manzo - My-Pace Daiou (TV Size)

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Andruchon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 21. November 2011 at 15:41:44

Artist: manzo
Title: My-Pace Daiou (TV Size)
Source: Genshiken
Tags: Gendai Shikaku Bunka Kenkyukai opening OzzyOzrock
BPM: 180
Filesize: 11447kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,95 stars, 106 notes)
  2. Hard (4,95 stars, 224 notes)
  3. Normal (4,18 stars, 143 notes)
  4. Ozzy's Taiko (4,83 stars, 422 notes)


Download: manzo - My-Pace Daiou (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is already mapped, but i didn't like it
so i decided to make my own map...

*added hard and normal
*added easy
*deleted insane
*added Ozzy's Taiko

Modders:
*Young Link 4
*TicClick
*Katsuri
*poisonchan
*Omega
*Zelos
*EEeee
*Weiren
*Ekaru
*frost-b-spec
*justnobody
*pieguy1372
*Hellzero
*Daigurenhyourinmaru
*Leorda
*wowshakhov
*LunaticMara
*OzzyOzrock
*ikari_kyon
*Megurine Luka
*Raging Bull
*Mustaash
*wmfchris (Taiko)
*marshall_racer
*The 08 team_Bourdon
*Vortex
*winber1
*gina91189
*OnosakiHito (Taiko)
*spboxer3
*Chewin
*lolcubes
*Backfire (Taiko)
*Shulin
*HellDawn
*DragonSparta
*Tanmak
*Sakura Hana
*Kawayi Rika
*qilliam
*Magicphoenix
*regenz
*Breeze
*Byakugan249
*Colin Hou
Thanks to all modders
Young Link 4
Overall: Please avoid the same patterns in two diffs. Especially the beginning

Insane:


00:45:194 (9) - New Combo
00:55:191 (5) - too close
00:58:523 (2) - New Combo
01:03:855 (5) - ^
01:09:520 (2) - ^

Hard:

00:33:197 (7) - Shorter would be better. I'd suggest til 00:33:863.
00:42:528 (9) - New Combo
00:48:193 (4) - ^
01:03:855 (5) - ^
01:09:187 (5) - ^

It's not much, but I hope it helps.
TicClick
IRC help
15:50 <TicClick> : What map?
15:50 *Andruchon is listening to (Manzo - My-Pace Daiou)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34011]
15:50 <TicClick> : Ok, I'll try.
15:52 <TicClick> : Hm.
15:52 <Andruchon> : спс =)
15:52 <TicClick> : :)
15:52 <TicClick> : Ща, инсейн гляну.
15:53 <Andruchon> : сек
15:53 <TicClick> : ?
15:53 <TicClick> : Честно говоря, на харде пара мест в ступор ввела.
15:54 <Andruchon> : и на инсейне тож будет, наверно :/
15:54 <TicClick> : То же самое?
15:54 <Andruchon> : неа
15:55 *TicClick is playing (Manzo - My-Pace Daiou)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34011] [Insane] -NoFail
15:55 <Andruchon> : но в том же "стиле" =)
15:56 <TicClick> : Пауза не ок
15:57 <TicClick> : И ещё несколько слайдеров странно звучат.
15:59 <Andruchon> : тайминг, или samples?
15:59 <TicClick> : Ne
15:59 <TicClick> : Ты их как-то странно на шкале расставил
16:00 <Andruchon> : можеш аоказать какие?
16:00 <TicClick> : Ща
16:00 <TicClick> : Открой хард в редакторе
16:01 <TicClick> : 00:09:162 (2) -
16:01 <TicClick> : на один тик вперед.
16:01 <TicClick> : Чтобы был на белом.
16:01 <TicClick> : О, чувак.
16:02 <TicClick> : Давай я тебе лучше в топик выгружу исправленное
16:02 <TicClick> : Потому что тут много править ._.
16:02 <Andruchon> : :/
16:02 <TicClick> : У тебя чуть ли не половина нот с тиков съехала.
16:03 <Andruchon> : дану...
16:03 <TicClick> : А, нет.
16:03 <TicClick> : Это в начале только много.
16:04 <TicClick> : Давай ща так сделаем
16:04 <TicClick> : Я буду говорить, а ты — тут же править.
16:04 <Andruchon> : кк
16:04 <TicClick> : Поехали, с самого начала.
16:05 <TicClick> : 00:09:162 (2) - на белый тик, который впереди
16:05 <Andruchon> : =)
16:05 <Andruchon> : есть
16:05 <TicClick> : 00:10:120 (1) - на белый тик
16:05 <TicClick> : 00:10:661 (2) - на красный тик
16:05 <TicClick> : 00:10:828 (3) - на белый тик
16:05 <TicClick> : 00:11:494 (1,2,3) - каждую на белый тик
16:05 <TicClick> : успеваешь?
16:06 <Andruchon> : ага
16:06 <TicClick> : 00:19:201 (3) - укороти
16:06 <TicClick> : Конец должен лечь на белый тик
16:07 <TicClick> : 00:19:867 - сюда потом ноту добавишь
16:07 <TicClick> : 00:34:447 (2) - сдвинь на белый тик
16:08 <TicClick> : 00:46:777 (1,2,3) - эти сдвинь назад на красный тик
16:08 <TicClick> : А сюда добавишь ноту 00:47:360
16:09 <TicClick> : 00:55:357 (2) - продли. Конец ляжет на белый тик
16:09 <TicClick> : 01:07:437 (2) - сдвинь вперед на белый тик
16:09 <TicClick> : Успеваешь?
16:10 <Andruchon> : сек...
16:11 <TicClick> : Чо, как там продвигается?
16:12 <Andruchon> : 00:55:357 (2)
16:13 <Andruchon> : есть...
16:13 <TicClick> : 01:17:018 (1) - этот сдвинешь вперед на белый тик и укоротишь
16:13 <TicClick> : Чтобы конец лёг на красный тик
16:14 <TicClick> : http://puu.sh/3Nqy вот так чтобы было
16:15 <TicClick> : 01:25:516 (1) - чуууть-чуть укороти, чтобы он на тики лёг
16:15 <TicClick> : 01:26:849 (1) - чуть-чуть продли, чтобы конец лег на белый тик
16:16 <Andruchon> : все зделоно =)
16:16 <TicClick> : В принципе, всё. Ещё мне чот не нравится перерыв
16:16 <TicClick> : Пусто как-то ._.
16:16 <TicClick> : Но это уж тебе решать
Katsuri
General

