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-General-
las reglas dicen que el nombre del album debe ir en las tags, no en source, asi que mueva el "Cataclasm" a las tags

-Kantan-
00:41:792 (13) - pongale finisher pa enfatizar el vientecito igual
01:04:400 (36) - borre pa la consistencia, el kantan creo que es el que mas consistencia necesita creo
01:37:444 (72) - un finisher no vendria mal o si?
01:56:574 (91) - borrela, muy variado imo
02:33:096 (135) - ^
03:27:118 (1,2) - cacho que estas van a ser dificiles de darle pa los principiantes
03:41:031 (1,2,3,4) - ^

-Futsuu-
00:41:792 (21) - finisher? pal vientecito
03:16:574 (53) - finisher?
03:27:118 (1,2) - penultima sugestion del kantan, añado que son mejor pal muzu+
03:41:031 (1,2,3,4) - ^

-Muzukashii-
00:41:792 (39) - finisher pal viento

2017-05-01 10:19 Vulkin: podrias poner por ej 01:28:968 - un kkdkd
2017-05-01 10:20 Ulqui: pero no se ve bien
2017-05-01 10:20 Ulqui: xd
2017-05-01 10:20 Ulqui: 01:29:512 - sirve si le pongo un d ahí?
2017-05-01 10:21 Vulkin: ahi no seguiria nada
2017-05-01 10:21 Ulqui: de hecho antes de el k escucho como un vientecito kjskdjksads
2017-05-01 10:21 Vulkin: o lol
2017-05-01 10:22 Ulqui: como un whoooos clap
2017-05-01 10:22 Vulkin: mejor pon un d en 01:32:990 - porque ahi pones variacion al patron anterior
2017-05-01 10:23 Ulqui: pero es precisamente ahí donde no se escucha un vientecito uwu
2017-05-01 10:23 Vulkin: el vientecito no es tan notorio por mi por lo menos
2017-05-01 10:23 Ulqui: eso es cierto
2017-05-01 10:24 Ulqui: pero por algo el vientecito está ahí y en ningún otro lugar más(?
2017-05-01 10:25 Ulqui: 01:32:121 - sirve un d ahí? xd
2017-05-01 10:25 Vulkin: creo que si
2017-05-01 10:26 Vulkin: sip
2017-05-01 10:26 Ulqui: 01:32:338 - o tal vez ahí
2017-05-01 10:27 Vulkin: eh mejor
2017-05-01 10:27 Vulkin: 01:35:490 (57) - este estaria mejor como d imo tambien
2017-05-01 10:28 Ulqui: si
2017-05-01 10:28 Ulqui: y en la siguiente mitad tengo que seguir variando?
2017-05-01 10:28 Ulqui: ;-;
2017-05-01 10:29 Vulkin: eh si, pero no te pases tanto
2017-05-01 10:29 Vulkin: porque igual tiene que tener algo de consistencia
2017-05-01 10:29 Ulqui: ia
2017-05-01 10:30 Ulqui: 01:42:990 - le chanté un k uwu
2017-05-01 10:31 Ulqui: mentira
2017-05-01 10:31 Ulqui: 01:42:773 - creo que era ahí
2017-05-01 10:31 Ulqui: kjasdjkads
2017-05-01 10:32 Ulqui: 01:48:425 - y ahí le meti un d, pero queda mas feo que la chucha en mi opinión
2017-05-01 10:33 Vulkin: 01:42:773 - aca seria mejor un d que k
2017-05-01 10:33 Ulqui: sisi
2017-05-01 10:33 Ulqui: si era d la wea
2017-05-01 10:33 Ulqui: es que me confunfí de nota
2017-05-01 10:33 Ulqui: uwu
2017-05-01 10:33 Vulkin: xd
2017-05-01 10:34 Vulkin: 01:48:425 - y aca yo creo que esta ok
2017-05-01 10:35 Ulqui: 02:21:686 - d porque soy choro
2017-05-01 10:36 Vulkin: perfect
2017-05-01 10:36 Vulkin: 02:26:468 - y aca?
2017-05-01 10:37 Vulkin: mejor mover 02:26:903 (36) - a 02:26:468 -
2017-05-01 10:37 Ulqui: y dejarlo kddkd?
2017-05-01 10:37 Vulkin: sep
2017-05-01 10:38 Ulqui: ya
2017-05-01 10:38 Ulqui: queda hermoso
2017-05-01 10:38 Vulkin: 02:30:599 (58) - y mover este a 02:30:168 - ?
2017-05-01 10:38 Vulkin: y hacerlo d ofc
2017-05-01 10:38 Vulkin: oara dkddd
2017-05-01 10:39 Ulqui: no veo porque no
2017-05-01 10:39 Ulqui: ia
2017-05-01 10:40 Ulqui: 02:27:990 - me gustaría ponerle d :C
2017-05-01 10:40 Vulkin: suena raro para mi
2017-05-01 10:41 Ulqui: 02:28:425 - al final sale mejor poner una nota ahí
2017-05-01 10:41 Ulqui: asi q mejor no xd
2017-05-01 10:42 Vulkin: xd
2017-05-01 10:42 Ulqui: 02:36:034 - pondré un d ahí xd
2017-05-01 10:42 Ulqui: 02:36:251 - y otro ahí xd
2017-05-01 10:43 Vulkin: suena igual bien
2017-05-01 10:44 Ulqui: 02:39:729 - que opinas de un d en esa wea?
2017-05-01 10:45 Vulkin: perfecto de hecho
2017-05-01 10:45 Ulqui: uwu
2017-05-01 10:46 Ulqui: 02:41:034 - le pondré un k
2017-05-01 10:46 Ulqui: aun k no c
2017-05-01 10:48 Vulkin: nah
2017-05-01 10:48 Vulkin: ese si suena raro
2017-05-01 10:48 Ulqui: no hace falta
2017-05-01 10:48 Ulqui: oko
2017-05-01 10:48 Ulqui: jaskds


