M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri) [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-07-09T22:54:31+00:00

Spectator wrote:
someday

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-07-11T10:58:40+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Spectator wrote:
someday

itsu no hi ka

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-07-22T04:02:30+00:00

[General]

A modding assistant detected that the file Border Mask.png isn't used at all on the storyboard. Either consider deleting it or just ignore this if you're gonna use it later on
Epilepsy warning is not activated in Salad, Platter, Rain and Alice. Consider activating it due to the storyboard's moderately quick strobing at the kiai section.

[Ascendance's Salad]

Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP.
01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk
01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit.
01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it.
01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well.
01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there.
01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here.
01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :>

[Platter]

00:09:384 (6,7,8) - Move these to x:107 to make the curve smoother
01:00:009 (1) - I think this slider is lacking of proper emphasis. Modify 00:59:259 (6) - the curve of this slider and move 01:00:009 (1) - this one a bunch more to the left so that an hyperdash is triggered between the two and that should do.
01:23:259 (1,2,1) - According to the rules of the ranking criteria, "Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other.", so... 3 hyperdashes in a row seems kinda too much? Even though the sounds they're placed at are reasonably strong, consider nerfing these for the sake of meeting the rules :>
01:39:571 (3,4,1) - Same as before here.
01:54:009 (6) - Maybe move to x:203 to make it more of a progressively increasing distance curve?
02:20:821 (4) - Move this note so that the distance from the previous one is 0,40x, then move 02:20:446 (2,3,4) - all these to x:152? Makes the curve less edgy/sharp and flows better to me.
02:22:134 (1) - I think starting this spinner from 02:21:946 - here instead can still fit nicely, since this is a platter and having 1/2 of a beat of spacing between an object and a spinner is ok.

[Sinnoh's Rain]

00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c:
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient.
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now.

[Overdose]

00:04:884 (3) - Move this note to x:43 instead? Feels less sharp of a curve to me.
02:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are not snapped correctly, please resnap.
01:09:009 (1,2) - The lack of movement between these objects feels a bit awkward. I've been testing around some stuff and I think that by ctrl+h'ing them and then moving them to x:322 solves the issue rather neatly.
01:26:634 (3) - Tilt this slider a bit more vertically for better flow, like this: http://puu.sh/wSh9V/ec2e72d08c.jpg
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Move the whole to x:273 or so, right now the first slider is easily overdashable and has been causing me unnecessary shitmisses :>
02:16:321 - Maybe place a note here as well? at x:106 fits nicely to me.

[Alice]

00:17:013 (1) - I'm pretty sure I can hear 4 piano notes here, so I'd recommend to change this repeat to 1/12 instead of 1/4.
00:42:946 (3) - I suggest to move this note to x:208 so that the curve isn't that edgy/sharp.
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uh... I think these notes are too much time over the left side of the playfield? Try to spread them a bit more to the right side as well to cover all places equally (or at least so that I don't get my OCD triggered, whichever comes first )
01:03:759 (3) - Move to x:96 for better emphasis to the cymbal sound? Also for consistency with hyperdashes.
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Me thinks these look all similar to the way you've mapped them in the overdose difficulty (assuming this diff was just intended to be a carbon copy of the overdose diff but with harder patterns on the kiai, it's only natural, but still). Consider rearranging them in different positions so that they're not so reminiscent of the previous diff?

That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-07-26T10:44:35+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
[General]
A modding assistant detected that the file Border Mask.png isn't used at all on the storyboard. Either consider deleting it or just ignore this if you're gonna use it later on
Epilepsy warning is not activated in Salad, Platter, Rain and Alice. Consider activating it due to the storyboard's moderately quick strobing at the kiai section.

[Ascendance's Salad]
Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP.
01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk
01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit.
01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it.
01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well.
01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there.
01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here.
01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :>

[Platter]
00:09:384 (6,7,8) - Move these to x:107 to make the curve smoother
01:00:009 (1) - I think this slider is lacking of proper emphasis. Modify 00:59:259 (6) - the curve of this slider and move 01:00:009 (1) - this one a bunch more to the left so that an hyperdash is triggered between the two and that should do. rearranged a pattern a bit to emphasize it more as I personally prefer how the current slider works
01:23:259 (1,2,1) - According to the rules of the ranking criteria, "Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other.", so... 3 hyperdashes in a row seems kinda too much? Even though the sounds they're placed at are reasonably strong, consider nerfing these for the sake of meeting the rules :>
01:39:571 (3,4,1) - Same as before here.
01:54:009 (6) - Maybe move to x:203 to make it more of a progressively increasing distance curve?
02:20:821 (4) - Move this note so that the distance from the previous one is 0,40x, then move 02:20:446 (2,3,4) - all these to x:152? Makes the curve less edgy/sharp and flows better to me.
02:22:134 (1) - I think starting this spinner from 02:21:946 - here instead can still fit nicely, since this is a platter and having 1/2 of a beat of spacing between an object and a spinner is ok.

[Sinnoh's Rain]
00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c:
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient.
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now.

[Overdose]
00:04:884 (3) - Move this note to x:43 instead? Feels less sharp of a curve to me.
02:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are not snapped correctly, please resnap.
01:09:009 (1,2) - The lack of movement between these objects feels a bit awkward. I've been testing around some stuff and I think that by ctrl+h'ing them and then moving them to x:322 solves the issue rather neatly. I don't get it lol I've done what you said and it plays awkward
01:26:634 (3) - Tilt this slider a bit more vertically for better flow, like this: http://puu.sh/wSh9V/ec2e72d08c.jpg I want to keep it challenging as now.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Move the whole to x:273 or so, right now the first slider is easily overdashable and has been causing me unnecessary shitmisses :>as it's middle of kiai part and considering player would keep dashing, moving it closer to the previous note can also cause a shitmisses imo
02:16:321 - Maybe place a note here as well? at x:106 fits nicely to me.

[Alice]
00:17:013 (1) - I'm pretty sure I can hear 4 piano notes here, so I'd recommend to change this repeat to 1/12 instead of 1/4. It's not 1/12 imo
00:42:946 (3) - I suggest to move this note to x:208 so that the curve isn't that edgy/sharp. It's intentional choice to make the part play better
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uh... I think these notes are too much time over the left side of the playfield? Try to spread them a bit more to the right side as well to cover all places equally (or at least so that I don't get my OCD triggered, whichever comes first )
01:03:759 (3) - Move to x:96 for better emphasis to the cymbal sound? Also for consistency with hyperdashes.
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Me thinks these look all similar to the way you've mapped them in the overdose difficulty (assuming this diff was just intended to be a carbon copy of the overdose diff but with harder patterns on the kiai, it's only natural, but still). Consider rearranging them in different positions so that they're not so reminiscent of the previous diff? ikr but I'd love to keep it as it's simply a good pattern for me. Just some parts are the similar so I'm pretty sure they wouldn't be that problematic

That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)

Thank you for the mod!
(also thanks

)

Lirai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2013

Lirai 2017-07-26T12:16:21+00:00

wow spec map marigold too. w

gl gl

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-07-27T15:22:56+00:00

DE-CADE wrote:
wow spec map marigold too. w

gl gl

thank you!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-07-27T16:37:01+00:00

spec please move the preview point back a 1/1 it hurts to listen to sometimes

Hareimu wrote:
[Sinnoh's Rain]
00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c: ya
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here. ya
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient. ya
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now. wrong timestamp but ya

hey i can add my 1/6 hyper back bc of the new rule

box

osu file format v14

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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-07-30T07:46:31+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:

spec please move the preview point back a 1/1 it hurts to listen to sometimes done w

Hareimu wrote:
[Sinnoh's Rain]
00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c: ya
01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here. ya
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient. ya
02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now. wrong timestamp but ya

hey i can add my 1/6 hyper back bc of the new rule

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CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-08-07T10:13:23+00:00

[Storyboard]
01:12:009 에서 01:14:821 까지 배경 페이드아웃 시켰다가 01:14:821 부터 다시 원래대로 돌아오게 하는게 어떨까요
02:26:821 에 등장하는 마지막 노트에 특수한 이펙트가 있으면 좀 더 분위기를 살릴 수 있을 것 같습니다

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES)
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo

[Overdose]
01:41:634 (7) - 이 부분이 오히려 01:41:259 (5,6) - 와 같은 방향성으로 연속하이퍼대시가 나와야 했지 않았나 싶네요, 바이올린 피치가 워낙에 커서 끝끝점프로 넣는것도 고려해보셔도 될것같습니다

[Alice]
00:05:634 (2) - 00:05:259 (1) 은 하이퍼대시인데 이건 아니라서 이질감이 듭니다. 여기도 하이퍼대시가 있었으면 좋겠네요
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ~~엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ오버도즈랑 똑같음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~
01:27:759 (4) - 이거 ctrl + g 해서 안티플로로 만들면 바이올린 피치를 제대로 살릴 수 있을것같네요
01:38:071 (3,4,5,6) - 이 부분만큼은 와리가리가 아닌 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784494 이런식으로 쭉 직진하는 형태로 바꾸시는것도?
01:41:634 (7) - 오버도즈와 동일

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-08-07T10:23:00+00:00

Minato Yukina wrote:
[Storyboard]
01:12:009 에서 01:14:821 까지 배경 페이드아웃 시켰다가 01:14:821 부터 다시 원래대로 돌아오게 하는게 어떨까요
02:26:821 에 등장하는 마지막 노트에 특수한 이펙트가 있으면 좀 더 분위기를 살릴 수 있을 것 같습니다 원래 있었는데 문구 넣으면서 삭제했어용

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES)
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo

[Overdose]
01:41:634 (7) - 이 부분이 오히려 01:41:259 (5,6) - 와 같은 방향성으로 연속하이퍼대시가 나와야 했지 않았나 싶네요, 바이올린 피치가 워낙에 커서 끝끝점프로 넣는것도 고려해보셔도 될것같습니다 음은 높은데 소리의 힘은 약해지는 부분이라 일단은 지금 패턴 유지할게요

[Alice]
00:05:634 (2) - 00:05:259 (1) 은 하이퍼대시인데 이건 아니라서 이질감이 듭니다. 여기도 하이퍼대시가 있었으면 좋겠네요
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ~~엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ오버도즈랑 똑같음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~
01:27:759 (4) - 이거 ctrl + g 해서 안티플로로 만들면 바이올린 피치를 제대로 살릴 수 있을것같네요
01:38:071 (3,4,5,6) - 이 부분만큼은 와리가리가 아닌 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784494 이런식으로 쭉 직진하는 형태로 바꾸시는것도? 맵
전반적으로 잘 안쓰이는 패턴이라 일단 정방향으로 바꿔두었습니다.
01:41:634 (7) - 오버도즈와 동일

모딩 감사합니다~

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-08-07T14:10:12+00:00

Minato Yukina wrote:
[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334 breaking expected flow = emphasis, just preference
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES) nerfed this section a lot
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo I'd prefer to keep similar sounds on the reverse slider, doesn't fit to have new sounds start in middle of the slider.

uwu

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-12T05:00:59+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
[Ascendance's Salad]
Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP. Ok
01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk gave it a slight curve but I think the sharp dash is more impactful for that noise
01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit. Ok
01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it. The piano?
01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well. I think they're okaaaay, the section is the most intense so I think the extra density is warranted
01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there. Ok
01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here. Sure
01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :> b

That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)

Sorry Spec, I ruined your N icon ;w;

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Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2017-09-28T23:47:29+00:00

Happy Friday! Here is a mod for you to celebrate with

Didn't have anything significant to say about the cup so either you're an amazing mapper or I'm a terrible modder or both

[

General]

Difficulty Spread: The Rain feels like quite a big step up from the Platter though the Rain > Overdose > Alice spread seems quite well done. It could be worth it to get an easier Rain for the spread but probably best to get some more opinions on that first.

