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Shoji Meguro - Long Way

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Melan Blue

haha5957 wrote:

[Normal]
00:58:715 (3) - this looks better when curved upward IMO okay
(ctrl+V 00:56:840 (1) and ctrl+R)

tried to do some more but your map seemed to be nearly perfect for me. sorry for poor modding~


star~
Thanks! ^^
winber1
Expert

00:01:527 (3) - perhaps you could move this note 1/4 tick back and adjust spacing. Sounds a little better to me
00:34:340 (7) - new combo
00:34:808 (1) - remove combo
00:49:105 (x) - add note?
01:20:160 (6) - i would rather you continue that pattern you had with the rest of the song and just use a slider and hitcircle in instead of this longer slider (so end the slider at 01:20:394 and add a note at 01:20:511?)

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo :(
00:05:277 (4) - ^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.
00:54:965 (1) - remove combo
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3) -

Normal

00:23:090 (1) - I would move this a little close to the center, even tho it's not that far away anyways... but idk, yeah lol
01:20:746 (3,1) - this overlap kinda bothers me a bit. I feel it may be a tiny bit confusing, but i don't really know.

Easy

00:46:996 (2) - new combo?
00:48:871 (3) - new combo? and remove the combo on the next note? these combos follow the music a little better imo.
00:59:183 (3) - add clap to beginning?

Nice map! :3
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

winber1 wrote:

Expert

00:01:527 (3) - perhaps you could move this note 1/4 tick back and adjust spacing. Sounds a little better to me nah
00:34:340 (7) - new combo okay
00:34:808 (1) - remove combo ^
00:49:105 (x) - add note? good idea
01:20:160 (6) - i would rather you continue that pattern you had with the rest of the song and just use a slider and hitcircle in instead of this longer slider (so end the slider at 01:20:394 and add a note at 01:20:511?) okay

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo :(
00:05:277 (4) - ^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.
00:54:965 (1) - remove combo
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3) -

Normal

00:23:090 (1) - I would move this a little close to the center, even tho it's not that far away anyways... but idk, yeah lol okay
01:20:746 (3,1) - this overlap kinda bothers me a bit. I feel it may be a tiny bit confusing, but i don't really know. i think it's okay, but if someone will mention it again, mb i'll change

Easy

00:46:996 (2) - new combo?
no
00:48:871 (3) - new combo? and remove the combo on the next note? these combos follow the music a little better imo. okay
00:59:183 (3) - add clap to beginning? xD yeah

Nice map! :3
Thank you so much! ^w^
regenz
hi
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

General

none.

Expert

00:11:840 (8) - Nc here instead of next circle.
00:14:652 add note here
00:18:168 (6) - make this return slider
00:34:808 (1,3) - not perfect arrange if you intetion to make it same line as 1
01:03:402 (3) - can you make this slider like this one 01:01:058 (3) - ( i mean shape )

01:09:965 (1,2) - I think this jump is a bit far compare to 01:10:785 (5,6) -
but if you intention
01:11:840 (1,2) - this jump is far than 01:09:965 (1,2) a little.
01:21:215 (1,2) - same case as above

01:19:691 (3) - bad position of stream move to 01:20:043 'll solve it

Experienced
AR +1 ?

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.

Normal

01:02:230 (3) - little bit close for previous object.
01:22:386 (2) - remove this note ?

Beginner

00:49:340 (1) - change to 1/1 return slider
01:02:933 (3,4) - ^


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Thanks. :)
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

regenz wrote:

hi Hi~ \(>w< /)
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

General

none.

Expert

00:11:840 (8) - Nc here instead of next circle. okay
00:14:652 add note here no
00:18:168 (6) - make this return slider okay
00:34:808 (1,3) - not perfect arrange if you intetion to make it same line as 1 fixed
01:03:402 (3) - can you make this slider like this one 01:01:058 (3) - ( i mean shape ) good one *3*
01:09:965 (1,2) - I think this jump is a bit far compare to 01:10:785 (5,6) -
but if you intention changed it
01:11:840 (1,2) - this jump is far than 01:09:965 (1,2) a little. fixed
01:21:215 (1,2) - same case as above ^

01:19:691 (3) - bad position of stream move to 01:20:043 'll solve it fixed

Experienced
AR +1 ?

