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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 12월 12일 화요일 at 오후 11:17:36

Artist: Reol
Title: Astronauts
Tags: 椎名もた ぽわぽわP 初音ミク vocaloid hatsune miku shiina mota powapowa-P giga okiku
BPM: 162.56
Filesize: 11829kb
Play Time: 05:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. A Universe Without Stars (4.24 stars, 792 notes)


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[ Space ]
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UnLock-
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Mitkoff
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Garden - 1st bubble
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kutsa - He not modded but gave me 4 stars.
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Emilia - amazing timing
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Hi :3

Kiai - it seems to me that the first section of the kiai can be extended to 01:02:002, and the second section before the break

[Without Stars]
00:42:402 (5,1) You can make the end of the slider 5 is closer to the slider 1, because I think the players on Insane (how many stars you have now - is as Insane) will not have the time to translate the cursor to the next slider judging by the amount of time in a tick, what is
00:44:402 (1,2) the end of the slider can be moved a little closer to the circle
01:06:802 remove NC?
02:02:402 (2,3) This is not a remark, but do roughly the same and at 00:42:402 (5,1)
02:55:602 remove NC?
03:08:402 ^
05:33:802 (9) move circle slightly up
05:37:002 (5) move circle slightly down and right

Nice map :)
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CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3

Kiai - it seems to me that the first section of the kiai can be extended to 01:02:002, and the second section before the break Fixed

[Without Stars]
00:42:402 (5,1) You can make the end of the slider 5 is closer to the slider 1, because I think the players on Insane (how many stars you have now - is as Insane) will not have the time to translate the cursor to the next slider judging by the amount of time in a tick, what is Okay i see.
I do not think it is a difficult pattern to do so. So when i listen same suggestion again, i will change this slider.

00:44:402 (1,2) the end of the slider can be moved a little closer to the circle Sorry
01:06:802 remove NC?not fixed. but thanks to you, i found another NC error.
02:02:402 (2,3) This is not a remark, but do roughly the same and at 00:42:402 (5,1) i think because of this pattern, this map need more testplay by 2~3k pp users. After testplay if need change, i will change it.
02:55:602 remove NC? Sorry.
03:08:402 ^ Sorry.
05:33:802 (9) move circle slightly up fixed. i didn't saw it D:
05:37:002 (5) move circle slightly down and right ^

Nice map :)And nice moding!!
Really thank you for modding and star! :)
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GREAT MAP
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Enon wrote:

GREAT MAP
GREAT ENON
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Hello from the Queue! This is an amazing map!
[ A Universe Without Stars]
General
  1. CS 4.9? I would just change to cs5 lol


Compose
  1. 00:13:602 (3) - ctrl+g?
  2. 00:26:402 (7) - Why not put this on the sliderhead like you did at 00:10:202 (1,2,3,4) ?
  3. 00:39:202 (4) - ctrl+g?
  4. 00:51:202 (2) - I would line this up with (3) so it looks like this: https://puu.sh/vtBa1/f82f17ef00.png
  5. 00:54:402 (2) - ctrl+g?
  6. 01:21:202 (4,5) - https://puu.sh/vtBgz/32e0848651.png
  7. 02:07:202 (4,5) - (4) to x:330 y:180 and (5) to x:220 y: 85?
  8. 02:44:502 (1) - This is a very odd place to put a spinner, as it's the start of the kiai, where action happens.
REALLY nice map. Go for rank! :)
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[ Space ] wrote:


Hello from the Queue! This is an amazing map!
[ A Universe Without Stars]
General
  1. CS 4.9? I would just change to cs5 lol I think cs adjusting in finish map is not good for beatmap. sorry!


