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Rhythm suggestions orz

Hard

00:37:334 - add a note
00:37:452 - ^
00:38:741 (2) - slider shorten, repeat slider at 00:38:858 and it ends at 00:38:975
00:39:327 - add a note
01:10:967 (9) - shorten slider to end at 01:11:084 and either repeat the slider or put another note at 01:11:202
01:18:467 (9) - shorten to end at 01:18:702 and add a note at 01:18:819
01:25:967 (8) - shorten to 01:26:202 and add a note at 01:26:319
02:08:858 - add a note
02:14:834 - shorten to 02:14:834 and add notes at 02:14:952 and 02:15:069
02:22:217 (5) - shorten to 02:22:452 and add a note at 02:22:569
02:32:881 - you could add a slider here that ends at 02:33:233
02:48:467 (8) - shorten to 02:48:702 and add a note at 02:48:819
02:55:967 (8) - ^
03:18:467 (5) - slider start at 03:18:584 end at 03:18:819 and add a note at 03:18:467
03:55:381 - could also add a slider here, end at 03:55:733
04:03:467 (9) - shorten to 04:03:702 and add a note at 04:03:819
04:35:928 (4,1) - swap places, slider before circle and add a note at 04:36:866

04:41:788 (1) - end at 04:42:959
04:43:428 - add a circle with finish
04:43:545 - start a spinner here and end at 04:45:538

Normal

01:04:991 (2) - start from 01:05:225 end at 01:05:459
01:10:147 (3) - ^
01:12:491 (3) - ^ (simpler rhythm, these are really really optional though)
04:13:428 (4) - shift to 04:13:194

overall the off beats make it quite halting and a little confusing for flow, at least that is what I feel.

Easy

00:24:913 (3) - the 1 1/2 beat sounds funny, better to end slider with no repeat at 00:25:850 and add a note at 00:26:319
00:28:663 (3) - ^
00:33:819 (2,3) - remove and make 00:30:538 (1) - first repeat at 00:32:413 and ends at 00:34:288
then add a slider from 00:35:225 to 00:36:163 and add a note at 00:37:100
00:39:913 (1) - first repeat at 00:40:850 and end at 00:41:788 and add a note at 00:42:725
01:30:069 (5) - replace with a slider from 01:29:600 to 01:30:069 with finish sound on the tail end
01:33:819 (3) - replace with slider from 01:33:350 to 01:33:819
01:46:006 (2,3,4) - why not the same as 00:15:538 (1,2,3,4) - ? the earlier part sounds more natural
02:41:788 (1,2) - I don't think the distance spacing between these 2 is 1.0x, same with 02:45:538 (1) - it should be equal with the rest of the map
04:36:163 (2) - start from 04:35:928 end at 04:37:100

Good Luck`~
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neonat wrote:

Rhythm suggestions orz

Hard Starting backwards huh?

00:37:334 - add a note I think it's fine.
00:37:452 - ^ I've made different changes instead.
00:38:741 (2) - slider shorten, repeat slider at 00:38:858 and it ends at 00:38:975 Added.
00:39:327 - add a note I don't see how it fits.
01:10:967 (9) - shorten slider to end at 01:11:084 and either repeat the slider or put another note at 01:11:202 I think it's fine.
01:18:467 (9) - shorten to end at 01:18:702 and add a note at 01:18:819 Added.
01:25:967 (8) - shorten to 01:26:202 and add a note at 01:26:319 Added.
02:08:858 - add a note Added.
02:14:834 - shorten to 02:14:834 and add notes at 02:14:952 and 02:15:069 Added with a slight change.
02:22:217 (5) - shorten to 02:22:452 and add a note at 02:22:569 Added.
02:32:881 - you could add a slider here that ends at 02:33:233 I think it's fine. I don't follow vocals that much.
02:48:467 (8) - shorten to 02:48:702 and add a note at 02:48:819 Added.
02:55:967 (8) - ^ Added.
03:18:467 (5) - slider start at 03:18:584 end at 03:18:819 and add a note at 03:18:467 The note goes before? Either way I think it's fine.
03:55:381 - could also add a slider here, end at 03:55:733 I think it's fine.
04:03:467 (9) - shorten to 04:03:702 and add a note at 04:03:819 Added.
04:35:928 (4,1) - swap places, slider before circle and add a note at 04:36:866 Added with a slight change.

