1. Osore (7,32 stars, 2727 notes)

Broly wrote:

00:22:315 (7) - You're missing a sound here.
00:41:029 (10) - ^
01:18:101 (8) - ^
01:20:243 (5) - ^

00:42:172 (3) - Around here the bpm seems to be reset, copy the timing points from this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1184507

04:33:169 (8) - nc this, 04:33:369 (1) - remove this nc
04:33:969 (5) - nc this
04:34:769 (7) - nc this

Try combo in every big white tick, it helps the player follow and gain health on the strong sounds.

kawaiikitsun wrote:

idk I'm bored

UwU

00:10:420 (8,1,2,3) - objects are offscreen!!!
00:16:063 (4) - blanket is off
00:22:920 (1) - move this note somewhere else as it's pretty disorienting with this speed
00:47:188 (5) - I'd move the end of this to point directly at 00:47:616 (1) -
00:47:616 (1,1,1,1,1) - why are all of these new combos? It doesn't really emphasize anything
00:48:902 (3,4,5) - flip this vertically because it breaks what the previous pattern and 2 note are doing
00:55:116 (6) - make sure the sharp angles in streams are on sharp sounds (this happens more but I'm lazy)
00:56:902 (3) - make this into a 1/2 slider to make it easier to read
00:57:474 (3) - ^
01:34:015 (1,1) - don't make these new combos please
01:56:063 (2) - this doesn't flow very well into 01:56:491 (1) - , flow into streams is most comfortable when it follows circular flow
02:10:063 (3) - if this is a blanket then it's off
02:24:634 (7,8) - control g these 2
02:31:634 (9) - move this to x:440 y:314 to flow better
02:35:634 (9) - this slider is too long to be following the guitar and I don't see any other sound it might be following
02:35:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you're following the guitar it should be a 1/4 stream
02:42:063 (1,1,1,1) - hard to read because:
1. every note is a new combo
2. the time between notes is different but they're spaced the same
04:08:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ except the new combo part
04:09:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Make sure to watch out for those sharp angles in streams!

If you haven't already, watch this video

Nimfagryuf wrote:

kawaiikitsun wrote:

idk I'm bored

UwU

00:10:420 (8,1,2,3) - objects are offscreen!!!
00:16:063 (4) - blanket is off
00:22:920 (1) - move this note somewhere else as it's pretty disorienting with this speed
00:47:188 (5) - I'd move the end of this to point directly at 00:47:616 (1) -
00:47:616 (1,1,1,1,1) - why are all of these new combos? It doesn't really emphasize anything
00:48:902 (3,4,5) - flip this vertically because it breaks what the previous pattern and 2 note are doing
00:55:116 (6) - make sure the sharp angles in streams are on sharp sounds (this happens more but I'm lazy)
00:56:902 (3) - make this into a 1/2 slider to make it easier to read
00:57:474 (3) - ^
01:34:015 (1,1) - don't make these new combos please
01:56:063 (2) - this doesn't flow very well into 01:56:491 (1) - , flow into streams is most comfortable when it follows circular flow
02:10:063 (3) - if this is a blanket then it's off
02:24:634 (7,8) - control g these 2
02:31:634 (9) - move this to x:440 y:314 to flow better
02:35:634 (9) - this slider is too long to be following the guitar and I don't see any other sound it might be following
02:35:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you're following the guitar it should be a 1/4 stream
02:42:063 (1,1,1,1) - hard to read because:
1. every note is a new combo
2. the time between notes is different but they're spaced the same
04:08:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ except the new combo part
04:09:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Make sure to watch out for those sharp angles in streams!

If you haven't already, watch this video

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