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Emii - Abyss

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Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月7日 at 0:10:55

Artist: Emii
Title: Abyss
Source: Touhou
Tags: Komeiji Satori LiLA'c Records wmfchris 556mm passion dancing battle girls hakurei rave 03
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6000kb
Play Time: 03:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Darkness (4.91 stars, 691 notes)
  2. Light (3.06 stars, 279 notes)
  3. Night (4.7 stars, 472 notes)
  4. Wmf's Taiko (4.89 stars, 1286 notes)
Download: Emii - Abyss
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Change the lyirc font.Please Re-download map if you has this before 02/07/2012.
Snowy Dream's 3rd Touhou song , and 6th beatmap.
Enjoy >w<
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[Light](Normal) by Snowy Dream finished on 29/07/2011
[Night](Hard) by Snowy Dream finished on 31/07/2011
[Wmf's Taiko] by wmfchris finished on 08/08/2011
[Darkness](Hard+) by Snowy Dream finished on 29/07/2011
[Story Board] by Snowy Dream finished on 31/07/2011
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 82 times in total.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
先说些大概的问题 :P

General:

SB文字存在感太差了.是不是考虑做一些(阴影 字体描边 外发光)的效果?

去掉Letterbox during breaks.现在的话BT时间的那些SB效果上下带黑边我真心觉得不好看.

.....确实看出来送分的决心 HPDRAIN和OD那么低 还要暴分了 好吧 你送分.. :|

设置开头的LEAD IN,开始太快了 差点没反应过来...



Night:

02:29:553 (1) - 此 跳 无 节 操 !

Darkness:

00:17:953 (6) - 故意的? 2.5spacing 长喜雪你好
00:42:553 (3,4,5) - 虽然这Spacing没问题 但是我太弱了 还是被坑了...(所以我弱弱的问下 可以换成SLIDER让读图变的更容易点不=v=
03:30:953 (1) - 这之后没必要用0.6Spacing吧? 差点在SLIDER那里按连..

8-) 先看看这些有需要弄弄的不 细MOD以后再说=v=
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Nymph_ wrote:

先说些大概的问题 :P

General:

SB文字存在感太差了.是不是考虑做一些(阴影 字体描边 外发光)的效果? 真心不会做

去掉Letterbox during breaks.现在的话BT时间的那些SB效果上下带黑边我真心觉得不好看. 同上

.....确实看出来送分的决心 HPDRAIN和OD那么低 还要暴分了 好吧 你送分.. :|

设置开头的LEAD IN,开始太快了 差点没反应过来... Fixed



Night:

02:29:553 (1) - 此 跳 无 节 操 ! Fixed (哪里无节操了 才3.0 最近的新手能应付)

Darkness:

00:17:953 (6) - 故意的? 2.5spacing 长喜雪你好 改成2.0了 长喜那鬼畜的
00:42:553 (3,4,5) - 虽然这Spacing没问题 但是我太弱了 还是被坑了...才不要改..否则没人来堆PC了 虽然感觉这很多人也能1PC。。(所以我弱弱的问下 可以换成SLIDER让读图变的更容易点不=v=
03:30:953 (1) - 这之后没必要用0.6Spacing吧? 差点在SLIDER那里按连.. www 所谓最后要放水...

8-) 先看看这些有需要弄弄的不 细MOD以后再说=v=
求细mod
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
新坑呢0.0
Your message is too short.(尼玛还不够
Please do not post messages like "star"
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
hi there :P

[overall]:
  1. I suggest you use many soft finish
  2. add an epilepsy warning imo?
[Darkness]:
  1. 00:26:553 (13) - Finish
  2. 00:34:553 (1) - beginning finish
  3. 00:39:353 (8) - finish
  4. 02:00:953 (1) - beginning finish
[Night]:
  1. 00:26:553 (6) - beginning finish
  2. 01:38:153 (4) - end finish
  3. 03:11:353 (1) - beginning finish
  4. 03:12:953 (1) - ^
[Light]:
  1. Nice Diff
sorry for short mod
really nice map<3
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

S o r d a wrote:

hi there :P

[overall]:
  1. I suggest you use many soft finish
  2. add an epilepsy warning imo?
[Darkness]:
  1. 00:26:553 (13) - Finish
  2. 00:34:553 (1) - beginning finish
  3. 00:39:353 (8) - finish
  4. 02:00:953 (1) - beginning finish
[Night]:
  1. 00:26:553 (6) - beginning finish
  2. 01:38:153 (4) - end finish
  3. 03:11:353 (1) - beginning finish
  4. 03:12:953 (1) - ^
[Light]:
  1. Nice Diff
sorry for short mod
really nice map<3
All Fixed ;)
Thanks very much for modding ~
Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren
我擦神mapper的图mod起来很困难啊
小小挑剔一下 :p

General
在Creator's Words里把每个名称对应的难度用括号标上(比如Light → Normal?)

