Hi~
I think song a little boring, so you should try to correct it. If you create interesting beatmap, your song will be more exellent
Your map needs lots of corrections, so I can't tell you all mistakes
The first thing is colours. Add another colours, i think these colours should be good, but think about it
The second thing, you should do, is delete first two timing points. Map don't need it)
Open ai mod and try to correct all warnings)
Try to arrange circles and sliders more beautifully and more logically. You can make a few jumps (if don't know this word, look in osu wiki), because this is normal, but do not get carried away.
Listen music more carrefully.
NormalIt's too easy for normal, so try too make it more complicated.
Sliders should not be so strange, but i think in this song you need to complicated sliders. So try to do it more beautiful. For this do it make them symmetrical. For example,
When begin kiai, you can use yellow and red colours, but if it's not kiai only blue and purple.
When kiai, song more loud, so i think you should use not soft, but normal sounds. And 30% of volume. In this sond clap sound is very bad. You can try to add your own sounds. For example, sound of bells.
Don't use in this diff strange short sliders.
00:24:544 - delete slider, but 00:24:897 (4) - add circle ( to emphasize the sound);
00:25:603 (1) - do sound on 20%, 00:31:250 (1) - 59% and here do the end of this slider: finish and whistle. Delete in this interval all another sounds;
00:35:662 - delete circle, 00:36:721 - also;
00:37:427 (2) - add circle;
00:38:309 (4) - do reversible slider, 00:39:015 (5) - end of this slider;
00:39:015 (5), 00:41:838 (5), 00:44:662 (5), 00:44:662 (5) - before the yellow reduce these;
00:43:250 (3) - do reversible slider;
00:44:133 (4) - short slider;
00:46:780 (1) - here you can change colour on blue;
00:51:015 (1,2,1,2,1) - correct it (more beautiful);
01:10:780 (1,1,1,1) - delete these all!
01:34:956 (2) -
01:37:780 (3) - add circle;
01:38:309 (5) - add slider and delete circle, end in the next yellow;
01:38:838 (6) - add circle;
01:40:603 (3) -
Ok. I thing, then you should continue by yourself. Because if i continue, i will create this song
High FidelityWhy begin is the same???
01:40:603 (2) - move it more closer to previos one, so that rhyphm can be understandably;
02:00:897 (3) - slider, 02:01:250 - end of slider;
02:00:721 (2,3) - this copy in 02:03:544 - , 02:06:368 - ;
02:09:191 (2,3,4,5) - here 4 circle;
02:17:838 (3) - make it more beautiful;
02:33:015 (1) - devide in many sliders and the next too;
dekete spibbers and do circles
01:07:956 (1) - end this first part, there are not need sliders;
00:27:721 (1) - add circle, 00:28:427 (2) - add circle;
And the same here 00:28:427 (2)
This diff is more more more excellent than 'normal'!
If you don't agree with my remarks, it's ok
So reply me, please)
This song is not usual for osu, so it will be difficult to rank it... But i think, if you will work hard you will do it!