[

Ascendance's Salad]

01:03:759 (1,2) - Timeline choice is a little odd here. Tail on 01:03:759 (1) - covers strong sounds on 01:04:509 -. Vocal also starting on 01:04:509 - isn't covered either. 01:04:884 (2) - ends on a far stronger beat than it begins on, no movement on this slider doesn't help to represent 01:05:259 - either. I think the timeline you used for 01:01:509 (1,2,3) - would fit perfectly here. Strong sounds are represented, sliders cover noticeable vocals and sliders no longer end on stronger sounds than they started on.
01:18:009 (1) - High SV here requires some rather precise walking or use of the dash mid slider which is a bit demanding for a Salad and only amplified by Tick Rate 2. Rather than adjusting SV here because that's such a pain, I'd recommend tilting out sliders like this one in the Kiai a little more so their effective length is reduced. Nothing too drastic but just a little nerf to save the suffering of hundreds of Salad players
01:19:321 (3) - Near enough the same point as above, SV feels just a bit too high on these repeaters. Tilting these a bit more would be so rad
01:25:134 (6,1,2) - Possibly too tricky for a Salad here? The immediate direction change after the dash followed by having to stop for the stack requires some good catcher control that I'm not certain players at this level have. I think this would be best without the direction change after the dash. Finding a way to make 01:25:696 (2) - fit at about 38 would be dank
02:02:259 (2,3) - Perhaps add a dash here? Feels like a good fit to go with the vocals here

[

Platter]

01:16:321 (4,5) - "Antiflow" hypers are unrankable in a Platter and whilst antiflow is not defined in the Ranking Criteria I think sliders like 01:16:509 (5) - would certainly qualify as antiflow. Should be easy enough to rework this pattern without the "antiflow"
01:26:259 (5,6) - This is a really strong hyper, I think it would be worthwhile to nerf this
01:41:446 (6,7) - Another "antiflow" hyper, please spare the poor Platter players from the evil monstrosity that is "antiflow"
02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo comes out at 13 which is just above the Ranking Criteria Guideline's maximum of 12. Nothing major but also an easy fix by throwing a new combo in there somewhere like at 02:01:509 -
02:03:759 (1,1) - Weird to have so little movement between these. Ctrl+H on 02:04:509 (1,2) - fits rather well but then obviously you'd need to rework the rest of the pattern to fit. Or you could just Ctrl+H the rest of the map from this point on
02:05:821 (2,1) - Antiflow hyper
02:07:134 (4,1) - This hyper feels a little too strong, would suggest to nerf it a bit

[

Sinnoh's Rain]

00:22:415 (4,1) - Pretty strong distance for 1/4, would be nice if you could make this a little easier and move 00:22:509 (1) - to around x:208
00:28:321 (9,1) - Very strong 1/4 again, 00:28:509 (1) - at about x:184 would be super rad
00:39:009 (1,2,3) - The distance between 00:39:009 (1,2) - is currently larger than the distance between 00:39:571 (2,3) - but (3) is the stronger note here. I'd move 00:39:571 (2) - to around x:328
00:57:759 (2,3) - Dash distance is quite weak here and 00:58:134 (3) - is certainly worth of some emphasis, try 00:58:134 (3) - around x:480
00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement on this pattern feels a little shallow, possible to curve it out some more?
01:02:259 (3,4,1) - Possible to move this a couple of grid spaces right just to get 01:02:259 (3) - a bit further away from the wall?
01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394
02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - Little more curve on this would look and play better

[

Overdose]

00:11:071 (2) - This is about equal distance between 00:10:509 (1,3) - yet sounds like 00:11:259 (3) - is worth more emphasis here and the current spacing is a little awkward with dash usage. I'd suggest moving this to around x:264
00:11:821 (4) - Pretty much the same point as above, see how you find x:256
00:50:634 (6,1) - Most of the movement around this part is quite calm and I think it would fit well with that to nerf the hyper strength here, same with 00:51:571 (2,3) -. Moving 00:51:009 (1,2) - to x:314 or so should do the trick
00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement is a little shallow here, possible to add a little more curve to this curve?
01:07:321 (4,1) - Pretty low distance for a strong sound here, especially when it's followed by 01:08:071 (2,3) - just after which is an antiflow hyper for a weaker sound. Possible to atleast buff this in to a strong dash?
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Staggered spacing on this makes this quite a tricky wiggle to do. It's not particularly comfortable to hold dash down because of the low distance between slider heads and tails but it's uncomfortable to not use dash because of the increased distances between the sliders. Would be great if you could nerf the distances between the notes here a little
01:32:196 (6,1) - That's pretty harsh antiflow for a 1/6 hyper of this distance, possible to nerf the intensity of this a bit?
01:41:634 (7,1) - Hyper here seems a little overkill. The intense Kiai has just come to a fairly abrupt end and I think that would be best represented without using a hyper here, I'd recommend a normal dash at most
01:56:071 (2,3) - Quite a strong hyper in another rather calm part of the song, I'd nerf the intensity on this so it doesn't stick out as much
02:11:071 (2) - Pretty much the same point from the start of the mod. Try putting this at x:240
02:26:821 (1) - Troll note! Are you sure you want to put players through such suffering?

[

Alice]

00:13:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Movement is really similar on these. You could tilt both 00:14:259 (1) - 00:15:009 (1) - more so the movement is more shallow on each, I think such movement compliments the song here as it winds down a bit
00:26:259 (1,2) - I think this hyper is a bit too strong, I'd try at least to bring it down under 6.0x DS
00:43:884 (2,1) - Same here, the hyper is already snappy and the extra distance just feels too intense. Again I think around 6.0x DS would be best
00:59:571 (6,7) - I feel this hyper here takes away from the hyper at 00:59:946 (12,1) -. The distance is noticeable larger on 00:59:571 (6,7) -, I understand the spacing on the playfield is quite awkward here but if you could find a way to at least buff 00:59:946 (12,1) - that would be great
01:07:321 (4,1) - Deja vu! Same point as in the Overdose here as this is pretty much identical
01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - So my general opinion on the Kiai is that it's a nice step up from the Overdose building on the same ideas but harder and more intense. Really this is the only pattern I could point out as maybe worth reworking. It's rather fast and very unexpected, it can be all too easy to not read this well and misunderstand what movement is required. I'd certainly get more opinions than just mine on this but my personal thoughts would be to rework this pattern to something more similar to those you've used throughout the Kiai.

One quick minor suggestion would be to make 01:22:321 (6) - nearer vertical so it's a little easier to transition in to this pattern, less speed carried in and it's all visually closer on the screen so it's easier to read.
01:41:634 (7,1) - Same point as in the Overdose really, this being as intense as 01:41:446 (6,7) - just doesn't seem right
01:43:509 (1) - I'd use a weaker hyper here, x:368 or so
02:26:821 (1) - The thought of someone full comboing the map up to this point and then missing this note keeps me up at night.

Good luck with your map!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-09-29T02:09:02+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
[ Sinnoh's Rain]
01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394 was making these a bit edge dashy, moved to x400 still

Rest fixed, good mod

sorcerer 4 bn

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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-09-29T02:16:43+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Happy Friday! Here is a mod for you to celebrate with

Didn't have anything significant to say about the cup so either you're an amazing mapper or I'm a terrible modder or both

[ General]
Difficulty Spread: The Rain feels like quite a big step up from the Platter though the Rain > Overdose > Alice spread seems quite well done. It could be worth it to get an easier Rain for the spread but probably best to get some more opinions on that first.
[ Ascendance's Salad]
01:03:759 (1,2) - Timeline choice is a little odd here. Tail on 01:03:759 (1) - covers strong sounds on 01:04:509 -. Vocal also starting on 01:04:509 - isn't covered either. 01:04:884 (2) - ends on a far stronger beat than it begins on, no movement on this slider doesn't help to represent 01:05:259 - either. I think the timeline you used for 01:01:509 (1,2,3) - would fit perfectly here. Strong sounds are represented, sliders cover noticeable vocals and sliders no longer end on stronger sounds than they started on.
01:18:009 (1) - High SV here requires some rather precise walking or use of the dash mid slider which is a bit demanding for a Salad and only amplified by Tick Rate 2. Rather than adjusting SV here because that's such a pain, I'd recommend tilting out sliders like this one in the Kiai a little more so their effective length is reduced. Nothing too drastic but just a little nerf to save the suffering of hundreds of Salad players
01:19:321 (3) - Near enough the same point as above, SV feels just a bit too high on these repeaters. Tilting these a bit more would be so rad
01:25:134 (6,1,2) - Possibly too tricky for a Salad here? The immediate direction change after the dash followed by having to stop for the stack requires some good catcher control that I'm not certain players at this level have. I think this would be best without the direction change after the dash. Finding a way to make 01:25:696 (2) - fit at about 38 would be dank
02:02:259 (2,3) - Perhaps add a dash here? Feels like a good fit to go with the vocals here
[ Platter]
01:16:321 (4,5) - "Antiflow" hypers are unrankable in a Platter and whilst antiflow is not defined in the Ranking Criteria I think sliders like 01:16:509 (5) - would certainly qualify as antiflow. Should be easy enough to rework this pattern without the "antiflow"
01:26:259 (5,6) - This is a really strong hyper, I think it would be worthwhile to nerf this
01:41:446 (6,7) - Another "antiflow" hyper, please spare the poor Platter players from the evil monstrosity that is "antiflow"
02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo comes out at 13 which is just above the Ranking Criteria Guideline's maximum of 12. Nothing major but also an easy fix by throwing a new combo in there somewhere like at 02:01:509 -
02:03:759 (1,1) - Weird to have so little movement between these. Ctrl+H on 02:04:509 (1,2) - fits rather well but then obviously you'd need to rework the rest of the pattern to fit. Or you could just Ctrl+H the rest of the map from this point on
02:05:821 (2,1) - Antiflow hyper
02:07:134 (4,1) - This hyper feels a little too strong, would suggest to nerf it a bit
[ Sinnoh's Rain]
00:22:415 (4,1) - Pretty strong distance for 1/4, would be nice if you could make this a little easier and move 00:22:509 (1) - to around x:208
00:28:321 (9,1) - Very strong 1/4 again, 00:28:509 (1) - at about x:184 would be super rad
00:39:009 (1,2,3) - The distance between 00:39:009 (1,2) - is currently larger than the distance between 00:39:571 (2,3) - but (3) is the stronger note here. I'd move 00:39:571 (2) - to around x:328
00:57:759 (2,3) - Dash distance is quite weak here and 00:58:134 (3) - is certainly worth of some emphasis, try 00:58:134 (3) - around x:480
00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement on this pattern feels a little shallow, possible to curve it out some more?
01:02:259 (3,4,1) - Possible to move this a couple of grid spaces right just to get 01:02:259 (3) - a bit further away from the wall?
01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394
02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - Little more curve on this would look and play better
[ Overdose]
00:11:071 (2) - This is about equal distance between 00:10:509 (1,3) - yet sounds like 00:11:259 (3) - is worth more emphasis here and the current spacing is a little awkward with dash usage. I'd suggest moving this to around x:264
00:11:821 (4) - Pretty much the same point as above, see how you find x:256
00:50:634 (6,1) - Most of the movement around this part is quite calm and I think it would fit well with that to nerf the hyper strength here, same with 00:51:571 (2,3) -. Moving 00:51:009 (1,2) - to x:314 or so should do the trick I want to keep the symmetrical pattern here

00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement is a little shallow here, possible to add a little more curve to this curve?
01:07:321 (4,1) - Pretty low distance for a strong sound here, especially when it's followed by 01:08:071 (2,3) - just after which is an antiflow hyper for a weaker sound. Possible to atleast buff this in to a strong dash?
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Staggered spacing on this makes this quite a tricky wiggle to do. It's not particularly comfortable to hold dash down because of the low distance between slider heads and tails but it's uncomfortable to not use dash because of the increased distances between the sliders. Would be great if you could nerf the distances between the notes here a little
01:32:196 (6,1) - That's pretty harsh antiflow for a 1/6 hyper of this distance, possible to nerf the intensity of this a bit?
01:41:634 (7,1) - Hyper here seems a little overkill. The intense Kiai has just come to a fairly abrupt end and I think that would be best represented without using a hyper here, I'd recommend a normal dash at most I still think it's fine and fit with the intensity of the song. Maybe gonna keep this for now
01:56:071 (2,3) - Quite a strong hyper in another rather calm part of the song, I'd nerf the intensity on this so it doesn't stick out as much
02:11:071 (2) - Pretty much the same point from the start of the mod. Try putting this at x:240
02:26:821 (1) - Troll note! Are you sure you want to put players through such suffering? but it's still in the middle and I'm pretty sure no one misses it since it comes after the spinner
[ Alice]
00:13:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Movement is really similar on these. You could tilt both 00:14:259 (1) - 00:15:009 (1) - more so the movement is more shallow on each, I think such movement compliments the song here as it winds down a bit
00:26:259 (1,2) - I think this hyper is a bit too strong, I'd try at least to bring it down under 6.0x DS
00:43:884 (2,1) - Same here, the hyper is already snappy and the extra distance just feels too intense. Again I think around 6.0x DS would be best
00:59:571 (6,7) - I feel this hyper here takes away from the hyper at 00:59:946 (12,1) -. The distance is noticeable larger on 00:59:571 (6,7) -, I understand the spacing on the playfield is quite awkward here but if you could find a way to at least buff 00:59:946 (12,1) - that would be great
01:07:321 (4,1) - Deja vu! Same point as in the Overdose here as this is pretty much identical
01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - So my general opinion on the Kiai is that it's a nice step up from the Overdose building on the same ideas but harder and more intense. Really this is the only pattern I could point out as maybe worth reworking. It's rather fast and very unexpected, it can be all too easy to not read this well and misunderstand what movement is required. I'd certainly get more opinions than just mine on this but my personal thoughts would be to rework this pattern to something more similar to those you've used throughout the Kiai.

