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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 12월 19일 화요일 at 오전 10:53:15

Artist: M2U
Title: Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Source: Deemo
Tags: Ascendance Sinnoh グリリ NICODE Rayark SQUAR SQUARE MUSIQ Narae Hans Diversity.
BPM: 160
Filesize: 8817kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alice (5.48 stars, 528 notes)
  2. Ascendance's Salad (2.22 stars, 235 notes)
  3. Cup (1.51 stars, 208 notes)
  4. Overdose (4.94 stars, 486 notes)
  5. Platter (3.04 stars, 359 notes)
  6. Sinnoh's Rain (4.01 stars, 422 notes)


Download: M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rank #9: M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri)

Storyboard: Done by me

Alice: Done by me
Overdose: Done by me
Rain: Done by Sinnoh
Platter: Done by me
Salad: Done by Ascendance
Cup: Done by me



Bubbled by alienflybot
Qualified by MBomb
posted
Cool storyboard tbh
posted

CLSW wrote:

Cool storyboard tbh
thank you!
I'll finish it someday
posted

Spectator wrote:

someday
posted

Ascendance wrote:

Spectator wrote:

someday
itsu no hi ka
posted
[General]
  1. A modding assistant detected that the file Border Mask.png isn't used at all on the storyboard. Either consider deleting it or just ignore this if you're gonna use it later on
  2. Epilepsy warning is not activated in Salad, Platter, Rain and Alice. Consider activating it due to the storyboard's moderately quick strobing at the kiai section.
[Ascendance's Salad]
  1. Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP.
  2. 01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk
  3. 01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit.
  4. 01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it.
  5. 01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well.
  6. 01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there.
  7. 01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here.
  8. 01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :>
[Platter]
  1. 00:09:384 (6,7,8) - Move these to x:107 to make the curve smoother
  2. 01:00:009 (1) - I think this slider is lacking of proper emphasis. Modify 00:59:259 (6) - the curve of this slider and move 01:00:009 (1) - this one a bunch more to the left so that an hyperdash is triggered between the two and that should do.
  3. 01:23:259 (1,2,1) - According to the rules of the ranking criteria, "Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other.", so... 3 hyperdashes in a row seems kinda too much? Even though the sounds they're placed at are reasonably strong, consider nerfing these for the sake of meeting the rules :>
  4. 01:39:571 (3,4,1) - Same as before here.
  5. 01:54:009 (6) - Maybe move to x:203 to make it more of a progressively increasing distance curve?
  6. 02:20:821 (4) - Move this note so that the distance from the previous one is 0,40x, then move 02:20:446 (2,3,4) - all these to x:152? Makes the curve less edgy/sharp and flows better to me.
  7. 02:22:134 (1) - I think starting this spinner from 02:21:946 - here instead can still fit nicely, since this is a platter and having 1/2 of a beat of spacing between an object and a spinner is ok.
[Sinnoh's Rain]
  1. 00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c:
  2. 01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here.
  3. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient.
    02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now.
[Overdose]
  1. 00:04:884 (3) - Move this note to x:43 instead? Feels less sharp of a curve to me.
  2. 02:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are not snapped correctly, please resnap.
  3. 01:09:009 (1,2) - The lack of movement between these objects feels a bit awkward. I've been testing around some stuff and I think that by ctrl+h'ing them and then moving them to x:322 solves the issue rather neatly.
  4. 01:26:634 (3) - Tilt this slider a bit more vertically for better flow, like this: http://puu.sh/wSh9V/ec2e72d08c.jpg
  5. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Move the whole to x:273 or so, right now the first slider is easily overdashable and has been causing me unnecessary shitmisses :>
  6. 02:16:321 - Maybe place a note here as well? at x:106 fits nicely to me.
[Alice]
  1. 00:17:013 (1) - I'm pretty sure I can hear 4 piano notes here, so I'd recommend to change this repeat to 1/12 instead of 1/4.
  2. 00:42:946 (3) - I suggest to move this note to x:208 so that the curve isn't that edgy/sharp.
  3. 00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uh... I think these notes are too much time over the left side of the playfield? Try to spread them a bit more to the right side as well to cover all places equally (or at least so that I don't get my OCD triggered, whichever comes first :P)
  4. 01:03:759 (3) - Move to x:96 for better emphasis to the cymbal sound? Also for consistency with hyperdashes.
  5. 01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Me thinks these look all similar to the way you've mapped them in the overdose difficulty (assuming this diff was just intended to be a carbon copy of the overdose diff but with harder patterns on the kiai, it's only natural, but still). Consider rearranging them in different positions so that they're not so reminiscent of the previous diff?
That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)
posted

