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FictionJunction - stone cold (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Nymph
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SamiPale

wcx19911123 wrote:

[SamiPale]
00:29:851 (1,1) - too far oh...far?how to far with two spinner Can't find another way to place notes so I want to keep it for now
01:24:471 (1) - circle then spinner from 01:24:575 ? that's a good way, but I want to keep my style
thx~
se-sukeEila
nice map!! :)
I like this song~

Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)

実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません

star~
se-sukeEila

se-sukeEila wrote:

nice map!! :)
I like this song~

Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)

実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません
Sorry,for my very poor English

star~

It made a mistake.
Double contribution
sorry :o
KayeSara
nice map!! :)
I like this song~

Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)

実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません

star~
我照着抄可以了吧
JauiPlaY
hihi~ :)
一些建議:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
00:53:851(1,2) - 把(1)變成一個note, (2)折返2次并移至00:54:264
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適

[Normal]
all fine.

[Hard]
01:07:402(7) - 還不如在紅線放個note...
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適

[Karen]
00:27:368(4) - 我覺得用00:25:920(5)的開頭完全遮住會顯得比較工整
00:28:816(3) - 加個折返?
00:29:644(3) - ^
這個是我覺得這里最好的diff了

[SamiPale]
00:28:402(1,1) - 有任何必要要用2個spinner嗎...
00:57:885(x) - 加個note比較好
01:10:816(1) - whistle.
01:11:437(T) - 跟另外幾個diff統一一下,這里加個kiai burst吧
01:24:471(1) - 這里扔個note,把spinner開頭放后邊藍線比較好

that's all
so
star~
SamiPale

JauiPlaY wrote:

[SamiPale]
00:28:402(1,1) - 有任何必要要用2個spinner嗎...
00:57:885(x) - 加個note比較好 不好
01:10:816(1) - whistle. 不好
01:11:437(T) - 跟另外幾個diff統一一下,這里加個kiai burst吧
01:24:471(1) - 這里扔個note,把spinner開頭放后邊藍線比較好 不好
3q~

Download: FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [SamiPale].osu
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:851(1,2) - 把(1)變成一個note, (2)折返2次并移至00:54:264 Fixed in other way!
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適 Will consider it later,keep this for now.

[Hard]
01:07:402(7) - 還不如在紅線放個note... 明顯這裏是2連比較合適.
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適 Same as easy!
Sorry for reject most of them :/
Kotone

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Karen]
00:27:368(4) - 我覺得用00:25:920(5)的開頭完全遮住會顯得比較工整kpy help me fix this
00:28:816(3) - 加個折返?no
00:29:644(3) - ^no
這個是我覺得這里最好的diff了 thx基片鴨><
thanks 鴨鴨
AngelNote
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star"
star~
Suzully
Thank you for request~ :)

[General]

  • Combo color looks too similar with each other for me.
    Chenge them more dark one?
[Easy]

  • Nothing to say.
[Normal]

  • I think that newbie will be confused by the pattern like as 00:02:954 (2,3)...
    However it's maybe not big issue because there is other easiest diff.
  1. 00:36:885 (5) - It's hard to read for newbie imo. Reduce repeat like this?
[Hard]
  1. 01:21:161 (2,3) - I feel something strange rhythm. How about...change (2) to circle, and move (3) to 01:21:368, and then add a note at 01:21:988 stacking with 01:22:195 (5)?
[Karen]

  • Nice mapset!
    What I can suggest is only one thing.
  1. 00:04:609 (4) - Add a new combo?
[SamiPale]

  • This is also nice mapset!
    Haha I can't mod well cuz both are perfect :P
  1. 00:28:402 (1) - Start it at 00:28:195?
What a parfect mapset lol
I can't find any issue.
No kds please. :P
Good luck~
Kotone

Suzully wrote:

[Karen]

  • Nice mapset!
    What I can suggest is only one thing.
  1. 00:04:609 (4) - Add a new combo?
Thanks
kpy help me fixed this orz
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Suzully wrote:

[General]

  • Combo color looks too similar with each other for me.
    Chenge them more dark one? Will consider it if someone mention this again but not now.
[Normal]

  • I think that newbie will be confused by the pattern like as 00:02:954 (2,3)...
    However it's maybe not big issue because there is other easiest diff. I assume normal is for some player between Newbie and middle,so yeah~
  1. 00:36:885 (5) - It's hard to read for newbie imo. Reduce repeat like this? ^ You know it xD
[Hard]
  1. 01:21:161 (2,3) - I feel something strange rhythm. How about...change (2) to circle, and move (3) to 01:21:368, and then add a note at 01:21:988 stacking with 01:22:195 (5)? X.
Thanks for modding!
UnderminE
I l~ove this song.

But, you should add "Sacred Seven" to tags.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

UnderminE wrote:

I l~ove this song.

But, you should add "Sacred Seven" to tags.
That's unnecessary because I have already put it in source.
SamiPale

Suzully wrote:

[SamiPale]

  • This is also nice mapset!
    Haha I can't mod well cuz both are perfect :P
  1. 00:28:402 (1) - Start it at 00:28:195?
Thanks
kpy help me fixed this orz
GiNa
FictionJunction <3
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☆~
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kioukiou
-5ms to all offset,don't forget recheck green lines.