One quick minor suggestion would be to make 01:22:321 (6) - nearer vertical so it's a little easier to transition in to this pattern, less speed carried in and it's all visually closer on the screen so it's easier to read.
01:41:634 (7,1) - Same point as in the Overdose really, this being as intense as 01:41:446 (6,7) - just doesn't seem right same as overdose
01:43:509 (1) - I'd use a weaker hyper here, x:368 or so
02:26:821 (1) - The thought of someone full comboing the map up to this point and then missing this note keeps me up at night. That's pleasure to the mapper since he will going to play my map once more

Good luck with your map!

Thanks for the mod, was really helpful!

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-10-01T03:10:42+00:00

I wonder if peeps will check out the remix of this lo but e I see M2U free mod uwu

Platter

00:25:884 (2) - would be better if you let this be a c-shaped stream instead of a stacked one imo
01:43:509 (1) - personally since this is a strong sound and yet its stacked i think a h-dash would fit better here
02:21:759 (5) - ^

Welp yea dont really have that much to say since its pretty gud already XD

Sino rain

00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more?
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasizing that instense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245?
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

Hope the mod helps! gl

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-10-02T00:45:58+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
I wonder if peeps will check out the remix of this lo but e I see M2U free mod uwu
Platter
00:25:884 (2) - would be better if you let this be a c-shaped stream instead of a stacked one imo
01:43:509 (1) - personally since this is a strong sound and yet its stacked i think a h-dash would fit better here i think it's fine
02:21:759 (5) - ^ ^

Welp yea dont really have that much to say since its pretty gud already XD

Sino rain
00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more?
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasizing that instense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245?
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -

Hope the mod helps! gl

Thanks for the mod! rest are fixed!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-10-02T02:55:13+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
Sino rain
00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more? intentionally low movement for a pause, but added a little
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasising that intense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245? there's different sounds on each beat here, first is a trill so using 4x slider works for me
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here emphasised with lower spacing instead

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - imo they are similar, but sound quite different. Used same patterns but different spacing

Hope the mod helps! gl

b

add sinnoh to the tags thanks

osu file format v14

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-10-05T03:06:45+00:00

fixed everything except the first one. i really like the simplistic nature of it here, dunno why. thanks!

osu file format v14

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Tags:Ascendance Sinnoh NICODE SQUAR SQUARE MUSIQ Guriri Narae Alice Hans
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autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-10-30T15:39:54+00:00

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General]

Metadata

Can you find references to show the metadatas are correct?
Pretty sure グリリ is the official name of Guriri. Maybe you have to confirm the remaining metadatas with proof.

Tags
Remove: Guriri , Alice (Repeated)
Add: Diversity. (Album involving this song)
Also check for other suitable tags, not going to list them here.

Storyboard
Remember to enable Epilepsy Warning throughout all the difficulties! There are some flashes in the climax part.
Not a storyboarding expert, cannot really check them by myself. Probably you can find someone good at checking them and approve them, then I can work on.

AIMod Issues
Check them by yourself, there are a few issues for every difficulties.

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Cup]

Redundant Inherited Sections

01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Combos
Separate the notes into more combos (most likely every 4 white ticks) as no more than 8 objects should be included per combo in accordance to the Ranking Criteria.

Gameplay
00:29:259 (4,1) - The transition may be too difficult for beginners, as the end of (4) points to the right but the coming note (1) is at the left, which may distract beginners.
01:06:009 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent with 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of timeline patterning.
01:11:259 (4,1,2) - Same as 00:29:259 (4,1) - , I suggest reducing the distance of (4,1) here.
01:34:509 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 7 circles consecutively may be too dense for beginners... I think 5 is already the maximum for a Cup. Maybe you can replace (4,5) with a 1/1 slider, like 01:28:509 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:38:634 (4,1) - Try to change the shape of the slider (1) here, so the start of (1) points towards (4) for better flow. Players may find it difficult to follow the flow here. Also, for 01:39:009 (1,2) - you can remove the anti-flow movement by the same change.
01:41:071 (2,3,4) - Feels a bit dense here with 2 1/2 jumps. How about changing this to a nice circle curve? Something like 01:34:884 (5,6,7,8) - would be fit.
02:04:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, not consistent with 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of timeline patterning. Also it doesn't feel to match vocals by the former patterning, try applying the latter.
02:15:759 (5,1,2) - A bit far for (5,1). In addition, this can be rather harsh for beginners if they missed the jump at (5,1), they will miss (2) as well. Consider reducing both distances. I think you can reduce (1,2) a bit more too because the song is going to be calm thereafter.

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Ascendance's Salad]

Redundant Inherited Sections

01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Gameplay
00:04:134 (4,1) - Ambiguous distance, consider reducing it by moving 00:01:509 (1,2,3,4) - altogether to the left.
00:08:259 (2,3,4,1) - ^ All with the same issue, and every jumps can be reached without dashing. Please reduce the distances of (2,3) and (3,4), and enlarge (4,1) to guarantee a dash.
00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you can increase the gaps between 00:10:509 (1,2) - , (2,3), (3,4) and 00:12:759 (4,1) - here, feels a bit close to each other.
00:18:009 (1) - Consider reducing the volume of this part, because the background music remains total silent here.
00:19:884 (2,3,4,1) - Firstly, it feels a bit strange at (4) because it doesn't match the strong beat at 00:20:634 - . Secondly, the distance of (3,4) is unclear. Here would be my solution: Change (4) to a 1/1 horizontal slider beginning at 00:20:259 - ; then reduce the distance between it and 00:20:071 (3) - and add a dash at (4,1). Note that you can move 00:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - altogether to the left so it won't limit you in amending this.
00:23:071 (4,5,1) - Not so good to have 2 dashes happening here... Would be better if you remove the dash at (5,1). In addition, it doesn't match the song well by using vertical slider (5) at 00:23:259 - , because both sounds are prominent (head and tail of the slider), it seems more appropriate to use horizontal slider / 2 circles.
00:24:290 (2) - Really necessary to use 1/4? It is quite peculiar in my opinion.
00:25:509 (4,5,1) - Why not have a dash at (5,1) and omit the others at (4,5)? It doesn't emphasize the most prominent beat at (1).
00:28:790 (4) - Same as 00:24:290 (2) - .
00:29:259 (6,7,1) - Very ambiguous.
00:46:509 (1,2,3,1) - Strange emphasis there. Why not place a dash at either 00:46:884 (2,3) - or at 00:47:259 (3,1) - ? 00:46:884 (2) - is not really a strong beat so it has no point to stress it.
00:58:134 (2,1,2) - I understand you are putting a dash at 00:58:134 (2,1) - but how about reducing the distance of 00:58:509 (1,2) - more further? Feels a bit far away after the dash and it requires some momentum from the dash.

01:18:009 - 01:41:634 - The SV in this part should be slightly lower. There are so many horizontal sliders that look really unclear to players. I found myself getting the mind of dashing during the testplay. Followings are some that I find necessary to fix:
01:18:009 (1) - This needs full holding of the left-moving key. And with the dash transition at 01:17:259 (4,1) - , this is really tricky to beginners.
01:19:321 (3) - Incline it slightly.
01:21:009 (1) - ^
01:23:259 (3,4) - Ambiguous distance.
01:24:196 (2) - Same as 01:19:321 (3) - .
01:25:696 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So many 1/4 streams, highly recommend to reduce the amount. Especially for 01:27:196 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , it is regarded unrankable according to the Ranking Criteria.
Ranking Criteria
01:28:134 (9,1) - Ambiguous distance.
01:28:884 (2,3) - This is pretty tricky, because (3) is with a very high SV and players need the momentum provided by the dash to catch (3).
01:33:759 (5) - Incline this please.
01:35:071 (4,5,6,7) - Ambiguous distance at (6,7) and more importantly, the anti-flow jump is too hard for beginners.
01:38:071 (3) - Again, this require full holding of the right-moving key. Please reduce the SV or incline this slider more to fix it.
01:39:009 (1,2) - Due to the high SV, too many movements here as well. How about inclining both sliders?
02:04:509 - 02:21:759 - This entire ending part doesn't contain any dashes, which seem too plain for the gameplay. How about adding some?

I think the difficulty will be much improved if the SV multiplier is reduced and 1/4 stream usage is cut down.

[

Platter]

Redundant Inherited Sections

01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Gameplay
00:10:134 (9,1) - How about adding a dash here?
00:12:009 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - Ambiguous distances... i.e. 00:12:009 (1,2,3,1) - , 00:14:821 (8,1,2,1) - .
00:59:259 (6,1) - Why not have a dash, or optimally a hyperdash here?
01:18:009 - 01:43:509 - I don't really agree with the high SV multiplier here, I would say reducing them slightly, say 1.3x would be enough already, since this part contains dense dashes and advanced patterns.
01:31:509 (5,6,7,8) - Not consistent with the patterning at 01:19:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Maybe you can change the pattern at the former part to make it looks different but the timing for hyperdashes is the same.
01:54:759 (8) - How about flipping this horizontally and place at original position - x:213? No point to apply anti-flow movement here too considering that this part is the calmest part of the song.

[

Sinnoh's Rain]

Redundant Inherited Sections

01:31:509 - to 01:32:196

Gameplay
00:23:071 (3,4,5,1) - Reduce the distance of (4,5) please, because most players will get distracted by the 1/4 hyperdash at (3,4), it will be quite difficult for them to recover.
01:20:196 (8,1,2) - 1/6 hyperdash is unrankable as stated in the Ranking Criteria. Note that the song is at 160 BPM and the rule stated that 1/6 hyperdashes are accepted UNDER 160 BPM. If you wish to use hyperdash here, consider grouping 01:19:884 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as a nice 1/6 curve stream, then add a hyperdash between 01:20:259 (1,2) - .
Ranking Criteria
01:20:821 (3,1) - Honestly I don't agree using anti-flow despite being the climax part. But I think you can make it easier to catch by inclining (3).
01:25:884 (3) - Ctrl+G? It flows better in my opinion.
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Considering this is still a Rain, maybe use horizontal slider for (3) instead. The current one produces sudden stops at (3) which can be so tricky to most players. Or in a better way, for 01:26:633 (3,4,1) - , group (3,4) together and only add hyperdash to (4,1).
01:32:134 (11,1,2) - Same problem.

[

Overdose]

Gameplay

00:21:009 (1,2,3) - Maybe reduce the distances of (1,2) and (2,3) by moving (2) to the left slightly?
00:52:321 (4,1) - AAAAAAAA Such distance

Nice overdose. Good work!

