Hideous Divinity - Ages Die

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Makeli
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30. kesäkuuta 2017 at 22:14:25

Artist: Hideous Divinity
Title: Ages Die
Tags: Adveniens extreme technical death metal
BPM: 254
Filesize: 9724kb
Play Time: 06:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Future of the Past (7,78 stars, 3652 notes)


Download: Hideous Divinity - Ages Die
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ime kilinpillua

GRAZIE MAMMA




bg changed
thanks to bonsai for taking the time to check the timing with me again
Twiggles
from my nm q
General: you need kiai, song doesn't reflect notes, streams should be way larger in like most of the map and less crowded. Really not much I can give because it's just stream spam. I stopped pointing out things like the half circle quads because it's literally everywhere.
  • 00:07:353 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the left side looks a little off compared to the right side.
  • 00:15:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhhh, no
  • 00:15:857 - are you sure the 4/4 starts here and not somewhere before?
  • 00:41:428 (1) - i think this should start 00:41:489 -
  • 00:46:161 (5) - nc and make this sound stand out more
  • 00:52:801 (1,1) - make these jumps away from 00:52:063 (1) -, it feels too boring
  • 01:09:798 - why gap? there's clearly sound and even vocals there
  • 01:32:637 (1) - make this slider go down or up, not left
  • 01:48:866 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ugly mess
  • 02:08:764 (1,2,3,4) - wayyy too crowded for this shit
  • 02:30:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why do you have to do this
  • 02:33:568 (1,2,3,4) - ^^, and 02:38:764 (1,2,3,4) -
  • 02:40:920 - if there's a gap here, then dont stack 02:40:890 (1,1) - , it's going to make vaxei choke
  • 02:41:835 (1,2,3,4) - ,02:44:906 (1,2,3,4) - ,02:47:740 (1,2,3,4) -
  • 03:07:345 (1,2,3,4) - k first of all, this is shit. secondly, its a bad overlap 03:06:341 (6,3) -
  • 03:07:817 (1,2,1,2) - you only decided to map this which doesnt make sense at all, there are sounds in the background.

everything else is just repetition

gl
Topic Starter
Makeli

kookoo11 wrote:

from my nm q
General: you need kiai, song doesn't reflect notes, streams should be way larger in like most of the map and less crowded. Really not much I can give because it's just stream spam. I stopped pointing out things like the half circle quads because it's literally everywhere.
  • 00:07:353 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the left side looks a little off compared to the right side. - can't see
  • 00:15:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhhh, no - uhhh, yes. But when modding try to give more info instead of just "uhhh, no" cause the mapper might not understand what you mean. I understood what you meant here but that doesn't mean every mapper will
  • 00:15:857 - are you sure the 4/4 starts here and not somewhere before? - yea i'm pretty sure as the 4/4 seems to be the only way (that fits) for the measure to reset at 00:16:801 (1) - (idk if i'm using the correct terms here lmao)
  • 00:41:428 (1) - i think this should start 00:41:489 - i don't think so cause the held note starts from 00:41:367 (1) - and i wanted to emphasize that with a circle so yeahhhh
  • 00:46:161 (5) - nc and make this sound stand out more - yes
  • 00:52:801 (1,1) - make these jumps away from 00:52:063 (1) -, it feels too boring - lmao boring was just what i had in mind when making these
  • 01:09:798 - why gap? there's clearly sound and even vocals there - drums
  • 01:32:637 (1) - make this slider go down or up, not left - think that would look ugly
  • 01:48:866 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ugly mess - i like it lmao but i'm gonna get more opinions on the playability of that
  • 02:08:764 (1,2,3,4) - wayyy too crowded for this shit - gonna get opinions
  • 02:30:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why do you have to do this
  • 02:33:568 (1,2,3,4) - ^^, and 02:38:764 (1,2,3,4) - because it looks fucking sweet and emphasizes the song
  • 02:40:920 - if there's a gap here, then dont stack 02:40:890 (1,1) - , it's going to make vaxei choke - fuck vaxei then
  • 02:41:835 (1,2,3,4) - ,02:44:906 (1,2,3,4) - ,02:47:740 (1,2,3,4) -
  • 03:07:345 (1,2,3,4) - k first of all, this is shit. secondly, its a bad overlap 03:06:341 (6,3) - why is it shit, why is it a bad overlap?
  • 03:07:817 (1,2,1,2) - you only decided to map this which doesnt make sense at all, there are sounds in the background. - wanted to emphasize drums in this map as much as i can so i did that. If i mapped the guitar i'd have to compromise a ton and i'd rather just do it this way lmao. Will consider mapping the guitar tho

everything else is just repetition

gl
Neptunee
WHAT THE HE'LL
Quetzalcoatl

Neptunee wrote:

WHAT THE HE'LL
Ever since Maakkeli started mapping, Maakkeli always yearned to become the mightiest PP mapper there has ever been. Looking up to my inspirations Maakkeli started his journey in this cruel and cold mapping community. Maakkeli started by mapping some weeb trash music and some DnB but later came to the conclusion that mapping these genres would never bring him closer to his PP mapping goal. Maakkeli decided that mapping the music he honestly enjoyed would be the way to go.