Hareimu wrote:

[General]
  1. A modding assistant detected that the file Border Mask.png isn't used at all on the storyboard. Either consider deleting it or just ignore this if you're gonna use it later on
  2. Epilepsy warning is not activated in Salad, Platter, Rain and Alice. Consider activating it due to the storyboard's moderately quick strobing at the kiai section.
[Ascendance's Salad]
  1. Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP.
  2. 01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk
  3. 01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit.
  4. 01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it.
  5. 01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well.
  6. 01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there.
  7. 01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here.
  8. 01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :>
[Platter]
  1. 00:09:384 (6,7,8) - Move these to x:107 to make the curve smoother
  2. 01:00:009 (1) - I think this slider is lacking of proper emphasis. Modify 00:59:259 (6) - the curve of this slider and move 01:00:009 (1) - this one a bunch more to the left so that an hyperdash is triggered between the two and that should do. rearranged a pattern a bit to emphasize it more as I personally prefer how the current slider works
  3. 01:23:259 (1,2,1) - According to the rules of the ranking criteria, "Basic hyperdashes (1/1, 1/2) may begin to appear, but must not be used in conjunction with each other.", so... 3 hyperdashes in a row seems kinda too much? Even though the sounds they're placed at are reasonably strong, consider nerfing these for the sake of meeting the rules :>
  4. 01:39:571 (3,4,1) - Same as before here.
  5. 01:54:009 (6) - Maybe move to x:203 to make it more of a progressively increasing distance curve?
  6. 02:20:821 (4) - Move this note so that the distance from the previous one is 0,40x, then move 02:20:446 (2,3,4) - all these to x:152? Makes the curve less edgy/sharp and flows better to me.
  7. 02:22:134 (1) - I think starting this spinner from 02:21:946 - here instead can still fit nicely, since this is a platter and having 1/2 of a beat of spacing between an object and a spinner is ok.
[Sinnoh's Rain]
  1. 00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c:
  2. 01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here.
  3. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient.
    02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now.
[Overdose]
  1. 00:04:884 (3) - Move this note to x:43 instead? Feels less sharp of a curve to me.
  2. 02:01:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - These sliders are not snapped correctly, please resnap.
  3. 01:09:009 (1,2) - The lack of movement between these objects feels a bit awkward. I've been testing around some stuff and I think that by ctrl+h'ing them and then moving them to x:322 solves the issue rather neatly. I don't get it lol I've done what you said and it plays awkward
  4. 01:26:634 (3) - Tilt this slider a bit more vertically for better flow, like this: http://puu.sh/wSh9V/ec2e72d08c.jpg I want to keep it challenging as now.
  5. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Move the whole to x:273 or so, right now the first slider is easily overdashable and has been causing me unnecessary shitmisses :>as it's middle of kiai part and considering player would keep dashing, moving it closer to the previous note can also cause a shitmisses imo
  6. 02:16:321 - Maybe place a note here as well? at x:106 fits nicely to me.
[Alice]
  1. 00:17:013 (1) - I'm pretty sure I can hear 4 piano notes here, so I'd recommend to change this repeat to 1/12 instead of 1/4. It's not 1/12 imo
  2. 00:42:946 (3) - I suggest to move this note to x:208 so that the curve isn't that edgy/sharp. It's intentional choice to make the part play better
  3. 00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uh... I think these notes are too much time over the left side of the playfield? Try to spread them a bit more to the right side as well to cover all places equally (or at least so that I don't get my OCD triggered, whichever comes first :P)
  4. 01:03:759 (3) - Move to x:96 for better emphasis to the cymbal sound? Also for consistency with hyperdashes.
  5. 01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Me thinks these look all similar to the way you've mapped them in the overdose difficulty (assuming this diff was just intended to be a carbon copy of the overdose diff but with harder patterns on the kiai, it's only natural, but still). Consider rearranging them in different positions so that they're not so reminiscent of the previous diff? ikr but I'd love to keep it as it's simply a good pattern for me. Just some parts are the similar so I'm pretty sure they wouldn't be that problematic
That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)
Thank you for the mod!
(also thanks :D)
posted
wow spec map marigold too. w
:oops:
gl gl
posted