[SamiPale]
00:15:988 (1) - Remove new combo.

下面這個只是挑毛病,所以改不改看你
SPOILER
stone cold跟Stone Cold(見Taiko BG)一邊沒有大寫一邊卻有,感覺有點奇怪就是

先star
PeaChick
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Topic Starter
kanpakyin

kioukiou wrote:

-5ms to all offset,don't forget recheck green lines.

[SamiPale]
00:15:988 (1) - Remove new combo.

下面這個只是挑毛病,所以改不改看你
SPOILER
stone cold跟Stone Cold(見Taiko BG)一邊沒有大寫一邊卻有,感覺有點奇怪就是

先star
All fixed!
kioukiou
After some recheck,it's good enough for me.
Keep it up,bubbled.
swish
:) :) :) :)

nice
KayeSara
star~
ignore
SPOILER
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arien666
Just mattered about Taiko Oni's Kiai end point but whatever :3

Keep going >_>
jericho2442
sorry gonna have to Design mod

Normal
00:36:673 (4,5,6) - this pattern felt wrong, i think its because of the repeating slider, it repeats even when the vocals are on a break, even though all the other times you have used a specific pattern of timing to help follow the vocals, that made this play really bad a feel odd
same comment for next time the vocals do the same pattern too, it just really dont suit the song having constant 1/2s.
00:56:121 - might flow better to have a note here, when playing i auto wanted to play one because i could feel the song building up.

Hard
00:05:225 (1,2) - having these as 1/4 sliders played really bad, it would play much better if you made it flow with your other patterns by giving it 1/2 silders
00:10:811 (2,3,4) - this triple pattern felt forced, i cant find a reason why you used it?
tbh i cant find a reason for quite a lot of the 1/4 triples?
00:56:121 (5) - this small spacing in the middle if a jump pattern really got me, infact i didnt even notice the note when playing, maybe give this more space so it follows your jump pattern

Karen
00:09:259 (3,4,5,6) - the spacing of the (3,4) compared to (4,5,6) i see no reason to see the different spacing?
(suggestion) 00:26:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stacked notes in this became rather hard to read due to the timing imo, maybe take a look at this part again
00:35:742 (3,4,5,6) - same comment again over the spacing
00:42:363 (3,4,5,6) - again.....yea you get what i mean over these, the spacing makes it look like its 1/2 onto a 1/4 pattern, but its all 1/4

them are the things what REALLY stood out to me
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

jericho2442 wrote:

sorry gonna have to Design mod

Normal
00:36:673 (4,5,6) - this pattern felt wrong, i think its because of the repeating slider, it repeats even when the vocals are on a break, even though all the other times you have used a specific pattern of timing to help follow the vocals, that made this play really bad a feel odd
same comment for next time the vocals do the same pattern too, it just really dont suit the song having constant 1/2s.Fixed in another way :O
00:56:121 - might flow better to have a note here, when playing i auto wanted to play one because i could feel the song building up.
k

Hard
00:05:225 (1,2) - having these as 1/4 sliders played really bad, it would play much better if you made it flow with your other patterns by giving it 1/2 silders k.
00:10:811 (2,3,4) - this triple pattern felt forced, i cant find a reason why you used it? Back to 1/2
tbh i cant find a reason for quite a lot of the 1/4 triples?
00:56:121 (5) - this small spacing in the middle if a jump pattern really got me, infact i didnt even notice the note when playing, maybe give this more space so it follows your jump pattern hum,ok
Whee~Thanks
Kotone

jericho2442 wrote:

Karen
(suggestion) 00:26:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stacked notes in this became rather hard to read due to the timing imo, maybe take a look at this e
no,some player tell me it is not hard to read,also I can read this

other fixed
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>Karenying
Upload!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rust45
[Hard]
01:14:535 (5,2) - The two is a little unreadable due to the 5's hitburst, you don't have to fix it as it can kinda be seen, but it threw me for a loop when I sightread it.

[Taiko Oni]
I just have to say I really liked how this was hitsounded, sounded really good imo.

[Karen]
01:08:121 (1,3,5) - When I saw this, I literately said, "nice blanket"


Overall, I found the maps to be enjoyable and well mapped, the only issue I had was that one that was in hard. You get a star good sir. And if you call me back after deciding what to do with that thing in hard, there may be a bubble for you.

Edit: I'm just gonna leave this here.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

rust45 wrote:

[Hard]
01:14:535 (5,2) - The two is a little unreadable due to the 5's hitburst, you don't have to fix it as it can kinda be seen, but it threw me for a loop when I sightread it. k,fixed!
Thanks for modding!
KanaRin
石頭凍
btw 我頭先睇完1-7集..
真係超正!

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
Andrea
Good enough to go to me.

Ranked~
Hinacle
Congratulations
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
Thanks Andrea and Hinacle <3
Suzully
Oh I'm late. :P
Congrats for your perfect collab map<3
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