together and then gradually space out will, you might have to change the slider shapes a bit but it feels more clean then just 1 constant speed while still following the music and being easier to hit
  8. 00:43:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^same thing as before, seems to intense of a speed up
  9. 00:49:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  10. 00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - is there a reason to space this out, its the same sound so it should be together in 1 burst
  11. 00:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe make this close together so 01:00:044 (1) - is more emphazised
  12. 01:00:377 (2) - ^same thing as before for 01:01:377 (1) -
  13. 01:06:711 (1,1,1,1,1) - maybe speed it up the other way, start it fast and end slow so it fits with the sliders before it and such its not a sudden speed change
  14. 01:31:071 (1,2,3) - end on blue tick, same thing as 00:09:377 (1,2)
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Takekii wrote:

ARForest - Colors


Colorful Meadow
By the way, can me ask those markings for other difficulties? thanks in advance
  1. 00:09:377 (1,2) - make these 2 end on the blue tick, having it so close to each other making it almost impossible to 300 unless you already know its mapped like that forgot do this
  2. 00:13:711 (1) - feels overspaced compared to how slow the sliders and the song are. I think everything is in order
  3. 00:27:211 (4,5) - consider making these stacks sliders so its not a jump spam section and i think it fits the drums better.
  4. 00:28:211 (4,5) - ^ as for me, there's a much better fit cottons from Soft than from the sampleset of the drum, but the sliders will probably do
  5. 00:29:377 (1) - this is a really big impacting sound so maybe emphazise more with a slider compared to just more circles? now nope, with the previous sliders I agreed, but then it will be a very bad idea
  6. 00:34:794 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to spaced out to hit correctly without sliderbreaking, movement is faster then the rhythm here and i think that it should be more closer together so players can time it better I don't think it's too difficult a moment and so I'll leave as is
  7. 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think making the sliders close together and then gradually space out will, you might have to change the slider shapes a bit but it feels more clean then just 1 constant speed while still following the music and being easier to hit no, I want to start a kiai exactly so
  8. 00:43:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^same thing as before, seems to intense of a speed up
  9. 00:49:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ as for me, after 1 "stage" at 00: 38: 711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) players will be able to understand what's going on kiai sometimes with objects on the map, so I don't want to change, and to organize such "improvement" is also not particularly desirable
  10. 00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - is there a reason to space this out, its the same sound so it should be together in 1 burst I took this idea from Rus_Brony_osu that I liked but I also did so because of 00:53:794 (2) and 00:53:961 (4) are slightly different sounds
  11. 00:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe make this close together so 01:00:044 (1) - is more emphazised
  12. 01:00:377 (2) - ^same thing as before for 01:01:377 (1) - I see no reason to change then the distance of these objects, and at 01:00:377 (2) is not the best idea to put the slider closer, because 01:00:044 (1,2,3,4,5), it was far, and 6.7 a little closer (past 00:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) the same)
  13. 01:06:711 (1,1,1,1,1) - maybe speed it up the other way, start it fast and end slow so it fits with the sliders before it and such its not a sudden speed change according to my idea it should be that the speed was from slow to fast, so I'll leave
  14. 01:31:071 (1,2,3) - end on blue tick, same thing as 00:09:377 (1,2)
no, it is a bad idea because it is too early sliders will end
Usaha
Easy
Normal
Hard
Insane
These are the other ones.
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Takekii wrote:

Easy
Normal
Hard
Insane
These are the other ones.
thx you ^^
Random Kid

CucumberCuc wrote:

Random Kid wrote:

Can I do an extra guest diff?
I'm sorry, but it's complete set and more diffs i not want
ok :D
Marmorexx
Hey, first of all: Amazing Map! Would love to see it ranked!

Now to the Mods

SaltKing's Hard ---

00:09:378 (1) - *
00:10:045 (1) - *
00:12:045 (3) - *
00:25:045 (3) - *
00:37:378 (1) - *
00:38:378 (1) - *
00:47:545 (2,1) - Here The music Suggest a new "part" you could say, so placing them in the middle/top part of the screen might help improve the flow, while the bottom part doesnt let these notes stand out enough on my opinion.
01:01:377 (5) - *
01:02:211 (2,3) - Make these to move closer together and increase the distance between the (1) and the (2) to make the backslider pop out more
01:04:378 (2) - Maybe place this directly underneath the (1) because like this it suggests a quarter beat
01:12:045 (5) - *
01:16:712 (4,5,6) - move these a little further to the top (maybe). My brain always sees a triple (it could just be me)
01:22:461 - Maybe force a break here to save some HP
01:37:909 (2,3) - These are a little bit hard to hit, a slider might feel smoother AND prevent scoredrops too :)

The Notes i marked with a (*) should be silent. I see that you have done some work on that already, but there are still a few left where the tick can be a little bit irritating since there is not an indication of a beat there in the song.


walt's Insane ---

00:09:378 (1) - *
00:10:044 (2) - *
00:15:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A totally vertical stream is pretty hard to hit. To increase the flow you should turn it around its endpoint by maybe 30° CW
00:53:044 (3) - This not is really deep, maybe move (3) and (4) up so its a more zig-zaggy motion
00:56:044 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe Scale down the Polygons with Ctrl-Shift-S. That results in a much nicer transition between slow and fast cursor movement
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1,1) - This feels like a really nice part, though i cant hit it without losing combo. maybe make the curve a little bit more linear like this https://puu.sh/y4gHy/d728df356d.png (its easier to hit that way without taking away the awesomeness)


Colorful Meadow ---

00:42:211 (1,2,3) - This part has a normal distance snapping
00:44:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one too
00:49:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here the distances seem a little bit too far apart, especialle for the last three notes because you used the entire screen for this part, maybe move the last 3 a little closer together like you did here: 00:51:211 (2,3,4,5)
01:01:377 (8) - Should be a new Combo
01:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is insane and pretty much decides the map difficulty. If you remove it the diff goes down by .3* - Maybe you can think of a way to make it a little easier (Or i'm just too bad lol)

Most of these are suggestions, so feel free which one to change and which one to keep :)
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Marmorexx wrote:

Hey, first of all: Amazing Map! Would love to see it ranked! thx and i want rank this too ^^

Now to the Mods

Colorful Meadow ---

00:42:211 (1,2,3) - This part has a normal distance snapping
00:44:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one too leave as is
00:49:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here the distances seem a little bit too far apart, especialle for the last three notes because you used the entire screen for this part, maybe move the last 3 a little closer together like you did here: 00:51:211 (2,3,4,5) here I did as of 00:59:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and so I will not change, but a bit will make closer the last two slider
01:01:377 (8) - Should be a new Combo k
01:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is insane and pretty much decides the map difficulty. If you remove it the diff goes down by .3* - Maybe you can think of a way to make it a little easier (Or i'm just too bad lol) leave as is (well at least somewhere in the song have a hard time)

Most of these are suggestions, so feel free which one to change and which one to keep :)
Osatia
Hello!
General

Soundcloud and ARForest don't need to be in tags, considering ARForest is already the artist.