DE-CADE wrote:

wow spec map marigold too. w
:oops:
gl gl
thank you! :)
posted
spec please move the preview point back a 1/1 it hurts to listen to sometimes

Hareimu wrote:

[Sinnoh's Rain]
  1. 00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c: ya
  2. 01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here. ya
  3. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient. ya
  4. 02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now. wrong timestamp but ya
hey i can add my 1/6 hyper back bc of the new rule

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 78009
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Marigold ft. Guriri
TitleUnicode:Marigold ft. Guriri
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:Spectator
Version:Sinnoh's Rain
Source:Deemo
Tags:Ascendance NICODE SQUAR SQUARE MUSIQ Guriri Narae Alice Hans
BeatmapID:1282659
BeatmapSetID:605710

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CircleSize:4
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posted

Sinnoh wrote:

spec please move the preview point back a 1/1 it hurts to listen to sometimes done w

Hareimu wrote:

[Sinnoh's Rain]
  1. 00:58:509 (1) - Maybe move this slider to x:111 to emphasize the sound of the cymbal better? Still plays ok to me c: ya
  2. 01:18:009 (1,1) - I don't think these should be 1/4 sliders, since no beats can be heard at either of the slider's blue ticks they're finished at. To furthermore justify the inconsistency, you decided to use a 1/2 slider 01:19:509 (1) - here. ya
  3. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - These three objects try and introduce the left-left stationary hyperdash movement concept all of a sudden, and while that's a neat thing to do, I believe you could at least 01:26:633 (3) - tilt this slider to the left instead of to the right to make it more lenient. ya
  4. 02:21:946 (1) - I think this spinner could finish 02:25:509 - here rather than at that red tick in which it finishes as of right now. wrong timestamp but ya
hey i can add my 1/6 hyper back bc of the new rule

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updated it!
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[Storyboard]
01:12:009 에서 01:14:821 까지 배경 페이드아웃 시켰다가 01:14:821 부터 다시 원래대로 돌아오게 하는게 어떨까요
02:26:821 에 등장하는 마지막 노트에 특수한 이펙트가 있으면 좀 더 분위기를 살릴 수 있을 것 같습니다

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES)
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo

[Overdose]
01:41:634 (7) - 이 부분이 오히려 01:41:259 (5,6) - 와 같은 방향성으로 연속하이퍼대시가 나와야 했지 않았나 싶네요, 바이올린 피치가 워낙에 커서 끝끝점프로 넣는것도 고려해보셔도 될것같습니다

[Alice]
00:05:634 (2) - 00:05:259 (1) 은 하이퍼대시인데 이건 아니라서 이질감이 듭니다. 여기도 하이퍼대시가 있었으면 좋겠네요
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ오버도즈랑 똑같음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:27:759 (4) - 이거 ctrl + g 해서 안티플로로 만들면 바이올린 피치를 제대로 살릴 수 있을것같네요
01:38:071 (3,4,5,6) - 이 부분만큼은 와리가리가 아닌 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784494 이런식으로 쭉 직진하는 형태로 바꾸시는것도?
01:41:634 (7) - 오버도즈와 동일

:idea:
posted

Minato Yukina wrote:

[Storyboard]
01:12:009 에서 01:14:821 까지 배경 페이드아웃 시켰다가 01:14:821 부터 다시 원래대로 돌아오게 하는게 어떨까요
02:26:821 에 등장하는 마지막 노트에 특수한 이펙트가 있으면 좀 더 분위기를 살릴 수 있을 것 같습니다 원래 있었는데 문구 넣으면서 삭제했어용

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES)
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo

[Overdose]
01:41:634 (7) - 이 부분이 오히려 01:41:259 (5,6) - 와 같은 방향성으로 연속하이퍼대시가 나와야 했지 않았나 싶네요, 바이올린 피치가 워낙에 커서 끝끝점프로 넣는것도 고려해보셔도 될것같습니다 음은 높은데 소리의 힘은 약해지는 부분이라 일단은 지금 패턴 유지할게요


