omg that stars

[General]
Sooo, is there anything on the sb after 00:38:418 - cuz all I have is black screen for the rest


[Normal]
00:30:782 (2,3) - blanket can be slightly improved lol
00:55:873 (1,2,3) - Since 3 is in the middle of 1,2 I think you should move it a bit to the right to make it a bit more clear on the hit order.
recheck a few of the blankets, it's kinda lol if I just filled the the mod with "blanket this"

[Advanced]
00:06:782 (1,2) - ehh, I don't really like it being mapped like this, since you have sliders they kinda just end up on places where the vocals aren't, 1 ends up being snapped 1/3 while 2 ends up being on a 1/8 tick. I think that rhythm simplifications doesn't really work a whole lot here since like, either way the slider ends end up on awkward places that are noticeable in gameplay, at least for me
00:16:328 (2,1) - Blanket lol

[Indonesian]
00:06:782 (1,2,3) - Same issue as the advanced, it's always an option to not map it like the normal does
00:34:054 (1,2) - Maybe make these parallel? It kinda just looks like 2 should be parallel imo lol
00:36:236 (1,2) - same lol
01:11:145 (1,2) - This isn't really intuitive being this spaced, it's not really readable that these are 1/4 apart since you've had all the things that are snapped 1/4 close together aside from sliders at the start of kiai cuz slider leniency
01:23:691 (6,1) - stack off w
01:28:600 (1,2) - I mean, you've done it twice, but there still wasn't a really intuitive way of introducing it the first time so it's kinda meh to keep around

I'm not too sure about the whole large spacing thing for the later halfs of each kiai, they kinda seem a bit too much considering the difficulty for the most part. I think you should maybe nerf them a little bit, they can still have pretty large spacing but I think the should be touching at the very least so that they are a bit more forgiving

SB please

Battle wrote:

[General]
Sooo, is there anything on the sb after 00:38:418 - cuz all I have is black screen for the rest Sb done noww


[Normal]
00:30:782 (2,3) - blanket can be slightly improved lol Fixed
00:55:873 (1,2,3) - Since 3 is in the middle of 1,2 I think you should move it a bit to the right to make it a bit more clear on the hit order.
recheck a few of the blankets, it's kinda lol if I just filled the the mod with "blanket this" Fixed, moving some notes

[Advanced]
00:06:782 (1,2) - ehh, I don't really like it being mapped like this, since you have sliders they kinda just end up on places where the vocals aren't, 1 ends up being snapped 1/3 while 2 ends up being on a 1/8 tick. I think that rhythm simplifications doesn't really work a whole lot here since like, either way the slider ends end up on awkward places that are noticeable in gameplay, at least for me Fixed, deleted
00:16:328 (2,1) - Blanket lol Fixed

[Indonesian]
00:06:782 (1,2,3) - Same issue as the advanced, it's always an option to not map it like the normal does Fixed
00:34:054 (1,2) - Maybe make these parallel? It kinda just looks like 2 should be parallel imo lol Fixed spacing instead, idk I kinda prefer that way than paralel
00:36:236 (1,2) - same lol Same
01:11:145 (1,2) - This isn't really intuitive being this spaced, it's not really readable that these are 1/4 apart since you've had all the things that are snapped 1/4 close together aside from sliders at the start of kiai cuz slider leniency You'ree right, gonna redo that part asap
01:23:691 (6,1) - stack off w Fixed
01:28:600 (1,2) - I mean, you've done it twice, but there still wasn't a really intuitive way of introducing it the first time so it's kinda meh to keep around Same

I'm not too sure about the whole large spacing thing for the later halfs of each kiai, they kinda seem a bit too much considering the difficulty for the most part. I think you should maybe nerf them a little bit, they can still have pretty large spacing but I think the should be touching at the very least so that they are a bit more forgiving Yes, will try to nerf the spacing

Updated! Sb done also I'll redo the kiai on highest diff, hope it won't take too long lol
Thanks for mod battle~

KittyAdventure wrote:

SB please

Sb done without lyric

Done remapped the kiai, updated!

Gud Luck with this, entah yg mengganggu saya cuma slider yang kurang jozz, entah itu disengajakan atau tidak

Hi Mako *am I right?
It's been such a long time since my last mod, and I'm going to continue my modding work starting from this map

First of all, such as expected, great from you. I really like a lot your mapping style tho, but I found some things that are not good in my view, and let's talk about it!