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.

Normal

01:02:230 (3) - little bit close for previous object. fixed
01:22:386 (2) - remove this note ? hm okay

Beginner

00:49:340 (1) - change to 1/1 return slider good one
01:02:933 (3,4) - ^ hmm okay


Please Vote for me if my mod useful! ^^ sure

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks. :)
Thank you so much for modding! 8-)
zeroclover
hi, come for a little mod

Expert
00:36:215 (1) - move circle 1 grid to down
00:37:152 (3) - move circle 2 grid to right
00:38:090 (4) - move slider 2 grid to left

i looked many spacing issue problems (aimod), but this beatmap fun to play :D
1st result : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163566

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff :( i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning

good hard diff :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

Normal
Look good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163573

Beginner
fine
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163576

go ranked go~
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

zeroclover wrote:

hi, come for a little mod hi 8-)

Expert
00:36:215 (1) - move circle 1 grid to down no
00:37:152 (3) - move circle 2 grid to right okay
00:38:090 (4) - move slider 2 grid to left okay

i looked many spacing issue problems (aimod), but this beatmap fun to play :D ;3; i know
1st result : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163566

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff :( i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning

good hard diff :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

Normal
Look good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163573

Beginner
fine
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163576

go ranked go~
^^= Thank you so much!
YTYuyu
yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Beginner:
00:52:621(4) - x:20 y:248 from there fix the spacing till 00:55:433
01:13:715(3) - Aline the end point to (4)

Normal:
Change the name to Advanced?
01:13:715(4) - NC
01:17:465(4) - ^

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^

Expert:
00:16:527(4) - NC
00:18:285(5) - ^
00:20:160(5) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
zeroclover
hmm, when i playing expert diff now
why circle size is smaller than before @_@
or it just my feeling...

expert
00:14:418 - add a circle ( for stream at 00:14:183 (3,4,5,6) - its look fine to me )
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Thanks for modding, guys 8-)
SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request :) yo^^

Beginner:
00:52:621(4) - x:20 y:248 from there fix the spacing till 00:55:433 okay
01:13:715(3) - Aline the end point to (4) ^

Normal:
Change the name to Advanced? nah, it's supposed to be like this :3
01:13:715(4) - NC no
01:17:465(4) - ^ ^

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^

Expert:
00:16:527(4) - NC no
00:18:285(5) - ^ ^
00:20:160(5) - ^ ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D

zeroclover wrote:

hmm, when i playing expert diff now
why circle size is smaller than before @_@ no, they're the same as before xD
or it just my feeling...

expert
00:14:418 - add a circle ( for stream at 00:14:183 (3,4,5,6) - its look fine to me ) agree
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Easy :

0:30:121 spacing
0:37:152 maybe hitsound wishtle ?
0:41:840 spacing ( combo 1 and 2 )
0:50:277 maybe hitsound wishtle ?

/ love iiit x33 i am not good in things like sliders xD

Normal :

00:24:965 until 00:30:590 spacing ?
00:59:418 spacing
01:11:371 ^
01:14:183 ^
(about spacing here 00:24:965 until 00:30:590 . I don`t know if that is okay that way . But it looks strange to me so i wrote it in here^^)

/ like that song even more with hitsounds like that ^w^

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )

Expert :

00:26:840 whistle ?
00:30:590 ^
00:31:537 ^

00:37:35 delet whistle
00:37:152 use whistel there ^^

/ just do what you think would sound better for you ^^ Like your beatmap , like Persona 4 , like that song xD
Hope i helped a little bit ^-^
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Late reply is late ;A;
SPOILER