04:41:788 (1) - end at 04:42:959
04:43:428 - add a circle with finish
04:43:545 - start a spinner here and end at 04:45:538 The rest I think is fine.

Normal

01:04:991 (2) - start from 01:05:225 end at 01:05:459
01:10:147 (3) - ^
01:12:491 (3) - ^ (simpler rhythm, these are really really optional though) All the above I think is fine.
04:13:428 (4) - shift to 04:13:194 Fixed.

overall the off beats make it quite halting and a little confusing for flow, at least that is what I feel. It was experimental. I'll make changes if necessary, though I need more responses.

Easy diff will be modded by its respectful mapper.
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HI~ Darcsol

lovhin's Easy

00:37:569 (1) -
Can you try?

Normal

01:57:256 (2) - add Clap

01:57:725 (3) - Remove the side of the head slider applause


hard ... Hard, please do not jump over the 2.00.

ex : 04:21:631 (6,7,8) - or 04:23:741 (2,3,4,5) -

There's too much jumping to a relatively ... Reducing the distance of things like this jump looks good .. I need you to stay

do you accept m4m

t/128381 my map!! Please
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[ Zzz ] wrote:

Normal

01:57:256 (2) - add Clap Added.

01:57:725 (3) - Remove the side of the head slider applause
Fixed.

hard ... Hard, please do not jump over the 2.00.

ex : 04:21:631 (6,7,8) - or 04:23:741 (2,3,4,5) -

There's too much jumping to a relatively ... Reducing the distance of things like this jump looks good .. I need you to stay I think the jumps are fine. Not all Hard difficulties have to follow the 2.00 distance snap. While there are parts that are difficult, it fits the intended difficulty. I don't think it can qualify to be an Insane/Lunatic diff anyway. I'll make adjustments but more modders are needed if this is a potential issue.
For the requested m4m map, I'm going to reject it. The song is not I would want to mod for. Next time if you request a m4m, contact the modder beforehand. Sorry.
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To be continued mod!