suerte en el mappu ;)
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^applied all uwu
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Hola Ulqui :3 ahora si, perdona la tardanza ewe <3

º Revisa el Ai Mod, parece que no tienes el kiai ajustado, de todas manera revisa en las demás diffs por si dice lo mismo.
º También hay unas diffs donde el punto de visualización previa está haciendo conflicto.


Kantan



º Pienso que debería ser HP 8 o 9 y el OD en 2 (aunque en 3 no está mal tampoco)

Te odio, tu Kantan está perfecto.(?)

Futsuu



º HP 8

  1. Quizá podrías colocar azules aca: 01:11:574 - 01:18:531 - No vendrían mal ya que hay suficiente espacio y tiempo para darles. Si lo aplicas lo colocas en partes similares.
  2. 02:25:705 (16) - 02:39:618 (17) - Rojos para que no sea tan repetitivo el patrón.

Muzukashii



º HP 6 o 7

  1. No coloques tantos triplets juntos, se que son unicolor pero a los muzukashii players les confunde de todas maneras, ya que empiezan a adaptarse a los triplets, borra: 02:52:118 (16) - Corre también esta nota: 02:53:205 (22) - Para aca: 02:53:422 - Y elimina esta: 02:53:857 (26) - Hacer lo mismo en las partes similares (si lo aplicas)
  2. 02:59:509 (52) - Elimina y lo repites en partes similares si lo aplicas.

Oni

  1. 00:47:447 (21) - Podría ser azul para variar (si aplicas, repite)
  2. 02:33:316 (78,79) - ctrl + g
  3. Intenta a ver si te gusta esto: Mueve esta nota: 02:48:208 (9) - Para aca: 02:48:425 - y que ese patron de 3 sea kkd
  4. 03:02:229 - Lo mismo ^ si lo aplicas

Buena suerte Ulqui :3
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JessiChan wrote:

Hola Ulqui :3 ahora si, perdona la tardanza ewe <3

º Revisa el Ai Mod, parece que no tienes el kiai ajustado, de todas manera revisa en las demás diffs por si dice lo mismo.
º También hay unas diffs donde el punto de visualización previa está haciendo conflicto.


Kantan



º Pienso que debería ser HP 8 o 9 y el OD en 2 (aunque en 3 no está mal tampoco) oko

Te odio, tu Kantan está perfecto.(?) uwuwuwuwuwuwuwu

Futsuu



º HP 8 7 >.>

  1. Quizá podrías colocar azules aca: 01:11:574 - 01:18:531 - No vendrían mal ya que hay suficiente espacio y tiempo para darles. Si lo aplicas lo colocas en partes similares. okokokokokokok
  2. 02:25:705 (16) - 02:39:618 (17) - Rojos para que no sea tan repetitivo el patrón. ño uwu

Muzukashii



º HP 6 o 7 six owo

  1. No coloques tantos triplets juntos, se que son unicolor pero a los muzukashii players les confunde de todas maneras, ya que empiezan a adaptarse a los triplets, borra: 02:52:118 (16) - Corre también esta nota: 02:53:205 (22) - Para aca: 02:53:422 - Y elimina esta: 02:53:857 (26) - Hacer lo mismo en las partes similares (si lo aplicas) algo haré
  2. 02:59:509 (52) - Elimina y lo repites en partes similares si lo aplicas. creo que no aplicaré ninguna, a pesar de que puede ser dificil para los players de muzu, no es mi idea que les sea fácil, prefiero que sea lo más fiel posible a la música para que sea enjoyable(?

