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Rhythm suggestions orz
Hard
00:37:334 - add a note
00:37:452 - ^
00:38:741 (2) - slider shorten, repeat slider at 00:38:858 and it ends at 00:38:975
00:39:327 - add a note
01:10:967 (9) - shorten slider to end at 01:11:084 and either repeat the slider or put another note at 01:11:202
01:18:467 (9) - shorten to end at 01:18:702 and add a note at 01:18:819
01:25:967 (8) - shorten to 01:26:202 and add a note at 01:26:319
02:08:858 - add a note
02:14:834 - shorten to 02:14:834 and add notes at 02:14:952 and 02:15:069
02:22:217 (5) - shorten to 02:22:452 and add a note at 02:22:569
02:32:881 - you could add a slider here that ends at 02:33:233
02:48:467 (8) - shorten to 02:48:702 and add a note at 02:48:819
02:55:967 (8) - ^
03:18:467 (5) - slider start at 03:18:584 end at 03:18:819 and add a note at 03:18:467
03:55:381 - could also add a slider here, end at 03:55:733
04:03:467 (9) - shorten to 04:03:702 and add a note at 04:03:819
04:35:928 (4,1) - swap places, slider before circle and add a note at 04:36:866
04:41:788 (1) - end at 04:42:959
04:43:428 - add a circle with finish
04:43:545 - start a spinner here and end at 04:45:538
Normal
01:04:991 (2) - start from 01:05:225 end at 01:05:459
01:10:147 (3) - ^
01:12:491 (3) - ^ (simpler rhythm, these are really really optional though)
04:13:428 (4) - shift to 04:13:194
overall the off beats make it quite halting and a little confusing for flow, at least that is what I feel.
Easy
00:24:913 (3) - the 1 1/2 beat sounds funny, better to end slider with no repeat at 00:25:850 and add a note at 00:26:319
00:28:663 (3) - ^
00:33:819 (2,3) - remove and make 00:30:538 (1) - first repeat at 00:32:413 and ends at 00:34:288
then add a slider from 00:35:225 to 00:36:163 and add a note at 00:37:100
00:39:913 (1) - first repeat at 00:40:850 and end at 00:41:788 and add a note at 00:42:725
01:30:069 (5) - replace with a slider from 01:29:600 to 01:30:069 with finish sound on the tail end
01:33:819 (3) - replace with slider from 01:33:350 to 01:33:819
01:46:006 (2,3,4) - why not the same as 00:15:538 (1,2,3,4) - ? the earlier part sounds more natural
02:41:788 (1,2) - I don't think the distance spacing between these 2 is 1.0x, same with 02:45:538 (1) - it should be equal with the rest of the map
04:36:163 (2) - start from 04:35:928 end at 04:37:100
Good Luck`~
Hard
00:37:334 - add a note
00:37:452 - ^
00:38:741 (2) - slider shorten, repeat slider at 00:38:858 and it ends at 00:38:975
00:39:327 - add a note
01:10:967 (9) - shorten slider to end at 01:11:084 and either repeat the slider or put another note at 01:11:202
01:18:467 (9) - shorten to end at 01:18:702 and add a note at 01:18:819
01:25:967 (8) - shorten to 01:26:202 and add a note at 01:26:319
02:08:858 - add a note
02:14:834 - shorten to 02:14:834 and add notes at 02:14:952 and 02:15:069
02:22:217 (5) - shorten to 02:22:452 and add a note at 02:22:569
02:32:881 - you could add a slider here that ends at 02:33:233
02:48:467 (8) - shorten to 02:48:702 and add a note at 02:48:819
02:55:967 (8) - ^
03:18:467 (5) - slider start at 03:18:584 end at 03:18:819 and add a note at 03:18:467
03:55:381 - could also add a slider here, end at 03:55:733
04:03:467 (9) - shorten to 04:03:702 and add a note at 04:03:819
04:35:928 (4,1) - swap places, slider before circle and add a note at 04:36:866
04:41:788 (1) - end at 04:42:959
04:43:428 - add a circle with finish
04:43:545 - start a spinner here and end at 04:45:538
Normal
01:04:991 (2) - start from 01:05:225 end at 01:05:459
01:10:147 (3) - ^
01:12:491 (3) - ^ (simpler rhythm, these are really really optional though)
04:13:428 (4) - shift to 04:13:194
overall the off beats make it quite halting and a little confusing for flow, at least that is what I feel.
Easy
00:24:913 (3) - the 1 1/2 beat sounds funny, better to end slider with no repeat at 00:25:850 and add a note at 00:26:319
00:28:663 (3) - ^
00:33:819 (2,3) - remove and make 00:30:538 (1) - first repeat at 00:32:413 and ends at 00:34:288
then add a slider from 00:35:225 to 00:36:163 and add a note at 00:37:100
00:39:913 (1) - first repeat at 00:40:850 and end at 00:41:788 and add a note at 00:42:725
01:30:069 (5) - replace with a slider from 01:29:600 to 01:30:069 with finish sound on the tail end
01:33:819 (3) - replace with slider from 01:33:350 to 01:33:819
01:46:006 (2,3,4) - why not the same as 00:15:538 (1,2,3,4) - ? the earlier part sounds more natural
02:41:788 (1,2) - I don't think the distance spacing between these 2 is 1.0x, same with 02:45:538 (1) - it should be equal with the rest of the map
04:36:163 (2) - start from 04:35:928 end at 04:37:100
Good Luck`~
Topic Starter
neonat wrote:
Rhythm suggestions orz
Hard Starting backwards huh?
00:37:334 - add a note I think it's fine.
00:37:452 - ^ I've made different changes instead.
00:38:741 (2) - slider shorten, repeat slider at 00:38:858 and it ends at 00:38:975 Added.
00:39:327 - add a note I don't see how it fits.