[Alice]
00:05:634 (2) - 00:05:259 (1) 은 하이퍼대시인데 이건 아니라서 이질감이 듭니다. 여기도 하이퍼대시가 있었으면 좋겠네요
01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ오버도즈랑 똑같음ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:27:759 (4) - 이거 ctrl + g 해서 안티플로로 만들면 바이올린 피치를 제대로 살릴 수 있을것같네요
01:38:071 (3,4,5,6) - 이 부분만큼은 와리가리가 아닌 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784494 이런식으로 쭉 직진하는 형태로 바꾸시는것도?
전반적으로 잘 안쓰이는 패턴이라 일단 정방향으로 바꿔두었습니다.

01:41:634 (7) - 오버도즈와 동일

:idea:
모딩 감사합니다~
posted

Minato Yukina wrote:

[Rain]
00:46:509 (1) - I think it shall be better if (1) is placed on right side of 00:46:134 (4) - , so here is my suggestion with flow change of 00:47:071 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784334 breaking expected flow = emphasis, just preference
01:26:446 (2,3,4) - whoa, vertical double hyperdashes in rain difficulty? pretty good try but I'm afraid if BNs accept it (well my answer is going to be YES) nerfed this section a lot
however to get the consistency of HDash usage I think 01:26:820 (4) - should be HDashed so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784356 this shall be work better imo I'd prefer to keep similar sounds on the reverse slider, doesn't fit to have new sounds start in middle of the slider.
uwu
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posted

Hareimu wrote:

[Ascendance's Salad]
  1. Your Salad doesn't have "Ascendance" at the beginning of it's tags like all other diffs. Please fix this ASAP. Ok
  2. 01:20:446 (6) - Maybe curve this slider a bit to the right? Y'know, for a more "flowy" feeling or something idk gave it a slight curve but I think the sharp dash is more impactful for that noise
  3. 01:24:196 (2) - Maybe turn this repeat into a 1/2 repeat slider instead? So to lower the note density a bit. Ok
  4. 01:24:852 (4) - This note is over no audible sound whatsoever. Consider deleting it. The piano?
  5. 01:27:664 (7) - Maybe delete this note? Same as the previous point, the trumpet-ish 1/4 sounds do not extend onto 01:27:665 - here, having the stream to be 5 notes (01:26:446 (2) - as this repeat, f.e) fits better imo. Perhaps you could also make a dash between 01:27:571 (6,8) - these two to emphasize (8) more as well. I think they're okaaaay, the section is the most intense so I think the extra density is warranted
  6. 01:42:009 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:43:509 - here, since the most prominent sound (and more fitting to place the ending of the spinner at) is there. Ok
  7. 01:56:259 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick 01:56:821 - here to follow the lyrical line instead? Plays better, since Guriri's voice starts to sound stronger here. Sure
  8. 01:57:009 (3) - Same as before :> b
That's it now. Best of lucks with this mapset!
(also beautiful storyboard)
Sorry Spec, I ruined your N icon ;w;

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posted
Happy Friday! Here is a mod for you to celebrate with

Didn't have anything significant to say about the cup so either you're an amazing mapper or I'm a terrible modder or both ;)
[
General
]
  1. Difficulty Spread: The Rain feels like quite a big step up from the Platter though the Rain > Overdose > Alice spread seems quite well done. It could be worth it to get an easier Rain for the spread but probably best to get some more opinions on that first.


