Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN [Osu|Taiko]

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wmfchris

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod Request from wmfchris (From 596108's Mod Queue)

Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:00:554 130.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:23:169 1.0x - N - -> Remove
00:41:169 1.0x - K - -> OK
00:55:477 1.0x - N - -> OK
01:56:861 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:11:630 1.0x - N - -> OK

02:26:405 1.0x - N - -> Remove
02:44:861 1.0x - K - -> OK
02:51:900 1.0x - N - -> Remove
[color=#0000BF]02:52:361 1.0x - K - -> Remove
03:14:400 1.0x - N - -> OK


Notes :

00:01:938 (7) - OK
00:10:015 (7) - same tone so it remains k
00:10:246 (9) - ^
00:14:861 (28) - ^
01:16:707 (210) - why does you put a finish note on this line? to emphasize the finishing
01:18:554 (218) - Change to small note? ^
01:23:169 (246,247) - :O
^

Others :

Skipped , as you said :P
kanpakyin
Finished...Sorry for long delay.. (without hitsound)

Done

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (wmfchris) [Kanpakyin's Insane].osu
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
star

I like Hatsuki Yura.~ :)
JauiPlaY
Hi~ :)
Just some suggestions:

[General]
Royal Flare _Kiva Shinki -- Why are they in tags?
紫色的combo色太妨礙讀圖了...有時候approaching circle很難被注意到

[Normal]
HD,OD-1會比較好
00:20:391 (3) - 用個長slider比較合歌詞哦
00:36:545 (4) - 長slider折返比較合歌詞
00:55:006 - 把break拉到00:55:929比較好
01:12:083 (4) - x256y236
01:19:006 (4) - 尾finish
01:52:237 (3) - 長slider折返比較合歌詞
02:08:852 (3,1) - 還不如合成一個slider...
02:27:314 (2) - 再擺上面點比較好
03:12:891 (2,3) - 這個放最后會被1分淹死的...
到后面太難了啦,各種短折返slider...真的需要各種降難度

[Sharon's]
建議結尾處還是和另外2個難度統一一下比較好
00:14:621 (6,7) - clapx2
01:30:314 (6,7) - ^
02:55:698 (T) - 無用綠線
03:12:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 前面是slider還好說...這裏全是note還是換1/3吧
不錯的難度啊,不過哨聲大了些...

[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:55:468 - 把break拉到00:55:929比較好
01:18:891(x) - 加個note
02:33:083 (1,1) - 去掉nc
02:43:006 - 把break拉到02:44:852比較好
02:58:237 (1) - 去掉nc
03:11:391 (5) - 在03:11:621結束

Good luck heh.
Kotone
fu*k you chris
Topic Starter
wmfchris
lol forgotten to delete tags
sherrie__fay
Red : Unrankable/error staff that you must fix them
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

  • [General]
  1. 如果不准备加SB的话osb就删了吧|_|
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:50:391 (4,5,6,1) - ...会不会有点太遮了0 0
  2. 02:36:083 (5,6,1) - 还是建议空一个拍子出来
  3. 这个……怎么说虽然是N但毕竟是最简单的难度。还是酌情减一点1/2单点比较好(?
  • [KPY]
  1. 00:10:698 (5,1) - spacing..
  2. 00:29:160 (5,6,7) - ..由于stack的原因这里在正式玩的时候堆成一坨了||||
  3. 01:34:468 (3,4,5) - ^
  4. 00:47:852 (7,8) - 诶?....(再打一遍)居然很爽耶OAO..
  5. 01:13:468 (1,2) - spacing
  6. 01:16:237 (4) - ,.,.,,,,不会挡住分数条吗(
  • [Sharon's]
    王墨凡的马子碰不得
  1. whistle太难听了/_\替换一个吧
  2. 01:56:391 (1,2,3) - N:C1
  3. 03:12:429 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ……(眯眼
    ……改掉吧
spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
  1. none

[Normal]