13:28 Tari: Tell me if your going change rhythm here or not 00:22:569 (2,1) - 
13:29 Darcsol: Probably not
13:30 Tari: and
13:30 Tari: Is there a reason why you made these two notes : 00:18:350 (2,3) - 00:29:600 (3,4) - different?
13:30 Tari: they have similar rhythm tbh
13:32 Darcsol: The song changes at the 29 sec mark.
13:33 Darcsol: Thought it would reflect the change
13:33 Tari: ahh okay
13:35 Darcsol: Now that I think about it, 00:30:538 - 00:38:038 should have its slider velocity reduced.
13:35 Darcsol: Now that I think about it, 00:30:538 - 00:38:038 should have its slider velocity reduced.
13:35 Tari: no
13:35 Tari: you don't do sv changes in normal
13:35 Tari: and easy
13:35 Tari: its not good
13:35 Tari: I mean beginner friendly
13:36 Darcsol: Normal is slightly harder than it should
13:36 Tari: sv = slider velocity
13:36 Tari: no you can't do that really
13:36 Tari: we want to keep it beginner friendly
13:36 Tari: you can do it in hard though
13:36 Tari: and
13:36 Darcsol: Hard already has it
13:37 Tari: 01:19:053 (6) - there a reason why you put a new here right?
13:37 Darcsol: New combo?
13:37 Tari: I mean a reason why you put a note there
13:37 Tari: sorry ><
13:38 Darcsol: Fits the flow of the map
13:38 Tari: owo
13:39 Tari: 04:13:428 (4) - spacing?
13:39 Darcsol: Don't know what happened there. Fixing...
13:40 Darcsol: okay
13:41 Tari: I would avoid stacking notes under sliders
13:41 Tari: 02:52:803 (6) - like that
13:42 Darcsol: Agreed. 6 moved to 1.
13:43 Tari: 01:12:256 (2,3) - I think it would be better if you start the slider at where note 2 is right now
13:43 Tari: hitting 3 is weird to me ><
13:44 Darcsol: I agree. Fixed.
13:47 Tari: 01:27:256 (2,3) - In the other kiai parts you mapped the white tick here 01:27:725 , maybe you should map it here too?
13:47 Tari: bleh
13:47 Tari: I hate the linking
13:48 Darcsol: We all do
13:48 Darcsol: Anyway yeah I agree
13:49 Tari: some of your beats are a mess
13:49 Darcsol: It's pretty experimental. I was trying some stuff.
13:50 Tari: 01:07:803 - a note needs to be added here
13:50 Tari: like other parts
13:50 Darcsol: added
13:51 Tari: well you can map the beats anyway you want
13:51 Tari: just make sure you put the beats there
13:51 Darcsol: And this map is long. There's bound to be errors.
13:51 Tari: I want to clear most of the rhythm errors for you
13:52 Tari: almost forgot
13:52 Tari: need to do it here too
13:52 Tari: 04:00:303 -
13:52 Darcsol: Added
13:53 Tari: 04:02:647 (3,4) - I would prefer this to be a slider
13:54 Darcsol: Agreed. Changed.
13:56 Tari: 04:12:725 (3) - spacing
13:57 Darcsol: Damn. That changes everything... D:
13:57 Tari: and wth
13:57 Tari: the rhythm there is off too
13:58 Tari: well either way
13:58 Tari: your going have to fix that
13:59 Darcsol: yeah
13:59 Tari: I would really advise you to check other parts
13:59 Tari: similar parts really
14:00 Tari: and make sure they have beats placed in the proper place
14:00 Darcsol: I'm gonna redo most of the chorus parts.
14:00 Tari: sorry
14:00 Tari: I am being so tough on you
14:01 Darcsol: It's alright
14:01 Darcsol: It's bound to happen
14:03 Tari: oh
14:03 Tari: 01:48:584 (4) - why is there a beat in the red tick here
14:03 Tari: it doesn't feel right to play
14:04 Darcsol: You're jumping around all over the place
14:04 Tari: yeah
14:04 Tari: becasue I miss stuff
14:04 Tari: when I go forward the map
14:04 Tari: I look back
14:05 Tari: and see if that fits what you just did when I didn't move back in the map
14:05 Tari: and I checked the first kiai
14:05 Tari: to see how things generally are
14:05 Tari: and I moved on to the others
14:05 Tari: to see if they fit or not
14:05 Darcsol: I see
14:06 Tari: cause some parts
14:06 Darcsol: Anyway changed it
14:07 Tari: and i start with 1 thing at a time
14:07 Tari: right now I am focusing on rhythm erorrs
14:07 Tari: and then they'll be rhythm stuff
14:07 Tari: I mean
14:07 Tari: new combo things*
14:08 Darcsol: The combos are subjective. Unless if there's an obvious mistake, it's mostly the the mapper's style.
14:08 Tari: well the colors should match
14:08 Tari: in a way
14:09 Tari: guess you missed a note here
14:09 Tari: 01:50:928 -
14:10 Darcsol: added
14:10 Darcsol: Anyway I take colors seriously.
14:11 Tari: anyways
14:11 Darcsol: ^ not a word
14:12 Tari: 00:21:163 (1) - this and this 01:51:163 (1) - should have same color?
14:12 Tari: combo color imo
14:13 Darcsol: There's a new combo in every tall white tick thingy
14:13 Tari: ._.
14:13 Tari: ok
14:13 Tari: bleh
14:13 Tari: I am not looking hard enough then
14:14 Tari: 00:22:334 - I believe a beat is missing here
14:15 Tari: and something needs to be removed here 01:52:334 (2) -
14:16 Darcsol: The first part I think it's fine. Second part I agree.
14:16 Tari: well you need to do 1 of them ><
14:16 Tari: so yeah
14:16 Tari: not both of them
14:17 Darcsol: of course
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This is taking so long to be ranked :\
Here is my star.
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Is anyone doing an insane difficulty for this map? I really love this song and I'd be more than willing to provide one if anyone sees fit. I'll be sure to check back later to help mod.
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some mod~