Maakkeli's first big hit on the PP mapping scene was Waldschrein (521pp HDHR SS). It's rhythm was perfect for overspaced jumps and a few long streams. It was the ideal song for the biggest PP. In the end he realized that only 350pp for NoMod SS wasn't enough and started making his second project.

Maakkeli's second project was March of War / Axe of Judgement (635pp HR SS). The rhythms were decent for a PP map but in the end, Maakkeli failed to provide the maximum PP that song had to offer. The overall difficulty of the map ended up being too high whilst the SR was relatively low. The BPM is also a big factor in this one. He thinks this is one of the biggest failures in my PP mapping career and he particularly doesn't like to talk about it.

The map you were looking at before is called Tetrastructural Minds (514pp NoMod SS). Maakkeli originally submitted this as their first metal genre map and later around that time came to the conclusion that it just wasn't good enough for the ranked category back then and decided to grave it. It spent a good ~5 months being graved after Maakkeli decided to give it another go. He remapped it with the intention of it being the biggest PP he had yet to produce. It's rhythm was actually really bad for PP mapping due to it's complex guitar and drum patterns but in the end Maakkeli managed to make it quite farmable for the top players. This is his second greatest PP by far.

And now, you are looking at Ages Die (882pp NoMod SS).

Maakkeli still feels like they haven't achieved the grand goal they're striving for. There are still many great PP mapping foes ahead but they plan to take all of them down one by one. You just wait, he'll become the greatest PP mapper this game has ever seen!
Seaweed
lol what was i thinking
[cool]
timing is still off lmfao. Blame the human drummer.

Hp is pretty high, I mean even Promethean Kings was 5.5 and something this hard should be toned down a little since being able to keep your acc at the streams is highly unlikely; you'd lose your hp on the long streams and then during the slow parts fail rather than gain some hp..

03:10:534 (2) - should stack on 03:10:652 (3) - instead. 03:10:534 (2,3) - sounds more similar than 03:10:416 (1,2) plus
I think if you're going to space the stream out so much at 03:14:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - it shouldn't go so far down because its crazy awkward to play

maybe you could give a little break at this downbeat? 05:03:329 (1,2,3,4) - I mean you did it before at 05:01:079 (1) - and it would give the player a kind of pattern to go off by since the next repeat slider is quite far away so it would kinda work to have them more often (not that anyone would survive at this point).

05:11:329 (1,2,3,4) - ^
05:19:329 (1,2,3,4) - ^

I think i got rsi from modding.
Cool map anyways, look forward to farming this in 15 years
Deppyforce
hp too high even phantasma couldnt pass http://puu.sh/vLyJM/a5cf974e1d.jpg
try 6.9

[Present]
combo colors
lol what the fuck http://puu.sh/vLyDD/79eb80ee57.png
01:14:440 (5) - wanna make ze 1st blue tick clickable cuz snares amyabe so just change this to 4 circes
02:16:088 (1,2,3,4) - late or atleast the last 2 notes
02:20:812 (1) - late
03:27:422 (1,2) - can u do 1/4 kickslider jumps instead of these dam a bit undermapped compared to the circles same for other double 1/4 reveres thing the 3 tringangel sliders should be enough for players to rest? and thers a break right after anyways
06:08:579 (2,3,4) - early

good map
Topic Starter
Makeli

Seaweed wrote:

lol what was i thinking
[cool]
timing is still off lmfao. Blame the human drummer. - shhhhh

Hp is pretty high, I mean even Promethean Kings was 5.5 and something this hard should be toned down a little since being able to keep your acc at the streams is highly unlikely; you'd lose your hp on the long streams and then during the slow parts fail rather than gain some hp.. - it's my style

03:10:534 (2) - should stack on 03:10:652 (3) - instead. 03:10:534 (2,3) - sounds more similar than 03:10:416 (1,2) plus
I think if you're going to space the stream out so much at 03:14:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - it shouldn't go so far down because its crazy awkward to play - meh i just looked at if from a music theory point of view since white ticks are usually more emphasized then red ticks. I'll just change it if someone else thinks it should be like that. Don't really see how that stream is awkward to play tho

maybe you could give a little break at this downbeat? 05:03:329 (1,2,3,4) - I mean you did it before at 05:01:079 (1) - and it would give the player a kind of pattern to go off by since the next repeat slider is quite far away so it would kinda work to have them more often (not that anyone would survive at this point).