Easy

AR4 is more of a Normal setting, consider setting it to AR3 or even AR2. Also HP1 is really low, HP2 is fine.

To be honest, I don't get why you made 00:07:377 (4) - a 1/1 slider, it would make much more sense for it to be a 1/2 repeat like 00:06:044 (3) - as they have seriously similar sounds.

00:08:711 (1) - It's pretty weird how the stronger beats in this repeat are at the repeat and sliderend, I would expect them to be at the sliderhead and repeat instead.

You could have also pointed 00:08:711 (1) - to 00:10:044 (2) - as it seems pretty weird for it to be pointing to 00:10:711 (3) - instead.

All the anchors in 00:10:711 (3) - aren't really needed tbh. You could also make it much more straight like would be better.

You really shouldn't have skipped 00:21:377 - with a sliderend, especially when that would be the best place to start a new nc. Skipping it just doesn't feel or look right. Like, 00:21:044 - should be a circle with 00:21:377 - being a 1/1 slider ending at 00:21:711 - 00:22:711 (1) -

00:22:711 (1) - This spinner is really random, it's like you just placed it there so you didn't have to continue mapping that section. It's the same as 00:16:377 - so there is no reason for it. If you really wanted to place a spinner a decent spot would be 00:25:377 - , but I doubt that anyone would place it there.

00:28:211 (2,3) - This overlap isn't that nice tbh, you're slightly overlapping it with the sliderbody, making about a quarter of it hard to read. I suggest moving it to a different spot.

00:30:877 (2) - This is pretty weird to skip all those strong beats with just a slider, it would be nice if you atleast put a repeat or something.

00:37:377 (1,2,3) - The rhythm you are using here is questionable, I don't really understand your logic behind it, because for me I would have done 00:37:377 (1) - as a slider ending at 00:38:044 - with another slider beginning at 00:38:377 - to 00:38:711 - . If you don't understand look at


I also don't get why you used two circle for 00:40:044 (4,5) - when a slider starting on (4) and ending on (5) would make much more sense?

00:41:711 (2) - This really shouldn't be a repeat, it would be better if you turned the slider into a circle and added a repeat or slider at 00:42:211 -

It's pretty weird that you decided to skip 00:43:711 - which is such a unique sound.

00:47:544 (3,1) - Is this overlap really needed? Like, really, it doesn't look good at all and could easily be removed. I just don't understand.

00:48:711 (1) - This slider doesn't look good at all, either make it a wave slider or a double red-anchored slider. I don't get why you made it in between, doesn't look good.

00:48:044 - This should be clickable.

Just to say, the ncing in this map is really weird. I think the biggest problem is your emphasizing and rhythm are making you do these weird ncing, like look at 00:50:711 (3,1) - why is this nced? So many times in the map you decide to put the strongest sound that needs emphasizing on a sliderend, which you shouldn't do. Even if you are going for that, I really don't think you should in an Easy. You should be emphasizing the strongest parts of the song, and sometimes the most unique, which you fail to understand. Honestly, if you were to have emphasized the right sounds and had better rhythm choices, then the ncing wouldn't be that big of an issue.

00:56:044 (1) - This spinner really isn't needed tbh, because of it you have to skip the strong sounds starting at 00:57:377 - which just doesn't feel right.

Probably the last thing I will say about the ncing (unless there more issues with it), but if you could explain why parts like 01:02:044 (1) - are nced, it would be nice to know your logic around it.

01:10:044 (1,2) - You shouldn't really do this, it plays kinda weird and also has a rough aesthetic feel to it, which brings me to my next point.

I must say that, not only is the rhythm and ncing an issue in this difficulty, but the overall aesthetics need a lot of work. Placing consecutive sliders is fine, but when you start placing random slidershapes like 00:48:711 (1) - and overall really poor looking angles like 00:52:377 (1,2,3) - it just ruins the map a little. Like I am not trying to be rude, but aesthetics are an important part of a map, and if you have no clear reasoning behind why it looks like this I think redoing sections isn't out of the question.

01:08:877 (3) - Maybe you could give this a special sliderbody to emphasize that buzzing and vibrating to it? Something like would be alright. (Giving certain shapes to certain sounds is a good idea)

Stacks like 01:26:711 (2,1) - aren't really supported for an Easy, the player might not be able to read it since the circle before just barely finished fading away.

Why didn't you start the slider at 01:24:544 - ?

01:29:377 (1) - This slider shape is really random, which ties into how it kinda ruins the section. This is the calm part of the song, so the sliders should have a more curved, wavy feel to it, not red-anchored sliders.

01:37:128 (1,2) - This slight overlapping is just silly, you can easily avoid this by slightly raising the ds.

Normal

HP2 is pretty darn low, is there a reason? HP3 or HP4 should be fine.

The base sv seems pretty high I won't lie, maybe around 1.1x would work nicely.

00:21:377 (1) - This slider doesn't look nice, I don't see a reason why it can't just be a normal curved slider.

Similar problems to the Easy, aesthetics and ncing seem to be an issue. Take 00:37:377 (1) - for example, this is nced, but 00:38:377 (3) - isn't, and 00:40:044 (3) - isn't which is almost identical to it. If you want to keep that ncing, then please explain why you nced 00:38:377 (3,1) - but not 00:40:044 (3,4) - . I won't be so generous in this difficulty, take what I said in the Easy and in this and apply it to the whole difficulty.

As for aesthetics, take 00:49:877 (2,3,1) - for example. Even if you were going for a nice blanket, it still doesn't look nice at all. Look at sliders like 00:50:711 (1,2) - which are not only random, but lack aesthetic value. I can keep going on, but I seriously do not see any reason in this set for these sliders. I am not saying you shouldn't put different sliders from time to time, but at least have a reason if you are going to make almost all of them lack aesthetics.

You do not nc 00:53:377 (4) - but you do on 00:54:544 (1) - . This is an example of how your ncing is confusing.

01:04:044 (4) - Should be nced, 01:04:377 (1) - shouldn't, and 01:05:044 (2) - should be.

01:12:377 (1) - This spinner is utterly random. Nothing else to say about it, it's random. It's the same as the section playing just before that, but yet you put a spinner. Even if you say you are following the tone that sets at that part, a spinner still wouldn't work.

01:19:044 (2,3,4,1) - This angle is pretty weird, maybe place them in a square a nice curve?

01:27:044 (1,2) - This overlap isn't that nice, (4) and (3) are still visible when (2) arrives, making an awkward looking overlap that could have easily been avoided.

01:28:377 (1) - Maybe make this blanket 01:28:711 (2) -

01:31:531 (2,3) - This slight overlap is just silly, please do not do that.

01:34:548 (4) - Making this a 45 degree angle doesn't look nice for this short slider.

01:40:475 - Spinner should be here.

I won't be modding SaltKing's Hard, but in it I must say spots like 00:45:795 (2) - would be very difficult to read.

Colorful Meadow

Is there a meaning to this diff name? Not saying this is a problem, but it seems pretty random to me.

00:15:710 (5) - Should be nced. Also I must say that this barely curved-wave stream doesn't look that nice. Like it's not bad but you could probably curve it more.