01:10:967 (9) - shorten slider to end at 01:11:084 and either repeat the slider or put another note at 01:11:202 I think it's fine.
01:18:467 (9) - shorten to end at 01:18:702 and add a note at 01:18:819 Added.
01:25:967 (8) - shorten to 01:26:202 and add a note at 01:26:319 Added.
02:08:858 - add a note Added.
02:14:834 - shorten to 02:14:834 and add notes at 02:14:952 and 02:15:069 Added with a slight change.
02:22:217 (5) - shorten to 02:22:452 and add a note at 02:22:569 Added.
02:32:881 - you could add a slider here that ends at 02:33:233 I think it's fine. I don't follow vocals that much.
02:48:467 (8) - shorten to 02:48:702 and add a note at 02:48:819 Added.
02:55:967 (8) - ^ Added.
03:18:467 (5) - slider start at 03:18:584 end at 03:18:819 and add a note at 03:18:467 The note goes before? Either way I think it's fine.
03:55:381 - could also add a slider here, end at 03:55:733 I think it's fine.
04:03:467 (9) - shorten to 04:03:702 and add a note at 04:03:819 Added.
04:35:928 (4,1) - swap places, slider before circle and add a note at 04:36:866 Added with a slight change.
04:41:788 (1) - end at 04:42:959
04:43:428 - add a circle with finish
04:43:545 - start a spinner here and end at 04:45:538 The rest I think is fine.
Normal
01:04:991 (2) - start from 01:05:225 end at 01:05:459
01:10:147 (3) - ^
01:12:491 (3) - ^ (simpler rhythm, these are really really optional though) All the above I think is fine.
04:13:428 (4) - shift to 04:13:194 Fixed.
overall the off beats make it quite halting and a little confusing for flow, at least that is what I feel. It was experimental. I'll make changes if necessary, though I need more responses.
Easy diff will be modded by its respectful mapper.
HI~ Darcsol
lovhin's Easy
00:37:569 (1) - Can you try?
Normal
01:57:256 (2) - add Clap
01:57:725 (3) - Remove the side of the head slider applause
hard ... Hard, please do not jump over the 2.00.
ex : 04:21:631 (6,7,8) - or 04:23:741 (2,3,4,5) -
There's too much jumping to a relatively ... Reducing the distance of things like this jump looks good .. I need you to stay
do you accept m4m
t/128381 my map!! Please
lovhin's Easy
00:37:569 (1) - Can you try?
Normal
01:57:256 (2) - add Clap
01:57:725 (3) - Remove the side of the head slider applause
hard ... Hard, please do not jump over the 2.00.
ex : 04:21:631 (6,7,8) - or 04:23:741 (2,3,4,5) -
There's too much jumping to a relatively ... Reducing the distance of things like this jump looks good .. I need you to stay
do you accept m4m
t/128381 my map!! Please
Topic Starter
For the requested m4m map, I'm going to reject it. The song is not I would want to mod for. Next time if you request a m4m, contact the modder beforehand. Sorry.[ Zzz ] wrote:
Normal
01:57:256 (2) - add Clap Added.
01:57:725 (3) - Remove the side of the head slider applause Fixed.
hard ... Hard, please do not jump over the 2.00.
ex : 04:21:631 (6,7,8) - or 04:23:741 (2,3,4,5) -
There's too much jumping to a relatively ... Reducing the distance of things like this jump looks good .. I need you to stay I think the jumps are fine. Not all Hard difficulties have to follow the 2.00 distance snap. While there are parts that are difficult, it fits the intended difficulty. I don't think it can qualify to be an Insane/Lunatic diff anyway. I'll make adjustments but more modders are needed if this is a potential issue.
To be continued mod!
13:28 Tari: Tell me if your going change rhythm here or not 00:22:569 (2,1) -
13:29 Darcsol: Probably not
13:30 Tari: and
13:30 Tari: Is there a reason why you made these two notes : 00:18:350 (2,3) - 00:29:600 (3,4) - different?
13:30 Tari: they have similar rhythm tbh
13:32 Darcsol: The song changes at the 29 sec mark.
13:33 Darcsol: Thought it would reflect the change
13:33 Tari: ahh okay
13:35 Darcsol: Now that I think about it, 00:30:538 - 00:38:038 should have its slider velocity reduced.
13:35 Darcsol: Now that I think about it, 00:30:538 - 00:38:038 should have its slider velocity reduced.
13:35 Tari: no
13:35 Tari: you don't do sv changes in normal
13:35 Tari: and easy
13:35 Tari: its not good
13:35 Tari: I mean beginner friendly
13:36 Darcsol: Normal is slightly harder than it should
13:36 Tari: sv = slider velocity
13:36 Tari: no you can't do that really
13:36 Tari: we want to keep it beginner friendly
13:36 Tari: you can do it in hard though
13:36 Tari: and
13:36 Darcsol: Hard already has it
13:37 Tari: 01:19:053 (6) - there a reason why you put a new here right?
13:37 Darcsol: New combo?
13:37 Tari: I mean a reason why you put a note there
13:37 Tari: sorry ><
13:38 Darcsol: Fits the flow of the map
13:38 Tari: owo
13:39 Tari: 04:13:428 (4) - spacing?
13:39 Darcsol: Don't know what happened there. Fixing...
13:40 Darcsol: okay
13:41 Tari: I would avoid stacking notes under sliders
13:41 Tari: 02:52:803 (6) - like that
13:42 Darcsol: Agreed. 6 moved to 1.
13:43 Tari: 01:12:256 (2,3) - I think it would be better if you start the slider at where note 2 is right now
13:43 Tari: hitting 3 is weird to me ><
13:44 Darcsol: I agree. Fixed.
13:47 Tari: 01:27:256 (2,3) - In the other kiai parts you mapped the white tick here 01:27:725 , maybe you should map it here too?
