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TrySail - adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 12월 18일 월요일 at 오전 12:18:24

Artist: TrySail
Title: adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
Source: エロマンガ先生
Tags: eromanga sensei ed ending flask meg iMage-- intoon Yuria Akitoshi Doormat tv size pentori xxdeathx
BPM: 268
Filesize: 10762kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Hard (3.42 stars, 260 notes)
  2. Doormat's Normal (2.51 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Flask's Extra (5.75 stars, 433 notes)
  4. High Tension (6.58 stars, 419 notes)
  5. Insane (3.96 stars, 336 notes)
  6. Meg's Extra (5.48 stars, 403 notes)
  7. Pentori's Insane (4.55 stars, 355 notes)
  8. xxdeathx's Expert (5.05 stars, 408 notes)
  9. Yuria's Easy (1.59 stars, 104 notes)
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awesomemacD
fun
Topic Starter
Lami
thx :3
Left
00:59:481 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - umaru?
Kibbleru

Left wrote:

00:59:481 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - omaru?
fify
Topic Starter
Lami
it's sagiri partten thx
hvick225
cute
xxdeathx

hvick225 wrote:

cute
Ah, I see you're a man of culture as well
allein
kms c;
Meg
otaku

EDIT:fixed some points.

and please add "iMage--" to Tags.

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osu file format v14

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Title:adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
TitleUnicode:adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Lami
Version:Meg's Extra
Source:エロマンガ先生
Tags:eromanga sensei ed ending flask meg intoon
BeatmapID:1281081
BeatmapSetID:604847

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tatemae

  • [Moe Sagiri]
  1. 00:11:707 (4,1) - small aesthetical fix http://puu.sh/vS3QT/70d8eceb74.png moreover, you did the same here 00:31:297 (3,1) -
    [Meg's Extra]
  2. 00:07:118 (3,4) - honestly, 4 is a really weak beat, I don't think this place should be clickable at all.
  3. 01:25:476 (1) - useless green timing points afterwards?
    [Flask's Extra]
  4. 01:25:476 (1) - due to this slider being slow and far away, because of acceleration during this pattern 01:24:581 (1,2,3) the slider 01:25:476 (1) - it's possible to not read the SV change, my idea: http://puu.sh/vS51Q/85da49d82f.png
    [Akitoshi's Hard]
  5. 00:00:402 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - don't you think those are too large? Later you use smaller spacing in a louder section 00:02:193 (1,2,3,4) -
    If you compare these 2 cases, then first despite being less intensive is more difficult to play.
    [Yuria's Easy]
  6. 00:32:640 (3) - why did you use the same slider as here 00:36:222 (3) - although the vocal in the first case ends earlier?
insane fine for me
Best of luck.
Shyotamaze
Hi, from your M4M queue

General
  1. The gap between Insane and Meg's Extra is pretty big, maybe try to make more intense patterns on Insane to make the spread better
  2. Add TV Size to tags
  3. 00:00:402 Unnecessary green line on Yuria's Easy and Flask's Extra
Yuria's Easy
  1. Rename it to Normal since it has intense patterns that an Easy diff wouldn't have 00:05:775 (1,2) - 00:40:700 (4,1) - etc and it would be weird to go from Easy to Hard anyway
  2. 00:02:193 (1) - Remove NC to make it consistent with the way you NC, same for 00:05:775 (1) -
Akitoshi's Hard
  1. 00:13:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - Such intense singletapping is too difficult for a hard diff, even the Insane diff doesn't have that much singletaps in a row so try to nerf it with some sliders, same for 01:02:193 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:16:521 (4,5,6,7,8) -
Insane
  1. 00:07:118 (2) - NC to show the SV change
Meg's Extra
  1. 00:09:804 (3,4) - CTRL+G and then 00:09:916 (4,5) - CTRL+G so you get a circular flow like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8106367 just like you did here 00:13:163 (2,3,4,5) -
  2. 00:14:618 (6) - I suggest stacking it on 00:14:506 (5) - to emphasize 00:14:730 (1) - better
Flask's Extra
  1. 00:09:245 (5) - I suggest stacking it on 00:09:133 (4) - to emphasize 00:09:357 (1) - better, same for 00:12:827 (4) -
  2. 00:13:387 (3,4) - The stacking is inconsistent with 00:09:804 (3,4) - so make them consistent
  3. 00:11:596 It's the only time where the trumpet isn't clickable, make it consistent
  4. 00:16:521 (1) - Is much stronger than 00:16:409 (2) - so make the spacing between 00:16:409 (2,1) - bigger than between 00:16:073 (1,2) - to emphasize better, same emphasis problem for 00:31:745 (1,2,3) - 00:32:193 (3,4,1) -
  5. 00:48:088 (1,1) - Unrankable/borderline unrankable, try to not make a perfect overlap