[Jatuh ke Hati]

1. 00:09:782 (3,3) - Those two sliders feel awkward to me. I can hear some of sound at the ignored white tick after this end of slider, and especially here 00:14:418 - (Note : Seems likely the sound is appear to be in 1/6 snap but I had some experiments through it and found it fits more better placed in 1/4 snap right in the white tick). Based on those explanation, I would rather to recommend mapping those ignored white ticks by adding reverse into those sliders. Beside on it sounds more better, it also plays more better than the previous that I awkwardly played
2. 00:32:691 (2) - Whether it just me, this place sound nothing to me. I mean, yes it's the place where the 'dan' ended, but if you're mapping it like this, it doesn't fit on the way it should be. If you want to keep mapping this part, would rather recommend to switching patterns you are using here, into something like this (I think this suggestion came out because seems likely you're trying to following the vocals but ended up like this because of the patterns you are using right now | Another reason in terms of the pattern choice, 'dan' seems to be start out new stanza connecting to the previous beat that stopped together along with the lyrics, so the pattern you are using doesn't fit right on my ears [but I guess it plays well, just suggesting you to fitting it more with the rhythm in my opinion]}
   
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3. 00:46:600 (5,6) - This seems to be the low version of 00:50:963 (5,6,7) - because I can hear similarity between the lyrics with "jika benar" has more clear 1/4 and "karena" has more slight unclear but if you hear it more accurate, the "re" from "karena" is there on the blue tick. So, why don't you try to map it the same with "jika benar" part, but with more lower emphasis *such as reversed slider or something* to make it sound nothing being ignored in this place?
4. 01:02:146 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I see what you are trying to follow here. But, in my opinion, 01:03:782 - seems likely to be mapped. First, what you are trying to follow here is the vocals, but I found the pattern choice is not fit like what it should be in my opinion. Second, 01:03:918 - has a big sound to be connect with the next beat and it feels being left away within this pattern (mapping it on slider-end). Based on what i explain before, i think you should switch the rhythm to emphasize 01:03:918 - more and also get to map 01:03:782 - to make a strong correlation in my opinion, and this is what I suggest you to do (You also going to apply it the same to 01:20:963 (3,4) - )
   
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5. 01:11:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I'm seeing and hearing this place you are trying to follow the vocals. But, I found something awkward in this pattern, and that is 01:12:100 (3,4,5,6,7) - . It's like the mapping-based-on-vocals here being cut and result as this pattern, which is feels rather awkward to play and to hear by myself. I get confused to hit this when I was test-playing it. Maybe, this sound awkward because the previous pattern are used to following the vocals, so when you're trying to alternate it on this place, it goes into something like, "Eh?" in my opinion xD. So, what I recommend is to switching the pattern again to fit them more to the rhythm and get all the things mapped on how they will look and sound awesome. This is what I recommend for you (If it feels rather complex, you can try to alternate those 1/4 circles by using 1/4 reversed sliders to do | This also applied to 01:29:554 (3,4,5,6,7) - )
   
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[Advanced]

1. 00:09:782 (3,3) - If you are applying the thing I gave you before at you highest diff, you may apply it here, but in addition, make it more simple at this diff than in you highest diff
2. 01:11:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't sound good on my ears. It seems that the first objects snapped to beat but it doesn't give much synergy with the music itself. You know, like it's ignoring something important here because the next pattern (in the same pattern) here you are using the different pattern but sounds more better to me and also the rhythm are quite similar too (01:12:236 (4,5) - ). I suggest you to use the same pattern through the rhythm, because it will make it feel more better to hear in my opinion. This is what it would like to be (This also applied to 01:28:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
   
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For the Normal, i found it no doubt so great job on this hihi

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I addressed on how it looks in my view, most of them just a suggestions to improve the pattern way more better in my opinion too. Feel free to reject what not suit you best.
Good luck on ranking!

feel free to call me back after you reply to ipas' mod since I find the changes to kiai on the hardest diff to be fine now

m4m

[General]
this is just a suggestion, but since the beginning doesn't have any flashing colours can you add 2 new combo colours (something grayish color) and swap combo colours on just the beginning of the song?

[Last diff]
00:13:327 (2,3) - blanket

00:58:054 (1) - curving this too much look kinda ugly to me, you could blanket this with the previous circle

01:11:145 (1,2) - this kinda confused me with rhythm for a sec, i thought the notes were all 1/2. stack them on top of each other please, i think you should fix all patterns similar to this

01:23:418 (4,5,6) - these are unevenly spaced out it doesn't look neat

01:27:782 (4,5,6) - ^

[advanced]
00:16:328 (2,1) - these notes have 1.25 ds with them, while the rest has about 1.2 - 1.19

00:24:236 - don't really see a purpose in these inherit points, since the volume is only going down by 5%

00:32:691 (2,3,4) - this might look better http://prntscr.com/fh7kj1 (place circle 4 at 406 19)

01:23:145 (3) - move to 87 130 for a perfect triangle with slider 1's tail and circle 2



all i have to say, good luck with this map!

Ipas wrote:

Hi Mako *am I right? Yeeess
It's been such a long time since my last mod, and I'm going to continue my modding work starting from this map

First of all, such as expected, great from you. I really like a lot your mapping style tho, but I found some things that are not good in my view, and let's talk about it!