Oni

  1. 00:47:447 (21) - Podría ser azul para variar (si aplicas, repite) okokokokokok
  2. 02:33:316 (78,79) - ctrl + g SIIIIIIIIIIIIII
  3. Intenta a ver si te gusta esto: Mueve esta nota: 02:48:208 (9) - Para aca: 02:48:425 - y que ese patron de 3 sea kkd
  4. 03:02:229 - Lo mismo ^ si lo aplicas okay, me parece fluido al jugarlo.

Buena suerte Ulqui :3 graxx por el mod uwu
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Mod per queue.

[Generals & Settings]

Source: Should not be Cataclasm, since it neither from a game, nor a series, as the game suggest. Additionally its not a Music Label as some people like to put into the Source (Yes KwaN, im looking at you with C.H.S xD)
Regardless it should not be listed as a source because of that, and should only be listed in the tags.

OD: OD 2 for Kantan is a bit too small, even at this BPM, put it at OD3 instead.

Change OD in Muzukashii to 4.5 to make a smoother transfer to the Oni?

Everything else is fine.

[Kantan]

Looks solid, Heres a few suggestions concerning rhythm choice!

02:03:099 (99) - while your map follows a really nice and crisp structure of using dk ; ddk or d k to emphasize the claps, this kkd is odd and sticks out in a bad way. I suggest you remove this.
02:43:099 (147) - The same applies to this.

One relatively major suggestion that would make this Kantan just perfect tho:

The 1st Kiai is easier than the 2nd Kiai.
The 1st Pre-Kiai is equally hard to the 2nd Pre-Kiai

So my suggestion is you nerf the 1st Pre-Kiai a bit to give the map a magnificent difficulty slope.
I'd Especially like 01:09:621 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - this section to be nerfed just a bit that its noticeable from the 2nd Pre-Kiai.

Other than that, i love this Kantan.
Its quite short in combo length, and uses quite a bit of 1/2. Also has some 3/1 spaces.

[Futsuu]

Really good Futsuu, Tho only 1 thing really bothers me.

01:11:577 (64,65) - these kd really sound off. The map expects a k to be put every 4 beats, and these k's really sound off with them lying offbeat.
My suggestion is to color these k's to d to give the sections you wanted to buff still a bit more density.

I really like the clap oriented mapping so far!
This futsuu is not that dense of 1/2 as expected. Uses medium combo length together with some unusual spacing.

[Muzukashii]

This time around you used more k than just the claps. Nice

00:53:751 (74) - color this d, since the clicking snare sound is only really emphasizeable on 00:53:534 - since the pitch is higher. Else it sounds kind of odd imo.

02:48:751 - to 03:16:577 - is unecessarily dense, being much more dense and having much more 1/4 than the spread or the intensity of other parts of the song would make sensible to use.
Especially these parts are too hard:
02:51:360 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - being a very long 1/2 combo, please cut where you please.
03:05:273 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - too long in 1/2 and too much 1/4, please nerf how you please.
03:15:925 (127,128,129) - ddk wtf, that is usually used in very hard muzukashiis. yes this is a very hard muzukashii, but according to spread (more explained better in last section) it should be much easier than it is now. Please nerf this ddk for now.
03:07:012 (84,85,86) - the same goes for this, being an even more complicated pattern than ddk, it causes even more problems....

In general please nerf this part overall, what ive listed is only the worst parts.

[Oni]
This time around you focused more onto the background drums, okay
I can not really agree with some of the patterns, but i see what they represent and are therefore okay!
Heres some other suggestions.

01:15:490 (55) - remove to keep a bit more consistent with pattern like 01:11:577 (44,45,46) -

01:07:664 (36) - this k sounds really weird with the other sounds in the music, since it lies on an offbeat, when there is nothing that supports it. 01:11:577
(44,45) - this is okay tho since the tingle noises support the k in the latter part of the section.

02:10:925 (22) - color this k because the tingle noise shouldnt be emphasized by 2 k's here.

02:11:795 (25) - same goes for this, theres no appearant sound for this note, and the pattern should be dkd for the tingle sound.

01:48:425 (54) - remove this note? Its an odd pattern and doesnt fit with the dkd placement, and removing the note makes the structure here a bit more appearant.

I dont really like the second kiai at all. It doesnt fit with what the music provides and is too strong in hitsounding, which sounds very forced, especially the double kats in 1/4 and the offbeat single kats.

This diff is kinda meh in contrast to the other ones, im not very fond of it to be honest

In total that makes this oni a pretty hardish one with some longer patterns (5lets+) and long combos.

[Spread]

Heres a visual representation of the Spread (where 3 >'s is optimal distance)
Kantan>>>Futsuu>>>>>Muzukashii>>>Oni

My suggestion is to nerf muzu and oni a bit in terms of pattern length/density and complexity. Combo Length is okay for now.
Please do this additionally to my other suggestions or while keeping them in mind.