  1. First primary issue, you mp3 bitrate is over than 192kbps, It's 256kbps, Fixed it here.
  2. Your Background needs to be 4:3, fixed it Here.
  3. You have preview point inconsistent on easy..
  4. Use kiai consistent on all diffs.(Insane and Easy are completely different, I suggest you to make them like Normal and Hard.
  5. The Kiai Time needs to start on 00:53:525 and finish on 01:14:186


Easy

00:17:535 (3) - Kick Sliders(Slider with more than one repeat) are not recomended to use on the easiest Difficulty, I suggest you to do something like:

OR


01:02:157 (2) - Kick slider again, try to do something like:


01:13:487 (3) - Remove the last repeat to follow the instrumental better.

Normal

00:18:201 (2) - Delete this slider and add a note is too much better.

00:25:532 (5) - It's really a mess, make something like:


00:34:197 (1) - Since, some Kick sliders are messy, It's a mess, change this.

01:02:356 (5) - ^

Hard

00:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confuse pattern

00:33:197 (7) - This 1/4 kick slider doesn't fit this part.

00:58:523 (1) - Don't make things like that, I suggest you to space this note, never stack 1/1 note if you use 1/2 stackment before, because it will look like before notes.

01:03:855 (7) - ^

01:17:185 (1) - Make this slider 1/2 like the other diffs.

Insane

Since, remap it, a lot of 1/8 snapped notes, I refuse myself to mod it.

This map needs more work, no Star, sorry. :(
poisonchan
Heeya :3 Modding your map as your request. Hope it helps :3

General

- You don't need to add "Genshiken theme opening my pace daiou manzo", in your tags. Instead, remove 'Genshiken' from Source, leave the camp Source empty and add it on tags. Like this .

- Preview point must be the same in all diffs, you should fix it:
  • Easy: 40028
    Normal: 29365
    Hard: 40028

To fix it, open the Normal difficulty, go to: 00:40:028, select Timing > Set Current Point as Preview Point.
If you want to make it even more 'complete', instead of making the preview point at: 00:40:028, make it at: 00:52:525 in all difficulties.

- You have an unnecessary file in your folder: Manzo - My-Pace Daiou (Andruchon).osb, if you want to get rid of it, remove the file and full submit your map. [This is OPTIONAL]

Easy
00:12:203 (1) - New combo isn't totally necessary. Remove new combo ?
00:14:869 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:202 (1,2,3) - Remove new combo from (1). Also, repeater sliders with such small size aren't recommended in the easiest difficulty. If possible, try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122620. Don't forget to fix the spacing in the following beats.
00:18:868 (1) - This note is too close from the previous one, according to the 1.0x distance spacing, it should be a bit far. Change it and fix the whole combo, with the right spacing !
00:23:533 (1) - You have one useless point in the construction of the slider. http://puu.sh/3R34 : Remove the one who is in the middle of the line.
00:30:531 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:31:531 and 00:31:864 - Add a beat here? Don't forget to fix the spacing. New combo in the note at: 00:31:531 and remove new combo from 00:32:197 (1). (ONLY if you add the 2 beats above)
00:38:862 (1,2) - The spacing. Again, follow the 'Distance Spacing' using the - Distance Snap - tool enabled. Fix the spacing !
00:40:528 (2) - Number 2 is touching number 1, looking odd compared with the regular spacing. Fix it, also fix the rest of the combo.
00:44:194 (5) - Unstack this slider !
00:46:860 (1,2) - Remove these two beats, and add a slider like 00:45:527 (1) - at: 00:46:860 (DON'T start a new combo here.)
00:48:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing using the - Distance Snap - tool enabled !
00:52:525 - Start Kiai time here !
00:54:524 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:02:189 (2) - Instead of this repeater slider, what about: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122622 ?
01:13:519 (3) - Remove ONE repetition, and add a note at: 01:14:519?
01:14:186 - Finish Kiai time here !

Tip: Try improving your sliders and your patterns, the map holds an odd look. And the flow isn't the best asweel.
You need to pay attention in the spacing. Always follow the distance snap once that you are 'new' at mapping.

[Normal]
00:09:537 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:10:203 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:536 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:14:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:202 (1,2,1,2) - Unstack all these sliders, and try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122624. Don't forget to move the next combo a bit closer.
00:20:825 (1) - Remove new combo, also, the slider is miss placed, place it on the white tick in the timeline.
00:21:534 (2) - Instead of this repeater slider, add one beat at: 00:21:534, one slider at: 00:21:867 till 00:22:200 and repeat it once, then add a beat here: 00:22:866.
00:25:532 (5) - Remove this repeater slider. Try a patter with beat, slider, repeat, beat, beat. (In the white ticks)
00:28:032 (3) - New combo.
00:29:865 (2,3,4,5) - Invert the whole combo vertically and fix the spacing. Also, don't forget to fix the spacing of the next combo.
00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use the - Distance Snap - tool and fix the spacing. Don't overlap nor stack notes here.
00:33:114 (5) - This note is placed in a blue tick, move to the previous red tick, also move this slider: 00:33:364 (6) - to the previous white tick. [ http://puu.sh/3R5v ]
00:34:197 (1) - Same thing about repeater sliders. Try to change it with beats or sliders, use your imagination!
00:36:863 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:196 (2) - Unstack this note.
00:39:195 (2,3) - Jump between 2-3 ? Really? Fix it with the proper spacing.
00:41:195 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:528 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:42:194 (2) - Unstack this note.
00:42:528 (1) - No jumps. Fix it with the proper spacing.
00:42:861 (1) - ^
00:44:194 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:527 (2) - New combo.
00:46:693 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1). Don't you agree that this pattern is off rhythm? try improving your sliders to follow the song beat!
00:55:524 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:857 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:523 (3) - Don't stack this note.
01:00:189 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:02:356 (5) - Don't stack this note. Also, try changing the repeater slider in another creative pattern !
01:07:521 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:08:187 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:353 (4) - Instead of this ugly repeater, remove this slider, add one at: 01:10:520 till 01:10:853 and fix the spacing.
01:16:018 (1,2,3) - Don't fit the rhythm. Try something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122636.
01:17:518 - Finish the map here like Easy. (Delete the notes after it)