  • Overlaps
    (有些的slider或note有部分的重疊 會導致map不好看~建議都改掉吧)
  1. 02:26:391 (1,2) -
  2. 02:56:391 (2,3) -


mapping
  1. 00:29:160 (5,1) - 不如在同一直線上吧
  2. 00:35:621 (3,4) - 歪掉搂~仔細看一下並沒有對在中間
  3. 00:37:698 (1,1) - 真是的 你是MAT還這麼不注意 轉盤與這個note之間的節奏太近 間距太遠了
  4. 00:55:929 (x) - break在這邊開始吧~
  5. 01:10:698 (1,4) - 不在同一直線上是故意的嗎? 如果不是那就改一下吧~
  6. 01:38:391 (1,2) - 弧度不同? fix掉會比較好看
  7. 01:53:391 (1,1) - 同00:37:698 (1,1) -
  8. 02:31:929 (5) - NC 這個combo長度對於Normal來說太長了
  9. 02:41:391 (1,1) - 同00:37:698 (1,1) -
  10. 03:12:891 (2) - 沒有對到拍點~(結尾)
  11. 03:13:352 (3) - ^

[Sharon'sl]


  • mapping
  1. 00:25:006 (3,4,5) - 不均勻的間距~
  2. 00:42:775 (10) - 用whistle如何~不然這段感覺突然就少了whistle的感覺~
  3. 00:50:160 (11) - ^
  4. 01:43:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不均勻的間距~
  5. 01:58:698 (12) - 同00:42:775 (10) -
  6. 02:06:083 (7) - ^
  7. 02:59:621 (1,10,11,12) - 沒有完全覆蓋到~要不要覆蓋呢?
  8. 03:01:468 (12) - 同00:42:775 (10) -
  9. 03:08:852 (7) - ^
  10. 03:12:660 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊是1/3拍 想必是之前resnap的時候沒有注意到

[Kanpakyin's Insane]


  • KPY說好的真相呢!?

    Settings
  1. kiai與其他的diff不一致~個人建議一致 但是其實沒什麼差啦...反正是GD來著的...


Overlaps
(有些的slider或note有部分的重疊 會導致map不好看~建議都改掉吧)
  1. 03:01:237 (2,3,4,5,6) -


mapping
  1. 00:06:660 (x) - 極度建議加個note 因為這背景音實在太大聲了 大聲到讓人以為這邊有個note
  2. 00:44:852 (1,3,5) - 沒有完全的覆蓋住[nazi]
  3. 01:16:237 (4) - 超出螢幕的slider 這有可能會擋到Rank後的score(rank) board
  4. 02:29:852 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你這間距到底是多少lol 怎麼0.4太多 0.3又太少的...這邊有點不平均的間距~



紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議
kanpakyin
Sandpig
loveFantasy
<3

[General]
  1. 00:55:468處的KIAI line我建議移到00:55:929
  2. kpy的難度可以改成叫Hard, 無論總分數或是玩起來的感覺都是Sharon難些


[Normal]
  1. 00:15:314 (1) - 起頭S finish如何
  2. 00:22:237 (5) - 70% vol綠線移來這, 音效明顯些
  3. 00:29:852 (1) - 改成29:621起頭的repeat slider感覺更合音樂
  4. 00:33:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊由於音樂本身(1,3,5)有鈸, (2,4)沒有, 導致聽起來比較小聲, 加音到90%好些
  5. 00:55:929 (x) - 把結束的KIAI綠線也移來這, 或者對齊55:006的note
  6. 01:20:852 (2) - 維持白線S finish? 音樂本身是有的, 可以漸漸降音
  7. 01:37:929 (6) - +finish as 00:22:237
  8. 02:04:237 (1) - +finish
  9. 02:25:468 (4) - 我覺得結尾應該有個強點的音效(升音量的clap), 後面的(1)可以上finish
  10. 02:55:698 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 這段類似其他地方補上S finish?