[
Ascendance's Salad
]
  1. 01:03:759 (1,2) - Timeline choice is a little odd here. Tail on 01:03:759 (1) - covers strong sounds on 01:04:509 -. Vocal also starting on 01:04:509 - isn't covered either. 01:04:884 (2) - ends on a far stronger beat than it begins on, no movement on this slider doesn't help to represent 01:05:259 - either. I think the timeline you used for 01:01:509 (1,2,3) - would fit perfectly here. Strong sounds are represented, sliders cover noticeable vocals and sliders no longer end on stronger sounds than they started on.
  2. 01:18:009 (1) - High SV here requires some rather precise walking or use of the dash mid slider which is a bit demanding for a Salad and only amplified by Tick Rate 2. Rather than adjusting SV here because that's such a pain, I'd recommend tilting out sliders like this one in the Kiai a little more so their effective length is reduced. Nothing too drastic but just a little nerf to save the suffering of hundreds of Salad players
  3. 01:19:321 (3) - Near enough the same point as above, SV feels just a bit too high on these repeaters. Tilting these a bit more would be so rad
  4. 01:25:134 (6,1,2) - Possibly too tricky for a Salad here? The immediate direction change after the dash followed by having to stop for the stack requires some good catcher control that I'm not certain players at this level have. I think this would be best without the direction change after the dash. Finding a way to make 01:25:696 (2) - fit at about :x38 would be dank
  5. 02:02:259 (2,3) - Perhaps add a dash here? Feels like a good fit to go with the vocals here


[
Platter
]
  1. 01:16:321 (4,5) - "Antiflow" hypers are unrankable in a Platter and whilst antiflow is not defined in the Ranking Criteria I think sliders like 01:16:509 (5) - would certainly qualify as antiflow. Should be easy enough to rework this pattern without the "antiflow"
  2. 01:26:259 (5,6) - This is a really strong hyper, I think it would be worthwhile to nerf this
  3. 01:41:446 (6,7) - Another "antiflow" hyper, please spare the poor Platter players from the evil monstrosity that is "antiflow"
  4. 02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo comes out at 13 which is just above the Ranking Criteria Guideline's maximum of 12. Nothing major but also an easy fix by throwing a new combo in there somewhere like at 02:01:509 -
  5. 02:03:759 (1,1) - Weird to have so little movement between these. Ctrl+H on 02:04:509 (1,2) - fits rather well but then obviously you'd need to rework the rest of the pattern to fit. Or you could just Ctrl+H the rest of the map from this point on
  6. 02:05:821 (2,1) - Antiflow hyper
  7. 02:07:134 (4,1) - This hyper feels a little too strong, would suggest to nerf it a bit


[
Sinnoh's Rain
]
  1. 00:22:415 (4,1) - Pretty strong distance for 1/4, would be nice if you could make this a little easier and move 00:22:509 (1) - to around x:208
  2. 00:28:321 (9,1) - Very strong 1/4 again, 00:28:509 (1) - at about x:184 would be super rad
  3. 00:39:009 (1,2,3) - The distance between 00:39:009 (1,2) - is currently larger than the distance between 00:39:571 (2,3) - but (3) is the stronger note here. I'd move 00:39:571 (2) - to around x:328
  4. 00:57:759 (2,3) - Dash distance is quite weak here and 00:58:134 (3) - is certainly worth of some emphasis, try 00:58:134 (3) - around x:480
  5. 00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement on this pattern feels a little shallow, possible to curve it out some more?
  6. 01:02:259 (3,4,1) - Possible to move this a couple of grid spaces right just to get 01:02:259 (3) - a bit further away from the wall?
  7. 01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394
  8. 02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - Little more curve on this would look and play better


[
Overdose
]
  1. 00:11:071 (2) - This is about equal distance between 00:10:509 (1,3) - yet sounds like 00:11:259 (3) - is worth more emphasis here and the current spacing is a little awkward with dash usage. I'd suggest moving this to around x:264
  2. 00:11:821 (4) - Pretty much the same point as above, see how you find x:256
  3. 00:50:634 (6,1) - Most of the movement around this part is quite calm and I think it would fit well with that to nerf the hyper strength here, same with 00:51:571 (2,3) -. Moving 00:51:009 (1,2) - to x:314 or so should do the trick
  4. 00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement is a little shallow here, possible to add a little more curve to this curve?
  5. 01:07:321 (4,1) - Pretty low distance for a strong sound here, especially when it's followed by 01:08:071 (2,3) - just after which is an antiflow hyper for a weaker sound. Possible to atleast buff this in to a strong dash?
  6. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Staggered spacing on this makes this quite a tricky wiggle to do. It's not particularly comfortable to hold dash down because of the low distance between slider heads and tails but it's uncomfortable to not use dash because of the increased distances between the sliders. Would be great if you could nerf the distances between the notes here a little
  7. 01:32:196 (6,1) - That's pretty harsh antiflow for a 1/6 hyper of this distance, possible to nerf the intensity of this a bit?
  8. 01:41:634 (7,1) - Hyper here seems a little overkill. The intense Kiai has just come to a fairly abrupt end and I think that would be best represented without using a hyper here, I'd recommend a normal dash at most
  9. 01:56:071 (2,3) - Quite a strong hyper in another rather calm part of the song, I'd nerf the intensity on this so it doesn't stick out as much
  10. 02:11:071 (2) - Pretty much the same point from the start of the mod. Try putting this at x:240
  11. 02:26:821 (1) - Troll note! Are you sure you want to put players through such suffering? :(