[Hard]
00:09:204 (2) - Forced jump. Doesn't look nice ^^'' . Follow the proper distance spacing. Don't forget to change the following combos.
00:10:203 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:536 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:12:369 - This break isn't needed.
00:15:535 (6) - Fix the spacing.
00:16:202 (1,2,3) - ^
00:16:868 (1,2,3) - ^
--...--
Ok, I was going to finish the mod in this diff., but I think I should do it in another way. When you log on, PM ME IN GAME, and I will do an online mod with you, showing what do you need to change. This way you can learn more about how to improve your maps.
Topic Starter
Andruchon

poisonchan wrote:

Heeya :3 Modding your map as your request. Hope it helps :3

General

- You don't need to add "Genshiken theme opening my pace daiou manzo", in your tags. Instead, remove 'Genshiken' from Source, leave the camp Source empty and add it on tags. Like this .

- Preview point must be the same in all diffs, you should fix it:
  • Easy: 40028
    Normal: 29365
    Hard: 40028

To fix it, open the Normal difficulty, go to: 00:40:028, select Timing > Set Current Point as Preview Point.
If you want to make it even more 'complete', instead of making the preview point at: 00:40:028, make it at: 00:52:525 in all difficulties.

- You have an unnecessary file in your folder: Manzo - My-Pace Daiou (Andruchon).osb, if you want to get rid of it, remove the file and full submit your map. [This is OPTIONAL]

Easy
00:12:203 (1) - New combo isn't totally necessary. Remove new combo ? done
00:14:869 (1) - Remove new combo. done
00:16:202 (1,2,3) - Remove new combo from (1). Also, repeater sliders with such small size aren't recommended in the easiest difficulty. If possible, try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122620. Don't forget to fix the spacing in the following beats. tryed another version http://puu.sh/3RoU
00:18:868 (1) - This note is too close from the previous one, according to the 1.0x distance spacing, it should be a bit far. Change it and fix the whole combo, with the right spacing !sorry, don't understand >_< maybe it fixed itself when i removed the kick-slider? http://puu.sh/3Rp5
00:23:533 (1) - You have one useless point in the construction of the slider. http://puu.sh/3R34 : Remove the one who is in the middle of the line. done
00:30:531 (1) - Remove new combo. done
00:31:531 and 00:31:864 - Add a beat here? Don't forget to fix the spacing. New combo in the note at: 00:31:531 and remove new combo from 00:32:197 (1). (ONLY if you add the 2 beats above) done http://puu.sh/3Rpi
00:38:862 (1,2) - The spacing. Again, follow the 'Distance Spacing' using the - Distance Snap - tool enabled. Fix the spacing !there is not much time, so if i follow the spacing, the two slider would be at the other side of the maps...first i wanted to make a little break there, so i think it should be correct (correct me if im wrong >_<)
00:40:528 (2) - Number 2 is touching number 1, looking odd compared with the regular spacing. Fix it, also fix the rest of the combo.done(?) http://puu.sh/3RmB
00:44:194 (5) - Unstack this slider ! done
00:46:860 (1,2) - Remove these two beats, and add a slider like 00:45:527 (1) - at: 00:46:860 (DON'T start a new combo here.) done http://puu.sh/3Rpk
00:48:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix the spacing using the - Distance Snap - tool enabled ! again something that i dont understand, sorry >_< what is wrong with it? http://puu.sh/3Rpr ai-mode says, it is ok...
00:52:525 - Start Kiai time here !done
00:54:524 (1) - Remove new combo.done
01:02:189 (2) - Instead of this repeater slider, what about: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122622 ? done http://puu.sh/3RnZ
01:13:519 (3) - Remove ONE repetition, and add a note at: 01:14:519? done
01:14:186 - Finish Kiai time here !done

Tip: Try improving your sliders and your patterns, the map holds an odd look. And the flow isn't the best asweel.
You need to pay attention in the spacing. Always follow the distance snap once that you are 'new' at mapping.
i'll try >.<