Light
00:31:353 (1) - NM建议不用滑道不清晰的slider
00:47:353 (4) - 歪了.上一格
02:04:353 (1) - 这个.....加长1/4拍?
02:08:553 (2,3,4) - 最好别用多个spacing
02:22:553 (6,7,8) - >_>

Night
00:16:353 (x) - 加个音
00:28:153 (1) - finish?
03:12:153 (3,3) - 第一个hit加finish?
ziin
2,632 posts
Joined January 2010
ziin
no kd

[general]
disable epilepsy warning. There's nothing in here over 2 Hz, let alone 4 Hz.

[light]
not mapping the whole song seems really lazy

[night]
00:12:153 - the section from the beginning to here is overmapped :(
also overmapped in the similar section later in the song.

[darkness]
01:17:753 (1) - weird spacing. Normally accelerated spacing is a constant accel, and jumps are bigger than +.2x. What about mapping the bass drum here? 1/2 notes are kind of boring.
same overmapping stuff in night.

[storyboard]
Don't fade out the SB. Just let the song end. I wouldn't have a problem with this, but you mapped the beginning of the song, so the skip icon doesn't come up at the end (and not everyone knows to press space). Watching a fading out background isn't very important anyway.

sorry for limited mod, but I don't really like this style of mapping which follows the beat rather than the music. It's not a bad map, I just thought the rhythms weren't very well thought out and they weren't specific to this song.
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

ziin wrote:

no kd

[general]
disable epilepsy warning. There's nothing in here over 2 Hz, let alone 4 Hz.

[light]
not mapping the whole song seems really lazy

[night]
00:12:153 - the section from the beginning to here is overmapped :(
also overmapped in the similar section later in the song.

[darkness]
01:17:753 (1) - weird spacing. Normally accelerated spacing is a constant accel, and jumps are bigger than +.2x. What about mapping the bass drum here? 1/2 notes are kind of boring.
same overmapping stuff in night.

[storyboard]
Don't fade out the SB. Just let the song end. I wouldn't have a problem with this, but you mapped the beginning of the song, so the skip icon doesn't come up at the end (and not everyone knows to press space). Watching a fading out background isn't very important anyway.

sorry for limited mod, but I don't really like this style of mapping which follows the beat rather than the music. It's not a bad map, I just thought the rhythms weren't very well thought out and they weren't specific to this song.
Oh,I don't see 'no kud'... I just given it at once..
Thanks for modding !
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
公元二零一一,七月初七。余日中觀天像,驚覺一星宿墜落。遂開機,入藕酥論壇,聞雪夢兄傳一新圖。故知雪夢之圖,實為天降之神物,可遇不可求也。佩服感慨之余,以一星獻上,但求雪夢哥笑納。
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
哦射什麽時候傳的新圖
神MAPPER加油!
應該够了 這字數
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
先starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr (？)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
I'll find a BG later <3

satori is moe moe moe moe moe moe moe moe moe moe moe moe (？

Download: Emii - Abyss (Snowy Dream) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
Taiko BG is here.

And star star star star star star star star star star star star star.

OK there are enough words now.

Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu

JauiPlaY wrote:

公元二零一一,七月初七。余日中觀天像,驚覺一星宿墜落。遂開機,入藕酥論壇,聞雪夢兄傳一新圖。故知雪夢之圖,實為天降之神物,可遇不可求也。佩服感慨之余,以一星獻上,但求雪夢哥笑納。
这萌卖得好
+1SP
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone

yangzd88 wrote:

JauiPlaY wrote:

公元二零一一,七月初七。余日中觀天像,驚覺一星宿墜落。遂開機,入藕酥論壇,聞雪夢兄傳一新圖。故知雪夢之圖,實為天降之神物,可遇不可求也。佩服感慨之余,以一星獻上,但求雪夢哥笑納。
这萌卖得好
+1SP
8-) ...
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

JauiPlaY wrote:

公元二零一一,七月初七。余日中觀天像,驚覺一星宿墜落。遂開機,入藕酥論壇,聞雪夢兄傳一新圖。故知雪夢之圖,實為天降之神物,可遇不可求也。佩服感慨之余,以一星獻上,但求雪夢哥笑納。
这个的确越读越神 8-)
aabc271
osu! Alumni
1,315 posts
Joined August 2009
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Wmf's Taiko]

The BG of the diff is not in correct place ( see this ). May need to delete SB for Taiko diff or make another BG~

00:10:053 - ( 25 ) The note is in wrong place. Move this 1/4 backward ( to 00:10:153 ) ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:18:153 - ( 53 ) Red note ?