[Sharon's]
  1. 前奏的部份我覺得靜音sliderslide會好些
  2. 00:33:314 (6) - 覺得remove finish好些
  3. 00:39:314 (1) - 加new combo如何
  4. 00:54:083 (1,2) - 覺得別理vocal全擺1/3比較好聽
  5. 00:57:775 (1,2,3) - 和(4)的間距有點沒擺好, 全體右移1格(grid 3)
  6. 01:10:698 (x) - (超nazi) Breakline手動拉來這
  7. 01:49:006 (6) - 同00:33:314拔掉finish
  8. 01:55:006 (5) - 同00:39:314加上NC
  9. 02:09:775 (1,2) - 同樣理由建議用1/3
  10. 02:43:006 (5) - 同樣理由NC


[Taiko]
  1. 像是22:698~29:160這種輕的段落要不要降點音量?
  2. 00:22:006 (66,67,68) - del (67)並且一樣做成k K
  3. 01:19:814 (227,228) - del (227)並且把(228)改成大圓比較有三連重音的感覺 (228,233,238)
  4. 02:51:891和02:52:352的KIAI line沒對齊, 我不確定在太鼓diff是不是有rules問題


[Kpy's Insane]
  1. 前奏的部份我覺得靜音sliderslide會好些
  2. Slider Tick Rate 2確實會幫助讀那些變速slider, 不過只是建議, 我覺得並不影響音效
  3. 00:28:237 (1) - 改成whistle?
  4. 00:53:852 (2,3,4) - 打起來有微妙的違合感..想辦法讓1/3 slider的起頭都在白線並且上finish?
  5. 01:56:160 (x) - map here, 一致性並且感覺較好
  6. 02:10:698 (3) - +finish
  7. 02:31:929 (2) - 改成whistle?
  8. 03:04:814 (1) - 我確實沒想到這裡藍線會有東西, spacing改成像其他標準的1/2間格一樣?
  9. 03:11:391 (5,1) - 微妙違合感..說不上來..


that's it, +star
Kotone
wtf 改天來mod
KanaRin
Hey guys OAO All hkppl here.
As per your reqeust.
btw some modding info

Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.

Let's go.

[General]


  1. Well, I can see a .osb in the file? but seems it's useless.
  2. Isn't pending?
  3. No Source?
  4. seems lead-in 3000 has a bit too long. try 2500 or 2000? just saying
  5. Ok,let's move on to the diffs


[Easy]


  1. 00:14:852 (1) - You miss a Finish at long white line? add finish as well, sounds better.
  2. 00:55:006 (3) - it has a bit hard for newbie imo , make the slider obviously? for example:
  3. 01:19:468 (2) - clap instead of finish? you can try to add clap here, finish sounds weird for me.
  4. 03:14:391 (x) - also add a note (+finish) here? seems you miss a note here , add this can be more powerful imo.
  5. That's it, good easy diff, like the slider<3


[Normal]


  1. 用番中文, 圓圓可以再大多格?
  2. 其實前part唔落clap? 雖然用background music clap呢個idea唔錯
  3. 00:22:698 (1) - 暫時係前邊都冇一條Slider用4次來回 , 事實上有d fake, 因為我新手果時都死係到. 可以用3來回再加個note?打擊感都好d
    雖然都係個人化,不過都比個例子你
  4. 00:28:698 (4) - 呢到加個whislte 反而奇怪過clap , 所以都加clap好D
  5. 00:52:006 (1) - 係尾,即係長白線到加Finish,呢個結尾可以再有力量D
  6. 00:53:160 (3) - Slider最頭都要加,理由同上
  7. 01:20:852 (2) - 你個大圓高手唔好可以miss咁多個finsih(?)(頭+尾) 我覺得這歌最正就係多finish (液)
  8. 其實少左好多個,如果你有心情就落多D佢啦 (?)
  9. 02:07:698 (1) - 其他唔落都好唔可以唔落呢個(?) 最like this
  10. 02:08:852 (3) - ^
  11. 03:08:852 (4) - repeat太長了, 搵個方法改改佢? 雖然你可以選擇keep (最好改啦,因為影響左流暢性)
  12. 03:10:468 (1) - 呢part開始識做架啦(?)
  13. 係咁多.冇Easy咁好, 不過都係冇咩問題


[Sharon's]