[Normal]
00:09:537 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:10:203 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:11:536 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:14:535 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:16:202 (1,2,1,2) - Unstack all these sliders, and try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122624. Don't forget to move the next combo a bit closer. hm, i realy thought this part was ok...anyway, i tryed this http://puu.sh/3RrM
00:20:825 (1) - Remove new combo, also, the slider is miss placed, place it on the white tick in the timeline. done
00:21:534 (2) - Instead of this repeater slider, add one beat at: 00:21:534, one slider at: 00:21:867 till 00:22:200 and repeat it once, then add a beat here: 00:22:866. done
00:25:532 (5) - Remove this repeater slider. Try a patter with beat, slider, repeat, beat, beat. (In the white ticks) done? http://puu.sh/3Ru9
00:28:032 (3) - New combo. at that part there are LITTLE jumps 1-2-3, so i think they should be in the same combo...write, if you disagree
00:29:865 (2,3,4,5) - Invert the whole combo vertically and fix the spacing. Also, don't forget to fix the spacing of the next combo.done
00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use the - Distance Snap - tool and fix the spacing. Don't overlap nor stack notes here. i dont know why, but the distance snap dont allow it >.<
00:33:114 (5) - This note is placed in a blue tick, move to the previous red tick, also move this slider: 00:33:364 (6) - to the previous white tick. [ http://puu.sh/3R5v ]done
00:34:197 (1) - Same thing about repeater sliders. Try to change it with beats or sliders, use your imagination!i made 1 repeat, it is much better now ^^
00:36:863 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:37:196 (2) - Unstack this note.i added a repeat, i think it sounds good...
00:39:195 (2,3) - Jump between 2-3 ? Really? Fix it with the proper spacing. removed the 4 circles, and made http://puu.sh/3RvM
00:41:195 (1) - Remove new combo. done
00:41:528 (1) - Remove new combo.why? o.o
00:42:194 (2) - Unstack this note. done
00:42:528 (1) - No jumps. Fix it with the proper spacing. done
00:42:861 (1) - ^ done (?)
00:44:194 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:45:527 (2) - New combo.done
00:46:693 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1). Don't you agree that this pattern is off rhythm? try improving your sliders to follow the song beat! i tryed, it was still off rhythm, so i just made 2 slider, no pattern...
00:55:524 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:56:857 (1) - Remove new combo.done
00:58:523 (3) - Don't stack this note. done
01:00:189 (1) - Remove new combo. done
01:02:356 (5) - Don't stack this note. Also, try changing the repeater slider in another creative pattern ! im not verry creative, but i changed it
01:07:521 (1) - Remove new combo.done
01:08:187 (1) - Remove new combo.done
01:10:353 (4) - Instead of this ugly repeater, remove this slider, add one at: 01:10:520 till 01:10:853 and fix the spacing.done
01:16:018 (1,2,3) - Don't fit the rhythm. Try something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122636.don't know, if i like it, but done
01:17:518 - Finish the map here like Easy. (Delete the notes after it) done

[Hard]
00:09:204 (2) - Forced jump. Doesn't look nice ^^'' . Follow the proper distance spacing. Don't forget to change the following combos.
00:10:203 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:536 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:12:369 - This break isn't needed.
00:15:535 (6) - Fix the spacing.
00:16:202 (1,2,3) - ^
00:16:868 (1,2,3) - ^
--...--
Ok, I was going to finish the mod in this diff., but I think I should do it in another way. When you log on, PM ME IN GAME, and I will do an online mod with you, showing what do you need to change. This way you can learn more about how to improve your maps.


thanks for moding :3
poisonchan
First recheck: Done.

IRC Mod.:

14:08 <Andruchon> : mod hard today?
14:09 <poisonchan> : Hm need recheck now?
14:11 <Andruchon> : normal/easy recheck and hard mod ^^
14:12 <Andruchon> : yesterday it was too late >.<
14:15 <poisonchan> : ok
14:15 <poisonchan> : lemme open it
14:16 *Andruchon is listening to (Manzo - My-Pace Daiou)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34011]
14:19 <poisonchan> : Ok, lemme see
14:20 <poisonchan> : Ok, let's start.
14:20 <poisonchan> : easy diff ok ?
14:20 <Andruchon> : kk ^^
14:21 <poisonchan> : 00:14:869 (1) - Remove new combo
14:21 <poisonchan> : 00:16:202 (1) - Remove new combo
14:22 <poisonchan> : 00:21:534 (6) - Sounds off the beat
14:22 <poisonchan> : Try to improve the 00:21:534 (6) - note with another kind of combination? ^^
14:23 <Andruchon> : kk ^^
14:24 <poisonchan> : 00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Instead of going up,
14:24 <poisonchan> : go down, so it won't be hidden under the green combo
14:26 <Andruchon> : http://puu.sh/3XOF ?
14:28 <Andruchon> : sorry i dont understand what to do at 00:31:531 >.<
14:28 <poisonchan> : wait XD
14:28 <poisonchan> : wow, the new combo you made is great
14:28 <poisonchan> : ok, about the 00:31 thing..
14:28 <poisonchan> : 00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo is going up right ?
14:29 <poisonchan> : Instead of going up, move 2 down, then 3 and 4 and five
14:29 <Andruchon> : you mean the repeat slider?
14:29 <poisonchan> : not going to the top, but to the bottom
14:29 <poisonchan> : yeah, about the repeater :3
14:29 <poisonchan> : This way sounds much better :D
14:30 <poisonchan> : 00:32:864 (5) - This repeater slider is 'repeating' on the blue tick
14:30 <poisonchan> : oh wat
14:30 <poisonchan> : nevermind XD
14:31 <Andruchon> : hm...SORRY i realy dont understand what you mean... xD maybe i didnt upload the map o.o
14:31 <Andruchon> : wait a mom
14:31 <poisonchan> : its kay
14:31 <Andruchon> : i did...
14:31 <poisonchan> : Hey, don't worry, you are doing everything right XD
14:32 <poisonchan> : You fixed the repeater slider, what is pretty nice. Sounds much better now
14:32 <poisonchan> : now move to 00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5) -
14:32 <poisonchan> : and do something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124556
14:32 <poisonchan> : Going down, and not up.
14:32 <poisonchan> : Don't forget to fix the spacing in the next red combo.
14:32 <Andruchon> : x_x now i have it xD
14:37 <poisonchan> : ^^
14:37 <Andruchon> : next xD
14:38 <poisonchan> : lol
14:38 <poisonchan> : easy is clear o:
14:38 <poisonchan> : Graatz *-*
14:38 <Andruchon> : yey :D
14:38 <poisonchan> : You still can improve your patterns, make pretty sliders, but still, now you have it sounding fine :3
14:38 <poisonchan> : and with a nice spacing :3
14:38 <poisonchan> : Lets go to normal
14:38 <Andruchon> : lets go :D
14:39 <poisonchan> : 00:13:536 (1,2,3) - don't stack those notes ><
14:41 <poisonchan> : 00:17:535 (9,10) - Urgh, sounds bad.
14:42 <poisonchan> : The slider is reversing in the blue tick ><
14:42 <poisonchan> : what sounds pretty out >:
14:42 <poisonchan> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124561 something liek this maybe
14:43 <poisonchan> : 00:20:867 (1) - remove new combo
14:43 <poisonchan> : 00:27:698 (1,2,3) - spacing is too far away, + the repeater slider sounds REALLY bad
14:43 <poisonchan> : change it >:
14:44 <poisonchan> : 00:29:531 (1) - move it a bit to the left, so wont touch the previous combo
14:44 <poisonchan> : 00:31:531 (1) - remove this beat
14:44 <poisonchan> : 00:31:864 (2) - new cmbo starts here
14:45 <poisonchan> : 01:02:189 (1) - remove new combo
14:47 <Andruchon> : hm, but this looks realy bad >.< http://puu.sh/3XS7
14:53 <poisonchan> : Gimme a sec ><
15:01 <Andruchon> : i dont understand, what is wrong with that beat 00:31:531 (6) - >.< maybe you made a mistake?
15:04 <poisonchan> : nothing is wrong
15:04 <poisonchan> : is just souding bad ^^'
15:04 <poisonchan> : remove it to sound better
15:05 <Andruchon> : then at 00:27:615 (9,10,11,12) - a made this 00:27:615 (9,10,11,12) -
15:05 <Andruchon> : http://puu.sh/3XTP ups
15:11 <Andruchon> : try to remove the beat, i think it sounds bad ._.
15:11 <poisonchan> : Uh, you can keep it then, is just a suggestion
15:12 <poisonchan> : 01:02:189 (1) - remove new combo
15:13 <Andruchon> : did it already ^^'
15:14 <poisonchan> : normal ended
15:14 <poisonchan> : You still can improve your combos
15:14 <poisonchan> : just need to keep working hard :3
15:15 <poisonchan> : ok, now hard.
15:15 <Andruchon> : this will be hard D:
15:26 <poisonchan> : Uh,
15:27 <poisonchan> : Hard is.. full of mistakes o-o
15:27 <poisonchan> : I'm going to give you a tip, try remapping it after reading that, and then I come back to recheck it again :T
15:27 <poisonchan> : check*
15:27 <poisonchan> : Well, you are forcing jumps, using a 'too far' spacing, and placing notes
15:27 <poisonchan> : without rhythm :T
15:34 <poisonchan> : .. ok ?