[Jatuh ke Hati]

1. 00:09:782 (3,3) - Those two sliders feel awkward to me. I can hear some of sound at the ignored white tick after this end of slider, and especially here 00:14:418 - (Note : Seems likely the sound is appear to be in 1/6 snap but I had some experiments through it and found it fits more better placed in 1/4 snap right in the white tick). Based on those explanation, I would rather to recommend mapping those ignored white ticks by adding reverse into those sliders. Beside on it sounds more better, it also plays more better than the previous that I awkwardly played I believe the snare is precisely stop on blue tick here 00:09:918 - other than that more like passive beat to me, and I don't think 1/6 will fit the music very well
   
2. 00:32:691 (2) - Whether it just me, this place sound nothing to me. I mean, yes it's the place where the 'dan' ended, but if you're mapping it like this, it doesn't fit on the way it should be. If you want to keep mapping this part, would rather recommend to switching patterns you are using here, into something like this (I think this suggestion came out because seems likely you're trying to following the vocals but ended up like this because of the patterns you are using right now | Another reason in terms of the pattern choice, 'dan' seems to be start out new stanza connecting to the previous beat that stopped together along with the lyrics, so the pattern you are using doesn't fit right on my ears [but I guess it plays well, just suggesting you to fitting it more with the rhythm in my opinion]} The beat you mention earlier here 00:32:145 - more like passive beat imo it's not supported by vocal or piano, so by using 1/2 slider there will make the whole rhythm more awkward than the current one
   
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3. 00:46:600 (5,6) - This seems to be the low version of 00:50:963 (5,6,7) - because I can hear similarity between the lyrics with "jika benar" has more clear 1/4 and "karena" has more slight unclear but if you hear it more accurate, the "re" from "karena" is there on the blue tick. So, why don't you try to map it the same with "jika benar" part, but with more lower emphasis *such as reversed slider or something* to make it sound nothing being ignored in this place? The flow after these anti jump 00:46:054 (4,5) - is better be emphasized by two circles imo, not by reversing 1/4 slider as it has different musicality than "jika benar" on this case the vocal should be "karna" not "karena" so it better be emphasized by two circles on 1/2 beat instead 1/4 as there's nothing to map on blue tick
   
4. 01:02:146 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - I see what you are trying to follow here. But, in my opinion, 01:03:782 - seems likely to be mapped. First, what you are trying to follow here is the vocals, but I found the pattern choice is not fit like what it should be in my opinion. Second, 01:03:918 - has a big sound to be connect with the next beat and it feels being left away within this pattern (mapping it on slider-end). Based on what i explain before, i think you should switch the rhythm to emphasize 01:03:918 - more and also get to map 01:03:782 - to make a strong correlation in my opinion, and this is what I suggest you to do (You also going to apply it the same to 01:20:963 (3,4) - ) Again the beat you mention earlier here 01:03:782 - not supported by vocal, drum or bass as the vocal of "mu" itself starting on this point 01:03:509 -
   
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5. 01:11:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - I'm seeing and hearing this place you are trying to follow the vocals. But, I found something awkward in this pattern, and that is 01:12:100 (3,4,5,6,7) - . It's like the mapping-based-on-vocals here being cut and result as this pattern, which is feels rather awkward to play and to hear by myself. I get confused to hit this when I was test-playing it. Maybe, this sound awkward because the previous pattern are used to following the vocals, so when you're trying to alternate it on this place, it goes into something like, "Eh?" in my opinion xD. So, what I recommend is to switching the pattern again to fit them more to the rhythm and get all the things mapped on how they will look and sound awesome. This is what I recommend for you (If it feels rather complex, you can try to alternate those 1/4 circles by using 1/4 reversed sliders to do | This also applied to 01:29:554 (3,4,5,6,7) - ) The current rhythmical is good enough to use imo, as there is long vocal of "ku" here 01:12:373 (5,6) - that should be covered by a slider instead, same as the second one
   
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[Advanced]

1. 00:09:782 (3,3) - If you are applying the thing I gave you before at you highest diff, you may apply it here, but in addition, make it more simple at this diff than in you highest diff I'm not applying, same reason as highest
2. 01:11:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern doesn't sound good on my ears. It seems that the first objects snapped to beat but it doesn't give much synergy with the music itself. You know, like it's ignoring something important here because the next pattern (in the same pattern) here you are using the different pattern but sounds more better to me and also the rhythm are quite similar too (01:12:236 (4,5) - ). I suggest you to use the same pattern through the rhythm, because it will make it feel more better to hear in my opinion. This is what it would like to be (This also applied to 01:28:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

For the Normal, i found it no doubt so great job on this hihi

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I addressed on how it looks in my view, most of them just a suggestions to improve the pattern way more better in my opinion too. Feel free to reject what not suit you best.
Good luck on ranking! Thanks for mod Ipas, sorry for rejecting so many suggestion ><