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in.
Moe Sagiri
  1. 00:08:013 (3,4) - They are less spaced than 00:08:125 (4,5) - even though the trumpet is much stronger, I suggest doing a CTRL+G on 00:08:125 (4,5) - to fix that
  2. 00:09:804 (3,4) - ^ I suggest stacking 00:09:916 (4) - on 00:09:133 (4) - 's sliderhead
  3. 00:10:700 (3,4,5,6) - Same kind of problem, the trumpet on 00:10:700 (3,5) - is much stronger but it isn't reflected by your spacing, try to make the DS higher for those or reduce the DS for 00:10:812 (4,6) -
  4. 00:11:596 (3,4) - Same as the first point, I suggest doing a CTRL+G on 00:11:596 (3,5) - to fix that, that problem repeats itself so I won't point it out everywhere
  5. 00:12:715 (4) - The shape is different than 00:12:267 (2,3) - even though they are mapping the same sound, it's inconsistent and it makes the structure a bit ugly imo, try to make it consistent
  6. 00:23:909 (1) - A SV change here would emphasize the instrument better imo
  7. 00:40:140 You should make it clickable since the vocals are pretty strong here
  8. 01:20:999 (1,2) - The shapes are inconsistent and not related to each other so it looks a bit random, try to make them consistent or smth
Good luck!
-NanoRIPE-
ye (m4m)

general
  1. normal diff?
  2. uncheck widescreen support on aki's hard,insane,and flask's extra
easy
fine

hard
00:12:715 (4) - im prefer you stack this circle on slidertail of slider (1) for better pattern (the current pattern quite confusng imo)
00:13:834 (1,2,3,4,5) - too intense for hard diff imo.just nerf it with sliders instead
00:15:178 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm the rhythm its not really accurate imo.especially for represent the guitar at (3,4,5,6,7) - try this rhythmhttps://prnt.sc/f8uu97
00:22:342 (1,1,1) - can you try another pattern or maybe change the slider shape for represent the trumpet sound perfectly
00:33:536 (3,4) - considering to try another rhytm that represent the vocal more here (suggestion : what about 2 circles and 1/1 at 00:33:984 - )
00:38:349 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - unstack it for represent the cymbal here more
00:47:864 (1) - try another shape to represent the trumpet again
01:02:193 (4,5,6,7,8) - same as second point
01:04:655 (7) - 1/2 slider for emphatize the vocal better
01:16:521 (4,5,6,7,8) - ye
01:17:752 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - same as 00:38:349 (2,3,2,3,2,3) -

insane
00:07:118 (2) - hmm i think curve slider would emphatize the vocal more here than the current slider
00:15:290 (2) - 1/1 slider for make the rhythm more sense (idk what are you tried emphatize with this slider 00:15:401 (2) - cause theres no sound at white tick to emphatized)
00:38:237 (2,2,2,2) - maybe ctrl g the sliders for make a jumps to emphatize the drum rolls i guess...


extra
00:21:446 (6) - ctrl g for vocal
01:03:872 (1) - try this shape for avoid the ugly overlap http://prntscr.com/f8v4ce
01:05:551 (3) - cut this into 2 cirle for represent the drum more here (cause theres so many 1/2 sliders that you used to emphatize the vocal) same as for 00:51:222 (3)
01:15:849 (2) - ctrl g for emphatize the finish/cymbal
01:25:588 - unnecessary lines in outro

flask extra
00:38:237 (2) - just a nitpicky thing,can you move the slider up? for attractive flow

moe sagiri looks fine for me

thats all
sorry for short mod ;w;
GL ~
Ryuusei Aika
m4m

my map

General
Sagiri ♥
01:01:297 - maybe add a hitsound here? it feels strange that 01:01:297 - and 01:01:969 - are hitsounded, but here not (which contains also vocal)

Yuria
00:36:222 (3,4) - as the vocal finish at 00:36:894 - and 00:37:342 - has a combination of relatively strong beat and high vocal, i suggest to changed rhythm here as 3/1 slider + 1 white line space + 1/1 slider

Akitoshi
00:21:894 (1,1) - ds is ok but the visual ds is a little inappropriate. Maybe you can try this below, which has a better ds and also have a little anti flow at 00:21:894 (1,1) - so it can also emphasize the tune change at 00:22:342 (1) - :