[

Alice]

Gameplay

00:19:884 (2,3,1) - The pattern of (2,3) really trips me off and misses (1) eventually. Consider using other patterns to replace the current one at (2,3).
01:15:384 (2,3) - Maybe you can add a hyperdash here to show difference with the Overdose difficulty?
01:22:602 (2,3) - The gap here is quite big, reduce it slightly please.
01:24:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - Isn't that sound strange and not matching with the song? I think the beats are at 01:24:384 - (prominent) and 01:24:571 - . Maybe you can change a bit here to fit that rhythm while keeping the intensity you developed in the climax part.
01:24:946 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks really bizarre in gameplay despite I know you want to showcase dash-holding movements. Maybe you can just map this like 01:21:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - . This one is really difficult to follow and read.
01:28:040 - How about having a note here? Try putting it at x:135, then move 01:28:321 (9) - to the right slightly to make it easier.
01:38:352 (5,6,7) - See if you can allocate a hyperdash at (6,7). The current one is really harsh because players who missed the hyperdash at (5,6) will miss the rest. It is in fact possible to do so, but I will leave that to you: *Screenshot

Good luck!

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-10-30T16:30:22+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

Metadata
Can you find references to show the metadatas are correct? official youtube link
Pretty sure グリリ is the official name of Guriri. Maybe you have to confirm the remaining metadatas with proof.

Tags
Remove: Guriri , Alice (Repeated) done!
Add: Diversity. (Album involving this song)
Also check for other suitable tags, not going to list them here.

Storyboard
Remember to enable Epilepsy Warning throughout all the difficulties! There are some flashes in the climax part. sure
Not a storyboarding expert, cannot really check them by myself. Probably you can find someone good at checking them and approve them, then I can work on. gonna ask someone who's good at it

AIMod Issues
Check them by yourself, there are a few issues for every difficulties.

[ Cup]

Redundant Inherited Sections
01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Combos
Separate the notes into more combos (most likely every 4 white ticks) as no more than 8 objects should be included per combo in accordance to the Ranking Criteria.

Gameplay
00:29:259 (4,1) - The transition may be too difficult for beginners, as the end of (4) points to the right but the coming note (1) is at the left, which may distract beginners.
01:06:009 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent with 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of timeline patterning. sure but I still think that they're fine as it is
01:11:259 (4,1,2) - Same as 00:29:259 (4,1) - , I suggest reducing the distance of (4,1) here.
01:34:509 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 7 circles consecutively may be too dense for beginners... I think 5 is already the maximum for a Cup. Maybe you can replace (4,5) with a 1/1 slider, like 01:28:509 (1,2,3,4) - .
01:38:634 (4,1) - Try to change the shape of the slider (1) here, so the start of (1) points towards (4) for better flow. Players may find it difficult to follow the flow here. Also, for 01:39:009 (1,2) - you can remove the anti-flow movement by the same change.
01:41:071 (2,3,4) - Feels a bit dense here with 2 1/2 jumps. How about changing this to a nice circle curve? Something like 01:34:884 (5,6,7,8) - would be fit.
02:04:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Again, not consistent with 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of timeline patterning. Also it doesn't feel to match vocals by the former patterning, try applying the latter. Same as above
02:15:759 (5,1,2) - A bit far for (5,1). In addition, this can be rather harsh for beginners if they missed the jump at (5,1), they will miss (2) as well. Consider reducing both distances. I think you can reduce (1,2) a bit more too because the song is going to be calm thereafter.

[ Platter]

Redundant Inherited Sections
01:32:259 -
01:57:009 -

Gameplay
00:10:134 (9,1) - How about adding a dash here? sure
00:12:009 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - Ambiguous distances... i.e. 00:12:009 (1,2,3,1) - , 00:14:821 (8,1,2,1) - . they're still pretty easy to read and catch imo
00:59:259 (6,1) - Why not have a dash, or optimally a hyperdash here?
01:18:009 - 01:43:509 - I don't really agree with the high SV multiplier here, I would say reducing them slightly, say 1.3x would be enough already, since this part contains dense dashes and advanced patterns.
01:31:509 (5,6,7,8) - Not consistent with the patterning at 01:19:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Maybe you can change the pattern at the former part to make it looks different but the timing for hyperdashes is the same.
01:54:759 (8) - How about flipping this horizontally and place at original position - x:213? No point to apply anti-flow movement here too considering that this part is the calmest part of the song.

[ Overdose]

Gameplay
00:21:009 (1,2,3) - Maybe reduce the distances of (1,2) and (2,3) by moving (2) to the left slightly? uh I think the current distance also works pretty good
00:52:321 (4,1) - AAAAAAAA Such distance edge dash :^)

Nice overdose. Good work! thanks!

[ Alice]

Gameplay
00:19:884 (2,3,1) - The pattern of (2,3) really trips me off and misses (1) eventually. Consider using other patterns to replace the current one at (2,3). Yeah I know that it could be a bit hard but considering it's a deluge difficulty I think it could work well as a challenge
01:15:384 (2,3) - Maybe you can add a hyperdash here to show difference with the Overdose difficulty?
01:22:602 (2,3) - The gap here is quite big, reduce it slightly please.
01:24:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - Isn't that sound strange and not matching with the song? I think the beats are at 01:24:384 - (prominent) and 01:24:571 - . Maybe you can change a bit here to fit that rhythm while keeping the intensity you developed in the climax part. wow. I didn't notice this before.
fixed!
01:24:946 (2,3,4,5,6) - This looks really bizarre in gameplay despite I know you want to showcase dash-holding movements. Maybe you can just map this like 01:21:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - . This one is really difficult to follow and read.
01:28:040 - How about having a note here? Try putting it at x:135, then move 01:28:321 (9) - to the right slightly to make it easier. ah maybe keeping the current one because I feel like it follows the music better
01:38:352 (5,6,7) - See if you can allocate a hyperdash at (6,7). The current one is really harsh because players who missed the hyperdash at (5,6) will miss the rest. It is in fact possible to do so, but I will leave that to you: *Screenshot

Good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-10-30T22:53:54+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Both japanese and korean are fine, as they are both quoted officially

Unicode Title: Marigold (feat. グリリ) or Marigold (feat. 구리리)
Romanised Title: Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Unicode Artist: M2U
Source: Deemo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p_zasg8oWnA
http://www.universal-music.co.jp/m2u/pr ... icy-15598/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvNwYQUnDa0
http://m2u.studio/ALBUM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RiT4xPgRZo
https://www.facebook.com/rayark.deemo/

good luck!

alienflybot wrote:
[ Sinnoh's Rain]

Redundant Inherited Sections
01:31:509 - to 01:32:196 gdi my wave was removed by hitsounding tools

Gameplay
00:23:071 (3,4,5,1) - Reduce the distance of (4,5) please, because most players will get distracted by the 1/4 hyperdash at (3,4), it will be quite difficult for them to recover. ok
01:20:196 (8,1,2) - 1/6 hyperdash is unrankable as stated in the Ranking Criteria. Note that the song is at 160 BPM and the rule stated that 1/6 hyperdashes are accepted UNDER 160 BPM. If you wish to use hyperdash here, consider grouping 01:19:884 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as a nice 1/6 curve stream, then add a hyperdash between 01:20:259 (1,2) - . see below, I prefer 1/6
Ranking Criteria
01:20:821 (3,1) - Honestly I don't agree using anti-flow despite being the climax part. But I think you can make it easier to catch by inclining (3). ok
01:25:884 (3) - Ctrl+G? It flows better in my opinion. does not flow
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Considering this is still a Rain, maybe use horizontal slider for (3) instead. The current one produces sudden stops at (3) which can be so tricky to most players. Or in a better way, for 01:26:633 (3,4,1) - , group (3,4) together and only add hyperdash to (4,1). applied
01:32:134 (11,1,2) - Same problem.

Higher snapped hyperdashes may be used singularily, if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 62ms or higher
01:32:196 - 01:32:259 = 63ms
rankable

woops forgot to paste

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Last edited by Xinnoh 2017-10-31T09:42:15+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Storyboarder

79 posts

Joined March 2015

Storyboarder 2017-10-31T04:09:45+00:00

storyboard is super lit
no rankability issues so it's good to go

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-10-31T05:05:33+00:00

Storyboarder wrote:
storyboard is super lit
no rankability issues so it's good to go

thank you for the check!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-10-31T17:43:23+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Ascendance's Salad]

Redundant Inherited Sections
01:32:259 -
01:57:009 - delet this

Gameplay
00:04:134 (4,1) - Ambiguous distance, consider reducing it by moving 00:01:509 (1,2,3,4) - altogether to the left. I don't have any issue noticing this as a walkable distance
00:08:259 (2,3,4,1) - ^ All with the same issue, and every jumps can be reached without dashing. Please reduce the distances of (2,3) and (3,4), and enlarge (4,1) to guarantee a dash. sure
00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think you can increase the gaps between 00:10:509 (1,2) - , (2,3), (3,4) and 00:12:759 (4,1) - here, feels a bit close to each other. agree
00:18:009 (1) - Consider reducing the volume of this part, because the background music remains total silent here. 10% now
00:19:884 (2,3,4,1) - Firstly, it feels a bit strange at (4) because it doesn't match the strong beat at 00:20:634 - . Secondly, the distance of (3,4) is unclear. Here would be my solution: Change (4) to a 1/1 horizontal slider beginning at 00:20:259 - ; then reduce the distance between it and 00:20:071 (3) - and add a dash at (4,1). Note that you can move 00:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - altogether to the left so it won't limit you in amending this. changed it a bit differently
00:23:071 (4,5,1) - Not so good to have 2 dashes happening here... Would be better if you remove the dash at (5,1). In addition, it doesn't match the song well by using vertical slider (5) at 00:23:259 - , because both sounds are prominent (head and tail of the slider), it seems more appropriate to use horizontal slider / 2 circles. Did something here
00:24:290 (2) - Really necessary to use 1/4? It is quite peculiar in my opinion. Yeah I kinda like it, goes nicely with the piano. The section is not that dense either so I think it's reasonable
00:25:509 (4,5,1) - Why not have a dash at (5,1) and omit the others at (4,5)? It doesn't emphasize the most prominent beat at (1). I think 00:25:509 (4,5) - has a much higher upswing than the others considering 00:27:009 (1) - is a descending note
00:28:790 (4) - Same as 00:24:290 (2) - . Same as before
00:29:259 (6,7,1) - Very ambiguous. Fixed
00:46:509 (1,2,3,1) - Strange emphasis there. Why not place a dash at either 00:46:884 (2,3) - or at 00:47:259 (3,1) - ? 00:46:884 (2) - is not really a strong beat so it has no point to stress it. fixed
00:58:134 (2,1,2) - I understand you are putting a dash at 00:58:134 (2,1) - but how about reducing the distance of 00:58:509 (1,2) - more further? Feels a bit far away after the dash and it requires some momentum from the dash.sure

01:18:009 - 01:41:634 - The SV in this part should be slightly lower. There are so many horizontal sliders that look really unclear to players. I found myself getting the mind of dashing during the testplay. Followings are some that I find necessary to fix:
01:18:009 (1) - This needs full holding of the left-moving key. And with the dash transition at 01:17:259 (4,1) - , this is really tricky to beginners.
01:19:321 (3) - Incline it slightly.
01:21:009 (1) - ^
01:23:259 (3,4) - Ambiguous distance.
01:24:196 (2) - Same as 01:19:321 (3) - .
01:25:696 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So many 1/4 streams, highly recommend to reduce the amount. Especially for 01:27:196 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , it is regarded unrankable according to the Ranking Criteria.
Ranking Criteria
01:28:134 (9,1) - Ambiguous distance.
01:28:884 (2,3) - This is pretty tricky, because (3) is with a very high SV and players need the momentum provided by the dash to catch (3).
01:33:759 (5) - Incline this please.
01:35:071 (4,5,6,7) - Ambiguous distance at (6,7) and more importantly, the anti-flow jump is too hard for beginners.
01:38:071 (3) - Again, this require full holding of the right-moving key. Please reduce the SV or incline this slider more to fix it.
01:39:009 (1,2) - Due to the high SV, too many movements here as well. How about inclining both sliders?
02:04:509 - 02:21:759 - This entire ending part doesn't contain any dashes, which seem too plain for the gameplay. How about adding some?

I think the difficulty will be much improved if the SV multiplier is reduced and 1/4 stream usage is cut down.

Good luck!

Went through the kiai and lowered distance and changed some patterns. I kept some 1/4 streams in the cases where I found they fit the best. Most had density chopped down though.