13:47 Tari: bleh
13:47 Tari: I hate the linking
13:48 Darcsol: We all do
13:48 Darcsol: Anyway yeah I agree
13:49 Tari: some of your beats are a mess
13:49 Darcsol: It's pretty experimental. I was trying some stuff.
13:50 Tari: 01:07:803 - a note needs to be added here
13:50 Tari: like other parts
13:50 Darcsol: added
13:51 Tari: well you can map the beats anyway you want
13:51 Tari: just make sure you put the beats there
13:51 Darcsol: And this map is long. There's bound to be errors.
13:51 Tari: I want to clear most of the rhythm errors for you
13:52 Tari: almost forgot
13:52 Tari: need to do it here too
13:52 Tari: 04:00:303 -
13:52 Darcsol: Added
13:53 Tari: 04:02:647 (3,4) - I would prefer this to be a slider
13:54 Darcsol: Agreed. Changed.
13:56 Tari: 04:12:725 (3) - spacing
13:57 Darcsol: Damn. That changes everything... D:
13:57 Tari: and wth
13:57 Tari: the rhythm there is off too
13:58 Tari: well either way
13:58 Tari: your going have to fix that
13:59 Darcsol: yeah
13:59 Tari: I would really advise you to check other parts
13:59 Tari: similar parts really
14:00 Tari: and make sure they have beats placed in the proper place
14:00 Darcsol: I'm gonna redo most of the chorus parts.
14:00 Tari: sorry
14:00 Tari: I am being so tough on you
14:01 Darcsol: It's alright
14:01 Darcsol: It's bound to happen
14:03 Tari: oh
14:03 Tari: 01:48:584 (4) - why is there a beat in the red tick here
14:03 Tari: it doesn't feel right to play
14:04 Darcsol: You're jumping around all over the place
14:04 Tari: yeah
14:04 Tari: becasue I miss stuff
14:04 Tari: when I go forward the map
14:04 Tari: I look back
14:05 Tari: and see if that fits what you just did when I didn't move back in the map
14:05 Tari: and I checked the first kiai
14:05 Tari: to see how things generally are
14:05 Tari: and I moved on to the others
14:05 Tari: to see if they fit or not
14:05 Darcsol: I see
14:06 Tari: cause some parts
14:06 Darcsol: Anyway changed it
14:07 Tari: and i start with 1 thing at a time
14:07 Tari: right now I am focusing on rhythm erorrs
14:07 Tari: and then they'll be rhythm stuff
14:07 Tari: I mean
14:07 Tari: new combo things*
14:08 Darcsol: The combos are subjective. Unless if there's an obvious mistake, it's mostly the the mapper's style.
14:08 Tari: well the colors should match
14:08 Tari: in a way
14:09 Tari: guess you missed a note here
14:09 Tari: 01:50:928 -
14:10 Darcsol: added
14:10 Darcsol: Anyway I take colors seriously.
14:11 Tari: anyways
14:11 Darcsol: ^ not a word
14:12 Tari: 00:21:163 (1) - this and this 01:51:163 (1) - should have same color?
14:12 Tari: combo color imo
14:13 Darcsol: There's a new combo in every tall white tick thingy
14:13 Tari: ._.
14:13 Tari: ok
14:13 Tari: bleh
14:13 Tari: I am not looking hard enough then
14:14 Tari: 00:22:334 - I believe a beat is missing here
14:15 Tari: and something needs to be removed here 01:52:334 (2) -
14:16 Darcsol: The first part I think it's fine. Second part I agree.
14:16 Tari: well you need to do 1 of them ><
14:16 Tari: so yeah
14:16 Tari: not both of them
14:17 Darcsol: of course
Is anyone doing an insane difficulty for this map? I really love this song and I'd be more than willing to provide one if anyone sees fit. I'll be sure to check back later to help mod.
some mod~
hard
AR+1 ?
00:52:920 (1) - change the NC to 00:53:272 (2) - is better imo
01:34:053 (10) - delete and place a circle in same place
03:04:170 (13) - delete this
04:26:553 (12) - delete and place a circle in same place
04:41:553 (6) - move to the middle, and delete 04:41:670 (7) -
normal
AR and OD +1 is better imo
00:47:178 (1) - move to 00:47:413
lovhin's easy
AR-1 ?
02:38:506 add a circle here
mod2short lol
make this ranked please >w<
hard
AR+1 ?
00:52:920 (1) - change the NC to 00:53:272 (2) - is better imo
01:34:053 (10) - delete and place a circle in same place
03:04:170 (13) - delete this
04:26:553 (12) - delete and place a circle in same place
04:41:553 (6) - move to the middle, and delete 04:41:670 (7) -
normal
AR and OD +1 is better imo
00:47:178 (1) - move to 00:47:413
lovhin's easy
AR-1 ?
02:38:506 add a circle here
mod2short lol
make this ranked please >w<
Topic Starter
MMd- wrote:
hard
AR+1 ? I think it's fine. The diff is designed around this AR.
00:52:920 (1) - change the NC to 00:53:272 (2) - is better imo Not necessary. Would ruin the combo pacing.
01:34:053 (10) - delete and place a circle in same place
03:04:170 (13) - delete this
04:26:553 (12) - delete and place a circle in same place
04:41:553 (6) - move to the middle, and delete 04:41:670 (7) -
The rest I think are fine.
normal
AR and OD +1 is better imo Added for the time being. I might make changes.
00:47:178 (1) - move to 00:47:413 Fixed.
Ops modded wrong thread, sorry!
Hi~ im slow o.o; well actually i chekced some weeks ago but i forgot to mod so....~
Good luck~
[General]
- Timing -> Recalculate Slider Lengths on the Easy and Normal.
[Hard]
- 00:18:350 (3) - Add whistle sounds better imo :3
- 00:33:350 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes.
- 01:52:920 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes.
