From discord
[General]
* Tags don't need to include what the source is if it's already included
* No kiai, unsure if it's needed though
[Relaxing]
00:07:666 (2) - Slider begins on less important sound and ends on main sound
00:12:029 (3) - ^
00:14:211 (6) - ^
00:16:393 (3) - ^
00:38:211 (2) - ^
00:46:938 (4) - ^
With most other sliders in the song, you represent the main melody with a slider head, but with these you place them on the tail.
00:05:483 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:16:938 (4) - This slider is not ending on any sound
00:27:847 (1,2,3) - I feel as though these objects could be related to each other a little better.
00:46:120 (2,3) - 1/2 stack like this is not used in the same musical context at any other point
[Challenging]
00:01:666 (1,3) - Sliders are not ending on any sound
00:06:029 (1,4) - ^
00:10:393 (1,5) - ^
00:13:666 (6,7) - Rhythm represented is ignored here at 00:04:937 (4) -
00:15:847 (3) - This slider shape is not used in the same musical context and does not introduce any new concepts, should probably just keep it consistent with how you represented the same music before
00:26:075 (5,6) - Used a 1/4 stack where 1/2 was used for stacking in the context of places like 00:07:938 (3,4) -
00:34:802 (4,5) - ^
00:51:847 (4) - The sharp turn in this slider does not seem to depict anything musically, perhaps creating something smoother for slider art here would be better?
01:01:666 (5,6,1) - Spacing is close enough to suggest a 1/2 rhythm as used earlier in the song, but is actually 1/1
Nice slow song. I like it, good luck
[General]
* Tags don't need to include what the source is if it's already included
* No kiai, unsure if it's needed though
[Relaxing]
00:07:666 (2) - Slider begins on less important sound and ends on main sound
00:12:029 (3) - ^
00:14:211 (6) - ^
00:16:393 (3) - ^
00:38:211 (2) - ^
00:46:938 (4) - ^
With most other sliders in the song, you represent the main melody with a slider head, but with these you place them on the tail.
00:05:483 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:16:938 (4) - This slider is not ending on any sound
00:27:847 (1,2,3) - I feel as though these objects could be related to each other a little better.
00:46:120 (2,3) - 1/2 stack like this is not used in the same musical context at any other point
[Challenging]
00:01:666 (1,3) - Sliders are not ending on any sound
00:06:029 (1,4) - ^
00:10:393 (1,5) - ^
00:13:666 (6,7) - Rhythm represented is ignored here at 00:04:937 (4) -
00:15:847 (3) - This slider shape is not used in the same musical context and does not introduce any new concepts, should probably just keep it consistent with how you represented the same music before
00:26:075 (5,6) - Used a 1/4 stack where 1/2 was used for stacking in the context of places like 00:07:938 (3,4) -
00:34:802 (4,5) - ^
00:51:847 (4) - The sharp turn in this slider does not seem to depict anything musically, perhaps creating something smoother for slider art here would be better?
01:01:666 (5,6,1) - Spacing is close enough to suggest a 1/2 rhythm as used earlier in the song, but is actually 1/1
Nice slow song. I like it, good luck