00:18:044 (1,2,3,4) - Random spacing with weird slider angles. Please, don't do this.

00:21:711 (2,3,4,5) - This shouldn't have been mapped since you skip it everywhere else.

I have a problem with 00:26:711 - whole section. You skip the strongest part of it, the drums, and decide to map to the almost non-existent bg music. It just doesn't make sense, and what makes it worse is your angles and how highly spaced the jumps are. Like the jumps, that I already said, are mapped to non-existent bg music is the same size as the kiai jumps! I also do not get the sliders at the beginning, they make no sense! No matter how hard I listened I could not hear what those sliders were being mapped to.

Tying into what I said above, the aesthetics in this part are seriously lacking. Even if you decide to continue mapping to the bg music, the jumps are horrid and random. Spacing is random, and it feels like you just placed the jumps freehandedly around. The stacking at some points don't make sense, and it feels like you used no logic at all in this section.

Overall, this section, and in all of your difficulties (except the gd's I didn't look at) have seriously bad ncing. Sorry if I sound rude, but the ncing is just out right random. It seems as if you just nced to fit to the jumps you randomly made. You shouldn't do that. What makes this even worse is how you don't even nc the sounds that need ncing, like 00:31:711 (6) - (which you even bookmarked), but you nc randomly else where. Please apply logic to your ncing, and be able to give a reason why you nced like this, because at the moment I don't get this at all.

I think I will stop this diff here. Sorry if I sounded rude, I did not intend to. Please, I strongly recommend you apply these to the rest of the the difficulty, and possibly your future mapping.
Overall your diffs could use some work. Good luck!
SaltyLucario

Marmorexx wrote:

SaltKing's Hard ---

00:09:378 (1) - * omg thanks for noticing that, silenced all of these which you mentioned +few extra you forgot about
00:10:045 (1) - *
00:12:045 (3) - *
00:25:045 (3) - ]
00:37:378 (1) - *
00:38:378 (1) - *
00:47:545 (2,1) - Here The music Suggest a new "part" you could say, so placing them in the middle/top part of the screen might help improve the flow, while the bottom part doesnt let these notes stand out enough on my opinion. Nah, I think it's good as it is
01:01:377 (5) - *
01:02:211 (2,3) - Make these to move closer together and increase the distance between the (1) and the (2) to make the backslider pop out more Same as above
01:04:378 (2) - Maybe place this directly underneath the (1) because like this it suggests a quarter beat Nope, time between them is big enough to see it's 1/1 not 1/4, and I used much, much smaller spacing for 1/4 too
01:12:045 (5) - *
01:16:712 (4,5,6) - move these a little further to the top (maybe). My brain always sees a triple (it could just be me) As said above, I used much smaller spacing between 1/4 objets, and I don't really think anyone would except triple in slow part, so staying unchanged
01:22:461 - Maybe force a break here to save some HP Nah, doesn't fit
01:37:909 (2,3) - These are a little bit hard to hit, a slider might feel smoother AND prevent scoredrops too :) That's why i placed slider first, so people can know what's the tempo of this moment before they hit circles

The Notes i marked with a (*) should be silent. I see that you have done some work on that already, but there are still a few left where the tick can be a little bit irritating since there is not an indication of a beat there in the song.

Waku wrote:

Hello! Hi~

I won't be modding SaltKing's Hard, but in it I must say spots like 00:45:795 (2) - would be very difficult to read. That's why I used much smaller spacing here so people will know something is diffirent -w ould be more difficult if I used distance snapping there ^^
thanks for mod!


update as always
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Soundcloud and ARForest don't need to be in tags, considering ARForest is already the artist. k


Easy

AR4 is more of a Normal setting, consider setting it to AR3 or even AR2. Also HP1 is really low, HP2 is fine. HP changed, but AR leave as is, no want change him

To be honest, I don't get why you made 00:07:377 (4) - a 1/1 slider, it would make much more sense for it to be a 1/2 repeat like 00:06:044 (3) - as they have seriously similar sounds. here it has been specially made a pass the middle of the slider, because I did not want to do another reverse slider

00:08:711 (1) - It's pretty weird how the stronger beats in this repeat are at the repeat and sliderend, I would expect them to be at the sliderhead and repeat instead. this slider i do as for 00:06:044 (2) in the similarity of the sounds

You could have also pointed 00:08:711 (1) - to 00:10:044 (2) - as it seems pretty weird for it to be pointing to 00:10:711 (3) - instead. i think it's okay now

All the anchors in 00:10:711 (3) - aren't really needed tbh. You could also make it much more straight like would be better. removed some anchors from the slider, but leave it as is, because I want the end of the stack with 00:13:377 (1)

You really shouldn't have skipped 00:21:377 - with a sliderend, especially when that would be the best place to start a new nc. Skipping it just doesn't feel or look right. Like, 00:21:044 - should be a circle with 00:21:377 - being a 1/1 slider ending at 00:21:711 - 00:22:711 (1) - k

00:22:711 (1) - This spinner is really random, it's like you just placed it there so you didn't have to continue mapping that section. It's the same as 00:16:377 - so there is no reason for it. If you really wanted to place a spinner a decent spot would be 00:25:377 - , but I doubt that anyone would place it there. k, changed

00:28:211 (2,3) - This overlap isn't that nice tbh, you're slightly overlapping it with the sliderbody, making about a quarter of it hard to read. I suggest moving it to a different spot. now I don't think it's that hard, but if will write about it again - change

00:30:877 (2) - This is pretty weird to skip all those strong beats with just a slider, it would be nice if you atleast put a repeat or something. no, I'm not going to do because I want to make the moment easier, and not to complicate for beginners

00:37:377 (1,2,3) - The rhythm you are using here is questionable, I don't really understand your logic behind it, because for me I would have done 00:37:377 (1) - as a slider ending at 00:38:044 - with another slider beginning at 00:38:377 - to 00:38:711 - . If you don't understand look at
k

I also don't get why you used two circle for 00:40:044 (4,5) - when a slider starting on (4) and ending on (5) would make much more sense? because the song is in this moment a kind of "Pause" and so I put the circles exactly

00:41:711 (2) - This really shouldn't be a repeat, it would be better if you turned the slider into a circle and added a repeat or slider at 00:42:211 -
leave as is since it was conceived hope it's be better

It's pretty weird that you decided to skip 00:43:711 - which is such a unique sound. this moment replaces teak on the slider

00:47:544 (3,1) - Is this overlap really needed? Like, really, it doesn't look good at all and could easily be removed. I just don't understand. slightly changed

00:48:711 (1) - This slider doesn't look good at all, either make it a wave slider or a double red-anchored slider. I don't get why you made it in between, doesn't look good. k

00:48:044 - This should be clickable. leave as is

Just to say, the ncing in this map is really weird. I think the biggest problem is your emphasizing and rhythm are making you do these weird ncing, like look at 00:50:711 (3,1) - why is this nced? So many times in the map you decide to put the strongest sound that needs emphasizing on a sliderend, which you shouldn't do. Even if you are going for that, I really don't think you should in an Easy. You should be emphasizing the strongest parts of the song, and sometimes the most unique, which you fail to understand. Honestly, if you were to have emphasized the right sounds and had better rhythm choices, then the ncing wouldn't be that big of an issue. slightly changed NC's

00:56:044 (1) - This spinner really isn't needed tbh, because of it you have to skip the strong sounds starting at 00:57:377 - which just doesn't feel right. k

Probably the last thing I will say about the ncing (unless there more issues with it), but if you could explain why parts like 01:02:044 (1) - are nced, it would be nice to know your logic around it. fixed

01:10:044 (1,2) - You shouldn't really do this, it plays kinda weird and also has a rough aesthetic feel to it, which brings me to my next point.