- 03:00:538 (1,3) - Poor stack.
- 03:06:631 - Extended break makes no sense here.
- 03:26:788 - This break isn't really necessary on a Hard and kind of feels like you were just being lazy not to map it.
[Normal]
- 00:31:475 (3,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
- 01:26:319 - Add clap.
- 02:00:538 (1,3,4,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
- 02:46:944 - Add clap.
- 03:38:038 - Sliders are broken from here to 03:48:819 -
[lovhin's Easy]
- Some sliders aren't snapped here too! I don't know if its a mistake on my part or yours but you need to resnap all sliders!
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kiiwa wrote:
Hi~ im slow o.o;well actually i chekced some weeks ago but i forgot to mod so....~[General]
- Timing -> Recalculate Slider Lengths on the Easy and Normal. Done.
[Hard]
- 00:18:350 (3) - Add whistle sounds better imo :3 Added. Also added in other places to keep consistency.
- 00:33:350 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes.
- 01:52:920 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes. Both added for now.
- 03:00:538 (1,3) - Poor stack. Fixed.
- 03:06:631 - Extended break makes no sense here. I think it's fine. I do this to all diffs anyway.
- 03:26:788 - This break isn't really necessary on a Hard and kind of feels like you were just being lazy not to map it. Last time I have mapped on the break, but various modders recommended me to remove it in order to keep consistency with the other diffs. I don't know if I want to map it again, but we'll see.
[Normal]
- 00:31:475 (3,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
- 01:26:319 - Add clap.
- 02:00:538 (1,3,4,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
- 02:46:944 - Add clap.
- 03:38:038 - Sliders are broken from here to 03:48:819 -
Everything should be fixed/added.[lovhin's Easy]
- Some sliders aren't snapped here too! I don't know if its a mistake on my part or yours but you need to resnap all sliders! Fixed.
Good luck~
If you need help with hitsounds, try playing ur map on taiko, that normally helps me.
Is the easy's background supposed to have huge Black bars on the sides?
Topic Starter
Yup. It's to compensate players who play osu in widescreen. I might remove them if people don't like it, but I'm gonna make big changes to this godforsaken map. I might add an black bars to the video as well. Of course those playing in 4:3 resolution should not be affected.radboyPT wrote:
Is the easy's background supposed to have huge Black bars on the sides?
Hi
just some suggestions
[Hard]
00:16:241 add a note?
00:23:506 (2) - so far with 00:23:155 (1) -
00:26:788 (1) - change it to 1/2 slider
01:04:756 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a tnoe
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^
good luck
just some suggestions
[Hard]
00:16:241 add a note?
00:23:506 (2) - so far with 00:23:155 (1) -
00:26:788 (1) - change it to 1/2 slider
01:04:756 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a tnoe
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^
good luck
Topic Starter
sjoy wrote:
[Hard]
00:16:241 add a note? Not necessary.
00:23:506 (2) - so far with 00:23:155 (1) - I have no idea what you're asking for. Please clarify.
00:26:788 (1) - change it to 1/2 slider I think it's fine.
01:04:756 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm I think both of them are fine.
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm I think it's fine.
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a tnoe Added.
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^ Give me a reason why I should add those NCs. Most of your suggestions are subjective.
hi
[Hard]
I ll give some advices of rhythm that I consider sounds better, you decide if you follow them or not
00:19:053 (5) - delete note
00:25:616 (3) - same
00:26:553 (6) - same
00:29:600 (4,5) - replace by a slider
01:05:225 - end slider here and add a repeat
01:07:334 - end this one here, add note here: 01:07:569 - and delete the one here:01:07:803 -
01:14:600 (8,9) - end slider here and add note at next white tick
01:22:100 - 01:22:334 - 01:22:569 - and single notes on each removing that slider.and add note here: 01:23:038 -
01:30:069 (9) - replace by a note
01:54:913 (1,2,3) - do the same you did here: 01:52:100 (4,5,6,7) - cuz as it is doesnt fit.
01:55:850 (4,5,6) - same as above
02:37:100 - 02:37:100 - 02:37:100 - and single notes on each removing that slider.and add note here:02:38:038 -
02:45:069 (8) - replace for a circle
03:03:584 - there no sound here, i think slider should start in prev blue tick and place a note where (10) starts.
03:57:725 - end slide here and add repeat
[Normal]
00:55:147 - add note
01:47:647 - same
01:48:584 - add note and delete the one here: 01:49:053 -
02:22:334 - end slider here and add a repeat then delete note here: 02:22:803 -
02:52:334 - same as above
02:56:084 (7) - here is missing a note >~<
03:38:506 (1) - why this single combo?
[lovhin's Easy]
This breaks the symetry too drastically
I didnt like the overlap on some sliders
aside from that, great diff lovhin <3
Good luck~~
[Hard]
I ll give some advices of rhythm that I consider sounds better, you decide if you follow them or not
00:19:053 (5) - delete note
00:25:616 (3) - same
00:26:553 (6) - same
00:29:600 (4,5) - replace by a slider
01:05:225 - end slider here and add a repeat
01:07:334 - end this one here, add note here: 01:07:569 - and delete the one here:01:07:803 -
01:14:600 (8,9) - end slider here and add note at next white tick
01:22:100 - 01:22:334 - 01:22:569 - and single notes on each removing that slider.and add note here: 01:23:038 -
01:30:069 (9) - replace by a note
01:54:913 (1,2,3) - do the same you did here: 01:52:100 (4,5,6,7) - cuz as it is doesnt fit.
01:55:850 (4,5,6) - same as above
02:37:100 - 02:37:100 - 02:37:100 - and single notes on each removing that slider.and add note here:02:38:038 -
02:45:069 (8) - replace for a circle
03:03:584 - there no sound here, i think slider should start in prev blue tick and place a note where (10) starts.
