I'm sorry for the delay..
[Walking]
I'm not sure about 15% volume, it might be not audible enough. Better increase it to 20%?
03:00:409 (7,8,9) - tbh that has a weird flow, you can see that the slider goes to the right and the circles are on the left, which doesn't follow the natural flow really good. i suggest placing the circles more on the right hand.
03:31:347 (1) - I guess you forgot a strong hitsound here (the others on this spot are pretty boom like)
Rest seems fine for me!
[Dancing]
00:16:347 (3,4) - weird flow again here, for the same actually as in walking - http://puu.sh/5D5BH.jpg maybe something like this? It's ok if it's different, just to give you some idea.
00:27:128 (1,2) - I think that jump plays a bit weird. The vocals aren't so strong that they could be a reason for this jump.. so i suggest moving it a bit closer to 1.
00:34:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bigger suggestion for a way better rhythm if you ask me. http://puu.sh/5D5J9.jpg (1 = 00:34:159 - ) . The reason is that I don't ignore the important vocal here, and i don't let slider end on a downbeat - which usually doesn't provide a good rhythm strucutre.
This problem goes to the whole kiai I just saw... I wanna discuss that on irc with you. (because sometimes it seems fine, whereas sometimes it's completely odd to listen to)
01:52:909 (1) - Also, this jump feels too high, the voice is so smooth, but the jump is really harsh and it doesn't fit overall!
02:12:597 (1) - Pretty much no flow here as well, the connection from 6 to 1 is really weird. http://puu.sh/5D5X8.jpg
02:31:581 (5,6) - Here as well. This flow has a realllyy small angle, so tight! Maybe you wanna open it up a bit? http://puu.sh/5D61C.jpg That's all up to you, although I think something like this flows better with the music.
02:40:253 (3) - I'm sure this is not 1/4, although i'm not sure what else it could be. Probably 1/6?
^ Goes to all drum patterns in the next part.
Yeah, I need to talk with you about some things IRC, see you then :O
[Walking]
I'm not sure about 15% volume, it might be not audible enough. Better increase it to 20%?
03:00:409 (7,8,9) - tbh that has a weird flow, you can see that the slider goes to the right and the circles are on the left, which doesn't follow the natural flow really good. i suggest placing the circles more on the right hand.
03:31:347 (1) - I guess you forgot a strong hitsound here (the others on this spot are pretty boom like)
Rest seems fine for me!
[Dancing]
00:16:347 (3,4) - weird flow again here, for the same actually as in walking - http://puu.sh/5D5BH.jpg maybe something like this? It's ok if it's different, just to give you some idea.
00:27:128 (1,2) - I think that jump plays a bit weird. The vocals aren't so strong that they could be a reason for this jump.. so i suggest moving it a bit closer to 1.
00:34:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bigger suggestion for a way better rhythm if you ask me. http://puu.sh/5D5J9.jpg (1 = 00:34:159 - ) . The reason is that I don't ignore the important vocal here, and i don't let slider end on a downbeat - which usually doesn't provide a good rhythm strucutre.
This problem goes to the whole kiai I just saw... I wanna discuss that on irc with you. (because sometimes it seems fine, whereas sometimes it's completely odd to listen to)
01:52:909 (1) - Also, this jump feels too high, the voice is so smooth, but the jump is really harsh and it doesn't fit overall!
02:12:597 (1) - Pretty much no flow here as well, the connection from 6 to 1 is really weird. http://puu.sh/5D5X8.jpg
02:31:581 (5,6) - Here as well. This flow has a realllyy small angle, so tight! Maybe you wanna open it up a bit? http://puu.sh/5D61C.jpg That's all up to you, although I think something like this flows better with the music.
02:40:253 (3) - I'm sure this is not 1/4, although i'm not sure what else it could be. Probably 1/6?
^ Goes to all drum patterns in the next part.
Yeah, I need to talk with you about some things IRC, see you then :O