I must say that, not only is the rhythm and ncing an issue in this difficulty, but the overall aesthetics need a lot of work. Placing consecutive sliders is fine, but when you start placing random slidershapes like 00:48:711 (1) - and overall really poor looking angles like 00:52:377 (1,2,3) - it just ruins the map a little. Like I am not trying to be rude, but aesthetics are an important part of a map, and if you have no clear reasoning behind why it looks like this I think redoing sections isn't out of the question. slightly fixed

01:08:877 (3) - Maybe you could give this a special sliderbody to emphasize that buzzing and vibrating to it? Something like would be alright. (Giving certain shapes to certain sounds is a good idea) k

Stacks like 01:26:711 (2,1) - aren't really supported for an Easy, the player might not be able to read it since the circle before just barely finished fading away. fixed

Why didn't you start the slider at 01:24:544 - ? now started

01:29:377 (1) - This slider shape is really random, which ties into how it kinda ruins the section. This is the calm part of the song, so the sliders should have a more curved, wavy feel to it, not red-anchored sliders. k

01:37:128 (1,2) - This slight overlapping is just silly, you can easily avoid this by slightly raising the ds. k


Normal

HP2 is pretty darn low, is there a reason? HP3 or HP4 should be fine. k

The base sv seems pretty high I won't lie, maybe around 1.1x would work nicely. leave as is

00:21:377 (1) - This slider doesn't look nice, I don't see a reason why it can't just be a normal curved slider. k

Similar problems to the Easy, aesthetics and ncing seem to be an issue. Take 00:37:377 (1) - for example, this is nced, but 00:38:377 (3) - isn't, and 00:40:044 (3) - isn't which is almost identical to it. If you want to keep that ncing, then please explain why you nced 00:38:377 (3,1) - but not 00:40:044 (3,4) - . I won't be so generous in this difficulty, take what I said in the Easy and in this and apply it to the whole difficulty. fixed NC's

As for aesthetics, take 00:49:877 (2,3,1) - for example. Even if you were going for a nice blanket, it still doesn't look nice at all. Look at sliders like 00:50:711 (1,2) - which are not only random, but lack aesthetic value. I can keep going on, but I seriously do not see any reason in this set for these sliders. I am not saying you shouldn't put different sliders from time to time, but at least have a reason if you are going to make almost all of them lack aesthetics. of course, I slightly changed the sliders to 00:50:711 (1,2), but I leave them placement as is

You do not nc 00:53:377 (4) - but you do on 00:54:544 (1) - . This is an example of how your ncing is confusing. k

01:04:044 (4) - Should be nced, 01:04:377 (1) - shouldn't, and 01:05:044 (2) - should be. k, but last leave as is

01:12:377 (1) - This spinner is utterly random. Nothing else to say about it, it's random. It's the same as the section playing just before that, but yet you put a spinner. Even if you say you are following the tone that sets at that part, a spinner still wouldn't work. fixed

01:19:044 (2,3,4,1) - This angle is pretty weird, maybe place them in a square a nice curve? fixed

01:27:044 (1,2) - This overlap isn't that nice, (4) and (3) are still visible when (2) arrives, making an awkward looking overlap that could have easily been avoided. k

01:28:377 (1) - Maybe make this blanket 01:28:711 (2) - special another sliders

01:31:531 (2,3) - This slight overlap is just silly, please do not do that. don't see this any major problems, but still correct

01:34:548 (4) - Making this a 45 degree angle doesn't look nice for this short slider. i have done differently

01:40:475 - Spinner should be here. leave as is

I won't be modding SaltKing's Hard, but in it I must say spots like 00:45:795 (2) - would be very difficult to read.

Colorful Meadow

Is there a meaning to this diff name? Not saying this is a problem, but it seems pretty random to me. behind the girl on the BG there is vegetation, why wouldn't she be in a meadow? + meadow multi-colored all the same, and therefore this name

00:15:710 (5) - Should be nced. Also I must say that this barely curved-wave stream doesn't look that nice. Like it's not bad but you could probably curve it more. leave as is and no want do more curve

00:18:044 (1,2,3,4) - Random spacing with weird slider angles. Please, don't do this. fixed

00:21:711 (2,3,4,5) - This shouldn't have been mapped since you skip it everywhere else. but i'm leave as is

I have a problem with 00:26:711 - whole section. You skip the strongest part of it, the drums, and decide to map to the almost non-existent bg music. It just doesn't make sense, and what makes it worse is your angles and how highly spaced the jumps are. Like the jumps, that I already said, are mapped to non-existent bg music is the same size as the kiai jumps! I also do not get the sliders at the beginning, they make no sense! No matter how hard I listened I could not hear what those sliders were being mapped to. about the drums I added normal-finish the sound and I hope it will be better, but jumping, I'll leave to prepare the players and about the sliders, I probably will remove 1, leave 2 for a change

Tying into what I said above, the aesthetics in this part are seriously lacking. Even if you decide to continue mapping to the bg music, the jumps are horrid and random. Spacing is random, and it feels like you just placed the jumps freehandedly around. The stacking at some points don't make sense, and it feels like you used no logic at all in this section. sligthly fixed, hope be better

Overall, this section, and in all of your difficulties (except the gd's I didn't look at) have seriously bad ncing. Sorry if I sound rude, but the ncing is just out right random. It seems as if you just nced to fit to the jumps you randomly made. You shouldn't do that. What makes this even worse is how you don't even nc the sounds that need ncing, like 00:31:711 (6) - (which you even bookmarked), but you nc randomly else where. Please apply logic to your ncing, and be able to give a reason why you nced like this, because at the moment I don't get this at all. NC fixed

I think I will stop this diff here. Sorry if I sounded rude, I did not intend to. Please, I strongly recommend you apply these to the rest of the the difficulty, and possibly your future mapping.
Overall your diffs could use some work. Good luck!
thx ^^
Luel Roseline
Hi from my queue

CucumberCuc wrote:

can above if u want
[General]
00:05:377 - 00:37:377 : 90BPM

[Easy, Normal]
No problem.


[Hard]


[Insane]
Play count : 2 (None)

00:23:711 - http://youtu.be/KxNTJWTZRu0
00:34:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like this?
00:45:044 (5) - NC here
00:47:544 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Flow

00:57:127 (1) - Unsnapped slider

GL
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Luel Roseline wrote:

Hi from my queue

CucumberCuc wrote:

can above if u want
[General]
00:05:377 - 00:37:377 : 90BPM leave as is, no want change this BPM

[Easy, Normal]
No problem.