Thanks~

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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-11-01T04:24:04+00:00

updated all!

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-11-28T12:27:41+00:00

fixed metadata

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-12-04T00:47:47+00:00

1 month ago

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,591 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-12-05T03:22:06+00:00

Recheck

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

General]

AIMod

You still haven't check them. Fix the issues with regard to metadata inconsistencies and audio preview time conflicts.

Title
According to the metadata help from IamKwaN, the unicode title should be changed to either Marigold (feat. グリリ) or Marigold (feat. 구리리). If you go for either one, remember to add the another original name as the tag. For instance, if you chose Marigold (feat. グリリ) as the song title, go for 구리리 as the tag.

Tags
As above-mentioned.
Also, add: Rayark (Founding company of Deemo)

[

Cup]

Gameplay

01:33:759 (3,1) - Distance can be much smaller. Also the flow doesn't favor beginners, how about this: *Screenshot
02:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - Weird to have this part denser than 02:16:509 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of notes. It is because the song is going to be progressively calmer since 02:16:509 - . You may try such note pattern to make it calm while different from the circle movements: *Screenshot

[

Ascendance's Salad]

Gameplay

00:11:259 (2,3,4) - Reduce the distances between (2,3) and (3,4) by moving (3) to the right slightly. The distances would be at optimum if they are the same as that at 00:10:509 (1,2) - .
00:20:259 (4,1) - Ambiguous distance. Hard to judge whether dash or not.
00:28:790 (4,5,6) - Reduce the distances between (4,5) and (5,6) slightly by moving (5) a bit to the right, probably a few value of x would suffice. The current one features some quick movements which may be too hard for beginners.
00:46:509 (1,2) - Ah, should have reduced the distance here... I think it is too difficult because the movement at 00:45:759 (4,1,2) - makes (1) a very sharp turning point. Beginners would find troubles here as they have to change the direction real quick. You can fix this by changing the pattern of 00:45:759 (4,1) - , maybe incline (4) a bit and keep the same distance (4,1) while remain the same for (2), then the distance here would be reduced.
00:52:509 (1,2) - ^, reduce by moving (2) slightly closer to (1).
01:04:884 (2,3) - ^, slant (2) slightly.
01:11:634 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance, maybe reduce the distance?
01:25:134 (4,1,2) - Pesky pattern especially for beginners. Don't use anti-flow jump pattern please, in fact this is a 1/2 quick turning so it is really difficult for them.
01:26:821 (6,1,2) - Inconsistent with the dashing pattern, shouldn't it be dash at 01:26:821 (6,1) - instead? Like what you did at 01:25:134 (4,1) - .
01:28:134 (7,1) - Ambiguous distance, maybe keep the same distance like 01:28:884 (2,3) - .
01:31:509 (3,1,2) - :facepalm:
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Difficulties may make use of basic (1/1, 1/2) regular dashing, although no type of dash can be used more than twice consecutively.
01:35:071 (4,5,6,7) - This is really complicated, I would suggest having the dash direction the same as (5,6). So something like this would do: *Screenshot Modify the distances as well so (6,7) would not be that ambiguous.
02:05:259 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:11:259 (2,3,4) - .
02:16:509 (1) - , 02:18:759 (4) - How about inclining them a bit more? So the pattern at 02:16:509 (1,2,3,4) - looks more diverse and interesting. You may also reduce the distances among them to make (4) easier to incline.

[

Platter]

Gameplay

00:10:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part is hard for players to distinguish whether they should dash or not at particular parts. Consider increasing the distances for dashing to make sure they dash at certain points and reduce the ones that you intend to put a walk there. Also, it would be more interesting if you place at least 1 dash there, I anticipate a dash coming around 00:11:259 (3,1) - if you don't want to have double dashing at 00:12:759 (2,3) - .
00:11:259 (3) - A bit strange here as the rhythm is same as 00:10:509 (1,2) - but it is mapped in a different way.
00:14:821 (8,1,2,1) - Same as 00:10:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - , some jumps there are actually walkable.
00:28:884 (2,3,1) - ^, move (3) to the right for a little bit more.
00:30:759 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
00:32:821 (6,1) - ^, move 00:33:009 (1,2,3,4) - this whole part altogether to the right.
00:37:509 - 00:47:821 - This entire part just after the spinner is FC'able without dashing. Consider adding a few obvious dashes to it, probably at the prominent beats such as 00:43:134 (6,1) - . Also, it is sensible to put dash at 00:47:071 (4,5) - so maybe you can move 00:46:509 (1,2,3,4) - a little further to the left, while maintaining an obvious walk distance at 00:45:759 (3,1) - .
00:48:009 - 00:51:571 - Same here, FC'able without dashing. Would be great to put dash at 00:49:321 (4,1) - and 00:49:884 (2,3) - .
00:52:509 (5,6) - How about a dash here as well? You can do it without ruining the later-on patterns by moving 00:52:884 (6,7) - altogether to the left. x:155 would be fine here.
00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - I recommend reducing the distances of (1,2) and (3,4) here, so players know they have to dash exactly at 00:55:884 (2,3) - and 00:56:634 (4,1) - which are stronger beats. Currently the distances are very similar so players may dash suddenly and lose track of the rhythm.
00:59:259 (6,1) - Why not having a hyperdash here? Also refer to the next point which I also include some possible solutions there.
01:00:009 - 01:05:634 - Again, this whole part has no dashes, which can be really easy and plain. Since 00:59:259 (6,1) - would be a perfect spot to capitalize a hyperdash, and if you place a hyperdash there, 01:00:009 (1) - should be in a curved shape instead of horizontal one so over-shooting is less likely to happen. One possible pattern here would be this: *Screenshot. Next, 01:01:321 (4,1) - would be a good place to put dash, same for 01:01:509 (1,2) - . So, to combine two things up, try moving 01:01:509 (1) - to the left. Lastly, I think 01:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - can put 2 dashes as well, one at 01:03:384 (2,3) - and the another at 01:04:134 (4,5) - . You can achieve this by simply moving 01:03:759 (3,4) - to the left.
01:06:009 - 01:08:821 - Not enough dashes. How about two at 01:07:134 (4,1) - and 01:07:884 (2,3) - ? So you can move 01:07:509 (1,2) - to the left.
01:22:134 (6,1) - I think this is a good place to put hyperdash but the current pattern overshadows it. Try this: *Screenshot
01:22:884 (3) - Feels strange to put whistle on the tail, it fits more at the head.
01:23:634 (2,1) - Still possible to catch without dashing, try moving (2) a bit more to the left.
01:37:134 (4,1) - Where is the hyperdash :C
01:54:759 (8) - Flip this horizontally and place at the original position. The flow would be better in my opinion.
02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same thing as 00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - .
02:10:884 (2,3) - Hyperdash? To be consistent with 02:05:071 (2,3) - .

[

Sinnoh's Rain]

Gameplay

01:10:509 (1) - Ayy the slider is out of the grid range
01:20:196 (8,1,2) - Not targeting on rankability but the timing for hyperdash seems to be a bit early, I think it would be better if the hyperdash starts at 01:20:259 (1,2) - so to emphasize the prominent beat at 01:20:446 - (which is also put with a strong cymbal Finish hitsound).
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Quite tricky after the hyperdash because (3) makes players stop there, how about changing it to this: *Screenshot
01:32:134 (11,1,2) - Same as 01:20:196 (8,1,2) - .

[

Overdose]

Gameplay

00:43:884 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this pattern be like this? *Screenshot
01:15:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think hyperdash can be placed at 01:15:384 (2,3) - so it would be nice if you move 01:15:384 (2) - slightly to the left.

[

Alice]

Gameplay

02:26:821 (1) - Are there any points to put the circle here? I don't find it matching any bit of the song and rhythm.

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-12-05T03:42:43+00:00

applied all

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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-12-05T05:49:55+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Recheck

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[ General]

AIMod
You still haven't check them. Fix the issues with regard to metadata inconsistencies and audio preview time conflicts.

Title
According to the metadata help from IamKwaN, the unicode title should be changed to either Marigold (feat. グリリ) or Marigold (feat. 구리리). If you go for either one, remember to add the another original name as the tag. For instance, if you chose Marigold (feat. グリリ) as the song title, go for 구리리 as the tag. Already fixed this before, but thanks!

Tags
As above-mentioned.
Also, add: Rayark (Founding company of Deemo) Sure

[ Cup]

Gameplay
01:33:759 (3,1) - Distance can be much smaller. Also the flow doesn't favor beginners, how about this: *Screenshot fixed
02:19:509 (1,2,3,4) - Weird to have this part denser than 02:16:509 (1,2,3,4) - in terms of notes. It is because the song is going to be progressively calmer since 02:16:509 - . You may try such note pattern to make it calm while different from the circle movements: *Screenshot fixed

[ Platter]

Gameplay
00:10:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part is hard for players to distinguish whether they should dash or not at particular parts. Consider increasing the distances for dashing to make sure they dash at certain points and reduce the ones that you intend to put a walk there. Also, it would be more interesting if you place at least 1 dash there, I anticipate a dash coming around 00:11:259 (3,1) - if you don't want to have double dashing at 00:12:759 (2,3) - . fixed
00:11:259 (3) - A bit strange here as the rhythm is same as 00:10:509 (1,2) - but it is mapped in a different way. fixed
00:14:821 (8,1,2,1) - Same as 00:10:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - , some jumps there are actually walkable. fixed
00:28:884 (2,3,1) - ^, move (3) to the right for a little bit more. fixed
00:30:759 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:32:821 (6,1) - ^, move 00:33:009 (1,2,3,4) - this whole part altogether to the right. fixed
00:37:509 - 00:47:821 - This entire part just after the spinner is FC'able without dashing. Consider adding a few obvious dashes to it, probably at the prominent beats such as 00:43:134 (6,1) - . Also, it is sensible to put dash at 00:47:071 (4,5) - so maybe you can move 00:46:509 (1,2,3,4) - a little further to the left, while maintaining an obvious walk distance at 00:45:759 (3,1) - . added some jumps!
00:48:009 - 00:51:571 - Same here, FC'able without dashing. Would be great to put dash at 00:49:321 (4,1) - and 00:49:884 (2,3) - . ya same
00:52:509 (5,6) - How about a dash here as well? You can do it without ruining the later-on patterns by moving 00:52:884 (6,7) - altogether to the left. x:155 would be fine here. added
00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - I recommend reducing the distances of (1,2) and (3,4) here, so players know they have to dash exactly at 00:55:884 (2,3) - and 00:56:634 (4,1) - which are stronger beats. Currently the distances are very similar so players may dash suddenly and lose track of the rhythm. fixed
00:59:259 (6,1) - Why not having a hyperdash here? Also refer to the next point which I also include some possible solutions there. added
01:00:009 - 01:05:634 - Again, this whole part has no dashes, which can be really easy and plain. Since 00:59:259 (6,1) - would be a perfect spot to capitalize a hyperdash, and if you place a hyperdash there, 01:00:009 (1) - should be in a curved shape instead of horizontal one so over-shooting is less likely to happen. One possible pattern here would be this: *Screenshot. Next, 01:01:321 (4,1) - would be a good place to put dash, same for 01:01:509 (1,2) - . So, to combine two things up, try moving 01:01:509 (1) - to the left. Lastly, I think 01:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - can put 2 dashes as well, one at 01:03:384 (2,3) - and the another at 01:04:134 (4,5) - . You can achieve this by simply moving 01:03:759 (3,4) - to the left. all fixed, thanks!
01:06:009 - 01:08:821 - Not enough dashes. How about two at 01:07:134 (4,1) - and 01:07:884 (2,3) - ? So you can move 01:07:509 (1,2) - to the left. okay
01:22:134 (6,1) - I think this is a good place to put hyperdash but the current pattern overshadows it. Try this:
*Screenshot fixed!
01:22:884 (3) - Feels strange to put whistle on the tail, it fits more at the head. sure
01:23:634 (2,1) - Still possible to catch without dashing, try moving (2) a bit more to the left. done
01:37:134 (4,1) - Where is the hyperdash :C
01:54:759 (8) - Flip this horizontally and place at the original position. The flow would be better in my opinion.kk
02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same thing as 00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,1) - . okaok
02:10:884 (2,3) - Hyperdash? To be consistent with 02:05:071 (2,3) - . the sound feels weaker here so I want to keep it as it is