[
Alice
]
  1. 00:13:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Movement is really similar on these. You could tilt both 00:14:259 (1) - 00:15:009 (1) - more so the movement is more shallow on each, I think such movement compliments the song here as it winds down a bit
  2. 00:26:259 (1,2) - I think this hyper is a bit too strong, I'd try at least to bring it down under 6.0x DS
  3. 00:43:884 (2,1) - Same here, the hyper is already snappy and the extra distance just feels too intense. Again I think around 6.0x DS would be best
  4. 00:59:571 (6,7) - I feel this hyper here takes away from the hyper at 00:59:946 (12,1) -. The distance is noticeable larger on 00:59:571 (6,7) -, I understand the spacing on the playfield is quite awkward here but if you could find a way to at least buff 00:59:946 (12,1) - that would be great
  5. 01:07:321 (4,1) - Deja vu! Same point as in the Overdose here as this is pretty much identical
  6. 01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - So my general opinion on the Kiai is that it's a nice step up from the Overdose building on the same ideas but harder and more intense. Really this is the only pattern I could point out as maybe worth reworking. It's rather fast and very unexpected, it can be all too easy to not read this well and misunderstand what movement is required. I'd certainly get more opinions than just mine on this but my personal thoughts would be to rework this pattern to something more similar to those you've used throughout the Kiai.

    One quick minor suggestion would be to make 01:22:321 (6) - nearer vertical so it's a little easier to transition in to this pattern, less speed carried in and it's all visually closer on the screen so it's easier to read.
  7. 01:41:634 (7,1) - Same point as in the Overdose really, this being as intense as 01:41:446 (6,7) - just doesn't seem right
  8. 01:43:509 (1) - I'd use a weaker hyper here, x:368 or so
  9. 02:26:821 (1) - The thought of someone full comboing the map up to this point and then missing this note keeps me up at night.
Good luck with your map!
posted

Sorcerer wrote:

[
Sinnoh's Rain
]
  1. 01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394 was making these a bit edge dashy, moved to x400 still
Rest fixed, good mod :)

sorcerer 4 bn
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256,192,141946,12,2,145509,0:0:0:0:
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Sorcerer wrote:

Happy Friday! Here is a mod for you to celebrate with

Didn't have anything significant to say about the cup so either you're an amazing mapper or I'm a terrible modder or both ;)
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General
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  1. Difficulty Spread: The Rain feels like quite a big step up from the Platter though the Rain > Overdose > Alice spread seems quite well done. It could be worth it to get an easier Rain for the spread but probably best to get some more opinions on that first.


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Ascendance's Salad
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  1. 01:03:759 (1,2) - Timeline choice is a little odd here. Tail on 01:03:759 (1) - covers strong sounds on 01:04:509 -. Vocal also starting on 01:04:509 - isn't covered either. 01:04:884 (2) - ends on a far stronger beat than it begins on, no movement on this slider doesn't help to represent 01:05:259 - either. I think the timeline you used for 01:01:509 (1,2,3) - would fit perfectly here. Strong sounds are represented, sliders cover noticeable vocals and sliders no longer end on stronger sounds than they started on.
  2. 01:18:009 (1) - High SV here requires some rather precise walking or use of the dash mid slider which is a bit demanding for a Salad and only amplified by Tick Rate 2. Rather than adjusting SV here because that's such a pain, I'd recommend tilting out sliders like this one in the Kiai a little more so their effective length is reduced. Nothing too drastic but just a little nerf to save the suffering of hundreds of Salad players
  3. 01:19:321 (3) - Near enough the same point as above, SV feels just a bit too high on these repeaters. Tilting these a bit more would be so rad
  4. 01:25:134 (6,1,2) - Possibly too tricky for a Salad here? The immediate direction change after the dash followed by having to stop for the stack requires some good catcher control that I'm not certain players at this level have. I think this would be best without the direction change after the dash. Finding a way to make 01:25:696 (2) - fit at about :x38 would be dank
  5. 02:02:259 (2,3) - Perhaps add a dash here? Feels like a good fit to go with the vocals here


