1. We (6,22 stars, 1480 notes)

Rdzeniu wrote:

01:39:477 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing is unnecessary
02:03:905 - oh cmon make some sliders here
02:07:334 (3,4) - i don't hear anything like this in song
02:52:077 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this stream is not good idea tbh
02:54:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same, it's just making this map harder than it is.
be more creative
Don't forget about kudosu for mua ^^

mod

Mari Ohara wrote:

mod

we

00:00:477 (1) - why hitsound !!!"!1
00:05:277 (1,3) - ugly overlap
00:06:477 (4,6) - ^
00:06:991 (5,6) - blanket !!! !!
00:08:362 (2,3) - don't overlap and please make a good slider shape aaa<
00:08:534 (3,5,7) - learn how to slider art
00:18:819 (3) - slider to white tick
00:19:334 (2) - slider to red tick
00:20:191 (3) - ^ do this to the rest of the 1 note breaks
00:27:563 (3,1) - bad overlap
00:28:934 (6,7) - decrease ds
00:35:105 (3,5) - no don't do this, fix overlap
00:36:048 (9) - missing note
00:36:991 (4) - slider to the next red tick, breaks feels awkward
00:41:448 (5,1) - bad overlap
00:42:305 (3) - circle no
00:42:477 (4) - slider to the next red tick
00:46:762 (8,9) - these should be closer, it's too damn easy to sliderbreak with this spacing
00:55:848 (2,5) - why did you chose to have large spacing here when 00:56:534 (6,7) - sounds almost the same ??
02:16:077 (3) - add note with smaller spacing
02:16:248 (4) - ^
02:39:391 (3) - ugly
03:05:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why stream ??!?
03:12:305 (3) - doesn't follow the music
03:18:819 (7) - missing note
03:35:105 (3,4,5,6) - overmapped
03:37:848 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:41:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ OK
03:54:648 (7,8,9) - ^
04:00:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - emphasize to the music, the spacing doesn't make sense.
04:10:934 (1,2,3) - overmapped ;;,, ;!;!
04:12:648 (1,2,3,4) - ^
04:15:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is ok because this part is intense !!!!
04:18:305 (4,5) - slow part, they should be closer
04:50:705 (6,7,8) - overmapped
05:04:591 (7,8,1) - bad flow
05:36:305 (4,1) - why did overlap this !!!!"
05:38:877 (3,4) - blanket and remove the second dot
05:47:448 (1,1,1) - why nc ??? bcs the rhytm changes
05:57:219 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - OMG WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU COPY MONSTRATA
it was a joke please don't take it serious

This map has plenty of beginner issues like bad overlaps, bad rhythm ( you literally don't what you should map to and it's confusing the players ) Flow issues and bad slider art. good luck with improving !!!!! I have done the rest. I am just lazy to type.