03:57:725 - end slide here and add repeat
[Normal]
00:55:147 - add note
01:47:647 - same
01:48:584 - add note and delete the one here: 01:49:053 -
02:22:334 - end slider here and add a repeat then delete note here: 02:22:803 -
02:52:334 - same as above
02:56:084 (7) - here is missing a note >~<
03:38:506 (1) - why this single combo?
[lovhin's Easy]
This breaks the symetry too drastically
I didnt like the overlap on some sliders
aside from that, great diff lovhin <3
Good luck~~
wwww
[lovhin's Easy]
02:21:163 (2) - Add finish to end of slider
02:22:569 (3) - Remove finish
02:23:038 (1) - Remove all hitsounds then add clap to end of slider
02:38:506 - Add note and add clap to it?
03:47:413 (4) - Remove whistle and add finish
01:50:225 (1,2) - Extend these by 1/4
[Normal]
Honestly, the rhythm felt weird at first, but after replaying it a few times it felt fine.
Nothing to say here about hitsounds or placement, but yeah, I think the rhythm is a bit weird in places-- I won't make suggestions so I don't ruin the rythmn-- so maybe you should go over that once more.
[Hard]
HP Drain -1
00:09:913 (1) - Curve?
00:13:663 (3) - Remove NC? o3o
00:24:913 (1) - Add repeat and move 00:25:147 (2) - 1/4 forward and shorten by 1/4
00:25:850 (3,4) - ^
00:30:069 (5,6) - Make into stream
00:31:944 (3) - Maybe make it more like this?
00:37:452 (8) - CTRL+G? I think it kinda plays weird as it is now
00:53:155 - Add note here and resnap it and 00:53:272 (2) - so it looks/plays nicer
01:54:913 (1,2) - Make into stream?
01:55:850 (4,5) - ^
02:00:069 (6) - Remove?
Rest of the map is really good.
GL :3c
[lovhin's Easy]
02:21:163 (2) - Add finish to end of slider
02:22:569 (3) - Remove finish
02:23:038 (1) - Remove all hitsounds then add clap to end of slider
02:38:506 - Add note and add clap to it?
03:47:413 (4) - Remove whistle and add finish
01:50:225 (1,2) - Extend these by 1/4
[Normal]
Honestly, the rhythm felt weird at first, but after replaying it a few times it felt fine.
Nothing to say here about hitsounds or placement, but yeah, I think the rhythm is a bit weird in places-- I won't make suggestions so I don't ruin the rythmn-- so maybe you should go over that once more.
[Hard]
HP Drain -1
00:09:913 (1) - Curve?
00:13:663 (3) - Remove NC? o3o
00:24:913 (1) - Add repeat and move 00:25:147 (2) - 1/4 forward and shorten by 1/4
00:25:850 (3,4) - ^
00:30:069 (5,6) - Make into stream
00:31:944 (3) - Maybe make it more like this?
00:37:452 (8) - CTRL+G? I think it kinda plays weird as it is now
00:53:155 - Add note here and resnap it and 00:53:272 (2) - so it looks/plays nicer
01:54:913 (1,2) - Make into stream?
01:55:850 (4,5) - ^
02:00:069 (6) - Remove?
Rest of the map is really good.
GL :3c
sorry late;;
[Easy]
00:13:663 (1) - Delete spiner very hard;;
00:43:663 (1) - ^
01:10:381 (4) - Shape Trim
01:50:225 (1) - Awkward rhythm
01:51:163 (2) - ^
02:02:413 (2) - clap?
02:07:100 (5) - ^
02:08:975 - Whistle
02:13:663 (1) - delete New combo
02:23:038 (1) - Do not overlap placement
[Normal]
OMG;; This is hard LV;;
Please modify the default settings
A little later we will again
Call me back..
[Easy]
00:13:663 (1) - Delete spiner very hard;;
00:43:663 (1) - ^
01:10:381 (4) - Shape Trim
01:50:225 (1) - Awkward rhythm
01:51:163 (2) - ^
02:02:413 (2) - clap?
02:07:100 (5) - ^
02:08:975 - Whistle
02:13:663 (1) - delete New combo
02:23:038 (1) - Do not overlap placement
[Normal]
OMG;; This is hard LV;;
Please modify the default settings
A little later we will again
Call me back..
[Normal]
00:22:803 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:147 (2) - Delete note please
01:33:116 (5) - spacing please
02:22:569 - clap
[Hard]
02:03:116 (5) - spacing
02:15:069 (10) - NC
02:19:522 (2) - spacing
02:34:991 (3) - Does not fit the rhythm
02:39:913 (6) - spacing
02:40:147 (7) - Does not fit the rhythm
02:40:850 (8) - NC
02:43:663 (5) - ctrl + g
02:50:928 (4) - do you like jump?
02:54:209 (3) - Please complete overlap
02:55:850 (8) - NC
03:03:350 (10) - ^
03:57:491 (3) - Please follow the vocal
04:04:991 (3) - ^
04:08:741 (2) - x:403 y:310
04:25:850 (9) - NC
Good Luck~
00:22:803 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:147 (2) - Delete note please
01:33:116 (5) - spacing please
02:22:569 - clap
[Hard]
02:03:116 (5) - spacing
02:15:069 (10) - NC
02:19:522 (2) - spacing
02:34:991 (3) - Does not fit the rhythm
02:39:913 (6) - spacing
02:40:147 (7) - Does not fit the rhythm
02:40:850 (8) - NC
02:43:663 (5) - ctrl + g
02:50:928 (4) - do you like jump?
02:54:209 (3) - Please complete overlap
02:55:850 (8) - NC
03:03:350 (10) - ^
03:57:491 (3) - Please follow the vocal
04:04:991 (3) - ^
04:08:741 (2) - x:403 y:310
04:25:850 (9) - NC
Good Luck~
Hello!
