Hello Lizbeth
General:
Dancing:
00:07:675 (4,1) - this maybe consistent to your patterns at start but i prefer to see this one unstacked because it better represent music flow, there is no point in music to make this notes stacked moreover lyrics is pretty smooth here // that applies also for 00:04:862 (4,1) - 00:10:018 (3,1) - 00:10:956 (3,1) - 00:12:831 (3,1) -
01:26:425 (4) - ^ same
01:32:518 (2,3) - look this plays far more better without stack on beginning of pattern
00:13:768 (3) - imo whistle not really fitting here
00:16:347 (3) - ^
00:59:472 (1,3) - afaik hitcircles hidden under slidertrack is not allowed for hard diffs
03:06:034 (1,3) - ^
01:01:815 (8) - well, this sliders aesthetically fine but of course they can be improved is you make them in new format http://puu.sh/4Z7Fh.jpg that applies to most of 1\2 sliders
01:09:784 (5) - NC might help to read this better, now it's kinda confusing with skipped 1\2 beat
01:16:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - great idea! but... this overlaps looks bad, maybe try something without overlaps idk http://puu.sh/4Z7Xq.jpg
02:37:909 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:00:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:690 (1,2) - repair this overlap?
02:40:722 (7) - not really in straight line
02:45:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4Z8ep.jpg maybe curve this stream can work better imo
02:47:284 (2) - move this little right http://puu.sh/4Z8gO.jpg
03:22:440 (1) - whistle is too loud here imo
overall, really sweet song and really great diff
imo if you update sliders it can be significantly improved in aesthetics way but current way is also fine, reminds me 2011maps... well, 2 years pending xD
Walking:
HP +1, no point to keep this low
ctrl+shift+a and fix all unsnapped notes, just resnap them all
00:13:065 (1) - whistle not really fitting here imo :\
00:16:341 (1) - ^
01:35:097 (2) - ^
02:57:597 (1,2,3) - 3 repeat sliders is not fun to play at all, moreover such short repeat sliders is not a good style for normal, consider to replace them,
just 1 in pattern like 00:35:331 (3) - 00:57:831 (3) -
but 3 in a row looks lazy mapping
03:20:097 (1,2) - ^
overall fine, but personally i don't like stacks under slider ends and this 3 repeat sliders
Sleeping:
00:03:222 (1,2) - if you "art" this sliders (also from here 01:24:784 (1) - ) it would be great, just straight looks like too old style
01:12:597 (2,3) - also it can be really cool if you make blanket here
02:18:222 (1,2) - ^
i like you rhythm here
Good Bye :3
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