hard
AR+1 ?
00:52:920 (1) - change the NC to 00:53:272 (2) - is better imo
01:34:053 (10) - delete and place a circle in same place
03:04:170 (13) - delete this
04:26:553 (12) - delete and place a circle in same place
04:41:553 (6) - move to the middle, and delete 04:41:670 (7) -

normal
AR and OD +1 is better imo
00:47:178 (1) - move to 00:47:413

lovhin's easy
AR-1 ?
02:38:506 add a circle here

mod2short lol
make this ranked please >w<
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MMd- wrote:

hard
AR+1 ? I think it's fine. The diff is designed around this AR.
00:52:920 (1) - change the NC to 00:53:272 (2) - is better imo Not necessary. Would ruin the combo pacing.
01:34:053 (10) - delete and place a circle in same place
03:04:170 (13) - delete this
04:26:553 (12) - delete and place a circle in same place
04:41:553 (6) - move to the middle, and delete 04:41:670 (7) -
The rest I think are fine.

normal
AR and OD +1 is better imo Added for the time being. I might make changes.
00:47:178 (1) - move to 00:47:413 Fixed.
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Ops modded wrong thread, sorry!
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Hi~ im slow o.o; well actually i chekced some weeks ago but i forgot to mod so....~

[General]
  1. Timing -> Recalculate Slider Lengths on the Easy and Normal.
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:350 (3) - Add whistle sounds better imo :3
  2. 00:33:350 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes.
  3. 01:52:920 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes.
  4. 03:00:538 (1,3) - Poor stack.
  5. 03:06:631 - Extended break makes no sense here.
  6. 03:26:788 - This break isn't really necessary on a Hard and kind of feels like you were just being lazy not to map it.
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:475 (3,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
  2. 01:26:319 - Add clap.
  3. 02:00:538 (1,3,4,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
  4. 02:46:944 - Add clap.
  5. 03:38:038 - Sliders are broken from here to 03:48:819 -
[lovhin's Easy]
  1. Some sliders aren't snapped here too! I don't know if its a mistake on my part or yours but you need to resnap all sliders!

Good luck~
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>:(

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~ im slow o.o; well actually i chekced some weeks ago but i forgot to mod so....~

[General]
  1. Timing -> Recalculate Slider Lengths on the Easy and Normal. Done.
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:350 (3) - Add whistle sounds better imo :3 Added. Also added in other places to keep consistency.
  2. 00:33:350 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes.
  3. 01:52:920 (1,2) - Probably better to switch new combo between these two notes. Both added for now.
  4. 03:00:538 (1,3) - Poor stack. Fixed.
  5. 03:06:631 - Extended break makes no sense here. I think it's fine. I do this to all diffs anyway.
  6. 03:26:788 - This break isn't really necessary on a Hard and kind of feels like you were just being lazy not to map it. Last time I have mapped on the break, but various modders recommended me to remove it in order to keep consistency with the other diffs. I don't know if I want to map it again, but we'll see.
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:475 (3,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
  2. 01:26:319 - Add clap.
  3. 02:00:538 (1,3,4,1,4) - Sliders aren't snapper properly.
  4. 02:46:944 - Add clap.
  5. 03:38:038 - Sliders are broken from here to 03:48:819 -
    Everything should be fixed/added.
[lovhin's Easy]
  1. Some sliders aren't snapped here too! I don't know if its a mistake on my part or yours but you need to resnap all sliders! Fixed.