00:18:953 - ( 58 ) ^

01:01:753 - ( 51 ) ^

01:02:953 - ( 58 ) Blue note ?

02:58:353 - ( 763 ) Red note ?

02:59:153 - ( 766 ) Blue note ?

02:59:353 - ( 767 ) Delete this note ?

03:14:753 - ( 861 ) ^

03:16:753 - ( 871 ) Red note ?

03:23:753 - ( 914 ) Blue note ?

03:36:553 - ( 46 ) ^

03:39:753 - ( 66 ) ^

The map is nice ~

Like the rest right after the kiai times www

btw I like the song >w<

Rating : 9/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

Add wmfchris to Tags in all difficulties.

Everything else is fine.

[Light]
00:31:353 (1) - I know you tried to follow that sound in music somehow,but it doesn't look so good.
Make something like this?
SPOILER
00:34:553 (5) - Finish.
00:36:153 (2) - Blue tick doesn't follow anything,change to 1/1 slider.
01:00:153 (1) - Finish.
01:05:353 (5) - Not that good,because lyrics starting a bit earlier.I'd move this slider back to 01:04:953 and add another circle at 01:06:553 instead.
01:46:153 - Add a note here to follow the lyrics.
01:51:753 - ^
02:04:353 (1) - A bit unexpected for this diff..I'd change to simple 1/1 rhytm: (02:04:153,02:04:553)
02:06:553 (5) - Continue reverses up to 02:07:353?
02:32:953 (1) - There's no blue tick,change to 1/1.

[Night]
00:03:753 (1,2,3) - Unstack (3).It'd MUCH better.
00:07:153 (1) - Don't jump in slowdown parts at least.It's very hard to read.
01:12:553 (9,1,2) - This rhytm is inconsistent.You should move 01:13:953 (3) 1/2 earlier.
01:18:953 (4) - Change to a single circle?
01:40:353 - Add a note to follow the lyrics.
01:43:353 (1) - Not sure if this blue tick fits here,it doesn't follow any rhytm :|
02:19:353 (7) - Start it from previous red tick.
03:03:153 (5) - Looks a bit untidy..move it 2 grids up (lvl4).
03:20:953 (1) - Again repeating on blue tick is wrong.
03:22:553 (4) - ^

[Darkness]
00:08:953 (6) - Again,next white tick sounds much better..fix it please.
00:17:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh please,don't do such random jumps..Fix distance between (5) and (6) or make the spacing more equal.
01:33:153 - Add a note to follow the lyrics.
01:34:353 - ^
01:37:553 (8) - New combo and I'd suggest to place 01:38:353 (10,11) somewhere between them.Maybe like this:
SPOILER
01:51:353 (1) - No no,again,lyrics are clearly at 01:51:753,so fix this blue tick.
02:31:153 (1,2,3) - Reduce this jump please,it's very hard to hit 1/4 after such a jumping.
03:16:153 (1,2,3) - Don't really like how it looks,cause (1,2) was used in previous pattern,and then a sudden jump to (3)..Maybe put new combo mark to 03:16:553 then,instead of 03:16:153?

Nice song choice and good mapset overall.
I'd give a star if I could,good luck~
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Add wmfchris to Tags in all difficulties. Fixed

Everything else is fine.