05:11:329 (1,2,3,4) - ^
05:19:329 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - those repeat sliders are for guitar stuff

I think i got rsi from modding.
Cool map anyways, look forward to farming this in 15 years

Deppyforce wrote:

hp too high even phantasma couldnt pass http://puu.sh/vLyJM/a5cf974e1d.jpg
try 6.9 - it's my style

[Present]
combo colors - ehh i'll add sometime
lol what the fuck http://puu.sh/vLyDD/79eb80ee57.png - adding more NC's wouldn't make sense music wise tbh
01:14:440 (5) - wanna make ze 1st blue tick clickable cuz snares amyabe so just change this to 4 circes - not even a snare what
02:16:088 (1,2,3,4) - late or atleast the last 2 notes - shhhhh
02:20:812 (1) - late - shhhhh
03:27:422 (1,2) - can u do 1/4 kickslider jumps instead of these dam a bit undermapped compared to the circles same for other double 1/4 reveres thing the 3 tringangel sliders should be enough for players to rest? and thers a break right after anyways - not even undermapped and i don't think kicksliders would fit with the concept here cause upbeat blast vs. downbeat blast
06:08:579 (2,3,4) - early - shhhhh this is not that noticeable tbh

good map
ty u2
Luel Roseline
Wow...That breaktime...
Lasse
combo colors
you should replace your hitfinish samples with http://puu.sh/weEp7/268b104da0.wav cause of better volume balance (based on same sound)
current is too focused on left channel
opposite thing for the tom hitsounds, they are really focused on right, might want to use http://puu.sh/weEyO/7491a2b2de.zip
hp6 is enough

02:54:355 - inconsistent settings for red/green line
00:10:424 (5) - change in guitar could be reflected by stream change, even if drums are the same
00:34:044 (1) - different clap sounds unintentional?
02:16:088 (1,2,3,4) - 02:19:394 (1,2,1,2) - your whole mapping is so consistent but then this? i know these are not exactly the same, but stacking everything in the second one seems a bit unfitting. maybe overlap it similar to how it overlaps 02:17:977 (1,2) - ? http://lasse.s-ul.eu/g0SKsMoP.jpg
02:20:812 (1,1,2,1,2) - at least map the red tick with a circle, it has noticeable guitars and the transition from really undermapped 1/1 to 1/4 slider spam is quite jarring considering music builds up at 02:20:930 -
02:31:856 (4,1) - movement transition here is extremely awkward , tilted me even with ht. something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/A5uKzYAO.jpg would be better I think
02:38:942 (4,1) - streamjump seemed really uncalled for, even with drum intensity increase, spacing increase alone is fine
03:14:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this really should be toned down a bit, drums and guitar are quite similar to before but you throw this huge spike here. spacing is also noticeably uneven with some notes barely touching, some spaced etc so it looks quite unpolished. I think you could scale it by 0.9 or something, still bit of a spike in spacing, but more reasonable considering contrast in the song#
03:34:509 (3,4) - reverse arrow stuff is quite edgy visibilty wise here, seems easy to mistake 3 for a normal 1/4 slider and just sliderbreak, would make repeat more visible (or visible at all rather)
03:36:399 (3,4) - ^
03:49:742 (1) - turn thing is quite underwhelming here, 03:48:797 (1) - does it better
03:51:278 (1) - think something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/9BtRfiDM.jpg would make more sense in comparison to your other stream things here. easy to qadjust if you move some stuff from before around a bit
03:52:872 (4,1) - same issue as the other similar stream movement before, having something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/PJdHUudY.jpg would be way nicer
04:04:682 (4,1) - similar here, the way these handle momentum just feels a bit gross
05:00:829 (9) - isn't the music doing something similar to 04:59:829 (1,1) - here? seems unfitting to suddenly have this one consistent stream
^happens in a few more places in this part

wew consistency

even if I personally disliked the usage of 1/4 jumps a bit, they seem alright with the song

I'll probably recheck once you can find another bn and all since I like the map overall
Topic Starter
Makeli

Lasse wrote:

combo colors - yes
you should replace your hitfinish samples with http://puu.sh/weEp7/268b104da0.wav cause of better volume balance (based on same sound)
current is too focused on left channel - ok
opposite thing for the tom hitsounds, they are really focused on right, might want to use http://puu.sh/weEyO/7491a2b2de.zip - ok
hp6 is enough - ok

