Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:848 (4,5,6) - The music sounds the same, so logic would say that the hitsounds would need to sound the same too in these 3 notes than the previous ones, rather than in reverse. i made them reverse, because first it goes up, then down...done
00:20:848 (5) - Whistle on the slider body doesnt fit. deleted all whistles
00:27:515 (X) - Downbeat feels kinda empty here, i'd suggest you put a note in here.
00:28:515 (3,4) - This double here, may mislead players into thinking its 1/2 apart. done
00:41:682 (1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest scaling this pattern a bit, would look better imo.
00:52:515 (1,2,3) - Slightly missaligned (more noticeable if you compared 1 to 3) intentional?. done
01:16:182 (1,2,3) - This pattern would be easier to reach if you put the start of this combo closer to the center since most players spin near the center of the spinner and there's not much time to reach the next note.
01:16:848 (3,1) - Kind of a bad anti-jump imo, you should distance this further. done < and ^ at the same time.

[Normal]
Most of the whistles on sliderbodies seem thrown out just for the sake of using them, i recommend you go over them and see if they really fit. done
00:49:515 (5) - I dont see the reason for this to be 1/2 repeat? nothing is sounding that fast here 1/1 longer, -1 repeat
00:50:848 (1) - I recommend you extend this spinner by 1/2 and silence the end of the spinner instead. done
01:09:181 (1) - Remove new combo. then i should remove every time NC when they call "ay/hai"(idk what)?
01:26:682 (2) - Same comment as: 00:50:848 (1)i think you mean 00:49:515 (5) ? done

[Easy]
00:36:848 (6) - Really feels odd when this slider starts in middle of a constant rythm and stops in middle of a held note, try this instead? :
made a ugly slider
01:17:181 (2,1) - its really awkward to use a blue tick while the next slider starts on a white tick, i'd recommend you make the first sider end on a white tick instead. done
01:26:682 (2) - Sounds really weird, try this instead? done

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi~
My some tips.

[General]

good song ~ nice job~
If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file. i can't X_X


[Hard]

00:22:682 (4) - change slider to 00:23:182. dont like long slider.
00:29:348 (1) - change 2 note and Remove NC. no changes
00:29:515 - add NC. ^
00:38:848 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion change 1/8 slider. why? D:


[Normal]

00:35:848 (3) - move to x:164 y:268. done
00:37:515 (1,1,2) - Distance error.done.
00:50:515 - add note.
01:05:514 (5) - add NC. no
01:14:515 - add note and finish.


[Easy]

01:13:515 (3) - Suggestion move to x:268 y:212. done

good luck~ thanks

qilliam wrote:

[General]
I'm not sure, but I think you're supposed to remove the audio from the video. what? i think i removed it already :/
All kiai times should begin at 00:53:515 just like in the easy difficulty. The part before this is the build-up before chorus, so it shouldn't need kiai.
done
[Hard]
00:30:848 (7,1) - spacing is too close yes, it is.
00:33:015 - add note to match vocals? done
00:52:182 - you have 2 timing sections here, remove one there is a reason, why there are 2 inheriting sections
00:45:182 (1) - change combo color to yellow to match the previous combo color pattern (or change the color pattern before this) at that (dark) part i made only red and blue colors...

Magicphoenix wrote:

Hey~ mod

General

Fine !

[Hard]

*00:08:179 (1) - Finish aufm Sliderstart weg machen ! entfernte den clap am ende
*00:09:179 (3) - Finish aufm Sliderende weg machen, mit Clap ersetzen ! Den Clap beim 1. Reverse mit Finish ersetzen. Finish beim 2. Reverse weg machen.done
*00:17:512 (7) - Den hier zu nem linearen Slider ändern damit er zur 3-linear-circle pattern passt? So : nein
*00:20:845 (5) - Finish aufm Sliderende weg machen der echo vom finish passt da gut
*00:31:512 (1) - Anti-jump scheiße und so ! Strg + R ? wieso hassen alle anti-jumps D: done
*00:29:845 (3) - Finish aufm Sliderende weg machen (warum liegen die eig. immer an so abgelegenden Plätzen? Die passen weder zur Musik noch zu irgendwas! Die nächsten Finishes bitte auch passender platzieren) ich mag es.
*00:36:679 (2,3,4,5) - Etwas runder machen damit es sich in den Spinner reinfließt? ich nicht darauf geachtet , da ich nach rechts spinner, done
*00:42:512 (1) - Clap mit Finish ersetzen oO done
*00:44:179 (3) - Finish aufm reverse weg machen done
*00:45:179 (1) - Clap removen nein
*00:46:845 (1,2,3,4) - Selbe Hitsoundpattern wie die (1,2,3,4)-Combo davor. Konsistenz ist gut und wichtig nein, war absicht.