Insane
00:55:924 (1) - stack error? also nazi blanket

Meg
00:06:670 (1,3) - just a suggestion, but i think you can use higher sv on 00:06:670 (1,3) - to emphasize better the "wow" sound instead of using a symmetry pattern
00:08:349 (1,3) - stack error?
00:17:193 (3,4) - ds shouldn't be reduced here, cuz here has a obvious change of vocal. maybe position like 312|270 is better
00:46:633 (2,3) - another suggestion, ctrl+g for a perfect turning-around flow

Flask
00:31:745 (1,2,3) - 这里应该1-2的ds小于2-3的ds吧,vocal的变调在3上
节奏好密的感觉

Moe Sagiri
00:47:640 (3) - stack error? same beat at 00:46:969 (1,2,3) - so i think it's no need to make any one of them special

Yeah gl
Shad0w1and
who got the second insane :(
If you don't rush may I GD 4.5* in one month :(
_handholding
Meg

01:24:916 (2) - ctrl +g?
Topic Starter
Lami
Already someone working gd so sorry. owo
Kawashiro
from your m4m Q

Hard
  1. 00:30:401 (6) - Change like 00:48:312 (2,3,4) - here? I think it will better to express drum sound.
  2. 00:32:640 (1,2) - I think it should have same beat as 00:36:222 (1,2) - here.
  3. 01:16:409 - this point also have guitar sound but you skipped it. change 01:16:073 (3) - here like This?

Insane
  1. 00:14:506 (5,1) - 너무 가깝다고 생각해요. 제가 생각하기에는 사운드 분위기상 00:14:282 (3,4,5) - 적어도 얘네들보다는 더 넓은게 어울릴 것 같아요
  2. 00:28:499 (2) - 아무리 들어도 서클을 넣을 만한 소리는 없다고 봐요. Meg's Extra 처럼 슬라끝으로 처리하는거면 몰라도 누르는 오브젝트를 박을만한 부분은 아니라고 봐요. 차라리 00:28:163 (1,2) - 얘네를 1/2 슬라 2개로 바꾸는게 더 나을것 같아요.
  3. 01:06:558 (6) - ^, 이건 그냥 지워두는 편이 앞의 바로 앞의 공백이랑 어울리는 것 같아요. 00:48:536 (5,1) - 이런 식의 강조효과도 나타나고요.
  4. 00:52:230 (6) - ^
  5. 01:23:461 - 여기에도 뒤에처럼 1/2 슬라 추가하는게 좋을것 같아요. 여기만 비어있는건 좀 어색하게 느껴졌거든요.

늦어져서 정말 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
Fu Xuan
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M4M from your queue!

[General]
  1. Disable Widescreen Support in some diffs

[High Tension]
  1. 00:01:969 (4) - Rip stack?
  2. 00:14:282 (4,5) - I think this jump should have a larger spacing so it would form a build up for 00:14:506 (6,7) -
  3. 00:16:969 (3) - ctrl g? For flow and also for emphasis on 00:17:193 (4) - since it's a louder sound
  4. 00:38:909 (1) - Stack on 00:37:678 (2) - ?
  5. 00:46:521 (1,2,3,4) - rip I think this is too much
  6. 00:56:372 (4) - imo you should make this jump larger to emphasize "Yay"
  7. 00:58:163 (4) - 01:10:700 (4) - Same above
  8. 01:05:551 (3,1) - The angle towards 1 is too sharp and I think is a bit painful

[Flask's Extra]
  1. 00:19:543 (3) - I think you should lessen the spacing here cos there's nothing to emphasize, also maybe move it away from 00:19:655 (1) - so you could emphasize that instead.
  2. 01:03:088 (1,2) - Maybe swap the two, I think it would be better placed so you could also emp (1)

[Meg's Extra]
  1. 00:17:304 (4) - ctrl g to emphasize (5)?
  2. god mapper

[xxdeathx's Expert]
  1. 01:09:804 (3) - I think u should ctrl g to keep the consistent high spacing

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:193 (1) - More space? Maybe flip your z pattern
  2. 00:07:118 (2) - NC? Cos sv change probably

[Akitoshi's Normal Hard]
  1. Remap

[Yuria's Easy]
  1. Clean

Sorry for short mod, I'm not used to modding high bpm yet ;; Goodluck!
Underforest
placeholder, will mod tmrw
timemon
Hello, M4M from your queue

[Insane]
00:00:066 (1,2) - This feels like the hardest part of your map. The spacing is brutal and it's pretty confusing to having to singletap slower rhythm almost immediately. You could lower the spacing or change it to a slider.
01:04:207 (2,1) - the slider bodies touch each other just pointing that out
01:05:215 (2) - on 00:50:887 (2) - this second slider is has a red box on it but this one doesn't

[High Tension]
00:10:700 (3,4,5,6) - the jumps seem very intense, when the song is kinda quiet. meanwhile 00:11:596 (3,4,5) - has very loud sound but the jumps are tamer.
00:13:722 (1) - I suggest cutting the slider shorter and add a circle at the end of it to emphasize a change in the song
00:46:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the jumps feel too repetitive when the music slowly gains tension. You could, for example, slowly increase the spacing between the back and forth jumps.
00:50:327 (5,2) - stack?