02:54:355 - inconsistent settings for red/green line - fok
00:10:424 (5) - change in guitar could be reflected by stream change, even if drums are the same - wanted to emphasize drums in certain places and this is one of them
00:34:044 (1) - different clap sounds unintentional? - should not even be a clap
02:16:088 (1,2,3,4) - 02:19:394 (1,2,1,2) - your whole mapping is so consistent but then this? i know these are not exactly the same, but stacking everything in the second one seems a bit unfitting. maybe overlap it similar to how it overlaps 02:17:977 (1,2) - ? http://lasse.s-ul.eu/g0SKsMoP.jpg - mm sure. Also fixed the timing around that part a bit. Dunno if it's good enough, someone's gonna come and say something about it if it isn't
02:20:812 (1,1,2,1,2) - at least map the red tick with a circle, it has noticeable guitars and the transition from really undermapped 1/1 to 1/4 slider spam is quite jarring considering music builds up at 02:20:930 - - did fun stuff
02:31:856 (4,1) - movement transition here is extremely awkward , tilted me even with ht. something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/A5uKzYAO.jpg would be better I think - don't really like how it looks but w/e
02:38:942 (4,1) - streamjump seemed really uncalled for, even with drum intensity increase, spacing increase alone is fine - really wanted to emphasize the weird "stop" with the 1/4 snares
03:14:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this really should be toned down a bit, drums and guitar are quite similar to before but you throw this huge spike here. spacing is also noticeably uneven with some notes barely touching, some spaced etc so it looks quite unpolished. I think you could scale it by 0.9 or something, still bit of a spike in spacing, but more reasonable considering contrast in the song# - should look a bit better now too
03:34:509 (3,4) - reverse arrow stuff is quite edgy visibilty wise here, seems easy to mistake 3 for a normal 1/4 slider and just sliderbreak, would make repeat more visible (or visible at all rather)
03:36:399 (3,4) - ^ - mhmhm i really like my overlap stuff but i made 03:34:509 (3) - overlap to the right side (if i understand how sliders work in gameplay) so the reverse should be a bit more visible. Eh i'll just redo the part if i have to
03:49:742 (1) - turn thing is quite underwhelming here, 03:48:797 (1) - does it better - didn't want to use the same pattern over and over and over again. will change if i come up with something better idk maybe i'll just make the angle more harsh
03:51:278 (1) - think something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/9BtRfiDM.jpg would make more sense in comparison to your other stream things here. easy to qadjust if you move some stuff from before around a bit - don't like the way that looks
03:52:872 (4,1) - same issue as the other similar stream movement before, having something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/PJdHUudY.jpg would be way nicer - the angle here is about the same now as it is now at that other place
04:04:682 (4,1) - similar here, the way these handle momentum just feels a bit gross - stuff done
05:00:829 (9) - isn't the music doing something similar to 04:59:829 (1,1) - here? seems unfitting to suddenly have this one consistent stream - here i wanted to emphasize the change in guitar cause this part is quite boring
^happens in a few more places in this part

wew consistency - yup

even if I personally disliked the usage of 1/4 jumps a bit, they seem alright with the song

I'll probably recheck once you can find another bn and all since I like the map overall
yuiiiiiiii---- wants to qualify this so are you fine with bubbling? mb for getting two t2 BNs
also feel like there was some other place where there were inconsistencies in timing but can't seem to find it now fuk
_Nico_
:D
Irate

_Nico_ wrote:

:D
Nice image host
Xexxar
nice image host my dude
Yuii-

_Nico_ wrote:

:D
May you, please, use puush or imgur when posting pictures? The link you are using has quite inappropriate content that breaks the rules of forums, according to our marvelous CoC
Topic Starter
Makeli
got some sweet slav girls tho
_Nico_

Yuii- wrote:

_Nico_ wrote:

:D
May you, please, use puush or imgur when posting pictures? The link you are using has quite inappropriate content that breaks the rules of forums, according to our marvelous CoC
Yea,no problem.
xDololow
Another great stream metal map <3 Small mod

[General]
Change HP to 5.5 (or lower) because last spiner kills all HP with HR mod. :o

[Beginning of the new flash]
quit w


05:01:079 (1) - how about change it to two sliders
05:09:079 (1) - ^
05:17:079 (1) - ^
05:25:079 (1) - ^
And other next

I hope is get ranked <3 GL

PS. lower than 8 stars FeelsEasyMan
Topic Starter
Makeli

xDololow wrote:

Another great stream metal map <3 Small mod

[General]
Change HP to 5.5 (or lower) because last spiner kills all HP with HR mod. :o - did

[Beginning of the new flash]
quit w


05:01:079 (1) - how about change it to two sliders
05:09:079 (1) - ^
05:17:079 (1) - ^
05:25:079 (1) - ^
And other next - ehh doesn't seem to fit imo

I hope is get ranked <3 GL

PS. lower than 8 stars FeelsEasyMan
thanks, totally forgot to look at aimod
don't think i can give kds for that tho
Lasse
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