@edit: ;_; uh, no need for kudosu, since it's a recheck ><
zsr123
try this offset ?
8182

:)

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Omega
Okay, let's see!


Moving on:

General
First of all, you have two OSB files and no real storyboard. If I were you, I would delete both and fullsubmit.

On a side note, you might want to refrain from taking an mp3 file from youtube. The song's clarity is usually better if you get the song from its source. I'm only assuming you got the mp3 from youtube because the video filename is the same as the audio filename. If that is the case, try downloading this file, which should also fit. Of course, the mp3 you're using right now is also sort of acceptable.

Genshiken is present both in tags and source, you only need one.

[Easy]
First, nazimodding and note placement, you can ignore this section if you don't like it.
00:08:183 (1,2,3) - I think they would be neater if (2) was in the middle of the map, with (1) and (3) an equal space away from it. Currently, (2) is one gridsize3 space over the horizontal center line. Same for 00:18:848 (1) -

00:32:848 (5) - Seems to be almost horizontal, but is slightly angled. Try selecting it, pressing Ctrl+Shift+R, and http://puu.sh/48iZ

Actual notes:

Short bounceback sliders such as 00:17:515 (7) - 00:26:848 (5) - 00:30:515 (4) - 00:32:848 (5) - 00:34:848 (3) - 00:44:182 (5) - are a bit difficult for beginners, you might want to consider replacing them with different patterns

00:50:849 (1) - Make this spinner start on the large white tick, that's when it starts.

00:52:515 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner, will be even closer when you change my last note, I suggest that you either replace the spinner with something else or delete this.

Notes that are covered with sliders, such as 00:25:182 (2) - 00:26:515 (4) - 00:49:848 (5,6) - and so on are difficult to do for beginners. Consider deleting them or changing the placement.

This [Easy] has a star rating of 3.19, consider deleting some notes, halving the BPM, (As long as you halve it for the normal and hard -- it fits 90BPM, too!) or otherwise changing the difficulty.

[Normal]
First, nazimodding and note placement, you can ignore this section if you don't like it.

00:41:515 (5,6) - could you make (6) end on the same place (5) does? It's confusing otherwise.

Actual notes:
Nothing notable! Except that you should leave a bit more space after spinners.

Sorry, don't have time to mod [Hard]. could you remind me 20 hours later or more? Do not forum post. I will mostly be online.

EDIT: Do not PM, I mean. Also, you should have gave me kudosu after I finish my mod -- alright, just don't kudosu me on the next mod post, yes?

By the way, star.
Topic Starter
Andruchon

Omega wrote:

Okay, let's see!


Moving on:

General
First of all, you have two OSB files and no real storyboard. If I were you, I would delete both and fullsubmit.

On a side note, you might want to refrain from taking an mp3 file from youtube. The song's clarity is usually better if you get the song from its source. I'm only assuming you got the mp3 from youtube because the video filename is the same as the audio filename. If that is the case, try downloading this file, which should also fit. Of course, the mp3 you're using right now is also sort of acceptable. like i said in the discription, i remake an other map...the video and the mp3 is from there, and i think the
other mapper would not cry about that i took that mp3 / video because his last login was...2 years ago o_o would the timing change when i use the other mp3?l


Genshiken is present both in tags and source, you only need one.

[Easy]
First, nazimodding and note placement, you can ignore this section if you don't like it.
00:08:183 (1,2,3) - I think they would be neater if (2) was in the middle of the map, with (1) and (3) an equal space away from it. Currently, (2) is one gridsize3 space over the horizontal center line. Same for 00:18:848 (1) - done

00:32:848 (5) - Seems to be almost horizontal, but is slightly angled. Try selecting it, pressing Ctrl+Shift+R, and http://puu.sh/48iZ done

Actual notes:

Short bounceback sliders such as 00:17:515 (7) - 00:26:848 (5) - 00:30:515 (4) - 00:32:848 (5) - 00:34:848 (3) - 00:44:182 (5) - are a bit difficult for beginners, you might want to consider replacing them with different patterns

00:50:849 (1) - Make this spinner start on the large white tick, that's when it starts.