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Easy :

0:30:121 spacing fixed
0:37:152 maybe hitsound wishtle ? okay
0:41:840 spacing ( combo 1 and 2 ) fixed
0:50:277 maybe hitsound wishtle ? okay

/ love iiit x33 i am not good in things like sliders xD thanks ^^ neither am i actually xD

Normal :

00:24:965 until 00:30:590 spacing ? v
00:59:418 spacing fixed
01:11:371 ^ ^
01:14:183 ^ ^
(about spacing here 00:24:965 until 00:30:590 . I don`t know if that is okay that way . But it looks strange to me so i wrote it in here^^) it kind of looks strange to me too, but i don't know how to fix/change it @_@ '

/ like that song even more with hitsounds like that ^w^

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )

Expert :

00:26:840 whistle ? okay
00:30:590 ^ ^
00:31:537 ^ ^

00:37:35 delet whistle
00:37:152 use whistel there ^^ okay :3

/ just do what you think would sound better for you ^^ Like your beatmap , like Persona 4 , like that song xD (thanks bro *_*)
Hope i helped a little bit ^-^
Thank you so much! ^_^
Lightgazer

winber1 wrote:

Experienced

00:01:527 (5) - delete note? it just doesn't fit very well imo :( I let them be for now
00:05:277 (4) - ^^
00:33:988 (5) - i don't mind that much if you have this note, but i just didn't expect it to be 1/4 tick after the slider. i would rather unstack it, but then it also kinda messes up the pattern a bit. idk. maybe you cuold just put it on a red tick or something idk.Stack is better here i think since its a 1/4
00:54:965 (1) - remove comboWhat i have now sounds good to me acually
00:55:199 (2) - new combo (to follow the music a bit more)Same here
01:00:121 (6) - new combo? to follow the music and signal the jump?Fixed
01:14:183 (3) - move 1/4 tick forward? sounds better imo. you also use this at 01:19:808 (3)Ill Think about that one


Nice map! :3

regenz wrote:

hi
I'm form Thai Mapper Modding Team!

Experienced
AR +1 ?hm okay

01:00:121 (6,7) - new combo at 6 since it's only one set of jump in this diff make it clearly for player sake.Fixed

Please Vote for me if my mod useful!

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Thanks. :)

zeroclover wrote:

hi, come for a little mod

Experienced
minus : no clap sound like expert diff :( i like to hear clap hitsound at beginning )Finally Fixed

good hard diff :)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/163572

go ranked go~

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Experienced:
00:24:027(4) - NC
00:43:246(7) - ^
00:49:808(4) - ^
i think its ok how the NCs are but thanks for pointing them out

This is the best i can do. GL :D

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I like this song so I would like to help you , too ^^ even if I am a bit new with modding things |D
I try my best =D

Experienced :

01:01:996 whistle with audio 50 % would sound nicer than clap with 30 I think . It sounds like the rythem you made befor than ^^ Not sure here
(have to say like that whistle rythem you made x3)Thanks~
01:22:855 maybe whistle ?it would change the rhythm then :/

Well I don`t know the rules about spacing at insane maps so .. I just hear over the sounds ^^````
( hope i actually helped you a little bit )
Download: Shoji Meguro - Long Way (Leyko) [Experienced].osu
Aleks719
Timing
I see that your timing from Breeze, but imo offset 582(-8ms from now). i get +/1ms on OD9 with 582.

Expert
Не будь жестокой, ставь ОД-1, т.е. ОД7.

Experienced
claps on quiet sections ? hum, strange. but ok.
00:33:988 (5) - well, imo, doesn't fit here. replace 1/4 later to the downbeat (red tick) or remove this note
and inconsistence at the end of diff: 01:21:215 (1,2,3) - suddenly triple, when only doubles before.