Compose
  1. 00:13:602 (3) - ctrl+g? Declined. I think present state also good.
  2. 00:26:402 (7) - Why not put this on the sliderhead like you did at 00:10:202 (1,2,3,4) ? Fixed
  3. 00:39:202 (4) - ctrl+g? fixed
  4. 00:51:202 (2) - I would line this up with (3) so it looks like this: https://puu.sh/vtBa1/f82f17ef00.png Declined.
  5. 00:54:402 (2) - ctrl+g? Declined. If i do ctrl+g, maybe this slider has more good shape for next notes but so long DS.
  6. 01:21:202 (4,5) - https://puu.sh/vtBgz/32e0848651.png Declined. Sure, if i adjust this pattern, it can get more flow. But even if get more flow, i don't like the shape that tail is overlap with another tale.
  7. 02:07:202 (4,5) - (4) to x:330 y:180 and (5) to x:220 y: 85? Declined.
  8. 02:44:502 (1) - This is a very odd place to put a spinner, as it's the start of the kiai, where action happens.This spiner quite experimental. as you said, it is pretty odd. But i think it is also pretty good. So if other modders point out about it more and more, then i will change it.
REALLY nice map. Go for rank! :)Thank you!!!!!!!!!!! :):):):):)
I accepted only tow suggestions. Because i usually treat mods with a conservative attitude. but your mod was good! thanks to you, i'd thought more about my map. It was satisfactory.
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Hi, I saw this map on some modding queues so I decided to mod it :^)
General
  1. BG.png is unused, remove it
A Universe Without Stars
  1. 02:17:202 (1) - You made that slider to emphasize the vocals but it blends with the instruments too much, something like this would emphasize the vocals better imo http://prntscr.com/ezz7om
  2. 02:22:002 Making it clickable just like you did here 02:24:802 (4,1) - would have more impact imo, same for 02:28:002 (4) - 02:34:402 (6) - 02:37:602 (4) - 02:40:802 (1,1,1) -
  3. 02:44:502 (1) - Even though it follows the vocal quite good, it makes the kiai lose his strength because the player only plays a spinner which is too easy and for a kiai, it would make sense if there wouldn't be instruments to map but there are some so map them please :( , same for 04:58:902 (1) - 05:24:402 (1) -
Really clean map so not much to say lol sorry no kd if it didn't help you, I love the star ending
Good luck!
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Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, I saw this map on some modding queues so I decided to mod it :^)
General
  1. BG.png is unused, remove it Fixed
A Universe Without Stars
  1. 02:17:202 (1) - You made that slider to emphasize the vocals but it blends with the instruments too much, something like this would emphasize the vocals better imo http://prntscr.com/ezz7om Fixed
  2. 02:22:002 Making it clickable just like you did here 02:24:802 (4,1) - would have more impact imo, same for 02:28:002 (4) - 02:34:402 (6) - 02:37:602 (4) - 02:40:802 (1,1,1) - Declined. But i know what you mean. So if another modder pointed out same thing one more time, i will fix it.
  3. 02:44:502 (1) - Even though it follows the vocal quite good, it makes the kiai lose his strength because the player only plays a spinner which is too easy and for a kiai, it would make sense if there wouldn't be instruments to map but there are some so map them please :( , same for 04:58:902 (1) - 05:24:402 (1) -
    Yes. this spiner pretty odd. But i love this spiner. if many modders are point out it, i will fix it. But honestly i want using this spiner.
Really clean map so not much to say lol sorry no kd if it didn't help you, I love the star ending ★★★★★★★★★★
Good luck! thank you for modding! :)
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sox
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Beomsan wrote:

sox
싸우지 말고 c'ex해
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스토리보드 헬프가 필요하면 불러주세요..
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#modreq

00:28:402 (1) - 저는 이 텅 빈 곳에 굳이 스핀을 넣어야 하나 싶습니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7909530 이런 식으로 두는게 이 부분을 제대로 표현하는 것이 아닌가 싶네요.

00:04:402 - ~ 00:26:802 - 제 생각에는 00:06:002 (3) - 여기나 00:07:602 (1) - 여기처럼 기타음이 나올때마다 뉴콤을 넣는게 좋지 않을까 싶어요, 예를 들면 00:05:602 (1,3) - NC 바꿔주고 00:25:202 (6) - NC 넣어주는 식으로요. 덧붙여서 00:04:402 (3) - 여기나 00:17:202 (3) - 여기에 NC 넣어주고 00:23:002 (1,2) - NC 바꿔줘서 완벽하게 기타음마다 NC가 들어가게 하는것도 좋을듯?

03:13:402 (4) - NC

03:48:402 (3,1) - NC 바꿔주기

04:50:802 (7,1) - ^

04:41:202 (7) - NC

04:47:602 (7) - ^

04:43:602 (1) - NC 제거
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UnLock- wrote:

#modreq

00:28:402 (1) - 저는 이 텅 빈 곳에 굳이 스핀을 넣어야 하나 싶습니다. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7909530 이런 식으로 두는게 이 부분을 제대로 표현하는 것이 아닌가 싶네요. 그러네요. 고쳤습니다.

00:04:402 - ~ 00:26:802 - 제 생각에는 00:06:002 (3) - 여기나 00:07:602 (1) - 여기처럼 기타음이 나올때마다 뉴콤을 넣는게 좋지 않을까 싶어요, 예를 들면 00:05:602 (1,3) - NC 바꿔주고 00:25:202 (6) - NC 넣어주는 식으로요. 덧붙여서 00:04:402 (3) - 여기나 00:17:202 (3) - 여기에 NC 넣어주고 00:23:002 (1,2) - NC 바꿔줘서 완벽하게 기타음마다 NC가 들어가게 하는것도 좋을듯? 전 지금이 좋다고 봅니다. 그리고 이걸 고치면 뒷부분도 거의 다 고쳐야하기
때문에...


03:13:402 (4) - NC 고쳤습니다.

03:48:402 (3,1) - NC 바꿔주기 고쳤습니다.

04:50:802 (7,1) - ^ 고쳤습니다.

04:41:202 (7) - NC 고쳤습니다.

04:47:602 (7) - ^ 고쳤습니다.

04:43:602 (1) - NC 제거고쳤습니다.
수정했습니다. 모딩감사합니다!!!