  1. 00:14:391 (5,6,7) - 其實照道理冇問題, 不過想做得更好可以將呢3個note分開, 同一個位其實我覺得冇咁流暢.例如可以跟番spacing咁樣做?
  2. 01:10:698 (x) - 聽上去miss左粒note, 加個finish係到?
  3. 01:30:083 (5,6,7) - 嗯 , 理由同上
  4. 02:06:083 (7) - Stream冇問題,加個New combo係到?好睇D.
  5. 03:08:852 (7) - ^
  6. 做多D stream map <33



[KPY]


  1. 這個Diff多了幾個tags, 問題存在(?)
  2. 00:29:852 (7) - 呢邊有D難睇 , 不過玩上去冇問題,ups to u.
  3. 00:41:160 (1) - 加個finsih更powerful<3
  4. 01:10:583 (1,2,3) - 藍線起連打玩上去果時有D辛苦, 唔介意可以做Slider 1/4 ? 可以偉高可玩性
  5. 01:59:160 (9) - 後邊D NC開始亂 , 跟我一步一步咁做, 呢個先開nc
  6. 02:00:083 (1) - remove nc
  7. 02:00:545 (5) - 最後係到NC就最好了
  8. 02:10:237 (2) - 加少左個Finish?
  9. 02:10:698 (3) - 呢到都最好加埋^
  10. 03:11:391 (5) - 呢個Slider, 藍線完節奏我覺得真係好奇怪, 如果你白線完會相當好, 唔會影響流暢性. 提提你, 你改左白線完再加finish會更有力
  11. 好圖, nice job.


That's it.
之前俾左星啦(?) kds低下
加油!
Sandpig
Takos
Hi~ >w</
PM me if you have any questions.
All Suggestions

Overall
  • The Tags are different in each diff


Easy
  • I think you should use the same distance snap throughout the whole map.Probably 1.50x? (You use 1.00x and 1.50x so this might confuse beginners)
    03:00:314 - Unnecessary green line
    00:00:545 (1,1,1,1,2) - Use 1.50x spacing?
    00:21:314 (4) - Too close to previous note
    01:57:775 (1,2,3) - Use 1.50x?
    02:10:698 (3) - ^
    03:00:545 (2) - Too close to previous note
    03:01:468 (1) - ^
    03:04:698 (3) - ^
    03:10:698 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Inconsistent spacing


Normal
  • 00:44:391 - Add note?
    00:52:006 (1) - Starting this on the white tick sounds better imo
    01:30:545 - Add note?
    01:52:237 (3) - Maybe curve this slider?
    03:08:852 (4) - End this slider on 03:09:775 - and add notes after this? THis slider is too long
    03:12:545 (1,2,3) - Maybe something like this?


Sharon's
  • No problem


Kpy's Insane
  • 00:14:852 (8) - NC to emphasize the velocity change? (You do it at 00:22:237 (1) - )2.0x is so fasssst
    00:47:852 (7) - NC?
    00:55:237 (5) - ^
    01:50:391 (5) - Normal slider speed fits better imo
    01:52:237 (5) - ^
    02:03:775 (7) - NC?


Nice song~
good luck yo
Sandpig
I think 2 kinds of spacing distance is quite ok in easy diff since the rhythm is very simple

btw if the beginner keep on being confused by such a kind of spacing he will be beginner forever

well ,just remove the useless timing setting

Download: Hatsuki Yura - HAMELN (wmfchris) [Easy].osu
Topic Starter
wmfchris
sorry for the hitsound inconsistancy in normal lol most fixed.
For kpy's diff, fixed what should be fixed, and left some to kpy.