[Hard]

Another Tags, but i'm fixed this

GL thx ^^
_Crow
I'm not dead

Niva wrote:

[walt's Insane]

  1. One particular thing that I noticed here is how the intro was actually being mapped in 50-55% volume instead of other diffs' ~25%. Well, perhaps consider lowering the volume during the intro in order to match the other diffs' volume? (~25% would fit better anyway imo as the song there is very much still on its calm xD) That was an error, it was 25% originally, i think


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  1. 00:16:711 (2) and other consequent notes with clap until the start of next spinner - Personally I think it would be better if you use whistle + clap here (instead of only claps) because (1) it'll consistently follow your previous whistle pattern and (2) the whistle would blend in beautifully to the "brushing" sound from the song in my opinion~ I prefer the alternation between whistle and clap, i think it'd be messy using whistle + clap
  2. 00:19:377 (2) - A small suggestion here, perhaps move this to ~x:365 y:384 so that (1)'s start, (2)'s end, and the red (2) would be more equally spaced (and thus highlighting the pattern more)? ok
  3. 00:28:044 (1) - The overlap between the red (2) and the blue (1) here personally feels off for me orz (although to be honest I can't really find a good place to relocate the (1)) ._. - also That's not even noticeable when playing
  4. 00:28:711 (4) - Personally I'd relocate it somewhere higher (~x:485, y:166 for example) so that (4,5,6) would form a great, equally spaced triangle jump here : I prefer it the way it is
  5. 00:34:711 (1,2,3,4,5) - Due to the nature of stacking, I think this part would look much more natural if these five are manually stacked instead of being placed directly in the top of each other (like in the example below) Agree, changing that
  6. 00:40:544 (2,3,4) - I'd push these three downwards a bit (~x: 348 y:295 perhaps) to avoid clustering with your (1) hehe xD Changed a bit
  7. 00:43:378 (4,5) - Consider slightly curving them a bit (like you did on 00:45:878 (3)) for aesthetics? Well, the only reason (3) is curved is because i wanted to sorta blanket it with the previous slider. I usually prefer straight 1/4 sliders
  8. 00:47:044 (2) - This is more of a personal thought, but I think you can make this slider encircling (1)'s start instead as it'll highlight your next 00:47:544 (1,2,3,4,5) more in my opinion : Wanted to highlight the song's repetition by repeating the slider and the down-up movement
  9. 01:05:211 (1) - Add whistle on slider's start? It just feels weird somehow having this part being so silent without hitsound as basically everywhere else other parts are magnificently hitsounded (although I can see what you're trying to do with the hitsounding pattern here)... idk it feels out of place to me
  10. 01:14:043 (1,2,3,4) - A small suggestion here, perhaps consider CTRL + G'ing (2) and (4) to get a circular flow if you want to (: it's not bad but i wasn't aiming for circular flow here
  11. 01:15:711 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Another suggestion here, perhaps try to arrange them in a hexagon-like pattern like this to avoid that abrupt change of angle between (3) -> (4) to (4) -> (5) : Here the height of a circle corrsponds to a note's pitch
  12. 01:19:711 (4) - Add whistle here? I get it that you're trying to put whistle every two circles here however the high-pitched sound here is very much calling for another whistle :3 doesn't sound bad
  13. 01:37:128 (1,2,3,4) - Umm, why not shaping them as a simple upward arc instead of an irregular shape you're currently using? This way it'll capture the ascending piano note much more naturally in my opinion~ agreed, changed

Marmorexx wrote:

walt's Insane ---

00:09:378 (1) - *
00:10:044 (2) - * Those are called extended sliders. You use them when there's a prolongued sound, even if the end isn't snapped to anything
00:15:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A totally vertical stream is pretty hard to hit. To increase the flow you should turn it around its endpoint by maybe 30° CW The spacing is really low, it can't be that hard since it's basically a stack
00:53:044 (3) - This not is really deep, maybe move (3) and (4) up so its a more zig-zaggy motion don't understand this one, could you explain it further?
00:56:044 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe Scale down the Polygons with Ctrl-Shift-S. That results in a much nicer transition between slow and fast cursor movement I think it's fine as it is
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1,1) - This feels like a really nice part, though i cant hit it without losing combo. maybe make the curve a little bit more linear like this https://puu.sh/y4gHy/d728df356d.png (its easier to hit that way without taking away the awesomeness) uhh, i don't think it's that hard to hit, it's already pretty smooth imo

Luel Roseline wrote:

[Insane]
Play count : 2 (None)

00:23:711 - http://youtu.be/KxNTJWTZRu0 There's no reason to put a slider there
00:34:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like this? I prefer the way it is
00:45:044 (5) - NC here Nothing in the song suggests a nc there
00:47:544 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Flow ???

00:57:127 (1) - Unsnapped slider fixed
update
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SaltyLucario
lol i seriously started thinking you're dead
Xinnoh
please never request a mod from me again
thx
Akitoshi

Sinnoh wrote:

please never request a mod from me again
thx
loooool
MaridiuS

Sinnoh wrote:

please never request a mod from me again
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Brutal
Djulus
Understandable
nimfa109
~M4M from your queue

Easy:

00:07:377 (3) - I'm not really fan of this slider
01:08:877 (3) - this slider should be more directed into next slider so I propose to move the last tick to [204,208] or [204,204].
01:24:044 (1) - also should be a little higher
01:26:711 (2) - I think this should be a little higher like [328,108] but I'm not really sure.
01:29:377 (1) - nothing to do but I love this slider xD

Normal:

00:15:377 (4) - feel like this slider should be more curved
00:24:044 (1) - move the second tick of this slider to the middle of slider
00:28:211 (4) - not sure but maybe it would be more cool to move this circle on the slider

Hard:

01:04:044 (1) - move this on slider
01:13:711 (1) - should be curved I think

Insane:

01:09:377 (1) - don't like like this slider looks

I think at the end should be spinner too

Colorful Meadow:

00:05:377 (1,3) - don't like these sliders but maybe that's fetish to curved sliders.
00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this slider could be more pretty, maybe try to curve from 00:15:710 (5) a bit more
00:38:377 (1) - don't like this slider ;_;
00:40:044 (1) - for me it looks better when it is like this:
00:41:711 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g and this looks and sounds much better
00:43:127 (5,6,7,8) - looks a bit weird for me
00:45:794 (2) - move the last tick a bit higher
00:51:711 (5) - I know why this slider is like this and these ticks emphasize the music but generally this looks ugly ;;--;;
00:54:544 (1) - I'm not fan of this slider too
00:57:377 (1) - move this slider a bit in left and upward, something like this
01:37:128 (1,2,3,4) - not sure that you should make square here, also maybe use here a bit smaller spacing
01:40:683 (1) - people usually make the slider quiet gradually, for exaple here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/784164 (02:34:681 (1) - ) or here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948370 (05:01:617 (1,1) - ), but that's not really needed


Hope this will help you at least a bit and your map become ranked soon :D

Gl
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Nimfagryuf wrote:

~M4M from your queue

Easy:

00:07:377 (3) - I'm not really fan of this slider but i'm leave as is
01:08:877 (3) - this slider should be more directed into next slider so I propose to move the last tick to [204,208] or [204,204]. k
01:24:044 (1) - also should be a little higher k
01:26:711 (2) - I think this should be a little higher like [328,108] but I'm not really sure. k
01:29:377 (1) - nothing to do but I love this slider xD thx ♥

Normal:

00:15:377 (4) - feel like this slider should be more curved k
00:24:044 (1) - move the second tick of this slider to the middle of slider ??? no full understand what you mean
00:28:211 (4) - not sure but maybe it would be more cool to move this circle on the slider then it would be weird to look like that 00:27:211 (2,3) overlap, and at 00:28:211 (4,5) stack

Colorful Meadow:

00:05:377 (1,3) - don't like these sliders but maybe that's fetish to curved sliders. maybe
00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this slider could be more pretty, maybe try to curve from 00:15:710 (5) a bit more again, I will answer that I do not want to change here on more curve
00:38:377 (1) - don't like this slider ;_; slightly changed
00:40:044 (1) - for me it looks better when it is like this:
no, i'm not be change this
00:41:711 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g and this looks and sounds much better k
00:43:127 (5,6,7,8) - looks a bit weird for me but i'm still as is, i don't think there's much need changes
00:45:794 (2) - move the last tick a bit higher k
00:51:711 (5) - I know why this slider is like this and these ticks emphasize the music but generally this looks ugly ;;--;; slightly changed
00:54:544 (1) - I'm not fan of this slider too but here i'm leave
00:57:377 (1) - move this slider a bit in left and upward, something like this
k
01:37:128 (1,2,3,4) - not sure that you should make square here, also maybe use here a bit smaller spacing k
01:40:683 (1) - people usually make the slider quiet gradually, for exaple here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/784164 (02:34:681 (1) - ) or here: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948370 (05:01:617 (1,1) - ), but that's not really needed k


Hope this will help you at least a bit and your map become ranked soon :D

Gl thx u ^^
_Crow

Nimfagryuf wrote:

Insane:

01:09:377 (1) - don't like like this slider looks i do

I think at the end should be spinner too i prefer it without a spinner
Yusomi
hii, m4m from my queue (you can mod just 1 diff of my map :) )

Colorful Meadow
00:19:711 (2) - i don't think this should have the same spacing as 00:18:044 (1,2) - since 00:19:711 (2) - has loud cymbals on it and you previously spaced this sound out much more like 00:18:711 (3) - here or 00:09:044 (2) - here.
00:28:211 (4) - i don't think such a strong sound should be on sliderend. maybe just make it a stack like you did here 00:29:877 (4,5) -
00:31:211 (3,5) - space these out a little more
00:31:877 (2) - such a strong sound on sliderend here
00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - by making these all have such similar spacing you don't emphasise anything. 00:32:211 (1,2,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - these sounds should feel stronger in gameplay than the other notes, but currently they do not
00:52:211 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here could be made much tidier
00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - this spacing doesn't really make sense. 00:53:961 (4) - why is this note spaced when the strong sound is on 00:53:877 (3) - .
01:38:322 (5) - the sounds after this really aren't strong enough to be clickable except that last piano note so maybe just make this a long slider finishing on 01:40:475 (1) - and ignore those weird quiet clicking noise

walt's insane
00:30:877 (2,3) - maybe stack these to be consistent with 00:28:211 (2,3) -
00:39:044 (3) - stack under 00:37:878 (2) - ?
00:49:044 (5,6) - looks out of place compared to the rest of the map, suggest just making spacing even here
01:13:210 (7) - maybe make this a 1/4 to emphasise extended sound

hard diff looks good

alright, good luck !
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Yusomi wrote:

hii, m4m from my queue (you can mod just 1 diff of my map :) )

Colorful Meadow
00:19:711 (2) - i don't think this should have the same spacing as 00:18:044 (1,2) - since 00:19:711 (2) - has loud cymbals on it and you previously spaced this sound out much more like 00:18:711 (3) - here or 00:09:044 (2) - here. but I'm not going to particularly change this, because it will be strange to see here the proximity between objects, and at 00:20:711 (5,6) they will have distance like 00:18:044 (1,2)
00:28:211 (4) - i don't think such a strong sound should be on sliderend. maybe just make it a stack like you did here 00:29:877 (4,5) - no, this moment I specifically made others not to do again stack circles
00:31:211 (3,5) - space these out a little more k
00:31:877 (2) - such a strong sound on sliderend here looks okay to me
00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - by making these all have such similar spacing you don't emphasise anything. 00:32:211 (1,2,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - these sounds should feel stronger in gameplay than the other notes, but currently they do not k
00:52:211 (1,2,3,4) - spacing here could be made much tidier k
00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - this spacing doesn't really make sense. 00:53:961 (4) - why is this note spaced when the strong sound is on 00:53:877 (3) - . k, changed
01:38:322 (5) - the sounds after this really aren't strong enough to be clickable except that last piano note so maybe just make this a long slider finishing on 01:40:475 (1) - and ignore those weird quiet clicking noise again... looks like I will not leave this time... well, then OK, i'm will remove it

hard diff looks good

alright, good luck ! thx ^^
Rakphine
Hi from my Modding Queue
M4M

I can't do much here, Nice mapset.
I'm suck at modding,


[Easy]
00:25:711 Useless note, sound bad
00:26:044 I guess it should be a hitcircle
00:29:044 for me it's weird watch this circle between those sliders
00:54:544 this slider is near to leave the screen
00:57:044 hit cirlcle here?

Sorry for mod only 1 diff, it's just i can find any problems with the mapset :( :cry:
if you want, don't give me Kudos
So I shoot a Star
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Lissel wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue
M4M

I can't do much here, Nice mapset. Thx u ^^
I'm suck at modding,


[Easy]
00:25:711 Useless note, sound bad but i'm leave as is
00:26:044 I guess it should be a hitcircle of course it was possible, but I don't particularly like this idea here, it will be almost irrelevant
00:29:044 for me it's weird watch this circle between those sliders then the same can be said about the 00:30:877 (2,3,1), but still OK (although there is a slight overlap of the circle, but still)
00:54:544 this slider is near to leave the screen k
00:57:044 hit cirlcle here? in kiai, I focused only on the loud sounds, but here it is not so loud to put the circle

Sorry for mod only 1 diff, it's just i can find any problems with the mapset :( :cry:
if you want, don't give me Kudos
So I shoot a Star
lit120
[x]
  1. this diff is way too overdone tbh
  2. 00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - what the...? try to look at those spacings again
  3. 01:03:877 (4) - why's this ending up at white tick as it was supposed to be clickable?
  4. 01:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - this looks like you're moving a cursor in a circular way like a circle shape with the same distance there
  5. calm parts on 00:05:377 - 01:24:044 - don't deserve a jump with such spacing and require an easy to play with to follow its feel from it
i don't think you're ready to map wub songs here on extra tbh