Einja wrote:

m4m

[General]
this is just a suggestion, but since the beginning doesn't have any flashing colours can you add 2 new combo colours (something grayish color) and swap combo colours on just the beginning of the song? Yeah there's no flashing color on the beginning because there's no drum or bass that can be emphasize by the flashing, so I think we don't need any on the beginning

[Last diff]
00:13:327 (2,3) - blanket No need to be blanket, as it can result to the ds problem on (3,4)

00:58:054 (1) - curving this too much look kinda ugly to me, you could blanket this with the previous circle Idk, I think it's better that way a bit paralel with previous curve slider, fixed the spacing a bit tho

01:11:145 (1,2) - this kinda confused me with rhythm for a sec, i thought the notes were all 1/2. stack them on top of each other please, i think you should fix all patterns similar to this They're fine, as they follow the intial 1.0x ds on the kiai, so far there's no confusing visual spacing regarding 1/2 and 1/4 beat

01:23:418 (4,5,6) - these are unevenly spaced out it doesn't look neat

01:27:782 (4,5,6) - ^ Fixed both

[advanced]
00:16:328 (2,1) - these notes have 1.25 ds with them, while the rest has about 1.2 - 1.19 Fixed, the blanket too

00:24:236 - don't really see a purpose in these inherit points, since the volume is only going down by 5% It's intentional

00:32:691 (2,3,4) - this might look better http://prntscr.com/fh7kj1 (place circle 4 at 406 19) No need, will be ds problem

01:23:145 (3) - move to 87 130 for a perfect triangle with slider 1's tail and circle 2 Fixed



all i have to say, good luck with this map! Thanks for mod Einja!

Updated! waiting for Battle

lol u didn't call me back w, anyways are you all set, just need to make sure before bubbling lol

Changed,

Normal
00:55:873 (1,2,3) - Change placement for more intuitive gameplay

Normal and Advance
01:13:327 (1) - and 01:30:782 (1) - Add whistle on head for consistency with the hardest diff

Other than that everything good to go I guess, thanks for rechecking btw

Name change back to Mako Sakata when :thinking:

WAT

kak mako plz LOL

Where is Mako Sakata

知らない！

kawaii desu ! xd

checked the map and there's nothing worth mentioning

can i qualify

@pishi: yes you can hon, also should I give you a mod back? Lol

Btw if anyone asking the metadata: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=D0MlOGYo-ls
It's taken from his official label channel, I think both Jaz and JAZ could work as the artist imo

Thanks as always pishi😘

JAZJUZ

Dari Mako Sakata

if you think this is worth a mod, then do

milr_ wrote:

kawaii desu ! xd

<3

gz mbaknya wkwkw XD

Yayy~
Thank you all 💕

luluh hati gw, sumpah KWKWKWKW

gratz mba

Gratzz! :3

Is this the real Mako Sakata?

Monstrata wrote:

Is this the real Mako Sakata?

yes sir

Heard this song everyday in Malaysian radio. :puke: but still dances to it.
Congrats!

niat kampret ;v

please at least change the BG due to the irrelation with the song and the creator
also remove "mako sakata" from tags


it's a good map nonetheless, it's a shame if it'll be disqualified cuz of the mapper is being insanely possesive over other people's identity

Grim Rapper wrote:

please at least change the BG due to the irrelation with the song and the creator
also remove "mako sakata" from tags

hm

also stop the over-impersonation on the description, you're not Mako Sakata and you'll never will be. Even the people you impersonated is pissed because of you and telling everyone to report you, please realize your mistakes before it's too late for you

it's a good map nonetheless, it's a shame if it'll be disqualified cuz of the mapper is being insanely possesive over other people's identity

is too late ma bro, 11days ago qualified.

HeatKai wrote:

Heard this song everyday in Malaysian radio. :puke: but still dances to it.
Congrats!

:joget: bang~

Thanks moderator for keeping the thread clean. Other than that, I took everything here as a compliment, no hard feeling. Also I'll answer one question, Mako Sakata is real and I (Shiranai) isn't, so at least you people can take a hint lol. I'll answer more questions if you ask me more politely, tyvm.

Its nice and all, but mnd you telling me who is Mako Sakata lo

Shiranai wrote:

Thanks moderator for keeping the thread clean. Other than that, I took everything here as a compliment, no hard feeling. Also I'll answer one question, Mako Sakata is real and I (Shiranai) isn't, so at least you people can take a hint lol. I'll answer more questions if you ask me more politely, tyvm.

>I'll answer more questions if you ask me more politely, tyvm.

so why do you want to do this? well, this problem already did and you confessed you're not Mako Sakata, just why lol, i thought you were the real not normies girl .

diterima ga kk sama mako sakata,