00:52:515 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner, will be even closer when you change my last note, I suggest that you either replace the spinner with something else or delete this. i made a slider at that part, it is not as good as a spinner, but there is not much time =(

Notes that are covered with sliders, such as 00:25:182 (2) - 00:26:515 (4) - 00:49:848 (5,6) - and so on are difficult to do for beginners. Consider deleting them or changing the placement.

This [Easy] has a star rating of 3.19, consider deleting some notes, halving the BPM, (As long as you halve it for the normal and hard -- it fits 90BPM, too!) or otherwise changing the difficulty.

[Normal]
First, nazimodding and note placement, you can ignore this section if you don't like it.

00:41:515 (5,6) - could you make (6) end on the same place (5) does? It's confusing otherwise.

Actual notes:
Nothing notable! Except that you should leave a bit more space after spinners.

Sorry, don't have time to mod [Hard]. could you remind me 20 hours later or more? Do not forum post. I will mostly be online.

thanks for the mod and for the star :3
Omega
The offset MIGHT change. But if it does, I'll be glad to find the new one for you. And yes, taking the mp3 file from another map does not mean there is no better option. Also, you are welcome! Ask me for another mod any time you like while I'm online on the client.
Omega
Okay, modding hard now. Do not give any Kudosu, I already received one.

Moving on:

00:27:682 (9,10) - This feels out of rhythm. Try changing from:
to:

You also left most of the end unmapped, eh.


On a side note, try looking at viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Good luck!
Zelos
Folder:
Clean here.

Please note any mod of mine is only a suggestion unless otherwise stated.

Easy:
00:15:515 (3) - move this up 1 grid point so it stacks with the ending of slider 1.
00:29:515 (1,2,3) - move these down 1 grid point so the spacing is even throughout.
00:45:182 (1) - remove new combo here please.
00:50:849 (x) - start a spinner here and end it at the next big white tick on the time line.
00:56:182 (8) - new combo here?
01:03:848 (1) - remove new combo here please.
01:11:848 (5) - notes should not touch the HP bar. please fix this.

Normal:
00:21:515 (6) - new combo here please?
00:26:848 (7) - new combo here please?
00:33:515 (7,1) - don't overlap like this. no one generally likes it and it looks a little ugly. try to fix this.
00:42:515 (1) - remove new combo here please?
00:45:182 (1) - remove new combo here too please?
00:59:515 (2) - move this up a little bit so its not touching the next sliders border?
01:09:181 (1) - remove new combo here please?
01:17:182 (3,4) - this is sort of awkward as 2 notes. use a slider instead?

Hard:
remove the super tiny break you have in the beginning of this difficulty.
00:27:682 (9) - convert this to a 1/2 slider? it doesn't sound that well as a 1/4th but your choice.
00:35:848 (1) - remove new combo here please?
00:37:515 (1) - extend the ending of this slider to the next white tick please.
00:42:515 (1) - remove new combo here please.
00:45:182 (1) - remove new combo here please.
00:50:848 (1) - also extend this spinner to the next white tick please.
00:56:848 (4) - make this slider more like this please


00:58:515 (1) - remove new combo here please.
01:03:848 (1) - remove new combo here please.
01:05:181 (3) - try not to overlap sliders within themselves where the ending is slightly on the slider itself. please change this.
01:13:515 (5,6,7) - would you stack these better please? it would look a lot nicer in my opinion.
remove that 2nd break you have near the end.

I guess I will star because I see you have potential.
So star.
Topic Starter
Andruchon

Zelos wrote:

Folder:
Clean here.

Please note any mod of mine is only a suggestion unless otherwise stated.

Easy:
00:15:515 (3) - move this up 1 grid point so it stacks with the ending of slider 1.done
00:29:515 (1,2,3) - move these down 1 grid point so the spacing is even throughout.done? http://puu.sh/4dq4
00:45:182 (1) - remove new combo here please.the combo was ok, but the circle was bad, if i would make it there, i should make it everytime when the call "hai" or sth like that...so i deleted it
00:50:849 (x) - start a spinner here and end it at the next big white tick on the time line. there is not much time, but i think there SHOULD be a spinner...maybe i will change it later, but now there is a spinner
00:56:182 (8) - new combo here? yes, good advise
01:03:848 (1) - remove new combo here please. removed the circle
01:11:848 (5) - notes should not touch the HP bar. please fix this. stacked with the previous circle

Normal:
00:21:515 (6) - new combo here please?done
00:26:848 (7) - new combo here please?done
00:33:515 (7,1) - don't overlap like this. no one generally likes it and it looks a little ugly. try to fix this. had many problems with that part, then tryed sth like that...and it sounded good...but i forgot that "normal" players play with the mouse and not the keyboard...ill fix it...at that part changed much...http://puu.sh/4dt6
00:42:515 (1) - remove new combo here please? no sorry...it is right so ^^
00:45:182 (1) - remove new combo here too please? ^
00:58:515 (2) - new combo here >:D
00:59:515 (2) - move this up a little bit so its not touching the next sliders border? done
01:09:181 (1) - remove new combo here please? you forgot 01:03:848 (1) - :3
01:17:182 (3,4) - this is sort of awkward as 2 notes. use a slider instead?done

Hard:
remove the super tiny break you have in the beginning of this difficulty.
00:27:682 (9) - convert this to a 1/2 slider? it doesn't sound that well as a 1/4th but your choice. done...much better now
00:35:848 (1) - remove new combo here please? done
00:37:515 (1) - extend the ending of this slider to the next white tick please. i confuse spinner and slider too sometimes xD.....done
00:42:515 (1) - remove new combo here please.^
00:45:182 (1) - remove new combo here please.^
00:50:848 (1) - also extend this spinner to the next white tick please.done
00:56:848 (4) - make this slider more like this pleasedone


00:58:515 (1) - remove new combo here please. ^
01:03:848 (1) - remove new combo here please. ^
01:05:181 (3) - try not to overlap sliders within themselves where the ending is slightly on the slider itself. please change this. changed...it look very bad, the other slider was much better...anyway...overlapping sliders = unrankable =( http://puu.sh/4dwD
01:13:515 (5,6,7) - would you stack these better please? it would look a lot nicer in my opinion. 1. i like it, and 2. it looks strange when a stream begin on the other side of the map o.o tell me if im wrong, or didn't understand you
remove that 2nd break you have near the end. done

I guess I will star because I see you have potential.
So star.


thank you for the mod, and the star =)
EEeee
Easy
00:12:182 (1) - remove new combo
00:16:182 (4) - new combo

Normal
00:34:182 (7) - new combo
00:58:515 (1) - add a finish? and clap?