我都好像沒mod過 (逃
sherrie__fay
SB & new BG
太鼓BG没模板懒得做了

--------下面开始SB转移教学--------
1 打开我给你的osb文件
你会看到
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\A-1.png",237,73
L,7929,1
V,0,0,116,1,0.1,1,1
V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1

...(中间略)

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\K-8B.png",237,73
L,190698,1
V,0,0,116,1,0.1,1,1
V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

这个代码

2 然后打开你某个非taiko难度的.osu文件

找到如下代码

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG2.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,55929,69833
2,131821,145179
2,164852,171487
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255


3 接着把.osb

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\A-1.png",237,73
L,7929,1
V,0,0,116,1,0.1,1,1
V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1

...(中间略)

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\K-8B.png",237,73
L,190698,1
V,0,0,116,1,0.1,1,1
V,0,3231,3346,1,1,1,0.1

复制到.osu文件的

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)

这一行下面

4 存档
重载
所有非taiko难度的diff都这样子处理一下。
最后删除.osb文件。
full sub

Download: SB.7z
Regou
好久沒Mod了~

[Kanpakyin's Insane]
00:14:852 (8) 建議New Combo一下提醒別人2x速度
00:43:929 (1,2,3,4) 放上去一點 三角形弄漂亮點
01:55:006~01:56:852 這裡不如放一些Notes或是加個spinner吧 畢竟HP Drain 7 掉血蠻快的
02:57:775 (3) 放下去一點


[Sharon's]
不知怎的總分比Insane多
00:20:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6)五角形擺漂亮點
00:25:468 (5,6)放下去1個grid
00:38:391 (1,2,3,4,5)這裡spacing可以大一點
00:40:698 (1,2,3)這三個notes刪掉,spinner到這裡結束 感覺這樣會比較簡單點
01:23:160 (1,2,3)^
01:36:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 同00:20:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:41:160 (5,6)放上去1個grid
01:54:083 (1,2,3,4,5) 同00:38:391 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:56:391 (1,2,3)同00:40:698 (1,2,3) 01:23:160 (1,2,3)
02:05:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)對Hard diff來說太難了...
02:57:775 (3,4,5)放靠近一點吧
03:08:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)同02:05:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11)

[Normal]
怎麼好像這個diff最少Break Time...
00:14:852 加個note
00:25:929 ^
00:29:621 ^
00:51:545 (5)刪掉這個Note
00:55:929 加個Note
01:26:852 ^
01:37:929 (6)加Finish
02:45:775 (2,3,4,5)改成兩個Sliders?


[Easy]
好像沒問題
Tony
Hi! I'm here cus you currently have opened 5 slots for Special Queue :D

[General]
02:51:891 - I see that you have a Kiai Splash there. I think you should add it to your all difficulties (except taiko), or just delete it :)

[Easy]
00:02:391 (1) - Useless NC. You can remove it
00:06:083 (1) - ^
00:07:468 (3) - You can add a New Combo here. It fits the rhythm change
00:32:391 (3) - this finish sounds a little bit to loud imo. I think you can remove it o3o
00:35:621 (1) - Useless NC. You can remove it
01:18:083 (1) - remove NC
01:19:929 (3) - add NC
01:20:852 (1) - remove NC
01:21:775 (1) - ^
01:51:314 (1) - ^
02:39:314 (1) - ^
02:50:391 (1) - remove NC to keep the pattern, and add a new combo here 02:51:314 -
03:10:698 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Distance. Though it's not a big difference, but it's an Easy difficulty, and it shouldn't be there :(

[Normal]
00:45:314 (2) - Even I get confused of this kick slider. I think you should remap it :S
01:47:621 (5) - ^
01:58:698 (4,5,6,1) - Awwwww. Isn't this too hard? :s
02:31:929 (5,6,7,8) - ^
... I see that you have a lot of these things in this diff..
00:54:083 (1,1,1) - I really dunno why u used new combo's like that :S delete the last two :S
02:09:775 (1,1,1) - ^

[Sharon's]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at: 01:45:414
The only thing that bothers me is the volume being too high on the kiai. The whistles sound a bit noisy. I think you should reduce the volume by 10%.
and btw 03:12:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should make sliders of them :S
omg. I love that style of mapping <3

[Kanpakyin's Insane]
I think 4 different SV is unrankable(0.5, 0.75, 1, 2) . I think u should ask for someone more competent :S
I love the way u used soft whistles <3

I love the song. The maps looked good! Good luck wmf :D
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