[ Overdose]

Gameplay
00:43:884 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't this pattern be like this? *Screenshot fixed!
01:15:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think hyperdash can be placed at 01:15:384 (2,3) - so it would be nice if you move 01:15:384 (2) - slightly to the left. sure

[ Alice]

Gameplay
02:26:821 (1) - Are there any points to put the circle here? I don't find it matching any bit of the song and rhythm. moved it to match with the song

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-12-06T03:29:22+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Recheck

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[ Ascendance's Salad]

Gameplay
00:11:259 (2,3,4) - Reduce the distances between (2,3) and (3,4) by moving (3) to the right slightly. The distances would be at optimum if they are the same as that at 00:10:509 (1,2) - . The higher distance is intended here because of the downbeat
00:20:259 (4,1) - Ambiguous distance. Hard to judge whether dash or not. Increased
00:28:790 (4,5,6) - Reduce the distances between (4,5) and (5,6) slightly by moving (5) a bit to the right, probably a few value of x would suffice. The current one features some quick movements which may be too hard for beginners. Okay
00:46:509 (1,2) - Ah, should have reduced the distance here... I think it is too difficult because the movement at 00:45:759 (4,1,2) - makes (1) a very sharp turning point. Beginners would find troubles here as they have to change the direction real quick. You can fix this by changing the pattern of 00:45:759 (4,1) - , maybe incline (4) a bit and keep the same distance (4,1) while remain the same for (2), then the distance here would be reduced. Reduced it a bit differently
00:52:509 (1,2) - ^, reduce by moving (2) slightly closer to (1). Sure
01:04:884 (2,3) - ^, slant (2) slightly. Just did some different reduction
01:11:634 (5,1) - Ambiguous distance, maybe reduce the distance? okay
01:25:134 (4,1,2) - Pesky pattern especially for beginners. Don't use anti-flow jump pattern please, in fact this is a 1/2 quick turning so it is really difficult for them. reduced the distance but the pattern seems fine to me in the kiai section
01:26:821 (6,1,2) - Inconsistent with the dashing pattern, shouldn't it be dash at 01:26:821 (6,1) - instead? Like what you did at 01:25:134 (4,1) - . In this case, 01:27:196 - has a more powerful sound to it, which I want to emphasize with the dash.
01:28:134 (7,1) - Ambiguous distance, maybe keep the same distance like 01:28:884 (2,3) - . Increased
01:31:509 (3,1,2) - :facepalm: Not unrankable since it's exactly 2 dashes, it does not go over 2 dashes.
Gonna keep it.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Difficulties may make use of basic (1/1, 1/2) regular dashing, although no type of dash can be used more than twice consecutively.
01:35:071 (4,5,6,7) - This is really complicated, I would suggest having the dash direction the same as (5,6). So something like this would do: *Screenshot Modify the distances as well so (6,7) would not be that ambiguous. changed some distances to make it a bit more simple, but kept the general concept.
02:05:259 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:11:259 (2,3,4) - . Same as the previous intention
02:16:509 (1) - , 02:18:759 (4) - How about inclining them a bit more? So the pattern at 02:16:509 (1,2,3,4) - looks more diverse and interesting. You may also reduce the distances among them to make (4) easier to incline. Cool

Thanks~

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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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157,108,114009,2,0,L|391:126,1,214.500006546021,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,188,114759,2,0,L|454:346,1,143.000004364014,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,314,115509,6,0,P|131:223|222:133,1,214.500006546021,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,96,116259,2,0,L|89:69,1,214.500006546021,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,222,117009,2,0,L|273:206,1,214.500006546021,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,117759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
153,122,118134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,71,118509,6,0,P|469:123|405:307,1,286.000008728028,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,338,119634,2,0,L|184:340,2,71.5000021820069,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,328,120384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,251,120759,2,0,L|85:255,1,143.000004364014,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,91,121509,6,0,L|352:242,1,143.000004364014,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,237,122259,2,0,L|189:389,1,143.000004364014,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,276,123009,2,0,P|457:213|363:89,1,233.999992858887,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,41,123759,2,0,P|158:105|263:231,1,233.999992858887,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,292,124509,6,0,L|142:320,1,233.999992858887,2|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,269,125259,2,0,P|25:198|117:79,1,233.999992858887,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,126009,2,0,P|292:95|209:215,1,233.999992858887,2|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,241,126759,2,0,L|341:267,1,233.999992858887,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,327,127509,5,2,1:0:0:0:
237,358,127884,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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236,236,131259,2,0,P|272:171|170:61,1,233.999992858887,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,67,132009,2,0,L|320:48,1,233.999992858887,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,66,132759,2,0,L|422:231,1,155.999995239258,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,326,133509,5,2,1:0:0:0:
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229,136,134821,2,0,L|215:49,1,77.999997619629,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
393,254,135571,2,0,L|412:154,1,77.999997619629,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,136,136134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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207,166,137259,2,0,L|220:73,2,71.5000021820069,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,89,139509,6,0,L|109:69,1,195,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,118,140259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,142134,12,2,145509,0:0:0:0:

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-12-06T04:06:34+00:00

double post cause i irc modded the top diff with spec:

2017-12-05 22:45 Ascendance: asdfhgs
2017-12-05 22:45 Spectator: asdfasdf
2017-12-05 22:46 Ascendance: ready
2017-12-05 22:46 Spectator: go
2017-12-05 22:46 Ascendance: 00:35:446 (2,1) - 
2017-12-05 22:46 Ascendance: feels too edge dashy to me
2017-12-05 22:47 Ascendance: moving 00:35:634 (1,2) - to x130 feels much nicer
2017-12-05 22:48 Spectator: reduced
2017-12-05 22:49 Ascendance: 00:39:571 - probably should add a circle here since you emphasize the syllables in places like 00:45:571 (2) - 
2017-12-05 22:49 Spectator: u r right
2017-12-05 22:49 Spectator: fixed
2017-12-05 22:50 Ascendance: 01:00:571 (2,3) - no hdash here but hdash 01:02:071 (2,3) - on same sound
2017-12-05 22:50 Ascendance: and 01:02:821 (4,1) - , etc
2017-12-05 22:50 Ascendance: should probably add hdash to make it consistent
2017-12-05 22:50 Ascendance: same case with 01:06:571 (2,3) - 
2017-12-05 22:51 Spectator: yeah fixed
2017-12-05 22:51 Ascendance: 01:20:259 (9) - super super strong sound on 01:20:446 - , i'd suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9700307
2017-12-05 22:52 Spectator: ah wait i think i'm gonna keep 01:06:009 (1,2,3,4) -  because it's hard to put hdash with current pattern
2017-12-05 22:53 Ascendance: then for that one, you should probably remove hdash between 01:08:071 (2,3) - 
2017-12-05 22:54 Spectator: sure
2017-12-05 22:54 Ascendance: did you do the one at 1:20?
2017-12-05 22:55 Spectator: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9700318
2017-12-05 22:55 Ascendance: cool
2017-12-05 22:55 Ascendance: 01:24:477 - skipping sound here
2017-12-05 22:56 Ascendance: (and 01:28:040 - )
2017-12-05 22:58 Spectator: okay done
2017-12-05 22:58 Ascendance: last thing
2017-12-05 22:58 Ascendance: 01:32:259 (1) - same case as before 
2017-12-05 22:58 Ascendance: (strong sound on 01:32:446 - )
2017-12-05 22:59 Ascendance: also maybe an hdash between 01:33:571 (4,5) - would be nice since there's a pretty big hit there
2017-12-05 22:59 Spectator: hmm
2017-12-05 22:59 Spectator: yeah but I actually want to keep it
2017-12-05 22:59 Spectator: even the one at 01:19:946 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
2017-12-05 22:59 Spectator: i know it has strong sound but as it comes right after the 1/6 lol
2017-12-05 23:00 Ascendance: just sounds so bad being on a slider end to me lol
2017-12-05 23:00 Spectator: ya but still i feel fine with it
2017-12-05 23:02 Spectator: http://puu.sh/yAluO/26313dac93.jpg
2017-12-05 23:02 Spectator: how about this?
2017-12-05 23:02 Ascendance: whats this one from
2017-12-05 23:02 Spectator: 01:33:571 (4,5) -
2017-12-05 23:02 Ascendance: ah yea sure
2017-12-05 23:03 Ascendance: for 01:20:259 (9) - and stuff
2017-12-05 23:03 Spectator: nice
2017-12-05 23:03 Ascendance: i think it would be better if it was seperated rather than a slider
2017-12-05 23:03 Ascendance: like 2 circles instead
2017-12-05 23:03 Spectator: yeah same
2017-12-05 23:03 Ascendance: that way the sound is on an active note instead of a sliderend
2017-12-05 23:03 Spectator: I'll fix it
2017-12-05 23:03 Ascendance: okay
2017-12-05 23:03 Ascendance: good compromise
2017-12-05 23:05 Spectator: gonna upload it now
2017-12-05 23:05 Ascendance: now i post for my free kd
2017-12-05 23:05 Spectator: owo
2017-12-05 23:05 Spectator: kd farmer

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-12-06T04:06:51+00:00

all updated!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-12-06T05:35:52+00:00

One last thing

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[

Cup]

02:20:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe change it to this for better flow: *Screenshot

[

Sinnoh's Rain]

01:18:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why is this part mapped with stream but 01:30:009 (1,2,3,4) - this with simple slider patterns? They are inconsistent to each other (and I think streams don't match the song there)
01:26:633 (1) - Remove NC.

[

Alice]

01:24:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this: *Screenshot
01:40:134 (7) - Move to x:16 because:
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Spectator

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Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-12-06T05:45:02+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
One last thing

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Cup]
02:20:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe change it to this for better flow: *Screenshot fixed!

[ Sinnoh's Rain]
01:18:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why is this part mapped with stream but 01:30:009 (1,2,3,4) - this with simple slider patterns? They are inconsistent to each other (and I think streams don't match the song there)
01:26:633 (1) - Remove NC.

[ Alice]
01:24:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this: *Screenshot fixed
01:40:134 (7) - Move to x:16 because: fixed
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Call me after this

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

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Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-12-06T06:18:07+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
01:18:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why is this part mapped with stream but 01:30:009 (1,2,3,4) - this with simple slider patterns? They are inconsistent to each other (and I think streams don't match the song there) The first time this pattern plays, the song's stream is much more prominent in the music, there's very little going on besides that. On the second time, the piano becomes less prominent and violins are added. I'm following how the song changes structure with new rhythms for new sounds.
01:26:633 (1) - Remove NC ya

@spec remove the nc

Spectator

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Spectator 2017-12-06T06:27:41+00:00

Updated!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-12-06T13:07:11+00:00

Shine out!

Spectator

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Spectator 2017-12-06T14:27:35+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
Shine out!

Thank you!!

MBomb

MBomb 2017-12-11T20:50:37+00:00

hello

[Cup]

00:03:759 (3) - Distancing on this feels a little small given the pitches here, maybe increase it a bit to x:240? Even for an intro it's a bit too weak for my taste.
00:09:009 (3) - Pitch on this is the start of the strength increase, so a higher distance to match this would be nice. Try x:280.
00:13:509 (1) - More emphasis on the instrument change would be cool. Maybe try x:168 on it.
00:17:163 (3) - Considering the strength and pitch on this note, it feels really weak right now. May be nice to move it to x:163. This also stacks it with the note after the short break, which I think is cool.
00:24:009 (1) - Feels really underemphasised by the current distancing following the line change here, and also the pitch on the next note feels a little uncompensated for. Trying x:352 would feel good.
00:46:509 (1) - The sudden instrument addition here feels really ignored by the current distancing. Maybe move it to x:288 and try a curve like this?
01:02:259 (2) - This feels really awkward to play for a cup player currently, as there is a slowdown into the sliderhead, followed by a speedup for the start of the slider, and then a slowdown again for the slider body. Would be nicer to have it as a constant slowdown by increasing this to x:248.
01:30:009 (1) - Feels really underemphasised to have the movement into this so weak, especially considering the similar vocal at 01:18:009 (1) - had such a stronger distancing to it. Maybe try increasing the ds on this to be around 1.1x as well?
01:56:259 (2) - Similar instance of a really weird slowdown. Increase it to x:256 to avoid that.
02:00:009 (1) - The addition of a new instrument feels quite underemphasised here. Try x:320 on it and then a shape similar to this?