Hard
00:29:348 (7) - new combo?
then, there's some moments in here like in Normal when i said to add finish and clap, that could look good with finish/claps, and remove some of those spam finishes around those moments,

mapset looks great overall, and i totally heard this song b4

*star
Topic Starter
Andruchon

EEeee wrote:

Easy
00:12:182 (1) - remove new combo done
00:16:182 (4) - new combo done

Normal
00:34:182 (7) - new combo done
00:58:515 (1) - add a finish? and clap? yes...i forgot it...done

Hard
00:29:348 (7) - new combo?
then, there's some moments in here like in Normal when i said to add finish and clap, that could look good with finish/claps, and remove some of those spam finishes around those moments, ill do...

mapset looks great overall, and i totally heard this song b4

*star


thank you for the mod and the star :)
Topic Starter
Andruchon

poisonchan wrote:

First recheck: Done.

IRC Mod.:

14:08 <Andruchon> : mod hard today?
14:09 <poisonchan> : Hm need recheck now?
14:11 <Andruchon> : normal/easy recheck and hard mod ^^
14:12 <Andruchon> : yesterday it was too late >.<
14:15 <poisonchan> : ok
14:15 <poisonchan> : lemme open it
14:16 *Andruchon is listening to (Manzo - My-Pace Daiou)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34011]
14:19 <poisonchan> : Ok, lemme see
14:20 <poisonchan> : Ok, let's start.
14:20 <poisonchan> : easy diff ok ?
14:20 <Andruchon> : kk ^^
14:21 <poisonchan> : 00:14:869 (1) - Remove new combo
14:21 <poisonchan> : 00:16:202 (1) - Remove new combo
14:22 <poisonchan> : 00:21:534 (6) - Sounds off the beat
14:22 <poisonchan> : Try to improve the 00:21:534 (6) - note with another kind of combination? ^^
14:23 <Andruchon> : kk ^^
14:24 <poisonchan> : 00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - Instead of going up,
14:24 <poisonchan> : go down, so it won't be hidden under the green combo
14:26 <Andruchon> : http://puu.sh/3XOF ?
14:28 <Andruchon> : sorry i dont understand what to do at 00:31:531 >.<
14:28 <poisonchan> : wait XD
14:28 <poisonchan> : wow, the new combo you made is great
14:28 <poisonchan> : ok, about the 00:31 thing..
14:28 <poisonchan> : 00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo is going up right ?
14:29 <poisonchan> : Instead of going up, move 2 down, then 3 and 4 and five
14:29 <Andruchon> : you mean the repeat slider?
14:29 <poisonchan> : not going to the top, but to the bottom
14:29 <poisonchan> : yeah, about the repeater :3
14:29 <poisonchan> : This way sounds much better :D
14:30 <poisonchan> : 00:32:864 (5) - This repeater slider is 'repeating' on the blue tick
14:30 <poisonchan> : oh wat
14:30 <poisonchan> : nevermind XD
14:31 <Andruchon> : hm...SORRY i realy dont understand what you mean... xD maybe i didnt upload the map o.o
14:31 <Andruchon> : wait a mom
14:31 <poisonchan> : its kay
14:31 <Andruchon> : i did...
14:31 <poisonchan> : Hey, don't worry, you are doing everything right XD
14:32 <poisonchan> : You fixed the repeater slider, what is pretty nice. Sounds much better now
14:32 <poisonchan> : now move to 00:31:531 (1,2,3,4,5) -
14:32 <poisonchan> : and do something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124556
14:32 <poisonchan> : Going down, and not up.
14:32 <poisonchan> : Don't forget to fix the spacing in the next red combo.
14:32 <Andruchon> : x_x now i have it xD
14:37 <poisonchan> : ^^
14:37 <Andruchon> : next xD
14:38 <poisonchan> : lol
14:38 <poisonchan> : easy is clear o:
14:38 <poisonchan> : Graatz *-*
14:38 <Andruchon> : yey :D
14:38 <poisonchan> : You still can improve your patterns, make pretty sliders, but still, now you have it sounding fine :3
14:38 <poisonchan> : and with a nice spacing :3
14:38 <poisonchan> : Lets go to normal
14:38 <Andruchon> : lets go :D
14:39 <poisonchan> : 00:13:536 (1,2,3) - don't stack those notes ><
14:41 <poisonchan> : 00:17:535 (9,10) - Urgh, sounds bad.
14:42 <poisonchan> : The slider is reversing in the blue tick ><
14:42 <poisonchan> : what sounds pretty out >:
14:42 <poisonchan> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124561 something liek this maybe
14:43 <poisonchan> : 00:20:867 (1) - remove new combo
14:43 <poisonchan> : 00:27:698 (1,2,3) - spacing is too far away, + the repeater slider sounds REALLY bad
14:43 <poisonchan> : change it >:
14:44 <poisonchan> : 00:29:531 (1) - move it a bit to the left, so wont touch the previous combo
14:44 <poisonchan> : 00:31:531 (1) - remove this beat
14:44 <poisonchan> : 00:31:864 (2) - new cmbo starts here
14:45 <poisonchan> : 01:02:189 (1) - remove new combo
14:47 <Andruchon> : hm, but this looks realy bad >.< http://puu.sh/3XS7
14:53 <poisonchan> : Gimme a sec ><
15:01 <Andruchon> : i dont understand, what is wrong with that beat 00:31:531 (6) - >.< maybe you made a mistake?
15:04 <poisonchan> : nothing is wrong
15:04 <poisonchan> : is just souding bad ^^'
15:04 <poisonchan> : remove it to sound better
15:05 <Andruchon> : then at 00:27:615 (9,10,11,12) - a made this 00:27:615 (9,10,11,12) -
15:05 <Andruchon> : http://puu.sh/3XTP ups
15:11 <Andruchon> : try to remove the beat, i think it sounds bad ._.
15:11 <poisonchan> : Uh, you can keep it then, is just a suggestion
15:12 <poisonchan> : 01:02:189 (1) - remove new combo
15:13 <Andruchon> : did it already ^^'
15:14 <poisonchan> : normal ended
15:14 <poisonchan> : You still can improve your combos
15:14 <poisonchan> : just need to keep working hard :3
15:15 <poisonchan> : ok, now hard.
15:15 <Andruchon> : this will be hard D:
15:26 <poisonchan> : Uh,
15:27 <poisonchan> : Hard is.. full of mistakes o-o
15:27 <poisonchan> : I'm going to give you a tip, try remapping it after reading that, and then I come back to recheck it again :T
15:27 <poisonchan> : check*
15:27 <poisonchan> : Well, you are forcing jumps, using a 'too far' spacing, and placing notes
15:27 <poisonchan> : without rhythm :T
15:34 <poisonchan> : .. ok ?