[Hard]00:26:905 (2),(3) - add these 2 circles on the same spot of 00:26:788 (1) to make a triple, fits better with the song
00:30:538 (1) - 00:37:100 (1) change SV to 0,80 till here, then change to 1,00 again, and add NC to 00:37:100 (1) dont forget to snap sliders again
01:04:756 (2) - make slider end at 01:04:991 and move 01:05:459 (3) to behind the slider, making 01:05:459 empty to go well with the vocal
01:13:663 (5) - add a reverse to this slider and make the next pattern look like this, after adding a circle to 01:14:834 (6)
01:20:694 (5) - Make this slider end at half as well, adding a circle above around at 45º leaving 01:21:397 empty and make the next pattern look more like this 01:30:538 (1) - make this slider start at 01:30:303, remove the clap at the end, move the slider a bit to the right and add a circle behind it, with a clap, and make 01:31:241 (3) a bit further to the right
02:45:069 (8) - Move it down a bit more
02:45:538 (1) - Make this slider start at 02:45:303 (1) and add a circle behind it with a clap just like before
04:05:694 (4) - make this circle between 3 and 5 instead of too close to 3[/list]
[Hard]00:26:905 (2),(3) - add these 2 circles on the same spot of 00:26:788 (1) to make a triple, fits better with the song
00:30:538 (1) - 00:37:100 (1) change SV to 0,80 till here, then change to 1,00 again, and add NC to 00:37:100 (1) dont forget to snap sliders again
01:04:756 (2) - make slider end at 01:04:991 and move 01:05:459 (3) to behind the slider, making 01:05:459 empty to go well with the vocal
01:13:663 (5) - add a reverse to this slider and make the next pattern look like this, after adding a circle to 01:14:834 (6)
01:20:694 (5) - Make this slider end at half as well, adding a circle above around at 45º leaving 01:21:397 empty and make the next pattern look more like this 01:30:538 (1) - make this slider start at 01:30:303, remove the clap at the end, move the slider a bit to the right and add a circle behind it, with a clap, and make 01:31:241 (3) a bit further to the right
02:45:069 (8) - Move it down a bit more
02:45:538 (1) - Make this slider start at 02:45:303 (1) and add a circle behind it with a clap just like before
04:05:694 (4) - make this circle between 3 and 5 instead of too close to 3[/list]
[lohvin's Easy]
This one is very important:
01:50:225 (1) and 01:51:163 (2) - These two sliders should be 1/4 longer to match the beat of the song correctly.
That is to say, instead of this:
You should have this:
This one is only a suggestion and you don't need to change if you prefer not to:
00:24:913 (3) - There are a few sliders like this that have the reverse arrow at a time where there is no obvious beat in the song, you might want to see if there is a way that you can make those sound better.
Good luck to get this ranked! I like this song and I hope it can be ranked one day
This one is very important:
01:50:225 (1) and 01:51:163 (2) - These two sliders should be 1/4 longer to match the beat of the song correctly.
That is to say, instead of this:
You should have this:
This one is only a suggestion and you don't need to change if you prefer not to:
00:24:913 (3) - There are a few sliders like this that have the reverse arrow at a time where there is no obvious beat in the song, you might want to see if there is a way that you can make those sound better.
Good luck to get this ranked! I like this song and I hope it can be ranked one day
Nice job; you are on the right track. It... it was just really hard to mod for some reason. What a destructive song.
Topic Starter
I'm sorry, I don't know which diff to apply your mod. And this map is not complete, so it's subject to change. You can re-mod when I'm done with the map.[sekai] wrote:
00:16:241 add a note
00:23:506 (2) - so far 00:23:155
00:26:788 (1) - ^
01:04:756 (2,3) - 1/2 slider rhythm
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a note
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - remove this NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^
okDarcsol wrote:
I'm sorry, I don't know which diff to apply your mod. And this map is not complete, so it's subject to change. You can re-mod when I'm done with the map.[sekai] wrote:
00:16:241 add a note
00:23:506 (2) - so far 00:23:155
00:26:788 (1) - ^
01:04:756 (2,3) - 1/2 slider rhythm
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a note
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - remove this NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^
00:23:945 - Consider making the sliders here shorter and instead add a double tap circle so that you have a *dun-dun* *dun-dun* instead of a *dun-tic-dun* *dun* to fit better with the vocals (yu-na yu-na).
00:26:971 - Stacked hit circles that are far apart as far as the song goes, there are a note in between and when I test played it I pressed the slider too early because a note in the melody does not have a hit circle in the map. Remember that you are mapping a hard map.
00:29:600 - Timing doesn't fit the vocals (if that was what you were going for)
00:34:991 - A single circle represents 2 notes of the song.
00:37:102 - Double tap on a single note? (Reverse problem compared to the last benchmark)
00:49:022 - Great opportunity to add taps of 1/2 in the leadup to the chorus.
EDIT: This is referring to the hard difficulty.
00:26:971 - Stacked hit circles that are far apart as far as the song goes, there are a note in between and when I test played it I pressed the slider too early because a note in the melody does not have a hit circle in the map. Remember that you are mapping a hard map.
00:29:600 - Timing doesn't fit the vocals (if that was what you were going for)
00:34:991 - A single circle represents 2 notes of the song.
00:37:102 - Double tap on a single note? (Reverse problem compared to the last benchmark)
00:49:022 - Great opportunity to add taps of 1/2 in the leadup to the chorus.
EDIT: This is referring to the hard difficulty.
Looking at your 2 ranked maps (having hard as the highest) I assume you'd appreciate a guest difficulty on the insane level?
Short sample of what I had in mind: http://puu.sh/jgWVl/6cf03b21e9.osu
Short sample of what I had in mind: http://puu.sh/jgWVl/6cf03b21e9.osu
Topic Starter
From your sample, I don't think it has the quality I have in mind. Sorry.Patchouli Desu wrote:
Looking at your 2 ranked maps (having hard as the highest) I assume you'd appreciate a guest difficulty on the insane level?