Nice cup.

[Salad]

00:04:509 (1,2) - Maybe a little too strong of a non-dash to this considering it's in the intro. Try x:296.
00:09:759 (4) - Another quite ambiguous distancing to it. Maybe make it slightly more comfortable with a ctrl+g and moving it to x:408?
00:12:009 (3,4) - Not really any reason to make 3 such a high distance considering the intensity is decreasing. Maybe try just having the distancing decrease to match that by moving 3 to x:352 and 4 to x:472.
00:23:259 (5) - I understand your reasoning behind making this a dash for the strong pitch change, however I feel just having it as a strong movement would be fitting considering the rest of the dashes you've used here. I also feel the movement to the next note would be nice if it was higher to emphasise the line change, so maybe try moving this to x:168 with a slider shape like this.
01:30:009 (1) - Hmm, dash to this would be nice considering the strong vocal here that's emphasised by the kiai reset. x:352 with a slider like this.
01:31:509 (3) - Here would be better to do a 1/1 slider to be consistent with the first kiai, and also to avoid that double dash which feels kinda forced here considering the sudden spike.
01:41:071 (2) - Firstly, I'd recommend making this a 1/2 repeat slider to better represent the piano in the middle of this slider, and secondly I'd recommend an increase in distance to fit the dash patterns followed throughout this kiais with the strong piano. Try making it on x:248 and move 3 to x:432.
02:01:509 (1) - Really strong movement for a non-dash here. Try Ctrl+G on it and move it to x:344.
02:03:009 (3) - Distancing to this one is also pretty strong for a non-dash here, could throw a salad player off. Try starting it at x:384 with a shape like this.

Masterpiece salad, honestly.

[Platter]

00:19:509 - to 00:30:009 - feels a bit weird to have such an intense part of the song have no HDashes at all, even though I understand your reasoning behind it, it's just super weird to me.
00:48:009 (1) - First HDash and it feels super strongly forced against the wall, would definitely recommend reducing this to x:480.
01:01:509 (1) - Quite strong distancing to this given the direction change just before the jump to it, maybe reduce it slightly to x:112?
01:07:134 (4) - Distancing here is quite strong especially considering other dash distances. Try x:216.

Really unsure about the inconsistency of distances in this, and the ambiguity of a lot of distances. Will try to get someone else to look at this.

[Rain]

01:06:009 (1) - Pretty strong HDash which feels quite forced against the wall as it is now (and breaks the guideline which doesn't really seem to have a reason to be broken here), maybe try reducing it to x:480.
01:19:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - HDash to 01:20:446 (1) - is literally to x:512, really highly not recommended to have a HDash against the wall like this, try x:456 on this section.
01:26:447 (2,3) - A 1/4 antiflow wiggle after a HDash is a huge difficulty spike here, especially considering this is just a rain, would very highly suggest making this triple flow by making 2 horizontal to the right and doing ctrl+g on 3.
01:28:697 (2,3,4,1,2) - This is a ridiculous difficulty spike for a rain, hyper densities like that are simply too weird to read for an average Rain player. Also, I would highly suggest doing a HDash to 01:28:697 (2) - if anywhere, since that's when the huge instrument change comes in, so not having a HDash to that feels very underemphasised.
01:32:446 (2) - Such a strong HDash to antiflow may be a little difficult here, try reducing the HDash strength slightly by moving it to x:464 and doing a shape like this.
01:37:509 (1) - I really feel this should have a HDash to it, fits very well with your current HDash structure, which makes it feel very strange that there isn't one here.
01:42:009 (1) - HDash to this could be nice to emphasise the strong pitch and end of section there.
02:06:009 (1) - Could be nice to have a HDash to this for the bass and vocal, similar to 02:04:509 (1) - ?

I actually really love this rain, but where there are issues, they're very glaring ones that really require fixing.

[Overdose]

00:03:759 (4) - Would really be nice to have a higher distancing to this, considering the pitch is definitely stronger than 00:03:009 (3) - , yet the distancing to it is weaker currently.
00:39:009 (1) - Normal dash to this would be nice considering the strength of the vocal, try x:176 on it?
00:45:009 (5) - Try it on x:400 for the same reason as above. (Also shouldn't this be an NC for consistency instead of the next note?)
01:00:009 (1) - Quite difficult to catch this after the previous movement, maybe try x:136 just to make it slightly less unexpected after the antiflow?
01:00:759 (3) - Pretty strong HDash really close to the wall here, would highly suggest a reduction to x:496 both to fit with the guidline and reduce the strength slightly.
01:07:509 (1) - Very strong dash into this considering the antiflow just before it, maybe reduce it a tiny bit to x:88.
01:24:946 (2) - Hmm, strange slowdown into speedup into slowdown here because of the slider end being a shorter distance than the next note. Maybe move the slider a bit to the right, like x:328, to make the flow a little neater?
01:32:821 (3) - x:488 would be a lot nicer here to fit the guideline, not necessary of course but I see no reason to really break it here since this keeps the HDashes.
01:43:509 (1) - Whilst I understand the reasoning for the decreasing distance here, the piano note here is particularly strong, a normal dash would suit nicely here, especially considering you used a HDash in the next diff. x:160?
02:26:868 (1) - Fuck this note. (Nothing wrong with it, you don't need to change it, but it baited me

)

[Alice]

00:03:759 (3) - Again same as overdose, stronger distancing for the stronger pitch on this would be nice.
00:12:759 (3) - Pitch is decreasing here, so why is this a HDash when the jump to 00:12:009 (1) - is a normal dash? Would be best to make it a normal dash to this too.
00:39:009 (1) - Would be nice to have a dash to this, the vocal pitch is strong enough to imply one.
01:18:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really feel like it'd be nice to map the 1/4s in this section considering this is the highest difficulty and that 1/4 is strong enough to at least be mapped here in my opinion.
01:42:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - I feel the strength into the HDash into this slowdown causes far too fast of a velocity change here, would greatly recommend reducing the HDash strength quite a bit by moving to this to the right, try x:160 on this section.

Alright done! Will call someone to look at the platter myself, so don't worry about that.

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

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Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-12-13T02:10:06+00:00

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Spectator 2017-12-13T02:25:46+00:00

MBomb wrote:
hello

[Cup]

00:03:759 (3) - Distancing on this feels a little small given the pitches here, maybe increase it a bit to x:240? Even for an intro it's a bit too weak for my taste.
00:09:009 (3) - Pitch on this is the start of the strength increase, so a higher distance to match this would be nice. Try x:280.
00:13:509 (1) - More emphasis on the instrument change would be cool. Maybe try x:168 on it.
00:17:163 (3) - Considering the strength and pitch on this note, it feels really weak right now. May be nice to move it to x:163. This also stacks it with the note after the short break, which I think is cool.
00:24:009 (1) - Feels really underemphasised by the current distancing following the line change here, and also the pitch on the next note feels a little uncompensated for. Trying x:352 would feel good.
00:46:509 (1) - The sudden instrument addition here feels really ignored by the current distancing. Maybe move it to x:288 and try a curve like this?
01:02:259 (2) - This feels really awkward to play for a cup player currently, as there is a slowdown into the sliderhead, followed by a speedup for the start of the slider, and then a slowdown again for the slider body. Would be nicer to have it as a constant slowdown by increasing this to x:248.
01:30:009 (1) - Feels really underemphasised to have the movement into this so weak, especially considering the similar vocal at 01:18:009 (1) - had such a stronger distancing to it. Maybe try increasing the ds on this to be around 1.1x as well?
01:56:259 (2) - Similar instance of a really weird slowdown. Increase it to x:256 to avoid that.
02:00:009 (1) - The addition of a new instrument feels quite underemphasised here. Try x:320 on it and then a shape similar to this?

Nice cup. Thank you, all fixed.

[Platter]

00:19:509 - to 00:30:009 - feels a bit weird to have such an intense part of the song have no HDashes at all, even though I understand your reasoning behind it, it's just super weird to me. added some HDashes, must be way better now
00:48:009 (1) - First HDash and it feels super strongly forced against the wall, would definitely recommend reducing this to x:480.
01:01:509 (1) - Quite strong distancing to this given the direction change just before the jump to it, maybe reduce it slightly to x:112?
01:07:134 (4) - Distancing here is quite strong especially considering other dash distances. Try x:216.

Really unsure about the inconsistency of distances in this, and the ambiguity of a lot of distances. Will try to get someone else to look at this. Sure, all fixed as well

[Overdose]

00:03:759 (4) - Would really be nice to have a higher distancing to this, considering the pitch is definitely stronger than 00:03:009 (3) - , yet the distancing to it is weaker currently.
00:39:009 (1) - Normal dash to this would be nice considering the strength of the vocal, try x:176 on it?
00:45:009 (5) - Try it on x:400 for the same reason as above. (Also shouldn't this be an NC for consistency instead of the next note?)
01:00:009 (1) - Quite difficult to catch this after the previous movement, maybe try x:136 just to make it slightly less unexpected after the antiflow?
01:00:759 (3) - Pretty strong HDash really close to the wall here, would highly suggest a reduction to x:496 both to fit with the guidline and reduce the strength slightly.
01:07:509 (1) - Very strong dash into this considering the antiflow just before it, maybe reduce it a tiny bit to x:88.
01:24:946 (2) - Hmm, strange slowdown into speedup into slowdown here because of the slider end being a shorter distance than the next note. Maybe move the slider a bit to the right, like x:328, to make the flow a little neater? imo current one feels fine
01:32:821 (3) - x:488 would be a lot nicer here to fit the guideline, not necessary of course but I see no reason to really break it here since this keeps the HDashes.
01:43:509 (1) - Whilst I understand the reasoning for the decreasing distance here, the piano note here is particularly strong, a normal dash would suit nicely here, especially considering you used a HDash in the next diff. x:160? yeah but for this diff I'd love to keep it as it is because it's my attempt to express the 'Flowers fall'
02:26:868 (1) - Fuck this note. (Nothing wrong with it, you don't need to change it, but it baited me )

No comment means fixed, thanks!

[Alice]

00:03:759 (3) - Again same as overdose, stronger distancing for the stronger pitch on this would be nice.
00:12:759 (3) - Pitch is decreasing here, so why is this a HDash when the jump to 00:12:009 (1) - is a normal dash? Would be best to make it a normal dash to this too.
00:39:009 (1) - Would be nice to have a dash to this, the vocal pitch is strong enough to imply one.
01:18:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really feel like it'd be nice to map the 1/4s in this section considering this is the highest difficulty and that 1/4 is strong enough to at least be mapped here in my opinion.
01:42:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - I feel the strength into the HDash into this slowdown causes far too fast of a velocity change here, would greatly recommend reducing the HDash strength quite a bit by moving to this to the right, try x:160 on this section.

Alright done! Will call someone to look at the platter myself, so don't worry about that. All fixed

Thanks for the mod!!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-12-13T03:17:27+00:00

MBomb wrote:
hello

[Salad]

00:04:509 (1,2) - Maybe a little too strong of a non-dash to this considering it's in the intro. Try x:296. sure
00:09:759 (4) - Another quite ambiguous distancing to it. Maybe make it slightly more comfortable with a ctrl+g and moving it to x:408? hmm I wanted it to be a little farther than normal, and I don't find it to be too ambiguous here. I think I'll leave it as is
00:12:009 (3,4) - Not really any reason to make 3 such a high distance considering the intensity is decreasing. Maybe try just having the distancing decrease to match that by moving 3 to x:352 and 4 to x:472. yeah as I said in earlier replies, I want to emphasize the important bass sound here,
as well as the transition between the two levels of intensity, so I feel it's okay!
00:23:259 (5) - I understand your reasoning behind making this a dash for the strong pitch change, however I feel just having it as a strong movement would be fitting considering the rest of the dashes you've used here. I also feel the movement to the next note would be nice if it was higher to emphasise the line change, so maybe try moving this to x:168 with a slider shape like this. different coordinate but same idea
01:30:009 (1) - Hmm, dash to this would be nice considering the strong vocal here that's emphasised by the kiai reset. x:352 with a slider like this. felt a bit too far to me so it's a tiny bit lower but yeah changed
01:31:509 (3) - Here would be better to do a 1/1 slider to be consistent with the first kiai, and also to avoid that double dash which feels kinda forced here considering the sudden spike. hm okay
01:41:071 (2) - Firstly, I'd recommend making this a 1/2 repeat slider to better represent the piano in the middle of this slider, and secondly I'd recommend an increase in distance to fit the dash patterns followed throughout this kiais with the strong piano. Try making it on x:248 and move 3 to x:432. sure
02:01:509 (1) - Really strong movement for a non-dash here. Try Ctrl+G on it and move it to x:344. sure
02:03:009 (3) - Distancing to this one is also pretty strong for a non-dash here, could throw a salad player off. Try starting it at x:384 with a shape like this. this is an intended dash, so i increased it to make that more apparent.