모딩 채널에 글 계속 쓰는게 헛짓거리는 아니었군요 =.=
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my mod q

mod
hope there will be a SB
because i don't like the bg :(
and the color... it should be a contrast between monochrome and colorful, so try more color beside yellow :)
00:07:202 (6) - no sound here. move to 00:07:402 -
00:58:402 (3) - bend it
02:43:602 (1,2) - i think these two should be white
02:51:802 (4,2) - stack
04:14:002 (1) - ctrl+g
05:32:802 (6,7,8) - hard to read so NC some of them
05:40:002 (6,7) - maybe ctrl+g

amazing style
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Ametrin wrote:

my mod q

mod
hope there will be a SB
because i don't like the bg :(Yes i will make SB. :3
and the color... it should be a contrast between monochrome and colorful, so try more color beside yellow :)ok, i'll think about it more.
00:07:202 (6) - no sound here. move to 00:07:402 - I think it is okay. but if another modder pointed out same thing one more time, i will fix it.
00:58:402 (3) - bend it Fixed
02:43:602 (1,2) - i think these two should be white Declined. if many modder pointed out same thing more and more, i will fix it.
02:51:802 (4,2) - stack Declined.
04:14:002 (1) - ctrl+g Declined. not match with nex slider.
05:32:802 (6,7,8) - hard to read so NC some of them Declined.
05:40:002 (6,7) - maybe ctrl+g Fixed

amazing style Thank you :):):)
Thank you for modding!!!
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I hope you're gonna rank this one. Hype !
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Kutsa wrote:

I hope you're gonna rank this one. Hype !
ganbarimasu!

Thank you for stars. :):):):):):):):):)
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Hey !

[A Universe Without Stars]
Consider reducing note volumes at circles like 00:04:002 (1,2) -, 00:05:602 (1,2) - etc. They really sound too loud.
00:06:002 (3,4,5) - 00:04:402 (3) - Having so much difference in terms of intensity in such short amount of time to map the same thing can be really annoying. Compare how you mapped them in each case : they sound the same in the music but 1st pattern is a reversed slider and 2nd pattern is 3 1/2 sliders. It feels really inconsistent and unnecessarily hard.
00:07:202 (6) - This feels really overmapped since it doesn't follow vocals.
00:53:402 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The amount of 1/2 is maybe too big, not sure of what you're following.
00:55:402 (5,1) - A spacing increase could describe the song better.
01:21:002 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same. They feel like a spike for no real reason.
01:38:402 - Having this clickable rather than the red tick could have been more interesting gameplay-wise, since you're focusing on vocals.
01:51:602 (1,2) - Same issue as earlier. Consider using some 1/1 sliders to keep the emphasis 01:50:002 (1,2,3,4,5) - proper.
02:15:802 (1,2,3) - That 1/1 slider indicates to the player that you focus vocals so 02:16:402 (2) - this should be 2 circles to follow them accurately.
02:22:002 - Inconsistency. Please make that tick clickable so it follows the same instrument as earlier/later and is consistent with the rest. You did it at 02:24:802 (4,1) - .
02:28:002 (4) - Same.
02:34:402 (6) - same. etc
02:44:002 (2) - I suppose you wanted this to work as a fake click but it doesn't work since there is a spinner right after. Please add a circle at 02:44:402 - .
02:59:602 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - So many circles in a row... does the song really support it ?
03:18:402 (2,3,4,5) - Global spacing feels really high compared to the rest here.
04:46:602 (2,3) - CTRL+H ?
04:58:402 (1) - Same as earlier !
05:05:602 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 05:14:802 (7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Spacing is really Inconsistent which really makes the latter pattern feel like a spike.
05:24:002 (4) - Same
05:32:802 (6,7,8) - That low spacing and density really feel like an annoying gap among all those 1/2 filled patterns.
05:36:002 (2,3) - 05:36:802 (4,5) - Spacing should differ.
05:40:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, the pattern is cool but it really feels like you did it just to make something impressive... that 1.8x speed is not reasonable since you never mapped vocals like that before... it's too inconsistent. Same goes for 05:43:602 (1,2,3,4,5) -

The map is pretty cool overall but I really can't agree with the last patterns.
Good luck !
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Hello, NM from my queue.

A Universe Without Stars
01:05:202 (1) - remove whistle from sliderbody since it's the only one to have that

02:05:602 (1) - ^

01:36:002 (2,3,4) - Consider changing this pattern by moving it up a bit (like this or so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8004448 instead) right now it's mapped like it's supposed to have the most emphasis but it's not that different from the rest of these kind of patterns imo

02:44:427 (1) - You want to keep those spinners, but in my opinion having similar sliders to 05:48:402 (1) - would be more interesting

05:40:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - start this pattern on 05:40:802 (2) - this note's tail instead, this way the movement from 05:40:202 (7) - will be more comfortable and easier to read

05:46:802 - I feel like this part could be more intense, you could just increase the spacing of 05:46:602 (8,1) - or both 05:46:602 (8,1,2) - to keep it symmetrical like right now
Nice map, good luck!

EDIT: Also I suggest cutting the mp3 just to be safe because the outro is around 19% of the drain time and it's unrankable when it's at 20%
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