[walt]
  1. 00:47:878 (5,1) - it'd be the best thing to separate these 2 to get its emphasize by spacing from (1)
[saltking]
  1. 00:45:378 (1,2,1) - for a triplets here, i'd suggest providing more space there for readable
  2. 01:40:475 (1) - that reverse didn't have a note there. just a slider without it is enough
[n]
  1. NC should work like every 3 to 5 or sth that emphasize would work everytime
  2. 00:08:044 (5) - NC this
  3. 01:07:711 (1,1) - i wouldn't NC these 2 notes tbh
  4. 01:15:377 - a calm part right here doesn't deserve having too much notes around for a diff like this. reducing it with 1/1 sliders would be friendly there
  5. 01:36:525 (1) - i wouldn't add a note here for following a piano note for outro better
[e]
  1. DS' spacing aren't rly consistent tbh, like 0.9x then 0.95x. i'd just use 1x better
  2. 00:47:544 (3,1) - don't try to stick the slider end to (1)'s body for the sake of visual
  3. 00:56:044 - trying to pause this without mapping sth here wouldn't be a good idea tbh
uh, your own diffs need a lot of work there tbh

gl
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

lit120 wrote:

[x]
  1. this diff is way too overdone tbh
  2. 00:53:794 (2,3,4,5) - what the...? try to look at those spacings again hope now be better
  3. 01:03:877 (4) - why's this ending up at white tick as it was supposed to be clickable? changed
  4. 01:05:544 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - this looks like you're moving a cursor in a circular way like a circle shape with the same distance there okay, be changed
  5. calm parts on 00:05:377 - 01:24:044 - don't deserve a jump with such spacing and require an easy to play with to follow its feel from it changed certain distance between objects, but most left as is
i don't think you're ready to map wub songs here on extra tbh

[n]
  1. NC should work like every 3 to 5 or sth that emphasize would work everytime slightly change NCs
  2. 00:08:044 (5) - NC this k
  3. 01:07:711 (1,1) - i wouldn't NC these 2 notes tbh
  4. 01:15:377 - a calm part right here doesn't deserve having too much notes around for a diff like this. reducing it with 1/1 sliders would be friendly there this part was slightly change
  5. 01:36:525 (1) - i wouldn't add a note here for following a piano note for outro better but I'll leave this note here so as not to miss a loud crunching sound
[e]
  1. DS' spacing aren't rly consistent tbh, like 0.9x then 0.95x. i'd just use 1x better but I will leave as is
  2. 00:47:544 (3,1) - don't try to stick the slider end to (1)'s body for the sake of visual slightly fixed
  3. 00:56:044 - trying to pause this without mapping sth here wouldn't be a good idea tbh k, changed
uh, your own diffs need a lot of work there tbh

gl thx ^^
J1_
Heyo, from my mod queue,

Normal:

01:40:475 (4) - NC

SaltKing's Hard:

01:04:045 (1,2) - This part can be confusing, as people can think that this is a half beat gap instead of a full beat gap. I suggest either increasing the spacing or stack the two.

Colorful Meadow:

00:42:711 (4) - NC

00:54:044 (4,5) - Don't think spacing here needs to be this large, the song doesn't have much of a variation

01:14:044 (3) - Make this 1/4 beat

General:

Cool song~! Idk if you still accept GDs, but I would love to map an extra difficulty for this song (pm me on forums to reply)

Anyways, GL!
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

xJ1 wrote:

Heyo, from my mod queue,

Normal:

01:40:475 (4) - NC oops

Colorful Meadow:

00:42:711 (4) - NC k

00:54:044 (4,5) - Don't think spacing here needs to be this large, the song doesn't have much of a variation but i'm probably leave as is, now not see big problem in this spacing

01:14:044 (3) - Make this 1/4 beat oops

General:

Cool song~! Idk if you still accept GDs, but I would love to map an extra difficulty for this song (pm me on forums to reply) sry, it's full mapset :(

Anyways, GL! thx ^^
6th
Hi.

[Colorful Meadow]
00:07:377 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - You used symmetry at the beginning so symmetry is expected here too.
00:10:711 (1) - Its end could look smoother.
00:13:711 (1,2,3) - They are overspaced if you compare them to 00:14:044 (3,1,2) - which feels like a speed decrease for no real reason.
00:24:711 (2,3,1) - This uses 1/1 and 1/2 but spacing is visually the same.
00:35:211 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9658503 This rhythm is a bit more intuitive since it makes white tick clickable.
00:38:711 (2,3,4) - It's strange that they don't flow like the others since they belong to the same combo.
00:40:044 (1,2) - Decreasing SV to use such a high spacing is pointless and confuses the player.
00:56:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is so high here considering how calm the song is, please reduce it.
01:00:377 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What happened to the concept ? Use consistent spacing like before.
01:31:071 - Maybe make their ends silent.
01:38:322 (4) - Why does spacing increase here ?

[Insane]
00:30:877 (2,3,4,5) - Use doublets instead, so it fits your drive to stack claps like you did at the beginning.
00:33:544 (2,3,4,5) - Looks like spacing is inconsistent here for no real reason.
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1) - You may want to avoid this in an Insane difficulty. (at least remove NC spam btw)
01:31:071 (1,2,3) - Considering how you mapped that section, circles would fit the song way better tbh.

[Hard]
00:37:378 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The diff spikes a lot here. This pattern is much harder than the rest for 3,5* players.
00:05:378 (1,2,3) - 00:08:712 (1,2,1) - 00:12:045 (3) - these are not stacked so why would 00:14:045 (2,3) - be stacked ?
01:04:378 (2) - a NC would help reading and would make sense since you NC'ed 01:05:545 (1) -
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

6th wrote:

Hi.

[Colorful Meadow]
00:07:377 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - You used symmetry at the beginning so symmetry is expected here too. slightly changed
00:10:711 (1) - Its end could look smoother. i think it's ok
00:13:711 (1,2,3) - They are overspaced if you compare them to 00:14:044 (3,1,2) - which feels like a speed decrease for no real reason. hope now be better
00:24:711 (2,3,1) - This uses 1/1 and 1/2 but spacing is visually the same. fixed
00:35:211 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9658503 This rhythm is a bit more intuitive since it makes white tick clickable. hm... k
00:38:711 (2,3,4) - It's strange that they don't flow like the others since they belong to the same combo. the first two slider were specially made from a different species, so they were not like the other 4-9
00:40:044 (1,2) - Decreasing SV to use such a high spacing is pointless and confuses the player. changed little SV and I made it clear to the player that the sliders on the sound such moments will reduce your speed than to be as quick
00:56:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is so high here considering how calm the song is, please reduce it. slightly changed
01:00:377 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - What happened to the concept ? Use consistent spacing like before. changed
01:31:071 - Maybe make their ends silent. but here 5% sound, dk how can make lower...
01:38:322 (4) - Why does spacing increase here ? I wanted to somehow highlight the end of the last piano key pressed and the poet made a slightly different distance than the last 3 circles
_Crow

Yusomi wrote:

