Thanks a lot for modding thisKuria wrote:
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a mod from my m4m request ^^[General]
- Remove the .osb file from the song folder and then fullsubmit it, since you dont have any SB on this mapset, so this file is not needed here
- also disable letterbox during breaks for all diff Isnt necessary, it will show up at some point again
- there's seems a "kenezz" name on the tags too, but i don't see any map/difficulty on this mapset that consist with his works, consider adding more information about the diff/works that Kenezz give on this mapset through creator words or the difficulty name^^ Removed from tags, he was going to make a diff, but end up not doing it.
- i'm still unsure about the offset, try offset -6
[Sleeping]
Since i don't see any issue on this diff technically, so i'll pointed out about the pattern position/non-technical stuff instead
- 00:21:503 (4,1) - i think it would looks better if you make the (1) slider covering the left surface of the 00:21:503 (4) - slider, you can make it by move the 00:21:503 (4) - endslider a bit up and then move down a bit the 00:22:909 (1) - endslider, it will be like this:
- 00:22:909 (1,2,1) - the spacing beetween this part are seems awkward to play, since this is the easiest diff, i think make the spacing with the same distance for all pattern or some parts of the pattern would be better, maybe you can make the spacing between this part same from each other, and then adjusting the same spacing for the next pattern that still on the same stanza here 00:25:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - fixed
- 00:34:159 (1,2,3) - the slider shape that covering each slider/notes here is a bit not neatly place enough imo, here's the code for the better/fix'd position if you like to use it^^
64,200,34159,6,0,B|0:112|64:8,1,200,4|0I see it good enough
136,56,35565,2,0,B|96:112|144:160,2,100
208,104,36972,1,4- 00:45:409 (1,2,3) - same goes for here as above, but can be fixed by move the 00:46:815 (2) - repeat part to down a bit and then move this 00:48:222 (3) - into a suitable position that makes it covered by 00:46:815 (2) - Fixed
- 01:00:878 (2,3,4,1) - makes this into zigzag pattern instead linear? to makes more variety for the pattern on this diff I want pattern to be linear ^^'
- 01:39:315 (4,1) - the (1) seems overlapped with 01:39:315 (4) - end slider, you can fix'd it by move the (1) or (4) endslider a bit (or is this intentional? o.o) fixed, i dont mind overlapping thou
- 01:52:909 (1) - rotate this clockwise 30 degree, and then move this down a bit (x48 y185), to make the pattern from 01:50:097 (3,4,1) - looks more flow and nicely symmetrical fixed my way
- 01:52:909 (1,2) - if you did the above thing, then you should fix the distance between this part too, with the next notes that seems affected by the pattern position change
- 01:59:940 (2,3,4,1) - same like my previous statement, i think, make this pattern into zigzag would be better that ambiguous linear pattern no change, same reason i said
- 02:09:784 (1) - nazi, but imo move this to x290 y77 are more fit in the term of flow eeeeh i think is fixed
- 02:15:409 (1,2) - the (1) endslider and the (2) slider seems overlapped each other too, pleas fix it^^ owah people do hate this slight overlapping nowadays, fixed
- 02:19:628 (2,3,4,1) - make the zigsag direction into like this instead? keeping curve
- 03:32:753 (1,2,3,1) - make this zigzag?nay~ linear is the pattern i choose
[Walking]
- AR-1 ok
- OD/HP-1? ok
The flow are quite good in here- 02:13:534 (2,3,4) - this part is still bugged me alot, out of the same kind of 1/2 beat pattern which most of them are stacked, only this 3 notes that i saw different from the other (unstacked), maybe you intended to make the variety on the patter, but it will seems awkward if you just put one different pattern while the other pattern with the same beats are all on the same pattern, consider stacking this or make the similar pattern with the others that are on the 1/2 beats too. i'm prefer the beat pattern to be like this though >_< done
or maybe you can make the pattern similar as this 02:35:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern instead- 02:37:440 (6,1) - move this two one grid down, to make the position more symmetrical between 02:36:503 (4,5,6,1) - done
- 03:12:128 (1,2,1,2,1) - imo it will be better if you make this 5 notes into pentagon pattern by using pentagon tools dont want to
[Dancing]
- HP/OD-1 ok, i ll ask some others opinion about this thou
- AR-1? since the song are kinda slow and ballad-type same as above
- 00:50:579 (7) - almost out of the play field, this slider, consider to move it to right a bit (which means you'l move the other pattern around that slider too ><) is totally in the play field o_o
- 01:01:829 (8) - same here, the endslider same as above
- 01:16:361 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think you're intended to make a slow/fading pace pattern on this pattern by make the distance reduced gradually, but i'm not see it was nicely putted enough by looking the 01:16:829 (3,4,5) - - overlapped each other while the 01:16:361 (1,2,3) - , they're not, imo just make it on the same distance but with the "U" direction are more better, even more if you make it by the help of polygon tools they are overlapped cuz i reduced distance gradually, I made some fixes either way, should look better now
- 02:31:829 (6) - out of playfield, the endslider Why?? I can see the hit 300 perfectly in the game play mode... out of the grid snap doesnt mean out of play field, I think.
- 02:37:220 (4) - the slider shape are kinda awkward here, why not paste the slider from 02:36:282 (2) - for this slider? fixed manually
- 02:37:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as my statement above same reason, wont change
- 02:40:267 (3,4,5,6,7) - i dont know if it was intentional or not, but i saw it was not really on straight direction when i play it, wile in the editor, i saw it was putted straight. The same issue are same for the similar 5-notes stream after this part, consider to fix'd this pattern oh that's just the stack, anyway should look nice now
- 03:00:423 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as my suggestion above no change, same reason
- 03:11:556 (7,8) - is this intentional too, but i saw that the spacing are more far by 0,09 DS here that's cuz i put them without using distance snap, I guess is fixed now
- 03:36:282 (5) - replace the slider shape of this by paste the 03:35:345 (3) - slider? I dont see why
- 03:40:970 (3) - out of playfield, the sliderbody for me is fine
- 04:10:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - yeah, imean like this, for the similar 5 notes pattern before this pattern I decreased in the next combo
i think that's all from me for now
good luck for it^^
Will answer to next mod later, need to run