Short sample of what I had in mind: http://puu.sh/jgWVl/6cf03b21e9.osu
I don't intend to map an Insane diff, but I'm not stopping anyone in making a guest diff. It better be good though.
yo
Easy:
Could barely find anything wrong with Normal and Hard, sorry :3c
Hard:
Sorry for the small mod, this is pretty much ready to be ranked.
Easy:
SPOILER
- 01:24:913 (2,3) - I feel as though these notes feel and sound a little too awkward in terms of timing compared to the rest of the song.
01:46:006 (2,4) - Same as before, try this:((01:53:506 (2,4) - Like these.))
03:20:225 (3,4) - Same ^
Could barely find anything wrong with Normal and Hard, sorry :3c
Hard:
SPOILER
- 01:47:413 (5,6,7,8) - These notes don't fit quite as well as the previous ones, such as 00:21:163 (5,6,7,8) - which fit perfectly. Try this:
01:51:163 (5,6) - Same ^
Sorry for the small mod, this is pretty much ready to be ranked.
hi. m4m.
General:
• Find a better BG for Easy diff. Or at least edit it to 16:9 resolution.
Easy & Normal looks good to me.
Hard:
• 00:29:600 (8,9) - Replace it with slider, it will fit better to "muya".
• 01:34:288 (1) - Extend this slider to 01:38:038 - .
• 01:59:600 (8,9) - Same as first suggestion.
Everything else seems fine.
Sorry for small mod, but I didn't find any other mistakes.
Hope that helps.
General:
• Find a better BG for Easy diff. Or at least edit it to 16:9 resolution.
Easy & Normal looks good to me.
Hard:
• 00:29:600 (8,9) - Replace it with slider, it will fit better to "muya".
• 01:34:288 (1) - Extend this slider to 01:38:038 - .
• 01:59:600 (8,9) - Same as first suggestion.
Everything else seems fine.
Sorry for small mod, but I didn't find any other mistakes.
Hope that helps.
Topic Starter
Mortem wrote:
General:
• Find a better BG for Easy diff. Or at least edit it to 16:9 resolution. BG is already modified for 16:9 resolutions. It has black bars to make it fit. I'll consider finding an alternative BG for it.
Hard:
• 00:29:600 (8,9) - Replace it with slider, it will fit better to "muya". Fixed.
• 01:34:288 (1) - Extend this slider to 01:38:038 - . You mean spinner. I think it's fine. Extending it would break consistency between diffs..
• 01:59:600 (8,9) - Same as first suggestion. Fixed.
Is this map really that old? XD How many remaps has it been through?
Add tag: project (touhou project)
Easy
01:34:288 (1) - Spinner too short for easy diff? I'd extend it to 01:38:038 -
03:04:288 (1) - Same. Only that i'd replace it with a note.
04:26:788 (1) - Same. Extend to 04:26:788 (1) -
Normal
01:45:069 (1) - Just an idea. Stack this with the next slider
Eh well that's it. Nothing on hard.
Great map great song
hope this gets ranked soon (PLEASE)
Add tag: project (touhou project)
Easy
01:34:288 (1) - Spinner too short for easy diff? I'd extend it to 01:38:038 -
03:04:288 (1) - Same. Only that i'd replace it with a note.
04:26:788 (1) - Same. Extend to 04:26:788 (1) -
Normal
01:45:069 (1) - Just an idea. Stack this with the next slider
Eh well that's it. Nothing on hard.
Great map great song
hope this gets ranked soon (PLEASE)
Topic Starter
NXTKitKat wrote:
Is this map really that old? XD How many remaps has it been through? A lot.
Add tag: project (touhou project) Added.
Normal
01:45:069 (1) - Just an idea. Stack this with the next slider Considered.
m4m from #modreqs
[easy]
00:21:163 (3) - the curve doesnt really flow after slider (2). Move it to the left a bit
00:38:975 - add a note here?
01:29:600 - ^
01:46:006 (2,4) - i think these sliders would suit the rhythm more if they were shortened by 1/2 a beat. i.e. the same length as this slider 01:53:506 (2)
03:45:538 (2) - move to the left a bit so its not touching (1)
[Normal]
03:46:006 (2) - move this to (260y , 68x )
[Hard]
00:51:163 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think this would look better if the DS was consistent
01:45:069 (1) - remove NC here..?
02:23:272 - add a note here
04:04:756 (3,4) - move (4) down a bit so it doesnt touch (3)
I hope hti smod was helpful, gl
[easy]
00:21:163 (3) - the curve doesnt really flow after slider (2). Move it to the left a bit
00:38:975 - add a note here?
01:29:600 - ^
01:46:006 (2,4) - i think these sliders would suit the rhythm more if they were shortened by 1/2 a beat. i.e. the same length as this slider 01:53:506 (2)
03:45:538 (2) - move to the left a bit so its not touching (1)
[Normal]
03:46:006 (2) - move this to (260y , 68x )
[Hard]
00:51:163 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think this would look better if the DS was consistent
01:45:069 (1) - remove NC here..?
02:23:272 - add a note here
04:04:756 (3,4) - move (4) down a bit so it doesnt touch (3)
I hope hti smod was helpful, gl
Topic Starter
Hi Im Nathan wrote:
[Normal]
03:46:006 (2) - move this to (260y , 68x ) Those coordinates look off, but I made a different change instead.
[Hard]
00:51:163 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think this would look better if the DS was consistent It is except the last 3 objects?
01:45:069 (1) - remove NC here..? I think it's fine.
02:23:272 - add a note here ^
04:04:756 (3,4) - move (4) down a bit so it doesnt touch (3) Fixed.
Found this in #modreqs so I though it would be look to take a look.