00:30:877 (2,3) - maybe stack these to be consistent with 00:28:211 (2,3) - I only stacked those with 2 consecutive claps, there are 4 here
00:39:044 (3) - stack under 00:37:878 (2) - ? ok
00:49:044 (5,6) - looks out of place compared to the rest of the map, suggest just making spacing even here That's the point. It emphasizes the slider head since you can kinda feel a stop in the music with 5 and 6
01:13:210 (7) - maybe make this a 1/4 to emphasise extended sound idk if it's a good idea because it's right before the stream, it may loook a bit messy

lit120 wrote:

[walt]
  1. 00:47:878 (5,1) - it'd be the best thing to separate these 2 to get its emphasize by spacing from (1) it's still emphasized if i leave it as it is

6th wrote:

[Insane]
00:30:877 (2,3,4,5) - Use doublets instead, so it fits your drive to stack claps like you did at the beginning. explained above
00:33:544 (2,3,4,5) - Looks like spacing is inconsistent here for no real reason. fixed
00:57:044 (1,1,1,1) - You may want to avoid this in an Insane difficulty. (at least remove NC spam btw) nothing wrong with it
01:31:071 (1,2,3) - Considering how you mapped that section, circles would fit the song way better tbh. it's to avoid unnecessary 100s because of the timing change
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josh1024
m4m plz
Box.
Colorful Meadow
  1. 00:25:211 (1) not predictable? I'd add note 00:25:211 and start slider 00:25:377
  2. 00:26:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing emphasis could be clearer
  3. 00:27:211 (4,5) and 00:28:211 (4) and 00:33:044 (1,2) consistency?
  4. 00:30:377 (1,2,3) smaller to constrast 00:30:877 (1,2,3)
  5. 00:31:711 (1,2) I'd rather copy 1 to replace 2 and have a circle 00:32:044 here. feel safer if there's something to click on.
  6. 00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5) too symmetical for the music?
  7. 00:34:211 (5) oops?
  8. 00:34:794 (2) unreadable?(or, uh, I suck) suggestion(timeline) (cursor at 00:34:877 - )
  9. 00:37:377 (3) nc?
  10. 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) I see that 8 9 are different but yeah I'd appreciate more movement oriented stuff
    suggestion (at 00:38:794 - ) ignore the skin lol and this (at 00:39:544 - ) something like these.
  11. 00:48:377 - 00:48:877 I'd have a crooked slider for this
  12. 00:56:044 could have less intensity here and more 00:57:377 (1,2,3) here
  13. 00:58:711 (4) nc?
  14. 01:03:544 (2,3,4) map differently
  15. 01:05:544 unintuitive spacing?
  16. 01:10:711 (1) slience the end
  17. 01:15:377 a bit random?
  18. 01:32:765 having circles from here on feels unnecessary but it's up to u
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

josh1024 wrote:

m4m plz
Box.
Colorful Meadow
  1. 00:25:211 (1) not predictable? I'd add note 00:25:211 and start slider 00:25:377 i think it's okay
  2. 00:26:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) spacing emphasis could be clearer k
  3. 00:27:211 (4,5) and 00:28:211 (4) and 00:33:044 (1,2) consistency? there was added the difference between similar sounds that all 3 times were not just circles
  4. 00:30:377 (1,2,3) smaller to constrast 00:30:877 (1,2,3) all because the last 1,2,3 are clapping, than in the first, so it made
  5. 00:31:711 (1,2) I'd rather copy 1 to replace 2 and have a circle 00:32:044 here. feel safer if there's something to click on. no, i'm not like this idea
  6. 00:32:211 (1,2,3,4,5) too symmetical for the music? hm... a bit change i think it's okay
  7. 00:34:211 (5) oops? why? o.o
  8. 00:34:794 (2) unreadable?(or, uh, I suck) suggestion(timeline) (cursor at 00:34:877 - ) it's okay, srsly
  9. 00:37:377 (3) nc? nope
  10. 00:38:711 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) I see that 8 9 are different but yeah I'd appreciate more movement oriented stuff cause o
    suggestion (at 00:38:794 - ) ignore the skin lol and this (at 00:39:544 - ) something like these. if we imagine a situation that I'm do this, it will be too Chaos for the map, isn't it? looking at the following sliders in kiai I have to do the same spacing for them, but it will be very bad for the card when I don't want to do too much spacing(and i think it's okay)
  11. 00:48:377 - 00:48:877 I'd have a crooked slider for this it's a bad idea
  12. 00:56:044 could have less intensity here and more 00:57:377 (1,2,3) here changed
  13. 00:58:711 (4) nc? no
  14. 01:03:544 (2,3,4) map differently k
  15. 01:05:544 unintuitive spacing? *surprise for players*
  16. 01:10:711 (1) slience the end here nothing haves o.o
  17. 01:15:377 a bit random? probably, but i'm not sure in this
  18. 01:32:765 having circles from here on feels unnecessary but it's up to u The circles were added to the time when there is a piano sound
Ty ^~^
hi-mei
дружище, хватит мучать карту и моддеров

в одной только ласт дифе почти нет структуры (01:13:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ), нет контроля звука (00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ), местами ритм совсем необоснован (00:25:211 (1,2) - )

забей и делай некст карту, иначе долго будешь прогрессировать (это я по себе знаю)
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

hi-mei wrote:

дружище, хватит мучать карту и моддеров

в одной только ласт дифе почти нет структуры (01:13:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ), нет контроля звука (00:15:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ), местами ритм совсем необоснован (00:25:211 (1,2) - )

забей и делай некст карту, иначе долго будешь прогрессировать (это я по себе знаю)
Сам уже начал это осознавать, что похоже придётся забросить карту ( или забросить моддинг 5*+ сложностей, пока не научусь их делать ( хотя врятли это "обучение" произойдёт... ) )
Но всем людям спасибо за их поддержку и пока есть хоть немного надежды, я пока не прекращу её забывать, а вот когда её уже не станет (имею в виду надежду), то будет обидно конечно за столько времени стараний
Но за мод спасибо, хоть и обидно, что уже бесполезно её как-то ранкать, т.к. БН тупо будут игнорить повтор или эту карту :(

*Возможно это последний kudosu на этой карте...*
Djulus
Привет хотел мнение сказать о мапе, ремапай мапу или бросай ее( ее реально сложно мапать ) скорее всего рекоммендую бросить мапу имхо, мапай другие треки( по крайней мере легкие сонги тв сайзики там), и не стоит всем бнам так просто сказать им "дай мне шанс" и.т.д таким образом себя мемишь, но все равно ты храбрый, старайся лучше мапать, ты классный!
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

Djulus wrote:

Привет хотел мнение сказать о мапе, ремапай мапу или бросай ее (ее реально сложно мапать ) скорее всего рекоммендую бросить мапу имхо, мапай другие треки( по крайней мере легкие сонги тв сайзики там), и не стоит всем бнам так просто сказать им "дай мне шанс" и.т.д таким образом себя мемишь, но все равно ты храбрый, старайся лучше мапать, ты классный!
спасибо за слова в конце :)
realy0_
Nice song 👌 shooting 7 kudos
Topic Starter
CucumberCuc

realy0_ wrote:

Nice song 👌 shooting 7 kudos
u can don't do this, but ty :)
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