[Meg's Extra]
00:47:864 (1,2,3) - I think the white tick is audible and you shouldn't extend the slider over it, I think this part could be more intense.
01:01:969 (3) - move this slider a bit? it looks a little weird
01:17:640 - Why not map the white tick as well? same applies to 01:18:536 -


Not much for me to help here, the mapset is very clean.
Good luck with your mapset.
Meg
i changed many parts. so i don't reply to modders but i did after referring to your mods sufficiently
thank you for modding!
code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47839
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.899999

[Metadata]
Title:adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
TitleUnicode:adrenaline!!! -TV Ver-
Artist:TrySail
ArtistUnicode:TrySail
Creator:Lami
Version:Meg's Extra
Source:エロマンガ先生
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Fushimi Rio
[Yuria's Easy]
fine
[Akitoshi's Hard]
._. no hitsounds?
00:15:849 (4,5,6) - a reverse slider would be better imo. you used both triple here and 00:16:297 - but they are following different sounds...
00:21:894 (1,1) - looks too close to me
[Insane]
00:30:401 (6) - stack to 00:30:849 (1) - 's end? Flow of 00:30:178 (5,6) - is a little awkward imo.
00:50:327 (4) - I suggest copy 2 or 3 and rotate it here to make blanket with 2
00:53:125 (1) - try change its shape to make flow softer?
00:59:954 (3) - 3rd point is out of screen (y388 now, max is 384)
[xxdeathx's Expert]
check unsnapped objects
00:33:312 (4,2) - try to avoid this overlap?
[Meg's Extra]
00:08:349 (1,3) - stack better
[Flask's Extra]
怎么combo color一堆原谅色……
00:15:737 (2,3) - stack?
00:55:700 (4,1) - 这flow感觉有点怪 不如把1ctrl+g一下
[High Tension]
00:11:596 (3,4,5) - move 5 upward to make them a triangle plays better for me (and easier to read
00:29:506 (2,3) - looks not consistent with other patterns, but it's ok to keep it I guess
00:52:790 (3,4,5) - rotate 120°? flows better imo

That's all
xxdeathx
@Aqua ctrl-g would break flow from previous slider so I think it's better as is

Thanks!
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Shad0w1and
where is the normal :/
Topic Starter
Lami
slaps doormat xd
Underforest
m4m as promised, my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/605323

General
No need for Widescreen Support in some diffs

Yuria's Easy
00:45:178 (1) - This is touching HP bar, consider drop it a little bit down

Shad0w1and wrote:

where is the normal :/
Akitoshi's Hard
finally not a normal :ok_hand:
00:22:342 (1,1,1) - Thought you're following vocals, applying new combo to those sliders would case an easy misread for hard player beginners, how about keeping new combo just in 00:22:790 (1) - ?
00:42:938 (2) - This slider is not snapped by 2ms earlier
00:48:200 - Adding a circle here would reflect this entire drum part

Insane
00:44:282 (1) - I don't see a reason to keep this slider with the shape of `VVV`
01:04:207 (2,1) - A very tiny overlap here

xxdeathx's Expert
The issues for me were just unsnapped objects but I think you already fixed them

Meg's Extra
00:08:909 (3) - Unstacked by -1y pixel
00:32:081 (2,3,3) - There's a very tiny overlap here

Flask's Extra
There's no change of the BG and combo colours are different, change them back
00:01:969 (1) - Does not blanket very well with 00:02:193 (1,2,3,4) -
00:16:745 (2) - How about to move it to x:348 y:246 so patterns looks good
00:47:640 (3) - Move to x:354 y:95, same reason
01:15:625 (1,1) - This is not blanketing
01:25:476 (1) - The distance is too high comparing the top diff

I don't quite agree you use too many blue ticks because the songs mostly lack of that tick

High Tension
Not because PP but I think you can decrease the AR to 9.8
00:01:969 (4) - Not stacked properly with 00:00:849 (3) -
00:12:715 (4,2) - Same
00:33:984 (3) - New combo because the chorus changes of tone
00:56:372 (4) - 00:58:163 (4) - 01:10:700 (4) - Those "Yay"'s should be emphatized
01:21:894 (2) - New combo as well

Good luck!
Doormat
i'm super late sorry /w\

https://drmt.s-ul.eu/LzRWgF9k

i can nerf if necessary
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