[General]
[Hard]
[Normal]
[lovhin's Easy]
[General]
• Inconsistency in VieoOffset
{Hard} : -217
{lovhin's Easy} : -260
{Normal} : -217
• Inconsistency in ComboColours
{ Hard} :
Combo1 : [192,192,192] Combo2 : [250,217,27] Combo3 : [255,79,132] Combo4 : [85,119,255]
{ Normal} :
Combo1 : [214,214,214] Combo2 : [255,234,85] Combo3 : [255,66,122] Combo4 : [85,119,255]
Easy is not mentioned here, because since its a guest diff and it's using a different BG, there is not problem with it.
{Hard} : -217
{lovhin's Easy} : -260
{Normal} : -217
• Inconsistency in ComboColours
{ Hard} :
Combo1 : [192,192,192] Combo2 : [250,217,27] Combo3 : [255,79,132] Combo4 : [85,119,255]
{ Normal} :
Combo1 : [214,214,214] Combo2 : [255,234,85] Combo3 : [255,66,122] Combo4 : [85,119,255]
Easy is not mentioned here, because since its a guest diff and it's using a different BG, there is not problem with it.
[Hard]
General
- Everything's good.
Playability
- add a note here? 00:53:272 - 02:23:272 - 03:45:772 - you are mostly followint the vocals in this point but you didn't choose to add a note here, consistency.
- this part here doesnt look good at all: 01:10:616 (7,8,9,10) - , I think this way the pattern looks AND plays better, you can obviusly take your time and do it better than me.
- 01:13:663 (6,7) - this looks and plays terrible, I think you should change it, there are plenty of ways to fix this issue, take your time and think wich one is better for this map!
- add a note here 01:34:288 - 02:30:538 - 03:04:288 - 04:26:788 - its a high beat, do not ignore high beats like this pls, you can start the spinner right away
Presentation
- In my opinion this 00:33:350 (6,7,1) - kind of patterns looks ugly, it can play good but they dosent look good while playing, My suggestion
- You could make this 00:36:163 (4) - slider curvy, looking upwards to make more variety
- What do you think about making ths 00:38:506 (2,3) - 01:15:303 (1,2) - a blanket? it looks better and the playability doesn't change at all
- What do you think about changing the shape of this sliders? because watching only straight and curvy sliders is pretty boring don't you think so?: 00:39:913 (4) - 00:18:350 (7) - 00:22:100 (7) - 00:25:850 (7) - 00:29:600 (8) -
- this pattern doesn't look bad at all 00:27:256 (2,3,4) - but what do you think about this, you can also improve more patterns like this, I will not point them all, check more carefuly your map and you will find out!
- the playabiliti of this is good 00:30:538 (1,2) - , but they way they look is not, what do you think about changin the shape of the slider a bit more?, you can obviusly make it look better! just take your time and do it good.
- you can imprive they way this pattern looks 00:58:663 (1,2,3,4) - , its another example.
- this pattern here 02:11:319 (7,1) - is good to play, but it looks too ugly, what do you think you improve it a bit more?
- you can make such a good patter with this 3 notes the way you put them 02:19:756 (3,4,5) - , what do you think about this? http://puu.sh/lTqLc/0477b983fd.jpg
- if you move 02:39:444 (5,6) - slider (6) a bit high looks way better, don't you think so?
Nazi
- make this stacks better 01:19:756 (3,5) - 01:19:288 (1,4) -01:31:944 (5,8) -
Combos
- Start a new combo in the following parts: 00:18:350 - 00:28:663 - 00:22:100 - 00:25:850 - 00:47:413 - 00:51:163 - 00:54:913 - 01:06:163 - 01:09:913 - 01:13:663 - 01:17:413 - 01:21:163 - 01:24:913 - 01:28:663 - 01:32:413 - 01:47:413 - 01:51:163 - 01:54:913 - 01:58:663 - 02:02:413 - 02:06:163 - 02:09:913 - 02:17:413 - 02:21:163 - 02:24:913 - 02:36:163 - 02:39:913 - 02:43:663 - 02:47:413 - 02:51:163 - 02:54:913 - 02:58:663 - 03:02:413 - 03:58:663 - 04:02:413 - 04:06:163 - 04:09:913 - 04:13:663 - 04:17:413 - 04:21:163 - 04:24:913 -
Overall
- You have some problems with the combos, as you can see I suggested you to change most of them, I am aware that some of your patters might get ruined because of my suggestion, but this is because you have such a bad way to make combos. In the other hand, the presentation of this map is kind poor, even though the playability of this map is really good, the way it is presented with poor patterns and bad overlaps makes this map looks bad even if its good (witch is a pretty good map). A fun map will often look good as well as play good.
[Normal]
General
- Everything's good
Playability
- The first thing I noticed in this diff, is that the spacing is too high for a casual player, think about reducing it. For example 00:14:600 (3,4) - this 1/2 notes should be more overlaped since the spacing will be confucing for a casual player and he might miss the combo because of this. This problem can be fixed by reducing it just a bit.
Presentation
- Good job!
Nazi
- you can improve the following blankets: 00:08:975 (3,1) - 00:10:850 (3,1) - 00:26:788 (1,2) -
- You can improve the following stacks: 00:19:288 (1,4) -
Overall
- This difficulty is really good made, besides of the little problem of spacing you have, You can improve the visual ascpect a bit more and should be ready for rank.
[lovhin's Easy]
General
- Everything's good
Playability
- A good friend of mine told me that this kind of overlaps can't occur ever in an easy. It can be confusing for a complete newbie player, Remember, an easy is meant to be done for a player that have never played this game before.
- Isn't the recovery time here 01:02:413 - 02:32:413 - too short? I think it is, but I don't have any suggestion to fix this if I'm right.
Overall
- Excelent difficulty, there are practically anything to say about this, good job!