[Light]
00:31:353 (1) - I know you tried to follow that sound in music somehow,but it doesn't look so good. Fixed
Make something like this?
SPOILER
00:34:553 (5) - Finish.Fixed
00:36:153 (2) - Blue tick doesn't follow anything,change to 1/1 slider.Fixed
01:00:153 (1) - Finish.Fixed
01:05:353 (5) - Not that good,because lyrics starting a bit earlier.I'd move this slider back to 01:04:953 and add another circle at 01:06:553 instead.
01:46:153 - Add a note here to follow the lyrics.Fixed
01:51:753 - ^Fixed
02:04:353 (1) - A bit unexpected for this diff..I'd change to simple 1/1 rhytm: (02:04:153,02:04:553) Fixed
02:06:553 (5) - Continue reverses up to 02:07:353? Nope
02:32:953 (1) - There's no blue tick,change to 1/1. ^

[Night]
00:03:753 (1,2,3) - Unstack (3).It'd MUCH better.Fixed
00:07:153 (1) - Don't jump in slowdown parts at least.It's very hard to read.Fixed
01:12:553 (9,1,2) - This rhytm is inconsistent.You should move 01:13:953 (3) 1/2 earlier. Fixed
01:18:953 (4) - Change to a single circle?Fixed
01:40:353 - Add a note to follow the lyrics.Fixed
01:43:353 (1) - Not sure if this blue tick fits here,it doesn't follow any rhytm :|
02:19:353 (7) - Start it from previous red tick. nope
03:03:153 (5) - Looks a bit untidy..move it 2 grids up (lvl4).Fixed
03:20:953 (1) - Again repeating on blue tick is wrong. Nope
03:22:553 (4) - ^

[Darkness]
00:08:953 (6) - Again,next white tick sounds much better..fix it please.Nope
00:17:353 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Oh please,don't do such random jumps..Fix distance between (5) and (6) or make the spacing more equal.Fixed
01:33:153 - Add a note to follow the lyrics.Fixed
01:34:353 - ^Fixed
01:37:553 (8) - New combo and I'd suggest to place 01:38:353 (10,11) somewhere between them.Maybe like this:Fixed
SPOILER
01:51:353 (1) - No no,again,lyrics are clearly at 01:51:753,so fix this blue tick. ....
02:31:153 (1,2,3) - Reduce this jump please,it's very hard to hit 1/4 after such a jumping.Fixed
03:16:153 (1,2,3) - Don't really like how it looks,cause (1,2) was used in previous pattern,and then a sudden jump to (3)..Maybe put new combo mark to 03:16:553 then,instead of 03:16:153? Fixed...?

Nice song choice and good mapset overall.
I'd give a star if I could,good luck~
Thanks a lot~ :)
I fixed lots of what you suggested.
Patchouli
824 posts
Joined July 2009
Patchouli
thank you request and good wallpaper ;)

All Suggestion!
General
First KIAITime end
00:53:753 ~ 01:19:353?
Second KIAITime end
02:10:553 ~ 02:36:153?

StoryBoard
02:23:353 -Add SB?
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyric\satoriSB.png",320,240
F,0,143353,144153,1,0
 S,0,143353,144153,0.8054401,0.8771199

Light
If you do not create "Easy Diff".must be below a 3-star difficulty level(star rating under 3.00)
00:14:653 - Delete timing point?
00:15:253 - ^

Night
00:14:653 - Delete timing point?
00:15:253 - ^
00:18:153 - Add note?
00:30:953 - ^
02:15:953 (1) - delete new combo?

Darkness
00:14:653 - Delete timing point?
00:15:253 - ^
00:28:153 (3) - Add New combo?

pretty nice map and good SB! XD
sry noob modding>.<
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
加油!邁向第2張Rank :)

Mod in geme :3
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
[General]

>> 把Light diff 後面SB的code刪掉 不然打完會繼續出現SB

[Light]

00:28:958 (x) - 加個circle ?

[Night]

>>Timing section 沒有snap好? 有些綠線似乎都-5ms了o.o

03:00:958 (6) - 感覺這邊可以改用1/8 slider 看你吧~_~ (有些人是不太喜歡hard出現1/8)

03:01:758 (x) - 加個circle?

[Darkness]

02:08:958 (7) - NC

00:15:758 (1) - 建議改個位置 , 因為repeat會被spinner的押忍擋 雖然clear是不會被擋到還可以讀

去問個BAT看看這樣有沒有unrankable比較妥當

SPOILER


[SB]

稍微簡單地看了一下

>>把"satoriSB" code 的scale 一開始改成0.8
因為design的介面是640x480
或者你要用640x480的圖片然後scale一開始預設是1也可以o.o

>>第二個"white.PNG"沒完全fade掉

痾...相同的效果code看起來是沒一致 不過整體觀是不會有什麼影響啦o.o
如果需要我幫忙整理再說一聲吧:3

好圖+小覺的歌所以star :oops:
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