Masterpiece salad, honestly. practice makes perfect <:

Alright done! Will call someone to look at the platter myself, so don't worry about that.

Thanks for modding~

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Spectator

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Spectator 2017-12-13T03:20:35+00:00

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Nokashi

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Nokashi 2017-12-18T14:18:45+00:00

Got asked by Mbomb to give the platter a check!

Platter

00:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Potientially in order to offer more emphasis on higher pitched violin sounds here 00:01:884 (2,3) - and here 00:03:384 (5,6) - you could increase the distancing by 0.10-0.20x and offer a bit more gradually in spacing since 00:03:759 (6) - as pitch is definitely stronger than 00:02:259 (3) -
00:07:509 (1) - Ideally in order to fully group the piano sounds here, I would recommend going for a 1/2 slider here as well to map the piano tick here
00:12:009 (1,2) - Not the ideal place for a dash, definitely. The pace isnt fluctuating, as it is continuous from the beginning of (1) so it seems awkward to place a lot of emphasis here and not place in stronger sounds in the past. Alternatively you can move the dash here 00:13:134 (3,1) - as this tick marks the new stanza
00:14:821 (8,1) - Inconsistent spacing with 00:14:071 (4,5) - even though the first one is definitely stronger. Keeping a healthy 2.30x DS here too seems like the best option!
00:20:071 (2,3) - Snare deserves the dash here, 00:21:571 (2,3) - as this snare got a nice dash distance as well. Since i think the snare present here needs more emphasis, I'd suggest both having that dash
00:22:134 (4,1) - the osu!catch RC states that, on a Platter Difficulty : Hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.. Therefore i'd reckon this is an unrankable issue
00:26:634 (7,1) - Similar point as above ^
00:31:884 (2,3) - Suprisingly underwhelming spacing, when similar sounds here 00:30:384 (2,3) - 00:31:134 (4,1) - . Even if your intention was to gradually reduce spacing, you need to soften it up as this being a totally walkable distance gives awkward feedback to me
00:45:009 (4,5,6) - You could play around with more sliders here in order to emphasise the held vocals more. Here's the rhythm I recommend. Ticker starting on 00:45:009 -
00:49:321 (4,1) - Ambiguous dash distancing, imo it really needs the dash, and Therefore should be made more clear
00:52:321 (4,5) - Inconsistent in a sense that the previous vocal was a HDash and this was a mere walk, I'd reckon this is missing its needed emphasis
00:54:009 (1,2,3) - Rythm here seems a bit too filler as it gets really dense for something not so prominent, the vocals only get choppier on 00:54:946 - . Consequently, Here's what im potentially recommending. Ticker starting on 00:54:009 -
00:55:134 (4,1) - Would like to see more emphasis here since the vocal is a bit stronger than the rest, yet it gets pretty linear movement
00:58:134 (4) - Vocal is a bit more continuous here so I would have liked to see a 1/2 slider instead of circle to emphasize that
01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - About this section:
1. I find that that minimal emphasis is presented in the vocal transitions 01:00:571 (2,3) - 01:01:321 (4,1) - 01:01:509 (1,2) - 01:02:821 (3,1) - As not enough spacing is implemented to bring out this vocal strength
2. 01:01:509 (1,2) - Would have been neater if (1) went up to here 01:01:884 - followed by a circle here 01:02:071 - to better reflect the song
3. Considering dash/HDash structure, 01:01:321 (4,1) - This should be a HDash, while 01:00:571 (2,3) - and 01:02:071 (2,3) - ( the (2) here is from the previous suggestion, the circle at 01:02:071 ) should be more apparent dashes
01:06:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , Even though this measure is exactly the same musically as the previous section i discussed above, it used a pretty linear rhythm composition consisting of only 1/2 sliders when the rhythm is a bit more complex than that. Making it like the previous measure will be more rhythmically corrent. Same points as that section ( ones stated above ) apply
01:18:384 (2,3) - HDash could fit here to account for the snare. Also 01:18:759 (3,4) - distancing here is minimal, make sure to rearrange this
01:22:509 (2) - I Would turn this into a 1/4 reverse as well, similar to 01:22:884 (3) - to better reflect the 1/4 sounds here. Also this is literally on the edge of the playfield sitting on x:0 . If you could at least move it to x:16, would be nice
01:23:634 (2,1) - Also a beat in need of a HDash
01:23:259 (4) - Unecessary NC
01:24:009 (1,2) - Ideally, you could move the 1/4 reverse a 1/2 behind, forming a new rhythm like this, and offering more emphasis on the more prominent triple sound here
01:25:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overall the current rhythm fails to represent the song the way i see it . Considering this rhythm instead! the 1/4 thats mapped here is more prominent. Spacing is up to you, taking into consideration the stronger sounds.
01:29:071 (2,3) - HDash here to better reflect the snare
01:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - This can definitely become a more interesting pattern with more spacing and maybe a HDash or two
01:41:446 (6,7) - Definitely deserves more of a dash/HDash here
01:54:009 (6,7,8) - You can try something denser like this
02:03:759 (1,1) - Uninteresting standstill here considering theres no emphasis to get to the next downbeat

These are my mains concerns with the diff. overall the rhythm is mostly ok for a platter, distancing can be wonky at times as there is inconsistency in Dash/HDash structures and sometimes theres fluctuation in sounds chosen to be dashes to or Hyperdashed to.

Thats it, Good Luck~!

Spectator

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Spectator 2017-12-19T01:52:57+00:00

Nokashi wrote:
Got asked by Mbomb to give the platter a check!

Platter
00:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Potientially in order to offer more emphasis on higher pitched violin sounds here 00:01:884 (2,3) - and here 00:03:384 (5,6) - you could increase the distancing by 0.10-0.20x and offer a bit more gradually in spacing since 00:03:759 (6) - as pitch is definitely stronger than 00:02:259 (3) -
00:07:509 (1) - Ideally in order to fully group the piano sounds here, I would recommend going for a 1/2 slider here as well to map the piano tick here
00:12:009 (1,2) - Not the ideal place for a dash, definitely. The pace isnt fluctuating, as it is continuous from the beginning of (1) so it seems awkward to place a lot of emphasis here and not place in stronger sounds in the past. Alternatively you can move the dash here 00:13:134 (3,1) - as this tick marks the new stanza
00:14:821 (8,1) - Inconsistent spacing with 00:14:071 (4,5) - even though the first one is definitely stronger. Keeping a healthy 2.30x DS here too seems like the best option! I think it's fine as it is because the pitch is actually lower
00:20:071 (2,3) - Snare deserves the dash here, 00:21:571 (2,3) - as this snare got a nice dash distance as well. Since i think the snare present here needs more emphasis, I'd suggest both having that dash
00:22:134 (4,1) - the osu!catch RC states that, on a Platter Difficulty : Hypers combined with antiflow patterns must not be used.. Therefore i'd reckon this is an unrankable issue
00:26:634 (7,1) - Similar point as above ^
00:31:884 (2,3) - Suprisingly underwhelming spacing, when similar sounds here 00:30:384 (2,3) - 00:31:134 (4,1) - . Even if your intention was to gradually reduce spacing, you need to soften it up as this being a totally walkable distance gives awkward feedback to me
00:45:009 (4,5,6) - You could play around with more sliders here in order to emphasise the held vocals more. Here's the rhythm I recommend. Ticker starting on 00:45:009 - I want to follow the background sound here so gonna keep this
00:49:321 (4,1) - Ambiguous dash distancing, imo it really needs the dash, and Therefore should be made more clear
00:52:321 (4,5) - Inconsistent in a sense that the previous vocal was a HDash and this was a mere walk, I'd reckon this is missing its needed emphasis
00:54:009 (1,2,3) - Rythm here seems a bit too filler as it gets really dense for something not so prominent, the vocals only get choppier on 00:54:946 - . Consequently, Here's what im potentially recommending. Ticker starting on 00:54:009 -
00:55:134 (4,1) - Would like to see more emphasis here since the vocal is a bit stronger than the rest, yet it gets pretty linear movement
00:58:134 (4) - Vocal is a bit more continuous here so I would have liked to see a 1/2 slider instead of circle to emphasize that
01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - About this section:
I find that that minimal emphasis is presented in the vocal transitions 01:00:571 (2,3) - 01:01:321 (4,1) - 01:01:509 (1,2) - 01:02:821 (3,1) - As not enough spacing is implemented to bring out this vocal strength
01:01:509 (1,2) - Would have been neater if (1) went up to here 01:01:884 - followed by a circle here 01:02:071 - to better reflect the song I prefer the current ;w;
Considering dash/HDash structure, 01:01:321 (4,1) - This should be a HDash, while 01:00:571 (2,3) - and 01:02:071 (2,3) - ( the (2) here is from the previous suggestion, the circle at 01:02:071 ) should be more apparent dashes
01:06:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , Even though this measure is exactly the same musically as the previous section i discussed above, it used a pretty linear rhythm composition consisting of only 1/2 sliders when the rhythm is a bit more complex than that. Making it like the previous measure will be more rhythmically corrent. Same points as that section ( ones stated above ) apply yeah but I wanna keep this as a type of emphasizing
01:18:384 (2,3) - HDash could fit here to account for the snare. Also 01:18:759 (3,4) - distancing here is minimal, make sure to rearrange this
01:22:509 (2) - I Would turn this into a 1/4 reverse as well, similar to 01:22:884 (3) - to better reflect the 1/4 sounds here. Also this is literally on the edge of the playfield sitting on x:0 . If you could at least move it to x:16, would be nice fixed the only placement here because I don't want to let two 1/4s come in a row
01:23:634 (2,1) - Also a beat in need of a HDash
01:23:259 (4) - Unecessary NC
01:24:009 (1,2) - Ideally, you could move the 1/4 reverse a 1/2 behind, forming a new rhythm like this, and offering more emphasis on the more prominent triple sound here current one feels so comfortable tho
01:25:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Overall the current rhythm fails to represent the song the way i see it . Considering this rhythm instead! the 1/4 thats mapped here is more prominent. Spacing is up to you, taking into consideration the stronger sounds. fixed in a bit different way but it feels better now
01:29:071 (2,3) - HDash here to better reflect the snare normal dash is enough imo
01:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - This can definitely become a more interesting pattern with more spacing and maybe a HDash or two
01:41:446 (6,7) - Definitely deserves more of a dash/HDash here
01:54:009 (6,7,8) - You can try something denser like this sure but didn't add note
02:03:759 (1,1) - Uninteresting standstill here considering theres no emphasis to get to the next downbeat
These are my mains concerns with the diff. overall the rhythm is mostly ok for a platter, distancing can be wonky at times as there is inconsistency in Dash/HDash structures and sometimes theres fluctuation in sounds chosen to be dashes to or Hyperdashed to.

Thats it, Good Luck~!

Others are all fixed
Thanks for mod!

MBomb

MBomb 2017-12-30T04:44:42+00:00

Sorry for long wait, christmas leaves me unable to come on osu very much at all so whenever I came on I was awful

Qualified <3

Spectator

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Spectator 2017-12-30T05:17:50+00:00

MBomb wrote:
Sorry for long wait, christmas leaves me unable to come on osu very much at all so whenever I came on I was awful

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Thank you!! <3

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Nelly 2017-12-30T11:05:20+00:00

Holy Spec great map once again

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