[Normal]

*00:08:179 (1,2) - Whistles entfernen um die Konsistenz mit [Hard] zu behalten done
*00:08:846 (2) - Finish am Sliderstart entfernen done, wegen ^
*00:10:512 (1) - Finish aufm Reverse ich dachte immer da war einer >.> done
*00:13:512 (1) - Finish nein
*00:13:512 (1) - ^ weg machen was? zu faul zum löschen? xD
*00:20:845 (5) - Whistle weg machen done
*00:20:845 (5) - Clap am Sliderende adden done
*00:21:512 (1) - Finish adden nein
*00:42:512 (1) - Clap weg machen nein
*00:45:179 (1) - ^ nein

[Easy]

*00:10:846 (3) - Finish aufm Sliderstart, nicht am Ende ist schon richtig, da sich der rythmus ändert
*00:36:512 (5) - Clap adden done
*00:37:512 (7) - Clap am Sliderende adden hab ich automatisch nach ^ gemacht xD
*00:38:845 (1,2) - Bei beiden Slidern Finish&Clap position vertauschen nein
*01:16:179 (1) - 1/2 später starten. Spacing danach fixen ! nein
*01:26:679 - Rhytmus so ändern ? no :


Das wärs
Viel Glück beim ranken Landsmann thx xD

regenz wrote:

hi hi mod form net & 2004 thread

General you are too much overuse of hitsounds

but i think it's your style so...

easy

00:10:846 (3) - remove fin(finish hitsounds ) at tail ( end of slider )
00:12:179 (4) - remove clap done
00:12:845 (5) - add note + fin done (added clap)
00:14:846 (2,3) - remove clap done
01:16:012 (1) - move 1/2 forward no
01:17:845 this zone is to quite raise volume please. +5%
01:20:179 (2) - fin head ( start of slider ) done, removed finish, and added clap at the end
01:21:512 (4) - change this to 1/1 slider return 2 times no
01:26:679 (2) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157378 changed

normal

00:12:845 - add note + fin no
00:13:512 (1) - finno
00:44:345 add note to hard for normal
00:44:679 add noteto hard for normal
00:57:512 (5) - change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/157384 it was 3 months ago so, when i just made the map >.>it is to hard for normal.
01:03:178 (4) - delete this and add 4 notes after 01:02:845 (3) - even red line is include please stop that "add note at 1/2" suggestions xD
01:25:179 - add note no

hard

00:13:512 (1) - fin head is already >.>
00:22:679 (4) - remove fin no
00:33:845 add noteno
00:42:345 (8) - this note is not match sounds delete plz done, i hope that 0.7x anti-jump is not that bad (all hate anti-jumps :/ i dont...)
01:17:512 raise volume plz+5%
01:21:679 (8) - add note no

can't mod taiko sorry

Breeze wrote:

General

1. Previewpoint of [Ozzy's Taiko] is 53515 while others are 53512, please use same one i think forgot to snap some timing sections and the preview point

Easy

1. 00:53:515 - Unsnaped KIAI timing section, it should at 00:53:512 done

Normal

1. 00:53:515 - Unsnaped KIAI timing section, it should at 00:53:512. And here you used 2 same timing section, delete one please done

Hard

1. 00:53:515 - Unsnaped KIAI timing section, it should at 00:53:512 done
2. 00:27:512 x - I feel here lack of a note, try add a note?i dont like it, but many moder said that, so changed
3. 01:22:848 - Unsnap sound change timing section, it should at 01:22:845 done
4. 01:25:515 - ^, should at 01:25:512 done

Ozzy's taiko

1. 00:08:179 (2) - K?
2. 00:13:512 (5) - ^
3. 00:18:845 (1) - ^

Notes looked fine, and I can't say there are something wrong with your hitsound, it sounds good and have you own style, it's just not to my taste :/
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