Good luck~
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If you need help with hitsounds, try playing ur map on taiko, that normally helps me.
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Is the easy's background supposed to have huge Black bars on the sides?
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radboyPT wrote:

Is the easy's background supposed to have huge Black bars on the sides?
Yup. It's to compensate players who play osu in widescreen. I might remove them if people don't like it, but I'm gonna make big changes to this godforsaken map. I might add an black bars to the video as well. Of course those playing in 4:3 resolution should not be affected.
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Hi
just some suggestions
[Hard]
00:16:241 add a note?
00:23:506 (2) - so far with 00:23:155 (1) -
00:26:788 (1) - change it to 1/2 slider
01:04:756 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a tnoe
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^

good luck :)
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sjoy wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:241 add a note? Not necessary.
00:23:506 (2) - so far with 00:23:155 (1) - I have no idea what you're asking for. Please clarify.
00:26:788 (1) - change it to 1/2 slider I think it's fine.
01:04:756 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm I think both of them are fine.
01:09:913 (6) - NC
01:17:413 (6) - ^
01:27:256 (2,3) - I suggest 2 1/2 slider rhythm I think it's fine.
01:28:897 (6) - NC
01:33:350 add a tnoe Added.
02:39:913 (6) - NC
02:55:147 (6) - NC
02:58:663 (6) - ^
03:02:413 (7) - ^ Give me a reason why I should add those NCs. Most of your suggestions are subjective.
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hi

[Hard]
I ll give some advices of rhythm that I consider sounds better, you decide if you follow them or not
00:19:053 (5) - delete note
00:25:616 (3) - same
00:26:553 (6) - same
00:29:600 (4,5) - replace by a slider
01:05:225 - end slider here and add a repeat
01:07:334 - end this one here, add note here: 01:07:569 - and delete the one here:01:07:803 -
01:14:600 (8,9) - end slider here and add note at next white tick
01:22:100 - 01:22:334 - 01:22:569 - and single notes on each removing that slider.and add note here: 01:23:038 -
01:30:069 (9) - replace by a note
01:54:913 (1,2,3) - do the same you did here: 01:52:100 (4,5,6,7) - cuz as it is doesnt fit.
01:55:850 (4,5,6) - same as above
02:37:100 - 02:37:100 - 02:37:100 - and single notes on each removing that slider.and add note here:02:38:038 -
02:45:069 (8) - replace for a circle
03:03:584 - there no sound here, i think slider should start in prev blue tick and place a note where (10) starts.
03:57:725 - end slide here and add repeat

[Normal]
00:55:147 - add note
01:47:647 - same
01:48:584 - add note and delete the one here: 01:49:053 -
02:22:334 - end slider here and add a repeat then delete note here: 02:22:803 -
02:52:334 - same as above
02:56:084 (7) - here is missing a note >~<
03:38:506 (1) - why this single combo?

[lovhin's Easy]
This breaks the symetry too drastically
I didnt like the overlap on some sliders
aside from that, great diff lovhin <3

Good luck~~
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wwww

[lovhin's Easy]
02:21:163 (2) - Add finish to end of slider
02:22:569 (3) - Remove finish
02:23:038 (1) - Remove all hitsounds then add clap to end of slider
02:38:506 - Add note and add clap to it?
03:47:413 (4) - Remove whistle and add finish
01:50:225 (1,2) - Extend these by 1/4

[Normal]
Honestly, the rhythm felt weird at first, but after replaying it a few times it felt fine. :?
Nothing to say here about hitsounds or placement, but yeah, I think the rhythm is a bit weird in places-- I won't make suggestions so I don't ruin the rythmn-- so maybe you should go over that once more.

[Hard]
HP Drain -1

00:09:913 (1) - Curve?
00:13:663 (3) - Remove NC? o3o
00:24:913 (1) - Add repeat and move 00:25:147 (2) - 1/4 forward and shorten by 1/4
00:25:850 (3,4) - ^
00:30:069 (5,6) - Make into stream
00:31:944 (3) - Maybe make it more like this?

00:37:452 (8) - CTRL+G? I think it kinda plays weird as it is now
00:53:155 - Add note here and resnap it and 00:53:272 (2) - so it looks/plays nicer
01:54:913 (1,2) - Make into stream?
01:55:850 (4,5) - ^
02:00:069 (6) - Remove?
Rest of the map is really good.

GL :3c
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