[general]
link/source for metadata?
no tags?
your blue combo could be a bit brigther it's a bit annoying with bg dim imo. something like 60,70,255 could be nice. similar things for the brown/orange color
00:33:220 - soft whistle would be nice for piano here
00:35:140 - to 00:42:820 - I think this part needs more volume to fit the song better. maybe 50%?
01:30:820 - soft finish instead?
01:38:500 - ^
01:50:140 - would add a lower volume timing point here
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00:12:820 (2,1) - I think it would make more sense to have way more distance here, just like you did on 00:14:740 (2,1) -
00:20:260 (2,3,4) - I don't think these things are supposed to look like
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/2dUXmymg.jpg ingame? happens to most of your similar stacks
00:41:500 (1,2) - this seems a bit too much for 1/4 spacing here and just makes it weird to read. how about something like
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/x1cb9fB5.jpg ?
00:44:500 - no break like on lower diffs?
01:40:420 (1) -
offscreen by a few pixels
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/YuJEajjm.jpg[hard]
ar7 is enough I think
01:35:620 (2,3,4,1) - is this supposed to be stacked? looks a bit weird right now
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00:17:380 (2) - breaks
ds by 50%, that is way too much here and makes it look like both gaps have same rhythm
00:35:140 (1) - 00:38:980 (1) - these could be single 1/1 rhythm circles
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/qfQFy7e0.jpg to not spam sliders the whole time in this part
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00:54:340 (1,2,3) - too complex for normal (
reading), just stack 00:54:340 (1,2) - like you did before?
other similar patterns have bigger gaps in the timeline so they are probably fine
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cute map, feel free to poke me for bubble after you fixed the bold stuff
(or find t1 bn to bubble and I will qualify)