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Platter
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  1. 01:16:321 (4,5) - "Antiflow" hypers are unrankable in a Platter and whilst antiflow is not defined in the Ranking Criteria I think sliders like 01:16:509 (5) - would certainly qualify as antiflow. Should be easy enough to rework this pattern without the "antiflow"
  2. 01:26:259 (5,6) - This is a really strong hyper, I think it would be worthwhile to nerf this
  3. 01:41:446 (6,7) - Another "antiflow" hyper, please spare the poor Platter players from the evil monstrosity that is "antiflow"
  4. 02:00:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This combo comes out at 13 which is just above the Ranking Criteria Guideline's maximum of 12. Nothing major but also an easy fix by throwing a new combo in there somewhere like at 02:01:509 -
  5. 02:03:759 (1,1) - Weird to have so little movement between these. Ctrl+H on 02:04:509 (1,2) - fits rather well but then obviously you'd need to rework the rest of the pattern to fit. Or you could just Ctrl+H the rest of the map from this point on
  6. 02:05:821 (2,1) - Antiflow hyper
  7. 02:07:134 (4,1) - This hyper feels a little too strong, would suggest to nerf it a bit


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Sinnoh's Rain
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  1. 00:22:415 (4,1) - Pretty strong distance for 1/4, would be nice if you could make this a little easier and move 00:22:509 (1) - to around x:208
  2. 00:28:321 (9,1) - Very strong 1/4 again, 00:28:509 (1) - at about x:184 would be super rad
  3. 00:39:009 (1,2,3) - The distance between 00:39:009 (1,2) - is currently larger than the distance between 00:39:571 (2,3) - but (3) is the stronger note here. I'd move 00:39:571 (2) - to around x:328
  4. 00:57:759 (2,3) - Dash distance is quite weak here and 00:58:134 (3) - is certainly worth of some emphasis, try 00:58:134 (3) - around x:480
  5. 00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement on this pattern feels a little shallow, possible to curve it out some more?
  6. 01:02:259 (3,4,1) - Possible to move this a couple of grid spaces right just to get 01:02:259 (3) - a bit further away from the wall?
  7. 01:33:384 (2,3,1,2) - I think a slight distance nerf here would make these a lot more comfortable to play. Try 01:33:571 (3,2) - at x:394
  8. 02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - Little more curve on this would look and play better


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Overdose
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  1. 00:11:071 (2) - This is about equal distance between 00:10:509 (1,3) - yet sounds like 00:11:259 (3) - is worth more emphasis here and the current spacing is a little awkward with dash usage. I'd suggest moving this to around x:264
  2. 00:11:821 (4) - Pretty much the same point as above, see how you find x:256
  3. 00:50:634 (6,1) - Most of the movement around this part is quite calm and I think it would fit well with that to nerf the hyper strength here, same with 00:51:571 (2,3) -. Moving 00:51:009 (1,2) - to x:314 or so should do the trick I want to keep the symmetrical pattern here
  4. 00:58:884 (2,3,4,5,6) - Movement is a little shallow here, possible to add a little more curve to this curve?
  5. 01:07:321 (4,1) - Pretty low distance for a strong sound here, especially when it's followed by 01:08:071 (2,3) - just after which is an antiflow hyper for a weaker sound. Possible to atleast buff this in to a strong dash?
  6. 01:26:446 (2,3,4) - Staggered spacing on this makes this quite a tricky wiggle to do. It's not particularly comfortable to hold dash down because of the low distance between slider heads and tails but it's uncomfortable to not use dash because of the increased distances between the sliders. Would be great if you could nerf the distances between the notes here a little
  7. 01:32:196 (6,1) - That's pretty harsh antiflow for a 1/6 hyper of this distance, possible to nerf the intensity of this a bit?
  8. 01:41:634 (7,1) - Hyper here seems a little overkill. The intense Kiai has just come to a fairly abrupt end and I think that would be best represented without using a hyper here, I'd recommend a normal dash at most I still think it's fine and fit with the intensity of the song. Maybe gonna keep this for now
  9. 01:56:071 (2,3) - Quite a strong hyper in another rather calm part of the song, I'd nerf the intensity on this so it doesn't stick out as much
  10. 02:11:071 (2) - Pretty much the same point from the start of the mod. Try putting this at x:240
  11. 02:26:821 (1) - Troll note! Are you sure you want to put players through such suffering? :(but it's still in the middle and I'm pretty sure no one misses it since it comes after the spinner