I hope you take this somewhat seriously and fix up the upper diffs.
Good luck!
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Nepuri wrote:

Mod per queue.

[Generals & Settings]

Source: Should not be Cataclasm, since it neither from a game, nor a series, as the game suggest. Additionally its not a Music Label as some people like to put into the Source (Yes KwaN, im looking at you with C.H.S xD)
Regardless it should not be listed as a source because of that, and should only be listed in the tags. uwu

OD: OD 2 for Kantan is a bit too small, even at this BPM, put it at OD3 instead. ok you're right

Change OD in Muzukashii to 4.5 to make a smoother transfer to the Oni? no problem.

Everything else is fine.

[Kantan]

Looks solid, Heres a few suggestions concerning rhythm choice!

02:03:099 (99) - while your map follows a really nice and crisp structure of using dk ; ddk or d k to emphasize the claps, this kkd is odd and sticks out in a bad way. I suggest you remove this. removed!
02:43:099 (147) - The same applies to this. okay

One relatively major suggestion that would make this Kantan just perfect tho:

The 1st Kiai is easier than the 2nd Kiai.
The 1st Pre-Kiai is equally hard to the 2nd Pre-Kiai

So my suggestion is you nerf the 1st Pre-Kiai a bit to give the map a magnificent difficulty slope.
I'd Especially like 01:09:621 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - this section to be nerfed just a bit that its noticeable from the 2nd Pre-Kiai. oh, nerfed.

Other than that, i love this Kantan.
Its quite short in combo length, and uses quite a bit of 1/2. Also has some 3/1 spaces. thank you

[Futsuu]

Really good Futsuu, Tho only 1 thing really bothers me.

01:11:577 (64,65) - these kd really sound off. The map expects a k to be put every 4 beats, and these k's really sound off with them lying offbeat.
My suggestion is to color these k's to d to give the sections you wanted to buff still a bit more density. changed!!!!

I really like the clap oriented mapping so far!
This futsuu is not that dense of 1/2 as expected. Uses medium combo length together with some unusual spacing.

[Muzukashii]

This time around you used more k than just the claps. Nice

00:53:751 (74) - color this d, since the clicking snare sound is only really emphasizeable on 00:53:534 - since the pitch is higher. Else it sounds kind of odd imo. that's right, changed

02:48:751 - to 03:16:577 - is unecessarily dense, being much more dense and having much more 1/4 than the spread or the intensity of other parts of the song would make sensible to use.
Especially these parts are too hard:
02:51:360 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - being a very long 1/2 combo, please cut where you please.
03:05:273 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - too long in 1/2 and too much 1/4, please nerf how you please.
03:15:925 (127,128,129) - ddk wtf, that is usually used in very hard muzukashiis. yes this is a very hard muzukashii, but according to spread (more explained better in last section) it should be much easier than it is now. Please nerf this ddk for now.
03:07:012 (84,85,86) - the same goes for this, being an even more complicated pattern than ddk, it causes even more problems....

In general please nerf this part overall, what ive listed is only the worst parts. NERFED

[Oni]
This time around you focused more onto the background drums, okay
I can not really agree with some of the patterns, but i see what they represent and are therefore okay!
Heres some other suggestions.

01:15:490 (55) - remove to keep a bit more consistent with pattern like 01:11:577 (44,45,46) -
c:
01:07:664 (36) - this k sounds really weird with the other sounds in the music, since it lies on an offbeat, when there is nothing that supports it. 01:11:577
(44,45) - this is okay tho since the tingle noises support the k in the latter part of the section. fixed

02:10:925 (22) - color this k because the tingle noise shouldnt be emphasized by 2 k's here. you're right

02:11:795 (25) - same goes for this, theres no appearant sound for this note, and the pattern should be dkd for the tingle sound. applied

01:48:425 (54) - remove this note? Its an odd pattern and doesnt fit with the dkd placement, and removing the note makes the structure here a bit more appearant. good point

I dont really like the second kiai at all. It doesnt fit with what the music provides and is too strong in hitsounding, which sounds very forced, especially the double kats in 1/4 and the offbeat single kats.

This diff is kinda meh in contrast to the other ones, im not very fond of it to be honest

In total that makes this oni a pretty hardish one with some longer patterns (5lets+) and long combos.

[Spread]

Heres a visual representation of the Spread (where 3 >'s is optimal distance)
Kantan>>>Futsuu>>>>>Muzukashii>>>Oni

My suggestion is to nerf muzu and oni a bit in terms of pattern length/density and complexity. Combo Length is okay for now.
Please do this additionally to my other suggestions or while keeping them in mind.



I hope you take this somewhat seriously and fix up the upper diffs.
Good luck! Really good mod, Thank you!
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