@edit: ;_; uh, no need for kudosu, since it's a recheck ><


actually...i didn't give you kudosu :/
EnakoRin
General
  • Stack Leniency (in Song Setup -> Advanced) epuals to 2 or 10 is unrankedable! (now is 10)
    Kiai time points must be snaped. Move this (52525) to 52515
    Kiai time points must be snaped. Move this (74519) to 74515


Easy
  • Circle Size - 1?
    00:12:182 (4) - Add finish?
    00:22:182 (7,1) - Too close
    00:31:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change some circle to slider? This may difficult for a beginner
    00:36:848 (6,1) - Too close
    00:48:182 (3) - New combo?
    00:53:515 (2) - New combo, and add finish on the first circle


Normal
  • 00:14:849 (1) - Remove new combo
    00:27:848 (4) - Move 1 grid up
    00:38:848 (1) - Too far from the spinner's center. This may difficult for a Normal player
    00:40:182 (1,2) - The distance is wrong
    00:41:515 (5,6) - Stack the circle to the slider's end
    00:46:848 (2) - You may change this to a slider with a circle. Slider: 00:46:849 - 00:47:099; circle: 00:47:515
    00:53:515 (1) - Add finish on the first circle
    01:00:181 (3,4) - Move 1 grid down
    01:05:515 (5) - Move 1 grid down and 1 grid left
    01:17:182 (3) - Shorten this to 01:17:349


Hard
  • 00:16:182 (1) - Move 1 grid left
    00:16:848 (1) - Move 1 grid right, and remove finish, add clap
    00:17:182 (3) - Eemove clap, add finish
    00:21:515 (1,2) - Too close
    01:13:515 (5,6) - These two slider aren't stacked well


Star~
----------
EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
Andruchon

Weiren wrote:

General
  • Stack Leniency (in Song Setup -> Advanced) epuals to 2 or 10 is unrankedable! (now is 10) done
    Kiai time points must be snaped. Move this (52525) to 52515done
    Kiai time points must be snaped. Move this (74519) to 74515
done

Easy
  • Circle Size - 1? done, imo not a big change
    00:12:182 (4) - Add finish? done
    00:22:182 (7,1) - Too close done
    00:31:515 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change some circle to slider? This may difficult for a beginner made a slider
    00:36:848 (6,1) - Too close i know, and i think it is ok
    00:48:182 (3) - New combo? done
    00:53:515 (2) - New combo, and add finish on the first circle done


Normal
  • 00:14:849 (1) - Remove new combo done
    00:27:848 (4) - Move 1 grid up done
    00:38:848 (1) - Too far from the spinner's center. This may difficult for a Normal player
    00:40:182 (1,2) - The distance is wrong done
    00:41:515 (5,6) - Stack the circle to the slider's end i like it how it is now
    00:46:848 (2) - You may change this to a slider with a circle. Slider: 00:46:849 - 00:47:099; circle: 00:47:515 no
    00:53:515 (1) - Add finish on the first circle done
    01:00:181 (3,4) - Move 1 grid down done
    01:05:515 (5) - Move 1 grid down and 1 grid left done
    01:17:182 (3) - Shorten this to 01:17:349no


Hard
  • 00:16:182 (1) - Move 1 grid left moved (1) (2) 1 grid right
    00:16:848 (1) - Move 1 grid right, and remove finish, add clap done/no
    00:17:182 (3) - Eemove clap, add finish no
    00:21:515 (1,2) - Too close o rly? O_O
    01:13:515 (5,6) - These two slider aren't stacked wel they are, imo


Star~
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren


thanks for the mod and the star ^^
Ekaru
General:

00:06:849 - Move the offset here. You won't have to resnap or anything, it'll just make the osu! logo on the menu screen start pulsing at the correct time.

Hard:

00:10:515 (3) - This feels weird. The music calls for 3 1/2s in a row here instead of a 1/1 slider. I would delete this and replace this with either 3 hit circles or a repeating 1/2 slider.
00:21:515 (1,2) - This is an awkward anti-jump. Could you space this out a bit, please?
00:41:015 (x) - I would add a hit circle here to make this feel better. It would go with the music a lot better.
00:44:015 - ^
00:48:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would make these jumps bigger, I can't really feel them right now.

Normal:

00:41:515 (5,6) - This is a bit hard to read and perform for newer players. I would delete (6) and give (5) another repeat.
00:53:515 (1) - This slider looks unbalanced. I would move the slider node closer to the center of the slider to correct this.
01:17:182 (3) - Add a finish to the end of this slider, please.

Easy:

00:41:848 (5) - Move this out from under (3), that's hard to read for newer players.
00:48:182 (1,2,3,4) - Make this into a diamond or a square or something, please



I <3 this, giving you a kudosu star.
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