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Alice
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  1. 00:13:509 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Movement is really similar on these. You could tilt both 00:14:259 (1) - 00:15:009 (1) - more so the movement is more shallow on each, I think such movement compliments the song here as it winds down a bit
  2. 00:26:259 (1,2) - I think this hyper is a bit too strong, I'd try at least to bring it down under 6.0x DS
  3. 00:43:884 (2,1) - Same here, the hyper is already snappy and the extra distance just feels too intense. Again I think around 6.0x DS would be best
  4. 00:59:571 (6,7) - I feel this hyper here takes away from the hyper at 00:59:946 (12,1) -. The distance is noticeable larger on 00:59:571 (6,7) -, I understand the spacing on the playfield is quite awkward here but if you could find a way to at least buff 00:59:946 (12,1) - that would be great
  5. 01:07:321 (4,1) - Deja vu! Same point as in the Overdose here as this is pretty much identical
  6. 01:22:509 (1,2,3,4) - So my general opinion on the Kiai is that it's a nice step up from the Overdose building on the same ideas but harder and more intense. Really this is the only pattern I could point out as maybe worth reworking. It's rather fast and very unexpected, it can be all too easy to not read this well and misunderstand what movement is required. I'd certainly get more opinions than just mine on this but my personal thoughts would be to rework this pattern to something more similar to those you've used throughout the Kiai.

    One quick minor suggestion would be to make 01:22:321 (6) - nearer vertical so it's a little easier to transition in to this pattern, less speed carried in and it's all visually closer on the screen so it's easier to read.
  7. 01:41:634 (7,1) - Same point as in the Overdose really, this being as intense as 01:41:446 (6,7) - just doesn't seem right same as overdose
  8. 01:43:509 (1) - I'd use a weaker hyper here, x:368 or so
  9. 02:26:821 (1) - The thought of someone full comboing the map up to this point and then missing this note keeps me up at night. That's pleasure to the mapper since he will going to play my map once more
Good luck with your map!
Thanks for the mod, was really helpful!
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I wonder if peeps will check out the remix of this lo but e I see M2U free mod uwu
Platter
00:25:884 (2) - would be better if you let this be a c-shaped stream instead of a stacked one imo
01:43:509 (1) - personally since this is a strong sound and yet its stacked i think a h-dash would fit better here
02:21:759 (5) - ^

Welp yea dont really have that much to say since its pretty gud already XD
Sino rain
00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more?
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasizing that instense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245?
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -


Hope the mod helps! gl
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JeirYagtama wrote:

I wonder if peeps will check out the remix of this lo but e I see M2U free mod uwu
Platter
00:25:884 (2) - would be better if you let this be a c-shaped stream instead of a stacked one imo
01:43:509 (1) - personally since this is a strong sound and yet its stacked i think a h-dash would fit better here i think it's fine
02:21:759 (5) - ^ ^

Welp yea dont really have that much to say since its pretty gud already XD
Sino rain
00:59:259 (6) - hmm while playing it doesnt really give that much movement maybe curve the slider a bit more?
01:39:759 (4) - imo i think this should have more movement than emphasizing that instense sound with a stacked stream. maybe copy paste 01:40:134 (8,9,10,11) - and move it x:245?
01:43:509 (1) - I think this is kinda worthy to put a h-dash here

Dont really have much to say in ur diff also xd Flow is pretty nice but my only issue about the map is the consistency on the h-dashes between 01:00:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and
02:04:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -


Hope the mod helps! gl
Thanks for the mod! rest are fixed!
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