Normal
00:24:957 (3,1) - очень. очень плохой антиджамп. фиксить о/
00:28:707 (1,2) - ^
00:48:863 (1,2,3) - так посимпатичнее
sliders

312,180,49332,2,0,B|356:180|360:228|356:276|312:276,1,140,2|8
200,276,50269,2,0,B|156:276|152:228|156:180|200:180,1,140,2|8
01:22:152 (1) - remove nc

spacing, slder :
68,320,24965,2,0,B|64:264|92:228|128:212|128:212|92:192|52:160|60:104,1,262.499992176891,2|0
96,80,26371,5,8
144,68,26605,1,0

Easy
01:04:340 (1) - я даже помню,кто его рисовал,лол. отличная диффка, без нареканий
Kurai

Aleks719 wrote:

Timing
I see that your timing from Breeze, but imo offset 582(-8ms from now). i get +/1ms on OD9 with 582.
I have checked the offset on Aleks' request, and 582 sounds better.
Aleks719
orz Thanks a lot, Kurai!


Beginner
01:04:332 (1) - Нельзя обеззвучивать концы слайдеров. Тайм секцию с 5% перенеси на начало спиннера. А в конец того слайдера добавь вистл. Хотя странно, зачем ты так тут вообще сделала,т.к. в нормале уже все ок без этой секции с 5%

Expert
00:41:832 (1,2) - на пару клеточек вниз.

EDIT : Bubbled!
-kevincela-
Yay,it's bubbled! Go for rank :3
regenz
I Wish this map Rank Soon. Leyko Mapping Skill Is great.
Goodluck.
IceBeam
[Normal]
единственная сложность,названная по стандарту. может придумать для неё что-нибудь?

00:24:957 (3) - вот тут слайдер заканчивается на красный тик,там нет очевидной ноты,так что лучше закончить на 1/2 раньше или позже
00:28:707 (1) - ^ ну,на твоё усмотрение,они не плохи сейчас,можешь оставить

[Expert]
00:34:917 - было бы логично сюда нотку добавить
00:37:496 (7) - если передвинуть на 1/4 назад - ритм будет более правильным

[Experienced]
00:36:558 (2) - slider starts on blue tick here? no way,add first repeat to 00:36:441
also,to continue this rhytm,add notes to 00:37:027 and 00:37:378

01:00:113 (1,2) - the first and only "jump" in this diff,so looks odd :s place them in another way?

and fix this horrible volume jumps in the intro/outro parts D: I can't even hear the rhytm,so I'll have to check it once again
make a constant volume

that's it
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

IceBeam wrote:

[Normal]
единственная сложность,названная по стандарту. может придумать для неё что-нибудь? Вообще я называла диффы осваиваясь на четвертой персоне, а там нормал так и называется хD так что думаю можно оставить~

00:24:957 (3) - вот тут слайдер заканчивается на красный тик,там нет очевидной ноты,так что лучше закончить на 1/2 раньше или позже ок, исправила
00:28:707 (1) - ^ ну,на твоё усмотрение,они не плохи сейчас,можешь оставить ^

[Expert]
00:34:917 - было бы логично сюда нотку добавить ок
00:37:496 (7) - если передвинуть на 1/4 назад - ритм будет более правильным ^

that's it
Все исправленно :D Спасибо за мод~
IceBeam
ranked!
Louis Cyphre
Наконец-то!! : D молодец <3
0x57CB36
congrats!
spboxer3
congratz for your first Rank map :P
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Thanks everyone!^^~
-kevincela-
Gratz! ^^
regenz
wow Gz for your 1st ranked map
AIR315
Congratz~

;)
Dino99
Congratulations!!~
Topic Starter
Melan Blue
Thank you! ;w;
Derekku
Very nice <3

Added some red to the title text (artist/title at the beginning). Let me know if you want it changed or if it's alright! :)
Topic Starter
Melan Blue

Derekku wrote:

Very nice <3

Added some red to the title text (artist/title at the beginning). Let me know if you want it changed or if it's alright! :)
Awesome!
Thanks! ^^
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